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IOSYS - shining grace [Osu|Taiko]

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Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC
01:28:201 - Finish
01:28:534 (5) - ^
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86
01:38:867 - Finish
01:39:201 - ^

[Insane]
Check AIMod
00:12:201 (2) - NC 00:12:367 (1) - remove nc
00:18:034 (7) - 在00:18:534 - 完

00:45:867 (1) - 可以不NC
01:07:201 (2) - ctrl+G

[Normal]
00:19:534 - 至00:21:868 - 加個SPINNER

其餘不太找到(累了~
sjoy
1,026 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
[Insane]
00:11:534 (1) -
可以加个FIN
00:13:367 (1) - 拆成1/2+单点
00:26:867 (3) - ctrl+g
00:35:034 (1) - 去掉一个折返 加一个单点在 336,124看看
00:38:034 (4) - 我建议做成1/1 0.5速度滑条 滑条尾消音感觉不错
00:49:367 加个NOTE？
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议摆串 overmap 3连就差不多了太多感觉不好
01:30:534 (7,8) - 先滑条再单点
01:47:367 (5) - 同00:38:034 (4)
这次作图好多了
[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧

挑不出什么了 射个星好了
完成度挺好的可以RANK了
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加 加了clap觉得好吵，不加惹
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著 ok
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC 想想还是用吧=///=
01:28:201 - Finish ok
01:28:534 (5) - ^ 我觉得不需要
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86 还是选了stack 01:35:534 (1) - 的头
01:38:867 - Finish ok
01:39:201 - ^ 同上

sjoy wrote:

[Insane]

[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点 好
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg 可
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧 不干
thanks for modding
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
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blissfulyoshi
A somewhat short irc mod....

SPOILER
2013-10-15 19:34 smallboat: Hello,blissfulyyoshi
2013-10-15 19:34 blissfulyoshi: HAI
2013-10-15 19:35 smallboat: Hello..I think my map's quality is not enough, but I can't figure out what the question is, could you give me a pointing?
2013-10-15 19:35 blissfulyoshi: okay sure
2013-10-15 19:35 blissfulyoshi: link
2013-10-15 19:36 smallboat: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115246 Thanks , bliss~
2013-10-15 19:37 blissfulyoshi: dling
2013-10-15 19:37 smallboat: @@?
2013-10-15 19:37 blissfulyoshi: any diff in particular?
2013-10-15 19:39 smallboat: well, Hard Insane Yuki 's diff only.
2013-10-15 19:39 smallboat: three diff
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 19:40 smallboat: THANKS!
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: why are you keeping messy overlaps like 00:02:034 (3,1) -
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: insane diff right now
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: 00:04:534 (3,1) - ^
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: well , think a pattern (?
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: ><"
2013-10-15 19:41 blissfulyoshi: I don't even care if it has no pattern
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: okay~
2013-10-15 19:41 blissfulyoshi: just remove teh overlaps
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: I will revise .
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: okay^^
2013-10-15 19:43 blissfulyoshi: also to fit the super soft intro I would make decrease teh sv a bit more for notes before 00:05:867 (1) -
2013-10-15 19:43 00:11:534 (1) - *
2013-10-15 19:43 blissfulyoshi: that is probably a better point
2013-10-15 19:44 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: more of a pet peeve, but why is 00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - so much harder than the notes imeediately following it
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: it is so cruel to do this stuff right after a slow section and a spinner imo
2013-10-15 19:44 smallboat: sure?
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: that is what I think
2013-10-15 19:45 blissfulyoshi: up to you
2013-10-15 19:45 blissfulyoshi: you are the mapper
2013-10-15 19:45 smallboat: okay lol
2013-10-15 19:46 smallboat: poor ENGLISH ,sorry>_<
2013-10-15 19:48 smallboat: have any problem?
2013-10-15 19:53 blissfulyoshi: ummm got caught in a phone call
2013-10-15 19:53 blissfulyoshi: give me a bit
2013-10-15 19:54 smallboat: ok , nevermind~
2013-10-15 19:56 smallboat: your pointing is useful !
2013-10-15 19:59 smallboat: Can you write a bit extra suggestion in my map forum?
2013-10-15 19:59 blissfulyoshi: sure
2013-10-15 20:00 smallboat: okay,tks~
2013-10-15 20:02 smallboat: How many quality in my map ?
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: sry finally got off the phone
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: very long phone call
2013-10-15 20:06 smallboat: oh no,nevermind . haha^^
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: let me at lest play all of insane
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: and I'll tell you
2013-10-15 20:07 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: 01:30:867 (8,1,2) - why is there an antijump here
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: 01:07:534 (1,2,3) - also, switching to a softer section == jumps??????/
2013-10-15 20:08 smallboat: THINK A pattern?
2013-10-15 20:08 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: increase spacing
2013-10-15 20:09 smallboat: ah sorry , I have no notice (embarrass ><
2013-10-15 20:09 blissfulyoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040323 ?
2013-10-15 20:10 smallboat: stack 3 times?
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: 01:44:867 (2,1) - another questionable antijump
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: ummm you had that stack there originally
2013-10-15 20:10 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: I don't care what you do with teh stack
2013-10-15 20:11 blissfulyoshi: I only rearranged 1 and 2 to have a flow that feels better to me
2013-10-15 20:11 smallboat: okay @_@
2013-10-15 20:12 blissfulyoshi: for the most part insane was okay, but some of your jumps/antijumps felt a bit awkward
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: OK, I"m not good at " jump" X ( "
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: forgot to mention 01:20:867 (1,2,3,4) - soft area === jumps again???/
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: >_<SOR
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: your choruses were pretty good
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: besides those awkward jumps
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: so no worreis
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: OKAY
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: oh yeah, what is with teh inconsistent slow downs
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: 00:38:034 (1) - is slow
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: 00:40:534 (7) - is fast
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: well
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: hearing it again
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: I geuss it makes sense
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: so never mind me
2013-10-15 20:15 smallboat: :)
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: HAVE LIISTENED
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: LISTEN ><
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: so hard or Yuki next?
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: guess yuki
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: Yuki is GD
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:17 blissfulyoshi: so going to hard
2013-10-15 20:17 smallboat: okay, hard first
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: 00:19:534 (3) - this slider is ugly
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: T_T
2013-10-15 20:18 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:18 smallboat: true?
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: I am not sure what you are aiming for
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: but that many sharp corners does not look good
2013-10-15 20:19 smallboat: sorry , some sliders no copy.
2013-10-15 20:19 smallboat: >_<
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: 01:51:534 (3,4) - why teh rnadom overlap
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: but this hard diff is decent
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: mostly on the safe side, but nothing too wrong about it
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: okay lol
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: 01:56:034 (2,4) - just wondering, why do you have that random bump in teh beginnign of these sliders
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: it looks slihgtly weird
2013-10-15 20:22 smallboat: sorry @@
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: oh well
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: your choice
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: anything you want me to look at?
2013-10-15 20:22 smallboat: wii fix
2013-10-15 20:23 smallboat: well, yuki diff ? I can chat problem for him.
2013-10-15 20:23 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:23 blissfulyoshi: if you want
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: ok
2013-10-15 20:25 blissfulyoshi: wow this diff has a bunch of hard patterns
2013-10-15 20:25 blissfulyoshi: xD
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: XD
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: ha
2013-10-15 20:26 blissfulyoshi: 00:11:201 (3,1) - this jump is a bit large for that part of the song.....
2013-10-15 20:26 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:26 smallboat: ok I'll tell him
2013-10-15 20:27 blissfulyoshi: 00:14:201 (5,1) and 00:15:368 (2,4) - overlaps here don't look that great
2013-10-15 20:27 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:28 blissfulyoshi: 00:28:201 (3,4,1) - why is there a stack here? It doesn't seem to fit eh song that well
2013-10-15 20:28 blissfulyoshi: 00:48:534 (3,1) - anotehr overlap T_T
2013-10-15 20:29 smallboat: 0.0
2013-10-15 20:29 smallboat: okay :)
2013-10-15 20:30 blissfulyoshi: 01:05:868 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is evil T_T
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: wow
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: as Big Black(?
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:30 blissfulyoshi: big black is jsut silly
2013-10-15 20:31 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:31 smallboat: No mankind to play it...
2013-10-15 20:31 blissfulyoshi: okay so only pattern I can't do in this map is that one I mentioned above
2013-10-15 20:31 blissfulyoshi: chorus is easy in comparison
2013-10-15 20:32 smallboat: okay:)
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: 01:33:868 (6,7,8,9,1) - I would use distance snap on this stream to give it a sense of speeding up
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: and why is the chorus so devoid of jumps
2013-10-15 20:32 smallboat: no stack?
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: yeah
2013-10-15 20:33 blissfulyoshi: 01:47:034 (2,3) - do you seriously want to be this evil, I barely did it by sightreading
2013-10-15 20:33 smallboat: Well I think you should put these recommendations in the forum, he can reply for you :)
2013-10-15 20:33 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:34 blissfulyoshi: 01:49:701 (2,3) - I guess I got used to it by now
2013-10-15 20:34 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:34 blissfulyoshi: well that is the end of my mod for his diff
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: okay jsut did that stupid poattern......
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: gah
2013-10-15 20:35 smallboat: 0.0~
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: ]/savelog
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: ...
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: T_T
2013-10-15 20:36 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:36 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:37 smallboat: Thanks bliss take the time to make recommendations
2013-10-15 20:38 smallboat: >_<~
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: lol yw
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: I am pretty sure you can get it ranked soon
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: just have someone else look over insane
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: I felt that was the weakest diff
2013-10-15 20:38 smallboat: sure? lol
2013-10-15 20:39 smallboat: Well, some left nazi problem ?>_<
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: probably some
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: too lazy to ask to fix it right now
2013-10-15 20:40 smallboat: >_<ok
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: someone else can do those
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: xD
2013-10-15 20:40 smallboat: XD
2013-10-15 20:41 smallboat: Okay, I will fix it soon in this day !
2013-10-15 20:41 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:41 blissfulyoshi: mind if I post log?
2013-10-15 20:42 smallboat: okay :)
2013-10-15 20:43 blissfulyoshi: thx
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
From blissfulyoshi's irc mod

00:11:201 (3,1) - this jump is a bit large for that part of the song.....move a little
01:33:868 (6,7,8,9,1) - I would use distance snap on this stream to give it a sense of speeding up good idea I like it :)

other no change
I like overlap in my insane diff lol
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hihi~
答應的mod : )
以下都是建議~

[Insane]
00:09:367 (4) - 嗯嗯~ 可能把這個去掉, 然後在00:08:867 (3) 這裡加個repeat? 總覺得音樂理沒有(4)這個beat, 所以可能比較合一點
00:32:701 - 之前妳說這裡會不會不合適. 我的想法是在00:32:701 這裡加個beat. 因為主要這一段的1/2節奏, 最明顯是從00:32:867開始. 所以這樣可能打起來比較合音樂. 尤其是因為才剛剛打完一大串stream, 突然變成1/2會變得不適.
00:34:534 (7) - 啊 對了. 這要不要考慮改成一個長slider? 00:34:534~00:34:867的slider, 可能感覺好一點
00:36:701 - 這裡是不是錯過一個beat了?
00:38:534 (1) - 要不要改成finish?
00:49:534 (3) - 要不要把這個移到00:49:367, 然後在00:49:867加個圈圈? 總覺得這一段的節奏有點變化可能比較好玩
00:59:534 (1) - 忘了加whistle?
00:59:867 (2) - 多加了whistle?
01:06:867 (1) - remove NC
01:07:534 (1) - 加finish
01:08:201 (1) - 頭上忘了clap
01:15:867 (2) - 嗯嗯~ 我覺得這個最好改成一個圈圈+滑條. 比較和節奏, 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4RhBw.jpg
01:30:117 - 這裡錯過一個beat? :>
01:47:367 (5) - NC

[Hard]
00:20:367 (1) - 這應該就不用NC了, 節奏很清楚的
00:24:034 (1) - ^
00:24:867 (1) - 開頭用滑條會不會比較好一點？ 歌手也是拉長音走, 滑條可能玩起來更合適
01:07:867 (3) - 滑條尾巴錯過了clap + whistle喔
01:12:201 (5) - 頭忘了whistle?
01:23:534 (1) - 這裡也是用滑條開始會不會比較順暢?
01:53:534 (1) - 去掉NC
01:54:201 (5) - 這裡NC
01:56:034 (2) - 噗 這slider頭長相是故意的嗎? 哈哈 可能有些BAT會鬼叫吧, 我個人倒是很喜歡奇怪的slider長相
01:57:367 (1,2,3) - 要不要把這幾個離01:56:701 (4)遠一點?

[Normal]
啊　對了妳的normal星難度可能太高囉 3.34
00:16:534 (1) - 像是這裡, 節奏來說的話　最佳的擺法就是圈+滑條. 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4Ri7w.jpg
00:20:701 - 我覺得這一段不要有break比較好欸? 像是妳從00:20:701~00:21:867做一個很長的滑條, 全部問題都解決啦. 也和音樂, 也不用break, 而且連著之後的節奏也夠簡單.
00:35:034 (4) - 要不要移到00:35:534? 當然擺飾要變一下, 不過這樣節奏會比較自然一點
01:17:867 (1) - spinner也跟hard一樣, 拉到01:20:701就好. 還可以加一個鼓聲
如果這是最簡單的難度, 星數就太高囉.
建議就把節奏改得更簡單吧~ :>

其實圖不錯!! 多注意一下hitsound~ 主要是每個部份的hitsound, 如果是同一段得話就檢查有沒有一至.
擺法, NC, 節奏這些東西, 妳只要多map, 遲早就會更了解的. 只是時間上的問題
加油加油~!
我沒星可以給妳 :<
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
as requested

[General]
  1. title: shining grace (due to http://www.iosysos.com/cd/utahime/
[yuki]
  1. enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs
  2. 00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out
  3. 01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo
  4. 01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here?
[Insane]
  1. 01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't make much sense here with a stream, consider keeping things like 01:07:534 (1,2,3), then try remove 01:10:034 (7) for a better effect.
  2. 01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mostly the same
  3. 01:50:451 - did you forget some section here? the volume is too low.
  4. 01:55:534 - spacing after here is quite under average. highly suggest you rearrange the patterns.
[Normal]
  1. this diff seems to be mapped to get rid of the star rating
  2. 00:34:867 (4,5) - maybe remove?
  3. 00:43:534 - make 00:43:867 (1) a slider start here?
  4. 01:09:201 - add note?
  5. 01:11:867 - ^
  6. 1 more slider since 01:57:367 to 01:58:034?
no much comment on Hard :) keep up the good working!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Colin Hou wrote:

[yuki]
  1. enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs ok
  2. 00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out fixed
  3. 01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo sry I don't want to change it
  4. 01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here? good idea~!
thanks for modding
说中文吧0.0
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]
  1. The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
  2. Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
  3. Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.
[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY
Almost fixed,thanks -Bakari- 's mod :)

Lizbeth

Lizbeth wrote:

hihi hi

[Insane]
00:00:867 - 00:11:534 - lighten this whole section by deleting some circles in red tick. That would give you a soft intro, just like the song
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - I think this is the distance you should have use in the rest of the map, except this part: 00:46:201 -00:56:534 - which is soft, and the distance you use fits well.
If you really decide to change the distance as i suggested, keep in mind the jumps you place are fine, and you should keep them.

[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ?
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large


[Hard]
01:53:534 (1) - this is too close to prev circle, check timeline

[Normal]
Easier diff needs less than 3.00 difficulty stars, and this have 3.21, try to lighten it a bit, or add an EASY.
there s no technical problems tho

Good luck
Almost fixed,thanks Lizbeth 's mod

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC
01:28:201 - Finish
01:28:534 (5) - ^
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86
01:38:867 - Finish
01:39:201 - ^

[Insane]
Check AIMod
00:12:201 (2) - NC 00:12:367 (1) - remove nc fixed
00:18:034 (7) - 在00:18:534 - 完 fixed

00:45:867 (1) - 可以不NC fixed
01:07:201 (2) - ctrl+G fixed

[Normal]
00:19:534 - 至00:21:868 - 加個SPINNER 考慮

其餘不太找到(累了~
謝謝Kawaiwkyik 的mod

sjoy

sjoy wrote:

[Insane]
00:11:534 (1) -
可以加个FIN OK
00:13:367 (1) - 拆成1/2+单点 OK/color]
00:26:867 (3) - ctrl+g
00:35:034 (1) - 去掉一个折返 加一个单点在 336,124看看 OK
00:38:034 (4) - 我建议做成1/1 0.5速度滑条 滑条尾消音感觉不错 最初有改，但後來被噴又改回去了 :o
00:49:367 加个NOTE？ OK
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议摆串 overmap 3连就差不多了太多感觉不好 沒放藍線了
01:30:534 (7,8) - 先滑条再单点 OK
01:47:367 (5) - 同00:38:034 (4) OK
这次作图好多了 謝謝 會努力的 你的圖也很好喔
[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧

挑不出什么了 射个星好了 謝謝 我也有去射個星 :idea:
完成度挺好的可以RANK了 謝謝支持 不過離Rank還有一段距離 主要又是排列有點亂 :o
謝謝sjoy 的mod與支持

hoLysoup

hoLysoup wrote:

hihi~ 嗨 :)
答應的mod : )
以下都是建議~

[Insane]
00:09:367 (4) - 嗯嗯~ 可能把這個去掉, 然後在00:08:867 (3) 這裡加個repeat? 總覺得音樂理沒有(4)這個beat, 所以可能比較合一點 OK 還不錯
00:32:701 - 之前妳說這裡會不會不合適. 我的想法是在00:32:701 這裡加個beat. 因為主要這一段的1/2節奏, 最明顯是從00:32:867開始. 所以這樣可能打起來比較合音樂. 尤其是因為才剛剛打完一大串stream, 突然變成1/2會變得不適. OK 還不錯 這樣也比較好點擊
00:34:534 (7) - 啊 對了. 這要不要考慮改成一個長slider? 00:34:534~00:34:867的slider, 可能感覺好一點 OK 還不錯
00:36:701 - 這裡是不是錯過一個beat了? 好像不小心手誤刪了.. 8-)
00:38:534 (1) - 要不要改成finish? OK
00:49:534 (3) - 要不要把這個移到00:49:367, 然後在00:49:867加個圈圈? 總覺得這一段的節奏有點變化可能比較好玩 OK
00:59:534 (1) - 忘了加whistle? 忘記了XD
00:59:867 (2) - 多加了whistle? 好像是..
01:06:867 (1) - remove NC OK
01:07:534 (1) - 加finish OK
01:08:201 (1) - 頭上忘了clap OK
01:15:867 (2) - 嗯嗯~ 我覺得這個最好改成一個圈圈+滑條. 比較和節奏, 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4RhBw.jpg OK GOOD :)
01:30:117 - 這裡錯過一個beat? :> 咦怎又忘了.. :o
01:47:367 (5) - NC OK

[Hard]
00:20:367 (1) - 這應該就不用NC了, 節奏很清楚的 OK
00:24:034 (1) - ^
00:24:867 (1) - 開頭用滑條會不會比較好一點？ 歌手也是拉長音走, 滑條可能玩起來更合適 OK
01:07:867 (3) - 滑條尾巴錯過了clap + whistle喔 忘了 已修
01:12:201 (5) - 頭忘了whistle? 又忘:o
01:23:534 (1) - 這裡也是用滑條開始會不會比較順暢? OK
01:53:534 (1) - 去掉NC OK
01:54:201 (5) - 這裡NC OK
01:56:034 (2) - 噗 這slider頭長相是故意的嗎? 哈哈 可能有些BAT會鬼叫吧, 我個人倒是很喜歡奇怪的slider長相 這樣才有梗? 不過改掉了有點可惜
01:57:367 (1,2,3) - 要不要把這幾個離01:56:701 (4)遠一點? OK

[Normal]
啊　對了妳的normal星難度可能太高囉 3.34 降了 不過在3.25....
00:16:534 (1) - 像是這裡, 節奏來說的話　最佳的擺法就是圈+滑條. 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4Ri7w.jpg OK 還不錯
00:20:701 - 我覺得這一段不要有break比較好欸? 像是妳從00:20:701~00:21:867做一個很長的滑條, 全部問題都解決啦. 也和音樂, 也不用break, 而且連著之後的節奏也夠簡單. 好建議 :idea:
00:35:034 (4) - 要不要移到00:35:534? 當然擺飾要變一下, 不過這樣節奏會比較自然一點 OK
01:17:867 (1) - spinner也跟hard一樣, 拉到01:20:701就好. 還可以加一個鼓聲 OK
如果這是最簡單的難度, 星數就太高囉. 好
建議就把節奏改得更簡單吧~ :> 好的 怎麼感覺要做Easy.. :o

其實圖不錯!! 謝謝 多注意一下hitsound~好 主要是每個部份的hitsound, 如果是同一段得話就檢查有沒有一至.
擺法, NC, 節奏這些東西, 妳只要多map, 遲早就會更了解的. 只是時間上的問題 我也覺得是時間 :o
加油加油~!
我沒星可以給妳 :<
沒關係
謝謝hoLysoup 的mod與支持

Colin Hou

Colin Hou wrote:

as requested

[General]
  1. title: shining grace (due to http://www.iosysos.com/cd/utahime/
fixed

[yuki]
  1. enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs
  2. 00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out
  3. 01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo
  4. 01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here?
[Insane]
  1. 01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't make much sense here with a stream, consider keeping things like 01:07:534 (1,2,3), then try remove 01:10:034 (7) for a better effect. fixed
  2. 01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mostly the same fixed
  3. 01:50:451 - did you forget some section here? the volume is too low. fixed
  4. 01:55:534 - spacing after here is quite under average. highly suggest you rearrange the patterns. fixed
[Normal]
  1. this diff seems to be mapped to get rid of the star rating fixed
  2. 00:34:867 (4,5) - maybe remove? fixed
  3. 00:43:534 - make 00:43:867 (1) a slider start here? fixed
  4. 01:09:201 - add note? fixed
  5. 01:11:867 - ^
  6. 1 more slider since 01:57:367 to 01:58:034? fixed
no much comment on Hard :) keep up the good working!
謝謝Colin Hou的建議 :)
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meiikyuu
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Joined August 2011
meiikyuu
irc chat mod
http://puu.sh/4SQ7k.txt

star~
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Having quite a blast with this one, I'd check this one if I had time for rank. Have a star, this is worth BATs looking into
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
SPOILER
10:14 smallboat: 哈囉妮妮~
10:14 Nymph: @@
10:14 smallboat: @@?
10:15 Nymph: @@官網能上了
10:15 smallboat: 圖被打星不知道能不能找你check下 先別泡
10:15 smallboat: 恩
10:15 smallboat: 恭喜
10:17 Nymph: @@比以前好不少了
10:18 smallboat: @@
10:18 smallboat: 謝
10:18 smallboat: 有很多好心人給建議
10:18 Nymph: 嗯
10:19 smallboat: 還是覺得有些要改
10:19 Nymph: 唔
10:19 smallboat: @@
10:20 Nymph: 那就改唄@@
10:20 smallboat: 噗
10:21 smallboat: 你覺得有要改的地方嗎?
10:21 Nymph: 一些小地方吧
10:22 smallboat: ins?
10:23 Nymph: 嗯
10:23 smallboat: 想知道些
10:25 Nymph: 細節就是
10:26 smallboat: 恩
10:26 smallboat: 沒關係
10:27 smallboat: 可以講
10:27 Nymph: 00:12:701 (5) - slidershape略突然
10:27 smallboat: 歐歐
10:27 Nymph: 只有一個是這麼隨意的slider在這個part
10:28 Nymph: 00:38:034 (1) -
10:28 smallboat: 恩 真的感覺不太協調
10:28 Nymph: 只需要結尾靜音 開頭不需要靜音
10:28 smallboat: 阿隊了
10:28 Nymph: 爲了貫徹靜音的絕對性 結尾改成soft hitsound
10:29 Nymph: 不用normal
10:29 smallboat: 那個sliderslide我放進去沒什麼效果
10:29 smallboat: 好
10:29 Nymph: 00:56:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
10:30 Nymph: 既然用了藍線slider 就不要保持spacing了 可以自由拉一些排列
10:30 smallboat: 好
10:30 Nymph: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045556
10:31 Nymph: 像這樣 把距離拉開 才有跟著鼓的壓藍線slider的疾走感
10:31 smallboat: 好
10:31 smallboat: 不錯耶
10:31 Nymph: 00:59:534 (1) - 這種跟你前面藍線比就普通了 是我也會用一些新鮮東西在裏面
10:32 Nymph: 01:08:867 (3) -
10:32 smallboat: 想知道要怎麼變化
10:32 Nymph: 這後面還很缺hitsound
10:32 Nymph: 變化嗎
10:32 smallboat: 恩是
10:33 Nymph: 節奏我覺得用藍線slider就好 用一些不同的排列
10:33 smallboat: 好
10:33 smallboat: 就剛剛你傳的圖差不多那樣?
10:34 Nymph: 我只是舉一個例子嘛
10:34 Nymph: 那只是選項的一種
10:34 smallboat: 喔喔@@
10:34 Nymph: 換造型 換方向 各種方法
10:34 smallboat: 好的 我也會用自己的想像力
10:34 Nymph: 嗯
10:34 smallboat: 好
10:34 Nymph: 01:08:867 (3) -
10:34 Nymph: 這後面很多地方可以做finish或者clap
10:35 Nymph: 目前空洞洞的
10:35 smallboat: 好
10:36 Nymph: 01:48:117 (3) - 這個歪啦
10:36 Nymph: 01:47:367 (1) - 這個跟之前說過的一樣
10:36 smallboat: 阿
10:37 Nymph: 發現你連打不是很會排細節啊
10:37 smallboat: 造型不好?
10:37 Nymph: 你要試著把你連打的東西還有之後的slider 做成一個比較順手的曲綫
10:38 smallboat: 恩阿 這01:46:700 (2) - 連打後不知怎接
10:38 Nymph: 你試著把這種排列的每個圓的中心都挑出來
10:38 Nymph: 然後你把這些中心點連接上
10:38 Nymph: 看看是不是溫柔的曲綫
10:38 Nymph: 01:48:034 (2,3,4) -
10:38 Nymph: 這種一看就是個鈍角嘛
10:39 smallboat: 1~5的曲線?
10:39 Nymph: 只要是曲綫就好了 成角度的都略有問題
10:39 Nymph: 關掉grid 自己手動拽下看看
10:39 Nymph: 弄成自己看著特別順眼的角度
10:40 smallboat: 好的
10:43 smallboat: 我是感覺最後一段擺不好
10:44 Nymph: 唔
10:44 smallboat: 有擺了幾次 還是怪怪:(
10:45 Nymph: 靈感不夠唄
10:46 smallboat: 好像是

some ircmod
Awaken
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Awaken
恭喜rank
EmingK
341 posts
Joined October 2012
EmingK

Awaken wrote:

恭喜rank
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
I think offset +5 could be better

also here is some small checks

Insane
00:24:367 (2,3) - this spacing is unexpected because it is so similar to 00:24:034 (1,2) - . It's really hard to understand.
00:57:534 (3,4) - this spacing is unexpected due to something like 00:56:867 (1,2,3) - that already presented. It is confusing to switch to this.

Yuki
00:44:534 (1) - strange that it starts here not the bottom one.
01:55:118 (13) - this starts better on 01:55:201 (white tick) it's strange that it starts on the blue tick
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Frostmourne wrote:

I think offset +5 could be better if smallboat decided to change the offset, then I change it~ 小船你改的话就帮我一起改了

Yuki
00:44:534 (1) - strange that it starts here not the bottom one. 00:44:534 (1,2) - according to the previous jumps, that 00:44:701 (2) - should be at like 500,172 , but I like to put it at 255,327 to make a reverse jump =3=
01:55:118 (13) - this starts better on 01:55:201 (white tick) it's strange that it starts on the blue tick fixed~
Thanks, Frost~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Frostmourne wrote:

I think offset +5 could be better

also here is some small checks

Insane
00:24:367 (2,3) - this spacing is unexpected because it is so similar to 00:24:034 (1,2) - . It's really hard to understand.
00:57:534 (3,4) - this spacing is unexpected due to something like 00:56:867 (1,2,3) - that already presented. It is confusing to switch to this.
Okay, I will fix this offset and above problems in a few days . Thanks come check in free time, Frostmourne ! :)
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
I've already talked with the mapper a few times about his map and I wanna help ranking this, so here's my mod~

[General]
  1. 01:17:867 (1) - 这个转盘之后的break可以取消 右击break即可删除 所有DIFF
  2. 音效比较差 tick音效和静音sliderslide都是没有
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:534 (1) - 一般来说建议EZ和NM转盘之后接的NOTE处于屏幕中心左右 就像这样 http://puu.sh/4UtsM.jpg
  2. 00:18:867 (3) - 滑条头+whistle
  3. 00:20:201 (1) - 照理来说 既然你跟了VOCAL 那么这根滑条最好从00:20:367 - 这里开始
  4. 00:27:534 (1) - 00:28:534 (2) - 滑条头+clap
  5. 00:31:201 (2) - clap
  6. 00:33:534 (2,3) - 取消头部finish 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 00:35:534 (1) - 尾巴全部+clap
  7. 00:43:534 (1) - 头部finish
  8. 01:06:867 (4) - 滑条头+whistle
  9. 01:23:534 (1) - 取消头部clap
  10. 01:27:534 (3) - 取消屁股clap
  11. 01:31:534 (1) - 取消头部clap 换成finish
  12. 01:58:201 (1) - 01:58:367 - 这里开始 老地方结束
  13. 总体来说 排列略差 没有全局性 而且其实可以用tick音效 不过作为新人也是算勉强过关

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:534 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的音效可以说是巨违和 建议把clap全部去掉
  2. 01:00:534 (5) - 为什么这边会突然间距变大一半多 我觉得没啥理由 也是属于以前就有的老问题
  3. 00:38:701 (2,3,4) - 丑 丑也会影响flow 老问题 不够平滑
  4. 00:40:201 (5,6) - 没啥梗 此问题也出现多次 just put note everywhere 可以像前面那样 平行 http://puu.sh/4Uulg.jpg
  5. 01:17:201 (5) - 去掉whistle
  6. 01:17:867 (7) - 加note 转盘后面红线开始
  7. 01:27:534 (5,6,7) - 丑 而且因为是锐角所以flow也是极差 还不如与01:27:534 (5) - 的开头重叠
  8. 01:41:534 (3) - 去掉finish加在01:41:867 (1) - 的头部
  9. 01:52:034 (4) - 加个NOTE用来保持节奏
  10. 01:57:867 (2,3) - 相对于前面01:56:034 (2,3,4) - 这组又变了DS 不仅丑而且在HARD也没有什么意义
  11. 全DIFF都有较多的ds变化是毫无意义 并且也是没有全局性 排列和音效的连贯性也是较差 仍然需要改善

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:034 (4) - 移到302 136 00:07:201 (5) - 移到 359 189 做一个正四边形远比现在这样3角FLOW要好的多
  2. 00:08:201 (1) - 00:18:867 (1) - 换成单点会舒服点
  3. 00:17:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以跳 但是间距有点略大 建议减小一点
  4. 00:16:867 (2) - 去掉屁股的whistle
  5. 00:25:534 (3) - 00:28:201 (3) - 去掉头部finish
  6. 00:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 毫无美观 为什么不复制00:36:034 (2,3,4) - 到后2组 然后分别旋转120度呢？ 效果图：http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg 这样做了以后别忘了用00:38:034 (1) - 做个blanket包住00:36:700 (5) -
  7. 00:38:534 (1,2) - 00:39:201 (5,6) - 1-2的间距和5-6的间距请保持一致
  8. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 删了
  9. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距略大 没有理由 在我看来stack着的连打会比较好
  10. 00:42:867 (5,6,7) - 仍然是无理由的间距偏大
  11. 00:44:867 (1) - 加finish
  12. 00:47:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - 可以用00:47:867 (5,6,1) - 这3NOTE先组一个正三角 然后再做4和7在那2组的当中 如果不懂我的意思可以QQ群M我 00:47:534 (4,7,1,2) - 这4个也可以组成菱形
  13. 00:49:867 (4) - 删了 加在00:50:034 -
  14. 01:00:534 (4,5,6,7) - 这边可以像 00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这边做的这样啊 是对应的 这就是所谓的没有连贯性 后面也是
  15. 01:06:534 (3,4,5) - 丑 注意间距和梗
  16. 01:12:867 (1,2,3) - 也是不太好看 有偏移 我觉得这边直线好 不过这梗也不咋的
  17. 01:16:534 (4,5,6) - 这个也是
  18. 01:17:534 (3) - 弧度向下 http://puu.sh/4UvPu.jpg
  19. 01:18:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱.. 建议remap这段
  20. kiai也是很乱......
  21. 个人感觉还没到能RANK的质量 抱歉上次我好像确认错误了.... 我建议你还是DS统一些 这点可以参照我的1st rank:http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 没啥质量不过作为新人图也是可以算勉强过关 全局也多保持一些梗 GD就先不MOD了 再找点MOD 好好改改 改到你觉得差不多了就叫我

Good luck <3.
smallboat
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Topic Starter
smallboat
我將會編輯這則貼文數次(I'll edit it then paste the text several times) , 紅色字是指我目前的修復進度(Red word is my current progress of the repair).

Chloe wrote:

I've already talked with the mapper a few times about his map and I wanna help ranking this, so here's my mod~

[General]
  1. 01:17:867 (1) - 这个转盘之后的break可以取消 右击break即可删除 所有DIFF 我都不知道break可以取消..
  2. 音效比较差 tick音效和静音sliderslide都是没有 tick音效已放入(目前Normal)
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:534 (1) - 一般来说建议EZ和NM转盘之后接的NOTE处于屏幕中心左右 就像这样 http://puu.sh/4UtsM.jpg fixed
  2. 00:18:867 (3) - 滑条头+whistle fixed
  3. 00:20:201 (1) - 照理来说 既然你跟了VOCAL 那么这根滑 条最好从00:20:367 - 这里开始 fixed 之前也是感覺這邊不太協調..
  4. 00:27:534 (1) - 00:28:534 (2) - 滑条头+clap fixed
  5. 00:31:201 (2) - clap fixed
  6. 00:33:534 (2,3) - 取消头部finish 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 00:35:534 (1) - 尾巴全部+clap fixed
  7. 00:43:534 (1) - 头部finish fixed
  8. 01:06:867 (4) - 滑条头+whistle fixed
  9. 01:23:534 (1) - 取消头部clap fixed
  10. 01:27:534 (3) - 取消屁股clap fixed
  11. 01:31:534 (1) - 取消头部clap 换成finish fixed
  12. 01:58:201 (1) - 01:58:367 - 这里开始 老地方结束 fixed

  13. 总体来说 排列略差 没有全局性 而且其实可以用tick音效 不过作为新人也是算勉强过关 謝，會改善。



[Hard]
  1. 00:31:534 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的音效可以说是巨违和 建议把clap全部去掉 fixed
  2. 01:00:534 (5) - 为什么这边会突然间距变大一半多 我觉得没啥理由 也是属于以前就有的老问题 fixed
  3. 00:38:701 (2,3,4) - 丑 丑也会影响flow 老问题 不够平滑 fixed
  4. 00:40:201 (5,6) - 没啥梗 此问题也出现多次 just put note everywhere 可以像前面那样 平行 http://puu.sh/4Uulg.jpg fixed
  5. 01:17:201 (5) - 去掉whistle fixed
  6. 01:17:867 (7) - 加note 转盘后面红线开始 fixed
  7. 01:27:534 (5,6,7) - 丑 而且因为是锐角所以flow也是极差 还不如与01:27:534 (5) - 的开头重叠 修成其他了
  8. 01:41:534 (3) - 去掉finish加在01:41:867 (1) - 的头部 fixed
  9. 01:52:034 (4) - 加个NOTE用来保持节奏 fixed
  10. 01:57:867 (2,3) - 相对于前面01:56:034 (2,3,4) - 这组又变了DS 不仅丑而且在HARD也没有什么意义 fixed
  11. 全DIFF都有较多的ds变化是毫无意义 并且也是没有全局性 排列和音效的连贯性也是较差 仍然需要改善
重排了一遍，有照弧度了


[Insane]
  1. 00:07:034 (4) - 移到302 136 00:07:201 (5) - 移到 359 189 做一个正四边形远比现在这样3角FLOW要好的多 fixed
  2. 00:08:201 (1) - 00:18:867 (1) - 换成单点会舒服点 fixed
  3. 00:17:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以跳 但是间距有点略大 建议减小一点 fixed
  4. 00:16:867 (2) - 去掉屁股的whistle fixed
  5. 00:25:534 (3) - 00:28:201 (3) - 去掉头部finish fixed
  6. 00:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 毫无美观 为什么不复制00:36:034 (2,3,4) - 到后2组 然后分别旋转120度呢？ 效果图：http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg 这样做了以后别忘了用00:38:034 (1) - 做个blanket包住00:36:700 (5) - fixed
  7. 00:38:534 (1,2) - 00:39:201 (5,6) - 1-2的间距和5-6的间距请保持一致 fixed
  8. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 删了 這不用刪吧 是不是打錯..
  9. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距略大 没有理由 在我看来stack着的连打会比较好 fixed
  10. 00:42:867 (5,6,7) - 仍然是无理由的间距偏大 那這是要減小?
  11. 00:44:867 (1) - 加finish fixed
  12. 00:47:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - 可以用00:47:867 (5,6,1) - 这3NOTE先组一个正三角 然后再做4和7在那2组的当中 如果不懂我的意思可以QQ群M我 00:47:534 (4,7,1,2) - 这4个也可以组成菱形 fixed 應該是這樣吧
  13. 00:49:867 (4) - 删了 加在00:50:034 - 我覺得這邊這樣加怪怪的 我換另一種了
  14. 01:00:534 (4,5,6,7) - 这边可以像 00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这边做的这样啊 是对应的 这就是所谓的没有连贯性 后面也是 fixed,後面我再想想..
  15. 01:06:534 (3,4,5) - 丑 注意间距和梗 fixed
  16. 01:12:867 (1,2,3) - 也是不太好看 有偏移 我觉得这边直线好 不过这梗也不咋的 這個再考慮
  17. 01:16:534 (4,5,6) - 这个也是 fixed,後面改直線
  18. 01:17:534 (3) - 弧度向下 http://puu.sh/4UvPu.jpg fixed
  19. 01:18:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱.. 建议remap这段
  20. kiai也是很乱......
  21. 个人感觉还没到能RANK的质量 抱歉上次我好像确认错误了.... 我建议你还是DS统一些 这点可以参照我的1st rank:http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 没啥质量不过作为新人图也是可以算勉强过关 全局也多保持一些梗 GD就先不MOD了 再找点MOD 好好改改 改到你觉得差不多了就叫我

Good luck <3.
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
hi, from my queue XD

[Yuki]

00:02:706 - try this rhythm for follow the vocal?
00:20:706 (5) - I think 258|100 is already fine for this. for straight to a previous slider.
00:31:206 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream better flow,
SPOILER
00:36:539 - I think add note here on 256|243 would be great too, its a strong beat imo. and it still look symmetry.
00:39:206 - add note?
01:28:206 (4) - move a bit down to make it's tail blanket with the previous 4's head.

[Insane]

00:24:039 (1,2) - what about swap NC? I think the spacing looks a bit confuse.
00:41:539 (6) - what about blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:44:872 (1) - make these stream more flow and slider too. maybe like this
SPOILER
01:43:872 (7) - move it for balance distance is better, balance rhythm but not spacing :/

[Hard]

00:45:539 (2) - the current one is almost overlap, what about this
SPOILER

[Normal]

01:31:539 (1,2,3) - make it to triangle pattern?
SPOILER

that's all, good luck :3
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

P A N wrote:

[Yuki]

00:02:706 - try this rhythm for follow the vocal? I think mine follows better :3
00:20:706 (5) - I think 258|100 is already fine for this. for straight to a previous slider.
00:31:206 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream better flow,
SPOILER
00:36:539 - I think add note here on 256|243 would be great too, its a strong beat imo. and it still look symmetry.
00:39:206 - add note?
01:28:206 (4) - move a bit down to make it's tail blanket with the previous 4's head.
no commet → changed/fixed

thx~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

P A N wrote:

hi, from my queue XD

[Insane]

00:24:039 (1,2) - what about swap NC? I think the spacing looks a bit confuse.
00:41:539 (6) - what about blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:44:872 (1) - make these stream more flow and slider too. maybe like this
SPOILER
01:43:872 (7) - move it for balance distance is better, balance rhythm but not spacing :/

[Hard]

00:45:539 (2) - the current one is almost overlap, what about this
SPOILER

[Normal]

01:31:539 (1,2,3) - make it to triangle pattern?
SPOILER

that's all, good luck :3
All fixed,thank PAN :) (wait update)
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
IRC LOG
Insane
SPOILER
11:21 Satellite: 00:31:539 (4,5,6,7) -
11:21 Satellite: I think stream is not Fit
11:21 Satellite: http://puu.sh/4XVjF.jpg
11:21 smallboat: okay
11:21 Satellite: Slider Reverse
11:21 Satellite: try this
11:21 smallboat: oh?
11:22 smallboat: two times reverse?
11:22 smallboat: no 1 ?
11:22 smallboat: okay
11:22 Satellite: yes
11:22 Satellite: two reverse~
11:22 smallboat: okay
11:22 Satellite: yeah
11:23 smallboat: I feel this is a pattern ,too :3
11:23 smallboat: XD
11:23 smallboat: I actually did not think.
11:24 Satellite: 01:01:872 (1) - remove Nc
11:24 Satellite: 01:02:206 (2) - add Nc
11:24 smallboat: okay
11:24 smallboat: NC ..is not good at.. :<
11:24 Satellite: ok
11:24 Satellite: "I guess"
11:24 Satellite: 01:08:039 (4) - remove note
11:25 smallboat: okay
11:25 Satellite: 01:14:872 (3) - I think
11:25 Satellite: stack is head.
11:25 Satellite: try this
11:26 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056250
11:26 Satellite: this
11:26 Satellite: you use "4 slider"
11:26 Satellite: Ctrl+G try this
11:26 smallboat: oh? This feel good,indeed.
11:26 smallboat: okay
11:28 Satellite: 01:25:372 (6) - I don't like this place... >.>
11:28 smallboat: @@
11:28 smallboat: feel...no arc
11:29 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056256
11:29 Satellite: try jump?
11:29 Satellite: 01:25:372 (6,7,8,9) -
11:29 smallboat: wow , change a lot ,I "ll try it.
11:29 smallboat: okay
11:30 Satellite: 01:30:539 (8) - end clap delete
11:30 Satellite: not fit I guess
11:30 smallboat: okay
11:30 Satellite: If you use clap
11:30 Satellite: add "First"
11:30 smallboat: Okay
11:30 Satellite: 01:34:872 (1) - remove Nc
11:31 smallboat: Okay
11:31 Satellite: 01:37:540 (1) - ^
11:31 Satellite: 01:38:872 (1) - ^
11:31 Satellite: 01:39:539 (4) - add Nc
11:31 smallboat: okay
11:32 Satellite: 01:56:039 (3,4,5) - Not fit
11:32 smallboat: need replace?
11:32 Satellite: http://puu.sh/4XVPM.jpg
11:33 Satellite: use this
11:33 smallboat: end is blue?
11:33 smallboat: okay
11:33 Satellite: That's all

GOOD LUCK
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
Hi hi~
from your request ;3

Normal
- 00:18:872(3) - 這個間距沒有調得很好,修正一下 (0.97,0.96)
- 00:32:872(1,2,3) - 這三個不建議黏在一起
- 00:43:539(1,2,3) - 我比較喜歡以NC來分一個段落,這裡可以這樣放 :
- 00:57:539(2) - 試試這樣,可以指向(3)然後跟 00:58:872(1) 有個對稱
- 01:30:206(1,2) - 讓包圍的軌跡為1.0的間距? 只是建議..我覺得這樣比較整齊 ._.
- 01:50:539(1,2,3) - (1)往右一格,然後(2,3)的blanket

Hard
- 01:09:706(7,8) - 不是很喜歡這裡的重疊...可以讓(7)覆蓋在(8)的開頭?
- 01:35:539(3,4,5) - 沒有覆蓋得很好 (0.03)
- 01:46:539(3,4,1) - 摁..有點超出螢幕,建議稍微修改一下

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 :
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法

Insane
- 00:49:372(3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該是這樣 :
- 00:49:539 - 如果你有改這裡一樣要有whstle
- 00:50:539(5) - 去掉whistle...
- 01:57:872(3) - 我覺得這個距離應該拉大,呈一個正三角形

大概就這些,有些小部分blanket我不想抓,不過你可以考慮看看
祝早日rank~~!! :3
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

bigfrog wrote:

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 : 感觉没啥必要
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket 其实这里也可以说是包住了，slider形状的问题而已
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法 这里会自动偏移的所以只要stack就好了
no change
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi m4m from your request

let'su go

Normal

- 00:00:872 (1) - whistle
- 00:01:539 (2) - whistle on tail
- 00:17:539 (2) - you should follow the voice here
SPOILER
- 01:24:872 (3) - in this way ?
SPOILER
- 01:35:539 (3,1) - why u didn't use the same shape ?
- 01:38:206 (3,1) - same here

Hard

- 00:02:039 (3) - In this way better flow imo
SPOILER
- 00:08:872 (3,4) - what about change into slider, i mean :
SPOILER
- 00:15:872 (4) - delete and extend 00:15:372 (3) - to 00:16:039 -
- 00:41:872 (4,1) - you can improve this blanket
- 01:54:872 (3,2,3,4) - or like this ? symmetry with y axis
SPOILER

Insane

- 00:04:706 (1,2) - improve the blanket here
- 00:08:539 (2) - delete the slider just put a note at 00:08:539 -
- just my opinion but all this triplet 00:36:039 (2,3,4) - 00:36:706 (5,6,7) - 00:37:372 (8,9,10) - 00:38:706 (2,3,4) - and the others doesn't really fit, it's kinda overmapped '-'
- 00:49:206 (2,3) - this part is kinda confused, you're following the piano then you following voice, and you return on the piano , u should follow only the piano here so delete the slider and add a note 00:49:539 -
- 01:38:872 (3) - in this way
SPOILER
- 01:44:206 (8) - delete this note and change 01:43:872 (7) - into a slider who end at 01:44:206 -
well overall it's a good insane :3 but there is some part overmapped for me '-'

Yuki's Insane

- 00:03:039 (2,3,4,5) - make it like this, better imo
SPOILER
- 00:04:706 (3) - delete the reverse and extend to 00:05:539 -
- 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really like this kind of stream, but it's a choice >.<
- 00:51:373 (3) - what are u following here ? '-' maybe delete ?
- excepted this nothing else to say nice diff :3

that's all for me good luck on ranking ;)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

bigfrog wrote:

Hi hi~
from your request ;3

Normal
- 00:18:872(3) - 這個間距沒有調得很好,修正一下 (0.97,0.96)
- 00:32:872(1,2,3) - 這三個不建議黏在一起
- 00:43:539(1,2,3) - 我比較喜歡以NC來分一個段落,這裡可以這樣放 :
- 00:57:539(2) - 試試這樣,可以指向(3)然後跟 00:58:872(1) 有個對稱
- 01:30:206(1,2) - 讓包圍的軌跡為1.0的間距? 只是建議..我覺得這樣比較整齊 ._.
- 01:50:539(1,2,3) - (1)往右一格,然後(2,3)的blanket

Hard
- 01:09:706(7,8) - 不是很喜歡這裡的重疊...可以讓(7)覆蓋在(8)的開頭?
- 01:35:539(3,4,5) - 沒有覆蓋得很好 (0.03)
- 01:46:539(3,4,1) - 摁..有點超出螢幕,建議稍微修改一下

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 :
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法

Insane
- 00:49:372(3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該是這樣 :
- 00:49:539 - 如果你有改這裡一樣要有whstle
- 00:50:539(5) - 去掉whistle...
- 01:57:872(3) - 我覺得這個距離應該拉大,呈一個正三角形

大概就這些,有些小部分blanket我不想抓,不過你可以考慮看看
祝早日rank~~!! :3
幾乎修復了，謝謝你，大青蛙 :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

-Umi- wrote:

Yuki's Insane

- 00:03:039 (2,3,4,5) - make it like this, better imo now is better imo :)
SPOILER
- 00:04:706 (3) - delete the reverse and extend to 00:05:539 - nothing on 00:05:539 -, so nope
- 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really like this kind of stream, but it's a choice >.< ><
- 00:51:373 (3) - what are u following here ? '-' maybe delete ? to show a continuity of the vocal
- excepted this nothing else to say nice diff :3
also no change
thx for modding~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

-Umi- wrote:

hi m4m from your request

let'su go OKAY

Normal

- 00:00:872 (1) - whistle fixed
- 00:01:539 (2) - whistle on tail fixed
- 00:17:539 (2) - you should follow the voice here fixed
SPOILER
- 01:24:872 (3) - in this way ? fixed
SPOILER
- 01:35:539 (3,1) - why u didn't use the same shape ? fixed It"s great!
- 01:38:206 (3,1) - same here fixed

Hard

- 00:02:039 (3) - In this way better flow imo fixed
SPOILER
- 00:08:872 (3,4) - what about change into slider, i mean : fixed
SPOILER
- 00:15:872 (4) - delete and extend 00:15:372 (3) - to 00:16:039 - fixed
- 00:41:872 (4,1) - you can improve this blanket fixed
- 01:54:872 (3,2,3,4) - or like this ? symmetry with y axis fixed It"s great
SPOILER

Insane

- 00:04:706 (1,2) - improve the blanket here fixed
- 00:08:539 (2) - delete the slider just put a note at 00:08:539 - fixed
- just my opinion but all this triplet 00:36:039 (2,3,4) - 00:36:706 (5,6,7) - 00:37:372 (8,9,10) - 00:38:706 (2,3,4) - and the others doesn't really fit, it's kinda overmapped '-' Well,It"s okay,but I reduce 00:38:706 "s blue line this.
- 00:49:206 (2,3) - this part is kinda confused, you're following the piano then you following voice, and you return on the piano , u should follow only the piano here so delete the slider and add a note 00:49:539 - fixed
- 01:38:872 (3) - in this way fixed
SPOILER
- 01:44:206 (8) - delete this note and change 01:43:872 (7) - into a slider who end at 01:44:206 - fixed. GJ!
well overall it's a good insane :3 but there is some part overmapped for me '-' I'll think about it

that's all for me good luck on ranking ;)
Thanks -Umi- "s mod ! :)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time.
[Normal]
maybe you need Easy diff or make more easier.
Placement
01:27:539(1) move down no to overlap with HP bar.
Hit Sonud
00:11:539(1) add whistle
01:04:206(3) add finish at end
[Hard]
Placement
00:35:872(4,1) swap NC sbecause of finish.
01]45:206(5,1)^ and KIAI finishes on this.
01:12:039(4) I suppose this stack is a bit difficult for Hard, so move (5)'s head better.
01:36:872(1) move down not to overlap with HP bar.
01:57:372(1) too closer, it's confused for player.
[Insane]
HP8 isn't common, HP7 better.
Placement
01:03:206(4) the top of slider overlapped with HP bar, move down please.
01:20:872~ I don't agree with these jump placement since music sounds calmly.
Rhythm
00:05:872 unnecessaly green line
00:38:706 ^ and more.
00:38:039(1) for me, only note better since music has stopped.
01:47:372(1)^
Hit Sonud
01:02:206(1) add finish at head not whistle
01:07:539(1) add finish not clap
[Yuki's Insane]
Placement
00:17:872(4) stack at (2) not (5) better since vocal has emphasized.
00:26:539(2) CTRL+G would be more nice flow I guess.
01:26:872(3)^
01:05:872(1,2,1,2,1,2,) well, it's too confused when I played. autually you can place these notes clearly.
01:14:206(1) change the direction like this? maybe it is nice flow to (2)
SPOILER
01:20:206(1,2,3,4) these notes should follow previous rotation style, and it is playable.
SPOILER


Good Luck.
Koihik
40 posts
Joined January 2013
Koihik
Hello.
from #modreq


Yuki's Insane

  1. 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段好维和,感觉不适合放连打
  2. 00:58:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里怎么不对称呢
  3. 00:59:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉可以跳一点
  4. 01:20:706 (4) - break time?
  5. 01:41:206 (2) - 这个挡的有点略微严重了
  6. 01:46:873 (1,2,3,4) - 太坑了,简直是纯粹为了坑人的梗嘛.本身34的数字已经被挡住了.
  7. 01:44:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
  8. 01:51:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这里是这样的节奏和NC:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:54:206 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这个串不对称,用copy的把
Insane

  1. 00:32:706 (2) - 去了？
  2. 00:44:872 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串不圆,关grid开ds摆的圆一点把
  3. 00:46:706 (2) - 这个滑条换成note再尾部把？既然后面都没跟vocal,这里也不跟把
  4. 01:18:872 (3) - NC?
  5. 01:20:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的music感觉不适合跳啊,这里放跳有点莫名
  6. 01:40:706 (6,7,1) - 这里感觉这样的节奏好一点:
    SPOILER
  7. 01:54:872 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以稍微摆的开一点
Normal和Hard貌似没什么问题 根本没看把喂！

Good Luck! 8-)
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
嗯，说好的mod
我觉得必要的地方会用*标注

Yuki`s Insane
00:02:706 (1,2,3,4,5) -
试试这种排列
感觉你后面都是比较飘逸的排列啊，这里折一下挺别扭
相对的00:04:373 (1,2,3) - 也动一下位置，让3关于Y轴对称
00:17:539 (2,3,4) - 还是觉得交替点会好很多
00:43:539 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 仅仅是个提议，这里明显的是papapa papapa papapa的排列啊（虽然单从时间间隔上来看不是），这样真的没问题？
01:21:039~01:23:206 加个spinner。。。我理解你的想法，不过个人觉得这里需要一个spinner，会有种引擎再加速的赶脚
01:31:123 (4,5) - 4与5的头重合
01:43:872 (2) - 变成一个slide，持续到r01:44:206，最好能加个绿线减个到半速或者0.75倍速

Insane
00:10:539 (4) - 顺时针转45°，同时00:11:206 (6) - 逆时针转45°，配合节奏
00:33:206 (4,5,6,7) - 顺序换成4,7,6,5，似乎之前的flow有些僵硬……感觉上
00:48:206 (6) - 移动到（472,336），还是觉得这里的节奏比较适合把梗做成落体的感觉，然后7再弹起来
01:15:206 (4) - reverse selection ,这只是个试验型意见
01:33:539 (1,2,3,4) - 顺序换成1,3,4,2，感觉这样flow能强些
01:41:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序换成1,4,3,2,6,5，理由同上
01:54:540 (5) - nc
01:55:039 (2,3,4) - 都nc

Hard
Good Map！

Normal
01:43:539 (3,4) -
试试这种排列
高潮结束的时候给个不一样的排列应该是可以的吧，嗯

Over~
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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

kajiyatta wrote:

[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time. Okay, I think a moment.
[Normal]
maybe you need Easy diff or make more easier. Okay, I think a moment.
Placement
01:27:539(1) move down no to overlap with HP bar. fixed
Hit Sonud
00:11:539(1) add whistle fixed
01:04:206(3) add finish at end fixed
[Hard]
Placement
00:35:872(4,1) swap NC sbecause of finish. fixed
01]45:206(5,1)^ and KIAI finishes on this. fixed
01:12:039(4) I suppose this stack is a bit difficult for Hard, so move (5)'s head better. fixed
01:36:872(1) move down not to overlap with HP bar. fixed
01:57:372(1) too closer, it's confused for player. fixed
[Insane]
HP8 isn't common, HP7 better. Think a moment
Placement
01:03:206(4) the top of slider overlapped with HP bar, move down please. fixed
01:20:872~ I don't agree with these jump placement since music sounds calmly. Many testplayer say good , no change
Rhythm
00:05:872 unnecessaly green line fixed
00:38:706 ^ and more. fixed
00:38:039(1) for me, only note better since music has stopped. Think a moment
01:47:372(1)^ ^
Hit Sonud
01:02:206(1) add finish at head not whistle fixed
01:07:539(1) add finish not clap fixed

Good Luck.
Thanks kajiyatta's mod ! :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

kajiyatta wrote:

[Yuki's Insane]
Placement
00:17:872(4) stack at (2) not (5) better since vocal has emphasized. fixed
00:26:539(2) CTRL+G would be more nice flow I guess. nope
01:26:872(3)^ fixed
01:05:872(1,2,1,2,1,2,) well, it's too confused when I played. autually you can place these notes clearly. That's a test of reading skill
01:14:206(1) change the direction like this? maybe it is nice flow to (2) fixed
SPOILER
01:20:206(1,2,3,4) these notes should follow previous rotation style, and it is playable. this is also playable
SPOILER


Good Luck.
Thanks for modding

Koihik wrote:

Yuki's Insane

  1. 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段好维和,感觉不适合放连打 这段不违和，挺适合放连打
  2. 00:58:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里怎么不对称呢 哪里不对称了？
  3. 00:59:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉可以跳一点 这里其实挺难打的
  4. 01:20:706 (4) - break time? GD运输过程中被吃掉了，不过为了全程无break我摆了个转盘
  5. 01:41:206 (2) - 这个挡的有点略微严重了 我喜欢挡人我自豪
  6. 01:46:873 (1,2,3,4) - 太坑了,简直是纯粹为了坑人的梗嘛.本身34的数字已经被挡住了. yeahyeahyeahhh
  7. 01:44:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) 同上
  8. 01:51:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这里是这样的节奏和NC: 不好
    SPOILER
  9. 01:54:206 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这个串不对称,用copy的把 本来就是copy的
Thanks for modding
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod
我觉得必要的地方会用*标注

Yuki`s Insane
00:02:706 (1,2,3,4,5) -
试试这种排列
感觉你后面都是比较飘逸的排列啊，这里折一下挺别扭 还好，所以下面的这个也不动了
相对的00:04:373 (1,2,3) - 也动一下位置，让3关于Y轴对称 ^
00:17:539 (2,3,4) - 还是觉得交替点会好很多 这里按照上面Modder的改掉了
00:43:539 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 仅仅是个提议，这里明显的是papapa papapa papapa的排列啊（虽然单从时间间隔上来看不是），这样真的没问题？ 卧槽哦我还真是zz了，不过这样也挺好蛤蛤蛤蛤（钻地
01:21:039~01:23:206 加个spinner。。。我理解你的想法，不过个人觉得这里需要一个spinner，会有种引擎再加速的赶脚 加上了
01:31:123 (4,5) - 4与5的头重合 这样就不好玩了
01:43:872 (2) - 变成一个slide，持续到r01:44:206，最好能加个绿线减个到半速或者0.75倍速 nope

To smallboat:

Now you add OniJAM's Taiko map
check all tags: make like below
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami Yuki] Vocal miko OniJAM
don't use "[Minakami_Yuki]".
To make audio lead-in same
把song setup→design 最下面的letterbox during breaks关掉

To OniJAM:

check the offset
- Tu -
132 posts
Joined September 2012
- Tu -
dont open not finished
yuki insane
00:26:873 (3) - blanket
00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 個人覺得難讀
01:20:872 - 不加break不是就會死嗎qwq
tempo很好!!有極少許overmap,問題應該不大(有些stream是多餘的?)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

- Tu - wrote:

dont open not finished
yuki insane
00:26:873 (3) - blanket
00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 個人覺得難讀
01:20:872 - 不加break不是就會死嗎qwq
tempo很好!!有極少許overmap,問題應該不大(有些stream是多餘的?)
我稍微看了下你mod的那个是之前的，小船看来还没有上传，我还是post一份你再改一下mod好了
and this is harder than insane, 你可以认为是extra但是我觉得还是没有到extra的难度，顶多another，所以难读是很正常的，我这个难度的特点就是难度（笑
http://puu.sh/509EW.osu
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Koihik wrote:

Hello. HI
from #modreq

Insane

  1. 00:32:706 (2) - 去了？ 不了
  2. 00:44:872 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串不圆,关grid开ds摆的圆一点把 改了一些
  3. 00:46:706 (2) - 这个滑条换成note再尾部把？既然后面都没跟vocal,这里也不跟把 選擇了都擺note
  4. 01:18:872 (3) - NC? 沒變速 不NC
  5. 01:20:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的music感觉不适合跳啊,这里放跳有点莫名 是可以的 很多人都同意 可FC
  6. 01:40:706 (6,7,1) - 这里感觉这样的节奏好一点: 修改了stack 但沒用這個
    SPOILER
  7. 01:54:872 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以稍微摆的开一点 修了一些
Normal和Hard貌似没什么问题呵 根本没看把喂！

Good Luck! 8-)
謝謝Koihik的mod :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod 謝
我觉得必要的地方会用*标注


Insane
00:10:539 (4) - 顺时针转45°，同时00:11:206 (6) - 逆时针转45°，配合节奏 還不錯已採用
00:33:206 (4,5,6,7) - 顺序换成4,7,6,5，似乎之前的flow有些僵硬……感觉上 換了
00:48:206 (6) - 移动到（472,336），还是觉得这里的节奏比较适合把梗做成落体的感觉，然后7再弹起来 還不錯已採用
01:15:206 (4) - reverse selection ,这只是个试验型意见 恩.. 不了
01:33:539 (1,2,3,4) - 顺序换成1,3,4,2，感觉这样flow能强些 換了
01:41:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序换成1,4,3,2,6,5，理由同上 換了
01:54:540 (5) - nc 換了
01:55:039 (2,3,4) - 都nc 換了

Hard
Good Map！ 謝謝

Normal
01:43:539 (3,4) -
试试这种排列
高潮结束的时候给个不一样的排列应该是可以的吧，嗯 是還不錯，但難度超過了 不採用 :o

Over~
謝謝NPG的mod! :)
Dainesl
898 posts
Joined May 2012
Dainesl
ooh, a starred map ;w;

Random Taiko Mod~

General

Kiai Time is toggled extremely frequently sometimes (remove large clumps of inherited points)

Muzukashii

00:31:222 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - this pattern might be a bit long for a Muzu, maybe put one break somewhere?

00:35:555 - There's a clear beat here, put a note here, maybe?

00:39:388 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - again, this pattern's really long

01:04:555 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Why are these patterns so long...?! ;w;

01:48:722 (436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476) - three really long patterns here...put a couple of breaks in each one

Oni

01:01:555 (290) - Why don? use kat for consistency

and that's it really

sorry for short mod :oops:
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