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KOKIA - Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
aonkub555
Update~
Oriance
Yo, from my Queue.

Easy
Overall I feel that you should tweak the sliders into different patterns. Just seeing it in a straight line doesn't look good in my eyes. Also I feel like you should add a little more space between each note, its too close in my opinion.

Also I am assuming that you are following the vocals.

00:00:541 (1) - Don't really know, but I find the ending of it very awkward. Extend to 00:01:969.
00:04:350 (1) - Sound strange for me, reduce to 00:05:541 if you want.
00:10:064 (2) - Move to 00:10:515
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874. Then try adding a slider at 00:16:017 to 00:16:493
00:25:072 (4) - Between these long sliders you should add a clap for consistency. PM me In-game if you need help on this
00:26:501 (5) - Hit finish?
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:43:168 (4) - Clap on tail
00:44:120 (5) - ^
01:11:262 (3) - Remove hit Finish
01:25:548 - Consider reducing this spinner.

Normal
Is it just me, or is this pretty difficult?
00:02:445 (3) - Move slider to 00:03:398
00:10:064 (4) - Move to 00:10:303 and remove the circle after it.
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874
00:26:501 - Finish
00:30:311 - ^
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:50:310 - In my opinion having a slider speed change is very difficult for beginners. Consider changing it back to normal.
00:56:024 - Remove finish
00:57:929 - Move the slider, having it behind the previous slider is confusing on normal. Also remove the finish.
01:16:977 - Remove Finish
01:17:929 - Finish
01:19:834 - Finish
01:23:643 - Finish

I haven't found anything wrong on Hard except some missing hitsounds, and I can't really do insane. If you want I can do hitsounds on it, but right overall the beatmap seems pretty inconsistent. I wish you good luck though
Topic Starter
aonkub555

Oriance wrote:

Yo, from my Queue.

Easy
Overall I feel that you should tweak the sliders into different patterns. Just seeing it in a straight line doesn't look good in my eyes. Also I feel like you should add a little more space between each note, its too close in my opinion.

Also I am assuming that you are following the vocals.

00:00:541 (1) - Don't really know, but I find the ending of it very awkward. Extend to 00:01:969.
00:04:350 (1) - Sound strange for me, reduce to 00:05:541 if you want.
00:10:064 (2) - Move to 00:10:515
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874. Then try adding a slider at 00:16:017 to 00:16:493
00:25:072 (4) - Between these long sliders you should add a clap for consistency. PM me In-game if you need help on this
00:26:501 (5) - Hit finish?
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:43:168 (4) - Clap on tail
00:44:120 (5) - ^
01:11:262 (3) - Remove hit Finish
01:25:548 - Consider reducing this spinner.

Normal
Is it just me, or is this pretty difficult?
00:02:445 (3) - Move slider to 00:03:398
00:10:064 (4) - Move to 00:10:303 and remove the circle after it.
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874
00:26:501 - Finish
00:30:311 - ^
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:50:310 - In my opinion having a slider speed change is very difficult for beginners. Consider changing it back to normal.
00:56:024 - Remove finish
00:57:929 - Move the slider, having it behind the previous slider is confusing on normal. Also remove the finish.
01:16:977 - Remove Finish
01:17:929 - Finish
01:19:834 - Finish
01:23:643 - Finish

I haven't found anything wrong on Hard except some missing hitsounds, and I can't really do insane. If you want I can do hitsounds on it, but right overall the beatmap seems pretty inconsistent. I wish you good luck though
Hi~ Oriance
in your moded , i agree in some case
and thank you for modding :)
HabiHolic

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
Hi

[Habi's Hard]
00:01:255 - add note here? Why?
00:54:834 (4) - end in 00:55:310 - and add note in 00:55:548 - ? no. i don't like patten
01:10:310 (5) - same ^ / ^
01:17:691 (3) - ^ / ^

Goodluck

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m

[Hard]

00:01:731 (1) - This slider should start at 00:01:493 - / Hmm... no thanks
00:02:207 - If you do the above, then add a note here / no. bad...
All No Fixed
Gamu
Hello~

nice song and map <3


But, There is a bit of a problem...



An error has occurred in the title. You should fix it.
-Neipezi
hi for my queues

[General]
- this will give you a good quality video.Download
- bpm offset -165 change. delete all else bpm
- Title a "ใใฃใ๏ผ‘ใคใฎๆณใ (TV Size)" there was an error. change

[Easy]
00:20:779 - 00:22:207 - add a combo here this
00:43:168 - clap add
00:48:406 (1) - whistle add
00:48:882 (2) - clap add
00:59:358 (1) - NC remove

[Normal]
00:04:350 (1) - NC remove
00:06:255 (1,1) - ^
00:52:691 (2) - object's end is not snapped
00:57:929 - finish remove
01:03:643 (1,2) - can be confusing for beginners.

[Habi's Hard]
넌 내가 모딩만하면 니 겟난이 있냐 >:(
01:00:786 (1) - 앞에 피니시 추가
01:04:596 (1) - ^
01:08:405 (1) - 앞에 휘슬 추가
01:10:310 (5) - 앞에 피니시 추가
01:19:238 - 휘슬 추가
01:23:167 (4) - 클랩 추가
01:19:834 (1,3,5) - 크랩도 대충 해놨네 왜 크랩선에 안맞추고 드럼선에 맞추냐?

[Drama]
00:13:517 (4) - unrank
00:18:874 (1) - add slide after finish earlier, finish later deleted 00:20:779 (13) -
00:20:779 (13,1) - NC change
00:22:692 - whistle add?
00:26:501 - ^
00:36:501 - clap add
00:39:834 (6) - NC add
00:43:644 (6) - ^?
00:47:930 (2,6) - clap add
00:48:644 (5,7) - whistle add (this vocal)
00:52:691 - clap add
00:55:786 (1,2,3,4) - wow, jump..
01:06:024 (1) - NC remove

good lucky~/
Topic Starter
aonkub555

-Gamu- wrote:

Hello~

nice song and map <3


But, There is a bit of a problem...



An error has occurred in the title. You should fix it.

Thank you for modding~ -Gamu- :D , fix it complete
Topic Starter
aonkub555

-Kirito wrote:

hi for my queues

[General]
- this will give you a good quality video.Download Oh thank you , it's very good quality video , but the brightness look dark a litter bit~
- bpm offset -165 change. delete all else bpm
- Title a "ใใฃใ๏ผ‘ใคใฎๆณใ (TV Size)" there was an error. change fix now

[Easy]
00:20:779 - 00:22:207 - add a combo here this
00:43:168 - clap add
00:48:406 (1) - whistle add
00:48:882 (2) - clap add
00:59:358 (1) - NC remove

[Normal]
00:04:350 (1) - NC remove
00:06:255 (1,1) - ^
00:52:691 (2) - object's end is not snapped fix now
00:57:929 - finish remove
01:03:643 (1,2) - can be confusing for beginners. okey~ fix

[Habi's Hard]
넌 내가 모딩만하면 니 겟난이 있냐 >:(
01:00:786 (1) - 앞에 피니시 추가
01:04:596 (1) - ^
01:08:405 (1) - 앞에 휘슬 추가
01:10:310 (5) - 앞에 피니시 추가
01:19:238 - 휘슬 추가
01:23:167 (4) - 클랩 추가
01:19:834 (1,3,5) - 크랩도 대충 해놨네 왜 크랩선에 안맞추고 드럼선에 맞추냐?

[Drama]
00:13:517 (4) - unrank Hm... i'm not sure about it , but i have been ask bat for about it , the bat say it's okey
00:18:874 (1) - add slide after finish earlier, finish later deleted 00:20:779 (13) -
00:20:779 (13,1) - NC change
00:22:692 - whistle add? maybe i rather should finish because i hear sound cymbals
00:26:501 - ^
00:36:501 - clap add
00:39:834 (6) - NC add
00:43:644 (6) - ^?
00:47:930 (2,6) - clap add
00:48:644 (5,7) - whistle add (this vocal)
00:52:691 - clap add
00:55:786 (1,2,3,4) - wow, jump..
01:06:024 (1) - NC remove

good lucky~/
Thank you very nuch~ -Kirito :) , All fix done~
Topic Starter
aonkub555
Update~
tutuhaha
Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ
Look at Drama diff and fix title problem please ←_←....
[Drama]
00:02:684 (5) - add whistle at middle
00:05:064 (3,4) - already touch HP so move down litter bit
00:09:112 (4) - ^
00:08:398 (1,2,3) - try to use more close space
00:13:160 (3) - whistle at the end
tyr to use 30% volume after 00:15:541 (1) -
00:18:874 (1) - delete finish or use low volume and add finish at begin
00:21:255 (3,4) - hard to read try to use smooth slider and close space
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127017
something like this ._.^
00:25:549 (8) - some rhythm like this will work better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127022
00:29:120 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127024 【just look at rhythm】
00:32:930 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127025 【just look at rhythm】
00:48:168 (3,4) - too far
00:56:262 (3,4) - too far
01:00:786 (5) - finish
01:06:024 (2) - already touch HP so move down litter bit
01:08:405 (3) - finish delete clap
beautiful song, shouldn’t have too much big jump

[Hard]
01:21:262 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127043 some rhythm like this well be funny :DDD

[Normal]
00:10:064 (x) - add note
00:12:445 (2) - some rhythm like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127047
now just too hard
00:51:738 (3,1,2) - space
00:56:024 (2) - delete finish
01:03:643 (1,2,3) - use same space like before
01:06:977 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:20:786 (3,4,5) - ^
01:22:691 (2,3,4) - ^
01:24:596 (6,7,8) - ^

[Easy]
00:04:350 (1) - end at 00:05:541
00:10:303 (2) - move 2 to here
00:13:160 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127056 rhythm
Topic Starter
aonkub555

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ
Look at Drama diff and fix title problem please ←_←....
[Drama]
00:02:684 (5) - add whistle at middle
00:05:064 (3,4) - already touch HP so move down litter bit
00:09:112 (4) - ^
00:08:398 (1,2,3) - try to use more close space
00:13:160 (3) - whistle at the end
tyr to use 30% volume after 00:15:541 (1) -
00:18:874 (1) - delete finish or use low volume and add finish at begin
00:21:255 (3,4) - hard to read try to use smooth slider and close space
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127017
something like this ._.^
00:25:549 (8) - some rhythm like this will work better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127022
00:29:120 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127024 【just look at rhythm】
00:32:930 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127025 【just look at rhythm】
00:48:168 (3,4) - too far
00:56:262 (3,4) - too far
01:00:786 (5) - finish
01:06:024 (2) - already touch HP so move down litter bit
01:08:405 (3) - finish delete clap
beautiful song, shouldn’t have too much big jump

[Hard]
01:21:262 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127043 some rhythm like this well be funny :DDD

[Normal]
00:10:064 (x) - add note
00:12:445 (2) - some rhythm like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127047
now just too hard
00:51:738 (3,1,2) - space
00:56:024 (2) - delete finish
01:03:643 (1,2,3) - use same space like before
01:06:977 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:20:786 (3,4,5) - ^
01:22:691 (2,3,4) - ^
01:24:596 (6,7,8) - ^

[Easy]
00:04:350 (1) - end at 00:05:541
00:10:303 (2) - move 2 to here
00:13:160 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127056 rhythm
Thank you for modding tutuhaha~ your mod is very very good :)
Umi
Hi hi sorry for delay >3</

Easy

- 00:11:969 (1,2) - should be a slider instead, kinda hard to catch for beginner
- 01:18:881 (1,2,3) - no hiden note in easy diff hard to read for beginner
- 01:19:834 (3,4,5) - what about relace by one slider instead, to follow the voice ?
- 01:23:643 (2,3,4) - ^

Normal

- 00:02:445 (3,5) - avoid this kind of overlap
- 00:13:160 (3) - move to x:312,y:164 for a better flow
- 00:13:874 (4,5,6) - better like this
- 00:26:977 (1,4) - i feel kinda uncomfortable with these sliders's shape, what about simple shape like you did in the rest of the map ?
- 00:32:215 (3,4) - blanket ?
- 01:20:310 (2,3,4,5) - this really confused move the (4) somewhere else plz

Habi's Hard

- 00:57:691 (2,3,4) - nazi but make them parallel
- 01:00:310 (7) - make a curve ? and then blanket with 01:00:786 (1) - ?
- 01:16:024 (9,1) - swap NC
- good hard :3

Drama

- 00:00:541 - to 00:15:303 - you should reduce the volum by 20 or 25%, the sliderslide is too noisy imo
- 00:27:811 (4) - replace by 2 note it play better
- 00:31:144 (1) - remove NC
- 00:32:930 (2,3,4) - stack them
- 00:41:263 (11,12,1) - use the same DS 00:40:311 (8,9,10) - ?
- 00:56:977 (7) - NC
- 01:00:548 (4,5) - reduce a bit the spacing between them
- 01:12:929 (1) - remove NC

that's all for me :3 good luck o/
HabiHolic

-Kirito wrote:

hi for my queues

[Habi's Hard]
넌 내가 모딩만하면 니 겟난이 있냐 >:( /ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:00:786 (1) - 앞에 피니시 추가 / 수정
01:04:596 (1) - ^ / ^
01:08:405 (1) - 앞에 휘슬 추가 / 어색해서 안고침
01:10:310 (5) - 앞에 피니시 추가 / ㅇㅇ
01:19:238 - 휘슬 추가 / ㅇㅇ
01:23:167 (4) - 클랩 추가 / ㅇㅇ
01:19:834 (1,3,5) - 크랩도 대충 해놨네 왜 크랩선에 안맞추고 드럼선에 맞추냐? / 슬라 힛사 제거했음

good lucky~/

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

[Hard]
01:21:262 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127043 some rhythm like this well be funny :DDD / Don't like patten No Fixed

-Umi- wrote:

Hi hi sorry for delay >3</

Habi's Hard

- 00:57:691 (2,3,4) - nazi but make them parallel / no
- 01:00:310 (7) - make a curve ? and then blanket with 01:00:786 (1) - ? / Ok!
- 01:16:024 (9,1) - swap NC / Ok!
- good hard :3 / Thanks!!
Thanks mod~ Fixed~

SPOILER
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[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 48112
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:たった1つの想い (TV Size)
Artist:KOKIA
ArtistUnicode:KOKIA
Creator:aonkub555
Version:Habi's Hard
Source:GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
Tags:opening HabiHolic Nardoxyribonucleic
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Topic Starter
aonkub555

-Umi- wrote:

Hi hi sorry for delay >3</

Easy

- 00:11:969 (1,2) - should be a slider instead, kinda hard to catch for beginner
- 01:18:881 (1,2,3) - no hiden note in easy diff hard to read for beginner
- 01:19:834 (3,4,5) - what about relace by one slider instead, to follow the voice ?
- 01:23:643 (2,3,4) - ^

Normal

- 00:02:445 (3,5) - avoid this kind of overlap
- 00:13:160 (3) - move to x:312,y:164 for a better flow
- 00:13:874 (4,5,6) - better like this
- 00:26:977 (1,4) - i feel kinda uncomfortable with these sliders's shape, what about simple shape like you did in the rest of the map ?
- 00:32:215 (3,4) - blanket ?
- 01:20:310 (2,3,4,5) - this really confused move the (4) somewhere else plz

Habi's Hard

- 00:57:691 (2,3,4) - nazi but make them parallel
- 01:00:310 (7) - make a curve ? and then blanket with 01:00:786 (1) - ?
- 01:16:024 (9,1) - swap NC
- good hard :3

Drama

- 00:00:541 - to 00:15:303 - you should reduce the volum by 20 or 25%, the sliderslide is too noisy imo
- 00:27:811 (4) - replace by 2 note it play better
- 00:31:144 (1) - remove NC
- 00:32:930 (2,3,4) - stack them
- 00:41:263 (11,12,1) - use the same DS 00:40:311 (8,9,10) - ?
- 00:56:977 (7) - NC
- 01:00:548 (4,5) - reduce a bit the spacing between them
- 01:12:929 (1) - remove NC

that's all for me :3 good luck o/
Thank you for Modding~ -Umi- :) All fixed done
Topic Starter
aonkub555
Update~
Backstep
mod as your request~

Easy
- เอิ่ม spacing ดิฟง่ายสุดช่วงต้นเพลงทำไมมันแกว่งจังเลยหว่า 0.75, 1.00, 1.50 เลือกเอาอย่างใดอย่างหนึ่งครับ - -" (แนะนำให้เหมือนทั้งเพลง คือ 1.00)
00:20:779 (1) - ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์จะเข้ากับเพลง
00:23:168 (G) - เส้นเขียวนี้ลดเสียงเหลือ 30% ก็พอแล้ว พอฟังเสียง clap แล้วมันดังหนวกหูไงก็ไม่รู้ D:
00:24:596 (4) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:26:025 (5) - ใส่เสียง whistle หลังสไลด์
00:31:739 (2) - ^
00:39:834 (4) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:42:691 (4) - เอา clap หน้าสไลด์ออก
00:43:644 (5) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:50:310 (3) - หลังสไลด์ใส่ finish จะเข้ากว่านะ
01:04:119 (5) - ลืม clap.
01:25:548 (R) - ลบเส้นแดงออกใส่เส้นเขียวแทน (เส้นแดงส่วนใหญ่ใช้ในกรณีที่เพลงมี BPM แกว่งหลายค่า -3-)

Normal
00:04:350 (5) - New combo
00:05:541 (6) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:06:255 (7) - ^
00:08:160 (1) - ลบโน้ตตัวนี้ออก แล้ว New combo (2) เพราะตัวนี้ไม่มีเสียงอะไรเลยทั้งคนร้องทั้งดนตรี
00:23:168 (2) - เอา whistle ออก
00:26:501 (6) - ใส่ whistle
00:28:406 (4) - หน้าสไลด์ whistle หลังสไลด์ clap
00:29:834 (6) - หลังสไลด์ finish.
00:32:215 (9) - หน้าสไลด์ whistle หลังสไลด์ clap
00:42:215 (2) - ไม่ทาบ (4) owo
01:09:834 (1) - ลืม clap หน้าสไลด์
01:10:310 (2) - อันนี้ลืม clap หลังสไลด์
01:18:881 (1) - ท้ายสไลด์ finish.
01:23:643 (5) - ใส่ finish หน้าสไลด์
01:25:548 (R) - เหมือน Easy

Hard
00:18:874 (1) - spin ตัวนี้เริ่มตรง 00:18:636 แล้วจบที่เดิม
00:30:311 (1) - ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์
00:40:191 (6) - เอา clap ออก = =
01:08:405 (1) - ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์
01:16:024 (1) - ^
01:25:548 (R) - เหมือน Easy
** ดิฟนี้ดีแล้ว -w-

Drama
00:18:874 (1) - หลงจังหวะแล้วนาย ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์สิ - -
00:19:112, 00:20:779, 00:21:017 (G) - ลบเส้นเขียวให้หมดเลย (ไม่จำเป็น)
00:35:549 (G) - หลังเส้นเขียวนี้จบจนสปินหน้าให้ใช้เสียง 50% พอแล้วครับ
01:18:881 (G) - หลัง kiai ใช้แค่ 30-50% ก็พอแล้ว เพราะกะทำช่วงเพลงช้า (สไลด์ความเร็วต่ำลง)
01:25:548 (R) - เหมือน Easy
** โดยรวมก็โอแล้วนะดิฟนี้

โชคดี -w-
HabiHolic
translated to aonkub555's IRC via Fixed~

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68,304,24358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,216,24596,2,0,B|56:140|56:140|32:68,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,25311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,184,25549,2,0,B|132:260|132:260|156:332,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,26263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,308,26501,6,0,L|432:304,1,75
504,212,26977,2,0,L|408:212,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,172,27334,2,0,P|336:200|280:188,1,112.5
216,132,27930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,28168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,132,28406,2,0,P|200:208|232:276,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,29120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,29358,2,0,L|372:340,1,75
498,252,29834,2,0,L|424:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,30311,6,0,P|316:200|236:188,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,31025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,31144,2,0,P|116:116|60:148,1,112.5
28,232,31739,2,0,L|32:320,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,356,32215,2,0,B|188:332|188:332|264:344,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,32930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,33168,2,0,L|180:240,2,112.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,300,34120,6,0,P|448:272|480:200,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,116,34834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,44,35072,2,0,P|344:36|308:40,1,75
220,80,35549,2,0,P|184:88|140:84,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,132,36025,2,0,P|56:216|88:280,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,36739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,36977,2,0,L|332:292,1,75
480,200,37453,2,0,L|396:204,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,37811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,228,37930,6,0,P|400:156|380:72,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,36,38644,2,0,B|236:32|236:32|208:64|156:56,1,150
64,44,39358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,132,39596,2,0,L|32:212,1,75
96,296,40072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,40191,2,0,P|152:288|200:324,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,356,40787,2,0,L|376:348,1,75
452,304,41263,2,0,B|480:268|480:268|468:164,1,150,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,41977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,42215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,56,42453,6,0,P|264:80|168:64,1,150
76,40,43168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,120,43406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,212,43644,2,0,P|32:264|88:348,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,336,44358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,44596,2,0,L|336:272,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,45311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45549,12,0,48882,0:0:0:0:
52,344,49358,6,0,P|32:300|44:196,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,50072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,80,50310,2,0,P|188:48|156:12,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,180,51024,2,0,P|248:180|336:128,1,150
408,68,51738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,144,51977,2,0,P|488:208|476:292,1,150
408,360,52691,2,0,L|328:348,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,53167,6,0,P|236:300|160:288,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,196,53881,2,0,P|64:152|140:164,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,162,54596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,108,54834,2,0,P|288:128|424:44,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,128,55786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,128,56024,2,0,L|492:208,1,75
440,272,56500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,296,56738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,296,56977,6,0,P|284:280|212:320,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,348,57691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,348,57929,2,0,L|48:340,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,260,58643,2,0,B|64:248|64:248|16:188,1,150
60,96,59358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,96,59596,2,0,P|136:100|200:60,1,150
288,92,60310,6,0,P|320:76|360:72,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,168,60786,2,0,P|416:220|488:208,2,150,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,61977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,62215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,168,62453,2,0,L|208:180,1,150
112,156,63167,2,0,P|104:196|112:236,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,324,63643,2,0,P|144:332|192:324,1,75
248,272,64119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,248,64357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,64596,6,0,P|416:244|472:296,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,65310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,65548,2,0,L|432:176,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,66262,2,0,P|456:80|352:56,1,150
272,96,66977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,96,67215,2,0,B|216:88|216:88|168:120|124:92,1,150
48,44,67929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,132,68167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,212,68405,6,0,P|40:264|104:348,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,69119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,69358,2,0,P|232:328|336:336,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,296,70072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,296,70310,2,0,P|484:256|476:112,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,60,71262,2,0,L|328:64,1,75
248,32,71738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,36,71977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,36,72215,6,0,P|108:88|24:80,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,168,72929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,168,73167,2,0,L|16:244,1,75
40,332,73643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,284,73881,2,0,P|204:272|268:312,1,150
360,344,74596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,288,74834,2,0,P|480:228|488:148,1,150
420,88,75548,2,0,L|344:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,47,76024,6,0,L|260:40,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,76738,2,0,P|120:168|72:256,1,150
36,336,77453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,360,77691,2,0,P|228:348|320:264,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,78643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,78881,2,0,P|448:84|496:116,2,112.5,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,79834,6,0,P|224:108|32:100,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,232,81262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,332,81738,2,0,P|180:256|372:264,1,300,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,220,83167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,220,83405,2,0,L|472:136,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83881,12,0,85072,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85548,12,0,89357,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
aonkub555

Backstep wrote:

mod as your request~

Easy
- เอิ่ม spacing ดิฟง่ายสุดช่วงต้นเพลงทำไมมันแกว่งจังเลยหว่า 0.75, 1.00, 1.50 เลือกเอาอย่างใดอย่างหนึ่งครับ - -" (แนะนำให้เหมือนทั้งเพลง คือ 1.00)
00:20:779 (1) - ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์จะเข้ากับเพลง
00:23:168 (G) - เส้นเขียวนี้ลดเสียงเหลือ 30% ก็พอแล้ว พอฟังเสียง clap แล้วมันดังหนวกหูไงก็ไม่รู้ D:
00:24:596 (4) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:26:025 (5) - ใส่เสียง whistle หลังสไลด์
00:31:739 (2) - ^
00:39:834 (4) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:42:691 (4) - เอา clap หน้าสไลด์ออก
00:43:644 (5) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:50:310 (3) - หลังสไลด์ใส่ finish จะเข้ากว่านะ
01:04:119 (5) - ลืม clap.
01:25:548 (R) - ลบเส้นแดงออกใส่เส้นเขียวแทน (เส้นแดงส่วนใหญ่ใช้ในกรณีที่เพลงมี BPM แกว่งหลายค่า -3-)

Normal
00:04:350 (5) - New combo
00:05:541 (6) - ใส่เสียง whistle หน้าสไลด์
00:06:255 (7) - ^
00:08:160 (1) - ลบโน้ตตัวนี้ออก แล้ว New combo (2) เพราะตัวนี้ไม่มีเสียงอะไรเลยทั้งคนร้องทั้งดนตรี
00:23:168 (2) - เอา whistle ออก
00:26:501 (6) - ใส่ whistle
00:28:406 (4) - หน้าสไลด์ whistle หลังสไลด์ clap
00:29:834 (6) - หลังสไลด์ finish.
00:32:215 (9) - หน้าสไลด์ whistle หลังสไลด์ clap
00:42:215 (2) - ไม่ทาบ (4) owo
01:09:834 (1) - ลืม clap หน้าสไลด์
01:10:310 (2) - อันนี้ลืม clap หลังสไลด์
01:18:881 (1) - ท้ายสไลด์ finish.
01:23:643 (5) - ใส่ finish หน้าสไลด์
01:25:548 (R) - เหมือน Easy

Hard
00:18:874 (1) - spin ตัวนี้เริ่มตรง 00:18:636 แล้วจบที่เดิม
00:30:311 (1) - ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์
00:40:191 (6) - เอา clap ออก = =
01:08:405 (1) - ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์
01:16:024 (1) - ^
01:25:548 (R) - เหมือน Easy
** ดิฟนี้ดีแล้ว -w-

Drama
00:18:874 (1) - หลงจังหวะแล้วนาย ใส่เสียง finish หน้าสไลด์สิ - -
00:19:112, 00:20:779, 00:21:017 (G) - ลบเส้นเขียวให้หมดเลย (ไม่จำเป็น)
00:35:549 (G) - หลังเส้นเขียวนี้จบจนสปินหน้าให้ใช้เสียง 50% พอแล้วครับ
01:18:881 (G) - หลัง kiai ใช้แค่ 30-50% ก็พอแล้ว เพราะกะทำช่วงเพลงช้า (สไลด์ความเร็วต่ำลง)
01:25:548 (R) - เหมือน Easy
** โดยรวมก็โอแล้วนะดิฟนี้

โชคดี -w-
okey~ , will fix in some case , thank you Backstep :)
Avishay
Hi! From your queue, I'm not the best modder but hopefully you'll be satisfied!


Easy
00:53:405 (2) - I suggest moving the slider like in the image below, some screens have not that great resolutions (like mine) and the slider ended in awkward place at the edge for me, but if you move it to there it will have a great flow as well with this part.

Normal
00:30:787 - NC
00:56:977 - Isn't this pattern confusing for beginners? They could think this is one slider somewhat and maybe not even notice the circle.

Drama
00:10:303 - CTRL + G
00:21:850 (4,5) - I think you can rotate them a bit to make a better flow, like that:

00:58:881 - CTRL + G (?) and the slider is not straight, I don't know if you wanted it to be straight, but I'm just making sure you know it is not :)
01:01:500(7) - Try changing the straight slider to a wave slider, I like it much more

I'm really sorry if you think I didn't find enough things to mod, and that's because your map is really good in my opinion and I hope it will get ranked soon because I really like the song and the map is great! Good luck :)
Topic Starter
aonkub555

iTZAvishay wrote:

Hi! From your queue, I'm not the best modder but hopefully you'll be satisfied!


Easy
00:53:405 (2) - I suggest moving the slider like in the image below, some screens have not that great resolutions (like mine) and the slider ended in awkward place at the edge for me, but if you move it to there it will have a great flow as well with this part.

Normal
00:30:787 - NC
00:56:977 - Isn't this pattern confusing for beginners? They could think this is one slider somewhat and maybe not even notice the circle.

Drama
00:10:303 - CTRL + G
00:21:850 (4,5) - I think you can rotate them a bit to make a better flow, like that:

00:58:881 - CTRL + G (?) and the slider is not straight, I don't know if you wanted it to be straight, but I'm just making sure you know it is not :)
01:01:500(7) - Try changing the straight slider to a wave slider, I like it much more

I'm really sorry if you think I didn't find enough things to mod, and that's because your map is really good in my opinion and I hope it will get ranked soon because I really like the song and the map is great! Good luck :)


i'll fix in some case , okey~ let's mod your map
Silver Crow
Hi~

Drama Diff

General:
1.can spend more times on the hitsound, i thought it is too loud in many places

2.by the KIAI time the speed up too much, just suggest to use another


00:00:541 - ~ 00:15:422 - make the Vol. down to 20 or 25 maybe?
00:29:715 (4) - remove the clap?
00:33:525 (5) - ^
00:33:168 (4,5,6) - think about the shape
00:47:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not jump like this, so strange
01:00:786 (5,6) - the distance here maybe think about it o:?
01:09:358 (5,6,7,8) - cahnge like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1144385)? remove the clap from 5, add finish on 6, and add clap on 9
01:13:167 (6,7,8) - make these three into triangle O:?

---KIAI TIME'S part----
I thought this part your map start to insane(?)
mabe you would like to make a carzy jump, i'll say that maybe you should do these jumps on another song(map)

Just suggest, because i dont think the song with these kind of jump

01:21:024 (5) - maybe makes the slider shape just like this(01:21:738 (9) - ) :P?

Habi's Hard

01:10:310 (5) - this slider change like this ?
01:18:881 (6) - NC?(bec of the speed change

Love this Diff <3

fine end by here, i cannot mod the easy and normal sorry ;w;

Good luck!!!
-Teina-
[Drama]
open
00:03:398 (1) - move to X:250 Y:133

00:09:112 (4) - ^
00:26:501 (1) - move note X:-20
00:37:453 (5) - move not Y:+7
00:58:881 (6) - move to left
01:13:405 (7) - move note to X:348 Y:232 (suggest only)

Sorry I don't how to mod easier diffs.
I would ask my friend to mod your map~
Hope can help you~
Topic Starter
aonkub555

Silver Crow wrote:

Hi~

Drama Diff

General:
1.can spend more times on the hitsound, i thought it is too loud in many places

2.by the KIAI time the speed up too much, just suggest to use another


00:00:541 - ~ 00:15:422 - make the Vol. down to 20 or 25 maybe?
00:29:715 (4) - remove the clap? good fix
00:33:525 (5) - ^ fix~
00:33:168 (4,5,6) - think about the shape
00:47:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not jump like this, so strange not fix , i like pattern this
01:00:786 (5,6) - the distance here maybe think about it o:?
01:09:358 (5,6,7,8) - cahnge like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1144385)? remove the clap from 5, add finish on 6, and add clap on 9 not fix , pattern not look pretty
01:13:167 (6,7,8) - make these three into triangle O:? no fix

---KIAI TIME'S part----
I thought this part your map start to insane(?)
mabe you would like to make a carzy jump, i'll say that maybe you should do these jumps on another song(map)

Just suggest, because i dont think the song with these kind of jump

01:21:024 (5) - maybe makes the slider shape just like this(01:21:738 (9) - ) :P? okey~ fix

Habi's Hard

01:10:310 (5) - this slider change like this ?
01:18:881 (6) - NC?(bec of the speed change

Love this Diff <3

fine end by here, i cannot mod the easy and normal sorry ;w;

Good luck!!!
thank you! Silver Crow , it's can help me :)
Topic Starter
aonkub555

tellertheworld wrote:

[Drama]
open
00:03:398 (1) - move to X:250 Y:133

00:09:112 (4) - ^
00:26:501 (1) - move note X:-20 fix
00:37:453 (5) - move not Y:+7 no fix , but your mod i can get some idea to manage note this
00:58:881 (6) - move left what...
01:13:405 (7) - move note to X:348 Y:232 (suggest only)

Sorry I don't how to mod easier diffs.
I would ask my friend to mod your map~
Hope can help you~
i will fix in some case , thank you tellertheworld~
-Teina-

aonkub555 wrote:

tellertheworld wrote:

[Drama]
00:58:881 (6) - move left what...
i will fix in some case , thank you tellertheworld~

Sorry ,like this~
AlexaBM
hi~ from M4M queue
Beautiful song <3

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:779 (1,2) - Slider (1) is too near from HP bar, put it down a bit.
    I understand you follow the lyrics, but it'll be easier for beginners if you'll begin slider (1) at 00:00:779 - and stop it at 00:01:731 -
    Slider (2) start at 00:02:684 - finish at 00:03:636 -
  2. 00:04:350 (1) - The same as ^ start at 00:04:588 - end at 00:05:541 -
  3. 00:06:493 (2) - start at 00:06:493 - end at 00:07:684 -
  4. 00:10:303 (2) - do it so
  5. 00:11:969 (3,4) - you can do them more rounded to get smth like this
  6. 00:24:596 (4) - Ctrl+g. I know if you'll do this, you should remap a bit this part, but it would be better with ctrl+g, because of better flow.
  7. 00:34:120 (1) - spinner end at 00:36:025 - . I want so because this spinner is too small for Easy diff
  8. 00:47:930 - ^
  9. 00:56:024 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to 00:56:977 -
  10. 01:09:358 (2,3) - Bad overlap, put (3) down a bit
  11. 01:17:929 (6,2) - ^
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:08:160 (1,2,3) - would be better if you'll do smth like this http://puu.sh/5CSBp.jpg
  2. 00:10:064 (4,5) - ?
  3. 00:38:406 (2,3) - ?
  4. 00:57:691 (1,2) - it don't looks well, pull them apart
  5. 01:05:548 (1) - put the red point on the middle of the slider
  6. 01:09:834 (1) - remove NC

  • [Habi's Hard]
  1. 00:22:207 (6,1) - maybe put (6) lower than (1)?
  • [Drama]
  1. 00:00:541 (1,2) - remove whistles from sliders and add them to the beginnings and endings of sliders (it's different things)
  2. 00:09:112 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow
  3. 00:19:945 (6) - NC?
  4. 00:56:262 (3,4,5) - it's too big jump for such a calm song
GL~
Dariano
Great map! I loved it. Hope this gets ranked soon.

[Drama]

00:51:024 (6,7) - The distance between these two, are different from the others in the whole map.
00:54:834 (7,8,9) - I think the distances are uneven, 8 and 9 are too close.
01:18:643 (5,6,7,8,9) - This looks strange, I think that stream is too far from the slider.
01:21:024 (5,6,7,8) - Same as above. For instance, this is better 01:19:834 (11,1,2,3,4) -
00:29:715 (4,5) - The clap sound should be in the beginning of the slider instead of that circle.

[Habi's hard]

00:16:374 (2) - I don't think that needs the whistle sound, since it is not on a red tick.

[Normal]

No issues were found.

[Easy]

01:10:786 (3) - Move this down a little bit, like this http://puu.sh/5CZ7W.jpg since the overlap looks ugly.
01:18:881 (1,2,3) - The 2 and 3 are too close, aren't they?
Topic Starter
aonkub555

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ from M4M queue
Beautiful song <3

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:779 (1,2) - Slider (1) is too near from HP bar, put it down a bit.
    I understand you follow the lyrics, but it'll be easier for beginners if you'll begin slider (1) at 00:00:779 - and stop it at 00:01:731 -
    Slider (2) start at 00:02:684 - finish at 00:03:636 -
  2. 00:04:350 (1) - The same as ^ start at 00:04:588 - end at 00:05:541 -
  3. 00:06:493 (2) - start at 00:06:493 - end at 00:07:684 -
  4. 00:10:303 (2) - do it so
  5. 00:11:969 (3,4) - you can do them more rounded to get smth like this
  6. 00:24:596 (4) - Ctrl+g. I know if you'll do this, you should remap a bit this part, but it would be better with ctrl+g, because of better flow.
  7. 00:34:120 (1) - spinner end at 00:36:025 - . I want so because this spinner is too small for Easy diff
  8. 00:47:930 - ^
  9. 00:56:024 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to 00:56:977 -
  10. 01:09:358 (2,3) - Bad overlap, put (3) down a bit
  11. 01:17:929 (6,2) - ^
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:08:160 (1,2,3) - would be better if you'll do smth like this http://puu.sh/5CSBp.jpg
  2. 00:10:064 (4,5) - ?
  3. 00:38:406 (2,3) - ?
  4. 00:57:691 (1,2) - it don't looks well, pull them apart
  5. 01:05:548 (1) - put the red point on the middle of the slider
  6. 01:09:834 (1) - remove NC

  • [Habi's Hard]
  1. 00:22:207 (6,1) - maybe put (6) lower than (1)?
  • [Drama]
  1. 00:00:541 (1,2) - remove whistles from sliders and add them to the beginnings and endings of sliders (it's different things)
  2. 00:09:112 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow
  3. 00:19:945 (6) - NC?
  4. 00:56:262 (3,4,5) - it's too big jump for such a calm song
GL~
Thank for modding~ will fix in some case :)
BTW your map will mod in tomorrow~
Topic Starter
aonkub555

darkguydari wrote:

Great map! I loved it. Hope this gets ranked soon.

[Drama]

00:51:024 (6,7) - The distance between these two, are different from the others in the whole map.
00:54:834 (7,8,9) - I think the distances are uneven, 8 and 9 are too close.
01:18:643 (5,6,7,8,9) - This looks strange, I think that stream is too far from the slider.
01:21:024 (5,6,7,8) - Same as above. For instance, this is better 01:19:834 (11,1,2,3,4) -
00:29:715 (4,5) - The clap sound should be in the beginning of the slider instead of that circle. good fix

[Habi's hard]

00:16:374 (2) - I don't think that needs the whistle sound, since it is not on a red tick.

[Normal]

No issues were found.

[Easy]

01:10:786 (3) - Move this down a little bit, like this http://puu.sh/5CZ7W.jpg since the overlap looks ugly. fix
01:18:881 (1,2,3) - The 2 and 3 are too close, aren't they?
thank for modding~ it can help me :)
agentdark1706
im one of ur mods... from ur queue

DS= distance snap

[easy]

01:21:738 (1) - DS .... its 1.14x away...

not much to mod here.... (is quite perfect here)

[normal]

is too perfect for my modding skills ....

[ drama ]

quite perfect cant see a thing in it....






well in general ... if i had any kudosu to spare i would shoot u a star... :? (saving the only 1 i have left)


ill ask -APXH if he can mod u ... ( he is more pro than me just that he works in multiple proyects at the same time )
Topic Starter
aonkub555

agentdark1706 wrote:

im one of ur mods... from ur queue

DS= distance snap

[easy]

01:21:738 (1) - DS .... its 1.14x away... good fix~

not much to mod here.... (is quite perfect here)

[normal]

is too perfect for my modding skills ....

[ drama ]

quite perfect cant see a thing in it....






well in general ... if i had any kudosu to spare i would shoot u a star... :? (saving the only 1 i have left)


ill ask -APXH if he can mod u ... ( he is more pro than me just that he works in multiple proyects at the same time )

thank you~ agentdark1706 , even if you will mod just a little bit but it can help me :)
Frostmourne
เช็คแล้วนะ

General
เปลี่ยนชื่อดิฟจาก Drama เป็น Insane เพราะกฎเกี่ยวกับชื่อดิฟเปลี่ยนแล้ว

Easy
ลด OD ให้เหลือ 2 จาก 3 เพราะว่า Normal diff มัน 3 อยู่
00:00:541 (1,2,1) - ระยะตรงนี้ควรเป็น 1.0x (ประมาณ) ให้หมด แบบนี้ยังใช้ไม่ได้
00:24:596 (4,5) - clap หาง slider สองตัวนี้
00:26:501 (1) - เปลี่ยนไป clap ที่หางแทนหัว (เอาหัวออก)
00:30:311 (6) - new combo
00:30:787 (2) - clap หัวแทนหาง
00:31:739 (3) - ^
00:43:644 (5) - new combo
01:19:357 (2,3) - ซ้อนอยู่ด้านใต้สไลเดอร์ 01:17:929 (6) - แบบนี้ไม่ได้ใน Easy diff
เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบอื่น
01:19:834 (3) - finish หัวสไลเดอร์แล้ว clap หาง slider
01:23:643 (2) - finish หัวสไลเดอร์

Normal
เป็น Normal ที่ค่อนข้างยากกว่า Normal นะ, ถ้าทำแมพอื่นๆ เอาให้มันง่ายกว่านี้นิดหน่อย
00:10:303 (5,6) - แก้ระยะห่างสองตัวนี้
01:09:119 (1) - เอา new combo ตรงนี้ออก
01:09:834 (5) - ^

Habi's Hard
00:05:541 (3) - no need to make a big jump here, ctrl+g this slider to change the direction
00:37:930 (1) - finish start
00:41:977 (9) - new combo
00:42:453 (1) - remove new combo

Drama
AR8, ไม่ได้ฟองแน่นอนถ้าแมพนี้ยัง AR9 อยู่
มันไม่จำเป็นว่าจะต้องใช้ AR9 แล้วใช้ spacing ห่างๆขนาดนั้นตลอดทั้งเพลง
00:00:541 (1) - ไปจนถึง 00:15:303 (7) -
ให้ใช้ spacing 1.0 ทั้งหมด (ยกเว้น symmetry อย่าง 00:12:684 (2,3) - )
00:18:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - ไว้ด้านนี้เล่นสบายกว่า
00:32:930 (2,3) - พวก stream ระยะห่างๆแบบนี้ , ทำให้มันแคบๆลงกว่าเดิมก็ไม่เสียหาย (ไม่ใช่แค่สองตัวนี้ แต่หมายถึงโดยรวมทั้งแมพ)
00:36:977 (3,4,5,6) - jump ตรงนี้ใหญ่เกินไป
00:43:644 (6) - เอาขึ้นมาซัก x:216 y:356 แล้วก็ new combo จะได้ไม่ห่างจาก 00:44:834 (2) - มากเกินไป
00:47:930 (2) - clap
00:48:168 (3) - whistle
00:47:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jump ใหญ่ไป
ท่อน kiai ยังไม่โอเคนะ หลักๆคือ slider ทั้ง kiai มันเร็วเกินไป เลยทำให้ระยะห่างทั้งหมด มันต้องห่างกันขนาดนั้น
แนะนำให้เปลี่ยนความเร็วของ slider ใน kiai เลย (ต้อง resnap พวก slider หมด) แล้วแก้ระยะห่างของโน้ตให้ไม่ไกลจนเกินไป
00:54:596 (6) - ลงซักแถวๆนี้ มันจะโดดไป 7 สบายกว่า
00:56:262 (3,4) - jump ไกลไป
01:00:072 (2,3,4) - jump ไกลไป (แต่ลองสังเกตจากเพลง ว่ามันเหมือนออกเสียงดังกว่าท่อนอื่น โดดเลยโอเค, แต่อยากให้ลดระยะมากกว่านี้)
01:11:262 (1,2,3) - อยู่ๆระยะก็ลดไปแบบนี้ มันงงมาก, เหมือนกับ 01:08:762 (4,5) -
01:14:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jump ไกลไป
01:18:405 (4) - ไว้ที่อื่นที่ไม่ได้อยู่ใต้ slider อันนี้
01:21:738 (9) - clap แค่ตรง 01:22:215 พอ

ยังไม่โอเคนะโดยรวม (Insane เป็นหลัก)
หลักๆอยู่ที่ความเร็วของ slider, ถ้ามันเร็วแบบนั้น, ระยะห่างมันจะไกลตาม
เพลงนี้ไม่ได้ทำไว้ให้เล่นกับ AR9 เพราะฉะนั้น AR8 แล้วความเร็ว slider กับระยะห่างที่ลดลงจึงจำเป็น
Topic Starter
aonkub555

Frostmourne wrote:

เช็คแล้วนะ

General
เปลี่ยนชื่อดิฟจาก Drama เป็น Insane เพราะกฎเกี่ยวกับชื่อดิฟเปลี่ยนแล้ว

Easy
ลด OD ให้เหลือ 2 จาก 3 เพราะว่า Normal diff มัน 3 อยู่
00:00:541 (1,2,1) - ระยะตรงนี้ควรเป็น 1.0x (ประมาณ) ให้หมด แบบนี้ยังใช้ไม่ได้
00:24:596 (4,5) - clap หาง slider สองตัวนี้
00:26:501 (1) - เปลี่ยนไป clap ที่หางแทนหัว (เอาหัวออก)
00:30:311 (6) - new combo
00:30:787 (2) - clap หัวแทนหาง
00:31:739 (3) - ^
00:43:644 (5) - new combo
01:19:357 (2,3) - ซ้อนอยู่ด้านใต้สไลเดอร์ 01:17:929 (6) - แบบนี้ไม่ได้ใน Easy diff
เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบอื่น
01:19:834 (3) - finish หัวสไลเดอร์แล้ว clap หาง slider
01:23:643 (2) - finish หัวสไลเดอร์

Normal
เป็น Normal ที่ค่อนข้างยากกว่า Normal นะ, ถ้าทำแมพอื่นๆ เอาให้มันง่ายกว่านี้นิดหน่อย
00:10:303 (5,6) - แก้ระยะห่างสองตัวนี้
01:09:119 (1) - เอา new combo ตรงนี้ออก
01:09:834 (5) - ^

Habi's Hard
00:05:541 (3) - no need to make a big jump here, ctrl+g this slider to change the direction
00:37:930 (1) - finish start
00:41:977 (9) - new combo
00:42:453 (1) - remove new combo

Drama
AR8, ไม่ได้ฟองแน่นอนถ้าแมพนี้ยัง AR9 อยู่
มันไม่จำเป็นว่าจะต้องใช้ AR9 แล้วใช้ spacing ห่างๆขนาดนั้นตลอดทั้งเพลง
00:00:541 (1) - ไปจนถึง 00:15:303 (7) -
ให้ใช้ spacing 1.0 ทั้งหมด (ยกเว้น symmetry อย่าง 00:12:684 (2,3) - )
00:18:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - ไว้ด้านนี้เล่นสบายกว่า
00:32:930 (2,3) - พวก stream ระยะห่างๆแบบนี้ , ทำให้มันแคบๆลงกว่าเดิมก็ไม่เสียหาย (ไม่ใช่แค่สองตัวนี้ แต่หมายถึงโดยรวมทั้งแมพ)
00:36:977 (3,4,5,6) - jump ตรงนี้ใหญ่เกินไป
00:43:644 (6) - เอาขึ้นมาซัก x:216 y:356 แล้วก็ new combo จะได้ไม่ห่างจาก 00:44:834 (2) - มากเกินไป
00:47:930 (2) - clap
00:48:168 (3) - whistle
00:47:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jump ใหญ่ไป
ท่อน kiai ยังไม่โอเคนะ หลักๆคือ slider ทั้ง kiai มันเร็วเกินไป เลยทำให้ระยะห่างทั้งหมด มันต้องห่างกันขนาดนั้น
แนะนำให้เปลี่ยนความเร็วของ slider ใน kiai เลย (ต้อง resnap พวก slider หมด) แล้วแก้ระยะห่างของโน้ตให้ไม่ไกลจนเกินไป
00:54:596 (6) - ลงซักแถวๆนี้ มันจะโดดไป 7 สบายกว่า
00:56:262 (3,4) - jump ไกลไป
01:00:072 (2,3,4) - jump ไกลไป (แต่ลองสังเกตจากเพลง ว่ามันเหมือนออกเสียงดังกว่าท่อนอื่น โดดเลยโอเค, แต่อยากให้ลดระยะมากกว่านี้)
01:11:262 (1,2,3) - อยู่ๆระยะก็ลดไปแบบนี้ มันงงมาก, เหมือนกับ 01:08:762 (4,5) -
01:14:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jump ไกลไป
01:18:405 (4) - ไว้ที่อื่นที่ไม่ได้อยู่ใต้ slider อันนี้
01:21:738 (9) - clap แค่ตรง 01:22:215 พอ

ยังไม่โอเคนะโดยรวม (Insane เป็นหลัก)
หลักๆอยู่ที่ความเร็วของ slider, ถ้ามันเร็วแบบนั้น, ระยะห่างมันจะไกลตาม
เพลงนี้ไม่ได้ทำไว้ให้เล่นกับ AR9 เพราะฉะนั้น AR8 แล้วความเร็ว slider กับระยะห่างที่ลดลงจึงจำเป็น
Thank you! Frostmourne
Topic Starter
aonkub555
Update~
HabiHolic
All Fixed~~

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456,300,23168,2,0,P|420:312|376:308,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,23525,2,0,P|300:320|240:332,1,112.5
156,332,24120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,304,24358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,216,24596,2,0,B|56:140|56:140|32:68,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,25311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,184,25549,2,0,B|132:260|132:260|156:332,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,26263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,308,26501,6,0,L|432:304,1,75
504,212,26977,2,0,L|408:212,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,172,27334,2,0,P|336:200|280:188,1,112.5
216,132,27930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,28168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,132,28406,2,0,P|200:208|232:276,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,29120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,29358,2,0,L|372:340,1,75
498,252,29834,2,0,L|424:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,30311,6,0,P|316:200|236:188,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,31025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,31144,2,0,P|116:116|60:148,1,112.5
28,232,31739,2,0,L|32:320,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,356,32215,2,0,B|188:332|188:332|264:344,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,32930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,33168,2,0,L|180:240,2,112.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,300,34120,6,0,P|448:272|480:200,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,116,34834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,44,35072,2,0,P|344:36|308:40,1,75
220,80,35549,2,0,P|184:88|140:84,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,132,36025,2,0,P|56:216|88:280,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,36739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,36977,2,0,L|332:292,1,75
480,200,37453,2,0,L|396:204,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,37811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,228,37930,6,0,P|400:156|380:72,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,36,38644,2,0,B|236:32|236:32|208:64|156:56,1,150
64,44,39358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,132,39596,2,0,L|32:212,1,75
96,296,40072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,40191,2,0,P|152:288|200:324,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,356,40787,2,0,L|376:348,1,75
452,304,41263,2,0,B|480:268|480:268|468:164,1,150,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,41977,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,42215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,56,42453,2,0,P|264:80|168:64,1,150
76,40,43168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,120,43406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,212,43644,2,0,P|32:264|88:348,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,336,44358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,44596,2,0,L|336:272,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,45311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45549,12,0,48882,0:0:0:0:
52,344,49358,6,0,P|32:300|44:196,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,50072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,80,50310,2,0,P|188:48|156:12,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,180,51024,2,0,P|248:180|336:128,1,150
408,68,51738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,144,51977,2,0,P|488:208|476:292,1,150
408,360,52691,2,0,L|328:348,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,53167,6,0,P|236:300|160:288,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,196,53881,2,0,P|64:152|140:164,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,162,54596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,108,54834,2,0,P|288:128|424:44,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,128,55786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,128,56024,2,0,L|492:208,1,75
440,272,56500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,296,56738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,296,56977,6,0,P|284:280|212:320,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,348,57691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,348,57929,2,0,L|48:340,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,260,58643,2,0,B|64:248|64:248|16:188,1,150
60,96,59358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,96,59596,2,0,P|136:100|200:60,1,150
288,92,60310,6,0,P|320:76|360:72,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,168,60786,2,0,P|416:220|488:208,2,150,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,61977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,62215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,168,62453,2,0,L|208:180,1,150
112,156,63167,2,0,P|104:196|112:236,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,324,63643,2,0,P|144:332|192:324,1,75
248,272,64119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,248,64357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,64596,6,0,P|416:244|472:296,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,65310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,65548,2,0,L|432:176,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,66262,2,0,P|456:80|352:56,1,150
272,96,66977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,96,67215,2,0,B|216:88|216:88|168:120|124:92,1,150
48,44,67929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,132,68167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,212,68405,6,0,P|40:264|104:348,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,69119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,69358,2,0,P|232:328|336:336,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,296,70072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,296,70310,2,0,P|484:256|476:112,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,60,71262,2,0,L|328:64,1,75
248,32,71738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,36,71977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,36,72215,6,0,P|108:88|24:80,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,168,72929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,168,73167,2,0,L|16:244,1,75
40,332,73643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,284,73881,2,0,P|204:272|268:312,1,150
360,344,74596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,288,74834,2,0,P|480:228|488:148,1,150
420,88,75548,2,0,L|344:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,47,76024,6,0,L|260:40,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,76738,2,0,P|120:168|72:256,1,150
36,336,77453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,360,77691,2,0,P|228:348|320:264,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,78643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,78881,2,0,P|448:84|496:116,2,112.5,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,79834,6,0,P|224:108|32:100,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,232,81262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,332,81738,2,0,P|180:256|372:264,1,300,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,220,83167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,220,83405,2,0,L|472:136,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83881,12,0,85072,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85548,12,0,89357,0:0:0:0:
OmgHahaLOLxD
Easy

00:42:691 (4) - Straight sliders don't need any extra nodes!

Normal

01:10:310 (2) - The 2nd node from the left is not needed, you should refine this one.
( or make it look more like 00:38:644 (2) - from your Hard difficulty!)

General Notes

Didn't find anything wrong with Hard or intense(sorry can only mod normal osu! :( ).
Song is very refined, the spinner is really good, maybe try something with the hit notes?
I like how fluent it was to play( and try to find anything wrong with it :| ).
But that's really good. So GL in the near future with your beat map! :D
Raisa12
Mod~
[Easy]
00:13:874 I think here they would listen well add whistle
00:11:969 add whistle only at the end of the slider
[Normal]
00:14:826 I think they would listen right here only add whistle at the end of the slider
00:44:596 add whistle only head slider
Okay all that is in my opinion I'm not as good modder ._.
Topic Starter
aonkub555

OstrichSupreme wrote:

Easy

00:42:691 (4) - Straight sliders don't need any extra nodes! no change

Normal

01:10:310 (2) - The 2nd node from the left is not needed, you should refine this one.
( or make it look more like 00:38:644 (2) - from your Hard difficulty!) ok fixed~

General Notes

Didn't find anything wrong with Hard or intense(sorry can only mod normal osu! :( ).
Song is very refined, the spinner is really good, maybe try something with the hit notes?
I like how fluent it was to play( and try to find anything wrong with it :| ).
But that's really good. So GL in the near future with your beat map! :D
Topic Starter
aonkub555

Raisa12 wrote:

Mod~
[Easy]
00:13:874 I think here they would listen well add whistle fixed~
00:11:969 add whistle only at the end of the slider fixed~
[Normal]
00:14:826 I think they would listen right here only add whistle at the end of the slider fixed~
00:44:596 add whistle only head slider fixed~
Okay all that is in my opinion I'm not as good modder ._.
Topic Starter
aonkub555
thank! OstrichSupreme and Raisa12
i'll mod you two soon~
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