[General]
According to wiki artist should be Tune Up! vs. ItaloBrothers (as it now), dont change it please.
[Hard]
*It supposed to be hardest diff in mapset for now, so i suggest you change settings to have it more challenging. AR 8 and OD 7 will fit perfectly here.
- 00:03:845 (1) - I get your idea that you want to emphazire beginning of the song using normal-sampleset here but i personally thinnk that would be better to have just soft-hitwhistle here to keep consistent your hitsound pattern at the beginning. Also, there is no any emphazire in music.
- 00:08:130 (3,4) - Weird stack; i thought it was 1/4. Unstack them please.
- 00:32:130 (3,4) - Change it please to one slider (example) to cover lyrics here more since it much stronger here
- 00:35:130 (2) - This reverse 1/2 slider doesnt fit well imo, try to replace it like this:
- 00:55:273 (1,2,3,4) - dat kicksliders. Well, i personally approve it for a hardest diff in mapet, but other modders may suggest you reduse jumps here.
hi -Bakari- o/ - 00:56:987 (1) - finish at spinner
- 01:10:702 (1) - add whistle mayde?
- 01:14:773 (2,3,4) - This is the main problem of this diff imo. I'm big fan of triples, but in this case they really sounds not so good because you added them against music :х To make it fit music more, try this: change 01:14:773 (2,3,4) - to a slider and add note at 01:17:023. This will make your rhytm more constant and understable.
- 01:17:559 (2) - Just hitnormal to emphazire this part is not enough here imo, try to add soft finish here at the beginning of slider
- 01:18:416 (4,5,6) - Same goes here: change this triplet and add notes at 01:20:345 - and at 01:20:452 -
- 01:20:987 (3) - soft-finish for same reason
- 01:23:130 (2,3,4) - Same. Change triplet and add notes at 01:23:880 - and at 01:23:987 - (yes, you should make 01:23:559 (5) - shorten).
and same goes to all other triplets here - 01:24:416 (1) - Finish for same reason
- 01:30:630 - There is no strong beat here. To cover music more, try something like this:
- 01:34:702 (2) - Finish for some reason as above
all about those finishes goes to second part too - 01:52:273 (1) - Some BATs can consider 5% volume on spinner as not enough audible. I personally suggest raise volume here to ~20%. Feel free to completely silence end of spinner using even empty custom hitsounds
- 01:59:559 (3,4,5) - It was work good at previous doubles, but here it looks enough counter-intuitive. Try to stack them or change to just spaced notes.
- 02:02:987 (3,4,5) - Quite unsure about this pattern too: 02:02:987 (3,4) - i was sure that it was 1/4 part when i played this. Change it, please.
- 02:09:845 (3,4,5) - Again counter-intuitive pattern
- 02:14:130 (5) - nc please follow pattern
- 02:14:987 (7,8) - terrible stack, i was sure it was 1/4 - unstack please
- 02:15:845 (2,3) - try something like this instead? Also, i personally suggest do it more pretty/symmetrial
- 02:31:273 (5) - New combo please follow pattern
- 02:40:702 (3) - It looks like a broken symmethry; try to change form of this slider (
bad example) or just make 02:39:845 (1,3) - perfectly symmetrial (would be better imo). - 02:41:345 (4,5) - try to make perfect blanket here?
- 02:43:702 (2,3) - same here
- 03:24:630 (1) - I personally recommend you use empty custom hitsound here instead of 5% section because there is no any music at all and 5% sounds here really too much.
[Normal]
*CS3 looks awkward, change to 4 please
*Same about finishes as in hard diff
- 01:26:559 (4) - This repeat-slider can be a bit too hard for beginners because of huge numbers of reverses. Beginners usually weak at reading them, so i suggest you replace it with two 1/4 sliders and note.
- 02:04:702 (6,7,1) - spacing
- 03:11:130 (1) - Same as above
[Easy]
*Yes, reduce alll diff settings except circlesize here
*Check unsnapped stuff
- 01:22:273 (3,4,5) - spacing
- 02:43:273 (1,5) - try to make them perfectly symmetrial?
- 03:10:702 (3) - Bad slider for an Easy diff, it is hard for newbies to read repeat. Replace it with 1/1 reverse-slider
- 03:16:273 (2,3,4) - spacing
Good luck!