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TERRA - Alfarshear

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DJPop
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DJPop
~Easy~
00:11:41 (1,2) - should be aligned on the same level
01:02:236 - add note here (just my suggestion)
01:43:177 - the map should end here (just my suggestion)
01:44:58 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - soft hitsounds may be better

~Normal~
00:44:76 (6) - offscreen

~Insane~
01:49:35 (1,2,3) - sounds weird when use normal hitsounds


+Star
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:09:29 (5) - I actually don't like the claps here
01:36:82 (6) - Align with 5?

[Normal]
00:09:29 (5,6) - don't like the claps here
00:11:76 (3) - Add a Finish?
00:17:41 (4) - ^
00:51:29 (3) - Hitsound this.
01:49:35 (1,2,3) - Finish maybe?

[Insane]
01:47:41 (25) - Add a break?
RemmyX25
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RemmyX25
Timing Request:
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485

Best of luck!
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Easy:

Pros:

No pros! I kid, I kid. XD
-Just about almost everything (flow, music choice, note placement, BG, combo colours, etc.). Really fun, just one tiny thing...

Cons:
-I feel that it would play better if it was the biggest possible circle size, so try that out.

Normal:

Pros:

-Everything.

Cons:

-Nothing

-.-;

Insane:

I can't mod Insanes like this properly. Anyways, it was good.

Checks out, star!
Mystearica
Mystearica
^ excuse me sir but wtf r u doin'?

Now that's out of the way, map itself.

[Easy]

Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy.

[Normal]

Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work.

[Insane]

Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot.

I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!

P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.
MegaManEXE
710 posts
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MegaManEXE
I'm not gonna say too much since Mystearica summed up a lot of what I had to say (we looked at this together)

But your combo colors really bugged me; black really shouldn't be used in any instance, and gray is very bad for tag multiplayer games.

And regarding Easy:

-Reduce the spacing and keep it named Easy

or

-Rename to Normal and map a new Easy that's not spaced out

Take your pick.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

RemmyX25 wrote:

Timing Request:
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485

Best of luck!
i think i might go with 84.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Mystearica wrote:

^ excuse me sir but wtf r u doin'? ouch

Now that's out of the way, map itself.

[Easy]

Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy. changed to 0.5 spacing

[Normal]

Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work. yay

[Insane]

Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot. lowered overall difficulty. removed streams except for the piano parts. made stacks less random. I knew there was some work to do, but i didn't realized it was that bad.

I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!i will. =)

P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.
Mystearica
Mystearica
Okay, here's what I worked up as promised on IRC.

Take what you like and keep what you didn't like. I've made quite a few changes to hopefully show you some of the points I've tried to speak to you about.

Download: TERRA - Alfarshear (ouranhshc) [Testing].osu

Make sure you add a lead-in time too!

Oh and the claps should be lower in volume as well ^_^

Much better already though, nicely done.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc

Mafiamaster wrote:

Insane~
00:09:70 - There's a slight delay before the break starts. Redo it.
I had no other problems with this map.

Good job!
Me likey Insane :3
done
ignorethis
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1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Offset is a bit early. +20~+40 plz.

<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft

<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder

Star'd
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

ignorethis wrote:

Offset is a bit early. +20~+40 plz.

<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft

<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder

Star'd
done
YtRaM_old
102 posts
Joined April 2009
YtRaM_old
Here my diff. Really not ended, I just copy and paste when it look same.

Download: TERRA - Alfarshear (ouranhshc) [YtRaM's Challenge].osu
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
PicoLo
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
[Overall]

  • - Add tags and source
[Easy]

  • - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.

    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
    - 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
    - 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Normal]

  • - Add a lead in time.
    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.

    -01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Insane]

  • - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close

    Great work
[ytRaM's Expert]

  • - Too noisy turn it down
    - Too many claps kill them
    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
    - Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0

    - 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
    - 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

WyndII wrote:

Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound :x
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 :x new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^

Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?

Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
Done
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Senbon wrote:

[Overall]

  • - Add tags and source
[Easy]

  • - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.

    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
    - 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
    - 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Normal]

  • - Add a lead in time.
    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.

    -01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Insane]

  • - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close

    Great work
[ytRaM's Expert]

  • - Too noisy turn it down
    - Too many claps kill them
    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
    - Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0 same here

    - 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
    - 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
fixed insane, normal, and easy. I have not added the tags yet. I will add your suggestions to my list of things to fix on Expert.

EDIT: added tags

Edit:: fixed parts of ytRaM's Expert
Cheery
259 posts
Joined July 2008
Cheery
SPOILER
[Easy]
00:09:26 (5) - repeat to 00:10:318 ?

[Normal]
00:35:73 (3) - clap to match the one before
00:54:08 (1,3,5) - whistles
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - hard for normal :<

[Insane]
00:45:61 (1) - down a tick


[YtRaM's Expert]
~

starstarstar :)
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Cheery wrote:

SPOILER
[Easy]
00:09:26 (5) - repeat to 00:10:318 ?

[Normal]
00:35:73 (3) - clap to match the one before
00:54:08 (1,3,5) - whistles
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - hard for normal :<

[Insane]
00:45:61 (1) - down a tick


[YtRaM's Expert]
~

starstarstar :)
done
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/

[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.

[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream :(
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

WyndII wrote:

Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound :x
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 :x new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^

Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?

Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Derekku Chan wrote:

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/

[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.

[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream :(
done
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Senbon wrote:

[Overall]

  • - Add tags and source
[Easy]

  • - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.

    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
    - 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
    - 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Normal]

  • - Add a lead in time.
    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.

    -01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Insane]

  • - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.

    - 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close

    Great work
[ytRaM's Expert]

  • - Too noisy turn it down
    - Too many claps kill them
    - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
    - Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0

    - 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
    - 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
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Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.

These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.

[Easy]

Fine

[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finish

[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 back
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish

[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid up
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish

Star'd.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

NachoPiggy wrote:

Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.

These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.

[Easy]

Fine

[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finishnah, i put whistle

[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 backadded a note before it
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish

[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid upmade all of them in line with each other in this section
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish nah

Star'd.
thx and Yay BAT TIME
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
00:54:08 (1) - The swirl shape is not neat. Please fix this.
01:20:55 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is not evenly squared in.
01:23:37 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5) is not evenly squared in.
01:29:02 (1,2,3) - The lineup looks bent at (2) to (3).
01:34:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uneven square here.

Notes: You should double check the spacing though the whole map. It seems the distance snap was being a jerk at certain sections. Maybe adding a .05 to the DS rate can help though to really make sure the spacing is right, have a hitnote in the spaces to measure the gaps between the notes. Also, please have the slider velocity lower. Its kinda high for an "easy" difficulty.

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
00:13:49 (4,5) - The whistles don't sound right here... Maybe the finish or clap hitsound would work better?

Notes: The map seens okay so far, but the spacing doesn't seem to match with the pace of the sliders.... also, i'm not sure if (normal) whilstle hitsounds can work well for this song.

[Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
00:56:55 (?) - If it is possible to fit a note here, it would make 00:56:28 (12,13) sound better.
01:26:90 (?) - Maybe you can add a note here as well. The void here makes 01:26:99 (3,4) sound off.

Notes: Just some odd spots to look at, but the slider velocity doesn't feel right with the pace of the notes.

Overall: The map is not bad but still needs some work. The slider velocity with the distance snap makes the pace between the sliders and hitnotes feel like its running at two different speeds. Also, make sure to check into the spacing for all of the difficulties. Well, i'll drop my star in then...
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
I try to get to this later today. it is 12:14AM
Azure_Kite
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3,217 posts
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....

[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.

No major problems found :)

[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found :)

[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!

...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred :D
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....

[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.

No major problems found :)

[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found :)

[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!

...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred :D
done
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Easy:
Add the same lead-in time as the other difficulties.

00:54:08 (1) - You can make this look better >;o!

Normal:
Why does this have a different offset? I also think circle size 2 would be better.

00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you should get rid of the jumps here. Only place where there is a jump and it doesn't seem necessary.
01:03:08 (1) to 01:08:72 (3) - The hitsounds don't sound good.
01:41:72 (1) - I think you should end this here. Delete everything after this spinner.

YtRaM's Expert:
00:07:14 (4) - New combo.
00:09:25 (11,12) - Move over to the right a bit so 12's head is exactly under 10's end.
00:12:78 (1,1,1,1,1) - Stack the ends properly.
00:25:84 (13) - New combo.
00:34:31 (3) - Stack under 1 properly.
00:52:31 (1) - ^
00:55:14 (1) - ^
01:38:90 (5) - New combo.
01:40:31 (12) - ^
01:43:14 (1) - I think you should end this here. Delete everything after this spinner.

Insane:
I hate tiny circles and streams D:!

Hitsounds on all of them need work. They just don't sound all that good or creative. Same goes for the patterns on Insane.
xierbaliti
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999 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
heres some Suggestions (just my opinion) :)
Easy
01:25:494 (4)use finish here maybe better I think
01:26:200 (1)(2)(3) a little noisy here 0.0 Delete clap and use whistle in (3)

Normal
-0- nice diff
00:04:672 (5) new combo
01:39:612(1) I think the spacing is inconsistent

YtRaM's Expert
I think it's good enough

Insane
oooh so small circle here 0.0 :(

01:14:200 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1) this stream seems too long and hard 0.0 Divide it in 4 parts will be better I suppose.




nice map
have a star ;)

sorry for my poor english :o

eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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990 posts
Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Offset: 456
varq
104 posts
Joined February 2008
varq
Easy
01:22:067 (4,5,1) - Spacing. ._.

-The slider speed is really fast for the spacing

Normal
01:38:022 (4,5,6) - I suggest increasing the distance spacing slightly, because it's hard to read triplets with that kind of spacing.
01:39:063 (1,2,3) - ^

-The spacing is pretty big for a Normal in my opinion.
-The circle size is really big and should be shrunken, but if you do, you may have to remap the whole thing because the spacing will be a lot bigger.
-It's not too bad since the circle size is so big and it's really bright, but the yellow hit circle slightly blends in with the background.

Expert
00:14:057 (1) - The placement of this slider feels awkward to play
00:36:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is ugly to look at
01:09:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really hard to read

-Change the white, pink, and gold hit circle color in this difficulty, they're somewhat hard to see.

Insane
00:13:085 (6,7,8,9) - These are hard to see behind the slider
00:37:068 (6) - New combo
00:38:091 (2,3) - switch the two around
00:39:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is hard to read on a first run
00:54:026 (2,3) - Nazi mod, sorry, but the spacing is slightly different between these two
00:59:029 (6,7) - Spacing problem
01:08:073 (3,1) - Put these closer together
01:14:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I really don't like streams, but meh.
01:27:000 (3,4) - How does this fit with the music?
01:31:060 - Put a beat here
01:38:056 (6) - Delete this
01:40:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random jump? Don't like
01:44:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - More streams, meh

-This difficulty felt extremely empty for an insane. Try to add more beats during the pauses.
-I'm highly against deathstreams, especially because they act as a score booster in this map.

Overall
-The offset still seems off, even after so many people have changed it.
-01:02:083 - This part feels REALLY awkward to play.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Easy]
No Problem

[Normal]
00:03:985 Place note here
00:04:691 (1) No new combo

[Insane]
No Problem

The Source must be Beatmania IIDX 13 DistorteD

I like this song, star
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Preview points not set.
There are no tags; any possible tags for this map? The tags and source are only present on Normal (and Expert has only tags no source). Please make these consistent.

[Easy]

Lead-in is not necessary here.

00:54:010 (1) - Relatively minor, but I'd recommend curving the start of it more so that it doesn't touch the second layer.
01:02:057 (4) - New combo for consistent 3-beat combos?

[Normal]

Fine.

[YtRaM's Expert]

00:32:092 (7) - Might look better if it touched 6, like how 5-6 touch.
01:20:057 (1) - I didn't like the chaos of this combo's slider arrangement; the next combo felt a lot nicer.
00:05:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - Incons

[Insane]

01:00:027 (8,9,10) - I'd make this linear, the slight curve looks a bit weird because of the spacing difference.
01:44:057 (1) - Please space this section properly, the antijumps don't fit at all.

That's all. Starred!
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
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