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i think i might go with 84.RemmyX25 wrote:
Timing Request:
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485
Best of luck!
Mystearica wrote:
^ excuse me sir but wtf r u doin'? ouch
Now that's out of the way, map itself.
[Easy]
Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy. changed to 0.5 spacing
[Normal]
Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work. yay
[Insane]
Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot. lowered overall difficulty. removed streams except for the piano parts. made stacks less random. I knew there was some work to do, but i didn't realized it was that bad.
I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!i will. =)
P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.
doneMafiamaster wrote:
Insane~
00:09:70 - There's a slight delay before the break starts. Redo it.
I had no other problems with this map.
Good job!
Me likey Insane :3
doneignorethis wrote:
Offset is a bit early. +20~+40 plz.
<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft
<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder
Star'd
DoneWyndII wrote:
Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^
Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?
Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
fixed insane, normal, and easy. I have not added the tags yet. I will add your suggestions to my list of things to fix on Expert.Senbon wrote:
[Overall][Easy]
- - Add tags and source
[Normal]
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane][ytRaM's Expert]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0 same here
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
[color=#0000BFdone][/color]WyndII wrote:
Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^
Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?
Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!
doneDerekku Chan wrote:
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/
[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.
[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream
[color=#0040BFdone][/color]Senbon wrote:
[Overall][Easy]
- - Add tags and source
[Normal]
- - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
- 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
- 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert
- - Add a lead in time.
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
-01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert
[Insane][ytRaM's Expert]
- - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
Great work
- - Too noisy turn it down
- Too many claps kill them
- Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
- Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0
- 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
- 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.
thx and Yay BAT TIMENachoPiggy wrote:
Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.
These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finishnah, i put whistle
[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 backadded a note before it
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish
[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid upmade all of them in line with each other in this section
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish nah
Star'd.
doneAzure_Kyte wrote:
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....
[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.
No major problems found
[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found
[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!
...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred