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This map now has a Shenmue themes skin made by ImTheOne via ideas from me. 
If you downloaded it earlier, maybe you need to re-download it.
If you downloaded it earlier, maybe you need to re-download it.
I really couldn't find any errors in your mapping, but here's my findings for the timing
BPM: 137 flat
Offset: fine
Also, you could use skinned fruits if you've got a skinned ryuuta. How about a teardrop or so?
BPM: 137 flat
Offset: fine
Also, you could use skinned fruits if you've got a skinned ryuuta. How about a teardrop or so?
Topic Starter
Timing is now 137.000. Two people suggested it so I gave in.Wojjan wrote:
I really couldn't find any errors in your mapping, but here's my findings for the timing
BPM: 137 flat
Offset: fine
Also, you could use skinned fruits if you've got a skinned ryuuta. How about a teardrop or so?
Will skin fruits if my friend comes around, if not, it's not much of a big deal. Thankies.
Awesome skin, map and song!
[Fuku-san]
01:05:92 (1) - Slider should end here 01:07:350. I think.
01:21:25 (3) - Remove whistle.
02:07:67 (4) - New combo?
[Ryo]
00:22:35 (4,5) - Claps doesn't fit this part of song, I think.
00:26:72 (3) - Whistle.
00:42:05 (3) - New combo?
01:29:57 (x) - Add note.
01:29:79 (4) - Remove note.
02:00:01 (2) - Replace with single note?
02:00:89 (x) - Add note.
02:49:06 (8) - Replace with single note.
[Lan Di]
00:47:97 (9) - Remove whistle?
01:04:065 ~ 01:05:817 - Cruel with high drain.
01:20:59 (3) - Clap.
01:52:35 (3) - Sorry for nazi, but right a bit.
02:01:32 (6) - New combo?
[gyt's Lan Di]
Nice work.
00:35:05 (1) ~ 00:37:45 (9) - Hitsounds.
01:34:17 (3) - New combo?
Great work. Really.
Starred.
[Fuku-san]
01:05:92 (1) - Slider should end here 01:07:350. I think.
01:21:25 (3) - Remove whistle.
02:07:67 (4) - New combo?
[Ryo]
00:22:35 (4,5) - Claps doesn't fit this part of song, I think.
00:26:72 (3) - Whistle.
00:42:05 (3) - New combo?
01:29:57 (x) - Add note.
01:29:79 (4) - Remove note.
02:00:01 (2) - Replace with single note?
02:00:89 (x) - Add note.
02:49:06 (8) - Replace with single note.
[Lan Di]
00:47:97 (9) - Remove whistle?
01:04:065 ~ 01:05:817 - Cruel with high drain.
01:20:59 (3) - Clap.
01:52:35 (3) - Sorry for nazi, but right a bit.
02:01:32 (6) - New combo?
[gyt's Lan Di]
Nice work.
00:35:05 (1) ~ 00:37:45 (9) - Hitsounds.
01:34:17 (3) - New combo?
Great work. Really.
Starred.
Topic Starter
tieff wrote:
Awesome skin, map and song! Thank you very much
[Fuku-san]
01:05:92 (1) - Slider should end here 01:07:350. I think. Fixed
01:21:25 (3) - Remove whistle. Disagree
02:07:67 (4) - New combo? Fixed
[Ryo]
00:22:35 (4,5) - Claps doesn't fit this part of song, I think. Fixed
00:26:72 (3) - Whistle. Sounds great. Fixed
00:42:05 (3) - New combo? Okay!
01:29:57 (x) - Add note. Hmmmm... Okay.
01:29:79 (4) - Remove note.Hai!
02:00:01 (2) - Replace with single note? Disagree
02:00:89 (x) - Add note. Haiii!
02:49:06 (8) - Replace with single note. Yup!
[Lan Di]
00:47:97 (9) - Remove whistle? Disagree
01:04:065 ~ 01:05:817 - Cruel with high drain. Added a spinner
01:20:59 (3) - Clap. Hmm, k
01:52:35 (3) - Sorry for nazi, but right a bit. Nothing against nazimodding <3
02:01:32 (6) - New combo? Fixed
[gyt's Lan Di]
Nice work.
00:35:05 (1) ~ 00:37:45 (9) - Hitsounds. Added some hitsounds... GYT, if you dislike how I placed them, feel free to upload your version
01:34:17 (3) - New combo? Fixed. Again, Gyt, if you disagree, upload your updated version <3
Great work. Really. Thank you very very much. Makes me happy.
Starred.
I agree with you But I make some changes in the end of song.
+ suggestion -> lower HP Drain Rate at one point in Lan Di difficulties
Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
But I make some changes in the end of song.+ suggestion -> lower HP Drain Rate at one point in Lan Di difficulties
Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
Topic Starter
Added your updated difficulty, gyt. 
Also, the HP drain stays~
Also, the HP drain stays~
[Fuku]
00:32:42 (4) - either break or map the dead space
01:21:47 (4) - ^
generally a good rule is, you need to do something if the last note of a section fades before the next note appears
[Ryo]
00:31:54 (2) - dead space
01:03:95 (4) - ^
01:07:35 (5) - ^
etc.
02:26:94 (1,2,3) - new rhythmic pattern plz
the ending is really...boring
[Li]
01:10:96 (8) - dead space etc.
02:26:94 (1,2,3) - new rhythmic pattern
this map....seems to sacrifice creativity for cleanliness. theres nothing technically wrong with it but theres nothing that really grabs my attention either :/
[Li by gyt]
fix your breaks
map your dead spaces
this is definitely the fun difficulty of the lot
00:32:42 (4) - either break or map the dead space
01:21:47 (4) - ^
generally a good rule is, you need to do something if the last note of a section fades before the next note appears
[Ryo]
00:31:54 (2) - dead space
01:03:95 (4) - ^
01:07:35 (5) - ^
etc.
02:26:94 (1,2,3) - new rhythmic pattern plz
the ending is really...boring
[Li]
01:10:96 (8) - dead space etc.
02:26:94 (1,2,3) - new rhythmic pattern
this map....seems to sacrifice creativity for cleanliness. theres nothing technically wrong with it but theres nothing that really grabs my attention either :/
[Li by gyt]
fix your breaks
map your dead spaces
this is definitely the fun difficulty of the lot
Topic Starter
Grumble. Fixed most of what you mentioned. This map is not supposed to be fun in that way. It's supposed to be quite relaxing. A "feel-good" map if you will. It's fun, but it's more focused on the good ambient feeling. Also, you were the first to say that it was actually boring.
Gyt, please update your difficulty accordingly.
Gyt, please update your difficulty accordingly.
I fix "dead spaces", but I'm not sure about "breaks".
Lan Di by Real1 -> 02:53:00, 02:56:29 - "dead spaces"?
Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
Lan Di by Real1 -> 02:53:00, 02:56:29 - "dead spaces"?
Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
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[Fuku]
's ok
[Ryo]
*sigh* i dont mean to squelch your creativity and stuff but relaxing and repetitious are NOT the same thing. deh, w/e. i dont think im going to get through to you
[Chai]
03:06:14 (5) - 1/4 earlier
you have a lot of these things where the vocals deviate from the beat and even though its hard to hear anything but the vocals you map to the beat? its weird...
[gyt]
01:10:96 (10) - hidden
02:49:06 (10) - hidden
03:07:02 (1,2) - what is this even mapped to? o0
again, there is a difference between RELAXING and BORING. a masterful mapper can create a slow and relaxing map that still grabs the player's mind and touches their heart. This map doesn't do that so much, at least in the part i pointed out last time.
's ok
[Ryo]
*sigh* i dont mean to squelch your creativity and stuff but relaxing and repetitious are NOT the same thing. deh, w/e. i dont think im going to get through to you
[Chai]
03:06:14 (5) - 1/4 earlier
you have a lot of these things where the vocals deviate from the beat and even though its hard to hear anything but the vocals you map to the beat? its weird...
[gyt]
01:10:96 (10) - hidden
02:49:06 (10) - hidden
03:07:02 (1,2) - what is this even mapped to? o0
again, there is a difference between RELAXING and BORING. a masterful mapper can create a slow and relaxing map that still grabs the player's mind and touches their heart. This map doesn't do that so much, at least in the part i pointed out last time.
[gyt]Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Lan Di (by gyt)].osu
01:10:96 (10) - hidden
02:49:06 (10) - hidden
fixed
03:07:02 (1,2) - what is this even mapped to? o0
Sorry, I don't understand.
Topic Starter
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hey, no berating. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion provided that they say it in the right way, and as far as SFG's post is concerned, I see no reason for you to get hyped over it. She explained her exposition in a way that does not degrade her modding post into a rant, and you should too.Real1 wrote:
@SFG: You know what? YOU may be saying this map is boring. And NO, you won't get through to me on this one. I'm not going to make the map more "fun". I do listen to what people tell me though, and everyone except you really likes the map. Just look for yourself:
eee: "I like the hitsounds, star4you"
Minyeob: "Your map looks fine."
osuplayer111: "Simple map, but really niceStar !!!"
Gens: "Hi, Real1, your style is getting pretty strong now. I like it. Starred~"
Card N'FoRcE: "Great, very clean map ^^"
gyt: "I love all your maps and it's great song."
Crusader: "This map is cool!"
Wojjan: "I really couldn't find any errors in your mapping"
tieff: "Awesome skin, map and song!"
Anyways. Updated.
It's not uncommon to see someone who doesn't like the map, even after a wave of supporters.
[Fuku-san]
00:58:26 (5) - Fix the break after this one.
02:09:53 (1) - Move the start point forward by 1/4 tick.
[Ryo]
02:44:68 (2) - End this on a finish hitsound?
Topic Starter
vytalibus wrote:
Hey, no berating. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion provided that they say it in the right way, and as far as SFG's post is concerned, I see no reason for you to get hyped over it. She explained her exposition in a way that does not degrade her modding post into a rant, and you should too.
It's not uncommon to see someone who doesn't like the map, even after a wave of supporters.
You know what? You are totally right. I was an ass and I apologize. I wrote it while I was still in rage... I think because of all the time spent in making this map and then getting something like that... Made me think I was a failure.
I was wrong. People are allowed to have opinions. I forgot that in that moment.
Also, fixed the stuff.
Some forgiveness and a couple of love to make up for the rant, and a bubble.
Kudosu Starred.
@Real: No problem. I can earn them easliy
@Real: No problem. I can earn them easliy
Topic Starter
Aww, Minyeob, you really didn't have to! But thank you, thank you very much! How can I ever repay you?minyeob wrote:
Kudosu Starred.
I think this is a good map to rank before I sleep. =w=