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Tsunku - Lockstep [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Jaltzu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23. elokuutata 2020 at 17.32.38

Artist: Tsunku
Title: Lockstep
Source: リズム天国ゴールド
Tags: instrumental video game rhythm heaven paradise world tengoku gold ウラオモテ uraomote nintendo ds nds mitsuo terada tnx music recordings
BPM: 162
Filesize: 2957kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,27 stars, 243 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4,23 stars, 505 notes)
  3. Kantan (1,75 stars, 151 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2,93 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Oni (3,51 stars, 406 notes)


Download: Tsunku - Lockstep
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first taiko set. Reworked all the diffs, but don't expect anything special. Might remap again.

2015.10.09: Made Taiko only + complete remap on all diffs.
2015.10.21: Added Kantan.
2015.10.26: Updated BG.
2015.11.03: Added new Oni, the old one became Inner Oni.
2020.06.29 The set lives on! Reworked Inner a bit. Start of Moddingv2.
2020.07.10 Reworked all diffs.
Prophecy, game rock, Skeuddy, ptar124, Nyan, Anima_Alumi-47, -Sh1n1-, NlHIL, newyams99, Flying Pan, ManP, xtrem3x, Aldwych, L1m3s, -Tenshi-, IntelliTroodon, QHideaki13, [_Chichinya_], chaica
ginjani
WTHBRO
FiNNb

BG by Wupar Account gone ;_;
Prophecy
[Muzukashii]
00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ddd ddd d because the rules...
00:09:538 (32) - delete
00:21:390 (75) - ^
00:31:853 (109,110) - ddk d k
00:37:501 (130,131,132,133) - ddk d k
00:51:020 (173,174,175) - kkk
00:56:575 (195) - delete
01:00:371 (205,206) - kkk d
01:01:853 (212,213) - kkk d
01:10:742 (238,239,240,241) - ddk d k
01:12:871 (248,249,250,251) - kkk d k

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Prophecy wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ddd ddd d because the rules... Yep
00:09:538 (32) - delete Moved to 00:09:723 to fit the music better
00:21:390 (75) - ^ Same fix as above
00:31:853 (109,110) - ddk d k
00:37:501 (130,131,132,133) - ddk d k I'm not exactly sure what you mean by these two... Sorry... But I changed them just a little. I'd like to keep those double notes if possible.
00:51:020 (173,174,175) - kkk OK
00:56:575 (195) - delete This makes moving on to those 'half beats' easier + there's a clear symbal sound that i'd feel bad to leave unmapped. So no.
01:00:371 (205,206) - kkk d
01:01:853 (212,213) - kkk d Changed couple notes, but kept the same rhythm.
01:10:742 (238,239,240,241) - ddk d k No changes
01:12:871 (248,249,250,251) - kkk d k My ears say 'NO'.

Good Luck :3
Thanks!!
Gemu-
Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Futsuu]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHFUW/854b218f0b.jpg

00:28:427 (23,24,25,26) - Change to k to folow the rhythm and the consistency with 00:23:983 (14,15,16,17) -
00:44:908 - Change to d to follow the drums.
00:46:205 - ^
01:07:131 - Change to d because a D is not necessary
01:07:871 - Change to k because a K is not necessary
01:16:760 (135,136) - This is not necessary, so change to k.

[ Muzukashii]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGsC/f2fcb9135c.jpg

00:05:927 - Remove because is hard for Muzukashii.
00:06:205 - ^
00:06:297 - ^
00:21:390 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:09:538 -

[ Oni]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGYp/5d0a6ac355.jpg

00:14:908 - Change to k to follow a different rhythm.
00:17:871 - ^
If you Change to k here 00:14:908 - Can you change to k here 00:26:760 - to follow the consistency.
00:27:316 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:15:464 -
00:31:668 - Change to k to follow the rhythm and here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Ctrl G to follow the rhythm and the drums.
00:32:501 (187,188,189) - Remove the Finish, is not necessary in this part.
If you change to k here 00:31:668 - and if you applicate the Ctrl G here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Can you change to k here 00:37:594 - and here Ctrl G here 00:37:779 (216,217) - to follow the consistency.
00:53:773 - Remove this finish, unrankeable.
Remove the finish here 00:57:131 - 00:57:501 - 00:57:871 - 00:58:242 - 00:58:612 - 01:03:057 - 01:03:427 - 01:03:797 - 01:04:168 - 01:04:538 - because this is not necessary.
01:17:501 - Remove this finish, unrankeable.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Futsuu]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHFUW/854b218f0b.jpg

00:28:427 (23,24,25,26) - Change to k to folow the rhythm and the consistency with 00:23:983 (14,15,16,17) - Yep
00:44:908 - Change to d to follow the drums. Hmm... OK
00:46:205 - ^ Yep
01:07:131 - Change to d because a D is not necessary
01:07:871 - Change to k because a K is not necessary
01:16:760 (135,136) - This is not necessary, so change to k. Changed all these finish sounds + 1 more to normal.

[ Muzukashii]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGsC/f2fcb9135c.jpg

00:05:927 - Remove because is hard for Muzukashii.
00:06:205 - ^
00:06:297 - ^
00:21:390 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:09:538 - I made some changes to these parts.

[ Oni]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGYp/5d0a6ac355.jpg

00:14:908 - Change to k to follow a different rhythm. Nope
00:17:871 - ^ OK
If you Change to k here 00:14:908 - Can you change to k here 00:26:760 - to follow the consistency.
00:27:316 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:15:464 - Left these unchanged, but I'm considering doing something.
00:31:668 - Change to k to follow the rhythm and here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Ctrl G to follow the rhythm and the drums. I think it's fine as it is.
00:32:501 (187,188,189) - Remove the Finish, is not necessary in this part. Done
If you change to k here 00:31:668 - and if you applicate the Ctrl G here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Can you change to k here 00:37:594 - and here Ctrl G here 00:37:779 (216,217) - to follow the consistency. No changes.
00:53:773 - Remove this finish, unrankeable. Wrong timing point? If you meant the one in the end of the stream, I removed it.
Remove the finish here 00:57:131 - 00:57:501 - 00:57:871 - 00:58:242 - 00:58:612 - 01:03:057 - 01:03:427 - 01:03:797 - 01:04:168 - 01:04:538 - because this is not necessary. Yeah, those were really bad... Done.
01:17:501 - Remove this finish, unrankeable.Yeah.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~ Definitely was helpfull. :)
Thanks!!!
Skeuddy
Hello, Jaltzu, from my queue
Where kiai?
00:29:908 - 00:41:945 I think

Muzukashii
  1. 00:02:686 (7) - k
  2. 00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ (kkk kkk)
  3. 00:11:575 (38) - ^
  4. 00:32:131 (111) - ^
  5. 00:38:057 (132) - ^
  6. 00:46:575 (163) - ^
  7. 00:16:760 (56) to 00:16:575
  8. 00:23:057 (80,81) - Swap
  9. 00:51:390 - Some note
  10. 00:56:575 (195) - D
  11. 01:02:501 (216) - ^ (D)
Oni
  1. 00:01:853 (11) - k
  2. 00:03:334 (22) - ^
  3. 00:04:816 (33) - ^
  4. 00:13:427 (83) - ^
  5. 00:14:908 (91) - ^ (and 00:15:094 (92,93) - Swap, 00:15:464 (94) - d)
  6. 00:25:279 (144) - ^
  7. 00:26:760 (152,154) - ^
  8. 00:28:983 (164,166) - ^
  9. 00:30:834 (178) - ^ (and 00:31:205 (180) - D)
  10. 00:44:538 (258) - ^
  11. 00:34:631 (203,205) - ^
  12. 00:50:464 (291) - ^
  13. 00:40:464 (237,241) - d
  14. 00:53:057 (310,314) - ^
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Skeuddy wrote:

Hello, Jaltzu, from my queue
Where kiai?
00:29:908 - 00:41:945 I think Added kiai to another location.

Muzukashii
  1. 00:02:686 (7) - k OK
  2. 00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ (kkk kkk) Nope
  3. 00:11:575 (38) - ^ I think d is fine
  4. 00:32:131 (111) - ^ OK
  5. 00:38:057 (132) - ^ OK
  6. 00:46:575 (163) - ^ OK
  7. 00:16:760 (56) to 00:16:575 Did that + changed couple other notes
  8. 00:23:057 (80,81) - Swap OK
  9. 00:51:390 - Some note Put in k
  10. 00:56:575 (195) - D Changed these 2 to K
  11. 01:02:501 (216) - ^ (D)
Oni
  1. 00:01:853 (11) - k Yep
  2. 00:03:334 (22) - ^ Yep
  3. 00:04:816 (33) - ^ Nope
  4. 00:13:427 (83) - ^ Yep
  5. 00:14:908 (91) - ^ (and 00:15:094 (92,93) - Swap, 00:15:464 (94) - d) Different changes.
  6. 00:25:279 (144) - ^ Yep
  7. 00:26:760 (152,154) - ^ Made the same pattern as in the similar part before.
  8. 00:28:983 (164,166) - ^ Nope
  9. 00:30:834 (178) - ^ (and 00:31:205 (180) - D) I actually deleted all the finishes from these parts.
  10. 00:44:538 (258) - ^ Nope
  11. 00:34:631 (203,205) - ^ Ds in a 1/4 stream? Nonono.
  12. 00:50:464 (291) - ^ Doesn't really fit there...
  13. 00:40:464 (237,241) - d My mapping style fits the beeping sounds better. So no.
  14. 00:53:057 (310,314) - ^
Thank you!
ptar124
Hello, from - N a n a k a -'s Thai Modding Queue

Oni


00:06:020 (44,45,46,47,48) - change some of them to emphasize the melody but 48 MUST be a kat
00:11:760 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - a little repetitive and this might be too easy for Oni, consider adding some 1/4 patterns
00:24:353 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - ^
00:47:871 (278) - add finish or change to slider to accompany the sound effects
01:06:020 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - consistency of difficulty lost, consider adding some more notes, the difficulty level here is going down to Kantan already
01:13:242 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413) - way too repetitive, consider adding kkd-k-d-k-d-k-d-kkd-k-d.... like the other parts
OD 6 and HP 6 might be a little too hard for a 3-star oni. Usually, the OD6 HP6 maps I see are over 4.5*. Consider that, maybe?

Muzukashii


00:07:686 - add don or kat to accompany the melody
00:47:871 (167) - change to small slider

Futsuu


00:47:871 (71) - add finish or change to slider
01:15:279 (130,131,132,133) - trhythm is too complex for Futsuu, consider changing to 1/1 or 1/2 patterns

Hi Jaltzu,

Your mapset is doing pretty good, no major edits to be made nor any critical errors. These mods I gave you are just some small tweaks here and there, please don't take them as absolute commands, your map is already decent.

Good luck with your map,
ptar124
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

ptar124 wrote:

Hello, from - N a n a k a -'s Thai Modding Queue

Oni


00:06:020 (44,45,46,47,48) - change some of them to emphasize the melody but 48 MUST be a kat Added couple kats
00:11:760 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - a little repetitive and this might be too easy for Oni, consider adding some 1/4 patterns
00:24:353 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - ^ Added some stuff to these parts.
00:47:871 (278) - add finish or change to slider to accompany the sound effects Small slider.
01:06:020 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - consistency of difficulty lost, consider adding some more notes, the difficulty level here is going down to Kantan already Made some harder patterns.
01:13:242 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413) - way too repetitive, consider adding kkd-k-d-k-d-k-d-kkd-k-d.... like the other parts Added couple triplets, but not sure if it fit's there so well... But we'll see about that later. :)
OD 6 and HP 6 might be a little too hard for a 3-star oni. Usually, the OD6 HP6 maps I see are over 4.5*. Consider that, maybe? Changed to 5.

Muzukashii


00:07:686 - add don or kat to accompany the melody kat
00:47:871 (167) - change to small slider Added kinda long drumroll (=slider)

Futsuu


00:47:871 (71) - add finish or change to slider Added finish
01:15:279 (130,131,132,133) - trhythm is too complex for Futsuu, consider changing to 1/1 or 1/2 patterns Made some changes...

Hi Jaltzu,

Your mapset is doing pretty good, no major edits to be made nor any critical errors. These mods I gave you are just some small tweaks here and there, please don't take them as absolute commands, your map is already decent.

Good luck with your map,
ptar124

Thanks! :)
Nyan
[Kantan]
Increase OD to 3

00:47:871 (51) - add Finish

[Futsuu]
00:33:057 (35,36,37,38) - I recommend d _ d _ d k instead of d _ _ _ d k k
00:56:020 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) -


01:02:316 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108) -


[Muzu]
Increase OD to 4
Increase HD to 5

00:34:168 (119) - move to 00:33:983 -

Other patterns are fine but Muzu usually not use 1/4 kkd rhythm

[Oni]

fine.
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]
Increase OD to 3 OK

00:47:871 (51) - add Finish OK

[Futsuu]
00:33:057 (35,36,37,38) - I recommend d _ d _ d k instead of d _ _ _ d k k Yeah, that's better.
00:56:020 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) -


01:02:316 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108) -


I'm little unsure of these 2, but OK. Might possibly change later on.

[Muzu]
Increase OD to 4
Increase HD to 5 They were supposed to be like this... Maybe I changed them somehow by accident? Anyway, fixed.

00:34:168 (119) - move to 00:33:983 - Added one k instead.

Other patterns are fine but Muzu usually not use 1/4 kkd rhythm Yeah, i've found that out recently. Haven't paid atention to it before. Changed those to kkk

[Oni]

fine.
Thanks!!!
Acarin_FWYKRin
Hi M4M Request

00:23:983 (12) D?
00:10:834 (19) :arrow: 00:10:649
00:13:612 (47) k Change
00:00:742 (3) k Change
00:02:316 (15) ^
00:09:908 add

Good luck
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi M4M Request

00:23:983 (12) D? Nope. There's a symbal sound = K
00:10:834 (19) :arrow: 00:10:649 Done
00:13:612 (47) k Change Done
00:00:742 (3) k Change Nope
00:02:316 (15) ^ Nope
00:09:908 add Done

Good luck
Thanks!
-Sh1n1-

About

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

General

  1. About OD and HP, you should check this link first cuz new rules: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode
  2. you forgot to uncheck "widescreen support" at Kantan

Kantan

  1. 00:05:649 (5) - this note should be k as higher diffs, furthermore, there is another kind of sound
  2. 00:12:686 (17,18,19,20) - it was confusing at testing. Try to move 00:12:686 (17,18,19) - to 00:13:057 - and delete 00:14:908 (20) - to make this part more simple, if you follow my advice make sure to change such notes into d to catch the sound better.
  3. I have the same doubt with 00:24:538 (13,14,15) - move to 00:24:908 - and delete 00:26:760 (16) -, don't forget about d, same as my previous advice
  4. 00:33:057 (27) - should be d because I can hear the same sound at 00:30:094 (22) -, furthermore, to mark a difference bertween 00:32:316 (26,27) -
  5. 00:34:168 (29) - what about change into d? intensity is decreasing and you need to add more emphasis to 00:34:538 (30,31) -
  6. 00:36:390 (33) - works better at 00:36:760 -, you never follow this kind of sound 00:36:390 -, for example: 00:30:464 - 00:33:427 -
  7. there are some notes at kiai time that could be deleted to follow general sounds and make more simple: 00:43:797 (44) - 00:46:760 (49) - 00:49:723 (53) -
    Solid, good job

Futsuu

  1. 00:19:353 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't agree with this pattern cuz these notes aren't keeping consistency with your previous patterns, I'll give you some suggestions to improve this part, apply first and if you don't like hold Ctrl+Z:
    -00:20:094 (6) - should be at 00:20:464 - and change to d
    -00:21:575 (9) - move to 00:21:945 -
    -remove 00:23:057 (12) -
  2. 00:32:686 (34) - are not necessary imo, to emphasize high pitch at 00:32:316 (33) -
  3. 00:41:575 (55) - same case here, this note should be deleted to add more emphasis at 00:41:945 (56) - finish kat note
    Good

Muzukashii

  1. 00:11:205 (38,39,40) - 3 notes with the same note ( d )? but there isn't another sound at 00:11:575 - ? 00:11:575 (39) - should be k imo
  2. 00:11:945 (40) - works better at 00:12:871 - imo, it's up to you
  3. 01:10:742 (241) - I'm not agree with this note, are nice but at Oni xd, at Muzu you should keep only easy triplets and simple patterns, this is too hard for Muzu imo
  4. 01:15:557 (262) - why? make simple, 01:15:557 (262) - move to 01:15:649 - and then add d at 01:15:464 -
  5. 01:22:594 (286) - as I said before, should be deleted

I'll continue my mod, depending on what do you think about my previous advices, cuz I want to know what are you following with k and d at Oni, best of Lucks
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

-Sh1n1- wrote:

About

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

General

  1. About OD and HP, you should check this link first cuz new rules: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode Yeah, I'm still learning... This is actually my first ever taiko mapset. Thanks for the link. Changed OD/HP in all diffs.
  2. you forgot to uncheck "widescreen support" at Kantan Oh... Fixed.

Kantan

  1. 00:05:649 (5) - this note should be k as higher diffs, furthermore, there is another kind of sound Done
  2. 00:12:686 (17,18,19,20) - it was confusing at testing. Try to move 00:12:686 (17,18,19) - to 00:13:057 - and delete 00:14:908 (20) - to make this part more simple, if you follow my advice make sure to change such notes into d to catch the sound better.
  3. I have the same doubt with 00:24:538 (13,14,15) - move to 00:24:908 - and delete 00:26:760 (16) -, don't forget about d, same as my previous advice
    I'm little unsure about these, but made the changes nevertheless...
  4. 00:33:057 (27) - should be d because I can hear the same sound at 00:30:094 (22) -, furthermore, to mark a difference bertween 00:32:316 (26,27) - OK
  5. 00:34:168 (29) - what about change into d? intensity is decreasing and you need to add more emphasis to 00:34:538 (30,31) - OK
  6. 00:36:390 (33) - works better at 00:36:760 -, you never follow this kind of sound 00:36:390 -, for example: 00:30:464 - 00:33:427 - Moved the note.
  7. there are some notes at kiai time that could be deleted to follow general sounds and make more simple: 00:43:797 (44) - 00:46:760 (49) - 00:49:723 (53) - Did that.
    Solid, good job

Futsuu

  1. 00:19:353 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't agree with this pattern cuz these notes aren't keeping consistency with your previous patterns, I'll give you some suggestions to improve this part, apply first and if you don't like hold Ctrl+Z:
    -00:20:094 (6) - should be at 00:20:464 - and change to d
    -00:21:575 (9) - move to 00:21:945 -
    -remove 00:23:057 (12) - I left #6 be, changed others.
  2. 00:32:686 (34) - are not necessary imo, to emphasize high pitch at 00:32:316 (33) - Deleted
  3. 00:41:575 (55) - same case here, this note should be deleted to add more emphasis at 00:41:945 (56) - finish kat note Yep
    Good

Muzukashii

  1. 00:11:205 (38,39,40) - 3 notes with the same note ( d )? but there isn't another sound at 00:11:575 - ? 00:11:575 (39) - should be k imo Changed 00:11:205 (38) - to k. Fits the drum-like rhythm better.
  2. 00:11:945 (40) - works better at 00:12:871 - imo, it's up to you Nope.
  3. 01:10:742 (241) - I'm not agree with this note, are nice but at Oni xd, at Muzu you should keep only easy triplets and simple patterns, this is too hard for Muzu imo OK, deleted.
  4. 01:15:557 (262) - why? make simple, 01:15:557 (262) - move to 01:15:649 - and then add d at 01:15:464 - Moved the note, but didn't add anything.
  5. 01:22:594 (286) - as I said before, should be deleted OK.

I'll continue my mod, depending on what do you think about my previous advices, cuz I want to know what are you following with k and d at Oni, best of Lucks
Thanks a lot!
NlHIL
[Kantan]
00:13:057 (17,18) - move to 00:13:242 - and 00:13:612 - ?
00:21:945 (9,10) - move or add to 00:22:316 - ?
01:13:797 (92,93) - change to d?
[Futsuu]
00:09:908 (17,18) - reverse the color?
00:21:945 (9,10,11) - ...move?
00:33:612 - add
00:40:094 (49) - change to d?
01:08:612 (115) - change to k?
[other diffs]
nice.. ;w;
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

NlHIL wrote:

[Kantan]
00:13:057 (17,18) - move to 00:13:242 - and 00:13:612 - ? Nope
00:21:945 (9,10) - move or add to 00:22:316 - ? Considering... Didn't change yet.
01:13:797 (92,93) - change to d? Only #93
[Futsuu]
00:09:908 (17,18) - reverse the color? Nope
00:21:945 (9,10,11) - ...move? Done
00:33:612 - add Added d
00:40:094 (49) - change to d? OK
01:08:612 (115) - change to k? Nope
[other diffs]
nice.. ;w;
Thanks. :)
newyams99
Hi from M4M~

Kantan
00:36:760 (32) - Change to d. This sounds similar to 00:30:834 (22).

00:39:353 (37) - Change to d. I feel like there should be a contrast with the very different rhythm featured at 00:39:723 (38). Alternatively, change 00:39:723 (38) for a pitch contrast with 00:40:464 (39).

00:45:649 (45) - Change to d. I realize that you're matching with the piccolo like instrument here, but I think a d would go against 00:46:205 (46) better.

00:51:945 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - I'd probably remove 00:54:538 (59,60) to accommodate this rhythm. This six hit rhythm is too long for a 1/1 rhythm in a Kantan. You're already pushing the limit to the scarcity of 4/1 breaks in the song, so you probably should change this so that the 1/1 rhythm is easier or make a nice 4/1 rest moment somewhere after (or before, but preferably after) this rhythm.

Futsuu

00:00:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is quite boring for a Futsuu player. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862609

00:09:908 (20) - Change to k to match 00:21:760 (9).

00:33:427 (34,35,36) - Match this to 00:30:464 (27,28,29). I'm pretty sure you're matching to the melody here both times.

00:46:020 - Add a k? Like 00:43:057 (56).

01:09:353 (118) - Changing to k matches the way you've mapped this better imo.

Muzukashii

00:02:686 (7) - Instead of this, how about a d and adding a d at 00:02:871 to make a d d k rhythm?

00:11:945 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - Change to the rhythm at 00:23:797 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90)? I really liked the second rhythm.

00:31:205 (108) - Changing to d would match the melody better imo.

00:34:168 (120) - ^

00:37:131 (130) - ^

00:52:316 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Switch the colours of all these hits. It should end with a k since the melody is going up the scale.

01:17:871 (271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280) - This seems like quite a random rhythm to me. Maybe make a more uniform pattern here? For example, a uniform k d k d k . . . rhythm would work.

Oni

The difficulty gap between the Oni and the Muzukashii is pretty big, in terms of actual skill requirements, not just the Star Rating. If you're going to try to get this past the TNA queue, this might be a problem, but leave it for now.

00:04:260 (29) - Change to k for a consistency of rhythm.

00:16:020 (100) - Change to k. It doesn't sound any different from 00:13:242 (83,84,85) to me.

00:31:205 (186) - Change to d. I think this would match the melody better, as said in the Muzukashii.

00:34:353 (207) - Change to d? This sounds a bit different from the next five hit 1/4 rhythm.

00:36:020 (216) - This slider seems unnecessary. Remove and replace with a different rhythm?

00:39:723 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - Just my personal suggestion on this stream. How about this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862804

01:20:279 (452) - How about a k?

01:23:242 (467) - ^

This minigame was pretty easy in the DS game :P

Good luck on rank~
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from M4M~

Kantan
00:36:760 (32) - Change to d. This sounds similar to 00:30:834 (22). OK

00:39:353 (37) - Change to d. I feel like there should be a contrast with the very different rhythm featured at 00:39:723 (38). Alternatively, change 00:39:723 (38) for a pitch contrast with 00:40:464 (39). Changed 00:39:353 (37) -

00:45:649 (45) - Change to d. I realize that you're matching with the piccolo like instrument here, but I think a d would go against 00:46:205 (46) better. Nah, it's fine.

00:51:945 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - I'd probably remove 00:54:538 (59,60) to accommodate this rhythm. This six hit rhythm is too long for a 1/1 rhythm in a Kantan. You're already pushing the limit to the scarcity of 4/1 breaks in the song, so you probably should change this so that the 1/1 rhythm is easier or make a nice 4/1 rest moment somewhere after (or before, but preferably after) this rhythm. OK

Futsuu

00:00:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is quite boring for a Futsuu player. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862609 Made some different changes

00:09:908 (20) - Change to k to match 00:21:760 (9). Yep

00:33:427 (34,35,36) - Match this to 00:30:464 (27,28,29). I'm pretty sure you're matching to the melody here both times. Done

00:46:020 - Add a k? Like 00:43:057 (56). Actually deleted #56

01:09:353 (118) - Changing to k matches the way you've mapped this better imo. Doesn't really make that much diference imo. No change.

Muzukashii

00:02:686 (7) - Instead of this, how about a d and adding a d at 00:02:871 to make a d d k rhythm? Made the beginning more interesting overally.

00:11:945 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - Change to the rhythm at 00:23:797 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90)? I really liked the second rhythm.

00:31:205 (108) - Changing to d would match the melody better imo. Nope, I prefer k

00:34:168 (120) - ^

00:37:131 (130) - ^ 

00:52:316 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Switch the colours of all these hits. It should end with a k since the melody is going up the scale. Oh, you're right. Fixed.

01:17:871 (271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280) - This seems like quite a random rhythm to me. Maybe make a more uniform pattern here? For example, a uniform k d k d k . . . rhythm would work. Changed the pattern differently. I think I'm following the background violin-type melody. :P

Oni

The difficulty gap between the Oni and the Muzukashii is pretty big, in terms of actual skill requirements, not just the Star Rating. If you're going to try to get this past the TNA queue, this might be a problem, but leave it for now. I actually made couple patterns little bit harder in Muzu. I hope that it'll pass...

00:04:260 (29) - Change to k for a consistency of rhythm. I left that as d on purpose. the piccolo sound actually goes little bit lower there.

00:16:020 (100) - Change to k. It doesn't sound any different from 00:13:242 (83,84,85) to me. It does. No change.

00:31:205 (186) - Change to d. I think this would match the melody better, as said in the Muzukashii. Nope

00:34:353 (207) - Change to d? This sounds a bit different from the next five hit 1/4 rhythm. It doesn't matter, since the music "wobbles" in both cases. No change.

00:36:020 (216) - This slider seems unnecessary. Remove and replace with a different rhythm? It's either slider or 1/4 stream. They sound 80% the same while playing, so it doesn't matter that much. But I'm considering this.

00:39:723 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - Just my personal suggestion on this stream. How about this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862804 Yeah, that's better.

01:20:279 (452) - How about a k? Nope

01:23:242 (467) - ^ Nope

This minigame was pretty easy in the DS game :P
Yeah, but still loved it. :D

Good luck on rank~
Thanks!!
Volta
hello, M4M~

[Kantan]
00:01:945 (2) - change to k? pitch higher than 00:03:427 (3) -
00:04:908 (4) - k

00:13:057 (17) - can be deleted to give longer break.. or move to 00:13:427 -
00:24:908 (13) - ^
00:17:501 (1) - delete

00:27:131 (14) - k fits to te instrument here.
00:28:983 (17) - you better not suddenly change to beat. move to 00:28:612 - and change to d to follow instrument.
00:29:723 () - after that delete this to give 4/1 break.

00:42:686 () - better replace this slider with a D at 00:43:242 - it gives better feeling and consistent with 00:46:205 -
00:48:612 (46) - change to D at 00:49:168 -

00:50:464 () - delete,
00:51:205 () - move to 00:51:575 -
00:53:427 () - and delete this to give a preparation to hit next finisher.

00:57:131 () - change to d and move to 00:56:760 -
01:00:464 (64,65) - delete
01:03:057 (67) - change to d and move to 01:02:686 -

01:11:390 (80) - i know there is sound but.. doesn't play nicely and might be hard for newbie. maybe just ignore the cymbal and move to 01:11:760 - and delete 01:11:945 (81) - to just follow music

01:18:242 (90,91) - delete. newbie needs break.
01:21:205 (94) - ^


[Futsuu]
00:01:945 (3) - better change to k like i said in kantan, and move 00:02:316 (4) - to 00:02:686 - for better consistency with 00:05:649 -
00:04:908 (8) - k
00:05:649 - change to d coz instrument start from low pitch

00:10:649 (20) - d

00:12:131 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - nooo too longgggg. cut it at 00:13:983 (27) -

00:15:279 (1) - this spinner is mappable.

00:18:057 (1) - sudenly 1/2 duplet. better move to 00:17:871 -
00:24:353 - delete
00:25:464 (17) - why slider? replace with notes like previous section.

00:27:501 (22) - delete this
00:29:538 (23) - better move to 00:29:353 - to give 2/1 break rather than making weird rhytm

00:37:871 (43,44) - swap these because you following vocal pitch here
00:41:205 (51) - and this is k

00:56:020 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - might be too long.

01:08:612 (113) - k
01:08:983 (114) - move to 01:09:723 -
01:10:464 (117) - delete

01:11:945 () - move to 01:12:316 -
01:13:427 () - delete
01:15:279 (127,128,129) - kdk

[Muzukashii]
00:06:020 (20,21,22) - maybe kkk is better considering the pitch

00:12:501 (45) - move to 00:13:057 - try to have some consistencies with 00:24:908 -
00:25:649 - add note

00:14:168 (51) - listening to bass sound, k is better here
00:14:908 (53) - and this is d
00:15:279 (54) - k
00:26:020 (94) - k
00:26:760 (96) - d
00:27:131 (97) - k

01:11:760 (249) - deletee
01:15:279 (263,264,265,266) - k dkd

[Oni]
00:04:260 (29) - following your sequence, this should be k?
00:18:242 (112) - d
00:28:242 (166,167) - swap
00:30:464 (182) - d is better imo



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