1. Easy (1.93 stars, 109 notes)
2. Hard (4.74 stars, 312 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 593 notes)
4. Normal (3.65 stars, 164 notes)

alvisto wrote:

P.S. : The video size might be too big, but that's the best that I can do without it losing its quality...

alvisto wrote:

RemmyX25 wrote:

If you need to slow the tempo to half pace, just set an Inherited Timing Point, and set the bpm at x.5.

That said, use a BPM of 159.1, and an offset of 405

Thanks for the tips. I had edited Easy's BPM and offset, and also the mid-song slow tempo as well. Definitely sounds better now... Thanks a bundle ! =D

RemmyX25 wrote:

Just make sure you to the same bpm and offset for the other difficulties as well

foulcoon wrote:

Take -Valkryie Profile- out of the title, put it in the source.

Breeze wrote:

如果需要帮忙做skin或者story board
可以论坛PM我

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Can you please do a full-resubmit? I cannot get the beatmap for some reason.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
y are so many notes snapped weirdly. There seem to be a large amount of eighth snaps when the song suggest the notes should be snapped to the quarter notes. Please fix that first.
Ex:
00:04:88 (1) - move an eighth note forward
00:23:32 (1) - move a quarter note forward
00:24:13 (2) - move a eighth note forward
please check through the song and fix that
also y is the BPM different in this difficulty than the others
for me this map looks sort of empty at parts and should be mapped more

Shinxyn wrote:

O_o interesting video use...
Please lower all volumes (Soft sections by 1-2 ticks, and Normal sections by 2-3 ticks), the beatmap is way too loud
Resnap all notes and Recalculate slider lengths (under timing if you didn't know) using 1/4 and recheck the whole map for timing - note- MOST note should go on the red and white ticks, a few on blue, but I did notice there are beats that go on blue ticks, so keep with 1/4

Fix timing first, cuz it's too hard to mod if the timing is completely messy >_< (I have no reason to go against the current bpm and offset, yet?)

1. 00:04:88 (1,2,3) - The first three notes are not snapped to the white tick.
2. 00:10:21 (4) - Sounds weird. Suggestion: I think it would sound better if you had the reverse arrow extend to the white tick at 00:10:59. So the slider ball comes back around and ends on the next white tick. (00:10:97)
3. 00:11:53 (1,2,3,4,5) - These would sound much better if they were on the white ticks. Move them forward about two 1/4 ticks. Then snap 4 and 5 on the white ticks. Afterwards shorten 5 so it lands on the white tick at (00:15:49)
4. 00:16:20 (1,2,3) - Snap to white ticks.
5. 00:23:32 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:27:15 (6,7) - ^
7. 00:47:10 (1) - ^
8. 00:54:50 (3) - Snap to the red tick.
   Recheck your map please for the obvious note placement errors~

Mafiamaster wrote:

Wow, lol. I'm getting some serious (not that serious but kind of serious) frame skipping
Resize your pictures to 800x600. You'll have to scale them in editor later.
The video... Yeah, The dimensions of the video are quite big I think. You'll need to reencode it.
I tried to but feel free not to use it if the quality isn't all that great.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/final3_0.avi Can I use it ? It's small, non-laggy, and the quality is good too ! ^o^ Thanks ! Can you post another post here so that I can award you 1 more kudosu for all the video recoding trouble ?

Easy~

1. 00:04:88 (1,2,3) - The first three notes are not snapped to the white tick.
2. 00:10:21 (4) - Sounds weird. Suggestion: I think it would sound better if you had the reverse arrow extend to the white tick at 00:10:59. So the slider ball comes back around and ends on the next white tick. (00:10:97)
3. 00:11:53 (1,2,3,4,5) - These would sound much better if they were on the white ticks. Move them forward about two 1/4 ticks. Then snap 4 and 5 on the white ticks. Afterwards shorten 5 so it lands on the white tick at (00:15:49)
4. 00:16:20 (1,2,3) - Snap to white ticks.
5. 00:23:32 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:27:15 (6,7) - ^
7. 00:47:10 (1) - ^
8. 00:54:50 (3) - Snap to the red tick.
   Recheck your map please for the obvious note placement errors~

Lizbeth wrote:

hi
the map is nice but u have a big problem here
in all diff. most of the notes aren't snapped. snap it to white, red and blue ticks only, no yellow ticks plz.(except of those sections with 60 BPM)
also reinsert breaks (right clic to remove it and add it again)
i dont see a lot of spacing problems.

im not messing with timing, cuz im really bad at multiple timing sections.
i can see that u have work a lot in this map. well done
if u dont understand something u can send me a pm, or post it here, and i well see if i can explain it to you, with screen shots or somthing...

anyway first of all fix those those snap problem
good luck

alvisto wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

hi
the map is nice but u have a big problem here
in all diff. most of the notes aren't snapped. snap it to white, red and blue ticks only, no yellow ticks plz.(except of those sections with 60 BPM)
also reinsert breaks (right clic to remove it and add it again)
i dont see a lot of spacing problems.

im not messing with timing, cuz im really bad at multiple timing sections.
i can see that u have work a lot in this map. well done
if u dont understand something u can send me a pm, or post it here, and i well see if i can explain it to you, with screen shots or somthing...

anyway first of all fix those those snap problem
good luck

Thanks for showing up Lizbeth ! Actually, I think the moment you were posting your reply, I was full-resubmitting my whole new all-ticks-fixed-and-all-beats-snapped beatmap. Can you please help me mod it again ? Sorry for the turtle speed of updating beatmap, and thanks a lot !

P.S. : And that's HOW YOU REMOVE THOSE BREAKS ! LOL. 1 kudosu for pointing that one for me. =D I will fix break problem tomorrow. Now, I am gonna to take some sleep.

1. 01:06:81 (6) - Redo break after slider.
2. 01:43:04 (3) - Remember, this is the Easy difficulty, so I don't think that this should be RIGHT under 1.
3. 02:26:34 (2,3) - IMO, these should be on the white ticks as well since it's the Easy difficulty.

1. 00:11:53 (1) - I'd move this to the white tick (00:11:71)
2. 00:12:28 (2) - Also the white tick (00:12:47)
3. 00:13:03 (3) - Once again (00:13:22)
4. 00:13:41 (1) - Move 1/4 of a tick forward.
5. 00:13:69 (2) - ^ Once that's done, lengthen it to the white tick. (00:14:73)
6. 00:15:30 (3) - Could be moved to the white tick. (00:15:30) Then shorten the slider to the white tick.
7. 00:16:33 (1) - Move to red tick.
8. 00:16:52 (2) - Move to white tick.
9. 01:30:53 (2,3) - Stack these on 1's endpoint OR move them farther apart
10. 01:36:38 (3) - Suggestion: Move this to the blue tick. (01:36:47)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~

1. 01:06:81 (6) - Redo break after slider.
2. 01:43:04 (3) - Remember, this is the Easy difficulty, so I don't think that this should be RIGHT under 1.
3. 02:26:34 (2,3) - IMO, these should be on the white ticks as well since it's the Easy difficulty.

I edited it to a slider so that it is not difficult for EASY, and the beat doesn't run off. Snapping them on all white seems very weird. =P
Fix

Normal~

1. 00:11:53 (1) - I'd move this to the white tick (00:11:71)
2. 00:12:28 (2) - Also the white tick (00:12:47)
3. 00:13:03 (3) - Once again (00:13:22)
4. 00:13:41 (1) - Move 1/4 of a tick forward.
5. 00:13:69 (2) - ^ Once that's done, lengthen it to the white tick. (00:14:73)
6. 00:15:30 (3) - Could be moved to the white tick. (00:15:30) Then shorten the slider to the white tick.
7. 00:16:33 (1) - Move to red tick.
8. 00:16:52 (2) - Move to white tick.
9. 01:30:53 (2,3) - Stack these on 1's endpoint OR move them farther apart
10. 01:36:38 (3) - Suggestion: Move this to the blue tick. (01:36:47)

Fix all (Hopefully I didn't miss any =P)

Oh dang... timing @ 01:38:45 (1) through 02:23:71 (2). I can't help you there. ;_;
I've figured out the problem. The BPM should be 159.00, not 159.10 =O
I thought it was already at 159.00 the first time I modded it O_o Me too ! That's why I kept feeling the weirdness when playing through NORMAL & HARD 1:54;555 - 1:56:631
You're going to have a lot of work to do getting the beats in the right places after changing the BPM yet again. Now I am getting better and better, editing took lesser and lesser time. Thanks to you guys I learn the colour tick trick. It's better than before where I actually DO COUNT HOW MANY TICKS between each beat to make it sounds constant. lol. Plus, I learned about "j" and "k" shortcut too. =P

Lizbeth wrote:

oks here we go

[Hard]
00:04:93 (1) - i think sounds better if you finish this slider at 00:05:49, the add a note at 00:05:68 and remove 00:05:78 (2) [/color]
00:11:34 (1) - start this slider at 00:11:53ending in the next white tick
00:11:91 (2) - move to next blue tick
00:15:12 (8) - move to prev blue tick
00:15:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move this 1/4 beat later
00:22:76 (1,2,3) - move 1/4 beat later
01:32:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont know if this fits the song
01:35:12 (8,9,10) - move half beat later
01:50:87 (1,2,3) - move to next white tick
02:02:66 (1) - i know is silenced slid, but i think don't fits the music
02:06:06 (1,1) - same here, why you dont follow those strong beats?

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[Normal]
00:13:70 (2) - doesn't follow the music
00:53:23 (1) - distance between (5,1) should be the same as (4,5)
00:57:57 (2) - start this slider at next white tick
00:58:89 (1) - stack with (2,3) ?
All fix.

[Easy]
too fast the slider velocity for a easy imo Hmmm... izzit ? Lol, I too overestimate easy I guess... =P

QUESTION !
I tried changing the slider velocity, but I couldn't recalculate all the sliders automatically. So, do I need to do readjust all the sliders manually ? It's not a troublesome problem for me to edit all those (I love modding =P), but how much slider velocity do you recommend ? For an EASY map ?

since this have 159 BPM, i think these kind of notes 00:58:14 (3,4) are to fast, i recommend you to stick to the white ticks in this diff. this is just my opinion. Agreed. I wonder why I didn't change this one since the following beat groups after this I snap all the notes on the white ticks. =P
01:56:63 (1) - like i said, too fast change for a easy, eliminate a repeat of the prev slider
02:08:14 - remove those 2 breaks, and reinsert
All fixed.

cya good luck
n_n

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Easy]

00:11:72 (1,2,3,4) - Too much claps. Try to change it.
First pause is a bit too long... [/color]
01:04:17 (2,3) - Too hard for easy maps.
01:06:81 (6) - Silence this slider only on ending.
01:56:63 (1) - Too close from 01:55:12 (4)

[Normal]

Good.

[Hard]

00:01:72 (11,1) - Spacing.
Too much new combo on start of the map.
01:05:31 (1,2,3) - Align correctly.
01:30:21 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumps goes out from nowhere.[/color]

ignorethis wrote:

omg this is your first map? Great. Thanks ! Thanks !

<Easy>
A bit like normal, especially the 1/2 velocity sliders, but still ok.
02:26:06 (1) - Not a proper place to end the song. Ending at 02:20:782 is preferable. Sorry, but I kinda like the ending, it's more dramatic imo. Please accept it. =D

<Normal>
00:48:140 - Make this picture gradually fade in, not just appear out of nowhere. It's just wrong. In Easy it doesn't matter because a spinner is there blocking this picture xD =O I forgot there are also this non-video version of the beatmap, because with video, the video will block the sudden "pop" of this picture. Will fix this later. =P Thanks.
01:20:02 (1) - Remove clap.
02:02:66 (2) - Bad spacing. Should be away from 1, or player will think this is closely after 1, click it too soon and then go wrong. Although it's recogniseable, I still suggest you move this away.
02:07:76 (4) - ^
02:26:06 (1) - Same as Easy.
All fix.
<Hard>
00:16:25 (3,4,5,6) - Remove finish.
00:48:140 - Same.
00:59:27 (7) - New combo.
01:33:98 (4) - Bad spacing.
02:26:06 (1) - Same as Easy.

<Insane>
01:05:68 (2) - Bad spacing.
Also the problems I mentioned above.

All fix. Thanks for the great mod !
Except for these problems this map's a high quality one for a first-time mapper. Good luck with ranking. Star'd.

A big thanks for your star and your praise !

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
00:16:63 (7,1) - spacing? (I personally do not want small jumps in easy, but that is your choice) I kinda like the small jump, sorry...
00:18:89 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:40 (4) - add new combo
00:51:53 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:81 (6) - make this timing section slightly earlier to make sure ppl who drop the slider early hear the silence (about a eighth note earlier)
01:28:32 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:97 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:14 (4,1) - spacing?
01:49:83 (3,1) - swap new combo What does swap new combo means ? lol
01:51:53 (3) - new combo?
Fixed.
Normal:
00:19:27 (1,2) - swap new combo
00:20:59 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:93 (1,1,1) - this new combo spam seemed random
00:25:31 (1) - I would like if this was not under the light blue 2
01:03:04 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:27 (1,2) - spacing
02:23:04 (1,2) - swap new combo

Hard:
you might want to increase the overall difficulty Ok
00:00:49 - it feels weird that you did not map this part
00:09:46 (6,7) - spacing (These spacing mistakes could also be fixed by adding a new combo
00:18:51 (1,4) - swap new combo
00:21:34 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:51 (1) - remove the new combo here to keep the pattern of 2s
00:52:66 (1,1) - personally I did not see the reason for 2 new combos here
00:59:27 (7) - new combo
01:23:80 (7) - new combo
01:27:95 (7) - new combo
01:40:78 (4,5) - spacing
01:52:29 (3) - look nicer if you place this under the dark blue 1 I don't understand this... XD
01:56:63 (2) - these long sliders do not fit the difficulty Hmmm.... I have been thinking of changing this part for quite some time. Will fix that later. =P

Insane:
00:30:97 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:40 (7) - place under the purple 2/4 @.@ Don't understand this part too. >.<

Much better than before. Star.

Thanks for the great mod and the star ! P.S. : Finally got your star. =D

alan_629_6 wrote:

Hi ! Sorry for the late come. I try my best. Those mistakes that other people say already I won't say anymore, ok ?

Easy - Ok. The slider moves too fast. Change it slower ?

Normal - I didn't notice any mistake.

Hard - The slow slider parts are ugly. Change ?

Insane -
1:20:216 (9) - Alignment is a bit off.
1:20:782 (1) - The beats too near. Make it farer.
1:22:857 - Same.

Also, please recheck some of the beat placement. Some are not straight and some look weird. Also the white flash background at the end of the song is off. Fix it.

Good luck !

Breeze wrote:

现在这个map看起来已经很棒了 谢谢！
不过还是没有完全的按照distance snap来做,spacing有些地方不是那么的对
不过问题不大 我是有用distance snap,只是有些地方我要强调它的距离感。=P

[easy]
看起来已经没什么问题了,不过结束的地方让人觉得突然断了,为什么不做完呢?　最初原因是懒惰，哈哈，第二原因是，我感觉那个ｅｎｄｉｎｇ好像很震撼！

[normal]
00:11:725 (1) - 这个spacing没对
00:22:291 (1) - ^,不过这个还好
也还是结尾的问题

[hard]
00:04:337 (1,2,3) - 这3个note声音听起来不怎么爽,降低一些比较好ｆｉｘ
00:08:518 (1) - 被前面还没完全消失的note挡住,会比较花,不建议这么放ｆｉｘ
00:09:050 (1,2,3) - 看来你喜欢这么放,好吧,也没什么问题,无视我吧ｆｉｘ，我好像很喜欢大大声的ｂｅａｔ，哈哈
01:32:870 (1) - 又被前面的note挡住了ｆｉｘ
眼力真好！

[insane]
没发现什么问题,great


比我第一个map强很多啊TAT,真厉害你过奖了。＝Ｐ

Z-Ramm wrote:

Easy
01:20:78 (1) - This note needs to be hit right after the spinner ends, and considering that this is an Easy, I think that might be a little bit difficult for noobs. You could remove the note, adjust spinner length, move this note closer to the center of the screen so it's more obvious, etc. Thanks, good eye ! Fix it !

Normal
02:00:78 (1,2,3,4) - This whole sequence just seems arbitrarily placed to me, I can't tell what it's following. Maybe change this up to follow the bass-ish part a bit, kind of like a simplified version of what you did on Hard. Thanks ! I had fix it ! It used to sync with the music, but I forgot to edit it once I change the offset and BPM. =P

Hard
00:01:82 (1) - Move to next white tick, add a note before it in the empty space if necessary. Nice ear ! Now this sounds a hell lot better.
00:02:00 (2) - Move beginning to next red tick. Keep the endpoint where it is now. These two changes will make it sound a lot better. Same.
01:26:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not saying you necessarily have to change anything, but this pattern confused the crap out of me at first. It seems like something that would belong on Insane. I like this, sorry. =P

Insane
01:20:31 - Add a circle here. Fix !

Very nice map for your first. Starred.
Thanks for the great mod and star ! =D

Takuma wrote:

General:
I don't really how the video goes blank for awhile, then appears, then it repeats. Also, your SB is a bit odd imo. I understand your senseness of odd, coz I feel odd the 1st time too, so, I need other's opinion, since I used 2 full days to create this storyboard. (storyboard is new to me you see)

Hard:
00:02:10 (2) - Too close to (1). Fix
01:01:53 (1,2,3) - This is a little too big spacing - please tone it down a bit. Fix
01:26:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It looks fun to play, but it looks messy. Can you fix it maybe? This is 1 of my favourite part of HARD, so, I would like to see how other people thinks, if it is really too messy, then I would fix it. =P Sorry...
01:51:63 (1) - Remove new combo. In case you didn't notice, every new odd combo there (like this one, a standalone 1) indicates there's a new clap there, so I would like other's opinion as well on this. 1/4th back on the timeline, then move 01:51:91 (2) away. Fix, this sounds certainly better.
01:52:29 (3) - New combo. Same reason as above
01:52:85 (1,1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:02:66 (4) - New combo. Fix

Normal:
00:19:27 (1) - Remove new combo. Fix

Easy:
02:02:66 (3) - New combo. Fix

Ryuukun wrote:

[Overall]
I think kiai mode is a bit overused on this map. Ok, will fix that later

[Easy]
No Problems

[Normal]
No Problems

[Hard]
01:06:82 (2) - i would set this one, one 1/2 tick later (on the white) and add a circle here 01:07:38 Did I have this part ? I am confused >.<
00:10:40 (2) - This one should start here 00:10:49 Fix
01:44:65 (1) - set this one here 01:44:60 - (1 1/8 tick earlier) I used 1/4, would it be confusing to fix this ? 1/8 tick earlier certainly sounds better. i need opinions on this as well, since someone said stick to 1/4 the whole time.
01:51:63 (1) - set this one here 01:51:58 - (1 1/8 tick earlier) Do I have this note ? =O Did you modded my old version of my map ?

[Insane]
No Problems

Starred.

lukewarmholiday wrote:

Hard
01:00:78 (4) - New combo since the combo is a little after the slider

Insane
00:39:27 (6) - Move closer to 5
01:25:87 (5,6,7) - Move further from 4, its a little underspaced Nice eye !
01:31:34 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Uhh what, 4,5,6 are overspaced then 9 is too close to 8 Nice eye !

I like it, it's sloppy but you're a new mapper.

BagnoGamer wrote:

[Insane]
00:41:159 - You lack one note here. Fix !
(Reinsert break)
And spacing feels weird. Which part ?
Star. Thanks for the star !

gdeath wrote:

nice map!
easy:
01:04:17 (2)最好是堆垛在(3)的上面。作为easy难度，我个人是不太喜欢这种pattern，这对easy来说快速的二连有点困难。不过不改也没什么问题。改了^o^

normal:
01:27:952 (5) 间隔。应该往下拉点。后面(6,7,8)的note记得也要一起修改。good eye !

hard:
fine

insane:
00:11:159 (2) 取消start的whistle.end部分留着。这样听起来更好听些。 Fix !

i played this game and cleared it.继续加油吧^_^
stared~

antony11 wrote:

Offset 405 seem lillte bit slow for me i suggest you to use 400

Afer my quick look, Easy fine for me

Hard:
00:15:12 (8) - late 1/4 beat
01:01:72 (2) - late 1/4 beat
01:26:81 (2) and 01:27:56 (5) - same with ablove
01:28:89 (5) - early 1/4 beat

Insane:
00:35:40 (2) and 00:36:06 (5) - early 1/4beat

Normal:
01:26:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 3 slider move early 1/4 beat and make it longer
01:38:80 (2) and 01:39:55 (4) - early 1/4

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