IOSYS - shining grace [Osu|Taiko] · forum

smallboat

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smallboat 2013-09-06T13:32:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月16日 at 上午 12:40:14

Artist: IOSYS
Title: shining grace
Source: Project U-Ta-Hi-Me
Tags: プロジェクトウタヒメ [Minakami Yuki] Vocal miko OniJAM
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5290kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.93 stars, 305 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 423 notes)
Normal (3.23 stars, 143 notes)
OniJAM's Muzukashii (4.67 stars, 428 notes)
OniJAM's Oni (4.83 stars, 626 notes)
Yuki's Insane (5 stars, 432 notes)

Download: IOSYS - shining grace
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first ranked map,enjoy it. ~~Insane DT play so fun ?~~

Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane by me
Yuki's Insane by [Minakami Yuki]
OniJAM's Muzukashii
OniJAM's Oni by OniJAM

Thanks Taiko Mod

Dainesl
MidSoul
JUDYDANNY
toara_fict
mingmichael
_Gezo_
gokugohan12468

Thanks Alumni

James2250
Lizbeth
blissfulyoshi
Colin Hou

Thanks BAT

Charles445
Nymph
Frostmourne
Kytoxid
Tasha (Bubbled)
YGOkid8
jonathanlfj (Standard icon)
OnosakiHito Thanks your check !
spboxer3 (Ranked)

Thanks testplay (some forgot..sorry)

Rucker
winber1
GGBY
Satellite
Garven
Andrea
Uan
UnitedWeSin
Scorpiour
alacat
Bless
lkx_Shore

Last edited by smallboat 2013-12-16T02:30:52+00:00, edited 263 times in total.

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-09-14T08:22:29+00:00

看起來間距的部份還沒能掌握的很好

[Another]
00:05:034 (4,5) - 這個我會擺在離00:04:701 (3) - 遠一點的地方或著重疊。你這樣擺可能會坑到第一次玩的人，反正不建議這樣放o3o
00:09:701 (4) - 建議加NC，因為你的節奏變了
00:24:034 (3,4) - 4沒疊好
00:25:367 (2) - ^
00:29:034 (1) - 拿掉NC
00:30:201 (1) - 或00:30:534 (1) - 選一個加NC就好
00:31:534 (6) - 我習慣在這裡加NC
00:56:867 (1,2,3) - 這裡間距小一點，突然有1/4會讓人反應不過來
01:06:756 (12,1) - 建議放近一點
01:26:534 (4,7,10,13) - 你前面在這些地方有加NC，盡量保持一致

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-09-19T01:09:56+00:00

no kd

00:12:701 (5) - 我會改成note
00:26:201 (4) - 擺得太外面
01:06:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 把他弄成美麗的星
01:57:867 (x) - 加個note

然後要出門惹

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-19T01:12:15+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
看起來間距的部份還沒能掌握的很好 恩現在還是不太能掌握麻煩教學一下了

[Another]
00:05:034 (4,5) - 這個我會擺在離00:04:701 (3) - 遠一點的地方或著重疊。你這樣擺可能會坑到第一次玩的人，反正不建議這樣放o3o fixed
00:09:701 (4) - 建議加NC，因為你的節奏變了 fixed
00:24:034 (3,4) - 4沒疊好 fixed
00:25:367 (2) - ^ fixed
00:29:034 (1) - 拿掉NC fixed
00:30:201 (1) - 或00:30:534 (1) - 選一個加NC就好 fixed
00:31:534 (6) - 我習慣在這裡加NC fixed
00:56:867 (1,2,3) - 這裡間距小一點，突然有1/4會讓人反應不過來 fixed
01:06:756 (12,1) - 建議放近一點 fixed
01:26:534 (4,7,10,13) - 你前面在這些地方有加NC，盡量保持一致 fixed

這幾天在搞Hard
Another剛才看了 ok 全fixed !
謝謝Evil

smallboat

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Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-19T02:11:21+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
no kd

00:12:701 (5) - 我會改成note fixed
00:26:201 (4) - 擺得太外面 fixed
01:06:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 把他弄成美麗的星 fixed
01:57:867 (x) - 加個note fixed

然後要出門惹

^_^ 謝謝一路順風喔

好..接著要改Insane.. 我先自摸索下..

~~話說你的簽名圖有點扁~~

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2013-09-19T16:21:15+00:00

star~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-20T04:59:52+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
star~

謝昨天也射一顆 for you.

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-09-23T04:20:08+00:00

[General]

combo color肯定得改，配上这个BG看着花眼

[Normal]

01:07:534 - 冗余的绿线
01:19:534 - 冗余的绿线

[Hard]

Hard明显太难，需要降低难度，否则和Normal跨度太大
00:00:867 (1,2,3) - 间距没对
00:10:534 (4,1) - 调整一下，把这两个的开头重叠在一起
01:05:534 - 加一个Circle
01:17:867 (1,1) - 时间间隔短，不容易接上，建议删掉后者
01:37:868 (4,7) - 叠好

[Insane]

前一段打着感觉就是没什么节奏感段和段之前空得有点多，建议插入一些note
叠好
00:20:701 (6,1) - 叠好
00:36:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一截完全可以跳

这图处于一个不上不下的位置你说rank，标准都符合，但是打着没啥感觉，最后评分肯定不高。多学学别人的图，把排列啊slider花式啊啥的学点过来
还有就是slider的细节，有些没有flow好，这个只有慢慢来了
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

- TiRaFiouS -

128 posts

Joined November 2012

- TiRaFiouS - 2013-09-23T08:58:57+00:00

直接來騙KD了~V~

[Normal]
01:17:534 (1) - DS 0.63[/list]
00:01:534 (2) - 縮短到00:02:034 -
00:02:20 - 加circle[/list]
00:20:701 (1) - 這個轉盤好像有點短
00:03:534 (2) - 加長到00:04:534 -
00:13:367 (4) - change to slider or 00:13:867 - add a note
00:33:201 (2,4) - can remove
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 這是跟音樂的OAO?

先這麼多=3=

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-23T17:10:41+00:00

Piyoko_9796 wrote:
直接來騙KD了~V~

[Normal]
01:17:534 (1) - DS 0.63[/list] 一律調成0.8x了
00:01:534 (2) - 縮短到00:02:034 - fixed
00:02:20 - 加circle[/list] 這邊沒音
00:20:701 (1) - 這個轉盤好像有點短 fixed
00:03:534 (2) - 加長到00:04:534 - 恩..先在201看看吧
00:13:367 (4) - change to slider or 00:13:867 - add a note fixed
00:33:201 (2,4) - can remove fixed
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 這是跟音樂的OAO? 恩阿

先這麼多=3=

謝謝嚕!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-24T00:35:34+00:00

Weiren wrote:
[General]
combo color肯定得改，配上这个BG看着花眼
OK 我再想想哪些顏色比較適合

[Normal]
01:07:534 - 冗余的绿线 fixed
01:19:534 - 冗余的绿线fixed

[Hard]
Hard明显太难，需要降低难度，否则和Normal跨度太大 fixed
00:00:867 (1,2,3) - 间距没对 fixed
00:10:534 (4,1) - 调整一下，把这两个的开头重叠在一起 fixed
01:05:534 - 加一个Circle fixed 加了長條
01:17:867 (1,1) - 时间间隔短，不容易接上，建议删掉后者 fixed已刪
01:37:868 (4,7) - 叠好
fixed

[Insane]
前一段打着感觉就是没什么节奏感段和段之前空得有点多，建议插入一些note 是會加多一點
叠好 fixed
00:20:701 (6,1) - 叠好 fixed
00:36:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一截完全可以跳

這邊可以跳? 昨天看了看還不知怎放..今晚再來請教姥爷甘溫

这图处于一个不上不下的位置你说rank，标准都符合，但是打着没啥感觉，最后评分肯定不高。多学学别人的图，把排列啊slider花式啊啥的学点过来 OK, 最近都看satellite 和長喜.泡泡的map 神麻婆就是不一樣..
还有就是slider的细节，有些没有flow好，这个只有慢慢来了
----------flow..我這也蠻苦手..會努力的..已不知被多少人教
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

謝謝Weiren 希望你那首中文歌都9.5以上星星評價喔!

下午左右再up..

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-09-25T11:06:28+00:00

Mod from your request
怒用繁體輸入法

[General]

Tag里去掉IOSYS和shining
滑條聲音好難聽建議刪掉

[Normal]
00:00:867 建議紅線和這裡的綠線音量改成5% 然後在00:05:867這裡插一根綠線音量調高
01:26:201 (5,7) - 對稱
01:32:867 (3) - 這裡最好順著滑條的軌跡走
01:38:201 (3,5) - 這點nazi要控制好 stack throughly

感覺這個diff美觀性不夠

[Hard]
AR+1
00:04:367 (6,7,8,3,4,5) - 我覺得這三個單點都最好不要stack opinion
00:11:534 (1) - stack with 00:10:534 (4)的尾巴不要在意中英結合這些細節
00:26:201 (4,5,6) - stack nazi
00:36:867 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星沒擺好建議ctrl+shift+D來畫
01:08:867 (3,4,1) - 這個最好還是不要這麼擺不美觀兩個circle換成slider也好啊
01:37:868 (4,7) - stack nazi
01:42:534 (2,4) - ^
01:49:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - 建議擺幾何圖形
01:51:534 (1,3) - stack nazi

節奏太寬鬆了些？

[Insane]
瑪德我趕著去晚修啊
AR+1
00:06:867 (3,4,5,6) - 一看就沒blanket好
00:12:201 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不等你在逗我？
00:24:367 (3,1) - stack nazi
00:28:201 (1,1,1) - NC莫名後面也是
00:32:117 連打應該連到這裡才對阿
01:30:784 ^
01:41:451 ^
01:11:534 (2,3) - stack nazi
01:12:534 (5,6) - ^
01:18:867 (3,5,8) - 這幾個滑條其實可以搞個SV漸變
01:22:534 (5,2) - stack nazi

感覺跟vocal太多了點 insane的話大部份應該跟鼓點讓節奏滿滿的才好

Good Luck

smallboat

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Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-26T05:03:14+00:00

Awaken wrote:
Mod from your request
怒用繁體輸入法 ~~這是好現象!~~

[General]
Tag里去掉IOSYS和shining fixed
滑條聲音好難聽建議刪掉是說音效嗎? 那我考慮一下..

[Normal]
00:00:867 建議紅線和這裡的綠線音量改成5% 然後在00:05:867這裡插一根綠線音量調高 fixed
01:26:201 (5,7) - 對稱 fixed 應該是這樣?
01:32:867 (3) - 這裡最好順著滑條的軌跡走 fixed
01:38:201 (3,5) - 這點nazi要控制好 stack throughly fixed

感覺這個diff美觀性不夠我也覺得我會多看別人NM圖的..

[Hard]
AR+1
00:04:367 (6,7,8,3,4,5) - 我覺得這三個單點都最好不要stack opinion fixed
00:11:534 (1) - stack with 00:10:534 (4)的尾巴不要在意中英結合這些細節 fixed
00:26:201 (4,5,6) - stack nazi fixed
00:36:867 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星沒擺好建議ctrl+shift+D來畫這個不會..教一下
01:08:867 (3,4,1) - 這個最好還是不要這麼擺不美觀兩個circle換成slider也好啊 fixed
01:37:868 (4,7) - stack nazi fixed
01:42:534 (2,4) - ^ fixed
01:49:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - 建議擺幾何圖形考慮
01:51:534 (1,3) - stack nazi fixed

節奏太寬鬆了些？已新增一些了

[Insane]
瑪德我趕著去晚修啊讀書最重要
AR+1 fixed
00:06:867 (3,4,5,6) - 一看就沒blanket好 fixed
00:12:201 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不等你在逗我？fixed 沒看到
00:24:367 (3,1) - stack nazi fixed
00:28:201 (1,1,1) - NC莫名後面也是 fixed 啥時有那麼多雜色(??
00:32:117 連打應該連到這裡才對阿 fixed
01:30:784 ^ fixed
01:41:451 ^ fixed
01:11:534 (2,3) - stack nazi fixed
01:12:534 (5,6) - ^ fixed
01:18:867 (3,5,8) - 這幾個滑條其實可以搞個SV漸變好的我試試
01:22:534 (5,2) - stack nazi fixed

感覺跟vocal太多了點 insane的話大部份應該跟鼓點讓節奏滿滿的才好 OK 我會想辦法

Good Luck

感謝MOD

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-26T16:06:36+00:00

As your request

[General]

Shining Grace；
音效没弄么？那我也就不弄音效了（其实我也不擅长弄音效）；
00:38:201 - 第一段kiai这里结束吧；
如果弄喷泉效果的话，00:38:534 - 00:38:617 - 类似这种地方加一个短kiai就可以；
01:45:201 - 后面这段kiai建议取消掉，改成↑那样比较好；

[Normal]

hp-1；
开始的一段红线起红线结束的滑条听上去节奏很奇怪啊，我觉得没必要跟vocal，改拉到白线还是拉到白线的好；
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看；
00:46:534 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 太重复了……如果是这一段就算了，后面的梗也是重复的，这样让人打起来很无聊，虽然只是normal对吧但也不能过于忽视啊._.你说猴不猴啊？；
01:26:201 (5) - NC？；
01:28:867 (9) - ^；
01:30:201 (1) - remove NC；
01:45:201 (1,2,3) - 这里也是和前面一样，梗重复，而且都是横平竖直；
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 这里这么摆节奏挺怪的容易miss，这样如何？

[Hard]

sv有点快，改到1.2；
感觉你hard里面跳放得有点多，虽然是小跳来着……；
00:46:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样是重复梗，既然都是摆满1/2了，尝试点新的花样呢？；
01:00:534 (5,6,7,8) - 间距；
01:40:201 (2,3) - 不在一条直线上；
别的看上去还好，排版有点生硬，就是感觉几个几何形状摆的也不是很规则，仔细找找吧._.；

[Insane]

ar+1；
看你note的密度比较稀，hp-1；
不知道这么多×1.1sv有什么用啊……；
00:07:367 (6) - 没包好；
00:11:534 (7) - NC；
00:17:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排列不好看；
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 改成

，至于怎么摆，我下面的随手摆的，不一定要采用：

，

；
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 总感觉有点偷懒；
00:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一段还是摆的挺好的._.；
00:46:201 - ~ 00:56:534 - 舒缓段落note摆近点比较好，不要节奏舒缓的地方都在跳>.<；
01:24:868 (1,2,1,2,1) - 以及后面一大段 NC变化太快了，然后再往后NC变化又慢了，考虑改改吧；
01:38:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 这一段的排列也要改改~；
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟着节奏不适合这么摆；
01:57:034 (3) - 这个还是改了吧，后面的白线也有鼓点的。

总的来说呢，就是排列很生硬，直拉的很多，梗的单调性也会降低map的游戏性=v=
好好加油哦~
如果以后有需要的话还可以找我remod一下
还有的话QQ上说了，这里就不再赘述了
good luck >.<

Azails

84 posts

Joined October 2012

Azails 2013-09-28T14:34:56+00:00

Mod from your request

[General]
音效略單調;
建議去滑條聲,不好聽

[Normal]

整體spacing略擠了點;w;
00:02:701 (1) - spacing有誤,建議將他排出來吧
00:32:867 (1,2,3,4) - kiai段落感覺不必要空拍
這diff看著開頭挺flow,進了kiai後給人一種僵直單調的感覺,slider下點功夫的話會改善很多 :3

[Hard]

00:36:034 (5) - 加note,節奏上空拍太過突兀
00:36:701 (3) - ^
00:38:701 (2) - ^
00:39:367 (3) - ^
hard好些了,可以再稍微大膽些的作梗,過多重覆的排列多少有點乏味

[Insane]

00:11:534 (7) - NC
00:46:534 (1) ~ 00:56:534 (1) - 這一段的擺放可以再好好考慮一下
01:16:201 (1) - remove NC
01:19:534 (5) - 變速NC
01:20:367 (8) - ^
01:24:867 (1) - remove NC,下的太雜了
01:25:534 (1) - ^
01:26:867 (1) - ^
01:27:534 (1) - ^ , 後面類似節拍我就省略了

暫時先這樣吧見諒我彈性看圖;w;
有其他的問題可以再PM我
Good Luck

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Xinchii 2013-09-29T16:16:35+00:00

拖了拖的mod

[Normal]

00:19:534(5) - 這邊slider的方向可以往右一點,看起來有點擠

[Hard]

00:08:067(3) - slider從這邊開始感覺和一些
00:49:367 - 覺得這邊作一個slider到00:49:367-會好一點,那邊的人聲不跟感覺怪怪

[Insane]

這Diff的排列感覺有點硬硬的,建議多參考些排列梗搭配一些Jump會好一些
00:03:201(2,3,4) - 排出弧度會好看一點
00:16:867(2) - 這邊建議作一個1/1 slider到00:17:201-會比較和歌聲
00:32:534(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 作點造型會比較好玩,連續7個anti-jump有點無趣030
00:44:867(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建議這段連打排出一點造型,像是作一點弧度或是其他什麼的
01:23:534 - 01:28:534 - 嗯.....我直接標這一整區是想說,這一區有些地方可以作點jump之類的會比重疊或是1.0x間距好玩一點,呃,也不是不行,只是感覺不像Insane了:O

我真心不會作mod orz

我只會玩.....

說起來你刪掉那個難度感覺比較有趣,加點修改應該會不錯:O
怎麼不要了QAQ

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-02T00:35:50+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
As your request

SPOILER
[General]
Shining Grace； fixed
音效没弄么？那我也就不弄音效了（其实我也不擅长弄音效）；
00:38:201 - 第一段kiai这里结束吧；fixed
如果弄喷泉效果的话，00:38:534 - 00:38:617 - 类似这种地方加一个短kiai就可以 fixed；
01:45:201 - 后面这段kiai建议取消掉，改成↑那样比较好 fixed；
[Normal]
hp-1 fixed；
开始的一段红线起红线结束的滑条听上去节奏很奇怪啊，我觉得没必要跟vocal，改拉到白线还是拉到白线的好fixed；
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看fixed；
00:46:534 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 太重复了……如果是这一段就算了，后面的梗也是重复的，这样让人打起来很无聊，虽然只是normal对吧但也不能过于忽视啊._.你说猴不猴啊？fixed；
01:26:201 (5) - NC？fixed；
01:28:867 (9) - ^fixed；
01:30:201 (1) - remove NCfixed；
01:45:201 (1,2,3) - 这里也是和前面一样，梗重复，而且都是横平竖直fixed；
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 这里这么摆节奏挺怪的容易miss，这样如何？
fixed
[Hard]
sv有点快，改到1.2不了；
感觉你hard里面跳放得有点多，虽然是小跳来着……；fixed 修復一些
00:46:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样是重复梗，既然都是摆满1/2了，尝试点新的花样呢？fixed 沒有像之前一樣了；
01:00:534 (5,6,7,8) - 间距fixed；
01:40:201 (2,3) - 不在一条直线上fixed；
别的看上去还好，排版有点生硬，就是感觉几个几何形状摆的也不是很规则，仔细找找吧._.fixed；
[Insane]
ar+1fixed；
看你note的密度比较稀，hp-1fixed；
不知道这么多×1.1sv有什么用啊……偶爾來點變速?；
00:07:367 (6) - 没包好fixed；
00:11:534 (7) - NCfixed；
00:17:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排列不好看fixed；
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 改成fixed，至于怎么摆，我下面的随手摆的，不一定要采用：
，，
；
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 总感觉有点偷懒fixed；
00:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一段还是摆的挺好的._.謝謝不過還是有fixed一些；
00:46:201 - ~ 00:56:534 - 舒缓段落note摆近点比较好，不要节奏舒缓的地方都在跳>.<fixed；
01:24:868 (1,2,1,2,1) - 以及后面一大段 NC变化太快了，然后再往后NC变化又慢了，考虑改改吧fixed；
01:38:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 这一段的排列也要改改~fixed；
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟着节奏不适合这么摆fixed；
01:57:034 (3) - 这个还是改了吧，后面的白线也有鼓点的。fixed

总的来说呢，就是排列很生硬，直拉的很多，梗的单调性也会降低map的游戏性=v= Ok 那我會多看圖的
好好加油哦~謝謝我會努力
如果以后有需要的话还可以找我remod一下 Ok 會不時找你請教
还有的话QQ上说了，这里就不再赘述了
good luck >.<祝你也是GL!

Azathozkula wrote:
Mod from your request

SPOILER
[General]
音效略單調; 音效還在選不好意思找不到合適音效
建議去滑條聲,不好聽 fixed 都5%了

[Normal]

整體spacing略擠了點;w; fixed
00:02:701 (1) - spacing有誤,建議將他排出來吧 fixed
00:32:867 (1,2,3,4) - kiai段落感覺不必要空拍 fixed
這diff看著開頭挺flow,進了kiai後給人一種僵直單調的感覺,slider下點功夫的話會改善很多 :3fixed了一些
[Hard]

00:36:034 (5) - 加note,節奏上空拍太過突兀 fixed
00:36:701 (3) - ^ fixed
00:38:701 (2) - ^ fixed
00:39:367 (3) - ^ fixed
hard好些了,可以再稍微大膽些的作梗,過多重覆的排列多少有點乏味 fixed了一些

[Insane]

00:11:534 (7) - NC fixed
00:46:534 (1) ~ 00:56:534 (1) - 這一段的擺放可以再好好考慮一下fixed一些
01:16:201 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:19:534 (5) - 變速NC fixed
01:20:367 (8) - ^ fixed
01:24:867 (1) - remove NC,下的太雜了 fixed
01:25:534 (1) - ^fixed
01:26:867 (1) - ^fixed
01:27:534 (1) - ^ , 後面類似節拍我就省略了fixed
暫時先這樣吧見諒我彈性看圖;w; 沒關係有空會找你試圖~
有其他的問題可以再PM我是
Good Luck3Q

leon1341414 wrote:
拖了拖的mod

SPOILER
[Normal]
00:19:534(5) - 這邊slider的方向可以往右一點,看起來有點擠fixed
[Hard]
00:08:067(3) - slider從這邊開始感覺和一些字打一半..?
00:49:367 - 覺得這邊作一個slider到00:49:367-會好一點,那邊的人聲不跟感覺怪怪fixed
[Insane]
這Diff的排列感覺有點硬硬的,建議多參考些排列梗搭配一些Jump會好一些 fixed
00:03:201(2,3,4) - 排出弧度會好看一點 fixed
00:16:867(2) - 這邊建議作一個1/1 slider到00:17:201-會比較和歌聲 fixed
00:32:534(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 作點造型會比較好玩,連續7個anti-jump有點無趣030 fixed
00:44:867(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建議這段連打排出一點造型,像是作一點弧度或是其他什麼的 fixed
01:23:534 - 01:28:534 - 嗯.....我直接標這一整區是想說,這一區有些地方可以作點jump之類的會比重疊或是1.0x間距好玩一點,呃,也不是不行,只是感覺不像Insane了:Ofixed了一些
我真心不會作mod orz 沒關係 ~~+1SP也好?~~

我只會玩.....

說起來你刪掉那個難度感覺比較有趣,加點修改應該會不錯:O
怎麼不要了QAQ感覺Ano是進階的人在做的所以就刪了..Insane沒什麼大問題再說吧..
謝謝 Minakami Yuki . Azathozkula . leon1341414的修改

Angelina_Rocca

33 posts

Joined February 2013

Angelina_Rocca 2013-10-03T13:39:55+00:00

~~骗个KD越来越难了啊喂！~~
Yuki
~~打不过去，摸不了~~
Insane
~~很艰难的pass了，感觉也摸不了~~
前面看你的音量用的5%， 10%，15%
跨度太小了，听不出来分别。
推荐10% 25% 40%
01:08:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没看明白到底跟的vocal还是鼓点啊。。
00:13:367 (1,2) - 还是觉得一开始声音轻柔的时候排列“温柔”一些比较好。这个还是有点突然了吧
00:57:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看。。。

Hard
音量同in
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这俩，为什么不一样啊
~~0 0说好的亲兄弟呢QAQ~~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-04T17:00:29+00:00

Angelina_Rocca wrote:
~~骗个KD越来越难了啊喂！~~
Yuki
~~打不过去，摸不了~~
Insane
~~很艰难的pass了，感觉也摸不了~~
前面看你的音量用的5%， 10%，15%
跨度太小了，听不出来分别。
推荐10% 25% 40% fixed
01:08:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没看明白到底跟的vocal还是鼓点啊。。都有耶想了下還是不變好了
00:13:367 (1,2) - 还是觉得一开始声音轻柔的时候排列“温柔”一些比较好。这个还是有点突然了吧 ^ ~~要突然才叫Insane~~?
00:57:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看。。。 fixed

Hard
音量同in fixed
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这俩，为什么不一样啊 fixed 也是弄個對稱了
~~0 0说好的亲兄弟呢QAQ~~

謝謝Rocca

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-05T02:28:42+00:00

最近水平下降……随便摸两句._.
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好，后面类似的也是._.
00:56:867 - 声太小了还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉，修一下
[Yuki]
00:50:200 (1) -Ctrl+G
01:15:533 (1,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018697
01:23:533 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:30:866 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:57:366 (1) - NC 还有就是建议这里移开点._.

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-05T02:59:22+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Yuki]
00:50:200 (1) -Ctrl+G ok
01:15:533 (1,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018697 no
01:23:533 (1) - Ctrl+G ok
01:30:866 (3) - Ctrl+G 我故意的
01:57:366 (1) - NC 还有就是建议这里移开点._. 移开了不过不NC

Thanks for modding

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-05T10:12:22+00:00

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion

General

Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上请往后拉2ms
所有难度：00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右

Normal
00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了放大到30左右吧
01:28:201 - clap?
01:41:868 (3) - missing clap
01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap

Hard
00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ?
00:39:367 - add a note

Insane
00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小提高到55/60
01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差
01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60

Yuki
00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠？
00:23:534 (1) - whistle
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕换成普通的那种

音效做的不错了所以我没摸出什么出来
Nice map Good luck~

Last edited by Kayano 2013-10-06T02:17:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2013-10-05T11:03:18+00:00

as ur req

[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

00:39:367 (5) - nc？
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍

挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的

[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap，fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning，一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出，不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3

00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下
00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下
00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹
00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6，改成1/6折返吧，然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下
00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了，微调一下
00:31:534 (8) - nc
00:37:367 (7) - ^
00:39:534 (8) - ^
00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下
00:48:867 (8) - nc
01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了，把5再放远一点
01:09:201 (5) - 略高，看看能不能放下来一点
01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下，这个长滑条可以改成3单点，单点+滑条或者折返都行
01:17:367 这里可以放个连打
01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好，把5放远
01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐，要么stack在尾巴上要么放远，或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错
01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变，顺序改成34562
01:40:867 (8) - nc
01:46:200 (7) - nc？似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc，这个你自己看吧，后同
01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打，12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了，在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧，其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的

nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头，或者分割梗，虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好，而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱（除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要）
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233

[Hard]

00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz
00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以，但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样
01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好，不然看上去有点乱
01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一，跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏
01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍

其实滑条那么多，blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说

[Normal]

00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说，2和1stack，3弄成圆弧吧？多个control point感觉没意义啊orz
00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket，后面我就不说了，只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题
01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样

嗯，kiai也没snap，fix一下

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。

good luck

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-05T11:13:35+00:00

我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-05T11:21:22+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。
我也不知道怎么回事噗噗噗噗噗，已经改了
00:39:367 (5) - nc？ ok
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc ok
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 ok
挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的 thanks~

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。噗噗噗噗摆乌龙了哈哈哈

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-06T13:45:37+00:00

ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:
最近水平下降……随便摸两句._. 謝謝來摸
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过 我圖片壓縮不太拿手所以就這樣了._. 後面再想辦法..
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换 fixed
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G fixed
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好，后面类似的也是._. fixed
00:56:867 - 声太小了还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下 fixed
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687 fixed
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去 fixed
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉，修一下 Ok，這個難度錯的蠻大我會設法改改~~(找神modder改改?)~~

謝謝包子神的mod。

ts8zs wrote:
我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.

win8沒用過呢..感覺不怎好用..介面太複雜..

OniJAM

OniJAM wrote:
Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion
General
Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上请往后拉2ms fixed
所有难度：00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右 fixed

Normal
00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了放大到30左右吧 fixed
01:28:201 - clap? fixed
01:41:868 (3) - missing clap fixed
01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap 改成3個結尾

Hard
00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ? fixed
00:39:367 - add a note fixed

Insane
00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小提高到55/60 fixed
01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差又改了些
01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60 fixed

音效做的不错了所以我没摸出什么出来謝謝啦但有些還沒放完全
Nice map Good luck~ 謝，第一次有這樣說

Hollow Wings

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

00:39:367 (5) - nc？
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍
挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的
[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap，fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning，一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出，不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3 OK
00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下 fixed
00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下 fixed
00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹 fixed
00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6，改成1/6折返吧，然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下 fixed
00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了，微调一下 fixed
00:31:534 (8) - nc fixed
00:37:367 (7) - ^ fixed
00:39:534 (8) - ^ fixed
00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下 fixed
00:48:867 (8) - nc fixed
01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了，把5再放远一点 fixed
01:09:201 (5) - 略高，看看能不能放下来一点 fixed
01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下，这个长滑条可以改成3单点，单点+滑条或者折返都行 fixed 改成3單點
01:17:367 这里可以放个连打 fixed
01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好，把5放远 fixed
01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐，要么stack在尾巴上要么放远，或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错 fixed 都放在尾巴堆疊了
01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变，顺序改成34562 看不太懂..不過我有改了些
01:40:867 (8) - nc fixed
01:46:200 (7) - nc？似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc，这个你自己看吧，后同 fixed 後面也改了
01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打，12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了，在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧，其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的 12那句我看不懂等下問你..其餘fixed 曲線等會修

nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头，或者分割梗，虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好，而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱（除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要） Ok..好..重音..瞭解我試試
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233 我也覺得不太美觀謝謝你的指點
[Hard]
00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz fixed
00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以，但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样 fixed
01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好，不然看上去有点乱 fixed
01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一，跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏 fixed
01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 fixed
其实滑条那么多，blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说symm不太懂其餘fixed了
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说，2和1stack，3弄成圆弧吧？多个control point感觉没意义啊orz fixed
00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket，后面我就不说了，只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题 fixed
01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样fixed
嗯，kiai也没snap，fix一下fixed

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。哈哈會注意的(尷尬

good luck

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-07T05:55:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-10-06T18:30:45+00:00

m4m

General

这是180？你们能不能不要做得跟160一样
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
请修改所有5%的部分
这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分
我还是先删了bg再mod

Insane

00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4，考虑一下
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle
00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC
01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住请考虑
01:12:201 (4,7) - stack？
01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note
01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近，要么改成一个跳

Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
没啥问题

Hard

00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63
00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC
00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC
01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食请考虑修改
01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好其实可以像Normal一样留一个break
01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳
01:46:200 (4) - NC
01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲，建议改成1/2+note

Normal

没啥问题

Good luck~

- Jelly -

30 posts

Joined April 2013

- Jelly - 2013-10-06T18:38:37+00:00

Hi~

Yuki

HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

Insane

00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音，
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._.

Hard

00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。

Normal

00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返？

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸，
小船神麻婆不要介意 |||||

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-07T03:40:04+00:00

Flower wrote:
Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串结合下面的modder说的改了
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳我考虑下
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note ok
没啥问题花花这么说我很高兴0.0
另外花花你的那个160的消除能玩？

- Jelly - wrote:
Yuki
HP-1或者OD+1 nope
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读.. 多花1pc就可以读懂不改
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条 nope
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238 fixed
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。 hehe
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始改了
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变好

OniJAM wrote:
Yuki
00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠？好
00:23:534 (1) - whistle 好
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕换成普通的那种不好，我就想坑人家acc一把

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2013-10-07T12:26:12+00:00

小船早._.
来得有点晚QAQ

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥，在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个：
プロジェクトウタヒメ
~~作曲/编曲：ARM，作词：夕野ヨシミ，~~Vocal：miko，可以加进tags中。（来源：http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ）
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki]，所有的username中间不要有空格，需要用下划线代替。
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color？谁写的这么条规则这么蠢，我就提这么一句QAQ
~~怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话，建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小，不要直接缩放。~~网上找的图全是这个比例。。

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看，建议顺时针转120度
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好，关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好？
01:02:867 (3) - ^
01:52:201 (4) - ^
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧，和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是

Good luck!

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-07T13:54:28+00:00

EmingK wrote:
[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？你看错了
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^ 这个你没看错 fixed
01:10:534 - 加个circle? 好
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是蛤蛤蛤蛤[/notice]

Good luck!

改的地方

打开osu文件吧hitobjects后面的全部复制成下面的就可以了

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236,212,1534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,192,1701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,188,1868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,195,2034,2,0,P|422:213|463:270,1,120.000005024671,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,335,2701,6,0,P|321:347|291:351,1,60.0000025123357,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,352,3034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,344,3201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,326,3368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,371,3534,2,0,P|219:307|200:222,1,180.000007537007,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4701,2,0,P|152:135|112:178,2,120.000005024671
95,274,5868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
95,274,6201,2,0,P|45:253|15:193,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,101,6868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,80,7034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,74,7201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,7368,2,0,P|217:99|277:93,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,78,7868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,48,8201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,52,8534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,56,8868,2,0,P|420:108|380:160,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,9368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,9701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,9867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,228,10034,2,0,P|456:279|441:344,1,120.000005024671
377,296,10534,2,0,L|321:316,1,60.0000025123357
274,329,10868,2,0,L|215:305,1,60.0000025123357
178,368,11201,2,0,L|167:308,1,60.0000025123357
113,56,11534,6,0,L|81:171,1,120.000005024671,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,350,12201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
81,301,12368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,274,12534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,257,12701,2,0,P|241:227|274:169,1,120.000005024671
286,55,13368,6,0,P|336:50|360:57,1,60.0000025123357
404,65,13701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,99,13868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,154,14034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,14201,2,0,P|412:267|444:375,1,180.000007537007,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,306,15034,6,0,L|438:286,1,60.0000025123357
388,279,15368,2,0,P|335:275|267:303,1,120.000005024671
237,346,15868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,354,16201,2,0,P|343:287|302:242,1,120.000005024671
163,248,16868,6,0,P|126:295|117:353,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,197,17868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,196,18034,2,0,P|139:144|228:167,1,180.000007537007
436,280,18868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,19201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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387,79,20368,2,0,L|327:99,1,60.0000025123357
256,192,20701,12,0,21868,0:0:0:0:
80,108,22201,5,2,0:0:0:0:
157,88,22368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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157,88,22868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,67,23034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,71,23201,2,0,L|312:81,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,145,23534,5,2,0:0:0:0:
294,168,23618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,175,23701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,171,23784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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449,161,23951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
483,182,24034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
505,214,24118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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494,333,24534,2,0,P|465:369|427:374,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,294,24868,6,0,P|391:272|351:269,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,306,25201,2,0,P|244:316|284:312,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,247,25534,2,0,P|128:206|92:184,1,80.000000298023
21,199,25868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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363,71,110118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,67,110201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,69,110284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,81,110368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,103,110451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,129,110534,6,0,P|193:150|154:159,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,157,110868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,159,111034,2,0,P|181:184|194:237,1,80.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,321,111368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,309,111534,6,0,P|332:299|368:306,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,365,111868,2,0,P|456:329|458:290,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,267,112201,2,0,P|325:258|286:266,1,80.000000298023
200,310,112534,2,0,P|190:252|197:228,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,170,112868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
359,205,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,110,113201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,144,113368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
283,265,113534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,75,113701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,24,113868,6,0,P|158:60|165:110,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,190,114201,1,4,0:0:0:0:
206,219,114284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,251,114368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,280,114451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,302,114534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,315,114618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,315,114701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,302,114784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,280,114868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,251,114951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,219,115034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,190,115118,2,0,L|113:190,3,40.0000001490115,0|8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,188,115534,6,0,P|228:166|266:156,1,80.000000298023
266,156,115784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,156,115868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,232,116034,2,0,P|361:167|338:93,1,160.000000596046
250,52,116534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,10,116701,2,0,P|384:18|407:46,1,80.000000298023
445,126,117034,5,0,0:0:0:0:
445,126,117118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,126,117201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,221,117368,2,0,P|422:259|393:288,1,80.000000298023
304,318,117701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,305,117868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,232,118034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118201,12,4,120201,0:0:0:0:

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-08T07:39:59+00:00

Flower

Flower wrote:
m4m

General

这是180？你们能不能不要做得跟160一样沒辦法因為是渣圖剛才又改了些

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
请修改所有5%的部分修了最低到15%

这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分抱歉我想想要設什麼顏色..別給一分呀;w;
我还是先删了bg再mod抱歉我combo顏色會改謝謝mod

Insane

00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4，考虑一下 fixed
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle fixed
00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC fixed
01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住请考虑 fixed
01:12:201 (4,7) - stack？ fixed
01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note fixed
01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近，要么改成一个跳 fixed

Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
没啥问题

Hard

00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63 fixed
00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC fixed
00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC fixed
01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食请考虑修改 fixed 已改成連續note
01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好其实可以像Normal一样留一个break fixed 已設成break
01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳 fixed 也是設成連續note
01:46:200 (4) - NC fixed
01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲，建议改成1/2+note fixed 設成前面一長條+圈

Normal

没啥问题 3Q

Good luck~謝謝花花神麻婆

- Jelly -

- Jelly - wrote:
Hi~

[Yuki]
HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

[Insane]
00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置 fixed
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音， fixed
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。 fixed 等下up
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck fixed 是stack吧..
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._. 哈哈..

[Hard]
00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。 fixed
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。 fixed

[Normal]
00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返？ fixed

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸，還沒Ranked一張不神啦..
小船神麻婆不要介意 ||||| 不會

謝謝傑利神觸的mod

EmingK

EmingK wrote:
小船早._. 早
来得有点晚QAQ 沒關係@_@

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了.. 這首歌蠻特殊..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥，在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个：
プロジェクトウタヒメ fixed
~~作曲/编曲：ARM，作词：夕野ヨシミ，~~Vocal：miko，可以加进tags中。（来源：http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ） fixed
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki]，所有的username中间不要有空格，需要用下划线代替。 fixed
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color？谁写的这么条规则这么蠢，我就提这么一句QAQ 花花說顏色相近不太好耶..
~~怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话，建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小，不要直接缩放。~~网上找的图全是这个比例。。還好吧這兩張..

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好 fixed
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看，建议顺时针转120度 fixed
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好，关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移 fixed
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208 fixed

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好？ fixed
01:02:867 (3) - ^ fixed
01:52:201 (4) - ^ fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了 fixed＿
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样咦沒紅點呀

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了 fixed
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^ fixed
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^ fixed
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^ fixed
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好 fixed
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧，和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是

Good luck!謝謝E小K

Melt

Melt wrote:
Hi 嗨

[General]
combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz，试试这个：(196,136,255)
神麻婆果然很會選顏色

[Normal]
为什么要用tick2呢orz 想讓分數多點..不過改1了
00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些 fixed
00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket? fixed
00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了 fixed
01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好 fixed
[Hard]
感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点 fixed 改0.75 修了好久這邊....
00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好（逃 fixed (抓
00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢 fixed
00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁，比如这里 fixed
00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier fixed
01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0 fixed
01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好 fixed
[Insane]
00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好 fixed
00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下 fixed
00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz fixed 我剛剛還以為這是原圖想說沒啥奇怪..結果回到自己的..咦 ?
00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好 fixed
01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o fixed 已刪
01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面 fixed

[Yuki]
00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好
:3 謝謝妹兒特的mod

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-09T16:23:31+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-10-08T13:02:48+00:00

Hi

[General]

combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz，试试这个：(196,136,255)

[Normal]

为什么要用tick2呢orz
00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些
SPOILER
00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket?
00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了
01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好

[Hard]

感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点
00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好（逃
00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢
SPOILER
00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁，比如这里
SPOILER
00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier
01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0
SPOILER
01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc
01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好

[Insane]

00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好
SPOILER
00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下
SPOILER
00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz
SPOILER
00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好
01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o
01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面

[Yuki]

00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好

:3

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-08T14:25:03+00:00

Melt wrote:
[Yuki]
00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4) 本来就是复制的不过ctrl+G了一下
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始好
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行好
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz nope，听了很多遍确定有鼓点
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？我打起来毫无压力，nope
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好 fixed
至于combo color，如果小船你要改的话，就顺便帮我一起改了吧

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-10-08T23:32:52+00:00

[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:

プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko

The combo colors in [Yuki] are inconsistent (not the same) as the others which it has to be is:

Combo1 : 192,192,192 
Combo2 : 128,255,255 
Combo3 : 18,124,255 
Combo4 : 128,204,51

[Normal]
00:05:867 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:06:201 (2) . It'll sound better.
00:10:534 (1) - Same as 00:05:867 (1) . Remove the new combo and add it to 00:11:534 (2) .
00:18:867 (1) - Maybe you can end the spinner at 00:21:534 so the players might have time to click 00:22:201 (1) .
00:32:534 (3) - Move the circle to x:332 y:188 for a perfect blanket.
00:52:201 (5) - Maybe a new combo here and remove the new combo to 00:53:201 (1) and a new combo to 00:53:534 (2) .
01:26:201 (1) - Move the little square on the slider's body to x:233 y:251, and the last little square on the tail (the end of the slider) to x:152 y:213 so 01:27:534 (3) could fit to the curve.
01:39:534 (5) - Add a new combo and remove the new combo to 01:40:534 (1) .
01:49:201 (3) - Move the second (2nd) little square to x:314 y:255.

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3) - Stack the head of the slider with 00:28:534 (4) .
00:46:867 (3) - Move the slider to one grid to the left.
01:24:201 (3) - Move the last little square on the tail of the slider to x:188 y:144.

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) .
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect.
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240.

If you have any question on my mod, you can PM me. Good Luck.

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-09T03:20:45+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
fixed

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) . Sound Channel changed here, so I use NC, no change
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect. fixed, because the slider is copyed from 00:56:867 (1) - , make a little change to the two sliders
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240. move to x:276, y:225 instead

thanks!

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2013-10-09T13:20:32+00:00

早灣 >w<
M4M.

"re" 意思是 "remove"
黑色只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色是建議改掉
紅色是unrankable

[general]

對00:22:201 - 這個點的kiai time來說.. 能不能告訴我他的作用在哪裡... 我聽到一些點跟這裡音相同可是卻沒kiai time, 那不如把他移到00:24:867 - 副歌開始更合適...不是嘛?

[Normal]

無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:201 -
00:38:534 -
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
00:19:534 (1,1) - 對於一首高bpm的歌... spinner隔了一次1/1就出現了note, 對newbie來講困難些(以Normal來說)

試試看這樣的節奏吧, 可以讓這邊簡單些, 不必在Normal裡把節奏擺得這麼緊密, 如果general沒改請看這句劃線的-->~~但如果你改了這個... 這裡的kiai time就要砍掉了~~
00:26:534 (4) - 雖然不知道你是不是故意的... 在這slider的開頭和結尾加個clap. 因為後面也找到一些..類似的, 把他們總歸類在這
關於一些可以加clap的slider
00:30:534 (1) -
00:44:201 (2,3) -
01:46:535 (3) -
01:48:201 (2,3) -
01:51:868 (3) -
01:54:535 (3) -
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - ...這邊打起來沒有feel, 平平淡淡的.. 在這三個slider的開頭都加finish, 比較不乏味
00:41:201 - ~ 00:45:867 - 這裡跟前面相同的節奏or音...為甚麼音量比前面低了20%... 如果要改回60%直接刪掉就好, 要不然會變成多餘的綠線
00:46:201 - 試試30%的音量吧... 這裡到下一個綠線地方以前有些吵... 這裡聽起來就是要平緩點的..為甚麼音量比前面副歌還高..lol
00:46:201 - ~ 01:07:367 - ...我還是吐槽一下NC有點亂, 倘若要改就全改噢.. 別只改一個~ 於是開始:
00:49:201 (6,1) - , 00:51:867 (4,1) - , 00:58:867 (1,2) - , 01:00:867 (1,3) - , 交換NC ; 00:54:534 (3) - NC ; 01:02:867 (1) - re NC
01:28:534 (4) - 加個clap, 聽起來比現在沒音效還適合
01:39:534 (5,1) - 交換NC ... 這邊怎麼不是跟01:28:867 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡一樣
01:55:534 - 你為甚麼要放棄治療...哎不對! 你為甚麼要放棄音量... 這邊改成N:C1然後音量調成30%都比現在這個靜音好太多了.. 改了之後記得在01:56:367 (2,4) - (2)的開頭跟(4)加上clap

...要記得你copy的難度的綠線設置,改的時候沒有用的就刪掉, 還有NC規律要注意一些~ Normal節奏可以再放鬆點 :3

[Hard]

無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
01:34:201 -
01:40:701 -
01:42:201 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
00:10:867 (5) - 不覺得這slider怪怪的嘛... 結尾不是該在00:11:201 - ?
00:35:867 (4,1) - 交換NC, 這裡是一個音的定點...所以我想應該NC在這, 然後00:36:867 (3) - NC, 比較好讀圖
00:43:534 (5,1) - 交換NC, 不覺得音樂是在00:43:534 - 切換的嘛~. 01:04:534 (1,2) - , 01:05:534 (1,4) - 也是
01:55:534 - 同Normal

排列可以在美觀點...~~不知為甚麼我看出你這Hard是在趕完成度的狀態下做出來的...沒梗的話就休息, 不需像個無頭的猛放拍子..~~

[Insane]

無用的綠線:
綠線
00:41:201 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
00:12:367 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀出他的位置, 因為被00:11:534 (1) - 遮擋了
00:56:534 (1) - ...我大概知道你NC的意義.. 但總覺得很多餘, re NC吧
00:58:867 (7) - , 01:01:534 (7) - , 01:04:201 (3) - WTF! 開頭的finish你聽起來不感覺很奇怪?! 刪掉改成whistle...如果不想改, 請降低音量... 這麼大聲會起爭議的...
01:10:201 (9) - NC please..., 你這個anti-jump沒有任何提醒就出現了... 起碼NC來提醒player
01:20:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得改成這樣,簡單又順手...flow不會出現問題...
img
. 01:21:867 (1,2,3,4) - 也是
01:55:534 - 同Normal

大致上的問題是...flow跟排列美觀度, flow就是你的流暢感覺, 通常我都會試打, 看哪裡手移動時卡卡的, 那我會認定為flow有問題

[Yuki]

Unsnapped green line
green line
00:22:228 -
01:59:199 -
01:59:532 -
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果..
01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是

整體來說還不錯!

大致上就這些~
給小船:
對一個剛開始做譜的來說! 算不錯了~ 別看我這樣講而難過 ;w;
支持一個star!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-10T03:29:33+00:00

sheela901

sheela901 wrote:
[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
fixed
The combo colors in [Yuki] are inconsistent (not the same) as the others which it has to be is:
Combo1 : 192,192,192 
Combo2 : 128,255,255 
Combo3 : 18,124,255 
Combo4 : 128,204,51
fixed

[Normal]
00:05:867 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:06:201 (2) . It'll sound better. fixed
00:10:534 (1) - Same as 00:05:867 (1) . Remove the new combo and add it to 00:11:534 (2) . fixed
00:18:867 (1) - Maybe you can end the spinner at 00:21:534 so the players might have time to click 00:22:201 (1) . fixed
00:32:534 (3) - Move the circle to x:332 y:188 for a perfect blanket. fixed
00:52:201 (5) - Maybe a new combo here and remove the new combo to 00:53:201 (1) and a new combo to 00:53:534 (2) . fixed
01:26:201 (1) - Move the little square on the slider's body to x:233 y:251, and the last little square on the tail (the end of the slider) to x:152 y:213 so 01:27:534 (3) could fit to the curve. fixed
01:39:534 (5) - Add a new combo and remove the new combo to 01:40:534 (1) . fixed
01:49:201 (3) - Move the second (2nd) little square to x:314 y:255. fixed

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3) - Stack the head of the slider with 00:28:534 (4) . fixed
00:46:867 (3) - Move the slider to one grid to the left. fixed
01:24:201 (3) - Move the last little square on the tail of the slider to x:188 y:144. fixed

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) .
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect.
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240.

If you have any question on my mod, you can PM me. okGood Luck.fixed Thanks sheela901

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-10T08:36:14+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-10T04:31:58+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Yuki]
Unsnapped green line
green line
00:22:228 - 这个不改了这里的绿线就是停掉kiai喷泉效果的作用
01:59:199 - fixed
01:59:532 - fixed
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果.. 我打起来觉得没有不舒服0 0 ，不改惹
01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是有人说过，有NC就能读，不NC不能读，只能说明这个player还不够pro =。=所以这个地方我是不会改的~
整體來說還不錯![/notice]

Thanks for modding~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-10T09:32:32+00:00

Loneight wrote:
早灣 >w< 早喔：）
M4M.

"re" 意思是 "remove"
黑色只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色是建議改掉
紅色是unrankable
[general]
對00:22:201 - 這個點的kiai time來說.. 能不能告訴我他的作用在哪裡... 我聽到一些點跟這裡音相同可是卻沒kiai time, 那不如把他移到00:24:867 - 副歌開始更合適...不是嘛?
　　作用嘛。。凸顯效果？。。也不太對。。不過我已經取消了。但副歌就沒+了

[Normal]
無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:201 -
00:38:534 -
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
fixed
00:19:534 (1,1) - 對於一首高bpm的歌... spinner隔了一次1/1就出現了note, 對newbie來講困難些(以Normal來說)

試試看這樣的節奏吧, 可以讓這邊簡單些, 不必在Normal裡把節奏擺得這麼緊密, 如果general沒改請看這句劃線的-->~~但如果你改了這個... 這裡的kiai time就要砍掉了~~ fixed
00:26:534 (4) - 雖然不知道你是不是故意的... 在這slider的開頭和結尾加個clap. 因為後面也找到一些..類似的, 把他們總歸類在這
關於一些可以加clap的slider
00:30:534 (1) -
00:44:201 (2,3) -
01:46:535 (3) -
01:48:201 (2,3) -
01:51:868 (3) -
01:54:535 (3) -
fixed
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - ...這邊打起來沒有feel, 平平淡淡的.. 在這三個slider的開頭都加finish, 比較不乏味 fixed已加
00:41:201 - ~ 00:45:867 - 這裡跟前面相同的節奏or音...為甚麼音量比前面低了20%... 如果要改回60%直接刪掉就好, 要不然會變成多餘的綠線 fixed 阿沒注意到..
00:46:201 - 試試30%的音量吧... 這裡到下一個綠線地方以前有些吵... 這裡聽起來就是要平緩點的..為甚麼音量比前面副歌還高..lol fixed
00:46:201 - ~ 01:07:367 - ...我還是吐槽一下NC有點亂, 倘若要改就全改噢.. 別只改一個~ 於是開始:
00:49:201 (6,1) - , 00:51:867 (4,1) - , 00:58:867 (1,2) - , 01:00:867 (1,3) - , 交換NC ; 00:54:534 (3) - NC ; 01:02:867 (1) - re NCfixed
01:28:534 (4) - 加個clap, 聽起來比現在沒音效還適合 fixed
01:39:534 (5,1) - 交換NC ... 這邊怎麼不是跟01:28:867 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡一樣 fixed
01:55:534 - 你為甚麼要放棄治療...哎不對! 你為甚麼要放棄音量... 這邊改成N:C1然後音量調成30%都比現在這個靜音好太多了.. 改了之後記得在01:56:367 (2,4) - (2)的開頭跟(4)加上clap
fixed
...要記得你copy的難度的綠線設置,改的時候沒有用的就刪掉, 還有NC規律要注意一些~ Normal節奏可以再放鬆點 :3 ok 我會再鬆一點

[Hard]
無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
01:34:201 -
01:40:701 -
01:42:201 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
fixed
00:10:867 (5) - 不覺得這slider怪怪的嘛... 結尾不是該在00:11:201 - ? fixed..咦?怎麼在藍線上..
00:35:867 (4,1) - 交換NC, 這裡是一個音的定點...所以我想應該NC在這, 然後00:36:867 (3) - NC, 比較好讀圖 fixed
00:43:534 (5,1) - 交換NC, 不覺得音樂是在00:43:534 - 切換的嘛~. 01:04:534 (1,2) - , 01:05:534 (1,4) - 也是 fixed
01:55:534 - 同Normal
fixed
排列可以在美觀點...~~不知為甚麼我看出你這Hard是在趕完成度的狀態下做出來的...沒梗的話就休息, 不需像個無頭的猛放拍子..~~
Ok，唔..也沒用趕的..有一邊想一邊做圖但做起來不知道為啥就怪怪得然後不符合人家的想法被噴一堆orz
[Insane]
無用的綠線:
綠線
00:41:201 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
fixed 順便說一句:感謝清理
00:12:367 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀出他的位置, 因為被00:11:534 (1) - 遮擋了 fixed
00:56:534 (1) - ...我大概知道你NC的意義.. 但總覺得很多餘, re NC吧 fixed
00:58:867 (7) - , 01:01:534 (7) - , 01:04:201 (3) - WTF! 開頭的finish你聽起來不感覺很奇怪?! 刪掉改成whistle...如果不想改, 請降低音量... 這麼大聲會起爭議的... fixed..的確蠻奇怪的..我竟然沒注意到這邊..orz (尷尬改成whistle了
01:10:201 (9) - NC please..., 你這個anti-jump沒有任何提醒就出現了... 起碼NC來提醒player fixed 改成重疊
01:20:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得改成這樣,簡單又順手...flow不會出現問題...
img
. 01:21:867 (1,2,3,4) - 也是 fixed 咦? 剛試滑一下真的還蠻順原來也可以這樣擺我怎沒想到orz
01:55:534 - 同Normal
fixed
大致上的問題是...flow跟排列美觀度, flow就是你的流暢感覺, 通常我都會試打, 看哪裡手移動時卡卡的, 那我會認定為flow有問題
Ok , 那我做一段會稍微test一下。
[Yuki]
Unsnapped green line
green line
00:22:228 -
01:59:199 -
01:59:532 -
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果..
01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是
整體來說還不錯!
大致上就這些~
給小船:
對一個剛開始做譜的來說! 算不錯了~ 別看我這樣講而難過 ;w; 恩，謝謝飛翔會盡所能的努力
支持一個star!謝謝QQ"

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-10-11T09:04:40+00:00

Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？

SPOILER

00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?

SPOILER

01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance

SPOILER

01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?

SPOILER

01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance

SPOILER

01:30:534 (3) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point

[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane?
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry

I hope that you will help
good luck!

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-11T14:14:33+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？ I think that's not hard ;w;
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point ok
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1) same
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point ehhh. nope
00:39:201 (5) - how about this? sry
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider? ok
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm? sure
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern? it's square ><
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point ok
01:34:201 (1) - ^ ok
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful good
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance enn.nope
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point good idea
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this? that's not mistake :>
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish ok

thanks for modding

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-10-12T04:47:50+00:00

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]

Title: "shining grace"
tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?

[Normal]

00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
01:17:534- add a note?
01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?

[Hard]

00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
00:36:701- add a note
01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)

[Insane]

01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume

[Yuki]

01:42:034- add a note
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete

~Good Luck~

quantum-rose

quantum-rose 2013-10-12T05:41:28+00:00

PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-12T06:00:28+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[General]
Title: "shining grace" https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66372 This map is ranked, so no need to change the title.

[Yuki]
01:42:034- add a note nope, there is no sound
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete I hear there is no sound, so deleted

quantum-rose wrote:
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致 ok我改了
其餘完美

thanks for moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddding

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2013-10-12T10:05:56+00:00

[general]
没啥大问题~~你个神马坡~~
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话

SPOILER

00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开

就是这样加油

Spencers

98 posts

Joined August 2012

Spencers 2013-10-12T10:23:34+00:00

As your pm request

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.

[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR，HP，OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的，建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好，而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊，不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到　408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧

01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢

--------------------------------------------------------
That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久

　太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议..

原谅我不太会MOD音效。

不管怎么样，图不错。
Hope this helps

祝Rank~!

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-12T10:59:17+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
[general]

[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开 nope
01:20:701 (4) - finish 加了觉得难听
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效我觉得不用啊._.
00:45:534 (2) - finish 这个可以

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉这个让小船看-。-

_Kaiser wrote:
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、好吧 fixed
00:20:701 (5) - Finish 我觉得这个不用加，不过我觉得加在spin上不错
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧这个不改惹，除非BAT要求改=.=
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊.. 哪里有∑( ° △ °|||)
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G 故意的(oﾟωﾟo)
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好 fixed
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样其实是一样的0.0
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些还不圆滑么？我是复制ctrl+h,复制ctrl+j的……;w;
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢

--------------------------------------------------------
To _Kaiser：我的hard现在完成大概1分半了，再稍微等等撒~

Thanks for modiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing~

bokito

76 posts

Joined July 2010

bokito 2013-10-12T12:45:36+00:00

[General]

audio leadin不同统一下

[Insane]

00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图我建议往下拉一点
00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑重新拉下
00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56
01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感

[Hard]

01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观修改下
00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试

[Yuki]

00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
01:06:201 (1) - nc
01:06:534 (1) - ^

[Normal]
X

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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-12T14:06:48+00:00

Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:
Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point

[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry
I hope that you will help
good luck!

Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
Title: "shining grace"
tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
01:17:534- add a note?
01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
00:36:701- add a note
01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
01:42:034- add a note
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~

Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect

quantum-rose

quantum-rose wrote:
PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美

Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose

bokito

bokito wrote:
[General]
audio leadin不同统一下
[Insane]
00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图我建议往下拉一点
00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑重新拉下
00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观修改下
00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
01:06:201 (1) - nc
01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
X

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謝謝bokito 全修復了不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到..

_Kaiser

_Kaiser wrote:
As your pm request

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.

[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR，HP，OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的，建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好，而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊，不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到　408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢

--------------------------------------------------------
That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久　太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
不管怎么样，图不错。
Hope this helps
祝Rank~!

謝謝_Kaiser 一些修復了

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-13T05:13:59+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-12T14:09:46+00:00

bokito wrote:
[General]
audio leadin不同统一下
@smallboat

[Yuki]
00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^ 好，和后面统一
01:06:201 (1) - nc 妥
01:06:534 (1) - ^ 妥

ttttttttttttttttthanks fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffor mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoding

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-10-12T21:26:05+00:00

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm?

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-13T01:47:57+00:00

Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:
Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point

[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry
I hope that you will help
good luck!

Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
Title: "shining grace"
tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
01:17:534- add a note?
01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
00:36:701- add a note
01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
01:42:034- add a note
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~

Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect

quantum-rose

quantum-rose wrote:
PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美

Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose

bokito

bokito wrote:
[General]
audio leadin不同统一下
[Insane]
00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图我建议往下拉一点
00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑重新拉下
00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观修改下
00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
01:06:201 (1) - nc
01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
X

----------

謝謝bokito 全修復了不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到..

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:
[general]
没啥大问题~~你个神马坡~~
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话
SPOILER
00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开

就是这样加油

謝謝ZZHBOY 有些修復了

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm? GOOD !

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867 GOOD !
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^

Almost all fixed , thanks 10crystalmask01 Very thank your random mod , wonderful !

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-13T11:10:23+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

James2250

osu! Alumni

4,059 posts

Joined July 2008

James2250 2013-10-13T03:27:31+00:00

Modding as requested, will have to be in English though

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely.

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style)
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before?
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-10-13T03:53:01+00:00

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.

[Insane]

00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
01:39:534 (4) - ^
01:57:034 (7) - like this?

clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
for example,
01:23:867 -
01:24:534 -
01:25:201 -
01:25:867 -
01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff)

but well done. nice diff.

[Yuki]

00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]

00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ?
00:20:867 (1) - add finish
00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet.

[Normal]

00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - )

Good luck

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-13T04:04:36+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.[/notice]

ALL FIXED, THANKS

James2250 wrote:
[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music Rhythm start here so I add it.
OTHERS ALL FIXED,THANKS~
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.

Guy wrote:
[Yuki]
00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff. THANK YOU~ALL FIXED~

Aeonian Sonder

974 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-13T23:08:30+00:00

[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds?
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2013-10-14T03:52:58+00:00

Heya!

Forgive me if I butcher any of my Chinese, haven't typed anything serious for a while. From PM request (for diffs Hard-Yuki).

[Hard]

用tick rate 2感觉的好一些,特别是在1/2上开始的slider (e.g. [Hard] 00:04:701 (5))。

01:09:701 - 加个circle? 这样flow的好一点。
01:41:534 (3,1) - 3最好不要完全盖住1的tail, 有的skin会看不出来有没有repeat.
01:50:201 (3) - 01:47:534里没有circle,所以我觉得这里也应该没有。
01:55:534 (1) - 用这里当head,改成1/1的slider?

玩的不错，跟音乐挺紧。

[Insane]

AR9觉的有点快,特别是开头的那个部分。用AR8试试？

00:24:034 (1) - circle比slider好一点。
00:31:867 (8) - 用4个circle,或者减去一个repeat & 把9放的远一点。
00:42:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow有点迷糊。改改位置？
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - 4-5的jump不是很自然。
01:20:867 (1) - 这里音乐比较轻,这些jump的fit不是很好
01:23:534 (1) - 这里可以加几个jump!

没有大问题，但是跟hard的难度差别有点高。

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。
这里AR9也是有点快。

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump?
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了

玩不了这个map，太难了XD

总共来说都不错, star~

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-14T05:02:41+00:00

-APXH wrote:
[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

Kytoxid wrote:
[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。这是2nd insane，同样是insane =.=而且不是一个作者啊！
这里AR9也是有点快。 ar8完全不能玩

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。不乱，就是往返梗，最后一个改个方向坑人一把
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了低么0 0
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump? 滑条判定松，其实很容易接上
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了 :>

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-14T12:32:55+00:00

James2250

James2250 wrote:
Modding as requested, will have to be in English though OKAY, Thanks "LINK"!

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely. OKAY

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though. Well , I reduce HP-1, and have a little break.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change fixed
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style) fixed
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics fixed
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it fixed
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before? fixed
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it fixed
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.Okay, I try it!

Thanks James2250 mod my map in free time !

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.
fixed

[Insane]
00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
01:39:534 (4) - ^
01:57:034 (7) - like this?

clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
for example,
01:23:867 -
01:24:534 -
01:25:201 -
01:25:867 -
01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff) Okay

but well done. nice diff.Thanks Guy
Almost fixed

[Yuki]
00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]
00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ? fixed
00:20:867 (1) - add finish fixed
00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet. fixed

[Normal]
00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - ) fixed
Good luck

Thanks Guy ! Good Luck ,too.

-APXH

-APXH wrote:
[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds? Good idea , I fixed it!
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ Nothing,nevermind!

Thanks -APXH mod !

riffy

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riffy 2013-10-14T14:31:34+00:00

Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]

The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.

[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY

Aeonian Sonder

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Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-14T16:31:03+00:00

[General for every difficulty except for guest]
00:05:867 - I don't think that a volume increase is need here. The sound just switches sides that's it.

[Yuki]
Since I didn't have time last time. I forgot to put in this comment:
There's alot of mapping to uses the location of previous combos, which I call in my terms "History Mapping" or "Referencing"

00:57:534 (3) - Resnap
00:58:201 (1,2) - Not a good idea to put these two there just after the slider ended
00:58:534 (3) - Resnap
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - Place these circles more apart. It's confusing

[Insane]
00:56:887 - Resnap timing point
01:50:201 to 01:50:451 - You should do the same thing with the reduced volume with every hitsounds that I asked you to do in the first mod. I forgot to mention that.

[Hard]
AR is a bit slow
01:40:701 (3) - Resnap
01:41:534 (3) - Same as above
01:53:201 (1) - Sudden new combo

[Normal]
Can't really say much since I not one who specializes in Easy maps. I specialize in Insane maps...
01:23:534 (1) - Both ends have clap on them
01:58:034 (5) - Might as well most it up since they're all equal distance

Aeonian Sonder

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Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-14T16:33:26+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
-APXH wrote:
[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

My idea is that you should do 00:22:201 (1,2,3) once, then reflect it. Or something like it. Read my newest mod to read my I'm saying thing.

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-14T17:05:48+00:00

-APXH wrote:
[Yuki]
Since I didn't have time last time. I forgot to put in this comment:
There's alot of mapping to uses the location of previous combos, which I call in my terms "History Mapping" or "Referencing"

00:57:534 (3) - Resnap Where unsnaped?
00:58:201 (1,2) - Not a good idea to put these two there just after the slider ended but fun
00:58:534 (3) - Resnap Where unsnaped as above? If you just mean that I should stack prefectly, that I fixed.
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - Place these circles more apart. It's confusing

-APXH wrote:
My idea is that you should do 00:22:201 (1,2,3) once, then reflect it. Or something like it. Read my newest mod to read my I'm saying thing.

My english is poor so that I can't get what you really want me to fix, but use ctrl+c and ctrl+v and stack notes under the slider(overlap) in my map is my style(you call history mapping?). And I want people to read my maps carefully when they're playing my map. If you can read the map carefully that 01:07:534 (1,2,3) - won't confuse you.

This is an insane map. Previous modder such as quantum-rose and _Kaiser, and Fycho plays my map, they all thinks that's fun, they are glad to play it. That's just what I want. I want to make players happy to play my map.

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2013-10-15T04:32:10+00:00

hihi

[Insane]
00:00:867 - 00:11:534 - lighten this whole section by deleting some circles in red tick. That would give you a soft intro, just like the song
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - I think this is the distance you should have use in the rest of the map, except this part: 00:46:201 -00:56:534 - which is soft, and the distance you use fits well.
If you really decide to change the distance as i suggested, keep in mind the jumps you place are fine, and you should keep them.

[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ?
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large

[Hard]
01:53:534 (1) - this is too close to prev circle, check timeline

[Normal]
Easier diff needs less than 3.00 difficulty stars, and this have 3.21, try to lighten it a bit, or add an EASY.
there s no technical problems tho

Good luck

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-15T04:51:16+00:00

Lizbeth wrote:
[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle before the spin, I follow the vocal. There is no vocal so I don't add circle :>
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ? I think it's fine and fun :>
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing (/・ω・＼)Really?
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider I add NC on white line except for some special cases.

Lizbeth wrote:
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large

From http://news.ppy.sh/post/61334266941/mapping-analysis-1-flow
However, the last end of the slider does not need to be hit properly and has an entire area in which it can be left while still having a 300:

I have tested my map and I find it not hard to get 300, so no change

no changes, thanks for modding~

smallboat

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Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-15T06:31:26+00:00

James2250

James2250 wrote:
Modding as requested, will have to be in English though OKAY, Thanks "LINK"!

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely. OKAY

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though. Well , I reduce HP-1, and have a little break.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change fixed
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style) fixed
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics fixed
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it fixed
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before? fixed
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it fixed
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.Okay, I try it!

Thanks James2250 mod my map in free time !

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.
fixed

[Insane]
00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
01:39:534 (4) - ^
01:57:034 (7) - like this?

clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
for example,
01:23:867 -
01:24:534 -
01:25:201 -
01:25:867 -
01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff) Okay

but well done. nice diff.Thanks Guy
Almost fixed

[Yuki]
00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]
00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ? fixed
00:20:867 (1) - add finish fixed
00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet. fixed

[Normal]
00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - ) fixed
Good luck

Thanks Guy ! Good Luck ,too.

-APXH

-APXH wrote:
[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds? Good idea , I fixed it!
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ Nothing,nevermind!

Thanks -APXH mod !

Kytoxid

Kytoxid wrote:
Heya! Forgive me if I butcher any of my Chinese, haven't typed anything serious for a while. From PM request (for diffs Hard-Yuki). 沒事都看得懂! :)

[Hard]

用tick rate 2感觉的好一些,特别是在1/2上开始的slider (e.g. [Hard] 00:04:701 (5))。2喔考慮下這個1跟2會有爭議

01:09:701 - 加个circle? 这样flow的好一点。好
01:41:534 (3,1) - 3最好不要完全盖住1的tail, 有的skin会看不出来有没有repeat. 好
01:50:201 (3) - 01:47:534里没有circle,所以我觉得这里也应该没有。好
01:55:534 (1) - 用这里当head,改成1/1的slider? 不錯

玩的不错，跟音乐挺紧。謝

[Insane]

AR9觉的有点快,特别是开头的那个部分。用AR8试试？我考慮但有一些人說要用9

00:24:034 (1) - circle比slider好一点。好
00:31:867 (8) - 用4个circle,或者减去一个repeat & 把9放的远一点。好是把9放遠了
00:42:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow有点迷糊。改改位置？好
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - 4-5的jump不是很自然。好
01:20:867 (1) - 这里音乐比较轻,这些jump的fit不是很好考慮下因為有人這邊能FC
01:23:534 (1) - 这里可以加几个jump! 好不錯

没有大问题，但是跟hard的难度差别有点高。好

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。
这里AR9也是有点快。

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump?
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了

玩不了这个map，太难了XD

总共来说都不错, star~

謝謝小K!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-10-15T14:45:22+00:00

[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC
01:28:201 - Finish
01:28:534 (5) - ^
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86
01:38:867 - Finish
01:39:201 - ^

[Insane]
Check AIMod
00:12:201 (2) - NC 00:12:367 (1) - remove nc
00:18:034 (7) - 在00:18:534 - 完

00:45:867 (1) - 可以不NC
01:07:201 (2) - ctrl+G

[Normal]
00:19:534 - 至00:21:868 - 加個SPINNER

其餘不太找到(累了~

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-10-15T15:21:38+00:00

[Insane]
00:11:534 (1) -
可以加个FIN
00:13:367 (1) - 拆成1/2+单点
00:26:867 (3) - ctrl+g
00:35:034 (1) - 去掉一个折返加一个单点在 336,124看看
00:38:034 (4) - 我建议做成1/1 0.5速度滑条滑条尾消音感觉不错
00:49:367 加个NOTE？
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议摆串 overmap 3连就差不多了太多感觉不好
01:30:534 (7,8) - 先滑条再单点
01:47:367 (5) - 同00:38:034 (4)
这次作图好多了
[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧

挑不出什么了射个星好了
完成度挺好的可以RANK了

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-15T16:08:00+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加加了clap觉得好吵，不加惹
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著 ok
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC 想想还是用吧=///=
01:28:201 - Finish ok
01:28:534 (5) - ^ 我觉得不需要
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86 还是选了stack 01:35:534 (1) - 的头
01:38:867 - Finish ok
01:39:201 - ^ 同上

sjoy wrote:
[Insane]

[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点好
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg 可
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧不干

thanks for modding

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2013-10-16T03:44:11+00:00

A somewhat short irc mod....

SPOILER

2013-10-15 19:34 smallboat: Hello,blissfulyyoshi
2013-10-15 19:34 blissfulyoshi: HAI
2013-10-15 19:35 smallboat: Hello..I think my map's quality is not enough, but I can't figure out what the question is, could you give me a pointing?
2013-10-15 19:35 blissfulyoshi: okay sure
2013-10-15 19:35 blissfulyoshi: link
2013-10-15 19:36 smallboat: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115246 Thanks , bliss~
2013-10-15 19:37 blissfulyoshi: dling
2013-10-15 19:37 smallboat: @@?
2013-10-15 19:37 blissfulyoshi: any diff in particular?
2013-10-15 19:39 smallboat: well, Hard Insane Yuki 's diff only.
2013-10-15 19:39 smallboat: three diff
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 19:40 smallboat: THANKS!
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: why are you keeping messy overlaps like 00:02:034 (3,1) -
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: insane diff right now
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: 00:04:534 (3,1) - ^
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: well , think a pattern (?
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: ><"
2013-10-15 19:41 blissfulyoshi: I don't even care if it has no pattern
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: okay~
2013-10-15 19:41 blissfulyoshi: just remove teh overlaps
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: I will revise .
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: okay^^
2013-10-15 19:43 blissfulyoshi: also to fit the super soft intro I would make decrease teh sv a bit more for notes before 00:05:867 (1) -
2013-10-15 19:43 00:11:534 (1) - *
2013-10-15 19:43 blissfulyoshi: that is probably a better point
2013-10-15 19:44 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: more of a pet peeve, but why is 00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - so much harder than the notes imeediately following it
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: it is so cruel to do this stuff right after a slow section and a spinner imo
2013-10-15 19:44 smallboat: sure?
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: that is what I think
2013-10-15 19:45 blissfulyoshi: up to you
2013-10-15 19:45 blissfulyoshi: you are the mapper
2013-10-15 19:45 smallboat: okay lol
2013-10-15 19:46 smallboat: poor ENGLISH ,sorry>_<
2013-10-15 19:48 smallboat: have any problem?
2013-10-15 19:53 blissfulyoshi: ummm got caught in a phone call
2013-10-15 19:53 blissfulyoshi: give me a bit
2013-10-15 19:54 smallboat: ok , nevermind~
2013-10-15 19:56 smallboat: your pointing is useful !
2013-10-15 19:59 smallboat: Can you write a bit extra suggestion in my map forum?
2013-10-15 19:59 blissfulyoshi: sure
2013-10-15 20:00 smallboat: okay,tks~
2013-10-15 20:02 smallboat: How many quality in my map ?
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: sry finally got off the phone
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: very long phone call
2013-10-15 20:06 smallboat: oh no,nevermind . haha^^
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: let me at lest play all of insane
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: and I'll tell you
2013-10-15 20:07 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: 01:30:867 (8,1,2) - why is there an antijump here
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: 01:07:534 (1,2,3) - also, switching to a softer section == jumps??????/
2013-10-15 20:08 smallboat: THINK A pattern?
2013-10-15 20:08 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: increase spacing
2013-10-15 20:09 smallboat: ah sorry , I have no notice (embarrass ><
2013-10-15 20:09 blissfulyoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040323 ?
2013-10-15 20:10 smallboat: stack 3 times?
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: 01:44:867 (2,1) - another questionable antijump
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: ummm you had that stack there originally
2013-10-15 20:10 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: I don't care what you do with teh stack
2013-10-15 20:11 blissfulyoshi: I only rearranged 1 and 2 to have a flow that feels better to me
2013-10-15 20:11 smallboat: okay @_@
2013-10-15 20:12 blissfulyoshi: for the most part insane was okay, but some of your jumps/antijumps felt a bit awkward
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: OK, I"m not good at " jump" X ( "
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: forgot to mention 01:20:867 (1,2,3,4) - soft area === jumps again???/
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: >_<SOR
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: your choruses were pretty good
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: besides those awkward jumps
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: so no worreis
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: OKAY
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: oh yeah, what is with teh inconsistent slow downs
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: 00:38:034 (1) - is slow
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: 00:40:534 (7) - is fast
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: well
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: hearing it again
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: I geuss it makes sense
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: so never mind me
2013-10-15 20:15 smallboat:

2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: HAVE LIISTENED
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: LISTEN ><
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: so hard or Yuki next?
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: guess yuki
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: Yuki is GD
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:17 blissfulyoshi: so going to hard
2013-10-15 20:17 smallboat: okay, hard first
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: 00:19:534 (3) - this slider is ugly
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: T_T
2013-10-15 20:18 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:18 smallboat: true?
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: I am not sure what you are aiming for
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: but that many sharp corners does not look good
2013-10-15 20:19 smallboat: sorry , some sliders no copy.
2013-10-15 20:19 smallboat: >_<
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: 01:51:534 (3,4) - why teh rnadom overlap
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: but this hard diff is decent
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: mostly on the safe side, but nothing too wrong about it
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: okay lol
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: 01:56:034 (2,4) - just wondering, why do you have that random bump in teh beginnign of these sliders
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: it looks slihgtly weird
2013-10-15 20:22 smallboat: sorry @@
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: oh well
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: your choice
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: anything you want me to look at?
2013-10-15 20:22 smallboat: wii fix
2013-10-15 20:23 smallboat: well, yuki diff ? I can chat problem for him.
2013-10-15 20:23 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:23 blissfulyoshi: if you want
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: ok
2013-10-15 20:25 blissfulyoshi: wow this diff has a bunch of hard patterns
2013-10-15 20:25 blissfulyoshi: xD
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: XD
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: ha
2013-10-15 20:26 blissfulyoshi: 00:11:201 (3,1) - this jump is a bit large for that part of the song.....
2013-10-15 20:26 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:26 smallboat: ok I'll tell him
2013-10-15 20:27 blissfulyoshi: 00:14:201 (5,1) and 00:15:368 (2,4) - overlaps here don't look that great
2013-10-15 20:27 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:28 blissfulyoshi: 00:28:201 (3,4,1) - why is there a stack here? It doesn't seem to fit eh song that well
2013-10-15 20:28 blissfulyoshi: 00:48:534 (3,1) - anotehr overlap T_T
2013-10-15 20:29 smallboat: 0.0
2013-10-15 20:29 smallboat: okay

2013-10-15 20:30 blissfulyoshi: 01:05:868 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is evil T_T
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: wow
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: as Big Black(?
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:30 blissfulyoshi: big black is jsut silly
2013-10-15 20:31 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:31 smallboat: No mankind to play it...
2013-10-15 20:31 blissfulyoshi: okay so only pattern I can't do in this map is that one I mentioned above
2013-10-15 20:31 blissfulyoshi: chorus is easy in comparison
2013-10-15 20:32 smallboat: okay:)
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: 01:33:868 (6,7,8,9,1) - I would use distance snap on this stream to give it a sense of speeding up
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: and why is the chorus so devoid of jumps
2013-10-15 20:32 smallboat: no stack?
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: yeah
2013-10-15 20:33 blissfulyoshi: 01:47:034 (2,3) - do you seriously want to be this evil, I barely did it by sightreading
2013-10-15 20:33 smallboat: Well I think you should put these recommendations in the forum, he can reply for you

2013-10-15 20:33 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:34 blissfulyoshi: 01:49:701 (2,3) - I guess I got used to it by now
2013-10-15 20:34 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:34 blissfulyoshi: well that is the end of my mod for his diff
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: okay jsut did that stupid poattern......
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: gah
2013-10-15 20:35 smallboat: 0.0~
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: ]/savelog
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: ...
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: T_T
2013-10-15 20:36 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:36 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:37 smallboat: Thanks bliss take the time to make recommendations
2013-10-15 20:38 smallboat: >_<~
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: lol yw
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: I am pretty sure you can get it ranked soon
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: just have someone else look over insane
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: I felt that was the weakest diff
2013-10-15 20:38 smallboat: sure? lol
2013-10-15 20:39 smallboat: Well, some left nazi problem ?>_<
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: probably some
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: too lazy to ask to fix it right now
2013-10-15 20:40 smallboat: >_<ok
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: someone else can do those
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: xD
2013-10-15 20:40 smallboat: XD
2013-10-15 20:41 smallboat: Okay, I will fix it soon in this day !
2013-10-15 20:41 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:41 blissfulyoshi: mind if I post log?
2013-10-15 20:42 smallboat: okay

2013-10-15 20:43 blissfulyoshi: thx

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-16T04:09:48+00:00

From blissfulyoshi's irc mod

00:11:201 (3,1) - this jump is a bit large for that part of the song.....move a little
01:33:868 (6,7,8,9,1) - I would use distance snap on this stream to give it a sense of speeding up good idea I like it

other no change
I like overlap in my insane diff lol

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

hoLysoup 2013-10-16T04:55:50+00:00

hihi~
答應的mod : )
以下都是建議~

[Insane]
00:09:367 (4) - 嗯嗯~ 可能把這個去掉, 然後在00:08:867 (3) 這裡加個repeat? 總覺得音樂理沒有(4)這個beat, 所以可能比較合一點
00:32:701 - 之前妳說這裡會不會不合適. 我的想法是在00:32:701 這裡加個beat. 因為主要這一段的1/2節奏, 最明顯是從00:32:867開始. 所以這樣可能打起來比較合音樂. 尤其是因為才剛剛打完一大串stream, 突然變成1/2會變得不適.
00:34:534 (7) - 啊對了. 這要不要考慮改成一個長slider? 00:34:534~00:34:867的slider, 可能感覺好一點
00:36:701 - 這裡是不是錯過一個beat了?
00:38:534 (1) - 要不要改成finish?
00:49:534 (3) - 要不要把這個移到00:49:367, 然後在00:49:867加個圈圈? 總覺得這一段的節奏有點變化可能比較好玩
00:59:534 (1) - 忘了加whistle?
00:59:867 (2) - 多加了whistle?
01:06:867 (1) - remove NC
01:07:534 (1) - 加finish
01:08:201 (1) - 頭上忘了clap
01:15:867 (2) - 嗯嗯~ 我覺得這個最好改成一個圈圈+滑條. 比較和節奏, 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4RhBw.jpg
01:30:117 - 這裡錯過一個beat? :>
01:47:367 (5) - NC

[Hard]
00:20:367 (1) - 這應該就不用NC了, 節奏很清楚的
00:24:034 (1) - ^
00:24:867 (1) - 開頭用滑條會不會比較好一點？歌手也是拉長音走, 滑條可能玩起來更合適
01:07:867 (3) - 滑條尾巴錯過了clap + whistle喔
01:12:201 (5) - 頭忘了whistle?
01:23:534 (1) - 這裡也是用滑條開始會不會比較順暢?
01:53:534 (1) - 去掉NC
01:54:201 (5) - 這裡NC
01:56:034 (2) - 噗這slider頭長相是故意的嗎? 哈哈可能有些BAT會鬼叫吧, 我個人倒是很喜歡奇怪的slider長相
01:57:367 (1,2,3) - 要不要把這幾個離01:56:701 (4)遠一點?

[Normal]
啊　對了妳的normal星難度可能太高囉 3.34
00:16:534 (1) - 像是這裡, 節奏來說的話　最佳的擺法就是圈+滑條. 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4Ri7w.jpg
00:20:701 - 我覺得這一段不要有break比較好欸? 像是妳從00:20:701~00:21:867做一個很長的滑條, 全部問題都解決啦. 也和音樂, 也不用break, 而且連著之後的節奏也夠簡單.
00:35:034 (4) - 要不要移到00:35:534? 當然擺飾要變一下, 不過這樣節奏會比較自然一點
01:17:867 (1) - spinner也跟hard一樣, 拉到01:20:701就好. 還可以加一個鼓聲
如果這是最簡單的難度, 星數就太高囉.
建議就把節奏改得更簡單吧~ :>

其實圖不錯!! 多注意一下hitsound~ 主要是每個部份的hitsound, 如果是同一段得話就檢查有沒有一至.
擺法, NC, 節奏這些東西, 妳只要多map, 遲早就會更了解的. 只是時間上的問題
加油加油~!
我沒星可以給妳 :<

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

Joined November 2009

Colin Hou 2013-10-17T14:26:13+00:00

as requested

[General]

title: shining grace (due to http://www.iosysos.com/cd/utahime/

[yuki]

enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs
00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out
01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo
01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here?

[Insane]

01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't make much sense here with a stream, consider keeping things like 01:07:534 (1,2,3), then try remove 01:10:034 (7) for a better effect.
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mostly the same
01:50:451 - did you forget some section here? the volume is too low.
01:55:534 - spacing after here is quite under average. highly suggest you rearrange the patterns.

[Normal]

this diff seems to be mapped to get rid of the star rating
00:34:867 (4,5) - maybe remove?
00:43:534 - make 00:43:867 (1) a slider start here?
01:09:201 - add note?
01:11:867 - ^
1 more slider since 01:57:367 to 01:58:034?

no much comment on Hard

keep up the good working!

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-17T14:42:01+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
[yuki]
enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs ok
00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out fixed
01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo sry I don't want to change it
01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here? good idea~!

thanks for modding
说中文吧0.0

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-18T02:43:40+00:00

-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]
The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.
[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY

Almost fixed,thanks -Bakari- 's mod

Lizbeth

Lizbeth wrote:
hihi hi

[Insane]
00:00:867 - 00:11:534 - lighten this whole section by deleting some circles in red tick. That would give you a soft intro, just like the song
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - I think this is the distance you should have use in the rest of the map, except this part: 00:46:201 -00:56:534 - which is soft, and the distance you use fits well.
If you really decide to change the distance as i suggested, keep in mind the jumps you place are fine, and you should keep them.

[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ?
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large

[Hard]
01:53:534 (1) - this is too close to prev circle, check timeline

[Normal]
Easier diff needs less than 3.00 difficulty stars, and this have 3.21, try to lighten it a bit, or add an EASY.
there s no technical problems tho

Good luck

Almost fixed,thanks Lizbeth 's mod

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC
01:28:201 - Finish
01:28:534 (5) - ^
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86
01:38:867 - Finish
01:39:201 - ^

[Insane]
Check AIMod
00:12:201 (2) - NC 00:12:367 (1) - remove nc fixed
00:18:034 (7) - 在00:18:534 - 完 fixed

00:45:867 (1) - 可以不NC fixed
01:07:201 (2) - ctrl+G fixed

[Normal]
00:19:534 - 至00:21:868 - 加個SPINNER 考慮

其餘不太找到(累了~

謝謝Kawaiwkyik 的mod

sjoy

sjoy wrote:
[Insane]
00:11:534 (1) -
可以加个FIN OK
00:13:367 (1) - 拆成1/2+单点 OK/color]
00:26:867 (3) - ctrl+g
00:35:034 (1) - 去掉一个折返加一个单点在 336,124看看 OK
00:38:034 (4) - 我建议做成1/1 0.5速度滑条滑条尾消音感觉不错最初有改，但後來被噴又改回去了
00:49:367 加个NOTE？ OK
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议摆串 overmap 3连就差不多了太多感觉不好沒放藍線了
01:30:534 (7,8) - 先滑条再单点 OK
01:47:367 (5) - 同00:38:034 (4) OK
这次作图好多了謝謝會努力的你的圖也很好喔
[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧

挑不出什么了射个星好了謝謝我也有去射個星
完成度挺好的可以RANK了謝謝支持不過離Rank還有一段距離主要又是排列有點亂

謝謝sjoy 的mod與支持

hoLysoup

hoLysoup wrote:
hihi~ 嗨
答應的mod : )
以下都是建議~

[Insane]
00:09:367 (4) - 嗯嗯~ 可能把這個去掉, 然後在00:08:867 (3) 這裡加個repeat? 總覺得音樂理沒有(4)這個beat, 所以可能比較合一點 OK 還不錯
00:32:701 - 之前妳說這裡會不會不合適. 我的想法是在00:32:701 這裡加個beat. 因為主要這一段的1/2節奏, 最明顯是從00:32:867開始. 所以這樣可能打起來比較合音樂. 尤其是因為才剛剛打完一大串stream, 突然變成1/2會變得不適. OK 還不錯這樣也比較好點擊
00:34:534 (7) - 啊對了. 這要不要考慮改成一個長slider? 00:34:534~00:34:867的slider, 可能感覺好一點 OK 還不錯
00:36:701 - 這裡是不是錯過一個beat了? 好像不小心手誤刪了..
00:38:534 (1) - 要不要改成finish? OK
00:49:534 (3) - 要不要把這個移到00:49:367, 然後在00:49:867加個圈圈? 總覺得這一段的節奏有點變化可能比較好玩 OK
00:59:534 (1) - 忘了加whistle? 忘記了XD
00:59:867 (2) - 多加了whistle? 好像是..
01:06:867 (1) - remove NC OK
01:07:534 (1) - 加finish OK
01:08:201 (1) - 頭上忘了clap OK
01:15:867 (2) - 嗯嗯~ 我覺得這個最好改成一個圈圈+滑條. 比較和節奏, 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4RhBw.jpg OK GOOD
01:30:117 - 這裡錯過一個beat? :> 咦怎又忘了..
01:47:367 (5) - NC OK

[Hard]
00:20:367 (1) - 這應該就不用NC了, 節奏很清楚的 OK
00:24:034 (1) - ^
00:24:867 (1) - 開頭用滑條會不會比較好一點？歌手也是拉長音走, 滑條可能玩起來更合適 OK
01:07:867 (3) - 滑條尾巴錯過了clap + whistle喔忘了已修
01:12:201 (5) - 頭忘了whistle? 又忘:o
01:23:534 (1) - 這裡也是用滑條開始會不會比較順暢? OK
01:53:534 (1) - 去掉NC OK
01:54:201 (5) - 這裡NC OK
01:56:034 (2) - 噗這slider頭長相是故意的嗎? 哈哈可能有些BAT會鬼叫吧, 我個人倒是很喜歡奇怪的slider長相這樣才有梗? 不過改掉了有點可惜
01:57:367 (1,2,3) - 要不要把這幾個離01:56:701 (4)遠一點? OK

[Normal]
啊　對了妳的normal星難度可能太高囉 3.34 降了不過在3.25....
00:16:534 (1) - 像是這裡, 節奏來說的話　最佳的擺法就是圈+滑條. 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4Ri7w.jpg OK 還不錯
00:20:701 - 我覺得這一段不要有break比較好欸? 像是妳從00:20:701~00:21:867做一個很長的滑條, 全部問題都解決啦. 也和音樂, 也不用break, 而且連著之後的節奏也夠簡單. 好建議
00:35:034 (4) - 要不要移到00:35:534? 當然擺飾要變一下, 不過這樣節奏會比較自然一點 OK
01:17:867 (1) - spinner也跟hard一樣, 拉到01:20:701就好. 還可以加一個鼓聲 OK
如果這是最簡單的難度, 星數就太高囉. 好
建議就把節奏改得更簡單吧~ :> 好的怎麼感覺要做Easy..

其實圖不錯!! 謝謝多注意一下hitsound~好主要是每個部份的hitsound, 如果是同一段得話就檢查有沒有一至.
擺法, NC, 節奏這些東西, 妳只要多map, 遲早就會更了解的. 只是時間上的問題我也覺得是時間
加油加油~!
我沒星可以給妳 :<

沒關係
謝謝hoLysoup 的mod與支持

Colin Hou

Colin Hou wrote:
as requested

[General]
title: shining grace (due to http://www.iosysos.com/cd/utahime/
fixed

[yuki]
enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs
00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out
01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo
01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here?
[Insane]
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't make much sense here with a stream, consider keeping things like 01:07:534 (1,2,3), then try remove 01:10:034 (7) for a better effect. fixed
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mostly the same fixed
01:50:451 - did you forget some section here? the volume is too low. fixed
01:55:534 - spacing after here is quite under average. highly suggest you rearrange the patterns. fixed
[Normal]
this diff seems to be mapped to get rid of the star rating fixed
00:34:867 (4,5) - maybe remove? fixed
00:43:534 - make 00:43:867 (1) a slider start here? fixed
01:09:201 - add note? fixed
01:11:867 - ^
1 more slider since 01:57:367 to 01:58:034? fixed
no much comment on Hard keep up the good working!

謝謝Colin Hou的建議

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-21T08:31:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

meiikyuu

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

meiikyuu 2013-10-18T04:05:32+00:00

irc chat mod
http://puu.sh/4SQ7k.txt

star~

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2013-10-18T07:02:40+00:00

Having quite a blast with this one, I'd check this one if I had time for rank. Have a star, this is worth BATs looking into

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2013-10-19T02:48:25+00:00

SPOILER

10:14 smallboat: 哈囉妮妮~
10:14 Nymph: @@
10:14 smallboat: @@?
10:15 Nymph: @@官網能上了
10:15 smallboat: 圖被打星不知道能不能找你check下先別泡
10:15 smallboat: 恩
10:15 smallboat: 恭喜
10:17 Nymph: @@比以前好不少了
10:18 smallboat: @@
10:18 smallboat: 謝
10:18 smallboat: 有很多好心人給建議
10:18 Nymph: 嗯
10:19 smallboat: 還是覺得有些要改
10:19 Nymph: 唔
10:19 smallboat: @@
10:20 Nymph: 那就改唄@@
10:20 smallboat: 噗
10:21 smallboat: 你覺得有要改的地方嗎?
10:21 Nymph: 一些小地方吧
10:22 smallboat: ins?
10:23 Nymph: 嗯
10:23 smallboat: 想知道些
10:25 Nymph: 細節就是
10:26 smallboat: 恩
10:26 smallboat: 沒關係
10:27 smallboat: 可以講
10:27 Nymph: 00:12:701 (5) - slidershape略突然
10:27 smallboat: 歐歐
10:27 Nymph: 只有一個是這麼隨意的slider在這個part
10:28 Nymph: 00:38:034 (1) -
10:28 smallboat: 恩真的感覺不太協調
10:28 Nymph: 只需要結尾靜音開頭不需要靜音
10:28 smallboat: 阿隊了
10:28 Nymph: 爲了貫徹靜音的絕對性結尾改成soft hitsound
10:29 Nymph: 不用normal
10:29 smallboat: 那個sliderslide我放進去沒什麼效果
10:29 smallboat: 好
10:29 Nymph: 00:56:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
10:30 Nymph: 既然用了藍線slider 就不要保持spacing了可以自由拉一些排列
10:30 smallboat: 好
10:30 Nymph: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045556
10:31 Nymph: 像這樣把距離拉開才有跟著鼓的壓藍線slider的疾走感
10:31 smallboat: 好
10:31 smallboat: 不錯耶
10:31 Nymph: 00:59:534 (1) - 這種跟你前面藍線比就普通了是我也會用一些新鮮東西在裏面
10:32 Nymph: 01:08:867 (3) -
10:32 smallboat: 想知道要怎麼變化
10:32 Nymph: 這後面還很缺hitsound
10:32 Nymph: 變化嗎
10:32 smallboat: 恩是
10:33 Nymph: 節奏我覺得用藍線slider就好用一些不同的排列
10:33 smallboat: 好
10:33 smallboat: 就剛剛你傳的圖差不多那樣?
10:34 Nymph: 我只是舉一個例子嘛
10:34 Nymph: 那只是選項的一種
10:34 smallboat: 喔喔@@
10:34 Nymph: 換造型換方向各種方法
10:34 smallboat: 好的我也會用自己的想像力
10:34 Nymph: 嗯
10:34 smallboat: 好
10:34 Nymph: 01:08:867 (3) -
10:34 Nymph: 這後面很多地方可以做finish或者clap
10:35 Nymph: 目前空洞洞的
10:35 smallboat: 好
10:36 Nymph: 01:48:117 (3) - 這個歪啦
10:36 Nymph: 01:47:367 (1) - 這個跟之前說過的一樣
10:36 smallboat: 阿
10:37 Nymph: 發現你連打不是很會排細節啊
10:37 smallboat: 造型不好?
10:37 Nymph: 你要試著把你連打的東西還有之後的slider 做成一個比較順手的曲綫
10:38 smallboat: 恩阿這01:46:700 (2) - 連打後不知怎接
10:38 Nymph: 你試著把這種排列的每個圓的中心都挑出來
10:38 Nymph: 然後你把這些中心點連接上
10:38 Nymph: 看看是不是溫柔的曲綫
10:38 Nymph: 01:48:034 (2,3,4) -
10:38 Nymph: 這種一看就是個鈍角嘛
10:39 smallboat: 1~5的曲線?
10:39 Nymph: 只要是曲綫就好了成角度的都略有問題
10:39 Nymph: 關掉grid 自己手動拽下看看
10:39 Nymph: 弄成自己看著特別順眼的角度
10:40 smallboat: 好的
10:43 smallboat: 我是感覺最後一段擺不好
10:44 Nymph: 唔
10:44 smallboat: 有擺了幾次還是怪怪:(
10:45 Nymph: 靈感不夠唄
10:46 smallboat: 好像是

some ircmod

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-10-19T07:55:03+00:00

恭喜rank

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2013-10-19T07:57:31+00:00

Awaken wrote:
恭喜rank

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-10-19T08:24:05+00:00

I think offset +5 could be better

also here is some small checks

Insane
00:24:367 (2,3) - this spacing is unexpected because it is so similar to 00:24:034 (1,2) - . It's really hard to understand.
00:57:534 (3,4) - this spacing is unexpected due to something like 00:56:867 (1,2,3) - that already presented. It is confusing to switch to this.

Yuki
00:44:534 (1) - strange that it starts here not the bottom one.
01:55:118 (13) - this starts better on 01:55:201 (white tick) it's strange that it starts on the blue tick

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-19T08:48:23+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
I think offset +5 could be better if smallboat decided to change the offset, then I change it~ 小船你改的话就帮我一起改了

Yuki
00:44:534 (1) - strange that it starts here not the bottom one. 00:44:534 (1,2) - according to the previous jumps, that 00:44:701 (2) - should be at like 500,172 , but I like to put it at 255,327 to make a reverse jump =3=
01:55:118 (13) - this starts better on 01:55:201 (white tick) it's strange that it starts on the blue tick fixed~

Thanks, Frost~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-19T09:30:07+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
I think offset +5 could be better

also here is some small checks

Insane
00:24:367 (2,3) - this spacing is unexpected because it is so similar to 00:24:034 (1,2) - . It's really hard to understand.
00:57:534 (3,4) - this spacing is unexpected due to something like 00:56:867 (1,2,3) - that already presented. It is confusing to switch to this.

Okay, I will fix this offset and above problems in a few days . Thanks come check in free time, Frostmourne !

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2013-10-20T06:26:23+00:00

I've already talked with the mapper a few times about his map and I wanna help ranking this, so here's my mod~

[General]

01:17:867 (1) - 这个转盘之后的break可以取消右击break即可删除所有DIFF
音效比较差 tick音效和静音sliderslide都是没有

[Normal]

01:23:534 (1) - 一般来说建议EZ和NM转盘之后接的NOTE处于屏幕中心左右就像这样 http://puu.sh/4UtsM.jpg
00:18:867 (3) - 滑条头+whistle
00:20:201 (1) - 照理来说既然你跟了VOCAL 那么这根滑条最好从00:20:367 - 这里开始
00:27:534 (1) - 00:28:534 (2) - 滑条头+clap
00:31:201 (2) - clap
00:33:534 (2,3) - 取消头部finish 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 00:35:534 (1) - 尾巴全部+clap
00:43:534 (1) - 头部finish
01:06:867 (4) - 滑条头+whistle
01:23:534 (1) - 取消头部clap
01:27:534 (3) - 取消屁股clap
01:31:534 (1) - 取消头部clap 换成finish
01:58:201 (1) - 01:58:367 - 这里开始老地方结束
总体来说排列略差没有全局性而且其实可以用tick音效不过作为新人也是算勉强过关

[Hard]

00:31:534 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的音效可以说是巨违和建议把clap全部去掉
01:00:534 (5) - 为什么这边会突然间距变大一半多我觉得没啥理由也是属于以前就有的老问题
00:38:701 (2,3,4) - 丑丑也会影响flow 老问题不够平滑
00:40:201 (5,6) - 没啥梗此问题也出现多次 just put note everywhere 可以像前面那样平行 http://puu.sh/4Uulg.jpg
01:17:201 (5) - 去掉whistle
01:17:867 (7) - 加note 转盘后面红线开始
01:27:534 (5,6,7) - 丑而且因为是锐角所以flow也是极差还不如与01:27:534 (5) - 的开头重叠
01:41:534 (3) - 去掉finish加在01:41:867 (1) - 的头部
01:52:034 (4) - 加个NOTE用来保持节奏
01:57:867 (2,3) - 相对于前面01:56:034 (2,3,4) - 这组又变了DS 不仅丑而且在HARD也没有什么意义
全DIFF都有较多的ds变化是毫无意义并且也是没有全局性排列和音效的连贯性也是较差仍然需要改善

[Insane]

00:07:034 (4) - 移到302 136 00:07:201 (5) - 移到 359 189 做一个正四边形远比现在这样3角FLOW要好的多
00:08:201 (1) - 00:18:867 (1) - 换成单点会舒服点
00:17:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以跳但是间距有点略大建议减小一点
00:16:867 (2) - 去掉屁股的whistle
00:25:534 (3) - 00:28:201 (3) - 去掉头部finish
00:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 毫无美观为什么不复制00:36:034 (2,3,4) - 到后2组然后分别旋转120度呢？效果图：http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg 这样做了以后别忘了用00:38:034 (1) - 做个blanket包住00:36:700 (5) -
00:38:534 (1,2) - 00:39:201 (5,6) - 1-2的间距和5-6的间距请保持一致
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 删了
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距略大没有理由在我看来stack着的连打会比较好
00:42:867 (5,6,7) - 仍然是无理由的间距偏大
00:44:867 (1) - 加finish
00:47:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - 可以用00:47:867 (5,6,1) - 这3NOTE先组一个正三角然后再做4和7在那2组的当中如果不懂我的意思可以QQ群M我 00:47:534 (4,7,1,2) - 这4个也可以组成菱形
00:49:867 (4) - 删了加在00:50:034 -
01:00:534 (4,5,6,7) - 这边可以像 00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这边做的这样啊是对应的这就是所谓的没有连贯性后面也是
01:06:534 (3,4,5) - 丑注意间距和梗
01:12:867 (1,2,3) - 也是不太好看有偏移我觉得这边直线好不过这梗也不咋的
01:16:534 (4,5,6) - 这个也是
01:17:534 (3) - 弧度向下 http://puu.sh/4UvPu.jpg
01:18:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱.. 建议remap这段
kiai也是很乱......
个人感觉还没到能RANK的质量抱歉上次我好像确认错误了.... 我建议你还是DS统一些这点可以参照我的1st rank:http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 没啥质量不过作为新人图也是可以算勉强过关全局也多保持一些梗 GD就先不MOD了再找点MOD 好好改改改到你觉得差不多了就叫我

Good luck <3.

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-21T08:44:30+00:00

我將會編輯這則貼文數次(I'll edit it then paste the text several times) , 紅色字是指我目前的修復進度(Red word is my current progress of the repair).

Chloe wrote:
I've already talked with the mapper a few times about his map and I wanna help ranking this, so here's my mod~

[General]
01:17:867 (1) - 这个转盘之后的break可以取消右击break即可删除所有DIFF 我都不知道break可以取消..
音效比较差 tick音效和静音sliderslide都是没有 tick音效已放入(目前Normal)
[Normal]
01:23:534 (1) - 一般来说建议EZ和NM转盘之后接的NOTE处于屏幕中心左右就像这样 http://puu.sh/4UtsM.jpg fixed
00:18:867 (3) - 滑条头+whistle fixed
00:20:201 (1) - 照理来说既然你跟了VOCAL 那么这根滑条最好从00:20:367 - 这里开始 fixed 之前也是感覺這邊不太協調..
00:27:534 (1) - 00:28:534 (2) - 滑条头+clap fixed
00:31:201 (2) - clap fixed
00:33:534 (2,3) - 取消头部finish 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 00:35:534 (1) - 尾巴全部+clap fixed
00:43:534 (1) - 头部finish fixed
01:06:867 (4) - 滑条头+whistle fixed
01:23:534 (1) - 取消头部clap fixed
01:27:534 (3) - 取消屁股clap fixed
01:31:534 (1) - 取消头部clap 换成finish fixed
01:58:201 (1) - 01:58:367 - 这里开始老地方结束 fixed

总体来说排列略差没有全局性而且其实可以用tick音效不过作为新人也是算勉强过关 謝，會改善。

[Hard]
00:31:534 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的音效可以说是巨违和建议把clap全部去掉 fixed
01:00:534 (5) - 为什么这边会突然间距变大一半多我觉得没啥理由也是属于以前就有的老问题 fixed
00:38:701 (2,3,4) - 丑丑也会影响flow 老问题不够平滑 fixed
00:40:201 (5,6) - 没啥梗此问题也出现多次 just put note everywhere 可以像前面那样平行 http://puu.sh/4Uulg.jpg fixed
01:17:201 (5) - 去掉whistle fixed
01:17:867 (7) - 加note 转盘后面红线开始 fixed
01:27:534 (5,6,7) - 丑而且因为是锐角所以flow也是极差还不如与01:27:534 (5) - 的开头重叠修成其他了
01:41:534 (3) - 去掉finish加在01:41:867 (1) - 的头部 fixed
01:52:034 (4) - 加个NOTE用来保持节奏 fixed
01:57:867 (2,3) - 相对于前面01:56:034 (2,3,4) - 这组又变了DS 不仅丑而且在HARD也没有什么意义 fixed
全DIFF都有较多的ds变化是毫无意义并且也是没有全局性排列和音效的连贯性也是较差仍然需要改善
重排了一遍，有照弧度了

[Insane]
00:07:034 (4) - 移到302 136 00:07:201 (5) - 移到 359 189 做一个正四边形远比现在这样3角FLOW要好的多 fixed
00:08:201 (1) - 00:18:867 (1) - 换成单点会舒服点 fixed
00:17:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以跳但是间距有点略大建议减小一点 fixed
00:16:867 (2) - 去掉屁股的whistle fixed
00:25:534 (3) - 00:28:201 (3) - 去掉头部finish fixed
00:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 毫无美观为什么不复制00:36:034 (2,3,4) - 到后2组然后分别旋转120度呢？效果图：http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg 这样做了以后别忘了用00:38:034 (1) - 做个blanket包住00:36:700 (5) - fixed
00:38:534 (1,2) - 00:39:201 (5,6) - 1-2的间距和5-6的间距请保持一致 fixed
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 删了這不用刪吧是不是打錯..
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距略大没有理由在我看来stack着的连打会比较好 fixed
00:42:867 (5,6,7) - 仍然是无理由的间距偏大那這是要減小?
00:44:867 (1) - 加finish fixed
00:47:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - 可以用00:47:867 (5,6,1) - 这3NOTE先组一个正三角然后再做4和7在那2组的当中如果不懂我的意思可以QQ群M我 00:47:534 (4,7,1,2) - 这4个也可以组成菱形 fixed 應該是這樣吧
00:49:867 (4) - 删了加在00:50:034 - 我覺得這邊這樣加怪怪的我換另一種了
01:00:534 (4,5,6,7) - 这边可以像 00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这边做的这样啊是对应的这就是所谓的没有连贯性后面也是 fixed,後面我再想想..
01:06:534 (3,4,5) - 丑注意间距和梗 fixed
01:12:867 (1,2,3) - 也是不太好看有偏移我觉得这边直线好不过这梗也不咋的這個再考慮
01:16:534 (4,5,6) - 这个也是 fixed,後面改直線
01:17:534 (3) - 弧度向下 http://puu.sh/4UvPu.jpg fixed
01:18:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱.. 建议remap这段
kiai也是很乱......
个人感觉还没到能RANK的质量抱歉上次我好像确认错误了.... 我建议你还是DS统一些这点可以参照我的1st rank:http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 没啥质量不过作为新人图也是可以算勉强过关全局也多保持一些梗 GD就先不MOD了再找点MOD 好好改改改到你觉得差不多了就叫我

Good luck <3.

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-10-23T10:57:33+00:00

hi, from my queue XD

[Yuki]

00:02:706 - try this rhythm for follow the vocal?
00:20:706 (5) - I think 258|100 is already fine for this. for straight to a previous slider.
00:31:206 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream better flow,

SPOILER

00:36:539 - I think add note here on 256|243 would be great too, its a strong beat imo. and it still look symmetry.
00:39:206 - add note?
01:28:206 (4) - move a bit down to make it's tail blanket with the previous 4's head.

[Insane]

00:24:039 (1,2) - what about swap NC? I think the spacing looks a bit confuse.
00:41:539 (6) - what about blanket like this?

SPOILER

00:44:872 (1) - make these stream more flow and slider too. maybe like this

SPOILER

01:43:872 (7) - move it for balance distance is better, balance rhythm but not spacing :/

[Hard]

00:45:539 (2) - the current one is almost overlap, what about this

SPOILER

[Normal]

01:31:539 (1,2,3) - make it to triangle pattern?

SPOILER

that's all, good luck :3

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-23T11:21:33+00:00

P A N wrote:
[Yuki]

00:02:706 - try this rhythm for follow the vocal? I think mine follows better :3
00:20:706 (5) - I think 258|100 is already fine for this. for straight to a previous slider.
00:31:206 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream better flow,
SPOILER
00:36:539 - I think add note here on 256|243 would be great too, its a strong beat imo. and it still look symmetry.
00:39:206 - add note?
01:28:206 (4) - move a bit down to make it's tail blanket with the previous 4's head.

no commet → changed/fixed

thx~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-23T13:04:56+00:00

P A N wrote:
hi, from my queue XD

[Insane]

00:24:039 (1,2) - what about swap NC? I think the spacing looks a bit confuse.
00:41:539 (6) - what about blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:44:872 (1) - make these stream more flow and slider too. maybe like this
SPOILER
01:43:872 (7) - move it for balance distance is better, balance rhythm but not spacing :/

[Hard]

00:45:539 (2) - the current one is almost overlap, what about this
SPOILER

[Normal]

01:31:539 (1,2,3) - make it to triangle pattern?
SPOILER

that's all, good luck :3

All fixed,thank PAN

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Satellite

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Satellite 2013-10-24T02:36:07+00:00

IRC LOG
Insane

SPOILER

11:21 Satellite: 00:31:539 (4,5,6,7) -
11:21 Satellite: I think stream is not Fit
11:21 Satellite: http://puu.sh/4XVjF.jpg
11:21 smallboat: okay
11:21 Satellite: Slider Reverse
11:21 Satellite: try this
11:21 smallboat: oh?
11:22 smallboat: two times reverse?
11:22 smallboat: no 1 ?
11:22 smallboat: okay
11:22 Satellite: yes
11:22 Satellite: two reverse~
11:22 smallboat: okay
11:22 Satellite: yeah
11:23 smallboat: I feel this is a pattern ,too :3
11:23 smallboat: XD
11:23 smallboat: I actually did not think.
11:24 Satellite: 01:01:872 (1) - remove Nc
11:24 Satellite: 01:02:206 (2) - add Nc
11:24 smallboat: okay
11:24 smallboat: NC ..is not good at.. :<
11:24 Satellite: ok
11:24 Satellite: "I guess"
11:24 Satellite: 01:08:039 (4) - remove note
11:25 smallboat: okay
11:25 Satellite: 01:14:872 (3) - I think
11:25 Satellite: stack is head.
11:25 Satellite: try this
11:26 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056250
11:26 Satellite: this
11:26 Satellite: you use "4 slider"
11:26 Satellite: Ctrl+G try this
11:26 smallboat: oh? This feel good,indeed.
11:26 smallboat: okay
11:28 Satellite: 01:25:372 (6) - I don't like this place... >.>
11:28 smallboat: @@
11:28 smallboat: feel...no arc
11:29 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056256
11:29 Satellite: try jump?
11:29 Satellite: 01:25:372 (6,7,8,9) -
11:29 smallboat: wow , change a lot ,I "ll try it.
11:29 smallboat: okay
11:30 Satellite: 01:30:539 (8) - end clap delete
11:30 Satellite: not fit I guess
11:30 smallboat: okay
11:30 Satellite: If you use clap
11:30 Satellite: add "First"
11:30 smallboat: Okay
11:30 Satellite: 01:34:872 (1) - remove Nc
11:31 smallboat: Okay
11:31 Satellite: 01:37:540 (1) - ^
11:31 Satellite: 01:38:872 (1) - ^
11:31 Satellite: 01:39:539 (4) - add Nc
11:31 smallboat: okay
11:32 Satellite: 01:56:039 (3,4,5) - Not fit
11:32 smallboat: need replace?
11:32 Satellite: http://puu.sh/4XVPM.jpg
11:33 Satellite: use this
11:33 smallboat: end is blue?
11:33 smallboat: okay
11:33 Satellite: That's all

GOOD LUCK

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2013-10-24T11:21:15+00:00

Hi hi~
from your request ;3

Normal
- 00:18:872(3) - 這個間距沒有調得很好,修正一下 (0.97,0.96)
- 00:32:872(1,2,3) - 這三個不建議黏在一起
- 00:43:539(1,2,3) - 我比較喜歡以NC來分一個段落,這裡可以這樣放 :

- 00:57:539(2) - 試試這樣,可以指向(3)然後跟 00:58:872(1) 有個對稱
- 01:30:206(1,2) - 讓包圍的軌跡為1.0的間距? 只是建議..我覺得這樣比較整齊 ._.
- 01:50:539(1,2,3) - (1)往右一格,然後(2,3)的blanket

Hard
- 01:09:706(7,8) - 不是很喜歡這裡的重疊...可以讓(7)覆蓋在(8)的開頭?
- 01:35:539(3,4,5) - 沒有覆蓋得很好 (0.03)
- 01:46:539(3,4,1) - 摁..有點超出螢幕,建議稍微修改一下

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 :

- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法

Insane
- 00:49:372(3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該是這樣 :

- 00:49:539 - 如果你有改這裡一樣要有whstle
- 00:50:539(5) - 去掉whistle...
- 01:57:872(3) - 我覺得這個距離應該拉大,呈一個正三角形

大概就這些,有些小部分blanket我不想抓,不過你可以考慮看看
祝早日rank~~!! :3

Koiyuki

2,533 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-24T11:25:55+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 : 感觉没啥必要
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket 其实这里也可以说是包住了，slider形状的问题而已
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法这里会自动偏移的所以只要stack就好了

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