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Tsunku - Lockstep [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Jaltzu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23. elokuutata 2020 at 17.32.38

Artist: Tsunku
Title: Lockstep
Source: リズム天国ゴールド
Tags: instrumental video game rhythm heaven paradise world tengoku gold ウラオモテ uraomote nintendo ds nds mitsuo terada tnx music recordings
BPM: 162
Filesize: 2957kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,27 stars, 243 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4,23 stars, 505 notes)
  3. Kantan (1,75 stars, 151 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2,93 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Oni (3,51 stars, 406 notes)
Download: Tsunku - Lockstep
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first taiko set. Reworked all the diffs, but don't expect anything special. Might remap again.

Major changes
2015.10.09: Made Taiko only + complete remap on all diffs.
2015.10.21: Added Kantan.
2015.10.26: Updated BG.
2015.11.03: Added new Oni, the old one became Inner Oni.
2020.06.29 The set lives on! Reworked Inner a bit. Start of Moddingv2.
2020.07.10 Reworked all diffs.

Modders (V1)
Prophecy, game rock, Skeuddy, ptar124, Nyan, Anima_Alumi-47, -Sh1n1-, NlHIL, newyams99, Flying Pan, ManP, xtrem3x, Aldwych, L1m3s, -Tenshi-, IntelliTroodon, QHideaki13, [_Chichinya_], chaica

Modders (V2)
ginjani
WTHBRO
FiNNb

BG by Wupar Account gone ;_;
Prophecy
[Muzukashii]
00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ddd ddd d because the rules...
00:09:538 (32) - delete
00:21:390 (75) - ^
00:31:853 (109,110) - ddk d k
00:37:501 (130,131,132,133) - ddk d k
00:51:020 (173,174,175) - kkk
00:56:575 (195) - delete
01:00:371 (205,206) - kkk d
01:01:853 (212,213) - kkk d
01:10:742 (238,239,240,241) - ddk d k
01:12:871 (248,249,250,251) - kkk d k

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Prophecy wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ddd ddd d because the rules... Yep
00:09:538 (32) - delete Moved to 00:09:723 to fit the music better
00:21:390 (75) - ^ Same fix as above
00:31:853 (109,110) - ddk d k
00:37:501 (130,131,132,133) - ddk d k I'm not exactly sure what you mean by these two... Sorry... But I changed them just a little. I'd like to keep those double notes if possible.
00:51:020 (173,174,175) - kkk OK
00:56:575 (195) - delete This makes moving on to those 'half beats' easier + there's a clear symbal sound that i'd feel bad to leave unmapped. So no.
01:00:371 (205,206) - kkk d
01:01:853 (212,213) - kkk d Changed couple notes, but kept the same rhythm.
01:10:742 (238,239,240,241) - ddk d k No changes
01:12:871 (248,249,250,251) - kkk d k My ears say 'NO'.

Good Luck :3
Thanks!!
Gemu-
Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Futsuu]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHFUW/854b218f0b.jpg

00:28:427 (23,24,25,26) - Change to k to folow the rhythm and the consistency with 00:23:983 (14,15,16,17) -
00:44:908 - Change to d to follow the drums.
00:46:205 - ^
01:07:131 - Change to d because a D is not necessary
01:07:871 - Change to k because a K is not necessary
01:16:760 (135,136) - This is not necessary, so change to k.

[ Muzukashii]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGsC/f2fcb9135c.jpg

00:05:927 - Remove because is hard for Muzukashii.
00:06:205 - ^
00:06:297 - ^
00:21:390 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:09:538 -

[ Oni]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGYp/5d0a6ac355.jpg

00:14:908 - Change to k to follow a different rhythm.
00:17:871 - ^
If you Change to k here 00:14:908 - Can you change to k here 00:26:760 - to follow the consistency.
00:27:316 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:15:464 -
00:31:668 - Change to k to follow the rhythm and here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Ctrl G to follow the rhythm and the drums.
00:32:501 (187,188,189) - Remove the Finish, is not necessary in this part.
If you change to k here 00:31:668 - and if you applicate the Ctrl G here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Can you change to k here 00:37:594 - and here Ctrl G here 00:37:779 (216,217) - to follow the consistency.
00:53:773 - Remove this finish, unrankeable.
Remove the finish here 00:57:131 - 00:57:501 - 00:57:871 - 00:58:242 - 00:58:612 - 01:03:057 - 01:03:427 - 01:03:797 - 01:04:168 - 01:04:538 - because this is not necessary.
01:17:501 - Remove this finish, unrankeable.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Futsuu]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHFUW/854b218f0b.jpg

00:28:427 (23,24,25,26) - Change to k to folow the rhythm and the consistency with 00:23:983 (14,15,16,17) - Yep
00:44:908 - Change to d to follow the drums. Hmm... OK
00:46:205 - ^ Yep
01:07:131 - Change to d because a D is not necessary
01:07:871 - Change to k because a K is not necessary
01:16:760 (135,136) - This is not necessary, so change to k. Changed all these finish sounds + 1 more to normal.

[ Muzukashii]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGsC/f2fcb9135c.jpg

00:05:927 - Remove because is hard for Muzukashii.
00:06:205 - ^
00:06:297 - ^
00:21:390 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:09:538 - I made some changes to these parts.

[ Oni]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support http://puu.sh/kHGYp/5d0a6ac355.jpg

00:14:908 - Change to k to follow a different rhythm. Nope
00:17:871 - ^ OK
If you Change to k here 00:14:908 - Can you change to k here 00:26:760 - to follow the consistency.
00:27:316 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:15:464 - Left these unchanged, but I'm considering doing something.
00:31:668 - Change to k to follow the rhythm and here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Ctrl G to follow the rhythm and the drums. I think it's fine as it is.
00:32:501 (187,188,189) - Remove the Finish, is not necessary in this part. Done
If you change to k here 00:31:668 - and if you applicate the Ctrl G here 00:31:853 (183,184) - Can you change to k here 00:37:594 - and here Ctrl G here 00:37:779 (216,217) - to follow the consistency. No changes.
00:53:773 - Remove this finish, unrankeable. Wrong timing point? If you meant the one in the end of the stream, I removed it.
Remove the finish here 00:57:131 - 00:57:501 - 00:57:871 - 00:58:242 - 00:58:612 - 01:03:057 - 01:03:427 - 01:03:797 - 01:04:168 - 01:04:538 - because this is not necessary. Yeah, those were really bad... Done.
01:17:501 - Remove this finish, unrankeable.Yeah.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~ Definitely was helpfull. :)
Thanks!!!
Skeuddy
Hello, Jaltzu, from my queue
Where kiai?
00:29:908 - 00:41:945 I think

Muzukashii
  1. 00:02:686 (7) - k
  2. 00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ (kkk kkk)
  3. 00:11:575 (38) - ^
  4. 00:32:131 (111) - ^
  5. 00:38:057 (132) - ^
  6. 00:46:575 (163) - ^
  7. 00:16:760 (56) to 00:16:575
  8. 00:23:057 (80,81) - Swap
  9. 00:51:390 - Some note
  10. 00:56:575 (195) - D
  11. 01:02:501 (216) - ^ (D)
Oni
  1. 00:01:853 (11) - k
  2. 00:03:334 (22) - ^
  3. 00:04:816 (33) - ^
  4. 00:13:427 (83) - ^
  5. 00:14:908 (91) - ^ (and 00:15:094 (92,93) - Swap, 00:15:464 (94) - d)
  6. 00:25:279 (144) - ^
  7. 00:26:760 (152,154) - ^
  8. 00:28:983 (164,166) - ^
  9. 00:30:834 (178) - ^ (and 00:31:205 (180) - D)
  10. 00:44:538 (258) - ^
  11. 00:34:631 (203,205) - ^
  12. 00:50:464 (291) - ^
  13. 00:40:464 (237,241) - d
  14. 00:53:057 (310,314) - ^
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Skeuddy wrote:

Hello, Jaltzu, from my queue
Where kiai?
00:29:908 - 00:41:945 I think Added kiai to another location.

Muzukashii
  1. 00:02:686 (7) - k OK
  2. 00:05:649 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ (kkk kkk) Nope
  3. 00:11:575 (38) - ^ I think d is fine
  4. 00:32:131 (111) - ^ OK
  5. 00:38:057 (132) - ^ OK
  6. 00:46:575 (163) - ^ OK
  7. 00:16:760 (56) to 00:16:575 Did that + changed couple other notes
  8. 00:23:057 (80,81) - Swap OK
  9. 00:51:390 - Some note Put in k
  10. 00:56:575 (195) - D Changed these 2 to K
  11. 01:02:501 (216) - ^ (D)
Oni
  1. 00:01:853 (11) - k Yep
  2. 00:03:334 (22) - ^ Yep
  3. 00:04:816 (33) - ^ Nope
  4. 00:13:427 (83) - ^ Yep
  5. 00:14:908 (91) - ^ (and 00:15:094 (92,93) - Swap, 00:15:464 (94) - d) Different changes.
  6. 00:25:279 (144) - ^ Yep
  7. 00:26:760 (152,154) - ^ Made the same pattern as in the similar part before.
  8. 00:28:983 (164,166) - ^ Nope
  9. 00:30:834 (178) - ^ (and 00:31:205 (180) - D) I actually deleted all the finishes from these parts.
  10. 00:44:538 (258) - ^ Nope
  11. 00:34:631 (203,205) - ^ Ds in a 1/4 stream? Nonono.
  12. 00:50:464 (291) - ^ Doesn't really fit there...
  13. 00:40:464 (237,241) - d My mapping style fits the beeping sounds better. So no.
  14. 00:53:057 (310,314) - ^
Thank you!
ptar124
Hello, from - N a n a k a -'s Thai Modding Queue

Oni

00:06:020 (44,45,46,47,48) - change some of them to emphasize the melody but 48 MUST be a kat
00:11:760 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - a little repetitive and this might be too easy for Oni, consider adding some 1/4 patterns
00:24:353 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - ^
00:47:871 (278) - add finish or change to slider to accompany the sound effects
01:06:020 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - consistency of difficulty lost, consider adding some more notes, the difficulty level here is going down to Kantan already
01:13:242 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413) - way too repetitive, consider adding kkd-k-d-k-d-k-d-kkd-k-d.... like the other parts
OD 6 and HP 6 might be a little too hard for a 3-star oni. Usually, the OD6 HP6 maps I see are over 4.5*. Consider that, maybe?

Muzukashii

00:07:686 - add don or kat to accompany the melody
00:47:871 (167) - change to small slider

Futsuu

00:47:871 (71) - add finish or change to slider
01:15:279 (130,131,132,133) - trhythm is too complex for Futsuu, consider changing to 1/1 or 1/2 patterns

Hi Jaltzu,

Your mapset is doing pretty good, no major edits to be made nor any critical errors. These mods I gave you are just some small tweaks here and there, please don't take them as absolute commands, your map is already decent.

Good luck with your map,
ptar124
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

ptar124 wrote:

Hello, from - N a n a k a -'s Thai Modding Queue

Oni

00:06:020 (44,45,46,47,48) - change some of them to emphasize the melody but 48 MUST be a kat Added couple kats
00:11:760 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - a little repetitive and this might be too easy for Oni, consider adding some 1/4 patterns
00:24:353 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - ^ Added some stuff to these parts.
00:47:871 (278) - add finish or change to slider to accompany the sound effects Small slider.
01:06:020 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - consistency of difficulty lost, consider adding some more notes, the difficulty level here is going down to Kantan already Made some harder patterns.
01:13:242 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413) - way too repetitive, consider adding kkd-k-d-k-d-k-d-kkd-k-d.... like the other parts Added couple triplets, but not sure if it fit's there so well... But we'll see about that later. :)
OD 6 and HP 6 might be a little too hard for a 3-star oni. Usually, the OD6 HP6 maps I see are over 4.5*. Consider that, maybe? Changed to 5.

Muzukashii

00:07:686 - add don or kat to accompany the melody kat
00:47:871 (167) - change to small slider Added kinda long drumroll (=slider)

Futsuu

00:47:871 (71) - add finish or change to slider Added finish
01:15:279 (130,131,132,133) - trhythm is too complex for Futsuu, consider changing to 1/1 or 1/2 patterns Made some changes...

Hi Jaltzu,

Your mapset is doing pretty good, no major edits to be made nor any critical errors. These mods I gave you are just some small tweaks here and there, please don't take them as absolute commands, your map is already decent.

Good luck with your map,
ptar124

Thanks! :)
Nyan
[Kantan]
Increase OD to 3

00:47:871 (51) - add Finish

[Futsuu]
00:33:057 (35,36,37,38) - I recommend d _ d _ d k instead of d _ _ _ d k k
00:56:020 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) -


01:02:316 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108) -


[Muzu]
Increase OD to 4
Increase HD to 5

00:34:168 (119) - move to 00:33:983 -

Other patterns are fine but Muzu usually not use 1/4 kkd rhythm

[Oni]

fine.
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]
Increase OD to 3 OK

00:47:871 (51) - add Finish OK

[Futsuu]
00:33:057 (35,36,37,38) - I recommend d _ d _ d k instead of d _ _ _ d k k Yeah, that's better.
00:56:020 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) -


01:02:316 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108) -


I'm little unsure of these 2, but OK. Might possibly change later on.

[Muzu]
Increase OD to 4
Increase HD to 5 They were supposed to be like this... Maybe I changed them somehow by accident? Anyway, fixed.

00:34:168 (119) - move to 00:33:983 - Added one k instead.

Other patterns are fine but Muzu usually not use 1/4 kkd rhythm Yeah, i've found that out recently. Haven't paid atention to it before. Changed those to kkk

[Oni]

fine.
Thanks!!!
Acarin_FWYKRin
Hi M4M Request

Kantan
00:23:983 (12) D?
Futsuu
00:10:834 (19) :arrow: 00:10:649
Muzukashii
00:13:612 (47) k Change
Oni
00:00:742 (3) k Change
00:02:316 (15) ^
00:09:908 add

Good luck
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi M4M Request

Kantan
00:23:983 (12) D? Nope. There's a symbal sound = K
Futsuu
00:10:834 (19) :arrow: 00:10:649 Done
Muzukashii
00:13:612 (47) k Change Done
Oni
00:00:742 (3) k Change Nope
00:02:316 (15) ^ Nope
00:09:908 add Done

Good luck
Thanks!
-Sh1n1-

About


  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

General


  1. About OD and HP, you should check this link first cuz new rules: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode
  2. you forgot to uncheck "widescreen support" at Kantan

Kantan


  1. 00:05:649 (5) - this note should be k as higher diffs, furthermore, there is another kind of sound
  2. 00:12:686 (17,18,19,20) - it was confusing at testing. Try to move 00:12:686 (17,18,19) - to 00:13:057 - and delete 00:14:908 (20) - to make this part more simple, if you follow my advice make sure to change such notes into d to catch the sound better.
  3. I have the same doubt with 00:24:538 (13,14,15) - move to 00:24:908 - and delete 00:26:760 (16) -, don't forget about d, same as my previous advice
  4. 00:33:057 (27) - should be d because I can hear the same sound at 00:30:094 (22) -, furthermore, to mark a difference bertween 00:32:316 (26,27) -
  5. 00:34:168 (29) - what about change into d? intensity is decreasing and you need to add more emphasis to 00:34:538 (30,31) -
  6. 00:36:390 (33) - works better at 00:36:760 -, you never follow this kind of sound 00:36:390 -, for example: 00:30:464 - 00:33:427 -
  7. there are some notes at kiai time that could be deleted to follow general sounds and make more simple: 00:43:797 (44) - 00:46:760 (49) - 00:49:723 (53) -
    Solid, good job

Futsuu


  1. 00:19:353 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't agree with this pattern cuz these notes aren't keeping consistency with your previous patterns, I'll give you some suggestions to improve this part, apply first and if you don't like hold Ctrl+Z:
    -00:20:094 (6) - should be at 00:20:464 - and change to d
    -00:21:575 (9) - move to 00:21:945 -
    -remove 00:23:057 (12) -
  2. 00:32:686 (34) - are not necessary imo, to emphasize high pitch at 00:32:316 (33) -
  3. 00:41:575 (55) - same case here, this note should be deleted to add more emphasis at 00:41:945 (56) - finish kat note
    Good

Muzukashii


  1. 00:11:205 (38,39,40) - 3 notes with the same note ( d )? but there isn't another sound at 00:11:575 - ? 00:11:575 (39) - should be k imo
  2. 00:11:945 (40) - works better at 00:12:871 - imo, it's up to you
  3. 01:10:742 (241) - I'm not agree with this note, are nice but at Oni xd, at Muzu you should keep only easy triplets and simple patterns, this is too hard for Muzu imo
  4. 01:15:557 (262) - why? make simple, 01:15:557 (262) - move to 01:15:649 - and then add d at 01:15:464 -
  5. 01:22:594 (286) - as I said before, should be deleted

I'll continue my mod, depending on what do you think about my previous advices, cuz I want to know what are you following with k and d at Oni, best of Lucks
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

-Sh1n1- wrote:


About


  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

General


  1. About OD and HP, you should check this link first cuz new rules: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode Yeah, I'm still learning... This is actually my first ever taiko mapset. Thanks for the link. Changed OD/HP in all diffs.
  2. you forgot to uncheck "widescreen support" at Kantan Oh... Fixed.

Kantan


  1. 00:05:649 (5) - this note should be k as higher diffs, furthermore, there is another kind of sound Done
  2. 00:12:686 (17,18,19,20) - it was confusing at testing. Try to move 00:12:686 (17,18,19) - to 00:13:057 - and delete 00:14:908 (20) - to make this part more simple, if you follow my advice make sure to change such notes into d to catch the sound better.
  3. I have the same doubt with 00:24:538 (13,14,15) - move to 00:24:908 - and delete 00:26:760 (16) -, don't forget about d, same as my previous advice
    I'm little unsure about these, but made the changes nevertheless...
  4. 00:33:057 (27) - should be d because I can hear the same sound at 00:30:094 (22) -, furthermore, to mark a difference bertween 00:32:316 (26,27) - OK
  5. 00:34:168 (29) - what about change into d? intensity is decreasing and you need to add more emphasis to 00:34:538 (30,31) - OK
  6. 00:36:390 (33) - works better at 00:36:760 -, you never follow this kind of sound 00:36:390 -, for example: 00:30:464 - 00:33:427 - Moved the note.
  7. there are some notes at kiai time that could be deleted to follow general sounds and make more simple: 00:43:797 (44) - 00:46:760 (49) - 00:49:723 (53) - Did that.
    Solid, good job

Futsuu


  1. 00:19:353 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't agree with this pattern cuz these notes aren't keeping consistency with your previous patterns, I'll give you some suggestions to improve this part, apply first and if you don't like hold Ctrl+Z:
    -00:20:094 (6) - should be at 00:20:464 - and change to d
    -00:21:575 (9) - move to 00:21:945 -
    -remove 00:23:057 (12) - I left #6 be, changed others.
  2. 00:32:686 (34) - are not necessary imo, to emphasize high pitch at 00:32:316 (33) - Deleted
  3. 00:41:575 (55) - same case here, this note should be deleted to add more emphasis at 00:41:945 (56) - finish kat note Yep
    Good

Muzukashii


  1. 00:11:205 (38,39,40) - 3 notes with the same note ( d )? but there isn't another sound at 00:11:575 - ? 00:11:575 (39) - should be k imo Changed 00:11:205 (38) - to k. Fits the drum-like rhythm better.
  2. 00:11:945 (40) - works better at 00:12:871 - imo, it's up to you Nope.
  3. 01:10:742 (241) - I'm not agree with this note, are nice but at Oni xd, at Muzu you should keep only easy triplets and simple patterns, this is too hard for Muzu imo OK, deleted.
  4. 01:15:557 (262) - why? make simple, 01:15:557 (262) - move to 01:15:649 - and then add d at 01:15:464 - Moved the note, but didn't add anything.
  5. 01:22:594 (286) - as I said before, should be deleted OK.

I'll continue my mod, depending on what do you think about my previous advices, cuz I want to know what are you following with k and d at Oni, best of Lucks
Thanks a lot!
NlHIL
[Kantan]
00:13:057 (17,18) - move to 00:13:242 - and 00:13:612 - ?
00:21:945 (9,10) - move or add to 00:22:316 - ?
01:13:797 (92,93) - change to d?
[Futsuu]
00:09:908 (17,18) - reverse the color?
00:21:945 (9,10,11) - ...move?
00:33:612 - add
00:40:094 (49) - change to d?
01:08:612 (115) - change to k?
[other diffs]
nice.. ;w;
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

NlHIL wrote:

[Kantan]
00:13:057 (17,18) - move to 00:13:242 - and 00:13:612 - ? Nope
00:21:945 (9,10) - move or add to 00:22:316 - ? Considering... Didn't change yet.
01:13:797 (92,93) - change to d? Only #93
[Futsuu]
00:09:908 (17,18) - reverse the color? Nope
00:21:945 (9,10,11) - ...move? Done
00:33:612 - add Added d
00:40:094 (49) - change to d? OK
01:08:612 (115) - change to k? Nope
[other diffs]
nice.. ;w;
Thanks. :)
newyams99
Hi from M4M~

Kantan
00:36:760 (32) - Change to d. This sounds similar to 00:30:834 (22).

00:39:353 (37) - Change to d. I feel like there should be a contrast with the very different rhythm featured at 00:39:723 (38). Alternatively, change 00:39:723 (38) for a pitch contrast with 00:40:464 (39).

00:45:649 (45) - Change to d. I realize that you're matching with the piccolo like instrument here, but I think a d would go against 00:46:205 (46) better.

00:51:945 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - I'd probably remove 00:54:538 (59,60) to accommodate this rhythm. This six hit rhythm is too long for a 1/1 rhythm in a Kantan. You're already pushing the limit to the scarcity of 4/1 breaks in the song, so you probably should change this so that the 1/1 rhythm is easier or make a nice 4/1 rest moment somewhere after (or before, but preferably after) this rhythm.

Futsuu

00:00:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is quite boring for a Futsuu player. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862609

00:09:908 (20) - Change to k to match 00:21:760 (9).

00:33:427 (34,35,36) - Match this to 00:30:464 (27,28,29). I'm pretty sure you're matching to the melody here both times.

00:46:020 - Add a k? Like 00:43:057 (56).

01:09:353 (118) - Changing to k matches the way you've mapped this better imo.

Muzukashii

00:02:686 (7) - Instead of this, how about a d and adding a d at 00:02:871 to make a d d k rhythm?

00:11:945 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - Change to the rhythm at 00:23:797 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90)? I really liked the second rhythm.

00:31:205 (108) - Changing to d would match the melody better imo.

00:34:168 (120) - ^

00:37:131 (130) - ^

00:52:316 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Switch the colours of all these hits. It should end with a k since the melody is going up the scale.

01:17:871 (271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280) - This seems like quite a random rhythm to me. Maybe make a more uniform pattern here? For example, a uniform k d k d k . . . rhythm would work.

Oni

The difficulty gap between the Oni and the Muzukashii is pretty big, in terms of actual skill requirements, not just the Star Rating. If you're going to try to get this past the TNA queue, this might be a problem, but leave it for now.

00:04:260 (29) - Change to k for a consistency of rhythm.

00:16:020 (100) - Change to k. It doesn't sound any different from 00:13:242 (83,84,85) to me.

00:31:205 (186) - Change to d. I think this would match the melody better, as said in the Muzukashii.

00:34:353 (207) - Change to d? This sounds a bit different from the next five hit 1/4 rhythm.

00:36:020 (216) - This slider seems unnecessary. Remove and replace with a different rhythm?

00:39:723 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - Just my personal suggestion on this stream. How about this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862804

01:20:279 (452) - How about a k?

01:23:242 (467) - ^

This minigame was pretty easy in the DS game :P

Good luck on rank~
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from M4M~

Kantan
00:36:760 (32) - Change to d. This sounds similar to 00:30:834 (22). OK

00:39:353 (37) - Change to d. I feel like there should be a contrast with the very different rhythm featured at 00:39:723 (38). Alternatively, change 00:39:723 (38) for a pitch contrast with 00:40:464 (39). Changed 00:39:353 (37) -

00:45:649 (45) - Change to d. I realize that you're matching with the piccolo like instrument here, but I think a d would go against 00:46:205 (46) better. Nah, it's fine.

00:51:945 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - I'd probably remove 00:54:538 (59,60) to accommodate this rhythm. This six hit rhythm is too long for a 1/1 rhythm in a Kantan. You're already pushing the limit to the scarcity of 4/1 breaks in the song, so you probably should change this so that the 1/1 rhythm is easier or make a nice 4/1 rest moment somewhere after (or before, but preferably after) this rhythm. OK

Futsuu

00:00:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is quite boring for a Futsuu player. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862609 Made some different changes

00:09:908 (20) - Change to k to match 00:21:760 (9). Yep

00:33:427 (34,35,36) - Match this to 00:30:464 (27,28,29). I'm pretty sure you're matching to the melody here both times. Done

00:46:020 - Add a k? Like 00:43:057 (56). Actually deleted #56

01:09:353 (118) - Changing to k matches the way you've mapped this better imo. Doesn't really make that much diference imo. No change.

Muzukashii

00:02:686 (7) - Instead of this, how about a d and adding a d at 00:02:871 to make a d d k rhythm? Made the beginning more interesting overally.

00:11:945 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - Change to the rhythm at 00:23:797 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90)? I really liked the second rhythm.

00:31:205 (108) - Changing to d would match the melody better imo. Nope, I prefer k

00:34:168 (120) - ^

00:37:131 (130) - ^ 

00:52:316 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Switch the colours of all these hits. It should end with a k since the melody is going up the scale. Oh, you're right. Fixed.

01:17:871 (271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280) - This seems like quite a random rhythm to me. Maybe make a more uniform pattern here? For example, a uniform k d k d k . . . rhythm would work. Changed the pattern differently. I think I'm following the background violin-type melody. :P

Oni

The difficulty gap between the Oni and the Muzukashii is pretty big, in terms of actual skill requirements, not just the Star Rating. If you're going to try to get this past the TNA queue, this might be a problem, but leave it for now. I actually made couple patterns little bit harder in Muzu. I hope that it'll pass...

00:04:260 (29) - Change to k for a consistency of rhythm. I left that as d on purpose. the piccolo sound actually goes little bit lower there.

00:16:020 (100) - Change to k. It doesn't sound any different from 00:13:242 (83,84,85) to me. It does. No change.

00:31:205 (186) - Change to d. I think this would match the melody better, as said in the Muzukashii. Nope

00:34:353 (207) - Change to d? This sounds a bit different from the next five hit 1/4 rhythm. It doesn't matter, since the music "wobbles" in both cases. No change.

00:36:020 (216) - This slider seems unnecessary. Remove and replace with a different rhythm? It's either slider or 1/4 stream. They sound 80% the same while playing, so it doesn't matter that much. But I'm considering this.

00:39:723 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - Just my personal suggestion on this stream. How about this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3862804 Yeah, that's better.

01:20:279 (452) - How about a k? Nope

01:23:242 (467) - ^ Nope

This minigame was pretty easy in the DS game :P
Yeah, but still loved it. :D

Good luck on rank~
Thanks!!
Volta
hello, M4M~

[Kantan]
00:01:945 (2) - change to k? pitch higher than 00:03:427 (3) -
00:04:908 (4) - k

00:13:057 (17) - can be deleted to give longer break.. or move to 00:13:427 -
00:24:908 (13) - ^
00:17:501 (1) - delete

00:27:131 (14) - k fits to te instrument here.
00:28:983 (17) - you better not suddenly change to beat. move to 00:28:612 - and change to d to follow instrument.
00:29:723 () - after that delete this to give 4/1 break.

00:42:686 () - better replace this slider with a D at 00:43:242 - it gives better feeling and consistent with 00:46:205 -
00:48:612 (46) - change to D at 00:49:168 -

00:50:464 () - delete,
00:51:205 () - move to 00:51:575 -
00:53:427 () - and delete this to give a preparation to hit next finisher.

00:57:131 () - change to d and move to 00:56:760 -
01:00:464 (64,65) - delete
01:03:057 (67) - change to d and move to 01:02:686 -

01:11:390 (80) - i know there is sound but.. doesn't play nicely and might be hard for newbie. maybe just ignore the cymbal and move to 01:11:760 - and delete 01:11:945 (81) - to just follow music

01:18:242 (90,91) - delete. newbie needs break.
01:21:205 (94) - ^


[Futsuu]
00:01:945 (3) - better change to k like i said in kantan, and move 00:02:316 (4) - to 00:02:686 - for better consistency with 00:05:649 -
00:04:908 (8) - k
00:05:649 - change to d coz instrument start from low pitch

00:10:649 (20) - d

00:12:131 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - nooo too longgggg. cut it at 00:13:983 (27) -

00:15:279 (1) - this spinner is mappable.

00:18:057 (1) - sudenly 1/2 duplet. better move to 00:17:871 -
00:24:353 - delete
00:25:464 (17) - why slider? replace with notes like previous section.

00:27:501 (22) - delete this
00:29:538 (23) - better move to 00:29:353 - to give 2/1 break rather than making weird rhytm

00:37:871 (43,44) - swap these because you following vocal pitch here
00:41:205 (51) - and this is k

00:56:020 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - might be too long.

01:08:612 (113) - k
01:08:983 (114) - move to 01:09:723 -
01:10:464 (117) - delete

01:11:945 () - move to 01:12:316 -
01:13:427 () - delete
01:15:279 (127,128,129) - kdk

[Muzukashii]
00:06:020 (20,21,22) - maybe kkk is better considering the pitch

00:12:501 (45) - move to 00:13:057 - try to have some consistencies with 00:24:908 -
00:25:649 - add note

00:14:168 (51) - listening to bass sound, k is better here
00:14:908 (53) - and this is d
00:15:279 (54) - k
00:26:020 (94) - k
00:26:760 (96) - d
00:27:131 (97) - k

01:11:760 (249) - deletee
01:15:279 (263,264,265,266) - k dkd

[Oni]
00:04:260 (29) - following your sequence, this should be k?
00:18:242 (112) - d
00:28:242 (166,167) - swap
00:30:464 (182) - d is better imo



good luck!
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Flying Pan wrote:

hello, M4M~

[Kantan]
00:01:945 (2) - change to k? pitch higher than 00:03:427 (3) - Done
00:04:908 (4) - k Done

00:13:057 (17) - can be deleted to give longer break.. or move to 00:13:427 - Moved to 00:13:242
00:24:908 (13) - ^
00:17:501 (1) - delete OK

00:27:131 (14) - k fits to te instrument here. Fixed
00:28:983 (17) - you better not suddenly change to beat. move to 00:28:612 - and change to d to follow instrument. Done
00:29:723 () - after that delete this to give 4/1 break. Done

00:42:686 () - better replace this slider with a D at 00:43:242 - it gives better feeling and consistent with 00:46:205 - Done
00:48:612 (46) - change to D at 00:49:168 - Done

00:50:464 () - delete, Done
00:51:205 () - move to 00:51:575 - OK
00:53:427 () - and delete this to give a preparation to hit next finisher. OK

00:57:131 () - change to d and move to 00:56:760 - Nope
01:00:464 (64,65) - delete ...OK
01:03:057 (67) - change to d and move to 01:02:686 - Nope

01:11:390 (80) - i know there is sound but.. doesn't play nicely and might be hard for newbie. maybe just ignore the cymbal and move to 01:11:760 - and delete 01:11:945 (81) - to just follow music Done

01:18:242 (90,91) - delete. newbie needs break. Done
01:21:205 (94) - ^ Done


[Futsuu]
00:01:945 (3) - better change to k like i said in kantan, and move 00:02:316 (4) - to 00:02:686 - for better consistency with 00:05:649 - Done
00:04:908 (8) - k Done
00:05:649 - change to d coz instrument start from low pitch OK

00:10:649 (20) - d I think k would've been OK, but since others have said this too, I changed it.

00:12:131 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - nooo too longgggg. cut it at 00:13:983 (27) - Did a different change

00:15:279 (1) - this spinner is mappable. OK, mapped...

00:18:057 (1) - sudenly 1/2 duplet. better move to 00:17:871 - Yep
00:24:353 - delete It would break the rhythm completely... left it be for now.
00:25:464 (17) - why slider? replace with notes like previous section.OK...

00:27:501 (22) - delete this OK
00:29:538 (23) - better move to 00:29:353 - to give 2/1 break rather than making weird rhytm Done

00:37:871 (43,44) - swap these because you following vocal pitch here Done
00:41:205 (51) - and this is k Done

00:56:020 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - might be too long. I'll leave it be for now. Will change it if more people complain about it.

01:08:612 (113) - k
01:08:983 (114) - move to 01:09:723 -
01:10:464 (117) - delete Did these 3 and changed 01:09:353 to k

01:11:945 () - move to 01:12:316 - Nope
01:13:427 () - delete Done
01:15:279 (127,128,129) - kdk OK

[Muzukashii]
00:06:020 (20,21,22) - maybe kkk is better considering the pitch Yep

00:12:501 (45) - move to 00:13:057 - try to have some consistencies with 00:24:908 - Nah, it's fine
00:25:649 - add note Added d

00:14:168 (51) - listening to bass sound, k is better here OK
00:14:908 (53) - and this is d OK
00:15:279 (54) - k OK
00:26:020 (94) - k OK
00:26:760 (96) - d OK
00:27:131 (97) - k OK

01:11:760 (249) - deletee Nope, it follows the ticking sound.
01:15:279 (263,264,265,266) - k dkd Yep

[Oni]
00:04:260 (29) - following your sequence, this should be k? Nope. I'm following the slight decrease in the pitch. It might be kinda hard to notice, but I still like it this way...
00:18:242 (112) - d OK
00:28:242 (166,167) - swap Nope
00:30:464 (182) - d is better imo Nope, don't like it.



good luck!
Thanks a lot!
ManP
hi from my queue ;3

[General]
Artist,つんく♂ is fine
Source,リズム天国 is fine.
BG,1366x768 is fine. Plz change both :3

[Kantan]
  1. 01:16:760 (87,88) - add finish?
[Futsuu]
  1. Looks fine! sorry.....
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:853 (114) - 00:37:779 (136) - Delete is nice.I cannot understand why they are placed.But add note is nice too.(dd dk)
  2. 01:00:371 (213) - 01:01:853 (219) - delete. They are really nonsense.
[Oni]
  1. 00:01:205 (6,7,8) - change to ddd.Pitch is lower than next note
  2. 00:02:686 (17,18,19) - ^
  3. 00:04:168 (28,29,30) -
  4. 00:15:649 (97) - change to d
  5. 00:15:927 (99) - move to 00:16:112
  6. 00:17:871 (110) - change to d
  7. 00:27:501 (161) - change to d. pitch is lower than next note
  8. 00:32:316 (192,193,194,195) - delete. And place spinner
  9. 00:34:075 (204) - delete. It can be more fun
  10. 01:02:594 - add k
I apologize for bad modding;w; GL!
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

ManP wrote:

hi from my queue ;3

[General]
Artist,つんく♂ is fine
Source,リズム天国 is fine.
BG,1366x768 is fine. Plz change both :3 Changed all this.

[Kantan]
  1. 01:16:760 (87,88) - add finish? Did this + the same for Futsuu.


[Futsuu]
  1. Looks fine! sorry.....
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:853 (114) - 00:37:779 (136) - Delete is nice.I cannot understand why they are placed.But add note is nice too.(dd dk) Nope
  2. 01:00:371 (213) - 01:01:853 (219) - delete. They are really nonsense. Nope. There is a pretty clear sound in those positions.


[Oni]
  1. 00:01:205 (6,7,8) - change to ddd.Pitch is lower than next note Nah, it's fine. The sound is still high pitched.
  2. 00:02:686 (17,18,19) - ^
  3. 00:04:168 (28,29,30) -
  4. 00:15:649 (97) - change to d Nope
  5. 00:15:927 (99) - move to 00:16:112 Definitely not.
  6. 00:17:871 (110) - change to d The pattern before is already quite monotonous, so I made this a k just for that. So no change.
  7. 00:27:501 (161) - change to d. pitch is lower than next note Nope.
  8. 00:32:316 (192,193,194,195) - delete. And place spinner Could work, but I prefer normal notes.
  9. 00:34:075 (204) - delete. It can be more fun Nah. I really like this pattern.
  10. 01:02:594 - add k Nope, but I moved the finish from 01:02:686 (361) - to 01:02:501 (360) - . Same for 00:56:575 (333,334) - .
I apologize for bad modding;w; GL!
Thanks. :)
xtrem3x
Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue

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General:

ALL Suggestions are based in notorious sounds (other reason is with comments)

Uncheck "Enable Custom Colours"

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Kantan:

HP=6 /OD=3

01:06:760 (73,74) - ctrl+g (is more fluid)
01:12:686 (81,82) - Same ^

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Futsuu:

HP/OD=4

00:39:723 (84,85) - ctrl+g

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Muzukashii:

HP=5 / OD=4

00:05:649 - Delete a midde note in some triple or change for a 5-note stream with single color

00:13:983 - add d (feel some empty this point)

00:31:668 - Add note (can be a bit hard but is nessesary)
00:37:594 - Same ^

00:40:464 - these 5-notes change to kkddk (is more fluid)

00:45:186 - Delete (a finish note before triple is hard)

01:17:408 - Delete (2 triples in a row is hard)

01:23:427 - Remove finish (this note no have hit sound)
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Oni:

SV= 1.40 (with 160bpm is some fast)
HP/OD=5

00:00:464 - Is better remove finish this note .. is intro and some easy is more convenient .-.

00:00:649 (2,3,4) - ddk (in this triple starts with "low" tones, from 00:01:760- is with progressive increasing volume each tone)
00:01:760 (10,11,12) - ddk ( This ^ )

00:02:316 - Change to k (progressive volume tone)
00:05:279 - Same ^

00:06:112 - Change to k (avoid monotone sequence)

00:34:538 - Change these 5-notes for k (in previous 5-notes is correct why follow discret tones, but in this 5-notes tone is more notable)

00:36:760 - Delete
00.36:020 - Extend slider until 00:36:760- (a note very close with a slider is very rare in Taiko diffs)

00:45:557 - Change to d (no have notable "tone" in this note)

00:52:779- , 00:52:964- , 00:53:149- , 00:53:334 - ctrl+g (in this stream is progressive increase sound, and change positions between these notes is more fluid)

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Topic Starter
Jaltzu

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue

_____________________________________________________

General:

ALL Suggestions are based in notorious sounds (other reason is with comments)

Uncheck "Enable Custom Colours" K

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Kantan:

HP=6 /OD=3 I'm following diff reqs with my OD/HP sets (I think).

01:06:760 (73,74) - ctrl+g (is more fluid) Nah, I like current pattern.
01:12:686 (81,82) - Same ^

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Futsuu:

HP/OD=4

00:39:723 (84,85) - ctrl+g Nope

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Muzukashii:

HP=5 / OD=4

00:05:649 - Delete a midde note in some triple or change for a 5-note stream with single color I think it's fine already...

00:13:983 - add d (feel some empty this point) OK

00:31:668 - Add note (can be a bit hard but is nessesary) OK
00:37:594 - Same ^ OK

00:40:464 - these 5-notes change to kkddk (is more fluid) Changed all to k. Fits the music better.

00:45:186 - Delete (a finish note before triple is hard) K

01:17:408 - Delete (2 triples in a row is hard) I think it's OK to have couple harder patterns. No change.

01:23:427 - Remove finish (this note no have hit sound) Yep
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Oni:

SV= 1.40 (with 160bpm is some fast) Changed
HP/OD=5

00:00:464 - Is better remove finish this note .. is intro and some easy is more convenient .-. Sure.

00:00:649 (2,3,4) - ddk (in this triple starts with "low" tones, from 00:01:760- is with progressive increasing volume each tone) Current pattern still fits the music, no need to change.
00:01:760 (10,11,12) - ddk ( This ^ )

00:02:316 - Change to k (progressive volume tone)
00:05:279 - Same ^

00:06:112 - Change to k (avoid monotone sequence) ←↑ I made couple small changes to the 'intro', but not this way

00:34:538 - Change these 5-notes for k (in previous 5-notes is correct why follow discret tones, but in this 5-notes tone is more notable) No change.

00:36:760 - Delete
00.36:020 - Extend slider until 00:36:760- (a note very close with a slider is very rare in Taiko diffs) No need to change these 2.

00:45:557 - Change to d (no have notable "tone" in this note) There is a small sound there, and I think it's fine as a style choice too.

00:52:779- , 00:52:964- , 00:53:149- , 00:53:334 - ctrl+g (in this stream is progressive increase sound, and change positions between these notes is more fluid) OK

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Thanks!
Aldwych
Hi from Queue!

[General]

Maybe you should be consistent with your ending spinner. You don't start it on the same time on each diff.

[Kantan]

00:39:353 : If you want to respect consistency about patterns, this should be dkk.
00:44:538+ : I don't feel this notes are necessary here, maybe just keep your section full of finishers and delete this kind of notes?
00:57:131 (+ next) : Imo you should move them 1/1 earlier (dkk k d kkd), the rythm is better.
01:03:057 : Same, missing the big white tick is so meh :/

Simple but good kantan.

[Futsuu]

00:21:760 : Ew, i agree with this pattern but... yes i notice that the melody is on 1/2 sections and you decided to follow it here, but before you go on main ticks, this should be confusing. Follow one of them maybe but both on different pattern mmhhh no D:.
00:23:983 : Wat addition drum? xD
00:28:797 : This rythm may be ok if you add a not (should be d) at 00:08:427.
00:39:908 : No k? (Consistency with last pattern).
00:51:575 : Up to you but ... k?
00:54:723 : Mhh... why? I don't find why a not here, or at least not on a futsuu.
01:09:723 : This section is perfect for a kkd D: .

Imo some errors and mistakes on this futsuu but i like the rythm you did.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:834 : Here you can use 1/2 melody, you're on muzukashii now. So you can go for dkk. :>
00:02:316 : ^ (You can keep your 1/4 if you want).
etc ...

00:12:871 : This is the only 3/2 break you have around here, maybe you should add a k here or a d 1/2 after.
00:41:020 : You can go d aswell if you wanna make a contrast with next k.
01:00:371+ : That's a risky rythm and i think i won't be the only one who point this. The best thing to do is to delete these d on the white tick 1/4 after.

That's not a bad muzu, but i feel like a lack of 2/1 breaks on the begining parts. Around and in kiai are ok the but less the begining imo.

[Oni]

I'm more for an HP 4 for a smooth decreasing but it's up to you

00:00:464++ : Imo this section is more suitable for an Inner oni, i mean just compare with muzukashii the gap of level between them. You should reduce the amount of stream.
00:05:464 : Also here this is a huge stream for an Oni too. Maybe split into 2 medium streams.
00:07:131 : Same thing as muzu, find this a bit odd.
00:36:020 : Why slider?
00:39:723 : Quite technical for an Oni too.
00:52:964 : You can delete this not for an easier part.

I don't really want to be pointless on the d or k of an Oni just i felt some part are too hard for an Oni diff (and maybe some too easy). Imo you should clean some hard sections of this diff.

That's all i can say. Gl hf for rank ;)
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

Aldwych wrote:

Hi from Queue!

[General]

Maybe you should be consistent with your ending spinner. You don't start it on the same time on each diff. Yep

[Kantan]

00:39:353 : If you want to respect consistency about patterns, this should be dkk. No change. It follows loosely those piccolo-type sounds
00:44:538+ : I don't feel this notes are necessary here, maybe just keep your section full of finishers and delete this kind of notes? Deleted couple notes
00:57:131 (+ next) : Imo you should move them 1/1 earlier (dkk k d kkd), the rythm is better. No change.
01:03:057 : Same, missing the big white tick is so meh :/ There's no major sound in the main beat here, so it's OK.

Simple but good kantan.

[Futsuu]

00:21:760 : Ew, i agree with this pattern but... yes i notice that the melody is on 1/2 sections and you decided to follow it here, but before you go on main ticks, this should be confusing. Follow one of them maybe but both on different pattern mmhhh no D:. Moved stuff 1/2 tick forward.
00:23:983 : Wat addition drum? xD Oh, what the heck... How did that happen? Fixed.
00:28:797 : This rythm may be ok if you add a not (should be d) at 00:08:427. K
00:39:908 : No k? (Consistency with last pattern). Hmmh... OK.
00:51:575 : Up to you but ... k? Nah, it's fine without it.
00:54:723 : Mhh... why? I don't find why a not here, or at least not on a futsuu. Del
01:09:723 : This section is perfect for a kkd D: . Put in kdd

Imo some errors and mistakes on this futsuu but i like the rythm you did.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:834 : Here you can use 1/2 melody, you're on muzukashii now. So you can go for dkk. :> Changed
00:02:316 : ^ (You can keep your 1/4 if you want). Kept
etc ... Couple changes.

00:12:871 : This is the only 3/2 break you have around here, maybe you should add a k here or a d 1/2 after. Kept this for now.
00:41:020 : You can go d aswell if you wanna make a contrast with next k. Done
01:00:371+ : That's a risky rythm and i think i won't be the only one who point this. The best thing to do is to delete these d on the white tick 1/4 after. ...OK then...

That's not a bad muzu, but i feel like a lack of 2/1 breaks on the begining parts. Around and in kiai are ok the but less the begining imo. Added few breaks.

[Oni]

I'm more for an HP 4 for a smooth decreasing but it's up to you OK

00:00:464++ : Imo this section is more suitable for an Inner oni, i mean just compare with muzukashii the gap of level between them. You should reduce the amount of stream. Maybe this will become an Inner Oni diff...
00:05:464 : Also here this is a huge stream for an Oni too. Maybe split into 2 medium streams. Maybe, maybe.
00:07:131 : Same thing as muzu, find this a bit odd. I think it's OK here.
00:36:020 : Why slider? Replaced with a stream
00:39:723 : Quite technical for an Oni too. Replaced with my old version of the stream. I like it better, but it's still hard...
00:52:964 : You can delete this not for an easier part. I don't want to...

I don't really want to be pointless on the d or k of an Oni just i felt some part are too hard for an Oni diff (and maybe some too easy). Imo you should clean some hard sections of this diff.
I really like all the rhythms I've made, so I'd just feel bad to remove those... Maybe I should rename this Inner Oni and make a new normal Oni diff?

That's all i can say. Gl hf for rank ;)
Thank you!
Fuel
Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
General
I think the difficulty gap between Muzu and Oni is a bit big, in terms of SR and the gaps between the other diffs.

Kantan
00:25:649 (13) - This note could be moved to 00:25:464 to follow (insert the instrument here lol) better. Alternatively, in this section here (from 00:24:168) since you're primarily following the bass beat 00:25:094 (12) could be moved to either of the white ticks beside it to coincide with the bass beat.
00:30:094 (19) - I think k would be better here to match the pitch. d for low, k for high appears to be the general idea? It doesn't seem like the notes are mapped to the bass beat here.
00:32:316 (23,24) - Going off pitch, ctrl+g these notes?
00:36:020 (29) - Change to k?
00:38:242 (33) - Change to d?
00:38:983 (34,35,36) - Try k d d or k d k?

Futsuu
00:34:538 (74) - Is this enough of a 'drumrolly' kinda sound to warrant a slider?
00:36:390 (76) - Everywhere else in this section a d was mapped to this note. Consider changing this to d to match?
01:21:575 (181,182,183) - Considering 01:09:723 (153,154,155) is kdd and these are essentially the same notes (but an octave lower), it'd be good for consistency if these two 3-note patters were the same.

Muzukashii
00:14:908 - A note could go here (probably d?)
00:47:871 (170) - There's nothing that resembles a drumroll at all happening in here, doesn't seem like a slider fits. Maybe use a spinner to fill the gap?

Thought this diff was nice.

Oni
The first section is a huge spike in difficulty from the Muzu, though it fits well imo. Unless you're planning on adding another difficulty in between, maybe consider turning some of the triplets into single notes. 00:01:760 (10,11), 00:03:242 (21,22), 00:04:723 (32,33) could be removed. 00:05:557 (39) could be taken out too.

If you're shortening the stream at 00:39:723 (240), maybe remove 00:40:186 (245)?

00:42:316 - A note could go with the beat here.
00:47:871 (289) - Same as the Muzu, I feel a slider doesn't fit here.
01:04:908 - I'm not exactly advocating for more difficulty, but seeing as you already have streams in the difficulty you could put one here, since for the most part these other sections are relatively underwhelming for the Oni. This would probably mean you need another diff to even out the spread.

Hope it helps :D
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

L1m3s wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
General
I think the difficulty gap between Muzu and Oni is a bit big, in terms of SR and the gaps between the other diffs. Making another diff. Probably...

Kantan
00:25:649 (13) - This note could be moved to 00:25:464 to follow (insert the instrument here lol) better. Alternatively, in this section here (from 00:24:168) since you're primarily following the bass beat 00:25:094 (12) could be moved to either of the white ticks beside it to coincide with the bass beat. The former.
00:30:094 (19) - I think k would be better here to match the pitch. d for low, k for high appears to be the general idea? It doesn't seem like the notes are mapped to the bass beat here. Changed to k.
00:32:316 (23,24) - Going off pitch, ctrl+g these notes? Yep
00:36:020 (29) - Change to k? Ok
00:38:242 (33) - Change to d?Ok
00:38:983 (34,35,36) - Try k d d or k d k? The latter

Futsuu
00:34:538 (74) - Is this enough of a 'drumrolly' kinda sound to warrant a slider? Shortened the slider, added a k at the end. I think it's fine now.
00:36:390 (76) - Everywhere else in this section a d was mapped to this note. Consider changing this to d to match? Done
01:21:575 (181,182,183) - Considering 01:09:723 (153,154,155) is kdd and these are essentially the same notes (but an octave lower), it'd be good for consistency if these two 3-note patters were the same. Fixed.

Muzukashii
00:14:908 - A note could go here (probably d?) Well... OK.
00:47:871 (170) - There's nothing that resembles a drumroll at all happening in here, doesn't seem like a slider fits. Maybe use a spinner to fill the gap? Yep.

Thought this diff was nice. Thanks :)

Oni
The first section is a huge spike in difficulty from the Muzu, though it fits well imo. Unless you're planning on adding another difficulty in between, maybe consider turning some of the triplets into single notes. 00:01:760 (10,11), 00:03:242 (21,22), 00:04:723 (32,33) could be removed. 00:05:557 (39) could be taken out too.

If you're shortening the stream at 00:39:723 (240), maybe remove 00:40:186 (245)? Kept

00:42:316 - A note could go with the beat here. Nah, I like the rhythm with a break.
00:47:871 (289) - Same as the Muzu, I feel a slider doesn't fit here. Spinner it is, then...
01:04:908 - I'm not exactly advocating for more difficulty, but seeing as you already have streams in the difficulty you could put one here, since for the most part these other sections are relatively underwhelming for the Oni. This would probably mean you need another diff to even out the spread. Added a stream. Probably adding a new diff...

Hope it helps :D
Sorry for late reply... I've been quite busy lately. Thanks for your mod! :)
-Tenshi-
Hi! From my queue~

I'm really happy to mod this since i'm a big fan of rythm heaven~

[Kantan]
  1. 00:13:797 (18) - Remove or move it to 00:13:612 (18) - like you did at 00:25:464 (13) - ( If you remove it then you should remove this one too 00:25:464 (13) - )
  2. 00:21:945 (8) - You can remove this one to make a break.
  3. 00:52:686 (50) - Move this one to 00:53:427 (51) - because 5 notes patern in katan is a bit too long.
  4. Pattern suggestion: Add a d here 00:56:760 (56) - and delete this note 00:57:131 (57) - ( You can also add a d here 00:57:501 (57) - if you want. )
  5. 01:01:945 (63,64,65,66,67) - Use same pattern suggestion as above ^.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:205 (2) - This note is a k in every other diffs, you should change it.
  2. 00:56:390 (123) - Try to remove it, it sounds better imo.
  3. 01:18:427 (173) - 01:19:908 (177) - I think you should remove them.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:316 (44) - try to move this note here 00:12:871 (46) - and change it to k.
  2. 00:23:797 (83,84,85) - This sounds wierd, i suggest you to change the patern like this:

[Oni]
  1. 00:22:501 (106) - Try k here.
  2. 00:27:871 (129,130) - Swap these notes ( ctrl + g ).
  3. 00:40:649 (204) - Try d here.
  4. 01:07:501 (86) - Maybe k here?

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:22:501 (106) - k same as oni.
  2. 01:07:501 (105) - Maybe k here?

Well, that's all i can do, hope it will help~
Good luck for ranking~
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

-Tenshi- wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

I'm really happy to mod this since i'm a big fan of rythm heaven~
Rhythm Heaven ftw. :P

[Kantan]
  1. 00:13:797 (18) - Remove or move it to 00:13:612 (18) - like you did at 00:25:464 (13) - ( If you remove it then you should remove this one too 00:25:464 (13) - ) Moved
  2. 00:21:945 (8) - You can remove this one to make a break. Removed this and another one in same pattern earlier in the diff.
  3. 00:52:686 (50) - Move this one to 00:53:427 (51) - because 5 notes patern in katan is a bit too long. OK...
  4. Pattern suggestion: Add a d here 00:56:760 (56) - and delete this note 00:57:131 (57) - ( You can also add a d here 00:57:501 (57) - if you want. ) I like my solution more.
  5. 01:01:945 (63,64,65,66,67) - Use same pattern suggestion as above ^.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:205 (2) - This note is a k in every other diffs, you should change it. K
  2. 00:56:390 (123) - Try to remove it, it sounds better imo. Nah.
  3. 01:18:427 (173) - 01:19:908 (177) - I think you should remove them. Removed something + made my own changes.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:316 (44) - try to move this note here 00:12:871 (46) - and change it to k. Changed kinda like ↓
  2. 00:23:797 (83,84,85) - This sounds wierd, i suggest you to change the patern like this: Did something similar

[Oni]
  1. 00:22:501 (106) - Try k here. It wouls g oeither way imo. But decided to keep the old one.
  2. 00:27:871 (129,130) - Swap these notes ( ctrl + g ). Yep
  3. 00:40:649 (204) - Try d here. Nah, k is better.
  4. 01:07:501 (86) - Maybe k here? Nope

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:22:501 (106) - k same as oni. No change.
  2. 01:07:501 (105) - Maybe k here? d is fine.

Well, that's all i can do, hope it will help~ Yeah, it did help.
Good luck for ranking~
Thanks!
Intelli
M4M request

Kantan:
  1. 01:16:760 (83) - k k D
not bad

Futsuu:
  1. 00:01:945 (3) - d

  2. 00:04:168 (7) - ctrl+g

  3. 00:40:834 (90) - d
I think there were a bit too many offbeat hits for my taste, but hey

Muzu:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - Nothing really terrible that I noticed
Nothing instantly terrible that I saw with Oni or Inner Oni either, nice!
Topic Starter
Jaltzu

IntelliTroodon wrote:

M4M request

Kantan:
  1. 01:16:760 (83) - k k D Went with k k d
not bad

Futsuu:
  1. 00:01:945 (3) - d Nah

  2. 00:04:168 (7) - ctrl+g Ctrl+G with which note? I think it's fine anyway.

  3. 00:40:834 (90) - d Nope. I follow the piccolo sound with this.
I think there were a bit too many offbeat hits for my taste, but hey

Muzu:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - Nothing really terrible that I noticed
Nothing instantly terrible that I saw with Oni or Inner Oni either, nice!
Thanks.
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