1. Easy (2.05 stars, 90 notes)
2. Habi's Hard (4.64 stars, 161 notes)
3. Insane (4.98 stars, 239 notes)
4. Nardo's Muzukashii (4.64 stars, 270 notes)
5. Normal (4.04 stars, 119 notes)
6. Oni (4.83 stars, 374 notes)

1. Put a Background Image
2. Your beatmap doesn't have a Background image which is required. Recommended size: 1024x768 (Do not use bigger nor much smaller)
3. Your beatmap doesn't have a Preview time

1. 00:02:398 (2,3) - Those sliders are bad. Work them a bit more >.< Use some imagination when you create them~
2. 00:04:303 (3) - I think this slider should end at 00:05:731
3. 00:10:017 (7) - Work this slider more.
4. 00:24:541 (4) - That slider is overlapping itself. Is not recommended and thus can be unrankable as well.
5. 00:26:922 (6) - Make it different so the begin of the slider wont overlap the end.
6. 00:33:112 (14,1) - Two notes on same tick - Unrankable
7. 00:36:922 (2,3) - Hiding notes under sliders is not recommended in accordance to osu!wiki.
   Generally the placing is random, you must use all the time Distance Snap and choose one distance, do not change it afterwards no matter the reason. Ignoring the distance snap is exception only for Insane and Hards(Not always for Hards)

1. 00:13:826 (7,8) - Why this overlap? Take this circle somewhere else using Distance Snap
   Random placing, same as the Easy difficulty.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from popner's Queue~

[General]

1. Put a Background Image
2. Your beatmap doesn't have a Background image which is required. Recommended size: 1024x768 (Do not use bigger nor much smaller)
3. Your beatmap doesn't have a Preview time

[Easy]

1. 00:02:398 (2,3) - Those sliders are bad. Work them a bit more >.< Use some imagination when you create them~
2. 00:04:303 (3) - I think this slider should end at 00:05:731
3. 00:10:017 (7) - Work this slider more.
4. 00:24:541 (4) - That slider is overlapping itself. Is not recommended and thus can be unrankable as well.
5. 00:26:922 (6) - Make it different so the begin of the slider wont overlap the end.
6. 00:33:112 (14,1) - Two notes on same tick - Unrankable
7. 00:36:922 (2,3) - Hiding notes under sliders is not recommended in accordance to osu!wiki.
   Generally the placing is random, you must use all the time Distance Snap and choose one distance, do not change it afterwards no matter the reason. Ignoring the distance snap is exception only for Insane and Hards(Not always for Hards)

[Normal]

1. 00:13:826 (7,8) - Why this overlap? Take this circle somewhere else using Distance Snap
   Random placing, same as the Easy difficulty.

You should take an idea from other beatmaps and remap your difficulties, you got a nice sense of synchronization, the way you put the notes in rhythm is very nice but the placing on the game field is not enjoyable. :/


Good luck~

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from popner's queue!

Well, I saw the map. I can only give you some advices because I tink you should remap your diffs, like the person before me said.

General

Well, my english is quite bad but I think I can correct your description:

Actual description:

I like music this.
Sorry if me write wrong.My english is very bad.
Update
- Easy complete ( wait for moder )
- Normal complete (wait for moder)
List Mod >>

Corrected description (American/English people, don't kill me):

I like music like this.
Sorry if I write wrong. My english is very bad.
Update:
- Easy completed (Waiting for modders)
- Normal completed (Waiting for modders)
Modders' list >>

Your actual mp3's bitrate is 320 kbps. You MUST convert it into 192 kbps because its unrankable!

Please remove the video from the song folder if you don't use it.

You MUST insert a background (1024x768) because a map without BG is unrankable!

You MUST set a preview point! To set a preview point you have to go to Timing > Set preview pont

The correct offset is 493.
You also have to add a second red section with offset 22635!

^ Red things are really important and you should fix them!

I also think you need an Hard.

Easy

Well, you should play ranked maps and try to make sliders like that. You have to remap this but I can give you some advice to make an easy diff.

-You should use a slider velocity between 0.80 and 1.20. 1.40 is usually for Normal/Hard diffs!
-Some of your sliders are bad. For example this: 00:08:112 (6) or this 00:10:016 (7)
-All the good sliders usually look like this 00:23:111 (2) or this 00:00:493 (1)
-In easy diffs 14/15 notes combo are too high, usually 7/8 combos are enough
-You should set an Approach Rate of 2,3 or 4. 5 is too high for an Easy.
-You should set 1,2,3,4 of Overall Difficulty, 0 is too low.

Normal

Again, it's better to remap this

-You shoul use Circle size 3 or 4. 5 is too difficult
-Look at this: 00:13:826 (7,8) - The note is under the slider. This in unrankable. You can do something like this only in Insane diffs.
-And this 00:44:303 (19,20,21,22,23) - The spacing is not uniform. You must use always the same spacing. Mappers usually break spacing in Hard and Insane diffs!
- And this 00:47:398 (1) - This note is covered by the spinner's hitburst (the 300) so it's unrankable for a Normal diff.

Well, I could only give you some suggestions and some ranking criteria. If you remap this I'll be happy to check and mod your map, just contact me In-game

Here you can find some useful things. I strongly suggest you to check them.
Osu! Ranking criteria.
Mapping techniques.

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
Offset -216
You have two red timing sections at same point, remove one
Use distance snap always in Easy diffs
Avoid overlapping [ good but bad example here 00:55:017 (5,1) ]
Make sliders better
Make the flow better

[Easy, Normal and Hard]
I don't want to sound mean, but I don't have time to point out every faulty point. Just check everything from General section and you'll see why.

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty
   if you decide to include Taiko in your map,
   make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties
   and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~
   　
4. umm... mp3 Volume is too small...?
   Keep volume at a constant level (e.g. 80%) with the beat still somewhat audible.
   Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
   　
   　
   plz open notepad.
   　
5. AudioLeadIn: 1500
   　
6. PreviewTime: 49307 ?

1. HP Drain 5 , OD 5
   　
2. 00:49:307 (10) - unrankable
3. 00:53:117 (29) - ^
4. 01:00:736 (67) - ^
5. 01:02:641 (77) - ^
6. 01:04:545 (89) - ^
7. 01:06:450 (100) - ^
8. 01:08:355 (111) - ^
9. 01:12:164 (132) - ^
10. 01:14:069 (142) - ^
11. 01:15:974 (152) - ^
    　
12. Finish notes
    Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream.
    At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it under following pattern constellations:
    xxxxxxxxO, xxxxooooX, xxooxxooX

Cuvelia wrote:

H i , Random Taiko modding .

[ General ]

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty
   if you decide to include Taiko in your map,
   make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties
   and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~
   　
4. umm... mp3 Volume is too small...?
   Keep volume at a constant level (e.g. 80%) with the beat still somewhat audible.
   Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
   　
   　
   plz open notepad.
   　
5. AudioLeadIn: 1500
   　
6. PreviewTime: 49307 ?

　
[ Taiko Oni]

1. HP Drain 5 , OD 5
   　
2. 00:49:307 (10) - unrankable
3. 00:53:117 (29) - ^
4. 01:00:736 (67) - ^
5. 01:02:641 (77) - ^
6. 01:04:545 (89) - ^
7. 01:06:450 (100) - ^
8. 01:08:355 (111) - ^
9. 01:12:164 (132) - ^
10. 01:14:069 (142) - ^
11. 01:15:974 (152) - ^
    　
12. Finish notes
    Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream.
    At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it under following pattern constellations:
    xxxxxxxxO, xxxxooooX, xxooxxooX

　
I'm sorry for my bad English skill makes you hard to understand ... Dx
　
good luck .

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod ! From Queues. (EZ+NM)
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-General-
okay.
-Easy-
New combo :
00:08:117 (5) - NC
00:26:926 (6) - ^
00:28:355 (3) - remove NC
00:30:736 (6) - NC
00:39:783 (6) - ^
00:49:783 (1) - ^
00:51:926 (3) - remove NC
01:00:260 (7) - NC
01:02:641 (3) - remove NC
01:04:545 (5) - NC
01:15:022 (1) - ^
01:19:783 (1) - ^


Audio :
00:54:069 (3) - remove finish
01:00:260 (7) - add finish or whistle

Spinner :
00:34:783 - the difficulty is the easiest of this map.
when the spinner isn't finished, the hit circle can't arrive here.
please be careful about this.

-finish-
-Normal-
Try to use new combo when the notes are over ten or more.
New combo :
00:05:498 (6) - NC
00:08:355 (11) - ^
00:11:926 (16) - ^
00:26:926 (7) - ^
00:41:688 (7) - ^
00:55:974 (7) - ^
01:05:498 (7) - ^
01:15:022 (7) - ^
01:21:688 (11) - ^


Audio :
01:04:069 (5) - add finish or whistle
01:06:450 (8) - ^

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
Good luck to you! ♥

HabiHolic wrote:

Oh~~ Good Song~~ For Ranked!!!!

Lundlerol wrote:

mod req from my queue
[General]
Muzukashii>HP & OD>fixed>4? FIXS
It becomes kind to a player by adjusting these.
Oni remains as it is.

[Taiko Oni]
00:53:748 (32) - delete NOT FIXES I like it sry
01:01:367 (69) - ^ NOT FIXES I like it too

Oni is gooood maaaap 。:.ﾟ٩(๑>◡<๑)۶:.｡

[Taiko Muzukashii] OK , I think i will remap this for better
00:50:415 - d?
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:129 - ^
00:59:939 - ^
01:03:748 - ^
01:05:653 - ^
01:11:367 - ^

Thank you for modding

Good luck_(:3 」∠)_

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from popner's special mod queue
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Note: I only mod osu! standard, sorry

[General]

Hitsounds - Don't really know why hasn't this been pointed out by other modders.... .. YUNO use hitsounds?They ain't exactly musted but still... the only thing audible when you use 15% volume is the sliderticks?And that's just barely.I know you raised the volume to an audible level during KIAI but hitsounds should be audible throughout the map!.Maybe it's just me but please just use audible hitsounds!!

Timing points - How about putting them on a white tick?

Let's start from the most difficult difficulty...

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:00:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - Pardon my foolishness, but could you please enlighten me on why din't you use a single NC in this part? FIXES
If you can't come up with a good answer it's probably better to add some NCs.
00:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - ^ FIXES
00:23:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ^ FIXES
00:36:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - ^ FIXES
00:47:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^ FIXES
01:03:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ^ FIXES
01:12:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ^ FIXES
01:21:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ^ FIXES
Dude... what's your problem with NC? HAHAHA
00:09:835 (21,22,23,24,25) - these looks like they're just scattered around randomly, try to give them a pattern omg i'll try make beuatiful pattern
00:19:955 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - , 00:21:502 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - maybe there's a pattern but it's not that obvious, try to make it a smooth flow, the stream is difficult enough as it is FIXES
00:09:835 (21) - not really needed, but you can keep it if you wanted FIXES
01:25:074 - add a circle here, let spinner start at 01:25:550 - , somehow I think spinner should start here to match the music

FIXES
The rythm is good,but the patterns needs to be improved, everything looked like they're just scattered around randomly, which doesn't looked very nice to me.


[Hard]

SPOILER

00:35:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - how about a NC or two? FIXES
00:49:359 (7) - NC FIXES
00:59:597 (7) - NC FIXES
01:06:740 - add a circle FIXES
01:08:407 (10) - NC FIXES
01:16:026 (9) - NC FIXES
01:21:502 (10) - NC FIXES
01:25:074 - add circle here, start spinner at 01:25:550 -

FIXES

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:25:550 (5) - make this into a 3/4 beat long slider? FIXES
00:27:693 - add circle FIXES
00:33:407 (5) - start slider at 00:33:526 - FIXES
00:41:978 - add circle FIXES
00:56:740 - add circle FIXES
00:58:645 - add circle FIXES
00:58:883 (6) - move circle to 00:59:121 - FIXES
01:01:502 (1,2) - combine these into one slider FIXES
01:13:883 (5) - remove circle FIXES
01:18:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try to use sliders to replace this stream FIXES
01:25:074 (1) - start spinner at 01:25:550

FIXES

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:00:550 (1,2) - why not use same shape? FIXES
00:12:931 (1,2) - this should become 00:13:169 (1,2) - FIXES
01:03:169 (4) - nothings really wrong with it, it just seemed out of place for me FIXES
01:22:216 (6,7,8,9) - try to avoid overlapping beats FIXES
01:25:074 (1) - let spinner start at 01:25:550 -

FIXES

P.S:I may sound rude, but I have no intention of offending, sorry if I did offend you ><, and these are just suggestions, it's not necessary for you to follow them
GL on ranking

pimpG wrote:

general

missing skin files for a complete spin set
spinner-approachcircle.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png

inconsistency in combo colors between the standard mode diff's

audio lead-in inconsistency. easy hard and insane are 1508.. make them exactly 1500

offset is different in the taiko diff's. timing must to be the same in all difficlties

i sugest adding timelines with 126 bpm to: 00:01:740 - 00:22:692 - 00:49:358 - 01:25:548 - (they won't affect gamelpay) ADDS
because this tv size song does not follow correct measure order, if you dont unsderstand what i mean, make a backup diff and add this timelines to it, and then play with nightcore.
the nightcore cymbal finish appears every 4 measures starting from the timeline, and the order changes if there is more timelines, with this extra timelines nightcore mod will follow music perfectly in the his cymbal finishes
compare playing any other diff without this extra timelines

anyways the timeline at -164 should not exist, since the measure starts at 00:01:740 - i would sugest you to remove this -164 timeline, but you are using a slider speed change in normal before 00:01:740 so it would break the notes
i won't sugest you to remove the slider speed change in normal but if at some point you decide to remove it, you can delete the -164 timeline FIXS

gunslinger-girl 1.jpg has a word whritten in the top right, i mean the "TAPETUS.pl". consider using a bg without this things[/color] FIXS

easy

nc sugestions

00:04:359 (3) - new combo? (optional, this intro works with a long combo too, i'm sugesting new combo because you added one to next part that follows same rhythm)
00:11:978 (3,1) - (i was talking about this nc) if you follow previous sugestion, use new combo to (3) and remove at (1). or if you prever the long combo above, just remove the new combo at 1 for consistency
00:37:931 (3) - new combo since vocal restarts here FIXS
00:39:835 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
00:40:788 (2) - new combo FIXS
00:44:121 (6) - new combo FIXS
00:49:359 (5) - new combo for kiai start FIXS
00:49:835 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
00:53:645 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:07:455 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:10:788 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
01:17:455 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
01:18:883 (3) - new combo FIXS
01:19:835 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
01:21:740 (5) - new combo FIXS
01:23:169 (8) - new combo

FIXS

hitsounds

15% volume is too low and you are using it until kiai starts, please make it louder
no hitsounds until the 1st spinner, intentional?
why dont you use claps to follow drums instead of whistle? i see you tried to follow vocal too, using whistle to follow vocal and drums at the same time is not good[/color]

It ok i'll change to clap at all
00:00:550 (1) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:02:455 (2) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:04:359 (3) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:06:264 (4) - whistle at slider start? Change
00:08:169 (1) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:10:074 (2) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:13:169 (2) - whistle at slider start / end? Change
00:14:359 (3) - whistle at slider end?]Change
00:26:978 (1) - remove finish in slider end, if you wanted to follow vocal here i sugest whistle Change
00:30:312 (5) - finish Change

00:31:740 (2) - missing clap at slider start (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:33:169 (4) - missing clap at slider end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:48:883 (4) - clap (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:51:740 (3) - missing clap at slider start (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:54:121 (5) - missing clap at repeat (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:00:312 (1) - missing clap at start / end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:01:740 (2) - missing clap at end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:03:169 (4) - missing clap at end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:10:788 (1) - missing clap at start (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums)

Change

notes

00:00:550 (1,2) - slider ends in red ticks follows music better FIXS
00:04:359 (3) - i sugest slider end in the white tick, since the stronger vocal is there, also i feel like should be a larger gab between this slider and the next, fits the vocal. FIXS

00:06:264 (4) - slider end in the red tick, since you are following vocal, there is no vocal in the current slider end FIXS
00:08:169 (1) - make this slider start at 00:08:407 and end at 00:11:502 for same reason above FIXS
00:12:931 (1) - move this circle to 00:12:693 to follow the stronger vocal? FIXS
00:23:169 (2,3,4) - spacing issues here, you should keep using 1.0x. you are not using this at 00:31:740 (2,3,4) - FIXS
00:28:407 (3,4) - spacing issue, intentional? not good imo FIXS
00:34:121 (1) - make spinner end at 00:35:312 - or 00:35:074 - because there is no much time for newbies recover after spinning FIXS
00:42:693 (5,6,7,8) - spacing is messed here, its probably intentional but. i advice you newbies can find it very confusing FIXS
bacause anything that is too far or too close can make them think the note is earlier / later in the timeline since they are newbies FIXS
00:45:550 (1) - make spinner end at 00:46:740 - lets give more time to newbies recover after spinning FIXS
or remove the notes at 00:47:455 - and 00:47:931 - and make spinner end at 00:47:455 - (recomended) FIXS
00:47:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - this placement can be very confusing for newbies, let the notes as so visible as possible in diff for newbies, so stacks are not encouraged FIXS
00:51:740 (3) - make a circle at 00:51:740 and make this slider start at 00:52:216 - end at 00:53:169 - because kiai calls for complex rhythm, the current slider was too long FIXS

recheck your spacing, if you are using distance snap1,0x dont let the notes be spaced less than 0,98x or more than 1,02x

FIXS

normal

your combo colors are too similar as you can see here, and here ...please use colors that can be distinguished more easilly
slider velocity looks too high for this song in kiai time. please reduce the multiplier a bit, i sugest you using maximum of 1,20 multiplier

nc sugestions

00:04:359 (4,1) - swap new combo FIXS
00:08:169 (5,1) - ^ FIXS
00:28:407 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
00:37:931 (3) - new combo FIXS
00:48:883 (4) - new combo FIXS
00:54:121 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:01:502 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:05:550 (5) - new combo FIXS
01:09:121 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:12:931 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:16:502 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:23:645 (5) - new combo

FIXS

hitsounds

00:00:550 (1) - whistle at slider end
00:03:883 (3) - whistle ADD
00:05:550 (1) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:06:978 (3) - whistle ADD
00:07:216 (4) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:08:407 (1) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:09:121 (2) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:10:788 (4) - whistle ADD
00:11:026 (5) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:12:693 (3) - whistle at slider start ADD
00:13:407 (4) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:14:597 (6) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:15:312 (8) - whistle ADD
00:15:550 (1) - finish ADD
00:25:550 (5) - whistle at repeat /end ADD
00:29:359 (2) - whistle at slider start ADD
00:31:502 (2) - whistle at repeat ADD
00:32:216 (3) - whistle at start ADD
00:41:740 (1) - finish, its the same sound as 00:37:931 (3) - ADD
00:42:931 (4) - whistle at start

ADD

editing

P A N wrote:

My Test Play

(play just one time per diff)

http://puu.sh/2r9X2

[General]
The reverse arrow is very hard to see ( I use default skin )
Rhymth is so weird
Easy กับ Normal distance ควรเท่ากันหมดนะครับใช้ Distance Snap อะ ตามเเก้ด้วยนะเรื่องนี้สำคัญครับ Normal อาจพอเทคติกนิดนิดๆให้เปนรูปได้

[Easy]
00:00:549 (1) - slider นี้เปลี่ยนเปนโค้งสวยกว่า แก้
00:08:168 (1) - ไม่ควรมีใน Easy นะครับมือใหม่พลาดง่ายผมก็เกือบพลาด จิงๆมันต้องลงล่างเเล้ววกขึ้นมาข้างบน lol okแก้

00:11:978 (1,2,3,4) - Distance ไม่เท่ากัน แก้
00:34:120 - delete spinner เเล้วก็เปลี่ยนเปน slider เริ่ม 00:34:120 - จบ 00:35:072 -
00:35:549 - add note ไม่แก้ ใส่โน๊ตใกล้สปินเกิน คนเล่นใหม่จะกดไม่ทันครับ
เลื่อนเส้นเขียวมาเวลา 00:45:549 - แก้
00:47:453 - delete spinner อย่างไม่ต้องสงสัย แก้ , modคนก่อนๆบอกให้ใส่ แต่ผมเห็นด้วยที่ให้ลบ
00:49:834 - จิงๆอยากให้ distance มัน้ท่ากันทั้งเพลงนะครับ easy เนี่ย ปรับslider velocity แล้วเพิ่มขึ้นเฉยเลย
01:00:310 (1) - เอาให้ distance เท่าตัวอื่นครับ แก้
01:13:167 (6) - เอาห่างจาก (5) หน่อยครับไม่ค่อยสวย หรือจะทำเปนโค้งก็ได้ แก้
เลื่อนเส้นเขียวมาเวลา 01:18:881 - ตั้งเเต่ตรงนี้โน็ตกดเยอะไปนะครับ ควรเปลี่ยนเป็น slide บ้าง (ควรมาก) แก้

[Normal]
slider ตัวเเรกเปลี่ยนความเร็วให้เท่า slider ตัวอื่นนะครับ
00:06:263 (3) - distance ไม่เท่ากัน พลาดง่ายด้วยแบบนี้ แก้
00:15:192 (7,8) - ตรงนี้แปลกๆนะครับ ลองเเก้เปนจังหวะอื่น แก้
00:22:692 (1,2,3) - distance ห่างกันพอได้เเต่ต่อมามันกลับมาใกล้กันอีกเเล้วไม่มีเส้นเขียวด้วย เเก้หน่อย แก้
00:26:502 (6) - เเก้ distance ตัวนี้ครับ แก้
00:33:168 (4,5) - delete เเล้วก็เปลี่ยนเปน slider เริ่มที่ 00:33:168 - จบที่ 00:33:644 - ไม่แก้ ผมคิดว่าสปินหมุนเข้ากับเพลงแล้วล่ะครับ
00:37:930 (1) - ห่างขนาดนี้ ไม่เเน่ใจได้หรือเปล่านะเเต่ปล่อยไปก่อนก็ได้ รอmodคนคืนแย้งผมถึงจะเปลี่ยนละกัน
00:58:643 (3) - ย้ายไปที่ x:232 y:272 นะครับ แก้
01:07:215 (1) - เลื่อนจุด slider จุดที่ 2 นับจากหัว ลง 1 grid เลื่อนจุดที่ 3 นับจากหัวไปทางขวา 2 grid แก้
01:11:024 (1) - เเก้ distance แก้
01:12:929 (1) - slider reverse หลายรอบไม่ดีครับ พลาดง่ายด้วย เเก้ๆ color=#BF4000]รอmodคนคืนแย้งผมถึงจะเปลี่ยนละกัน[/color]
01:14:834 (1) - เเก้ distance แก้
01:15:548 (2,3,1) - จังหวะแปลกๆนะ แก้
01:22:691 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ซ้อนทับกันงงไปครับ เเก้ๆ แก้
เอาเส้นเขียวเส้นสุดท้ายย้ายไป 01:30:309 - ไม่แก้

[Hard]
จังหวะแปลกๆ
โดดแปลกๆ
Circie Size -1
OD +3
00:12:692 (2) - จังหวะแปลกๆ แก้
00:14:597 (6,7,8,9) - วางโน็ตแปลกๆ แก้
00:19:001 - insert break time please ไม่แก้
00:24:120 (3) - เลื่อนไป x:144 y:173 (ติ๊ก distance snap ออกก่อน) แก้
00:25:072 (6) - เเก้ distance ไม่แก้
00:35:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - วางโน็ตแปลกๆ ลองวางให้เปนรูปๆหรือเปนระเบียบหน่อย แก้
00:41:501 (10,11,1) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:328 y:188 แก้
00:44:834 (8) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:151 y:152 แก้
00:52:691 (7) - เเก้ distance ไม่แก้
01:02:215 (12) - ^ ไม่แก้
01:02:929 (14) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:86 y:279 แก้
01:04:357 (2) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:352 y:227 แก้
01:11:500 (2) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:349 y:102 แก้
01:17:453 (3) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:479 y:114 แก้
01:24:119 (5) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:282 y:357 แก้
01:24:596 (6) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:216 y:307 แก้
ย้ายเส้นเขียวเส้นสุดท้ายไป 01:30:309 ไม่แก้

[Insae]
00:02:930 (6) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:304 y:216 แก้
00:13:525 (9) - เลื่อนไปที่ x50 y265 แก้
00:15:430 - insert break time แก้
00:33:882 (11) - เลื่อนไปที่ x66 y192 แก้
00:40:668 (10,11) - เลื่อนไปที่ x264 y334 แก้
00:45:312 (10) - x324 y320 แก้
เส้นเขียวสุดท้ายเหมือนเดิม

Zazalng wrote:

สวัสดีครับผมมาจาก Modding Queues

[Rule Symbol]
? = แนะนำ
! = แก้ไขด่วน
none = ลองนำไปใช้

ลองre-download map ใหม่หน่อยครับ ที่บอกมาม็อดคนอื่นบอกให้ผมแก้หมดแล้วครับ

[General]
BPM & Offest
Offestไม่ถูกตำแหน่ง ควรเป็น 1740
และทำการลบเส้นแดงอื่นๆออกด้วยครับ pimpGม็อดคนก่อนบอกว่ามันทำให้จังหวะเสียงฉาบในโหมดnightcoreเข้ากับเพลง ถ้าไม่เข้าใจ ลองลบเส้นแดงยกเว้นอันที่1740แล้วเล่นnightcoreดูครับ
Unused Image Files
ไฟล์นี้ไม่ได้ใช่อะgunslinger-girl 1.jpg ไม่มีนะครับ ผมเปลี่ยนชื่อเป็นTAPETUS.pl
Combo Colours
สีของคอมโบไม่ตรงกัน:

แก้ไปแล้ว

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,245,232
Combo2 : 206,255,255
Combo3 : 222,222,239
Combo4 : 242,230,230
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255

General and Metadata

แก้ไปแล้ว
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1508
- [Insane] : 1508
- [Normal] : 1500
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 1500
- [Taiko Oni] : 1500
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 48112
- [Hard] : 48085
- [Insane] : -1
- [Normal] : 48117
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 48117
- [Taiko Oni] : 48117
Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Hard] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Insane] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Normal] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : KOKIA
- [Taiko Oni] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

ไม่แก้

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:834, ends on 01:18:826

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:25:072

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:827

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:881

- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:858

- [Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:834

แก้ไขเรื่องBPM & Offest ก่อนนะแล้วค่อยเรียกให้ผมม็อดอีกที

aonkub555 wrote:

Zazalng wrote:

สวัสดีครับผมมาจาก Modding Queues

[Rule Symbol]
? = แนะนำ
! = แก้ไขด่วน
none = ลองนำไปใช้

ลองre-download map ใหม่หน่อยครับ ที่บอกมาม็อดคนอื่นบอกให้ผมแก้หมดแล้วครับ

[General]
BPM & Offest
Offestไม่ถูกตำแหน่ง ควรเป็น 1740
และทำการลบเส้นแดงอื่นๆออกด้วยครับ pimpGม็อดคนก่อนบอกว่ามันทำให้จังหวะเสียงฉาบในโหมดnightcoreเข้ากับเพลง ถ้าไม่เข้าใจ ลองลบเส้นแดงยกเว้นอันที่1740แล้วเล่นnightcoreดูครับ
Unused Image Files
ไฟล์นี้ไม่ได้ใช่อะgunslinger-girl 1.jpg ไม่มีนะครับ ผมเปลี่ยนชื่อเป็นTAPETUS.pl
Combo Colours
สีของคอมโบไม่ตรงกัน:

แก้ไปแล้ว

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,245,232
Combo2 : 206,255,255
Combo3 : 222,222,239
Combo4 : 242,230,230
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255

General and Metadata

แก้ไปแล้ว
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1508
- [Insane] : 1508
- [Normal] : 1500
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 1500
- [Taiko Oni] : 1500
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 48112
- [Hard] : 48085
- [Insane] : -1
- [Normal] : 48117
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 48117
- [Taiko Oni] : 48117
Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Hard] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Insane] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Normal] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : KOKIA
- [Taiko Oni] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

ไม่แก้

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:834, ends on 01:18:826

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:25:072

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:827

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:881

- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:858

- [Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:834

แก้ไขเรื่องBPM & Offest ก่อนนะแล้วค่อยเรียกให้ผมม็อดอีกที

cFiszpan wrote:

Modding your map because you modded Smooth Operator (: according to I promised here ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2177871 <--- However I'll not mod the 'Insanity' map --- I'll give you a Golden Ticket on my Queue instead (:

Let's go!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Easy]

00:02:455 (2) - Set to x:108 y:120
00:04:359 (1) - Set to x:124 y:204
00:06:263 (2) - Set to x:352 y:204, making spacing more intuitive
00:08:168 (3) - This slider could be broken in two (: or could be desinged in a form that avoid overlaps.
00:34:121 (1) - Let this spinner end at 00:35:549
00:54:238 (2) - Snap to 00:54:119

[Normal]

00:24:121 (3) - Could be better at x:200 y:168
00:33:526 (5) could be better if ended at 00:33:883 (red tick)

[Hard]

00:01:502 (4,5) souns a bit off -- will look better if you make slider end at 00:01:859 and move the note at 00:02:097 (5) to 00:01:978. On screen, set the 2nd dot of the slider to x:152 y:252 and the 3rd dot to x:92 y:232 -- and move (5) to x:92 y:232.
00:07:216 (7,8) - ^ (adjust it like the prior)
00:11:978 (9) - Make the slider end at 00:12:455 - will sound better
00:43:645 (6) - Let it end at 00:44:121 - same reason

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*Nothing about [Insane], and I dunno mod Taiko.

That's it (: Good luck for rank, awesome song and Video!

• 
  I'd get rid of the gunshot sound. It's very distracting.

• 
  00:08:168 (3) - To better fit with the previous sliders as well as the song, I'd break it up into two sliders.

• 
  01:01:024 (3,4) - These two notes are quite hidden, I'd prefer them somewhere a bit more visible. Maybe put them just past the slider, or go up in an arch to meet up with the 5?
  01:06:024 (16) - I'm not sure this slider matches up with the beat.

• 
  Nothing to note here.

Dwargkiller wrote:

Hello! Visiting from my queue.
[General]

• 
  I'd get rid of the gunshot sound. It's very distracting.

[Easy]

• 
  00:08:168 (3) - To better fit with the previous sliders as well as the song, I'd break it up into two sliders.

[Hard]

• 
  01:01:024 (3,4) - These two notes are quite hidden, I'd prefer them somewhere a bit more visible. Maybe put them just past the slider, or go up in an arch to meet up with the 5?
  01:06:024 (16) - I'm not sure this slider matches up with the beat.

[Insane]

• 
  Nothing to note here.

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod requested via in-game chat :3

Most of these are just suggestions, you can choose to ignore some of them if you want to.

SPOILER

• [Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:26:263 (5) - k
2. 00:26:501 (1) - d
3. 00:37:691 (11) - k
4. 00:37:930 (12) - D
5. 00:41:739 (26) - D
6. 00:49:358 (8) - D
7. 00:55:072 (33) - D
8. 00:56:977 (41) - D
9. 00:58:167 (46) - d
10. 00:58:405 (47) - k
11. 00:58:643 (48,49) - d
12. 01:12:215 (107) - D
13. 01:14:119 (115) - D
14. 01:15:429 (121) - delete
15. 01:15:548 (122) - k
16. 01:20:786 (144) - d
17. 01:22:572 (150) - d
    
    [Taiko Oni]
18. 00:01:025 (3) - k
19. 00:07:573 - add d
20. 00:07:692 (26) - k
21. 00:07:811 (27) - delete
22. 00:25:787 (13) - d
23. 00:26:025 (14) - k
24. 00:37:691 (11) - k
25. 00:37:930 (12) - D
26. 00:41:263 (28) - k
27. 00:58:881 (56) - D
28. 01:02:691 (77) - d
29. 01:02:810 (78) - k
30. 01:02:929 (79) - d
31. 01:03:643 (83) - k
32. 01:05:310 (92) - d
33. 01:05:429 (93) - k
34. 01:07:215 (103) - d
35. 01:07:334 (104) - k

Good luck!

Frostmourne wrote:

SPOILER

16:15 aonkub555: แล้วผมต้องทำยังไงพี่ถึงจะม็อดให้ผมได้เหรอครับ
16:16 Frostmourne: แมพไหน
16:17 Frostmourne: ขอดูก่อนว่ามันโอเครึป่าว
16:17 Frostmourne: ถ้ายังไม่โอเค ก็ยังไม่ม็อด
16:17 *aonkub555 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224337 KOKIA - Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size)]
16:18 aonkub555: ตั้งแต่ที่พี่ดูให้คราวก่อน ผมก็ได้ปรับปรุงมันหลายๆอย่าง
16:18 Frostmourne: ใช่ว่ามันจะพร้อมหนิ
16:19 aonkub555: ก็ใช่ ผมไม่รู้ว่ามันดีพอละยัง
16:19 Frostmourne: อืม งั้นเดี๋ยวดู
16:20 aonkub555: ขอบคุณครับพี่ ขอโทษที่ผมรบกวนพี่นะครับ
16:20 Frostmourne: Insane
16:21 Frostmourne: ลด HP drain กับ AR ก่อน
16:21 Frostmourne: อย่างละ 1
16:21 Frostmourne: มันเร็วเกินไปสำหรับเพลงนี้
16:21 aonkub555: done
16:22 Frostmourne: แล้วคือ
16:22 Frostmourne: ไม่ค่อยแนะนำนะไอระยะห่างแบบนี้
16:22 Frostmourne: 00:01:501 (4,5) -
16:22 Frostmourne: มันเล่นแล้วไม่สบายหรอก
16:22 Frostmourne: แต่ถ้าอยากไว้ก็แล้วแต่
16:23 Frostmourne: 00:03:883 (10) -
16:23 Frostmourne: slider นี้อ่ะ
16:23 Frostmourne: จบมันที่00:04:359
16:23 Frostmourne: แล้วให้ repeat กลับจากจุดนั้น
16:23 Frostmourne: เพราะว่าของที่เป็นอยู่ตอนนี้มันไม่เข้ากับเพลง
16:24 aonkub555: อืม
16:25 Frostmourne: 00:09:121 (4) -
16:25 Frostmourne: จบที่ 00:09:597
16:26 aonkub555: ผมปรับมันให้จบที่ 00:04:835
16:26 aonkub555: okไหมอะครับ
16:26 Frostmourne: 00:13:882 (12) -
16:26 Frostmourne: จบเส้นแดง00:14:359
16:27 Frostmourne: อยากจบตรงไหนก็แล้วแต่อ่ะ แต่ที่พี่แนะนำคือมันจะชัวร์ 100%
16:27 aonkub555: อ่า ครับ
16:27 aonkub555: done
16:28 Frostmourne: 00:37:930 (1) -
16:28 Frostmourne: จบที่ เส้นแดง00:38:168
16:28 Frostmourne: แล้ว add note ที่ 00:38:406 (2) -
16:28 Frostmourne: slider นั้นมันไม่ใช่ 1/6 น่ะ
16:29 Frostmourne: 00:40:191 (10) -
16:29 Frostmourne: ยืด slider ตัวนี้ไปถึงเส้นแดงถัดไป
16:29 Frostmourne: ลองดูระยะตรงนั้น
16:29 Frostmourne: มันไม่เหมาะ (error)
16:29 aonkub555: done
16:30 Frostmourne: อันนี้คือ
16:30 Frostmourne: พี่เอาคร่าวๆหมดเลยนะ
16:30 Frostmourne: ไม่กะม็อดจริง
16:30 Frostmourne: แต่คือม็อดเอาจังหวะโน้ตให้ลงล็อกก่อน
16:30 Frostmourne: แล้วเดี๋ยวพวกตำแหน่งวางโน้ต น้องค่อยไปหาม็อดจากคนอื่น+แก้เองไปพลางๆ
16:30 Frostmourne: แล้วเดี๋ยวจะดูอีกทีว่าจะฟองให้รึเปล่า
16:30 Frostmourne: พี่ว่าแมพก็ดีเลยแหละ
16:30 aonkub555: ได้ครัพี่
16:30 Frostmourne: แค่ดิฟนี้นะ ยังไม่ลองเช็คดิฟอื่น
16:30 aonkub555: ครับ
16:31 Frostmourne: 00:49:359 (7) -
16:31 Frostmourne: newcombo
16:31 Frostmourne: 00:50:072 (1,1) - เอานิวสองตัวนี้ออก
16:32 aonkub555: done
16:32 Frostmourne: 00:54:834 (7) -
16:32 Frostmourne: เอา finish ที่หัวออก
16:32 Frostmourne: 00:55:786 (10) -
16:32 Frostmourne: นิวคอมโฐ
16:32 Frostmourne: โบ*
16:32 Frostmourne: finish หาง
16:32 Frostmourne: 00:56:738 (12) -
16:33 Frostmourne: 00:58:167 (2) - ลองเลื่อน 1 grid ล่างดู
16:33 Frostmourne: มันจะทับกับ 00:57:453 (13) - ตัวก่อนหน้าพอดี
16:33 Frostmourne: พยายามหาพวกแบบนี้ในแมพ แล้วซ้อนทับกันให้สวยๆ มันจะได้ดูเรียบร้อยแล้วม็อดง่าย
16:33 Frostmourne: 01:03:881 (3) -
16:33 Frostmourne: จบที่01:04:119
16:34 Frostmourne: เส้นขาว
16:34 aonkub555: อืมถูกเลยครับ
16:34 Frostmourne: 01:04:357 (4) -
16:34 Frostmourne: จบที่เส้นขาวใหญ่
16:34 Frostmourne: แล้วใส่ repeat เอาก็ได้
16:34 Frostmourne: แล้วไอตัว repeat ก็ finish
16:34 Frostmourne: 01:08:405 (3) - finish หัว
16:35 Frostmourne: 01:11:978 (5) - ไอแบบนี้แหละ
16:35 Frostmourne: น้องหาในเพลงเลย เยอะๆ ถ้ามันมีที่เอามาซ้อนทับกันได้
16:35 Frostmourne: จะดีมาก
16:35 Frostmourne: อย่าง ตัวนี้ 01:11:978 (5) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:272 y:284
16:35 Frostmourne: มันจะทับพอดีกับตัวนี้พอดี
16:35 Frostmourne: 01:11:262 (3) -
16:35 Frostmourne: 01:12:810 (2) - ตัวนี้เอาออก
16:35 Frostmourne: เวลาใส่รัวสาม
16:36 Frostmourne: เขาเริ่มใส่กันที่เส้นสีแดง แล้วจบเส้นสีขาว
16:36 Frostmourne: ถ้าเริ่มเส้นสีขาวก่อน, ในเพลงต้องมีจังหวะแบบนั้นจริงๆ
16:36 Frostmourne: 01:16:262 (12) - new combo
16:37 Frostmourne: 01:23:405 (7) - เลื่อนมาไว้ซัก x:28 y:264
16:37 Frostmourne: แบบนี้ก็ดี
16:37 Frostmourne: เพราะว่าจะได้เว้นระยะห่างกับ 01:24:119 (1) -
16:37 Frostmourne: ได้ชัดเจนกว่าเดิม http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695920
16:37 Frostmourne: 01:24:835 (6) - ไอตัวนี้เลื่อนออกมาไกลๆเลย
16:37 Frostmourne: เพราะมันมองยากมากเวลาอยู่ในแถว stream
16:37 Frostmourne: เดียวกัน
16:38 Frostmourne: 01:25:072 (7) - ไม่ควรลดเสียงขนาดนี้
16:38 Frostmourne: ซัก 25% ก็โอเคละ
16:38 aonkub555: done
16:38 Frostmourne: เส้นแดงตัวสุดท้าย 01:25:548 (1) -
16:38 Frostmourne: ไม่จำเป็น
16:38 Frostmourne: ลบออกเลยทุกดิฟ
16:38 Frostmourne: เอาแค่ดิฟนี้ก่อนละกัน
16:38 Frostmourne: พี่บอกตรงๆว่ายังไม่พร้อมหรอก
16:39 Frostmourne: แต่อย่าเพิ่งยอมละกัน ไว้ได้ม็อดมาเยอะๆแล้วเดี๋ยวพี่จะเช็คให้อีกรอบ
16:39 aonkub555: เรื่องเส้นแดงม็อดคนก่อนบอกให้ใส่อะครับ
16:39 aonkub555: เขาบอกว่ามันทำให้จังหวะตรงในโหมดnightcore
16:39 Frostmourne: อย่าไปเชื่อเขา
16:39 Frostmourne: ไปเชื่อหมดไม่ได้หรอก
16:39 aonkub555: อ่าครับ
16:39 Frostmourne: ถ้ามีอะไรแแปลกๆ ก็เอามาถามพี่ก็ได้
16:40 Frostmourne: พี่ยิงดาวให้ในกระทู้ละนะ
16:40 Frostmourne: พยายามหน่อยละกัน
16:40 Frostmourne: แมพมันแรงค์ยากสมัยนี้
16:40 aonkub555: ยิงดาวให้เลยเหรอครับ
16:40 Frostmourne: ก็ดาว kudo
16:40 Frostmourne: เฉยๆน่ะ
16:40 Frostmourne: ไม่ใช่ดาว mat
16:40 Frostmourne: ดาวนั้นยิงมั่วๆไม่ได้
16:41 aonkub555: เพราะว่าอะไรเหรอครับ
16:41 Frostmourne: เพราะถ้ายิงแล้ว
16:41 Frostmourne: ก็คือแมพนั้นต้องมีโอกาสพร้อม
16:41 Frostmourne: แรงค์เลย
16:42 Frostmourne: ถึงจะยิงได้
16:42 aonkub555: อ่อ
16:43 aonkub555: พี่ไปโพสในกระทู้ผมเลยครับ แล้วผมจะยิงkudoให้
16:44 Frostmourne: อ่อไม่เป็นไรหรอก
16:44 Frostmourne: ม็อดแค่นี้ไม่ต้อง kudo หรอก
16:44 Frostmourne: ไว้รอ fullmod ค่อย kudo
16:45 aonkub555: แค่พี่ม็อดแค่นี้ก็มีประโยชน์มากๆเลยครับ
16:46 Frostmourne: เหอๆ
16:46 Frostmourne: ไม่เป็นไรก็ไม่เป็นไร
16:46 Frostmourne: หาม็อดอื่นๆไปก่อนเถอะ
16:46 Frostmourne: อันนี้แค่ม็อดเรื่องจังหวะ
16:46 Frostmourne: พวก 1/6 1/4 พวกนี้ ระวังๆหน่อย
16:46 Frostmourne: พยายามฟัง 25% ดีๆหน่อยอ่ะ
16:46 Frostmourne: ว่ามันใช่รึป่าว
16:49 aonkub555: อ่า ไม่เอาจิงเหรอ งั้นก็ขอบคุณที่ม็อดให้ครับ
16:50 Frostmourne: ไม่เอาแหละ
16:50 Frostmourne: แต่จริงๆก็
16:51 Frostmourne: เอาไว้ดีกว่า จะได้เพิ่มดาวให้กระทู้น้องด้วย
16:51 Frostmourne: ยิ่งเยอะยิ่งจะได้มีโอกาสขอม็อดง่ายขึ้น

IRC mod , good luck!

• 
  d = don
  k = kant
  D = Big Don
  K = Big Kat

• 
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:51:024 (15) - d
  00:51:262 (16) - D
  00:52:929 (23) - d
  00:53:167 (24) - K

• 
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:48:406 - 00:48:525 - add note
  00:48:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what is this!? , plz use just 1/4 rhytm only

kantokun wrote:

Taiko Mod req in game =w=

[General]

• 
  d =
  k = kant
  D = Big Don
  K = Big Kat
  
  Don't change any slider velocity multiplier because it UNRANKABLE!!
  
  [Taiko Muzukashii][list:f622a]
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:51:024 (15) - d NO
  00:51:262 (16) - D NO
  00:52:929 (23) - d FIX
  00:53:167 (24) - K

FIX

[Taiko Oni]

• 
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:48:406 - 00:48:525 - add note FIX
  00:48:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what is this!? , plz use just 1/4 rhytm only NO

that all , hope you fix it good more
By KantoKun

Lanturn wrote:

Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "

[General]
Title: たった１つの想い (TV Size)
Romanised Title: Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size)
Source: I would suggest removing the caps from this. The only reason why the title appears to be in all capitals, is because the font used only supports capital letters (correct me if I'm wrong) | Gunslinger Girl: Il Teatrino | Would probably be the best as the source.

Remove Tags | Gunslinger Girl | These are already in the source, so they will already show up in searches.
Add Tags | Just One Thought | Title of the song in English (why not?)

Sound: 15-20% for the beginning is definitely too low. raise it by 10% at least please... Its almost impossible to hear any hitsounds. Actually.. If you raised all the volume for everything by 10%, it would be much better.

[Easy]
The whole beginning section could use a bit of work with the slow sliders. I suggest trying to make different shapes and such instead of just curved sliders. It would make the beginning a bit more fun to play.

00:24:121 (3,4) - This blanket looks a bit ugly. You should delete this slider, and add it again to make it curved better | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/723855
00:45:550 (1) - I would suggest ending this spinner 1/2 later | Avoid ending stuff on Kicks for an Easy Difficulty. The note 1/2 later is the actual drum hit you want.
00:52:215 (5) - Remove the Clap from the start of this slider. Incorrect position, and sounds bad.
01:16:024 (3) - Try moving this a bit off the bottom as it gets pretty close to being completely off the map.
01:25:072 (1) - Make the end of the slider 5% volume instead of 15% so it doesn't stick out at the end.

[Normal]
00:07:216 (5) - end this 1/4 earlier on the red tick. I realize you are trying to follow the vocals here, but it just sounds awkward and hits a bit too late currently.
00:09:121 (3) - ^
00:20:788 (1) - Just delete this an add a break. Random notes (even if they follow the beat) aren't really needed. And its better for a TV size song to have a small break just before the song starts. This happens a lot in music right after the intro.
00:30:787 (7) - NC? | Start of a new verse here
00:31:502 (8,9) - Spacing error here. 1.5 instead of 1.0

About the slider velocity change.. I feel its a bit too fast for a normal. I'm not even sure if its needed to be honest on this level of difficulty.

01:12:929 (1) - So many reverses here. I would suggest using more 1/2 sliders as this can become very confusing to play.

Also same thing for the spinner as I mentioned in Easy diff. Use 5% volume

[Hard]
00:01:978 (5,6) - I wouldn't recommend hiding these notes so soon in the map, as it will just create confusion right off the bat. Hiding tail ends of sliders is also not recommended. (Hiding reverses is unrankable actually)
00:07:216 (18,19) - No matter how you look at this. Its just ugly and probably even unrankable. Solutions can be just to make one long slider, or start/end these on 1/2s like I suggested in normal.
00:26:501 (7) - Remove clap on the reverse
00:30:311 (6,1,1) - NC at (6) and remove both NCs at (1,1)
00:39:120 (5,6) - Unrankable (Hidden Reverse) Flip the 6 horizontally

The new combos from the kiai onwards are a bit messed up. You should go through them all again. Instead of following the vocals so much for NC's, try to follow the music itself and NC to new measures.

01:06:024 (17) - The 1/4 slider isn't needed. Just make this a circle
01:14:834 (1) - End this 1/8th later (red tick)
01:21:500 (6) - Remove clap on the end of this slider
01:23:643 (1,2,4) - End these on the red ticks please.

Also fix any other 1/8th or 1/16ths I might of missed. you should never have to use them in a song like this.

01:25:548 (1) - Remove finish and make volume 5%

[Insane]
Try to avoid using 1/8ths 1/16ths like I mentioned in your hard difficulty.

When making streams, try to keep the spacing consistent (use the Distance snap without the Grid Snap) and make them equal lengths apart.

00:43:645 (7,9,10) - Stuff like this can be really messy. If you are going to hide notes under stuff, then I would suggest fully hiding it, instead of only hiding 50-60% of the note.

01:06:024 (9,10,11) - Equal spacing needed here as well
01:10:667 (6,1) - Unreadable and too confusing. find some way to end the slider so people will know its a 1/4 distance away.

Same thing with this spinner... Also make sure they all end at the same spot as well. This one ends 1/2 earlier than your easy for example.


Anyways, Good luck on this. Sorry about the quick mod on your insane.. I didn't really find it too appealing to play/look at so I didn't look into it much. (Insanes aren't my specialty)

mingmichael wrote:

hey aonkub here the mods~ o/
hope these help you >,<//
btw, good song >w< hope it will be ranked soon!

Muzukashii
00:26:501 (1) - d
00:30:311 (15) - d
00:31:977 (21) - d
00:51:024 (15) - d
00:52:929 (23) - d
00:58:167 (46,47,48) - d k d
01:01:500 (60,61,62) - kkd
01:12:929 (109,110,111) - dkd
01:14:834 (117,118,119) - dkd
01:15:310 (120,121,122) - dkk
01:24:834 (160) - k



Oni
00:01:740 - the slider velocity multiplire change from 0.65 to be 1.00
00:22:692 - the slider velocity multiplier change from 0.90 to be 1.20
00:49:358 - the slider velocity multiplier change from 1.20 to be 1.40
01:19:834 - the slider velocity multiplier change from 0.90 to be 1.20

00:01:263 (4) - k
00:03:763 (13,14) - dk
00:05:906 (20) - k
00:06:978 (23) - k
00:08:168 (27,28,29,30,31) - d k d k d
00:10:073 (33) - d
00:14:359 (47,48,49) - k d k
00:25:787 (13,14,15,16) - k k d d
00:26:977 (17) - k
00:27:215 (18,19) - dk
00:30:787 (31) - k
00:31:025 (32,33) - dk
00:31:501 (34,35,36,37) - d k d d
00:32:691 (38) - k
00:37:930 (12) - D
00:39:358 (19,20,21) - k k d
00:41:263 (28) - k
00:43:168 (38,39) - k d
00:48:406 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - those notes are too messy. fix them by change the Beat Snap Divisor to be 1/12. so it will make the stream clearly.

see those the pictures

to be

it's better right?

00:53:762 (32) - k
00:54:119 (34) - d
01:01:381 (70) - k
01:01:977 (73) - d
01:02:453 (76) - d
01:02:810 (78) - move to 01:02:572 (77) - and change it to be k
01:02:929 (79) - d
01:03:167 (80,81,82,83,84) - kdkkd
01:03:881 (85) - d
01:05:548 (95) - d
01:07:453 (106) - d
01:09:000 (114) - k
01:10:548 (122,123,124) - ddk
01:11:500 (128) - d
01:12:453 (133) - d
01:15:786 (150) - d
01:16:619 (155) - k
01:17:215 (158,159,160) - kkd
01:18:167 (163) - d
01:18:643 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - d d d k d D

P A N wrote:

มาบอกสิ่งที่ควรเเก้นะครับ

[Easy]

00:36:025 (1) - slider นี้มันโผล่ตั้งเเต่ spin ยังไม่ทันถึงครึ่งเลย เเนะนำให้ลบ slider นี้ทิ้งเเล้ว add note 00:36:501 เเล้วก็ clap โน็คคัวนี้
00:45:549 (1) - เลื่อน spinner ตัวนี้ไปจบที่ 00:47:453 เพราะมันไม่ค่อยเข้ากับเพลงเเล้วลบโน็คที่ 00:47:453 เเละ 00:47:930 มันจะได้ไม่โผล่มาตอนกำลัง spin
01:24:596 , 01:25:072 - add note both time เเล้วก็เริ่ม spin ที่ 01:25:548

[Normal]

00:14:833 (7) - ลบโน็ตที่ 00:15:309 เเล้วให้slide ตัวนี้จบที่ 00:15:309 จังหวะเก่ามันไม่ควรใช้ใน normal
00:47:453 (1,2,3) - finish ทั้ง 3 ตัว? ดูได้จังหวะดี 555

[Insane]

01:25:548 - add note ตรงนี้เเล้วเปลี่ยน spinner ไปเริ่มที่ 01:25:667

โชคดีนะ บาย

Bear wrote:

Hello, this is my first time modding but I hope I'll be of any help.

[Hard]
00:15:548 (1) - After this spinner you should put something that goes along with the drums in the music like you did in the Insane diff, the break is really boring.
01:10:548 (11,12,13) - These three notes are a little too cramped, when I first played it I thought there were 4 notes. Try moving them a bit.
01:16:381 (4,5) - Change the 4th note so that it points upward and delete the 5th note.

[Insane]
00:15:548 - Add a spinner?
00:48:168 (4,12) - This whole stream seems to be completely out of place, I'd rather have notes that go with the vocals here.
00:55:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - The distance is a little too long, shorten it a bit. (Or maybe I just suck at jumps too much).
00:50:786 (7) - This note is just mean.
00:57:929 - The distances between notes in the streams
01:17:215 - Are TOO big.

Maybe this is just my opinion but, the whole "Kiai Time" part seems kinda off.
Some bits aren't even going with the flow of the music. Look over it, I think it needs some work.

Good luck^^

Mono98 wrote:

This is my first time modding sooo please excuse me for some errors I might make.
I tested all the maps and could not find any big mistakes. I think you can send it to pending beatmaps now! Nice song BTW!!