1. 01:08:987 - We talked about this in IRC a bit, but I'll list it here. I can't understand the reason behind ending the break early, it seems much better to end it at 01:10:702 when the spinner starts. Players expect play to start right after seeing the warning arrows. Right now it doesn't.
   
2. 01:14:130 - Hitsounds seem too quiet here since you use soft sample set but the music is super loud. Can you try 60% anystead?
   
3. 02:58:273 - ^
   
4. 03:26:130 - It seems much nicer to end the spinner here in each diff since the music essentially cuts out right there and there is just a bit of reverb afterwards. It feels weird to continue the spinner beyond this point. Even a whistle on the end is nice.

1. 00:05:559 (1,2) - It seems you can make a much nicer pattern if you make each slider have the same curve. A bit strange when the 2 has more of a curve than the 1 considering for most combos you use the same slider through the whole combo.
   
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2. 00:13:702 (4,1) - Quite a large jump here for the slowest portion. x_x It's not a big deal or anything, just that it was a bit surprising.
   
3. 00:24:202 (3) - Nazi// This blanket could benefit from moving the 3 to (208,72).
   
4. 00:32:130 (3,4) - I prefer that you switch the position of the 3 and 4 here. It's a more consistent rhythm with later patterns, and fits more closely with the music imo.
   
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5. 00:53:559 (1) - Would look nicer if you made more distance from the slider 00:53:130 (4) so that it's consistent with the previous 00:51:845 (1,2) patterns. Don't be afraid to break distance snap a bit since you have a NC here. Or you could try to make it similar to 02:46:702 (1). Try it:
   
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6. 01:15:845 (1,2) - This antijump feels kinda bad imo since you don't do it anywhere else. I'd like you to remove it if you can. It's easy to mistake it as 1/4.
   
7. 01:33:416 (4,5,6) - It would be nice if you could place the 6 in a blanket pattern with the 5. Try curving the 4 and 5 less.
   
8. 02:03:630 (5,1) - Switch NC? Follows vocals and makes this easier to read after the antijump imo.
   
9. 02:06:416 (3) - Consider removing the repeat and adding a circle at 02:06:845 in an antijump to continue the antijump pattern.
   
10. 02:08:987 (1,2,3) - Try continuing the jump pattern through the whole combo, I think it might play nicer. You could add a 1/2 slider at 02:09:845 and try this pattern:
    
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11. 02:26:130 - IMO it's nicer to start the spinner here on the downbeat. This is where the drum line begins accelerating in volume.
    
12. 02:39:845 (1,2,3) - Pattern could be better imo. The flow is a bit funky. Try like this:
    
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    Or anything similar in flow to 00:41:559 (1,2,3) would be worlds better IMO.
13. 03:04:273 (4,5,6) - Same as 01:33:416 (4,5,6).

1. 00:24:416 (1,2) - Not the best placement imo. Try rotating the 2 more to the left so its tail has more distance from the slider body 1 than its head does.
   
2. 00:55:273 (1) - Missing finish I suppose.
   
3. 01:51:845 - Add spinner? Seems missing here.
   
4. 01:26:559 (4) - NC? Consistent with 03:11:130 (1). Also makes it read a little better. But honestly I'd prefer that you split this into two 1/2 slider, one with a repeat, but it's up to you. The reason is because the slider is very short and it might confuse players. It's almost impossible for the player to tell that there are multiple repeats before they actually hit them. Check this rhythm out:
   
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5. 01:58:702 (1,2) - I think you should replace these with a 1/2 slider. It's a bit too many circles in 1/2 here and it takes away from the clap pattern of 01:58:059 (5,6) imo.
   
6. 02:26:987 (1) - Same as hard, start the spinner earlier is better imo.

1. 00:55:273 (1) - Finish.
   
3. 00:48:416 (1) - Try flipping it over, makes more sense to me for a more natural movement.
   
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4. 02:19:273 (1) - Missing finish I suppose.
   
5. 02:28:702 - IMO it's better not to silence the end of the spinner here in the easiest difficulty so that the player will hear when it ends.
   
6. 02:32:987 (1) - Same as 00:48:416 (1).

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Time to break the ice.

[General]

1. 01:08:987 - We talked about this in IRC a bit, but I'll list it here. I can't understand the reason behind ending the break early, it seems much better to end it at 01:10:702 when the spinner starts. Players expect play to start right after seeing the warning arrows. Right now it doesn't. uguu and fixed
   
2. 01:14:130 - Hitsounds seem too quiet here since you use soft sample set but the music is super loud. Can you try 60% anystead? ok
   
3. 02:58:273 - ^-^
   
4. 03:26:130 - It seems much nicer to end the spinner here in each diff since the music essentially cuts out right there and there is just a bit of reverb afterwards. It feels weird to continue the spinner beyond this point. Even a whistle on the end is nice. how i said before in othermods ''no,because i like to follow with more silent spinner the sound that starts from 03:26:023 -'' and i love long spinners

[Hard]

1. 00:05:559 (1,2) - It seems you can make a much nicer pattern if you make each slider have the same curve. A bit strange when the 2 has more of a curve than the 1 considering for most combos you use the same slider through the whole combo. changed a little bit the curve of 00:05:987 (2) - iwanted a different form for this slider and not a copy pasted sliders
   
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2. 00:13:702 (4,1) - Quite a large jump here for the slowest portion. x_x It's not a big deal or anything, just that it was a bit surprising. reduced a bit moving all the pattern
   
3. 00:24:202 (3) - Nazi// This blanket could benefit from moving the 3 to (208,72). uuuuh ma blanket is not perfect fixed,btw fixed only by moving the 2nd white point of the slider is easier
   
4. 00:32:130 (3,4) - I prefer that you switch the position of the 3 and 4 here. It's a more consistent rhythm with later patterns, and fits more closely with the music imo. i prefer to keep it like it is now it's better imo
   
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5. 00:53:559 (1) - Would look nicer if you made more distance from the slider 00:53:130 (4) so that it's consistent with the previous 00:51:845 (1,2) patterns. Don't be afraid to break distance snap a bit since you have a NC here. Or you could try to make it similar to 02:46:702 (1). Try it: ok did a magior spacing there
   
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6. 01:15:845 (1,2) - This antijump feels kinda bad imo since you don't do it anywhere else. I'd like you to remove it if you can. It's easy to mistake it as 1/4. i like how it flows and i don't find it so difficult to read so no changes here
   
7. 01:33:416 (4,5,6) - It would be nice if you could place the 6 in a blanket pattern with the 5. Try curving the 4 and 5 less. a bit nazi but i like how they are curved so no chaanges here
   
8. 02:03:630 (5,1) - Switch NC? Follows vocals and makes this easier to read after the antijump imo. nah i don't think is needed here
   
9. 02:06:416 (3) - Consider removing the repeat and adding a circle at 02:06:845 in an antijump to continue the antijump pattern. good idea done
   
10. 02:08:987 (1,2,3) - Try continuing the jump pattern through the whole combo, I think it might play nicer. You could add a 1/2 slider at 02:09:845 and try this pattern: nicee o3o done
    
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11. 02:26:130 - IMO it's nicer to start the spinner here on the downbeat. This is where the drum line begins accelerating in volume. i follow the sound that start here 02:26:987 - so no changes here
    
12. 02:39:845 (1,2,3) - Pattern could be better imo. The flow is a bit funky. Try like this: changed just a little bit but in a different way
    
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    Or anything similar in flow to 00:41:559 (1,2,3) would be worlds better IMO.
13. 03:04:273 (4,5,6) - Same as 01:33:416 (4,5,6). same answer o3o

[Normal]

1. 00:24:416 (1,2) - Not the best placement imo. Try rotating the 2 more to the left so its tail has more distance from the slider body 1 than its head does. no changes here because this was made intentionally because of:
   
2. 00:55:273 (1) - Missing finish I suppose. uguu added
   
3. 01:51:845 - Add spinner? Seems missing here. uguu done
   
4. 01:26:559 (4) - NC? Consistent with 03:11:130 (1). Also makes it read a little better. But honestly I'd prefer that you spit this into two 1/2 slider, one with a repeat, but it's up to you. The reason is because the slider is very short and it might confuse players. It's almost impossible for the player to tell that there are multiple repeats before they actually hit them. Check this rhythm out: added NC personally i prefer to have a slider like this that saperate it in 2 sliders i wanna something particular here
   
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5. 01:58:702 (1,2) - I think you should replace these with a 1/2 slider. It's a bit too many circles in 1/2 here and it takes away from the clap pattern of 01:58:059 (5,6) imo. ok
   
6. 02:26:987 (1) - Same as hard, start the spinner earlier is better imo. same answer o3o

SV so fast x_x i love to have it a bit higher as normal to have a bit more fun for the normal players,it should be not borring to play and since i'm a easy/normal player in ctb i know what i like to play and same in standard ofc but i love it to have it like this

[Easy]

1. 00:55:273 (1) - Finish.
   
2. 00:48:416 (1) - Try flipping it over, makes more sense to me for a more natural movement. did it a bit different but similar
   
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3. 02:19:273 (1) - Missing finish I suppose. uguu added
   
4. 02:28:702 - IMO it's better not to silence the end of the spinner here in the easiest difficulty so that the player will hear when it ends. i like to keep consistency in all diffs
   
5. 02:32:987 (1) - Same as 00:48:416 (1).ok o3o

Sweet. Let me know. ^^