1. Easy (2,19 stars, 101 notes)
2. Henkie's Despair (4,9 stars, 394 notes)
3. Insane (4,98 stars, 455 notes)
4. Normal (4,49 stars, 159 notes)

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Failing)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Passing)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
4,3,1,"ancafebg1.jpg",320,240
F,0,182352,182949,0,1
S,0,182352,182949,1,1.5
F,0,182950,183400,1,0
F,0,183546,184143,0,1
S,0,183546,184143,1,1.5
F,0,184144,184500,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Failing)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Passing)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
4,3,1,"ancafebg1.jpg",320,240
F,0,182352,182949,1,0
S,0,182352,182949,1,1.5
F,0,183546,184183,1,0
S,0,183546,184143,1,1.5
F,0,184640,185237,1,0
S,0,184640,185237,1,1.5
4,3,0,"white.png",0,0
L,182352,1
F,0,0,298,1,0
L,183546,1
F,0,0,298,1,0
L,184640,1
F,0,0,298,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:42:352 - Questa serie di break è inutile secondo me... Ok, rimossi
01:07:42 (1) - Fallo finire qui, 01:08:919 e fixa il break Fatto
01:30:113 - Questa serie di break è inutile secondo me... Tolti anche questi XD
01:37:17 (6) - Metti il finish anche all'inizio dello slider. Ottima idea!
01:44:34 (4,5) - Credo sia troppo per una normal. Mmh, non mi sembra così difficile, aspetterò altre moddate prima di cambiarlo
01:55:18 (1) - Fallo finire qui, 01:56:680 Fatto

[Insane]

00:39:06 (4,5) - Spacing confusionario. OMG non me n'ero accorto o__o"
00:58:77 (1,1) - Questi ultimi 2 jumps possono confondere. Anche per questo preferisco aspettare ulteriore modding
01:26:82 (5,6) - Spacing confusionario. Di nuovo, OMG
01:30:113 - Break inutili <3 Tolti!
02:39:56 (1) - Questo spinner non può essere ranked. Minimo bonus con auto : 2000. Fixato ç_ç Stupide regole...


Nice map, and cool SB. Star <3

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Henkie's Despair] < You forgot the " i " :U

00:26:73 (1) - Questo spinner non può essere ranked. Minimo bonus con auto : 2000. Expanded
00:46:531 - Questa sezione muta è davvero brutta :< Shortened
01:30:113 - Come la tua, inutile break. It supposed to be andy
01:37:87 (1) - Troppo lontano dagli altri, credo confonda troppo. That's called a JUMP thank you very much
02:58:37 (4,5,6) - Hard to read. Ok moved (6) away from (5)
03:04:74 (1) - Fallo finire qui, 03:05:785 We're working in 1/3, not 1/4 so it sounds perfect

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
00:55:33 (1) - 1/8 after (red tick)
00:56:58 (4,5,6,7) - maybe it's a little consusing for a normal Fixed
01:04:88 (1) - 1/8 after (red tick)
01:07:42 (1) - end 1/4 before and fix break
01:21:65 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - forse sono io, ma non ci capisco quasi niente... D: Vediamo cosa ne pensano gli altri allora, perchè non mi viene in mente un altro modo per mappare quel pezzo D:
01:41:75 (7,8,9) - di solito non accettano cose così per le normal: stack con 3 note di timing non simile non vanno bene, mettile separate Fixed
01:52:60 (1) - 1/8 after (red tick)
01:55:18 (1) - end 1/8 after (blue tick)

- Insane:
00:58:96 (1) - remove new combo (si capisce meglio) Done
01:00:06 (1) - delete this one Done
01:08:82 (1) - secondo me finirebbe molto meglio a 1:10:113 (ovviamente aggiusta la pausa se lo fai) Sounds better, done
01:27:12 (1) - end at 1:27:912
02:16:41 (7) - 1/8 after
02:25:23 (1) - end 1/8 after (fix break)
02:33:39 (1,2,3) - ??? ???
02:54:39 (1) - delete this Done
02:54:49 (2) - new combo Done!

Anyway, timing feels so weird but it's fine when hearing it in the editor... D:

Great effort, Oru <3

Doomsday93 wrote:

[NORMAL]

seems fine to me. spinners might be a little short for a normal diff. but thats just my opinion. good job. Thanks ^^

[HENKIE'S DESPAIR]

maybe put the overall difficulty up by 1? seems a little to slow to me at its current setting. Done

01:10:11 (4) - maybe move this under the end of (3) instead?
01:57:87 (4) - ^

[INSANE]

that HP drain is evil. i barely survived it. maybe lower it by one notch? Done!

00:39:26 (5) - odd beat. maybe remove it? Done
01:27:02 (6) - ^ Done, thanks for these two, I figured out something sounded wrong but I couldn't find the messed up beat D:
01:56:28 (1) - spacing issues. it was probably intended as a jump but it just confuses me. maybe make the start of this slider shorter so the end is still stacked on the other sliders here Fixed this one, but I'm afraid it could be more confusing now...

also, the spinners at 00:44:441, 02:55:28, and 03:05:33 are too short, auto can only get +1000 on them, make them just a little longer (by 1/4 or maybe just by 1/8) so auto can get +2000 on them Done

pretty good map. fun too, even if the drain on insane kicked my ass

star'd

Yumiko wrote:

Normal

00:22:94 (2,3,4) - rivedi lo spacing con il DS Done
00:24:74 (1,2,3) - ^ Done
01:23:14 (10) - qualcosa non mi quadra con la posizione di questo slider..sembra quasi che sia troppo vicino al 9, anche se il DS dice che la posizione è giusta D: io lo allontanerei dal 9 ma vedi tu se ti pare più giusto farlo o meno This slider feels weird in anyway, but until further modding, done.
01:45:63 (1) - troppo vicino al 7, correggi anche la posizione del 2 e del 3 Done

Insane
00:58:96 (2) - credo che la posizione di questo 2 sia poco intuitiva, prova ad avvicinarlo un pò all'uno, se ti va, anche se dovrebbe bastare il modo in cui hai messo i "new combo" a far capire quando va cliccato Done
02:54:49 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - la loro posizione non è correttissima, dovrebbero essere tutti più distanti dal 7, ma penso sia passabile, quindi vedi tu se correggerlo o meno xD Done

Good job, starred

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:25:35 (2) - finish the end Done
00:29:83 (6) - why is this on the less emphasized beat? the more emphasized beat was one beat earlier Fixed
00:33:11 (3) - end a tick earlier please Doesn't sound good, imo
00:58:78 (2) - finish the end Done
01:07:44 (1) - finish Done
01:22:06 (5) - ^ Done
01:45:65 (1) - clap the middle Done


[Normal]
set tick rate to "3" Done
00:35:70 (1) - finish Done
01:07:44 (1) - finish Done


[Henkie]
01:23:16 (1) - increase hitvolume No D:
why is slider tick rate .5? thats never right. Changed to 1
01:53:61 (3) - move 1/3 beat earlier No
02:11:32() - particularly conspicuous silence I like it this way


[Insane]
set slider tick rate to "3" Done
00:34:30 (2) - stacking Done
pretty nice Thanks :D

Alace wrote:

OK the map is fine for me
The only issue is (why do you use slider tickrate 3 in normal and insane wwww)
I think 2 is better(up to you)

i will time it with other peole
plz wait for me

Alace wrote:

This song has both 1/4 1/3 1/2 divisor
I am sure that slidertick 3 doesn`t sound so good
It is too noisy in some parts
It`s up to you anyway
I will use slidertick 0.5 personally

Also
I can`t tell what the offsety is better
Maybe you need other BAT`s help

I am sorry that i can`t help you

Celestral wrote:

I'm just here to star!


Star'd <3

vytalibus wrote:

[Easy]
00:52:81 (1) - Just a suggestion: move end point back by two 1/6 ticks and make it a Finish spinner. Iunno, sounds so epic that way, but it's just a suggestion. Done
01:04:05 (5) - Another suggestion: make this into a Finish hitcircle. Done
01:40:57 (1) - Same with 00:52:81. Done
01:51:81 (5) - Same with 01:04:05. Done

[Normal]
00:32:51 (2) - Too far for my liking. Fixed
01:07:44 (1) - Just a suggestion: move end point back by two 1/6 ticks and make it a Finish spinner. Iunno, sounds so epic that way, but it's just a suggestion. Done

[Insane]
There are a lot of deadly spaces here, and I mean "deadly". With the very high HP drain rate in mind, there are a lot of spaces here that really drains the bar out. Even something as small as the space between 02:16:84 (2,1) is quite scary.

Either decrease the HP drain rate, or do something about those spaces.

FrozenPower wrote:

WTF the normal is garbage.

tieff wrote:

I like this map.

tieff wrote:

I like this map.