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Real1
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 29 juli 2009 at 23:27:57

Artist: Arkimedes
Title: Dreaming While I Wake
Source: Shenmue I & II
Tags: OCRemix
BPM: 137
Filesize: 8952kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chai (4,69 stars, 384 notes)
  2. Fuku-san (1,63 stars, 90 notes)
  3. Lan Di (by gyt) (4,92 stars, 386 notes)
  4. Ryo (4,34 stars, 286 notes)
Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake
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Real1's 8th Beatmap is here!!

Thanks to ImTheOne for listening to my ideas for a skin and making them reality!~

Huge thanks to Starrodkirby86 for the comboburst!

Timing may need double-check, but it feels good while playing.


This map is quite epic if I may say so myself. It's an OCRemix (with lyrics!!) based on the main theme of the BEST VIDEO-GAME SERIES OF ALL TIME: Shenmue. In this map I use a lot of playing around with the volume and sample sets. It really has a few epic moments!

You will enjoy this map. All comments welcome!

Edit #1: Made an Easy. Moved to Pending.
Edit #2: eee fixings added.
Edit #3: minyeob super small fix
Edit #4: osuplayer111's changes
Edit #5: EEeee fixes
Edit #6: Gens <3
Edit #7: CnF fixes. ^^ Added gyt's difficulty. How can I say no to someone who has an NHK avatar? :D
Edit #8: Derekku-chan's fixes. ^^
Edit #9: Everthing is B&W now. Thanks to Starrodkirby86
Edit #10: ImTheOne's fruitcatcher Ryo is awesome.
Edit #11: Shenmue epicness added to map via the skin by ImTheOne
Edit #12: Updated skin.
Edit #13: Timing
Edit #14: Tieff's sugegstions.
Edit #15: gyt gave me his updated difficylty!~
Edit #16: Mumble mumble mumble.
Edit #17: gyt's updated difficulty.
Edit #18: Starrodkirby86<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Edit #19: Changed difficulty name.
Edit #20: FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Edit #21: Full re-submit. Something appears to be wrong.
Edit #22: vytabilus. Thanks.
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Real1
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Oh, and x3ns0r, you are still welcome to submit your difficulty, even though I made my own Easy.
I'll include it if its good enough. ;)
eee
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eee
hey. . . hi. . . sup
I've always wanted to try Shenmue -_-
naz-eemod GO!!!

[Fuku-San]
01:25:39 (1) - you can align this with (1) if you want, that's one level 3 grid to da right, then space accordingly
02:08:08 (6) - try extending this 1/4 to the next blue tick, or 1/2 to the next red tick, I think the 1/2 sounds better, you decide

[Ryo]
01:38:75 (4) - I think it sounds better 1/2 later to the white tick
01:40:06 (2) - ^ same, just suggestions
02:05:89 (1) - sounds better to me ending 1/2 later to red tick
02:07:64 (1) - alright, this may sound a bit odd, but I think I can't hear something or my timing just sucks, I think this should end 1/2 later!!! there, I said it
02:48:58 (6,7,8) - 2 grids right, and one down to align with (4) and make it equidistant with (5)

[Lan Di]
00:55:18 (9) - new combo, makes jumps more easier to recognize
01:31:088 (x) - note here? idk
01:38:53 (5) - end 1/2 later -_-
01:40:06 (2) - move 1/2 later
01:54:29 (4) - one grid down -_-
02:35:449 (timing section) - timing sections can't be completely silent, or else that's what I was told, so at least nudge it up even the slightest bit, or just put it to 1 tick
02:48:58 (5) - this is not spaced, notice how it's slight

that being said, I like the hitsounds
star4you
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Real1
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x3ns0r wrote:

Real1 wrote:

Oh, and x3ns0r, you are still welcome to submit your difficulty, even though I made my own Easy.
I'll include it if its good enough. ;)
well..song is too slow for me


good work on making your own

cuz mine could have taken a while :oops:
Okay. :)
If you change your mind... I think this map will be here for a while. <_<
minyeob
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Long time no see, Real

[Ryo]
1:48:382(1)-> 1/4 beat backward



Your map looks fine.
Andrea
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[Fuku-san]

00:43:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:043 - Maybe you can move here your soft section.

[Ryo]

00:55:18 (8) - New combo.
01:10:51 (5) - Add finish only on slider end.
01:48:27 (1) - Sounds bad.
02:35:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These notes are too much silenced.

[Lan Di]

Maybe on this diff, you can add spinner on empty sections...

02:35:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These notes are too much silenced.

Simple map, but really nice :D Star !!!
EEeee
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EEeee
Fuku-san
00:56:50 (8) - New combo
01:03:28 (1) - start 1/2 forward, end where it is
01:05:91 (1) - not really sure about this, but I think move it 1/4 forward, end where it is already
01:10:07 (2) - k delete this note, then add a slider that looks like 1, and start the slider at 01:09:853, then end at
01:10:072
01:48:38 (1) - end 1/4 forward, like the pattern of sliders following this note
02:09:39 (1) - start 1/4 forward, end same place

k that is all, but just for a neat map, delete the unused timing sections at the end of this diff ;)

Ryo
01:30:65 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:65 (1) - ^
?_? that's all T_T

Lan Di
00:22:13 (4,5) - add a new combo at 4 or 5, u pick
00:28:91 (6,7) - ^ 6 or 7
02:03:48 (1,2) - u wanna make this reflect to the previous 1 and 2, this is a big nazi, don't need to do
02:34:79 (1,2,3) - move 2 lvl 3 grids to the right
Gens
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[Overall]

- Erm, [Fuku-san] has OCRemix as a Tag. Maybe add that tag to the other difficulties as well.

[Timing]
I'd say the BPM is 137.05.

[Fuku-san]
I dunno what to say about the ending... It's a little abrupt, but at the same time I think it's fine.

00:38:32 (1) - If you could make this slider more... spaced (instead of many repeats) would be great. Just tellin' you, avoid these kind of sliders, especially on Easy, because it's almost impossible to know how many repeats will be.

[Ryo]
I think it's great~

[Lan-Di]
Cool~

~ ~ ~

Hi, Real1, your style is getting pretty strong now.
I like it.
Starred~
Real1
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Card N'FoRcE
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BPM: 137,00

- Fuku-san
01:16:41 (1) - if you want to make it follow the voice, make it start 1/2 later
01:28:45 (1) - imho it's better if it ends at 1:31:083, but it's your choice ^^
01:48:37 (1) - 1/4 longer, maybe?

- Lan Di
01:06:78 (5) - if you want to follow the voice, make it 1/4 shorter
2:27:00 - 2:37:00 How about lowering gradually hitsound to fit the voices? I think it sounds pretty cool ^^

- Ryo:
01:48:26 (1) - sounds weird, but i guess it can't be fixed easily
2:27:00 - 2:37:00 Same as Lan Di

Great, very clean map ^^
Star'd
gyt
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Hello!
I love all your maps and it's great song. So I decide to make another difficulty (don't know how to name it). If you don't like it, PM me why or write it here.

(+star, sorry for english)

Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Gyt's Lan Di].osu
Derekku
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[Fuku-san]
00:54:08 (4,5,6,7) - Sounds a little awkward. (But it's fine if you don't want to change it) Maybe make (4) 1/2 shorter, move (5) backwards 1/2, and then new combo either (6) or (7). Don't forget to fix distance spacing if you do this =)
01:16:41 (1) - Vocals start 1/2 later, but then the slider doesn't sound right. Maybe it's the soft hitsound set that's throwing it off, I dunno D:
01:25:39 (1,2,3) - I don't like how (3) overlaps (1). :/ Maybe move these and have them going from right to left in a straight line like the ones before and after? =)

[Ryo]
Fine.

[Lan Di]
Fine.
Real1
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Derekku Chan wrote:

[Fuku-san]
00:54:08 (4,5,6,7) - Sounds a little awkward. (But it's fine if you don't want to change it) Maybe make (4) 1/2 shorter, move (5) backwards 1/2, and then new combo either (6) or (7). Don't forget to fix distance spacing if you do this =) Sounds good to me.
01:16:41 (1) - Vocals start 1/2 later, but then the slider doesn't sound right. Maybe it's the soft hitsound set that's throwing it off, I dunno D: This was fixed with CnF's post. I was making his edits when you made this post. xD
01:25:39 (1,2,3) - I don't like how (3) overlaps (1). :/ Maybe move these and have them going from right to left in a straight line like the ones before and after? =) Fixed

[Ryo]
Fine.

[Lan Di]
Fine.
Thank you. An extra thank you since it's been a looooong time since someone modded a map of mine without me asking first.
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The_Priest_In_Yellow
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Yes, nothing to add. Just yes.
Starrodkirby86
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No worries...no fear...This is the perfect song to go to bed too. ^~^

I didn't do anything intensive...I'm tired...:<

[Ryo]:
01:07:22 (5) - Move 1/4 later? It would ruin the rhythm stream pattern but technically that's where it would belong...I think. Perhaps there would be other areas something like this would belong with.
02:15:51 (1,2,3) - Straighten?

[Gyt's Lan Di]:
02:04:13 (1,2) - Can you perhaps make this look like 02:02:60 (1,2) ?

Download: skin items.zip

Extract in your song folder.

I think the comboburst.png in there is an old version, so here's the good one:


Real1
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Awesome! Thank you very very much Starrodkirby86! ;)
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Real1
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This map now has a Shenmue themes skin made by ImTheOne via ideas from me. :)

If you downloaded it earlier, maybe you need to re-download it.
Wojjan
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I really couldn't find any errors in your mapping, but here's my findings for the timing

BPM: 137 flat
Offset: fine

Also, you could use skinned fruits if you've got a skinned ryuuta. How about a teardrop or so?
Real1
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Wojjan wrote:

I really couldn't find any errors in your mapping, but here's my findings for the timing

BPM: 137 flat
Offset: fine

Also, you could use skinned fruits if you've got a skinned ryuuta. How about a teardrop or so?
Timing is now 137.000. Two people suggested it so I gave in. :P

Will skin fruits if my friend comes around, if not, it's not much of a big deal. Thankies.
tieff
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Awesome skin, map and song!

[Fuku-san]
01:05:92 (1) - Slider should end here 01:07:350. I think.
01:21:25 (3) - Remove whistle.
02:07:67 (4) - New combo?

[Ryo]
00:22:35 (4,5) - Claps doesn't fit this part of song, I think.
00:26:72 (3) - Whistle.
00:42:05 (3) - New combo?
01:29:57 (x) - Add note.
01:29:79 (4) - Remove note.
02:00:01 (2) - Replace with single note?
02:00:89 (x) - Add note.
02:49:06 (8) - Replace with single note.

[Lan Di]
00:47:97 (9) - Remove whistle?
01:04:065 ~ 01:05:817 - Cruel with high drain.
01:20:59 (3) - Clap.
01:52:35 (3) - Sorry for nazi, but right a bit.
02:01:32 (6) - New combo?

[gyt's Lan Di]
Nice work.
00:35:05 (1) ~ 00:37:45 (9) - Hitsounds.
01:34:17 (3) - New combo?

Great work. Really.
Starred.
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tieff wrote:

Awesome skin, map and song! Thank you very much :D

[Fuku-san]
01:05:92 (1) - Slider should end here 01:07:350. I think. Fixed
01:21:25 (3) - Remove whistle. Disagree
02:07:67 (4) - New combo? Fixed

[Ryo]
00:22:35 (4,5) - Claps doesn't fit this part of song, I think. Fixed
00:26:72 (3) - Whistle. Sounds great. Fixed
00:42:05 (3) - New combo? Okay!
01:29:57 (x) - Add note. Hmmmm... Okay.
01:29:79 (4) - Remove note.Hai!
02:00:01 (2) - Replace with single note? Disagree
02:00:89 (x) - Add note. Haiii!
02:49:06 (8) - Replace with single note. Yup!

[Lan Di]
00:47:97 (9) - Remove whistle? Disagree
01:04:065 ~ 01:05:817 - Cruel with high drain. Added a spinner
01:20:59 (3) - Clap. Hmm, k
01:52:35 (3) - Sorry for nazi, but right a bit. Nothing against nazimodding <3
02:01:32 (6) - New combo? Fixed

[gyt's Lan Di]
Nice work.
00:35:05 (1) ~ 00:37:45 (9) - Hitsounds. Added some hitsounds... GYT, if you dislike how I placed them, feel free to upload your version
01:34:17 (3) - New combo? Fixed. Again, Gyt, if you disagree, upload your updated version <3

Great work. Really. Thank you very very much. Makes me happy. :D
Starred.
gyt
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I agree with you :) But I make some changes in the end of song.
+ suggestion -> lower HP Drain Rate at one point in Lan Di difficulties

Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
Real1
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Added your updated difficulty, gyt. ;)
Also, the HP drain stays~ ;)
Yuukari-Banteki
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[Fuku]
00:32:42 (4) - either break or map the dead space
01:21:47 (4) - ^
generally a good rule is, you need to do something if the last note of a section fades before the next note appears


[Ryo]
00:31:54 (2) - dead space
01:03:95 (4) - ^
01:07:35 (5) - ^
etc.
02:26:94 (1,2,3) - new rhythmic pattern plz
the ending is really...boring


[Li]
01:10:96 (8) - dead space etc.
02:26:94 (1,2,3) - new rhythmic pattern
this map....seems to sacrifice creativity for cleanliness. theres nothing technically wrong with it but theres nothing that really grabs my attention either :/


[Li by gyt]
fix your breaks
map your dead spaces
this is definitely the fun difficulty of the lot
Real1
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Grumble. Fixed most of what you mentioned. This map is not supposed to be fun in that way. It's supposed to be quite relaxing. A "feel-good" map if you will. It's fun, but it's more focused on the good ambient feeling. Also, you were the first to say that it was actually boring.

Gyt, please update your difficulty accordingly.
gyt
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I fix "dead spaces", but I'm not sure about "breaks".

Lan Di by Real1 -> 02:53:00, 02:56:29 - "dead spaces"?

Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
Real1
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Updated.
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[Fuku]
's ok


[Ryo]
*sigh* i dont mean to squelch your creativity and stuff but relaxing and repetitious are NOT the same thing. deh, w/e. i dont think im going to get through to you


[Chai]
03:06:14 (5) - 1/4 earlier
you have a lot of these things where the vocals deviate from the beat and even though its hard to hear anything but the vocals you map to the beat? its weird...


[gyt]
01:10:96 (10) - hidden
02:49:06 (10) - hidden
03:07:02 (1,2) - what is this even mapped to? o0


again, there is a difference between RELAXING and BORING. a masterful mapper can create a slow and relaxing map that still grabs the player's mind and touches their heart. This map doesn't do that so much, at least in the part i pointed out last time.
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[gyt]
01:10:96 (10) - hidden
02:49:06 (10) - hidden
fixed
03:07:02 (1,2) - what is this even mapped to? o0
Sorry, I don't understand.
Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
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Real1 wrote:

@SFG: You know what? YOU may be saying this map is boring. And NO, you won't get through to me on this one. I'm not going to make the map more "fun". I do listen to what people tell me though, and everyone except you really likes the map. Just look for yourself:

eee: "I like the hitsounds, star4you"
Minyeob: "Your map looks fine."
osuplayer111: "Simple map, but really nice :D Star !!!"
Gens: "Hi, Real1, your style is getting pretty strong now. I like it. Starred~"
Card N'FoRcE: "Great, very clean map ^^"
gyt: "I love all your maps and it's great song."
Crusader: "This map is cool!"
Wojjan: "I really couldn't find any errors in your mapping"
tieff: "Awesome skin, map and song!"

Anyways. Updated.
Hey, no berating. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion provided that they say it in the right way, and as far as SFG's post is concerned, I see no reason for you to get hyped over it. She explained her exposition in a way that does not degrade her modding post into a rant, and you should too.

It's not uncommon to see someone who doesn't like the map, even after a wave of supporters.

[Fuku-san]
00:58:26 (5) - Fix the break after this one.
02:09:53 (1) - Move the start point forward by 1/4 tick.

[Ryo]
02:44:68 (2) - End this on a finish hitsound?
Real1
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vytalibus wrote:

Hey, no berating. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion provided that they say it in the right way, and as far as SFG's post is concerned, I see no reason for you to get hyped over it. She explained her exposition in a way that does not degrade her modding post into a rant, and you should too.

It's not uncommon to see someone who doesn't like the map, even after a wave of supporters.

You know what? You are totally right. I was an ass and I apologize. I wrote it while I was still in rage... I think because of all the time spent in making this map and then getting something like that... Made me think I was a failure.
I was wrong. People are allowed to have opinions. I forgot that in that moment.

Also, fixed the stuff.
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Some forgiveness and a couple of love to make up for the rant, and a bubble. :D
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Kudosu Starred.

@Real: No problem. I can earn them easliy
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minyeob wrote:

Kudosu Starred.
Aww, Minyeob, you really didn't have to! But thank you, thank you very much! How can I ever repay you?
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I think this is a good map to rank before I sleep. =w=
Real1
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Thank you Starrod!! Thank you very much!

I consider this my best map (though I think everyone else disagrees), so I'm glad to see it ranked.
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