General:
Disable countdown ~ Storyboarding > Countdown > Diasable
You don't have a preview point, imo its fine where it is though.
Easy:
00:05:730 - No need for this timing section, set how you want the hitsound volume etc to be at the start.
00:05:075 (1) - Remove clap from the start
00:09:045 (4) - Slider till 00:10:338 ?
00:14:750 Remove timing section that's not in use.
00:16:069 (1) - The starting clap sounds bad.
00:29:057 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:004 (3) - Remove whistle from the end.
00:41:039 (3) - Consistency in the volume of the whistle? 00:32:004 (3) is louder than this and this slider seems a little too quiet.
00:44:022 (3) - ^
01:37:051 (1) - Perhaps a little too quiet...
01:41:075 (1) - Consider making it longer for easy players.
This certainly plays well, the main issue if any is with hitsound use but its minor
Normal:
00:05:750 - Timing section set from the start.
00:20:075 (7) - Slider to 00:21:063 (8) - works well.
00:38:926 - Spinner in this gap?
01:25:051 (4) - Remove this finish for whistle
01:30:045 (3) - ^
01:31:514 - Useless timing section.
You could probably go through and make sure that your hitsounds are consistent, some parts such as 00:06:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lacked hitsounds. Also consider filling in gaps such between the lyrics with simple 1/1 beats e.g. 00:06:455, 00:12:103 etc. But it its how you want it then it plays well
Hard:
This was fun to play!
00:02:057 (6) - New combo maybe.
00:03:098 (11) - ^
00:05:004 (x) - Add a note here, without it it ruins your earlier pattern.
00:05:039 (x) - I would have a note here to but make sure its soft if you take this suggestion.
01:11:004 (1) - Align with the previous note.
01:15:098 (3,4,5) - During game play this felt too close, consider spreading this triplet out.
01:17:004 (3,4,5) - ^
01:25:033 (5,6,7) - ^ This close together you may as well stack them.
01:33:080 (9) - Put this as a straight slider all the others are.
01:39:027 (8) - New combo
01:37:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Consider rearranging this section, its a little confusing to play.
Also the hitsounds imo need a lot of work, I dont have the time right now to give detailed hitsound suggestions but I could later if you want them
YtRaM's Expert:
I have to be honest and say I didn't like this difficulty much, everything seems to overlap, main examples where this really annoyed me:
00:20:075 (7) - Hit300 obscures the slider.
00:27:098 (3,1,2,3,4) - and 00:29:057 (1,2,3,4) - This is a minor anti-jump, annoyed me how I always seemed to have to return to the center.
00:37:051 (5,6) - Hit300 again, not as bad but I still had to guess placement.
00:51:027 (1) - ^
00:52:033 (2) - Probably the
worst instance of the slider being obscured, its not even where you would expect it to be [i.e. 1 or 2 squares right]
01:11:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and all the others to 01:19:016 (7) - need more hitsounds especially on the triplets, and I wasn't a fan of the beat placement either.
I could go on but no one else seems to have had an issue with this difficulty so I guess it's ok lol
Insane:
This has gone from one extreme with too many streams to another with none.
00:33:080 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Add a note or two in the gaps the hp drain is pretty rough.
00:51:010 (6) - No. This will annoy people.
00:59:075 (10) - New combo.
01:17:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I personally dont like stack streams, a triplet stream would work well here imo.
Perhaps there are too many stacked triplets in general, but if that's how you like it
Overall I like how you've changed it, try to work on the hitsound consistency between difficulties because your patterns do seem a little random at times, but good work I like it
~ Dang I've already given my star
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Edit: Sorry for the long post.
