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DoneWyndII wrote:
Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^
Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?
Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
fixed insane, normal, and easy. I have not added the tags yet. I will add your suggestions to my list of things to fix on Expert.Senbon wrote:
[Overall][Easy]
- - Add tags and source
[Normal]
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane][ytRaM's Expert]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0 same here
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
[color=#0000BFdone][/color]WyndII wrote:
Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^
Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?
Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
doneDerekku Chan wrote:
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/
[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.
[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream
[color=#0040BFdone][/color]Senbon wrote:
[Overall][Easy]
- - Add tags and source
[Normal]
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane][ytRaM's Expert]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
thx and Yay BAT TIMENachoPiggy wrote:
Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.
These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finishnah, i put whistle
[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 backadded a note before it
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid upmade all of them in line with each other in this section
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish nah
Star'd.
doneAzure_Kyte wrote:
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....
[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.
No major problems found
[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found
[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!
...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred