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Pandiar
391 posts
Joined February 2012
Pandiar
Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish


[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point


[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane?
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry :(
I hope that you will help
good luck!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Pandiar wrote:

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？ I think that's not hard ;w;
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point ok
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1) same
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point ehhh. nope
00:39:201 (5) - how about this? sry
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider? ok
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm? sure
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern? it's square ><
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point ok
01:34:201 (1) - ^ ok
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful good
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance enn.nope
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point good idea
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this? that's not mistake :>
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish ok
thanks for modding
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace"
  2. tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
  2. 00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
  3. 00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
  4. 00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
  5. 00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
  7. 01:17:534- add a note?
  8. 01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
  9. 01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
  2. 00:36:701- add a note
  3. 01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
  2. 01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
  1. 01:42:034- add a note
  2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~
quantum-rose
quantum-rose
PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

RandomEffect wrote:

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace" https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66372 This map is ranked, so no need to change the title.

    [Yuki]
    1. 01:42:034- add a note nope, there is no sound
    2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete I hear there is no sound, so deleted

quantum-rose wrote:

[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致 ok我改了
其餘完美
thanks for moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddding
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
[general]
没啥大问题你个神马坡
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话
SPOILER
00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开


就是这样 加油 :) :)
Spencers
98 posts
Joined August 2012
Spencers
As your pm request :)

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.

[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR，HP，OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的，建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好，而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪 到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊，不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到　408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :?
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢 :)

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That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久 :( 　太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. :o 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
:arrow: 不管怎么样，图不错。
Hope this helps :)
祝Rank~!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]

[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开 nope
01:20:701 (4) - finish 加了觉得难听
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效 我觉得不用啊._.
00:45:534 (2) - finish 这个可以

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉 这个让小船看-。-

_Kaiser wrote:

[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、好吧 fixed
00:20:701 (5) - Finish 我觉得这个不用加，不过我觉得加在spin上不错
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :? 这个不改惹，除非BAT要求改=.=
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊.. 哪里有∑( ° △ °|||)
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G 故意的(oﾟωﾟo)
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好 fixed
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样 其实是一样的0.0
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些 还不圆滑么？我是复制ctrl+h,复制ctrl+j的……;w;
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢 :)

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To _Kaiser：我的hard现在完成大概1分半了，再稍微等等撒~
Thanks for modiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing~
bokito
76 posts
Joined July 2010
bokito
[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下
[Insane]
  2. 00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图 我建议往下拉一点
  3. 00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑 重新拉下
  4. 00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍 我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
  5. 00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
  6. 01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
  7. 01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

  8. 01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
  9. 01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
  10. 01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
  1. 01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观 修改下
  2. 00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢？
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
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Program By Weiren
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:

Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish


[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point


[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry :(
I hope that you will help
good luck!
Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar :)



RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace"
  2. tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
  2. 00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
  3. 00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
  4. 00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
  5. 00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
  7. 01:17:534- add a note?
  8. 01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
  9. 01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
  2. 00:36:701- add a note
  3. 01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
  2. 01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
  1. 01:42:034- add a note
  2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~
Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect :)


quantum-rose

quantum-rose wrote:

PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose :)


bokito

bokito wrote:

[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下
[Insane]
  2. 00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图 我建议往下拉一点
  3. 00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑 重新拉下
  4. 00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍 我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
  5. 00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
  6. 01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
  7. 01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

  8. 01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
  9. 01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
  10. 01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
  1. 01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观 修改下
  2. 00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢？
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
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謝謝bokito 全修復了 不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到.. :o

_Kaiser

_Kaiser wrote:

As your pm request :)

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.

[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR，HP，OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的，建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好，而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪 到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊，不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到　408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :?
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢 :)

--------------------------------------------------------
That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久 :( 　太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. :o 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
:arrow: 不管怎么样，图不错。
Hope this helps :)
祝Rank~!
謝謝_Kaiser 一些修復了 :)
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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

bokito wrote:

[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下
@smallboat


[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢？
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^ 好，和后面统一
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc 妥
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^ 妥
ttttttttttttttttthanks fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffor mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoding
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm?

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:

Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish


[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point


[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry :(
I hope that you will help
good luck!
Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar :)



RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace"
  2. tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
  2. 00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
  3. 00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
  4. 00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
  5. 00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
  7. 01:17:534- add a note?
  8. 01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
  9. 01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
  2. 00:36:701- add a note
  3. 01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
  2. 01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
  1. 01:42:034- add a note
  2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~
Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect :)


quantum-rose

quantum-rose wrote:

PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose :)


bokito

bokito wrote:

[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下
[Insane]
  2. 00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图 我建议往下拉一点
  3. 00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑 重新拉下
  4. 00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍 我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
  5. 00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
  6. 01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
  7. 01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

  8. 01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
  9. 01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
  10. 01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
  1. 01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观 修改下
  2. 00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢？
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
X

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謝謝bokito 全修復了 不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到.. :o

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]
没啥大问题你个神马坡
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话
SPOILER
00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开


就是这样 加油 :) :)
謝謝ZZHBOY 有些修復了 :)

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm? GOOD !

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867 GOOD !
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^
Almost all fixed , thanks 10crystalmask01 :) Very thank your random mod , wonderful ! :idea:
Last edited by smallboat , edited 3 times in total.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Modding as requested, will have to be in English though :P

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely.

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style)
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before?
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
  2. 00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
  3. 00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
  5. 01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
  6. 01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
  7. 01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
  8. 01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
  9. 01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
  10. 01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
  11. 01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
  12. 01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
  13. 01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  14. 01:28:867 (1) - ^
  15. 01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
  16. 01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
  17. 01:39:534 (4) - ^
  18. 01:57:034 (7) - like this?


    clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
    for example,
    01:23:867 -
    01:24:534 -
    01:25:201 -
    01:25:867 -
    01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff)

    but well done. nice diff.

[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

    beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ?
  2. 00:20:867 (1) - add finish
  3. 00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet.

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - )
Good luck :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.[/notice]
ALL FIXED, THANKS

James2250 wrote:

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music Rhythm start here so I add it.
OTHERS ALL FIXED,THANKS~
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.

Guy wrote:

[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff. THANK YOU~ALL FIXED~
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds?
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ :D
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Heya! :D Forgive me if I butcher any of my Chinese, haven't typed anything serious for a while. From PM request (for diffs Hard-Yuki).

[Hard]

用tick rate 2感觉的好一些,特别是在1/2上开始的slider (e.g. [Hard] 00:04:701 (5))。

01:09:701 - 加个circle? 这样flow的好一点。
01:41:534 (3,1) - 3最好不要完全盖住1的tail, 有的skin会看不出来有没有repeat.
01:50:201 (3) - 01:47:534里没有circle,所以我觉得这里也应该没有。
01:55:534 (1) - 用这里当head,改成1/1的slider?

玩的不错，跟音乐挺紧。

[Insane]

AR9觉的有点快,特别是开头的那个部分。用AR8试试？

00:24:034 (1) - circle比slider好一点。
00:31:867 (8) - 用4个circle,或者减去一个repeat & 把9放的远一点。
00:42:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow有点迷糊。改改位置？
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - 4-5的jump不是很自然。
01:20:867 (1) - 这里音乐比较轻,这些jump的fit不是很好
01:23:534 (1) - 这里可以加几个jump!

没有大问题，但是跟hard的难度差别有点高。

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。
这里AR9也是有点快。

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump?
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了

玩不了这个map，太难了XD

总共来说都不错, star~
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

-APXH wrote:

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

Kytoxid wrote:

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。 这是2nd insane，同样是insane =.=而且不是一个作者啊！
这里AR9也是有点快。 ar8完全不能玩

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。 不乱，就是往返梗，最后一个改个方向坑人一把
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了 低么0 0
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump? 滑条判定松，其实很容易接上
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了 :>
smallboat
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Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
James2250

James2250 wrote:

Modding as requested, will have to be in English though :P OKAY, Thanks "LINK"! :)

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely. OKAY

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though. Well , I reduce HP-1, and have a little break.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change fixed
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style) fixed
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics fixed
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it fixed
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before? fixed
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it fixed
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.Okay, I try it!
Thanks James2250 mod my map in free time !


Guy

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.
fixed


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
  2. 00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
  3. 00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
  5. 01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
  6. 01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
  7. 01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
  8. 01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
  9. 01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
  10. 01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
  11. 01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
  12. 01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
  13. 01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  14. 01:28:867 (1) - ^
  15. 01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
  16. 01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
  17. 01:39:534 (4) - ^
  18. 01:57:034 (7) - like this?


    clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
    for example,
    01:23:867 -
    01:24:534 -
    01:25:201 -
    01:25:867 -
    01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff) Okay

    but well done. nice diff.Thanks Guy :)
Almost fixed

[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

    beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ? fixed
  2. 00:20:867 (1) - add finish fixed
  3. 00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet. fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - ) fixed
Good luck :)
Thanks Guy ! Good Luck ,too. :)



-APXH

-APXH wrote:

[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds? Good idea , I fixed it!
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ :D Nothing,nevermind!
Thanks -APXH mod !
riffy
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Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]
  1. The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
  2. Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
  3. Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.
[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
[General for every difficulty except for guest]
00:05:867 - I don't think that a volume increase is need here. The sound just switches sides that's it.

[Yuki]
Since I didn't have time last time. I forgot to put in this comment:
There's alot of mapping to uses the location of previous combos, which I call in my terms "History Mapping" or "Referencing"

00:57:534 (3) - Resnap
00:58:201 (1,2) - Not a good idea to put these two there just after the slider ended
00:58:534 (3) - Resnap
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - Place these circles more apart. It's confusing

[Insane]
00:56:887 - Resnap timing point
01:50:201 to 01:50:451 - You should do the same thing with the reduced volume with every hitsounds that I asked you to do in the first mod. I forgot to mention that.

[Hard]
AR is a bit slow
01:40:701 (3) - Resnap
01:41:534 (3) - Same as above
01:53:201 (1) - Sudden new combo

[Normal]
Can't really say much since I not one who specializes in Easy maps. I specialize in Insane maps...
01:23:534 (1) - Both ends have clap on them
01:58:034 (5) - Might as well most it up since they're all equal distance
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

-APXH wrote:

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ
My idea is that you should do 00:22:201 (1,2,3) once, then reflect it. Or something like it. Read my newest mod to read my I'm saying thing.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

-APXH wrote:

[Yuki]
Since I didn't have time last time. I forgot to put in this comment:
There's alot of mapping to uses the location of previous combos, which I call in my terms "History Mapping" or "Referencing"

00:57:534 (3) - Resnap Where unsnaped?
00:58:201 (1,2) - Not a good idea to put these two there just after the slider ended but fun
00:58:534 (3) - Resnap Where unsnaped as above? If you just mean that I should stack prefectly, that I fixed.
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - Place these circles more apart. It's confusing

-APXH wrote:

My idea is that you should do 00:22:201 (1,2,3) once, then reflect it. Or something like it. Read my newest mod to read my I'm saying thing.
My english is poor so that I can't get what you really want me to fix, but use ctrl+c and ctrl+v and stack notes under the slider(overlap) in my map is my style(you call history mapping?). And I want people to read my maps carefully when they're playing my map. If you can read the map carefully that 01:07:534 (1,2,3) - won't confuse you.

This is an insane map. Previous modder such as quantum-rose and _Kaiser, and Fycho plays my map, they all thinks that's fun, they are glad to play it. That's just what I want. I want to make players happy to play my map.
Lizbeth
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Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
hihi

[Insane]
00:00:867 - 00:11:534 - lighten this whole section by deleting some circles in red tick. That would give you a soft intro, just like the song
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - I think this is the distance you should have use in the rest of the map, except this part: 00:46:201 -00:56:534 - which is soft, and the distance you use fits well.
If you really decide to change the distance as i suggested, keep in mind the jumps you place are fine, and you should keep them.

[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ?
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large


[Hard]
01:53:534 (1) - this is too close to prev circle, check timeline

[Normal]
Easier diff needs less than 3.00 difficulty stars, and this have 3.21, try to lighten it a bit, or add an EASY.
there s no technical problems tho

Good luck
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Lizbeth wrote:

[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle before the spin, I follow the vocal. There is no vocal so I don't add circle :>
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ? I think it's fine and fun :>
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing (/・ω・＼)Really?
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider I add NC on white line except for some special cases.

Lizbeth wrote:

01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large
From http://news.ppy.sh/post/61334266941/mapping-analysis-1-flow
However, the last end of the slider does not need to be hit properly and has an entire area in which it can be left while still having a 300:
I have tested my map and I find it not hard to get 300, so no change

no changes, thanks for modding~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
James2250

James2250 wrote:

Modding as requested, will have to be in English though :P OKAY, Thanks "LINK"! :)

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely. OKAY

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though. Well , I reduce HP-1, and have a little break.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change fixed
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style) fixed
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics fixed
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it fixed
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before? fixed
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it fixed
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.Okay, I try it!
Thanks James2250 mod my map in free time !


Guy

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.
fixed


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
  2. 00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
  3. 00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
  5. 01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
  6. 01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
  7. 01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
  8. 01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
  9. 01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
  10. 01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
  11. 01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
  12. 01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
  13. 01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  14. 01:28:867 (1) - ^
  15. 01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
  16. 01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
  17. 01:39:534 (4) - ^
  18. 01:57:034 (7) - like this?


    clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
    for example,
    01:23:867 -
    01:24:534 -
    01:25:201 -
    01:25:867 -
    01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff) Okay

    but well done. nice diff.Thanks Guy :)
Almost fixed

[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

    beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ? fixed
  2. 00:20:867 (1) - add finish fixed
  3. 00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet. fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - ) fixed
Good luck :)
Thanks Guy ! Good Luck ,too. :)



-APXH

-APXH wrote:

[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds? Good idea , I fixed it!
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ :D Nothing,nevermind!
Thanks -APXH mod !

Kytoxid

Kytoxid wrote:

Heya! :D Forgive me if I butcher any of my Chinese, haven't typed anything serious for a while. From PM request (for diffs Hard-Yuki). 沒事 都看得懂! :)

[Hard]

用tick rate 2感觉的好一些,特别是在1/2上开始的slider (e.g. [Hard] 00:04:701 (5))。2喔 考慮下這個1跟2會有爭議

01:09:701 - 加个circle? 这样flow的好一点。 好
01:41:534 (3,1) - 3最好不要完全盖住1的tail, 有的skin会看不出来有没有repeat. 好
01:50:201 (3) - 01:47:534里没有circle,所以我觉得这里也应该没有。 好
01:55:534 (1) - 用这里当head,改成1/1的slider? 不錯

玩的不错，跟音乐挺紧。謝 :)

[Insane]

AR9觉的有点快,特别是开头的那个部分。用AR8试试？ 我考慮 :D 但有一些人說要用9

00:24:034 (1) - circle比slider好一点。 好
00:31:867 (8) - 用4个circle,或者减去一个repeat & 把9放的远一点。 好 是把9放遠了
00:42:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow有点迷糊。改改位置？ 好
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - 4-5的jump不是很自然。 好
01:20:867 (1) - 这里音乐比较轻,这些jump的fit不是很好 考慮下 因為有人這邊能FC
01:23:534 (1) - 这里可以加几个jump! 好 不錯

没有大问题，但是跟hard的难度差别有点高。 好

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。
这里AR9也是有点快。

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump?
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了

玩不了这个map，太难了XD

总共来说都不错, star~
謝謝小K! :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC
01:28:201 - Finish
01:28:534 (5) - ^
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86
01:38:867 - Finish
01:39:201 - ^

[Insane]
Check AIMod
00:12:201 (2) - NC 00:12:367 (1) - remove nc
00:18:034 (7) - 在00:18:534 - 完

00:45:867 (1) - 可以不NC
01:07:201 (2) - ctrl+G

[Normal]
00:19:534 - 至00:21:868 - 加個SPINNER

其餘不太找到(累了~
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
[Insane]
00:11:534 (1) -
可以加个FIN
00:13:367 (1) - 拆成1/2+单点
00:26:867 (3) - ctrl+g
00:35:034 (1) - 去掉一个折返 加一个单点在 336,124看看
00:38:034 (4) - 我建议做成1/1 0.5速度滑条 滑条尾消音感觉不错
00:49:367 加个NOTE？
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议摆串 overmap 3连就差不多了太多感觉不好
01:30:534 (7,8) - 先滑条再单点
01:47:367 (5) - 同00:38:034 (4)
这次作图好多了
[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧

挑不出什么了 射个星好了
完成度挺好的可以RANK了
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加 加了clap觉得好吵，不加惹
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著 ok
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC 想想还是用吧=///=
01:28:201 - Finish ok
01:28:534 (5) - ^ 我觉得不需要
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86 还是选了stack 01:35:534 (1) - 的头
01:38:867 - Finish ok
01:39:201 - ^ 同上

sjoy wrote:

[Insane]

[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点 好
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg 可
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧 不干
thanks for modding
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
A somewhat short irc mod....

SPOILER
2013-10-15 19:34 smallboat: Hello,blissfulyyoshi
2013-10-15 19:34 blissfulyoshi: HAI
2013-10-15 19:35 smallboat: Hello..I think my map's quality is not enough, but I can't figure out what the question is, could you give me a pointing?
2013-10-15 19:35 blissfulyoshi: okay sure
2013-10-15 19:35 blissfulyoshi: link
2013-10-15 19:36 smallboat: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115246 Thanks , bliss~
2013-10-15 19:37 blissfulyoshi: dling
2013-10-15 19:37 smallboat: @@?
2013-10-15 19:37 blissfulyoshi: any diff in particular?
2013-10-15 19:39 smallboat: well, Hard Insane Yuki 's diff only.
2013-10-15 19:39 smallboat: three diff
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 19:40 smallboat: THANKS!
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: why are you keeping messy overlaps like 00:02:034 (3,1) -
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: insane diff right now
2013-10-15 19:40 blissfulyoshi: 00:04:534 (3,1) - ^
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: well , think a pattern (?
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: ><"
2013-10-15 19:41 blissfulyoshi: I don't even care if it has no pattern
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: okay~
2013-10-15 19:41 blissfulyoshi: just remove teh overlaps
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: I will revise .
2013-10-15 19:41 smallboat: okay^^
2013-10-15 19:43 blissfulyoshi: also to fit the super soft intro I would make decrease teh sv a bit more for notes before 00:05:867 (1) -
2013-10-15 19:43 00:11:534 (1) - *
2013-10-15 19:43 blissfulyoshi: that is probably a better point
2013-10-15 19:44 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: more of a pet peeve, but why is 00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - so much harder than the notes imeediately following it
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: it is so cruel to do this stuff right after a slow section and a spinner imo
2013-10-15 19:44 smallboat: sure?
2013-10-15 19:44 blissfulyoshi: that is what I think
2013-10-15 19:45 blissfulyoshi: up to you
2013-10-15 19:45 blissfulyoshi: you are the mapper
2013-10-15 19:45 smallboat: okay lol
2013-10-15 19:46 smallboat: poor ENGLISH ,sorry>_<
2013-10-15 19:48 smallboat: have any problem?
2013-10-15 19:53 blissfulyoshi: ummm got caught in a phone call
2013-10-15 19:53 blissfulyoshi: give me a bit
2013-10-15 19:54 smallboat: ok , nevermind~
2013-10-15 19:56 smallboat: your pointing is useful !
2013-10-15 19:59 smallboat: Can you write a bit extra suggestion in my map forum?
2013-10-15 19:59 blissfulyoshi: sure
2013-10-15 20:00 smallboat: okay,tks~
2013-10-15 20:02 smallboat: How many quality in my map ?
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: sry finally got off the phone
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: very long phone call
2013-10-15 20:06 smallboat: oh no,nevermind . haha^^
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: let me at lest play all of insane
2013-10-15 20:06 blissfulyoshi: and I'll tell you
2013-10-15 20:07 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: 01:30:867 (8,1,2) - why is there an antijump here
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: 01:07:534 (1,2,3) - also, switching to a softer section == jumps??????/
2013-10-15 20:08 smallboat: THINK A pattern?
2013-10-15 20:08 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:08 blissfulyoshi: increase spacing
2013-10-15 20:09 smallboat: ah sorry , I have no notice (embarrass ><
2013-10-15 20:09 blissfulyoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040323 ?
2013-10-15 20:10 smallboat: stack 3 times?
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: 01:44:867 (2,1) - another questionable antijump
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: ummm you had that stack there originally
2013-10-15 20:10 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:10 blissfulyoshi: I don't care what you do with teh stack
2013-10-15 20:11 blissfulyoshi: I only rearranged 1 and 2 to have a flow that feels better to me
2013-10-15 20:11 smallboat: okay @_@
2013-10-15 20:12 blissfulyoshi: for the most part insane was okay, but some of your jumps/antijumps felt a bit awkward
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: OK, I"m not good at " jump" X ( "
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: forgot to mention 01:20:867 (1,2,3,4) - soft area === jumps again???/
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: >_<SOR
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: your choruses were pretty good
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: besides those awkward jumps
2013-10-15 20:13 blissfulyoshi: so no worreis
2013-10-15 20:13 smallboat: OKAY
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: oh yeah, what is with teh inconsistent slow downs
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: 00:38:034 (1) - is slow
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: 00:40:534 (7) - is fast
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: well
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: hearing it again
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: I geuss it makes sense
2013-10-15 20:14 blissfulyoshi: so never mind me
2013-10-15 20:15 smallboat: :)
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: HAVE LIISTENED
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: LISTEN ><
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: so hard or Yuki next?
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: guess yuki
2013-10-15 20:16 smallboat: Yuki is GD
2013-10-15 20:16 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:17 blissfulyoshi: so going to hard
2013-10-15 20:17 smallboat: okay, hard first
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: 00:19:534 (3) - this slider is ugly
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: T_T
2013-10-15 20:18 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:18 smallboat: true?
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: I am not sure what you are aiming for
2013-10-15 20:18 blissfulyoshi: but that many sharp corners does not look good
2013-10-15 20:19 smallboat: sorry , some sliders no copy.
2013-10-15 20:19 smallboat: >_<
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: 01:51:534 (3,4) - why teh rnadom overlap
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: but this hard diff is decent
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:21 blissfulyoshi: mostly on the safe side, but nothing too wrong about it
2013-10-15 20:21 smallboat: okay lol
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: 01:56:034 (2,4) - just wondering, why do you have that random bump in teh beginnign of these sliders
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: it looks slihgtly weird
2013-10-15 20:22 smallboat: sorry @@
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: oh well
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: your choice
2013-10-15 20:22 blissfulyoshi: anything you want me to look at?
2013-10-15 20:22 smallboat: wii fix
2013-10-15 20:23 smallboat: well, yuki diff ? I can chat problem for him.
2013-10-15 20:23 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:23 blissfulyoshi: if you want
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: ok
2013-10-15 20:25 blissfulyoshi: wow this diff has a bunch of hard patterns
2013-10-15 20:25 blissfulyoshi: xD
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: XD
2013-10-15 20:25 smallboat: ha
2013-10-15 20:26 blissfulyoshi: 00:11:201 (3,1) - this jump is a bit large for that part of the song.....
2013-10-15 20:26 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:26 smallboat: ok I'll tell him
2013-10-15 20:27 blissfulyoshi: 00:14:201 (5,1) and 00:15:368 (2,4) - overlaps here don't look that great
2013-10-15 20:27 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:28 blissfulyoshi: 00:28:201 (3,4,1) - why is there a stack here? It doesn't seem to fit eh song that well
2013-10-15 20:28 blissfulyoshi: 00:48:534 (3,1) - anotehr overlap T_T
2013-10-15 20:29 smallboat: 0.0
2013-10-15 20:29 smallboat: okay :)
2013-10-15 20:30 blissfulyoshi: 01:05:868 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is evil T_T
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: wow
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: as Big Black(?
2013-10-15 20:30 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:30 blissfulyoshi: big black is jsut silly
2013-10-15 20:31 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:31 smallboat: No mankind to play it...
2013-10-15 20:31 blissfulyoshi: okay so only pattern I can't do in this map is that one I mentioned above
2013-10-15 20:31 blissfulyoshi: chorus is easy in comparison
2013-10-15 20:32 smallboat: okay:)
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: 01:33:868 (6,7,8,9,1) - I would use distance snap on this stream to give it a sense of speeding up
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: and why is the chorus so devoid of jumps
2013-10-15 20:32 smallboat: no stack?
2013-10-15 20:32 blissfulyoshi: yeah
2013-10-15 20:33 blissfulyoshi: 01:47:034 (2,3) - do you seriously want to be this evil, I barely did it by sightreading
2013-10-15 20:33 smallboat: Well I think you should put these recommendations in the forum, he can reply for you :)
2013-10-15 20:33 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:34 blissfulyoshi: 01:49:701 (2,3) - I guess I got used to it by now
2013-10-15 20:34 smallboat: okay
2013-10-15 20:34 blissfulyoshi: well that is the end of my mod for his diff
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: okay jsut did that stupid poattern......
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: gah
2013-10-15 20:35 smallboat: 0.0~
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: ]/savelog
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: ...
2013-10-15 20:35 blissfulyoshi: T_T
2013-10-15 20:36 smallboat: @@
2013-10-15 20:36 smallboat: haha
2013-10-15 20:37 smallboat: Thanks bliss take the time to make recommendations
2013-10-15 20:38 smallboat: >_<~
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: lol yw
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: I am pretty sure you can get it ranked soon
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: just have someone else look over insane
2013-10-15 20:38 blissfulyoshi: I felt that was the weakest diff
2013-10-15 20:38 smallboat: sure? lol
2013-10-15 20:39 smallboat: Well, some left nazi problem ?>_<
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: probably some
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: too lazy to ask to fix it right now
2013-10-15 20:40 smallboat: >_<ok
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: someone else can do those
2013-10-15 20:40 blissfulyoshi: xD
2013-10-15 20:40 smallboat: XD
2013-10-15 20:41 smallboat: Okay, I will fix it soon in this day !
2013-10-15 20:41 blissfulyoshi: okay
2013-10-15 20:41 blissfulyoshi: mind if I post log?
2013-10-15 20:42 smallboat: okay :)
2013-10-15 20:43 blissfulyoshi: thx
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
From blissfulyoshi's irc mod

00:11:201 (3,1) - this jump is a bit large for that part of the song.....move a little
01:33:868 (6,7,8,9,1) - I would use distance snap on this stream to give it a sense of speeding up good idea I like it :)

other no change
I like overlap in my insane diff lol
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hihi~
答應的mod : )
以下都是建議~

[Insane]
00:09:367 (4) - 嗯嗯~ 可能把這個去掉, 然後在00:08:867 (3) 這裡加個repeat? 總覺得音樂理沒有(4)這個beat, 所以可能比較合一點
00:32:701 - 之前妳說這裡會不會不合適. 我的想法是在00:32:701 這裡加個beat. 因為主要這一段的1/2節奏, 最明顯是從00:32:867開始. 所以這樣可能打起來比較合音樂. 尤其是因為才剛剛打完一大串stream, 突然變成1/2會變得不適.
00:34:534 (7) - 啊 對了. 這要不要考慮改成一個長slider? 00:34:534~00:34:867的slider, 可能感覺好一點
00:36:701 - 這裡是不是錯過一個beat了?
00:38:534 (1) - 要不要改成finish?
00:49:534 (3) - 要不要把這個移到00:49:367, 然後在00:49:867加個圈圈? 總覺得這一段的節奏有點變化可能比較好玩
00:59:534 (1) - 忘了加whistle?
00:59:867 (2) - 多加了whistle?
01:06:867 (1) - remove NC
01:07:534 (1) - 加finish
01:08:201 (1) - 頭上忘了clap
01:15:867 (2) - 嗯嗯~ 我覺得這個最好改成一個圈圈+滑條. 比較和節奏, 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4RhBw.jpg
01:30:117 - 這裡錯過一個beat? :>
01:47:367 (5) - NC

[Hard]
00:20:367 (1) - 這應該就不用NC了, 節奏很清楚的
00:24:034 (1) - ^
00:24:867 (1) - 開頭用滑條會不會比較好一點？ 歌手也是拉長音走, 滑條可能玩起來更合適
01:07:867 (3) - 滑條尾巴錯過了clap + whistle喔
01:12:201 (5) - 頭忘了whistle?
01:23:534 (1) - 這裡也是用滑條開始會不會比較順暢?
01:53:534 (1) - 去掉NC
01:54:201 (5) - 這裡NC
01:56:034 (2) - 噗 這slider頭長相是故意的嗎? 哈哈 可能有些BAT會鬼叫吧, 我個人倒是很喜歡奇怪的slider長相
01:57:367 (1,2,3) - 要不要把這幾個離01:56:701 (4)遠一點?

[Normal]
啊　對了妳的normal星難度可能太高囉 3.34
00:16:534 (1) - 像是這裡, 節奏來說的話　最佳的擺法就是圈+滑條. 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4Ri7w.jpg
00:20:701 - 我覺得這一段不要有break比較好欸? 像是妳從00:20:701~00:21:867做一個很長的滑條, 全部問題都解決啦. 也和音樂, 也不用break, 而且連著之後的節奏也夠簡單.
00:35:034 (4) - 要不要移到00:35:534? 當然擺飾要變一下, 不過這樣節奏會比較自然一點
01:17:867 (1) - spinner也跟hard一樣, 拉到01:20:701就好. 還可以加一個鼓聲
如果這是最簡單的難度, 星數就太高囉.
建議就把節奏改得更簡單吧~ :>

其實圖不錯!! 多注意一下hitsound~ 主要是每個部份的hitsound, 如果是同一段得話就檢查有沒有一至.
擺法, NC, 節奏這些東西, 妳只要多map, 遲早就會更了解的. 只是時間上的問題
加油加油~!
我沒星可以給妳 :<
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
as requested

[General]
  1. title: shining grace (due to http://www.iosysos.com/cd/utahime/
[yuki]
  1. enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs
  2. 00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out
  3. 01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo
  4. 01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here?
[Insane]
  1. 01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't make much sense here with a stream, consider keeping things like 01:07:534 (1,2,3), then try remove 01:10:034 (7) for a better effect.
  2. 01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mostly the same
  3. 01:50:451 - did you forget some section here? the volume is too low.
  4. 01:55:534 - spacing after here is quite under average. highly suggest you rearrange the patterns.
[Normal]
  1. this diff seems to be mapped to get rid of the star rating
  2. 00:34:867 (4,5) - maybe remove?
  3. 00:43:534 - make 00:43:867 (1) a slider start here?
  4. 01:09:201 - add note?
  5. 01:11:867 - ^
  6. 1 more slider since 01:57:367 to 01:58:034?
no much comment on Hard :) keep up the good working!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Colin Hou wrote:

[yuki]
  1. enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs ok
  2. 00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out fixed
  3. 01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo sry I don't want to change it
  4. 01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here? good idea~!
thanks for modding
说中文吧0.0
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]
  1. The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
  2. Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
  3. Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.
[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY
Almost fixed,thanks -Bakari- 's mod :)

Lizbeth

Lizbeth wrote:

hihi hi

[Insane]
00:00:867 - 00:11:534 - lighten this whole section by deleting some circles in red tick. That would give you a soft intro, just like the song
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - I think this is the distance you should have use in the rest of the map, except this part: 00:46:201 -00:56:534 - which is soft, and the distance you use fits well.
If you really decide to change the distance as i suggested, keep in mind the jumps you place are fine, and you should keep them.

[Yuki]
00:17:367 - add circle
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this threw me off >~< maybe if you unstack ?
01:09:868 (4,5,6) - this is a bit confusing
01:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to keep jumps in singles combos, so new combo on next slider
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, the distance between the end of 01:30:868 (3) - and 01:31:118 (4) - is too large


[Hard]
01:53:534 (1) - this is too close to prev circle, check timeline

[Normal]
Easier diff needs less than 3.00 difficulty stars, and this have 3.21, try to lighten it a bit, or add an EASY.
there s no technical problems tho

Good luck
Almost fixed,thanks Lizbeth 's mod

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Yuki]
只在以下幾處加clap
00:23:534 -
00:23:701 -
00:24:034 -
00:24:367 -
00:24:534 -
其餘不用加
01:04:201 (3) - 試試尾巴被1蓋著
01:18:868 (1,1) - 可以不用NC
01:28:201 - Finish
01:28:534 (5) - ^
01:37:367 (2) - 237,86
01:38:867 - Finish
01:39:201 - ^

[Insane]
Check AIMod
00:12:201 (2) - NC 00:12:367 (1) - remove nc fixed
00:18:034 (7) - 在00:18:534 - 完 fixed

00:45:867 (1) - 可以不NC fixed
01:07:201 (2) - ctrl+G fixed

[Normal]
00:19:534 - 至00:21:868 - 加個SPINNER 考慮

其餘不太找到(累了~
謝謝Kawaiwkyik 的mod

sjoy

sjoy wrote:

[Insane]
00:11:534 (1) -
可以加个FIN OK
00:13:367 (1) - 拆成1/2+单点 OK/color]
00:26:867 (3) - ctrl+g
00:35:034 (1) - 去掉一个折返 加一个单点在 336,124看看 OK
00:38:034 (4) - 我建议做成1/1 0.5速度滑条 滑条尾消音感觉不错 最初有改，但後來被噴又改回去了 :o
00:49:367 加个NOTE？ OK
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议摆串 overmap 3连就差不多了太多感觉不好 沒放藍線了
01:30:534 (7,8) - 先滑条再单点 OK
01:47:367 (5) - 同00:38:034 (4) OK
这次作图好多了 謝謝 會努力的 你的圖也很好喔
[Yuki]
00:20:701 (5) - 上移点
01:27:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/4QLq7.jpg
01:30:868 (3) - 有必要那么坑么 CTRL+g吧

挑不出什么了 射个星好了 謝謝 我也有去射個星 :idea:
完成度挺好的可以RANK了 謝謝支持 不過離Rank還有一段距離 主要又是排列有點亂 :o
謝謝sjoy 的mod與支持

hoLysoup

hoLysoup wrote:

hihi~ 嗨 :)
答應的mod : )
以下都是建議~

[Insane]
00:09:367 (4) - 嗯嗯~ 可能把這個去掉, 然後在00:08:867 (3) 這裡加個repeat? 總覺得音樂理沒有(4)這個beat, 所以可能比較合一點 OK 還不錯
00:32:701 - 之前妳說這裡會不會不合適. 我的想法是在00:32:701 這裡加個beat. 因為主要這一段的1/2節奏, 最明顯是從00:32:867開始. 所以這樣可能打起來比較合音樂. 尤其是因為才剛剛打完一大串stream, 突然變成1/2會變得不適. OK 還不錯 這樣也比較好點擊
00:34:534 (7) - 啊 對了. 這要不要考慮改成一個長slider? 00:34:534~00:34:867的slider, 可能感覺好一點 OK 還不錯
00:36:701 - 這裡是不是錯過一個beat了? 好像不小心手誤刪了.. 8-)
00:38:534 (1) - 要不要改成finish? OK
00:49:534 (3) - 要不要把這個移到00:49:367, 然後在00:49:867加個圈圈? 總覺得這一段的節奏有點變化可能比較好玩 OK
00:59:534 (1) - 忘了加whistle? 忘記了XD
00:59:867 (2) - 多加了whistle? 好像是..
01:06:867 (1) - remove NC OK
01:07:534 (1) - 加finish OK
01:08:201 (1) - 頭上忘了clap OK
01:15:867 (2) - 嗯嗯~ 我覺得這個最好改成一個圈圈+滑條. 比較和節奏, 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4RhBw.jpg OK GOOD :)
01:30:117 - 這裡錯過一個beat? :> 咦怎又忘了.. :o
01:47:367 (5) - NC OK

[Hard]
00:20:367 (1) - 這應該就不用NC了, 節奏很清楚的 OK
00:24:034 (1) - ^
00:24:867 (1) - 開頭用滑條會不會比較好一點？ 歌手也是拉長音走, 滑條可能玩起來更合適 OK
01:07:867 (3) - 滑條尾巴錯過了clap + whistle喔 忘了 已修
01:12:201 (5) - 頭忘了whistle? 又忘:o
01:23:534 (1) - 這裡也是用滑條開始會不會比較順暢? OK
01:53:534 (1) - 去掉NC OK
01:54:201 (5) - 這裡NC OK
01:56:034 (2) - 噗 這slider頭長相是故意的嗎? 哈哈 可能有些BAT會鬼叫吧, 我個人倒是很喜歡奇怪的slider長相 這樣才有梗? 不過改掉了有點可惜
01:57:367 (1,2,3) - 要不要把這幾個離01:56:701 (4)遠一點? OK

[Normal]
啊　對了妳的normal星難度可能太高囉 3.34 降了 不過在3.25....
00:16:534 (1) - 像是這裡, 節奏來說的話　最佳的擺法就是圈+滑條. 像這樣: http://puu.sh/4Ri7w.jpg OK 還不錯
00:20:701 - 我覺得這一段不要有break比較好欸? 像是妳從00:20:701~00:21:867做一個很長的滑條, 全部問題都解決啦. 也和音樂, 也不用break, 而且連著之後的節奏也夠簡單. 好建議 :idea:
00:35:034 (4) - 要不要移到00:35:534? 當然擺飾要變一下, 不過這樣節奏會比較自然一點 OK
01:17:867 (1) - spinner也跟hard一樣, 拉到01:20:701就好. 還可以加一個鼓聲 OK
如果這是最簡單的難度, 星數就太高囉. 好
建議就把節奏改得更簡單吧~ :> 好的 怎麼感覺要做Easy.. :o

其實圖不錯!! 謝謝 多注意一下hitsound~好 主要是每個部份的hitsound, 如果是同一段得話就檢查有沒有一至.
擺法, NC, 節奏這些東西, 妳只要多map, 遲早就會更了解的. 只是時間上的問題 我也覺得是時間 :o
加油加油~!
我沒星可以給妳 :<
沒關係
謝謝hoLysoup 的mod與支持

Colin Hou

Colin Hou wrote:

as requested

[General]
  1. title: shining grace (due to http://www.iosysos.com/cd/utahime/
fixed

[yuki]
  1. enable the custom sliderslide.wav in this diff? it works well as I see (in other diffs
  2. 00:16:868 (1,2,3) - this manual stack doesn't work properly, check it out
  3. 01:41:534 (3) - kind of too much difference with 01:30:868 (3,4,5), keeping a consistence would be nice imo
  4. 01:57:368 (4,5,6,7) - maybe try a increasing space here?
[Insane]
  1. 01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't make much sense here with a stream, consider keeping things like 01:07:534 (1,2,3), then try remove 01:10:034 (7) for a better effect. fixed
  2. 01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mostly the same fixed
  3. 01:50:451 - did you forget some section here? the volume is too low. fixed
  4. 01:55:534 - spacing after here is quite under average. highly suggest you rearrange the patterns. fixed
[Normal]
  1. this diff seems to be mapped to get rid of the star rating fixed
  2. 00:34:867 (4,5) - maybe remove? fixed
  3. 00:43:534 - make 00:43:867 (1) a slider start here? fixed
  4. 01:09:201 - add note? fixed
  5. 01:11:867 - ^
  6. 1 more slider since 01:57:367 to 01:58:034? fixed
no much comment on Hard :) keep up the good working!
謝謝Colin Hou的建議 :)
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meiikyuu
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Charles445
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Having quite a blast with this one, I'd check this one if I had time for rank. Have a star, this is worth BATs looking into
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SPOILER
10:14 smallboat: 哈囉妮妮~
10:14 Nymph: @@
10:14 smallboat: @@?
10:15 Nymph: @@官網能上了
10:15 smallboat: 圖被打星不知道能不能找你check下 先別泡
10:15 smallboat: 恩
10:15 smallboat: 恭喜
10:17 Nymph: @@比以前好不少了
10:18 smallboat: @@
10:18 smallboat: 謝
10:18 smallboat: 有很多好心人給建議
10:18 Nymph: 嗯
10:19 smallboat: 還是覺得有些要改
10:19 Nymph: 唔
10:19 smallboat: @@
10:20 Nymph: 那就改唄@@
10:20 smallboat: 噗
10:21 smallboat: 你覺得有要改的地方嗎?
10:21 Nymph: 一些小地方吧
10:22 smallboat: ins?
10:23 Nymph: 嗯
10:23 smallboat: 想知道些
10:25 Nymph: 細節就是
10:26 smallboat: 恩
10:26 smallboat: 沒關係
10:27 smallboat: 可以講
10:27 Nymph: 00:12:701 (5) - slidershape略突然
10:27 smallboat: 歐歐
10:27 Nymph: 只有一個是這麼隨意的slider在這個part
10:28 Nymph: 00:38:034 (1) -
10:28 smallboat: 恩 真的感覺不太協調
10:28 Nymph: 只需要結尾靜音 開頭不需要靜音
10:28 smallboat: 阿隊了
10:28 Nymph: 爲了貫徹靜音的絕對性 結尾改成soft hitsound
10:29 Nymph: 不用normal
10:29 smallboat: 那個sliderslide我放進去沒什麼效果
10:29 smallboat: 好
10:29 Nymph: 00:56:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
10:30 Nymph: 既然用了藍線slider 就不要保持spacing了 可以自由拉一些排列
10:30 smallboat: 好
10:30 Nymph: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045556
10:31 Nymph: 像這樣 把距離拉開 才有跟著鼓的壓藍線slider的疾走感
10:31 smallboat: 好
10:31 smallboat: 不錯耶
10:31 Nymph: 00:59:534 (1) - 這種跟你前面藍線比就普通了 是我也會用一些新鮮東西在裏面
10:32 Nymph: 01:08:867 (3) -
10:32 smallboat: 想知道要怎麼變化
10:32 Nymph: 這後面還很缺hitsound
10:32 Nymph: 變化嗎
10:32 smallboat: 恩是
10:33 Nymph: 節奏我覺得用藍線slider就好 用一些不同的排列
10:33 smallboat: 好
10:33 smallboat: 就剛剛你傳的圖差不多那樣?
10:34 Nymph: 我只是舉一個例子嘛
10:34 Nymph: 那只是選項的一種
10:34 smallboat: 喔喔@@
10:34 Nymph: 換造型 換方向 各種方法
10:34 smallboat: 好的 我也會用自己的想像力
10:34 Nymph: 嗯
10:34 smallboat: 好
10:34 Nymph: 01:08:867 (3) -
10:34 Nymph: 這後面很多地方可以做finish或者clap
10:35 Nymph: 目前空洞洞的
10:35 smallboat: 好
10:36 Nymph: 01:48:117 (3) - 這個歪啦
10:36 Nymph: 01:47:367 (1) - 這個跟之前說過的一樣
10:36 smallboat: 阿
10:37 Nymph: 發現你連打不是很會排細節啊
10:37 smallboat: 造型不好?
10:37 Nymph: 你要試著把你連打的東西還有之後的slider 做成一個比較順手的曲綫
10:38 smallboat: 恩阿 這01:46:700 (2) - 連打後不知怎接
10:38 Nymph: 你試著把這種排列的每個圓的中心都挑出來
10:38 Nymph: 然後你把這些中心點連接上
10:38 Nymph: 看看是不是溫柔的曲綫
10:38 Nymph: 01:48:034 (2,3,4) -
10:38 Nymph: 這種一看就是個鈍角嘛
10:39 smallboat: 1~5的曲線?
10:39 Nymph: 只要是曲綫就好了 成角度的都略有問題
10:39 Nymph: 關掉grid 自己手動拽下看看
10:39 Nymph: 弄成自己看著特別順眼的角度
10:40 smallboat: 好的
10:43 smallboat: 我是感覺最後一段擺不好
10:44 Nymph: 唔
10:44 smallboat: 有擺了幾次 還是怪怪:(
10:45 Nymph: 靈感不夠唄
10:46 smallboat: 好像是

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