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Insane:
Nice map. Star.
SPOILER
The jumps make this difficulty too hard for an easy. Ex: 00:20:23 (1) and 00:24:47 (4) -
Normal mod:
00:07:17 (2) - distance snap this (I would just move 1 until 2 is distance snapped)
01:35:41 (3) - stack this on the black 6 (I advise moving the entire gray combo to keep the beats aligned)
Combo mod:
00:12:82 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
00:18:47 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 (swap new combo
00:20:23 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:17 (4) - new combo
Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - what is this timing section for?
01:20:57 - when applying a timing section that changes the hitsound volume or type of hitsound, place it a quarter note before the note instead because if you press the note early, your hitsound type and volume will be that of the previous section not the section on top of the note.
01:31:86 - since you probably want kiai to start at this location but want to avoid the problem in the previous post, add a timing section a quarter note before this timing section that is exactly the same as this one but without the kiai.
Normal mod:
00:07:17 (2) - distance snap this (I would just move 1 until 2 is distance snapped)
01:35:41 (3) - stack this on the black 6 (I advise moving the entire gray combo to keep the beats aligned)
Combo mod:
00:12:82 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
00:18:47 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 (swap new combo
00:20:23 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:17 (4) - new combo
Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - what is this timing section for?
01:20:57 - when applying a timing section that changes the hitsound volume or type of hitsound, place it a quarter note before the note instead because if you press the note early, your hitsound type and volume will be that of the previous section not the section on top of the note.
01:31:86 - since you probably want kiai to start at this location but want to avoid the problem in the previous post, add a timing section a quarter note before this timing section that is exactly the same as this one but without the kiai.
Normal:
SPOILER
I advise you use bezier sliders (options -> slider curve type) to make sliders such as 01:27:29 (3) look nicer
Normal mod:
01:44:58 (1) - this combo does not fit the music very well
Combo mod:
00:23:94 (5) - new combo for consistency
01:28:52 (4) - new combo
Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - remove this timing section because it does not serve a purpose
lower the hitsound volume in the last timing section
Normal mod:
01:44:58 (1) - this combo does not fit the music very well
Combo mod:
00:23:94 (5) - new combo for consistency
01:28:52 (4) - new combo
Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - remove this timing section because it does not serve a purpose
lower the hitsound volume in the last timing section
Insane:
SPOILER
I advise you turn down the hp drain a tick
normal mod:
00:37:17 (3) - stack under the black 1
combo mod:
01:39:64 (1) - remove new combo
timing section mod:
move the timing sections on notes a quarter note backward as I advised on easy
00:39:98, 01:20:57 - remove these timing sections since they don't serve a purpose
normal mod:
00:37:17 (3) - stack under the black 1
combo mod:
01:39:64 (1) - remove new combo
timing section mod:
move the timing sections on notes a quarter note backward as I advised on easy
00:39:98, 01:20:57 - remove these timing sections since they don't serve a purpose
Nice map. Star.
Topic Starter
thank youblissfulyoshi wrote:
Easy:SPOILERThe jumps make this difficulty too hard for an easy. Ex: 00:20:23 (1) and 00:24:47 (4) -
Normal mod:
00:07:17 (2) - distance snap this (I would just move 1 until 2 is distance snapped) done
01:35:41 (3) - stack this on the black 6 (I advise moving the entire gray combo to keep the beats aligned) done
Combo mod:
00:12:82 (1) - remove new combo for consistencydone
00:18:47 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 (swap new combo done
00:20:23 (1) - remove new combo done
00:31:17 (4) - new combodone
Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - what is this timing section for? fixed
01:20:57 - when applying a timing section that changes the hitsound volume or type of hitsound, place it a quarter note before the note instead because if you press the note early, your hitsound type and volume will be that of the previous section not the section on top of the note. fixed.
01:31:86 - since you probably want kiai to start at this location but want to avoid the problem in the previous post, add a timing section a quarter note before this timing section that is exactly the same as this one but without the kiai. done
Normal:SPOILERI advise you use bezier sliders (options -> slider curve type) to make sliders such as 01:27:29 (3) look nicer done
Normal mod:
01:44:58 (1) - this combo does not fit the music very well i like it though i like the triplet feel
Combo mod:
00:23:94 (5) - new combo for consistency
01:28:52 (4) - new combo
Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - remove this timing section because it does not serve a purpose
lower the hitsound volume in the last timing section
Insane:SPOILERdone.I advise you turn down the hp drain a tick
normal mod:
00:37:17 (3) - stack under the black 1
combo mod:
01:39:64 (1) - remove new combo
timing section mod:
move the timing sections on notes a quarter note backward as I advised on easy
00:39:98, 01:20:57 - remove these timing sections since they don't serve a purpose
Nice map. Star.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
~Easy~
00:11:41 (1,2) - should be aligned on the same level
01:02:236 - add note here (just my suggestion)
01:43:177 - the map should end here (just my suggestion)
01:44:58 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - soft hitsounds may be better
~Normal~
00:44:76 (6) - offscreen
~Insane~
01:49:35 (1,2,3) - sounds weird when use normal hitsounds
+Star
00:11:41 (1,2) - should be aligned on the same level
01:02:236 - add note here (just my suggestion)
01:43:177 - the map should end here (just my suggestion)
01:44:58 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - soft hitsounds may be better
~Normal~
00:44:76 (6) - offscreen
~Insane~
01:49:35 (1,2,3) - sounds weird when use normal hitsounds
+Star
[Easy]
00:09:29 (5) - I actually don't like the claps here
01:36:82 (6) - Align with 5?
[Normal]
00:09:29 (5,6) - don't like the claps here
00:11:76 (3) - Add a Finish?
00:17:41 (4) - ^
00:51:29 (3) - Hitsound this.
01:49:35 (1,2,3) - Finish maybe?
[Insane]
01:47:41 (25) - Add a break?
00:09:29 (5) - I actually don't like the claps here
01:36:82 (6) - Align with 5?
[Normal]
00:09:29 (5,6) - don't like the claps here
00:11:76 (3) - Add a Finish?
00:17:41 (4) - ^
00:51:29 (3) - Hitsound this.
01:49:35 (1,2,3) - Finish maybe?
[Insane]
01:47:41 (25) - Add a break?
Timing Request:
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485
Best of luck!
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485
Best of luck!
Easy:
Pros:
No pros! I kid, I kid. XD
-Just about almost everything (flow, music choice, note placement, BG, combo colours, etc.). Really fun, just one tiny thing...
Cons:
-I feel that it would play better if it was the biggest possible circle size, so try that out.
Normal:
Pros:
-Everything.
Cons:
-Nothing
-.-;
Insane:
I can't mod Insanes like this properly. Anyways, it was good.
Checks out, star!
Pros:
No pros! I kid, I kid. XD
-Just about almost everything (flow, music choice, note placement, BG, combo colours, etc.). Really fun, just one tiny thing...
Cons:
-I feel that it would play better if it was the biggest possible circle size, so try that out.
Normal:
Pros:
-Everything.
Cons:
-Nothing
-.-;
Insane:
I can't mod Insanes like this properly. Anyways, it was good.
Checks out, star!
Mystearica
^ excuse me sir but wtf r u doin'?
Now that's out of the way, map itself.
[Easy]
Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy.
[Normal]
Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work.
[Insane]
Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot.
I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!
P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.
Now that's out of the way, map itself.
[Easy]
Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy.
[Normal]
Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work.
[Insane]
Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot.
I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!
P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.
I'm not gonna say too much since Mystearica summed up a lot of what I had to say (we looked at this together)
But your combo colors really bugged me; black really shouldn't be used in any instance, and gray is very bad for tag multiplayer games.
And regarding Easy:
-Reduce the spacing and keep it named Easy
or
-Rename to Normal and map a new Easy that's not spaced out
Take your pick.
But your combo colors really bugged me; black really shouldn't be used in any instance, and gray is very bad for tag multiplayer games.
And regarding Easy:
-Reduce the spacing and keep it named Easy
or
-Rename to Normal and map a new Easy that's not spaced out
Take your pick.
Topic Starter
i think i might go with 84.RemmyX25 wrote:
Timing Request:
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485
Best of luck!
Topic Starter
Mystearica wrote:
^ excuse me sir but wtf r u doin'? ouch
Now that's out of the way, map itself.
[Easy]
Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy. changed to 0.5 spacing
[Normal]
Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work. yay
[Insane]
Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot. lowered overall difficulty. removed streams except for the piano parts. made stacks less random. I knew there was some work to do, but i didn't realized it was that bad.
I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!i will. =)
P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.
Mystearica
Okay, here's what I worked up as promised on IRC.
Take what you like and keep what you didn't like. I've made quite a few changes to hopefully show you some of the points I've tried to speak to you about.
Download: TERRA - Alfarshear (ouranhshc) [Testing].osu
Make sure you add a lead-in time too!
Oh and the claps should be lower in volume as well ^_^
Much better already though, nicely done.
Take what you like and keep what you didn't like. I've made quite a few changes to hopefully show you some of the points I've tried to speak to you about.
Download: TERRA - Alfarshear (ouranhshc) [Testing].osu
Make sure you add a lead-in time too!
Oh and the claps should be lower in volume as well ^_^
Much better already though, nicely done.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
doneMafiamaster wrote:
Insane~
00:09:70 - There's a slight delay before the break starts. Redo it.
I had no other problems with this map.
Good job!
Me likey Insane :3
Offset is a bit early. +20~+40 plz.
<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft
<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder
Star'd
<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft
<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder
Star'd
Topic Starter
doneignorethis wrote:
Offset is a bit early. +20~+40 plz.
<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft
<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder
Star'd
Here my diff. Really not ended, I just copy and paste when it look same.
Download: TERRA - Alfarshear (ouranhshc) [YtRaM's Challenge].osu
Download: TERRA - Alfarshear (ouranhshc) [YtRaM's Challenge].osu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[Overall]
[Insane]
- - Add tags and source
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
Topic Starter
DoneWyndII wrote:
Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^
Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?
Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
Topic Starter
fixed insane, normal, and easy. I have not added the tags yet. I will add your suggestions to my list of things to fix on Expert.Senbon wrote:
[Overall][Easy]
- - Add tags and source
[Normal]
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane][ytRaM's Expert]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0 same here
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
EDIT: added tags
Edit:: fixed parts of ytRaM's Expert
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/
[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.
[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream
Fine.
[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/
[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.
[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream
Topic Starter
[color=#0000BFdone][/color]WyndII wrote:
Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^
Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?
Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
Topic Starter
doneDerekku Chan wrote:
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/
[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.
[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream
Topic Starter
[color=#0040BFdone][/color]Senbon wrote:
[Overall][Easy]
- - Add tags and source
[Normal]
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane][ytRaM's Expert]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.
These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finish
[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 back
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid up
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
Star'd.
These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finish
[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 back
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid up
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
Star'd.
Topic Starter
thx and Yay BAT TIMENachoPiggy wrote:
Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.
These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finishnah, i put whistle
[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 backadded a note before it
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid upmade all of them in line with each other in this section
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish nah
Star'd.
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~
[Easy] (Done)
[Normal] (Done)
[Insane] (Done)
Overall: The map is not bad but still needs some work. The slider velocity with the distance snap makes the pace between the sliders and hitnotes feel like its running at two different speeds. Also, make sure to check into the spacing for all of the difficulties. Well, i'll drop my star in then...
Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~
[Easy] (Done)
SPOILER
00:54:08 (1) - The swirl shape is not neat. Please fix this.
01:20:55 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is not evenly squared in.
01:23:37 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5) is not evenly squared in.
01:29:02 (1,2,3) - The lineup looks bent at (2) to (3).
01:34:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uneven square here.
Notes: You should double check the spacing though the whole map. It seems the distance snap was being a jerk at certain sections. Maybe adding a .05 to the DS rate can help though to really make sure the spacing is right, have a hitnote in the spaces to measure the gaps between the notes. Also, please have the slider velocity lower. Its kinda high for an "easy" difficulty.
01:20:55 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is not evenly squared in.
01:23:37 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5) is not evenly squared in.
01:29:02 (1,2,3) - The lineup looks bent at (2) to (3).
01:34:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uneven square here.
Notes: You should double check the spacing though the whole map. It seems the distance snap was being a jerk at certain sections. Maybe adding a .05 to the DS rate can help though to really make sure the spacing is right, have a hitnote in the spaces to measure the gaps between the notes. Also, please have the slider velocity lower. Its kinda high for an "easy" difficulty.
[Normal] (Done)
SPOILER
00:13:49 (4,5) - The whistles don't sound right here... Maybe the finish or clap hitsound would work better?
Notes: The map seens okay so far, but the spacing doesn't seem to match with the pace of the sliders.... also, i'm not sure if (normal) whilstle hitsounds can work well for this song.
Notes: The map seens okay so far, but the spacing doesn't seem to match with the pace of the sliders.... also, i'm not sure if (normal) whilstle hitsounds can work well for this song.
[Insane] (Done)
SPOILER
00:56:55 (?) - If it is possible to fit a note here, it would make 00:56:28 (12,13) sound better.
01:26:90 (?) - Maybe you can add a note here as well. The void here makes 01:26:99 (3,4) sound off.
Notes: Just some odd spots to look at, but the slider velocity doesn't feel right with the pace of the notes.
01:26:90 (?) - Maybe you can add a note here as well. The void here makes 01:26:99 (3,4) sound off.
Notes: Just some odd spots to look at, but the slider velocity doesn't feel right with the pace of the notes.
Overall: The map is not bad but still needs some work. The slider velocity with the distance snap makes the pace between the sliders and hitnotes feel like its running at two different speeds. Also, make sure to check into the spacing for all of the difficulties. Well, i'll drop my star in then...
Topic Starter
I try to get to this later today. it is 12:14AM
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....
[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.
No major problems found
[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found
[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!
...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....
[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.
No major problems found
[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found
[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!
...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred
Topic Starter
doneAzure_Kyte wrote:
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....
[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.
No major problems found
[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found
[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!
...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred
Easy:
Add the same lead-in time as the other difficulties.
00:54:08 (1) - You can make this look better >;o!
Normal:
Why does this have a different offset? I also think circle size 2 would be better.
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you should get rid of the jumps here. Only place where there is a jump and it doesn't seem necessary.
01:03:08 (1) to 01:08:72 (3) - The hitsounds don't sound good.
01:41:72 (1) - I think you should end this here. Delete everything after this spinner.
YtRaM's Expert:
00:07:14 (4) - New combo.
00:09:25 (11,12) - Move over to the right a bit so 12's head is exactly under 10's end.
00:12:78 (1,1,1,1,1) - Stack the ends properly.
00:25:84 (13) - New combo.
00:34:31 (3) - Stack under 1 properly.
00:52:31 (1) - ^
00:55:14 (1) - ^
01:38:90 (5) - New combo.
01:40:31 (12) - ^
01:43:14 (1) - I think you should end this here. Delete everything after this spinner.
Insane:
I hate tiny circles and streams D:!
Hitsounds on all of them need work. They just don't sound all that good or creative. Same goes for the patterns on Insane.
Add the same lead-in time as the other difficulties.
00:54:08 (1) - You can make this look better >;o!
Normal:
Why does this have a different offset? I also think circle size 2 would be better.
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you should get rid of the jumps here. Only place where there is a jump and it doesn't seem necessary.
01:03:08 (1) to 01:08:72 (3) - The hitsounds don't sound good.
01:41:72 (1) - I think you should end this here. Delete everything after this spinner.
YtRaM's Expert:
00:07:14 (4) - New combo.
00:09:25 (11,12) - Move over to the right a bit so 12's head is exactly under 10's end.
00:12:78 (1,1,1,1,1) - Stack the ends properly.
00:25:84 (13) - New combo.
00:34:31 (3) - Stack under 1 properly.
00:52:31 (1) - ^
00:55:14 (1) - ^
01:38:90 (5) - New combo.
01:40:31 (12) - ^
01:43:14 (1) - I think you should end this here. Delete everything after this spinner.
Insane:
I hate tiny circles and streams D:!
Hitsounds on all of them need work. They just don't sound all that good or creative. Same goes for the patterns on Insane.
heres some Suggestions (just my opinion)
Easy
01:25:494 (4)use finish here maybe better I think
01:26:200 (1)(2)(3) a little noisy here 0.0 Delete clap and use whistle in (3)
Normal
-0- nice diff
00:04:672 (5) new combo
01:39:612(1) I think the spacing is inconsistent
YtRaM's Expert
I think it's good enough
Insane
oooh so small circle here 0.0
01:14:200 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1) this stream seems too long and hard 0.0 Divide it in 4 parts will be better I suppose.
nice map
have a star
sorry for my poor english
Easy
01:25:494 (4)use finish here maybe better I think
01:26:200 (1)(2)(3) a little noisy here 0.0 Delete clap and use whistle in (3)
Normal
-0- nice diff
00:04:672 (5) new combo
01:39:612(1) I think the spacing is inconsistent
YtRaM's Expert
I think it's good enough
Insane
oooh so small circle here 0.0
01:14:200 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9)(10)(11)(12)(1) this stream seems too long and hard 0.0 Divide it in 4 parts will be better I suppose.
nice map
have a star
sorry for my poor english
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Topic Starter
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