Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from popner's special mod queue
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Note: I only mod osu! standard, sorry

[General]

Hitsounds - Don't really know why hasn't this been pointed out by other modders.... .. YUNO use hitsounds?They ain't exactly musted but still... the only thing audible when you use 15% volume is the sliderticks?And that's just barely.I know you raised the volume to an audible level during KIAI but hitsounds should be audible throughout the map!.Maybe it's just me but please just use audible hitsounds!!

Timing points - How about putting them on a white tick?

Let's start from the most difficult difficulty...

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:00:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - Pardon my foolishness, but could you please enlighten me on why din't you use a single NC in this part? FIXES
If you can't come up with a good answer it's probably better to add some NCs.
00:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - ^ FIXES
00:23:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ^ FIXES
00:36:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - ^ FIXES
00:47:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^ FIXES
01:03:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ^ FIXES
01:12:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ^ FIXES
01:21:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ^ FIXES
Dude... what's your problem with NC? HAHAHA
00:09:835 (21,22,23,24,25) - these looks like they're just scattered around randomly, try to give them a pattern omg i'll try make beuatiful pattern
00:19:955 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - , 00:21:502 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - maybe there's a pattern but it's not that obvious, try to make it a smooth flow, the stream is difficult enough as it is FIXES
00:09:835 (21) - not really needed, but you can keep it if you wanted FIXES
01:25:074 - add a circle here, let spinner start at 01:25:550 - , somehow I think spinner should start here to match the music

FIXES
The rythm is good,but the patterns needs to be improved, everything looked like they're just scattered around randomly, which doesn't looked very nice to me.


[Hard]

SPOILER

00:35:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - how about a NC or two? FIXES
00:49:359 (7) - NC FIXES
00:59:597 (7) - NC FIXES
01:06:740 - add a circle FIXES
01:08:407 (10) - NC FIXES
01:16:026 (9) - NC FIXES
01:21:502 (10) - NC FIXES
01:25:074 - add circle here, start spinner at 01:25:550 -

FIXES

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:25:550 (5) - make this into a 3/4 beat long slider? FIXES
00:27:693 - add circle FIXES
00:33:407 (5) - start slider at 00:33:526 - FIXES
00:41:978 - add circle FIXES
00:56:740 - add circle FIXES
00:58:645 - add circle FIXES
00:58:883 (6) - move circle to 00:59:121 - FIXES
01:01:502 (1,2) - combine these into one slider FIXES
01:13:883 (5) - remove circle FIXES
01:18:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try to use sliders to replace this stream FIXES
01:25:074 (1) - start spinner at 01:25:550

FIXES

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:00:550 (1,2) - why not use same shape? FIXES
00:12:931 (1,2) - this should become 00:13:169 (1,2) - FIXES
01:03:169 (4) - nothings really wrong with it, it just seemed out of place for me FIXES
01:22:216 (6,7,8,9) - try to avoid overlapping beats FIXES
01:25:074 (1) - let spinner start at 01:25:550 -

FIXES

P.S:I may sound rude, but I have no intention of offending, sorry if I did offend you ><, and these are just suggestions, it's not necessary for you to follow them
GL on ranking

pimpG wrote:

general

missing skin files for a complete spin set
spinner-approachcircle.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png

inconsistency in combo colors between the standard mode diff's

audio lead-in inconsistency. easy hard and insane are 1508.. make them exactly 1500

offset is different in the taiko diff's. timing must to be the same in all difficlties

i sugest adding timelines with 126 bpm to: 00:01:740 - 00:22:692 - 00:49:358 - 01:25:548 - (they won't affect gamelpay) ADDS
because this tv size song does not follow correct measure order, if you dont unsderstand what i mean, make a backup diff and add this timelines to it, and then play with nightcore.
the nightcore cymbal finish appears every 4 measures starting from the timeline, and the order changes if there is more timelines, with this extra timelines nightcore mod will follow music perfectly in the his cymbal finishes
compare playing any other diff without this extra timelines

anyways the timeline at -164 should not exist, since the measure starts at 00:01:740 - i would sugest you to remove this -164 timeline, but you are using a slider speed change in normal before 00:01:740 so it would break the notes
i won't sugest you to remove the slider speed change in normal but if at some point you decide to remove it, you can delete the -164 timeline FIXS

gunslinger-girl 1.jpg has a word whritten in the top right, i mean the "TAPETUS.pl". consider using a bg without this things[/color] FIXS

easy

nc sugestions

00:04:359 (3) - new combo? (optional, this intro works with a long combo too, i'm sugesting new combo because you added one to next part that follows same rhythm)
00:11:978 (3,1) - (i was talking about this nc) if you follow previous sugestion, use new combo to (3) and remove at (1). or if you prever the long combo above, just remove the new combo at 1 for consistency
00:37:931 (3) - new combo since vocal restarts here FIXS
00:39:835 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
00:40:788 (2) - new combo FIXS
00:44:121 (6) - new combo FIXS
00:49:359 (5) - new combo for kiai start FIXS
00:49:835 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
00:53:645 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:07:455 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:10:788 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
01:17:455 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
01:18:883 (3) - new combo FIXS
01:19:835 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
01:21:740 (5) - new combo FIXS
01:23:169 (8) - new combo

FIXS

hitsounds

15% volume is too low and you are using it until kiai starts, please make it louder
no hitsounds until the 1st spinner, intentional?
why dont you use claps to follow drums instead of whistle? i see you tried to follow vocal too, using whistle to follow vocal and drums at the same time is not good[/color]

It ok i'll change to clap at all
00:00:550 (1) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:02:455 (2) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:04:359 (3) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:06:264 (4) - whistle at slider start? Change
00:08:169 (1) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:10:074 (2) - whistle at slider end? Change
00:13:169 (2) - whistle at slider start / end? Change
00:14:359 (3) - whistle at slider end?]Change
00:26:978 (1) - remove finish in slider end, if you wanted to follow vocal here i sugest whistle Change
00:30:312 (5) - finish Change

00:31:740 (2) - missing clap at slider start (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:33:169 (4) - missing clap at slider end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:48:883 (4) - clap (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:51:740 (3) - missing clap at slider start (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

00:54:121 (5) - missing clap at repeat (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:00:312 (1) - missing clap at start / end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:01:740 (2) - missing clap at end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:03:169 (4) - missing clap at end (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums) Change

01:10:788 (1) - missing clap at start (or whistle, if you deny my sugestion to use clap to follow drums)

Change

notes

00:00:550 (1,2) - slider ends in red ticks follows music better FIXS
00:04:359 (3) - i sugest slider end in the white tick, since the stronger vocal is there, also i feel like should be a larger gab between this slider and the next, fits the vocal. FIXS

00:06:264 (4) - slider end in the red tick, since you are following vocal, there is no vocal in the current slider end FIXS
00:08:169 (1) - make this slider start at 00:08:407 and end at 00:11:502 for same reason above FIXS
00:12:931 (1) - move this circle to 00:12:693 to follow the stronger vocal? FIXS
00:23:169 (2,3,4) - spacing issues here, you should keep using 1.0x. you are not using this at 00:31:740 (2,3,4) - FIXS
00:28:407 (3,4) - spacing issue, intentional? not good imo FIXS
00:34:121 (1) - make spinner end at 00:35:312 - or 00:35:074 - because there is no much time for newbies recover after spinning FIXS
00:42:693 (5,6,7,8) - spacing is messed here, its probably intentional but. i advice you newbies can find it very confusing FIXS
bacause anything that is too far or too close can make them think the note is earlier / later in the timeline since they are newbies FIXS
00:45:550 (1) - make spinner end at 00:46:740 - lets give more time to newbies recover after spinning FIXS
or remove the notes at 00:47:455 - and 00:47:931 - and make spinner end at 00:47:455 - (recomended) FIXS
00:47:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - this placement can be very confusing for newbies, let the notes as so visible as possible in diff for newbies, so stacks are not encouraged FIXS
00:51:740 (3) - make a circle at 00:51:740 and make this slider start at 00:52:216 - end at 00:53:169 - because kiai calls for complex rhythm, the current slider was too long FIXS

recheck your spacing, if you are using distance snap1,0x dont let the notes be spaced less than 0,98x or more than 1,02x

FIXS

normal

your combo colors are too similar as you can see here, and here ...please use colors that can be distinguished more easilly
slider velocity looks too high for this song in kiai time. please reduce the multiplier a bit, i sugest you using maximum of 1,20 multiplier

nc sugestions

00:04:359 (4,1) - swap new combo FIXS
00:08:169 (5,1) - ^ FIXS
00:28:407 (1) - remove new combo FIXS
00:37:931 (3) - new combo FIXS
00:48:883 (4) - new combo FIXS
00:54:121 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:01:502 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:05:550 (5) - new combo FIXS
01:09:121 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:12:931 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:16:502 (4) - new combo FIXS
01:23:645 (5) - new combo

FIXS

hitsounds

00:00:550 (1) - whistle at slider end
00:03:883 (3) - whistle ADD
00:05:550 (1) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:06:978 (3) - whistle ADD
00:07:216 (4) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:08:407 (1) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:09:121 (2) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:10:788 (4) - whistle ADD
00:11:026 (5) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:12:693 (3) - whistle at slider start ADD
00:13:407 (4) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:14:597 (6) - whistle at slider end ADD
00:15:312 (8) - whistle ADD
00:15:550 (1) - finish ADD
00:25:550 (5) - whistle at repeat /end ADD
00:29:359 (2) - whistle at slider start ADD
00:31:502 (2) - whistle at repeat ADD
00:32:216 (3) - whistle at start ADD
00:41:740 (1) - finish, its the same sound as 00:37:931 (3) - ADD
00:42:931 (4) - whistle at start

ADD

editing

P A N wrote:

My Test Play

(play just one time per diff)

http://puu.sh/2r9X2

[General]
The reverse arrow is very hard to see ( I use default skin )
Rhymth is so weird
Easy กับ Normal distance ควรเท่ากันหมดนะครับใช้ Distance Snap อะ ตามเเก้ด้วยนะเรื่องนี้สำคัญครับ Normal อาจพอเทคติกนิดนิดๆให้เปนรูปได้

[Easy]
00:00:549 (1) - slider นี้เปลี่ยนเปนโค้งสวยกว่า แก้
00:08:168 (1) - ไม่ควรมีใน Easy นะครับมือใหม่พลาดง่ายผมก็เกือบพลาด จิงๆมันต้องลงล่างเเล้ววกขึ้นมาข้างบน lol okแก้

00:11:978 (1,2,3,4) - Distance ไม่เท่ากัน แก้
00:34:120 - delete spinner เเล้วก็เปลี่ยนเปน slider เริ่ม 00:34:120 - จบ 00:35:072 -
00:35:549 - add note ไม่แก้ ใส่โน๊ตใกล้สปินเกิน คนเล่นใหม่จะกดไม่ทันครับ
เลื่อนเส้นเขียวมาเวลา 00:45:549 - แก้
00:47:453 - delete spinner อย่างไม่ต้องสงสัย แก้ , modคนก่อนๆบอกให้ใส่ แต่ผมเห็นด้วยที่ให้ลบ
00:49:834 - จิงๆอยากให้ distance มัน้ท่ากันทั้งเพลงนะครับ easy เนี่ย ปรับslider velocity แล้วเพิ่มขึ้นเฉยเลย
01:00:310 (1) - เอาให้ distance เท่าตัวอื่นครับ แก้
01:13:167 (6) - เอาห่างจาก (5) หน่อยครับไม่ค่อยสวย หรือจะทำเปนโค้งก็ได้ แก้
เลื่อนเส้นเขียวมาเวลา 01:18:881 - ตั้งเเต่ตรงนี้โน็ตกดเยอะไปนะครับ ควรเปลี่ยนเป็น slide บ้าง (ควรมาก) แก้

[Normal]
slider ตัวเเรกเปลี่ยนความเร็วให้เท่า slider ตัวอื่นนะครับ
00:06:263 (3) - distance ไม่เท่ากัน พลาดง่ายด้วยแบบนี้ แก้
00:15:192 (7,8) - ตรงนี้แปลกๆนะครับ ลองเเก้เปนจังหวะอื่น แก้
00:22:692 (1,2,3) - distance ห่างกันพอได้เเต่ต่อมามันกลับมาใกล้กันอีกเเล้วไม่มีเส้นเขียวด้วย เเก้หน่อย แก้
00:26:502 (6) - เเก้ distance ตัวนี้ครับ แก้
00:33:168 (4,5) - delete เเล้วก็เปลี่ยนเปน slider เริ่มที่ 00:33:168 - จบที่ 00:33:644 - ไม่แก้ ผมคิดว่าสปินหมุนเข้ากับเพลงแล้วล่ะครับ
00:37:930 (1) - ห่างขนาดนี้ ไม่เเน่ใจได้หรือเปล่านะเเต่ปล่อยไปก่อนก็ได้ รอmodคนคืนแย้งผมถึงจะเปลี่ยนละกัน
00:58:643 (3) - ย้ายไปที่ x:232 y:272 นะครับ แก้
01:07:215 (1) - เลื่อนจุด slider จุดที่ 2 นับจากหัว ลง 1 grid เลื่อนจุดที่ 3 นับจากหัวไปทางขวา 2 grid แก้
01:11:024 (1) - เเก้ distance แก้
01:12:929 (1) - slider reverse หลายรอบไม่ดีครับ พลาดง่ายด้วย เเก้ๆ color=#BF4000]รอmodคนคืนแย้งผมถึงจะเปลี่ยนละกัน[/color]
01:14:834 (1) - เเก้ distance แก้
01:15:548 (2,3,1) - จังหวะแปลกๆนะ แก้
01:22:691 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ซ้อนทับกันงงไปครับ เเก้ๆ แก้
เอาเส้นเขียวเส้นสุดท้ายย้ายไป 01:30:309 - ไม่แก้

[Hard]
จังหวะแปลกๆ
โดดแปลกๆ
Circie Size -1
OD +3
00:12:692 (2) - จังหวะแปลกๆ แก้
00:14:597 (6,7,8,9) - วางโน็ตแปลกๆ แก้
00:19:001 - insert break time please ไม่แก้
00:24:120 (3) - เลื่อนไป x:144 y:173 (ติ๊ก distance snap ออกก่อน) แก้
00:25:072 (6) - เเก้ distance ไม่แก้
00:35:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - วางโน็ตแปลกๆ ลองวางให้เปนรูปๆหรือเปนระเบียบหน่อย แก้
00:41:501 (10,11,1) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:328 y:188 แก้
00:44:834 (8) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:151 y:152 แก้
00:52:691 (7) - เเก้ distance ไม่แก้
01:02:215 (12) - ^ ไม่แก้
01:02:929 (14) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:86 y:279 แก้
01:04:357 (2) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:352 y:227 แก้
01:11:500 (2) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:349 y:102 แก้
01:17:453 (3) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:479 y:114 แก้
01:24:119 (5) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:282 y:357 แก้
01:24:596 (6) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:216 y:307 แก้
ย้ายเส้นเขียวเส้นสุดท้ายไป 01:30:309 ไม่แก้

[Insae]
00:02:930 (6) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:304 y:216 แก้
00:13:525 (9) - เลื่อนไปที่ x50 y265 แก้
00:15:430 - insert break time แก้
00:33:882 (11) - เลื่อนไปที่ x66 y192 แก้
00:40:668 (10,11) - เลื่อนไปที่ x264 y334 แก้
00:45:312 (10) - x324 y320 แก้
เส้นเขียวสุดท้ายเหมือนเดิม

Zazalng wrote:

สวัสดีครับผมมาจาก Modding Queues

[Rule Symbol]
? = แนะนำ
! = แก้ไขด่วน
none = ลองนำไปใช้

ลองre-download map ใหม่หน่อยครับ ที่บอกมาม็อดคนอื่นบอกให้ผมแก้หมดแล้วครับ

[General]
BPM & Offest
Offestไม่ถูกตำแหน่ง ควรเป็น 1740
และทำการลบเส้นแดงอื่นๆออกด้วยครับ pimpGม็อดคนก่อนบอกว่ามันทำให้จังหวะเสียงฉาบในโหมดnightcoreเข้ากับเพลง ถ้าไม่เข้าใจ ลองลบเส้นแดงยกเว้นอันที่1740แล้วเล่นnightcoreดูครับ
Unused Image Files
ไฟล์นี้ไม่ได้ใช่อะgunslinger-girl 1.jpg ไม่มีนะครับ ผมเปลี่ยนชื่อเป็นTAPETUS.pl
Combo Colours
สีของคอมโบไม่ตรงกัน:

แก้ไปแล้ว

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,245,232
Combo2 : 206,255,255
Combo3 : 222,222,239
Combo4 : 242,230,230
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255

General and Metadata

แก้ไปแล้ว
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1508
- [Insane] : 1508
- [Normal] : 1500
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 1500
- [Taiko Oni] : 1500
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 48112
- [Hard] : 48085
- [Insane] : -1
- [Normal] : 48117
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 48117
- [Taiko Oni] : 48117
Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Hard] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Insane] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Normal] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : KOKIA
- [Taiko Oni] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

ไม่แก้

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:834, ends on 01:18:826

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:25:072

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:827

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:881

- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:858

- [Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:834

แก้ไขเรื่องBPM & Offest ก่อนนะแล้วค่อยเรียกให้ผมม็อดอีกที

aonkub555 wrote:

Zazalng wrote:

สวัสดีครับผมมาจาก Modding Queues

[Rule Symbol]
? = แนะนำ
! = แก้ไขด่วน
none = ลองนำไปใช้

ลองre-download map ใหม่หน่อยครับ ที่บอกมาม็อดคนอื่นบอกให้ผมแก้หมดแล้วครับ

[General]
BPM & Offest
Offestไม่ถูกตำแหน่ง ควรเป็น 1740
และทำการลบเส้นแดงอื่นๆออกด้วยครับ pimpGม็อดคนก่อนบอกว่ามันทำให้จังหวะเสียงฉาบในโหมดnightcoreเข้ากับเพลง ถ้าไม่เข้าใจ ลองลบเส้นแดงยกเว้นอันที่1740แล้วเล่นnightcoreดูครับ
Unused Image Files
ไฟล์นี้ไม่ได้ใช่อะgunslinger-girl 1.jpg ไม่มีนะครับ ผมเปลี่ยนชื่อเป็นTAPETUS.pl
Combo Colours
สีของคอมโบไม่ตรงกัน:

แก้ไปแล้ว

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,245,232
Combo2 : 206,255,255
Combo3 : 222,222,239
Combo4 : 242,230,230
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,213,170
Combo2 : 210,233,255
Combo3 : 217,217,236
Combo4 : 255,217,217
Combo5 : 187,187,255

General and Metadata

แก้ไปแล้ว
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1508
- [Insane] : 1508
- [Normal] : 1500
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 1500
- [Taiko Oni] : 1500
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 48112
- [Hard] : 48085
- [Insane] : -1
- [Normal] : 48117
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : 48117
- [Taiko Oni] : 48117
Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Hard] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Insane] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Normal] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-
- [Taiko Muzukashii] : KOKIA
- [Taiko Oni] : GUNSLINGER GIRL -IL TEATRINO-

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

ไม่แก้

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:834, ends on 01:18:826

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:25:072

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:827

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:18:881

- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:858

- [Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:358, ends on 01:19:834

แก้ไขเรื่องBPM & Offest ก่อนนะแล้วค่อยเรียกให้ผมม็อดอีกที

cFiszpan wrote:

Modding your map because you modded Smooth Operator (: according to I promised here ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2177871 <--- However I'll not mod the 'Insanity' map --- I'll give you a Golden Ticket on my Queue instead (:

Let's go!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Easy]

00:02:455 (2) - Set to x:108 y:120
00:04:359 (1) - Set to x:124 y:204
00:06:263 (2) - Set to x:352 y:204, making spacing more intuitive
00:08:168 (3) - This slider could be broken in two (: or could be desinged in a form that avoid overlaps.
00:34:121 (1) - Let this spinner end at 00:35:549
00:54:238 (2) - Snap to 00:54:119

[Normal]

00:24:121 (3) - Could be better at x:200 y:168
00:33:526 (5) could be better if ended at 00:33:883 (red tick)

[Hard]

00:01:502 (4,5) souns a bit off -- will look better if you make slider end at 00:01:859 and move the note at 00:02:097 (5) to 00:01:978. On screen, set the 2nd dot of the slider to x:152 y:252 and the 3rd dot to x:92 y:232 -- and move (5) to x:92 y:232.
00:07:216 (7,8) - ^ (adjust it like the prior)
00:11:978 (9) - Make the slider end at 00:12:455 - will sound better
00:43:645 (6) - Let it end at 00:44:121 - same reason

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*Nothing about [Insane], and I dunno mod Taiko.

That's it (: Good luck for rank, awesome song and Video!

• 
  I'd get rid of the gunshot sound. It's very distracting.

• 
  00:08:168 (3) - To better fit with the previous sliders as well as the song, I'd break it up into two sliders.

• 
  01:01:024 (3,4) - These two notes are quite hidden, I'd prefer them somewhere a bit more visible. Maybe put them just past the slider, or go up in an arch to meet up with the 5?
  01:06:024 (16) - I'm not sure this slider matches up with the beat.

• 
  Nothing to note here.

Dwargkiller wrote:

Hello! Visiting from my queue.
[General]

• 
  I'd get rid of the gunshot sound. It's very distracting.

[Easy]

• 
  00:08:168 (3) - To better fit with the previous sliders as well as the song, I'd break it up into two sliders.

[Hard]

• 
  01:01:024 (3,4) - These two notes are quite hidden, I'd prefer them somewhere a bit more visible. Maybe put them just past the slider, or go up in an arch to meet up with the 5?
  01:06:024 (16) - I'm not sure this slider matches up with the beat.

[Insane]

• 
  Nothing to note here.

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod requested via in-game chat :3

Most of these are just suggestions, you can choose to ignore some of them if you want to.

SPOILER

• [Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:26:263 (5) - k
2. 00:26:501 (1) - d
3. 00:37:691 (11) - k
4. 00:37:930 (12) - D
5. 00:41:739 (26) - D
6. 00:49:358 (8) - D
7. 00:55:072 (33) - D
8. 00:56:977 (41) - D
9. 00:58:167 (46) - d
10. 00:58:405 (47) - k
11. 00:58:643 (48,49) - d
12. 01:12:215 (107) - D
13. 01:14:119 (115) - D
14. 01:15:429 (121) - delete
15. 01:15:548 (122) - k
16. 01:20:786 (144) - d
17. 01:22:572 (150) - d
    
    [Taiko Oni]
18. 00:01:025 (3) - k
19. 00:07:573 - add d
20. 00:07:692 (26) - k
21. 00:07:811 (27) - delete
22. 00:25:787 (13) - d
23. 00:26:025 (14) - k
24. 00:37:691 (11) - k
25. 00:37:930 (12) - D
26. 00:41:263 (28) - k
27. 00:58:881 (56) - D
28. 01:02:691 (77) - d
29. 01:02:810 (78) - k
30. 01:02:929 (79) - d
31. 01:03:643 (83) - k
32. 01:05:310 (92) - d
33. 01:05:429 (93) - k
34. 01:07:215 (103) - d
35. 01:07:334 (104) - k

Good luck!

Frostmourne wrote:

SPOILER

16:15 aonkub555: แล้วผมต้องทำยังไงพี่ถึงจะม็อดให้ผมได้เหรอครับ
16:16 Frostmourne: แมพไหน
16:17 Frostmourne: ขอดูก่อนว่ามันโอเครึป่าว
16:17 Frostmourne: ถ้ายังไม่โอเค ก็ยังไม่ม็อด
16:17 *aonkub555 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224337 KOKIA - Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size)]
16:18 aonkub555: ตั้งแต่ที่พี่ดูให้คราวก่อน ผมก็ได้ปรับปรุงมันหลายๆอย่าง
16:18 Frostmourne: ใช่ว่ามันจะพร้อมหนิ
16:19 aonkub555: ก็ใช่ ผมไม่รู้ว่ามันดีพอละยัง
16:19 Frostmourne: อืม งั้นเดี๋ยวดู
16:20 aonkub555: ขอบคุณครับพี่ ขอโทษที่ผมรบกวนพี่นะครับ
16:20 Frostmourne: Insane
16:21 Frostmourne: ลด HP drain กับ AR ก่อน
16:21 Frostmourne: อย่างละ 1
16:21 Frostmourne: มันเร็วเกินไปสำหรับเพลงนี้
16:21 aonkub555: done
16:22 Frostmourne: แล้วคือ
16:22 Frostmourne: ไม่ค่อยแนะนำนะไอระยะห่างแบบนี้
16:22 Frostmourne: 00:01:501 (4,5) -
16:22 Frostmourne: มันเล่นแล้วไม่สบายหรอก
16:22 Frostmourne: แต่ถ้าอยากไว้ก็แล้วแต่
16:23 Frostmourne: 00:03:883 (10) -
16:23 Frostmourne: slider นี้อ่ะ
16:23 Frostmourne: จบมันที่00:04:359
16:23 Frostmourne: แล้วให้ repeat กลับจากจุดนั้น
16:23 Frostmourne: เพราะว่าของที่เป็นอยู่ตอนนี้มันไม่เข้ากับเพลง
16:24 aonkub555: อืม
16:25 Frostmourne: 00:09:121 (4) -
16:25 Frostmourne: จบที่ 00:09:597
16:26 aonkub555: ผมปรับมันให้จบที่ 00:04:835
16:26 aonkub555: okไหมอะครับ
16:26 Frostmourne: 00:13:882 (12) -
16:26 Frostmourne: จบเส้นแดง00:14:359
16:27 Frostmourne: อยากจบตรงไหนก็แล้วแต่อ่ะ แต่ที่พี่แนะนำคือมันจะชัวร์ 100%
16:27 aonkub555: อ่า ครับ
16:27 aonkub555: done
16:28 Frostmourne: 00:37:930 (1) -
16:28 Frostmourne: จบที่ เส้นแดง00:38:168
16:28 Frostmourne: แล้ว add note ที่ 00:38:406 (2) -
16:28 Frostmourne: slider นั้นมันไม่ใช่ 1/6 น่ะ
16:29 Frostmourne: 00:40:191 (10) -
16:29 Frostmourne: ยืด slider ตัวนี้ไปถึงเส้นแดงถัดไป
16:29 Frostmourne: ลองดูระยะตรงนั้น
16:29 Frostmourne: มันไม่เหมาะ (error)
16:29 aonkub555: done
16:30 Frostmourne: อันนี้คือ
16:30 Frostmourne: พี่เอาคร่าวๆหมดเลยนะ
16:30 Frostmourne: ไม่กะม็อดจริง
16:30 Frostmourne: แต่คือม็อดเอาจังหวะโน้ตให้ลงล็อกก่อน
16:30 Frostmourne: แล้วเดี๋ยวพวกตำแหน่งวางโน้ต น้องค่อยไปหาม็อดจากคนอื่น+แก้เองไปพลางๆ
16:30 Frostmourne: แล้วเดี๋ยวจะดูอีกทีว่าจะฟองให้รึเปล่า
16:30 Frostmourne: พี่ว่าแมพก็ดีเลยแหละ
16:30 aonkub555: ได้ครัพี่
16:30 Frostmourne: แค่ดิฟนี้นะ ยังไม่ลองเช็คดิฟอื่น
16:30 aonkub555: ครับ
16:31 Frostmourne: 00:49:359 (7) -
16:31 Frostmourne: newcombo
16:31 Frostmourne: 00:50:072 (1,1) - เอานิวสองตัวนี้ออก
16:32 aonkub555: done
16:32 Frostmourne: 00:54:834 (7) -
16:32 Frostmourne: เอา finish ที่หัวออก
16:32 Frostmourne: 00:55:786 (10) -
16:32 Frostmourne: นิวคอมโฐ
16:32 Frostmourne: โบ*
16:32 Frostmourne: finish หาง
16:32 Frostmourne: 00:56:738 (12) -
16:33 Frostmourne: 00:58:167 (2) - ลองเลื่อน 1 grid ล่างดู
16:33 Frostmourne: มันจะทับกับ 00:57:453 (13) - ตัวก่อนหน้าพอดี
16:33 Frostmourne: พยายามหาพวกแบบนี้ในแมพ แล้วซ้อนทับกันให้สวยๆ มันจะได้ดูเรียบร้อยแล้วม็อดง่าย
16:33 Frostmourne: 01:03:881 (3) -
16:33 Frostmourne: จบที่01:04:119
16:34 Frostmourne: เส้นขาว
16:34 aonkub555: อืมถูกเลยครับ
16:34 Frostmourne: 01:04:357 (4) -
16:34 Frostmourne: จบที่เส้นขาวใหญ่
16:34 Frostmourne: แล้วใส่ repeat เอาก็ได้
16:34 Frostmourne: แล้วไอตัว repeat ก็ finish
16:34 Frostmourne: 01:08:405 (3) - finish หัว
16:35 Frostmourne: 01:11:978 (5) - ไอแบบนี้แหละ
16:35 Frostmourne: น้องหาในเพลงเลย เยอะๆ ถ้ามันมีที่เอามาซ้อนทับกันได้
16:35 Frostmourne: จะดีมาก
16:35 Frostmourne: อย่าง ตัวนี้ 01:11:978 (5) - เลื่อนไปที่ x:272 y:284
16:35 Frostmourne: มันจะทับพอดีกับตัวนี้พอดี
16:35 Frostmourne: 01:11:262 (3) -
16:35 Frostmourne: 01:12:810 (2) - ตัวนี้เอาออก
16:35 Frostmourne: เวลาใส่รัวสาม
16:36 Frostmourne: เขาเริ่มใส่กันที่เส้นสีแดง แล้วจบเส้นสีขาว
16:36 Frostmourne: ถ้าเริ่มเส้นสีขาวก่อน, ในเพลงต้องมีจังหวะแบบนั้นจริงๆ
16:36 Frostmourne: 01:16:262 (12) - new combo
16:37 Frostmourne: 01:23:405 (7) - เลื่อนมาไว้ซัก x:28 y:264
16:37 Frostmourne: แบบนี้ก็ดี
16:37 Frostmourne: เพราะว่าจะได้เว้นระยะห่างกับ 01:24:119 (1) -
16:37 Frostmourne: ได้ชัดเจนกว่าเดิม http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695920
16:37 Frostmourne: 01:24:835 (6) - ไอตัวนี้เลื่อนออกมาไกลๆเลย
16:37 Frostmourne: เพราะมันมองยากมากเวลาอยู่ในแถว stream
16:37 Frostmourne: เดียวกัน
16:38 Frostmourne: 01:25:072 (7) - ไม่ควรลดเสียงขนาดนี้
16:38 Frostmourne: ซัก 25% ก็โอเคละ
16:38 aonkub555: done
16:38 Frostmourne: เส้นแดงตัวสุดท้าย 01:25:548 (1) -
16:38 Frostmourne: ไม่จำเป็น
16:38 Frostmourne: ลบออกเลยทุกดิฟ
16:38 Frostmourne: เอาแค่ดิฟนี้ก่อนละกัน
16:38 Frostmourne: พี่บอกตรงๆว่ายังไม่พร้อมหรอก
16:39 Frostmourne: แต่อย่าเพิ่งยอมละกัน ไว้ได้ม็อดมาเยอะๆแล้วเดี๋ยวพี่จะเช็คให้อีกรอบ
16:39 aonkub555: เรื่องเส้นแดงม็อดคนก่อนบอกให้ใส่อะครับ
16:39 aonkub555: เขาบอกว่ามันทำให้จังหวะตรงในโหมดnightcore
16:39 Frostmourne: อย่าไปเชื่อเขา
16:39 Frostmourne: ไปเชื่อหมดไม่ได้หรอก
16:39 aonkub555: อ่าครับ
16:39 Frostmourne: ถ้ามีอะไรแแปลกๆ ก็เอามาถามพี่ก็ได้
16:40 Frostmourne: พี่ยิงดาวให้ในกระทู้ละนะ
16:40 Frostmourne: พยายามหน่อยละกัน
16:40 Frostmourne: แมพมันแรงค์ยากสมัยนี้
16:40 aonkub555: ยิงดาวให้เลยเหรอครับ
16:40 Frostmourne: ก็ดาว kudo
16:40 Frostmourne: เฉยๆน่ะ
16:40 Frostmourne: ไม่ใช่ดาว mat
16:40 Frostmourne: ดาวนั้นยิงมั่วๆไม่ได้
16:41 aonkub555: เพราะว่าอะไรเหรอครับ
16:41 Frostmourne: เพราะถ้ายิงแล้ว
16:41 Frostmourne: ก็คือแมพนั้นต้องมีโอกาสพร้อม
16:41 Frostmourne: แรงค์เลย
16:42 Frostmourne: ถึงจะยิงได้
16:42 aonkub555: อ่อ
16:43 aonkub555: พี่ไปโพสในกระทู้ผมเลยครับ แล้วผมจะยิงkudoให้
16:44 Frostmourne: อ่อไม่เป็นไรหรอก
16:44 Frostmourne: ม็อดแค่นี้ไม่ต้อง kudo หรอก
16:44 Frostmourne: ไว้รอ fullmod ค่อย kudo
16:45 aonkub555: แค่พี่ม็อดแค่นี้ก็มีประโยชน์มากๆเลยครับ
16:46 Frostmourne: เหอๆ
16:46 Frostmourne: ไม่เป็นไรก็ไม่เป็นไร
16:46 Frostmourne: หาม็อดอื่นๆไปก่อนเถอะ
16:46 Frostmourne: อันนี้แค่ม็อดเรื่องจังหวะ
16:46 Frostmourne: พวก 1/6 1/4 พวกนี้ ระวังๆหน่อย
16:46 Frostmourne: พยายามฟัง 25% ดีๆหน่อยอ่ะ
16:46 Frostmourne: ว่ามันใช่รึป่าว
16:49 aonkub555: อ่า ไม่เอาจิงเหรอ งั้นก็ขอบคุณที่ม็อดให้ครับ
16:50 Frostmourne: ไม่เอาแหละ
16:50 Frostmourne: แต่จริงๆก็
16:51 Frostmourne: เอาไว้ดีกว่า จะได้เพิ่มดาวให้กระทู้น้องด้วย
16:51 Frostmourne: ยิ่งเยอะยิ่งจะได้มีโอกาสขอม็อดง่ายขึ้น

IRC mod , good luck!

• 
  d = don
  k = kant
  D = Big Don
  K = Big Kat

• 
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:51:024 (15) - d
  00:51:262 (16) - D
  00:52:929 (23) - d
  00:53:167 (24) - K

• 
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:48:406 - 00:48:525 - add note
  00:48:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what is this!? , plz use just 1/4 rhytm only

kantokun wrote:

Taiko Mod req in game =w=

[General]

• 
  d =
  k = kant
  D = Big Don
  K = Big Kat
  
  Don't change any slider velocity multiplier because it UNRANKABLE!!
  
  [Taiko Muzukashii][list:f622a]
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:51:024 (15) - d NO
  00:51:262 (16) - D NO
  00:52:929 (23) - d FIX
  00:53:167 (24) - K

FIX

[Taiko Oni]

• 
  Change Hitsound to Normal, Soft is very bad in taiko -.-
  
  00:48:406 - 00:48:525 - add note FIX
  00:48:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what is this!? , plz use just 1/4 rhytm only NO

that all , hope you fix it good more
By KantoKun

Lanturn wrote:

Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "

[General]
Title: たった１つの想い (TV Size)
Romanised Title: Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size)
Source: I would suggest removing the caps from this. The only reason why the title appears to be in all capitals, is because the font used only supports capital letters (correct me if I'm wrong) | Gunslinger Girl: Il Teatrino | Would probably be the best as the source.

Remove Tags | Gunslinger Girl | These are already in the source, so they will already show up in searches.
Add Tags | Just One Thought | Title of the song in English (why not?)

Sound: 15-20% for the beginning is definitely too low. raise it by 10% at least please... Its almost impossible to hear any hitsounds. Actually.. If you raised all the volume for everything by 10%, it would be much better.

[Easy]
The whole beginning section could use a bit of work with the slow sliders. I suggest trying to make different shapes and such instead of just curved sliders. It would make the beginning a bit more fun to play.

00:24:121 (3,4) - This blanket looks a bit ugly. You should delete this slider, and add it again to make it curved better | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/723855
00:45:550 (1) - I would suggest ending this spinner 1/2 later | Avoid ending stuff on Kicks for an Easy Difficulty. The note 1/2 later is the actual drum hit you want.
00:52:215 (5) - Remove the Clap from the start of this slider. Incorrect position, and sounds bad.
01:16:024 (3) - Try moving this a bit off the bottom as it gets pretty close to being completely off the map.
01:25:072 (1) - Make the end of the slider 5% volume instead of 15% so it doesn't stick out at the end.

[Normal]
00:07:216 (5) - end this 1/4 earlier on the red tick. I realize you are trying to follow the vocals here, but it just sounds awkward and hits a bit too late currently.
00:09:121 (3) - ^
00:20:788 (1) - Just delete this an add a break. Random notes (even if they follow the beat) aren't really needed. And its better for a TV size song to have a small break just before the song starts. This happens a lot in music right after the intro.
00:30:787 (7) - NC? | Start of a new verse here
00:31:502 (8,9) - Spacing error here. 1.5 instead of 1.0

About the slider velocity change.. I feel its a bit too fast for a normal. I'm not even sure if its needed to be honest on this level of difficulty.

01:12:929 (1) - So many reverses here. I would suggest using more 1/2 sliders as this can become very confusing to play.

Also same thing for the spinner as I mentioned in Easy diff. Use 5% volume

[Hard]
00:01:978 (5,6) - I wouldn't recommend hiding these notes so soon in the map, as it will just create confusion right off the bat. Hiding tail ends of sliders is also not recommended. (Hiding reverses is unrankable actually)
00:07:216 (18,19) - No matter how you look at this. Its just ugly and probably even unrankable. Solutions can be just to make one long slider, or start/end these on 1/2s like I suggested in normal.
00:26:501 (7) - Remove clap on the reverse
00:30:311 (6,1,1) - NC at (6) and remove both NCs at (1,1)
00:39:120 (5,6) - Unrankable (Hidden Reverse) Flip the 6 horizontally

The new combos from the kiai onwards are a bit messed up. You should go through them all again. Instead of following the vocals so much for NC's, try to follow the music itself and NC to new measures.

01:06:024 (17) - The 1/4 slider isn't needed. Just make this a circle
01:14:834 (1) - End this 1/8th later (red tick)
01:21:500 (6) - Remove clap on the end of this slider
01:23:643 (1,2,4) - End these on the red ticks please.

Also fix any other 1/8th or 1/16ths I might of missed. you should never have to use them in a song like this.

01:25:548 (1) - Remove finish and make volume 5%

[Insane]
Try to avoid using 1/8ths 1/16ths like I mentioned in your hard difficulty.

When making streams, try to keep the spacing consistent (use the Distance snap without the Grid Snap) and make them equal lengths apart.

00:43:645 (7,9,10) - Stuff like this can be really messy. If you are going to hide notes under stuff, then I would suggest fully hiding it, instead of only hiding 50-60% of the note.

01:06:024 (9,10,11) - Equal spacing needed here as well
01:10:667 (6,1) - Unreadable and too confusing. find some way to end the slider so people will know its a 1/4 distance away.

Same thing with this spinner... Also make sure they all end at the same spot as well. This one ends 1/2 earlier than your easy for example.


Anyways, Good luck on this. Sorry about the quick mod on your insane.. I didn't really find it too appealing to play/look at so I didn't look into it much. (Insanes aren't my specialty)

mingmichael wrote:

hey aonkub here the mods~ o/
hope these help you >,<//
btw, good song >w< hope it will be ranked soon!

Muzukashii
00:26:501 (1) - d
00:30:311 (15) - d
00:31:977 (21) - d
00:51:024 (15) - d
00:52:929 (23) - d
00:58:167 (46,47,48) - d k d
01:01:500 (60,61,62) - kkd
01:12:929 (109,110,111) - dkd
01:14:834 (117,118,119) - dkd
01:15:310 (120,121,122) - dkk
01:24:834 (160) - k



Oni
00:01:740 - the slider velocity multiplire change from 0.65 to be 1.00
00:22:692 - the slider velocity multiplier change from 0.90 to be 1.20
00:49:358 - the slider velocity multiplier change from 1.20 to be 1.40
01:19:834 - the slider velocity multiplier change from 0.90 to be 1.20

00:01:263 (4) - k
00:03:763 (13,14) - dk
00:05:906 (20) - k
00:06:978 (23) - k
00:08:168 (27,28,29,30,31) - d k d k d
00:10:073 (33) - d
00:14:359 (47,48,49) - k d k
00:25:787 (13,14,15,16) - k k d d
00:26:977 (17) - k
00:27:215 (18,19) - dk
00:30:787 (31) - k
00:31:025 (32,33) - dk
00:31:501 (34,35,36,37) - d k d d
00:32:691 (38) - k
00:37:930 (12) - D
00:39:358 (19,20,21) - k k d
00:41:263 (28) - k
00:43:168 (38,39) - k d
00:48:406 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - those notes are too messy. fix them by change the Beat Snap Divisor to be 1/12. so it will make the stream clearly.

see those the pictures

to be

it's better right?

00:53:762 (32) - k
00:54:119 (34) - d
01:01:381 (70) - k
01:01:977 (73) - d
01:02:453 (76) - d
01:02:810 (78) - move to 01:02:572 (77) - and change it to be k
01:02:929 (79) - d
01:03:167 (80,81,82,83,84) - kdkkd
01:03:881 (85) - d
01:05:548 (95) - d
01:07:453 (106) - d
01:09:000 (114) - k
01:10:548 (122,123,124) - ddk
01:11:500 (128) - d
01:12:453 (133) - d
01:15:786 (150) - d
01:16:619 (155) - k
01:17:215 (158,159,160) - kkd
01:18:167 (163) - d
01:18:643 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - d d d k d D

P A N wrote:

มาบอกสิ่งที่ควรเเก้นะครับ

[Easy]

00:36:025 (1) - slider นี้มันโผล่ตั้งเเต่ spin ยังไม่ทันถึงครึ่งเลย เเนะนำให้ลบ slider นี้ทิ้งเเล้ว add note 00:36:501 เเล้วก็ clap โน็คคัวนี้
00:45:549 (1) - เลื่อน spinner ตัวนี้ไปจบที่ 00:47:453 เพราะมันไม่ค่อยเข้ากับเพลงเเล้วลบโน็คที่ 00:47:453 เเละ 00:47:930 มันจะได้ไม่โผล่มาตอนกำลัง spin
01:24:596 , 01:25:072 - add note both time เเล้วก็เริ่ม spin ที่ 01:25:548

[Normal]

00:14:833 (7) - ลบโน็ตที่ 00:15:309 เเล้วให้slide ตัวนี้จบที่ 00:15:309 จังหวะเก่ามันไม่ควรใช้ใน normal
00:47:453 (1,2,3) - finish ทั้ง 3 ตัว? ดูได้จังหวะดี 555

[Insane]

01:25:548 - add note ตรงนี้เเล้วเปลี่ยน spinner ไปเริ่มที่ 01:25:667

โชคดีนะ บาย

Bear wrote:

Hello, this is my first time modding but I hope I'll be of any help.

[Hard]
00:15:548 (1) - After this spinner you should put something that goes along with the drums in the music like you did in the Insane diff, the break is really boring.
01:10:548 (11,12,13) - These three notes are a little too cramped, when I first played it I thought there were 4 notes. Try moving them a bit.
01:16:381 (4,5) - Change the 4th note so that it points upward and delete the 5th note.

[Insane]
00:15:548 - Add a spinner?
00:48:168 (4,12) - This whole stream seems to be completely out of place, I'd rather have notes that go with the vocals here.
00:55:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - The distance is a little too long, shorten it a bit. (Or maybe I just suck at jumps too much).
00:50:786 (7) - This note is just mean.
00:57:929 - The distances between notes in the streams
01:17:215 - Are TOO big.

Maybe this is just my opinion but, the whole "Kiai Time" part seems kinda off.
Some bits aren't even going with the flow of the music. Look over it, I think it needs some work.

Good luck^^

Mono98 wrote:

This is my first time modding sooo please excuse me for some errors I might make.
I tested all the maps and could not find any big mistakes. I think you can send it to pending beatmaps now! Nice song BTW!!

HabiHolic wrote:

sorry late T.T

Guest diff (Hard) done!

Habi's Hrad

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185,47,76017,2,0,L|260:40,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,76731,6,0,P|120:168|72:256,1,150
36,336,77446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,360,77684,2,0,P|228:348|320:264,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,78636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,78874,2,0,P|448:84|496:116,2,112.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,79827,6,0,P|224:108|32:100,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,232,81255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,332,81731,2,0,P|180:256|372:264,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,220,83160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,220,83398,2,0,L|472:136,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83874,12,0,85065,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85541,12,0,89351,0:0:0:0:

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Taiko Mod from my queue >.0

As requested, i'll only mod oni.

[Oni]
First, i would like to mention that we wont use finishes in 1/4 streams, and it's unrankable. So you may want to delete these finishes:
00:37:930 (16)
00:51:262 (19)
00:55:072 (37)
00:56:977 (49)
00:58:881 (6)

Yup, so let's move on to the actual mod.
00:34:120 (1) - this spinner is quite short so i would rather put notes here. e.g. k ddk d d

00:45:549 (1) - please shorten the spinner and add a d at 00:47:453. as we wont hear the sound of the end of the spinner in taiko. this would make it sounds better.

00:54:596 (35) - k , as this is a hard beat compare to 34 and 36, this would sounds better.

01:07:453 - add a k here to fit the high density of whole kiai time

01:08:405 (57,76,85) - add Finish on all of them as 01:10:310 (66). This pattern sounds perfect to me and fits the music.

01:15:429 - add d , as the d k d k d k pattern is quite odd and this could fit the music and emphasize the upcoming hard beat.

That's all :3 good luck

smallboat wrote:

Hi，aonkub555,In-game mod req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

There are inconsistencies in combo colours.(Insane diff)

TitleUnicode inconsistencies,(Check taiko muzukashii title.)

Combo "2" color is similar to the backgrounds .

[Easy] The object isn't snapped:

SPOILER

00:04:351 (3) - Too close,try it:

SPOILER

00:57:929 (4,2,4) - Can be symmetry.
01:06:500 (3,1) - ^
01:25:072 (5) - Away from the center of the last point. Too far.

[Normal] The object isn't snapped:

SPOILER

00:00:548 (1) - Too long, try reduce it?

SPOILER

00:11:970 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

00:26:977 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

00:43:644 (5) - Blanket (6).
00:48:882 (1) - Stack crooked off.
00:55:072 (4) - Suggest use arc slider.
00:56:977 (4) - Blanket 00:57:691 (1) .
01:01:500 (1) - Blanket crooked off.
01:06:977 (3) - Why not stack the 01:05:548 (1) slider end?
01:23:643 (1,2) - Delete,change slider (Because 01:21:738 (6) -is the same rhythm.)

[Habi's Hard] Kiai not snapped:

SPOILER

Suggest add 10% sound.(25% to "35%")

01:25:541 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.)


[Insane] Look insane diff, you forgot insert the last red line.(01:25:548)
A lot of error:

SPOILER

00:01:970 (4) - DS
00:19:231 (2) - Unrankable.
00:19:946 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This part place is not good,suggest replace.
00:25:311 (7,8,9,10) - This part place is not good,suggest replace.
00:26:501 (1,3) - Can be symmetry.
00:27:811 (4,5) - Be a arc with slider end?
00:28:406 (7) - NC
00:30:311 (13) - ^
00:32:215 (18) - ^
00:35:787 (1,2) - Can be symmetry.
00:41:263 (11,12,1) -

SPOILER

00:55:786 (1,2,3,4) -

SPOILER

00:58:405 (10) - (132|220)
01:05:548 (1) - NC
01:09:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/5g4Q6.jpg

01:16:262 (8,9) - Suggest stack.
01:16:619 (10) - ^
01:18:405 (4) - Stack 01:17:929 (3) slider end.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

smallboat wrote:

Hi，aonkub555,In-game mod req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

There are inconsistencies in combo colours.(Insane diff)

TitleUnicode inconsistencies,(Check taiko muzukashii title.) fixed. Also after IRC with aonkub, he renamed his taiko diff as Oni.

Combo "2" color is similar to the backgrounds .

Karia wrote:

Hi. req from In-game

[Easy]

00:04:351 (3) - end at 00:05:541 -
00:06:255 (4) - end at 00:07:446 -
00:30:311 (5) - NC
00:30:787 (1) - remove NC
00:40:787 (1) - ^
00:41:739 (3) - NC
00:44:120 (1) - remove NC?
00:56:024 (1) - remove NC
00:56:977 (3) - NC
01:00:310 (1) - remove NC
01:01:738 (2) - NC
01:08:405 (5) - ^
01:12:215 (9) - ^
01:15:072 (1) - remove NC
01:16:024 (3) - NC
01:18:881 (1) - remove NC
01:19:834 (3) - NC
01:21:738 (1) - remove NC
01:23:167 (1) - ^
01:23:643 (2) - NC

[Normal]

offset : 1732
CS-1 and SV is fast I think.,,,

00:09:112 (3,4,5,6) - hmm...like this?

SPOILER

00:26:501 (6) - NC
00:26:977 (1) - remove NC
00:29:834 (6) - finish on tail
00:48:882 (1) - ^
00:49:834 (2) - NC
00:50:310 (1) - remove NC
00:51:977 (1) - ^
00:53:167 (3) - NC
00:54:119 (1) - remove NC
00:55:786 (1) - ^
00:56:977 (4) - NC
00:56:977 (4,1,2) - this pattern is so hard for Normal I think
00:57:691 (1) - remove NC
00:59:596 (1) - ^
01:00:786 (3) - NC
01:01:500 (1) - remove NC
01:03:643 (1) - ^
01:05:072 (4) - NC
01:05:548 (1) - remove NC
01:07:215 (1) - ^
01:08:405 (3) - NC
01:09:119 (1) - remove NC
01:11:024 (1) - ^
01:12:215 (3) - NC
01:14:834 (1) - remove NC
01:16:262 (3) - NC
01:16:500 (1) - remove NC
01:23:643 (10) - NC
01:30:309 - add a greenline sound 5%


[Habi's Hard]

Widescreen Support : 음..아직 늅매퍼라 잘은 모르지만 스토리보드 안쓰면 이거 체크해제해야한다고 들은듯하네요..

00:04:351 (1) - remove NC
00:05:541 (9) - NC
00:08:398 (1) - remove NC
00:09:112 (11) - NC
00:11:970 (1) - remove NC
00:13:160 (4) - NC
00:16:017 (1) - remove NC
00:20:779 (1) - 첫부분 피니시
00:41:255 (8) - 끝부분 피니시?
00:41:970 (9) - NC
00:42:446 (1) - remove NC
00:45:541 (1) - 클랩?
00:53:160 (1) - 첫부분 피니시
01:00:779 (1) - ^
01:04:589 (1) - ^
01:16:017 (9) - NC
01:16:731 (1) - remove NC
01:23:874 (1) - 음,,,사운드 작게 하고 클랩 넣는건 어떤가요?

Now, 01 : 33...I'm sleepy so I can't modding Insane diff. Sorry ...

Xinely wrote:

yo from m4m here

• 
  General
  offset 65. because there is a object before red line. currently unrankable
  http://puu.sh/5i7Xe.png fix these pls, really unrankable
  Combo 2 so close with combo 1. better if you remove one of them

• 
  Easy
  00:02:446 (2) - move to 00:02:684 - for following vocal properly
  00:08:160 (5) - same too, move to 00:08:398 -
  00:04:351 (3,5) - those sliders really need NC because music is changed
  00:15:541 (1) - finish because cymbal
  00:26:025 (5) - inconsistency spacing (1,07x), must be use 1,0x
  00:30:787 (1) - 84,196 for have same flow with previous, also fix spacing 00:31:739 (2) - this slider (put at 96,48) if you agree with this one
  00:37:930 (1) - consistency spacing pls (:
  00:42:691 (4) - straight slider like 00:41:739 (3) - for better flow
  00:49:834 (2) - SV change really not recommended for Easy diff, well just saying for your next map ~
  00:50:310 (3) - no need finish on tail since no cymbal at that time
  00:53:643 (1,3) - stacked together pls, much better (:
  00:57:929 (4) - no need finish on head since no cymbal at that time
  01:06:024 (2) - 164,296 for natural flow
  01:08:405 (5) - need NC, too long combo
  01:12:215 (9) - ^ , and finish pls, cymbal so loud here
  01:10:786 (7) - better if you try to up this slider. almost offscreen imo
  01:16:977 (4) - 440,104 for better flow?
  01:25:072 (5) - clap for consistency with 01:23:167 (1) -

• 
  Normal
  00:05:541 (2,3,4,5) - completely unrankable because spacing change here, altho 1/2. spacing must be consisten each others
  00:10:779 (5,6) - swap whistle here. i mean (5) no whistle and add whistle in (6)'s head. sounds better
  00:13:160 (3,4) - remove (3) and (4) start at 00:13:160 - . easier imo
  00:15:541 (1) - maybe increase 10% here, i can't hear finish properly
  00:22:692 - you need around 30% volume here.. too low. very low
  00:41:977 (2) - remove, too hard for normal
  00:44:596 (6,7) - NC coz different music+vocal
  00:54:119 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,07x)
  00:56:977 (4,2) - this overlap so ugly and make confuse ;-;
  01:03:643 (1,3) - unstack. much better
  01:13:405 (5) - inconsistency spacing 1,17x
  01:20:310 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern, for my opinion its kinda make confuse
  01:21:738 (6) - need NC, too long
  01:25:548 (1) - end at 01:29:833 - for consistency with Easy diff

• 
  Hard
  00:05:541 (3) - add whistle on head for consistency with 00:01:732 - it feel empty w/o hitsound btw
  00:09:827 (5) - have better flow if you did a curve here, http://puu.sh/5iy0u.jpg
  00:11:017 (8,9) - swap whistle, i mean (8)'s tail have whistle and (9) no whistle. it sounds better
  00:20:779 (1) - finish on head, cymbal appear in that time
  00:22:208 (6,1) - 1/4 jump here kinda hard ><
  00:30:303 (1) - loud piano sound here, add finish or at least whistle?
  00:34:112 (1) - here too ^
  00:37:922 (1) - loud bass and piano here, finish
  00:41:255 (8) - finish on tail, i guess you know why
  00:45:541 (1) - spinner should be end in 00:47:922 - because music changed here
  00:53:160 (1) - finish on head, feel the cymbal
  01:00:779 (1) - same as above
  01:04:589 (1) - here too, so loud cymbal btw
  01:06:255 (4) - err, hear the cymbal in 01:06:493 - , so loud here until i no need use 25% to hear the cymbal. obviously you can't skip this time, must be mapped
  01:08:398 (1) - finish on head
  01:10:303 (5) - ^
  01:13:874 (5) - similar as i mean in 01:06:255 (4) -
  01:16:017 (9) - finish on head
  01:17:684 (3) - here too, a loud cymbal in 01:17:922 - , don't skip this time
  01:21:731 (3) - tbh, no need finish on head. hear the whitetick 01:21:731 - , only piano sound and not really loud
  01:23:398 (5) - and here, finish on tail.. bass, cymbal so loud here
  Rhythm and placement are fine but need hard work for hitsound

• 
  Insane
  00:03:398 (6) - NC pls, too long combo
  00:05:065 (8,9) - this rhythm completely odd to hear cause didn't follow anything, try to use follow vocal instead, http://puu.sh/5iziG.jpg
  note : (1) start on 00:05:065 -
  00:10:065 (5) - obviously need NC because different pattern
  00:11:017 (8) - anti jump? conisistency spacing better here
  00:11:970 (9) - NC cause different pattern
  00:18:874 (1) - finish on head, cymbal here
  00:20:184 (8,10) - make sure stacked with perfectly
  00:20:779 (13) - it's so low but there is cymbal on head
  00:23:406 (2,3) - 1/4 2,0x spacing dafuq
  00:30:311 (1) - so empty w/o hitsound while piano sound so loud here
  Okay, ur pattern actually fun to play but its not really fit with song since this song feel so sad ><

Good Luck ~

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ aonkub~ , Nardo~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.

[first, and General]

• 
  My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
  ~Taiko~
  d is Red Note.
  k is Blue Note.
  and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.

1. Timings
   Make Same...? Sampleset ...
   
   
   “+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
   

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

1. 00:39:588 (58,59,60,61,62) – 58 →delete … and 60~62 →ddk? or kkk?
2. 01:08:397 (74,75,76,77) – ddk? or kkk?
3. 00:45:303 (79) – k cause hearing vocal and little being able to follow 00:45:541 (80) – hihat? (High pitch drums)
4. 01:10:064 (82) – k is the best follow anything
5. 01:25:540 (132) – K? if you like….
   

[Oni]

1. 00:28:168 (20) – d?
2. 01:09:834 (65,66) – kd?
3. 01:16:977 (103,104,105,) –
   kkdk is better cause 01:16:738 (102,103,104) – slur hearing vocal .(same 01:01:500 (21,22,23) - )
   and...
4. 00:55:667 (41) – delete? …or if you like , move ? to 00:56:143 –
5. 01:05:191 (41) -^
   (these moving suggestion makes to (more) impress
   1st pharse 1/4streams 00:49:358 (9) - ~ →dd~~,
   2nd pharse 1/4streams 00:56:977 (49) - ~ → kk~~
   3rd ~~ →d~~~)

That’s all! I thank you for reading it through
Good Luck!

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ aonkub~ , Nardo~~ :3 Hello JuDa~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.

[first, and General]

• 
  My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
  ~Taiko~
  d is Red Note.
  k is Blue Note.
  and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.

1. Timings
   Make Same...? Sampleset ...
   
   
   “+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
   

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

1. 00:39:588 (58,59,60,61,62) – 58 →delete … and 60~62 →ddk? or kkk? retained 58, 60~62 changed to ddk
2. 01:08:397 (74,75,76,77) – ddk? or kkk? changed to kkk
3. 00:45:303 (79) – k cause hearing vocal and little being able to follow 00:45:541 (80) – hihat? (High pitch drums) Good.
4. 01:10:064 (82) – k is the best follow anything fixed
5. 01:25:540 (132) – K? if you like…. no change
   

That’s all! I thank you for reading it through
Good Luck!

regenz wrote:

:) IRC mod

SPOILER

16:01 aonkub555: หวัดดีคับคุณregenz ช่วยม็อดแมพให้ได้ไหมคับ
16:01 regenz: ตอนนี้ยังไม่ว่างเลยอะครับ
16:01 regenz: เพลงไหนหรอ
16:02 *aonkub555 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/231775 KOKIA - Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi (TV Size)]
16:02 aonkub555: นี่อะ
16:02 regenz: คนทำฮาดนี่ฝรั่งเปล่า
16:03 aonkub555: น่าจะเกาหลีมั้ง
16:03 regenz: ตอนนี้ยังไม่ว่างนะเดี๋ยวทำอย่างอื่นอยู่เดี๋ยวเสร็จแล้วจะดูให้
16:04 aonkub555: ไม่เป็นไรคับ
17:14 regenz: กินข้าวก่อนนะเดวดูให้
17:14 aonkub555: ok~
17:32 aonkub555: รอแปบนะครับ เดี๋ยวผมอัพโหลดแมพแปบนะครับ ตะกี้เพิ่งเห็นคนมาม็อดให้
17:33 regenz: ได้ๆๆ
17:33 regenz: ถ้ามีแก้ไฟล์ในเพลง
17:33 regenz: บอกนะต้องรีโหลด
17:46 regenz: เสร็จยังอัพเเดท
17:50 aonkub555: อัพเดทไม่ได้เลยอะ มันค้างที่creating preview
17:50 aonkub555: = =
17:51 regenz: เดวลองก่อนนะ
17:51 aonkub555: เห็นว่าเวิพล่มยุอะ
17:51 aonkub555: ได้ๆ
17:53 regenz: เป็นเหมือนกัน
17:57 regenz: ไม่ได้กันหลายคนเลย
17:57 regenz: ม๊อดก่อนได้เปล่า
17:57 regenz: หรือยกยอด
17:57 aonkub555: ok~
17:57 regenz: รอเซิฟดีก่อน
17:58 aonkub555: ถ้าอัพเดทแล้วมาดูให้อีกได้ป่าว
18:01 regenz: โดดน่าเกลียดจริงๆ
18:02 regenz: เล่นไม่ได้หรอก Ar7
18:05 aonkub555: ตรงไหนที่น่าเกลียดล่ะ
18:05 regenz: แทบทั้งหมดเลยอะ
18:05 regenz: คือ overmap โคตรๆๆๆๆๆๆ
18:06 regenz: ถ้าจะเอาแนวนี้จริงๆยังไงก็ต้อง AR9
18:06 regenz: ar 7 เล่นไม่ได้แน่นอน
18:08 regenz: โดดเยอะ แล้ว AR 7 ตาจะลาย
18:08 aonkub555: ผมว่าar9นี่ไม่ไหวมากกว่าอะ มันมองไม่ทันเลย
18:08 aonkub555: โฟล่ไวเกิน
18:08 aonkub555: โผล่
18:08 regenz: หรอ ar9 ผ่านนะ
18:08 regenz: แต่ ar7 ตาย
18:09 aonkub555: กำ= = ผมว่าเพ่โหดเกินไปแล้วอะ
18:09 regenz: โห
18:09 regenz: กากแล้วนะ
18:10 regenz: อ้อ
18:10 regenz: สำคัญเลย
18:10 regenz: เสียง hitsound เบาเกินนะ
18:10 regenz: กดแล้วไม่ออกอะไรเลย
18:11 aonkub555: ปรับเป็นเท่าไหร่ดีล่ะ
18:12 regenz: เดี๋ยวนะกำลังลอง
18:12 regenz: วางโน๊ต
18:14 regenz: ุ65 อย่างต่ำ
18:15 regenz: เดี๋ยวจะให้ใส่เสียงกลองเพิ่ม
18:15 regenz: ทำ custom hitsound เป็นไหม
18:15 aonkub555: ไม่เป็นอะ
18:15 regenz: โอเค
18:15 regenz: เดี๋ยวสอนให้
18:16 regenz: แปปนึงนะ
18:16 aonkub555: ที่มันต้องหาไฟล์เสียงรึป่าวปะ
18:16 regenz: อาแค่ท่อนฮุคนี่แหละ
18:16 regenz: ใช่
18:16 regenz: เดี๋ยวหาให้
18:23 regenz: http://puu.sh/5jT70.rar
18:23 regenz: โหลดแล้ว
18:23 regenz: เเอาไฟล์
18:24 regenz: ไปใส่ไว้ที่โฟลเดอร์นะ
18:25 aonkub555: โฟร์เดอร์ของแมพเหรอ
18:25 regenz: ใช่
18:25 regenz: ที่ใส่พวก สกินน่ะ
18:25 regenz: http://puu.sh/5jTag.png ยัดลงไปในรูปเลย
18:25 regenz: เอา ไฟล์ rar ออกด้วย (ลืม)
18:27 aonkub555: ok ใส่ละ
18:27 regenz: http://puu.sh/5jTdA.png
18:27 regenz: ปรับเสียงตรงที่มีรูปดาวนะ
18:28 regenz: เอาเป็น 95 เปอ
18:28 regenz: แล้ว ไปเลือก sample set ให้เป็น custom 2
18:29 regenz: เสร็จละบอก
18:30 aonkub555: เลือกsample setอันไหนล่ะ normal soft drum
18:30 regenz: soft
18:31 regenz: ตามรูป
18:31 regenz: แล้วเลือกช่อง 2
18:31 aonkub555: เรียบร้อย
18:31 regenz: แล้วใส่เสียงนะ
18:31 regenz: แคลป
18:31 regenz: ให้ใส่ ที่ บีท 2 4 ของห้องเพลง
18:31 regenz: http://puu.sh/5jTlN.jpg
18:32 regenz: เส้นขาวใหญ่คือ 1
18:32 regenz: ขาวเล็ก คือ 2 3 4
18:33 aonkub555: ใส่แคฟขาวเว้นขาวสินะ
18:33 regenz: ใช่
18:33 regenz: ใส่ให้หมดเลยนะ
18:33 regenz: เส้นขาวใหญ่ใส่ เสียงฉาบ
18:33 regenz: ต้องคอยฟังนะ
18:33 regenz: บางทีไม่มี
18:33 regenz: แต่ส่วนมากจะไปลงเส้นนั้น
18:34 regenz: เสียงแคลปเปลี่ยนยังล่ะ
18:35 regenz: 01:08:405 (3,4) - ในกรณีตัวนี้
18:35 regenz: มันวางไม่ได้
18:35 regenz: ไม่ต้องไปใส่นะ
18:35 regenz: ถ้าไปใส่ตรง เส้นฟ้า
18:35 regenz: จะแย่กว่าไม่ใส่
18:35 regenz: 01:09:596 (2) - พวกที่ลงเส้นแดงแบบนี้อย่าลืมเอาเสียงออกด้วย
18:36 aonkub555: เปลี่ยนเป็นเสียงกลองอ่ะ
18:36 regenz: ใช่นั่นแหละถูกแล้ว
18:38 regenz: เสียงนะ
18:39 regenz: เริ่มเพลง ถึง 00:15:303 50
18:39 regenz: เริ่มเพลง ถึง 00:15:303 ห้าสิบ
18:39 regenz: เริ่มเพลง ถึง 00:15:303
18:39 regenz: 50
18:39 regenz: ท่อนฮุค 95
18:39 regenz: นอกนั้น 80
18:41 regenz: เสร็จแล้วบอกนะ
18:42 aonkub555: ไอืม
18:43 regenz: ต่อไปเสียงวิสเทิล
18:43 regenz: เสียงกิ๊กน่ะ
18:43 regenz: เซพดิฟแยกไว้ก่อนนะ
18:43 regenz: เซพแยกไว้เลยเดี๋ยวไม่ถูกใจ
18:50 regenz: มันลากยาวๆๆแก้ทีละหลายๆเส้นได้นะ
18:50 regenz: ไม่ต้องกดทำทีละเส้น
18:50 regenz: มันนาน
18:53 aonkub555: กดตรงไหนอะ แบบนั้น
18:53 regenz: ก็กด คลิกเลือกมาสัก จุด
18:53 regenz: แล้วกด shift
18:53 regenz: ค้าง
18:53 regenz: แล้วคลิกซ้ายไปอีกจุด
18:53 regenz: มันก็จะรวบทุกเเส้น
18:54 regenz: ที่เลือก
18:54 aonkub555: อ่อ
18:54 aonkub555: เข้าใจล่ะ ลืมไปอะ ว่ามีวิธีนี้
18:54 aonkub555: = =
18:54 regenz: ก็ว่านานจัด
18:54 regenz: 55
18:54 aonkub555: โอเค แก้หมดละ
18:56 aonkub555: เพราะงี้แหละ เลยเป็นแมพเปอร์เก่งๆไม่ได้ซักที ทำไปซักพักก็ลืมสูตรหมด = =
18:56 regenz: ทำบ่อยๆ
18:56 regenz: เซพอีกดิฟยัง
18:56 regenz: จะได้ให้คำแนะนำเรื่องเสียง
18:57 regenz: เซพซ้ำเป็น insane 2
18:57 regenz: เเลย
18:57 aonkub555: เซพแล้ว~
18:57 aonkub555: ชื่อดิฟ ฝกดถ
18:58 regenz: ช่วงแรก
18:59 regenz: เสียงมันเงียบๆๆ
18:59 regenz: ที่มีแต่โวคอลน่ะ
18:59 regenz: ใส้ วิสเทิลได้
18:59 regenz: ซอฟ
18:59 regenz: 00:00:541 (1,2,3) - ใส่วิสเทิลที่หัวหมด
18:59 regenz: ใส่ตามไปก่อนนะ
18:59 regenz: ยังไงก็ดิฟทดสอบ
19:00 regenz: 00:02:684 (5) - ใส่หัวกับหาง
19:00 regenz: 00:03:874 (2) - หัว
19:02 regenz: 00:03:874 (2) - ตรงกลางด้วย หางด้วย
19:02 regenz: 00:05:064 (3) - หัวหาง
19:03 regenz: 00:05:541 (4,5,6) - เฉพาะ หัว
19:03 regenz: 00:06:255 (6) - หาง
19:03 aonkub555: ขอโทษครับ ตอนนี้ผมมีเรื่องด่วนต้องออกเกมทันที ถ้ายังไงก็ม็อดไว้ในกระทู้ผมทีนะ ขอบคุณครับ
19:03 regenz: โอเค

ต่อนะ ใส่ตามนี้

00:06:969 (7) -
00:07:207 (8) - หัว
00:07:684 (9) - หัวหาง
00:08:398 (1) - มีอยู่แล้ว
00:08:636 (2,3) -
00:09:112 (4) - หัวหาง
00:10:303 (2) - หัวหาง
00:11:017 (4) - หัวหาง
00:12:684 (2,3) - หัว
00:13:517 (4) - หัว กลาง หาง
00:14:588 (5) -
00:14:826 (6) - หัวหาง

แล้วก็ AR + 1 อย่างต่ำขอ 8 7 เล่นไม่ได้จริงๆเพราะว่า มันช้าไปแล้วโน๊ตเยอะๆ จั้มเยอะๆ มันจะตาลาย

00:22:692 (1) - หลังจากตรงนี้ก็อย่าลืมใส่เสียงแคลปตามที่บอก (เสียงกลอง)
01:25:786 (1) - เพิ่มเส้นเสียงตรงนี้ทำให้ สปินเสียงเบาลง (เท่าไหร่ก็ได้ตามใจ)
ใส่ HabiHolic ใน tags ด้วยนะ ทุกดิฟเลย เพราะมีเกสดิฟ
เท่านี้พอก่อน

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m

[General]

You should check out AIMOD, and fix the issue related to this: http://puu.sh/5k5pS.png all diffs within the same mapset should have the same uninherited timing sections

[Insane]


Overall, pretty inconsistent map, I didnt really enjoyed it. Just a personal opinion, not like you asked for it anyways.

00:14:826 (6) - This slider should end at 00:15:184 -
00:22:692 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - What happened to the hitsound of these objects? Please consider adding at least a clap every 2/4 and 4/4 of the rhythm
01:00:786 (5) - The rhythm of this should be similar to this 01:08:405 (3,4) - i have no idea why you mapped it like this.

[Hard]

00:01:731 (1) - This slider should start at 00:01:493 -
00:02:207 - If you do the above, then add a note here

[Normal]

Your chorus in this diff is a bit hard, almost as hard as your hard diff, i would recommend you to tone it down a little bit, and make it more in the middle ground between your hard and easy

00:11:017 (6) - Object offscreen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1105978, a big big big no, move it up
01:15:548 (2) - This is also... a bit offscreen, move it a bit more to the right

Yo, from my Queue.

Easy

Overall I feel that you should tweak the sliders into different patterns. Just seeing it in a straight line doesn't look good in my eyes. Also I feel like you should add a little more space between each note, its too close in my opinion.

Also I am assuming that you are following the vocals.

00:00:541 (1) - Don't really know, but I find the ending of it very awkward. Extend to 00:01:969.
00:04:350 (1) - Sound strange for me, reduce to 00:05:541 if you want.
00:10:064 (2) - Move to 00:10:515
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874. Then try adding a slider at 00:16:017 to 00:16:493
00:25:072 (4) - Between these long sliders you should add a clap for consistency. PM me In-game if you need help on this
00:26:501 (5) - Hit finish?
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:43:168 (4) - Clap on tail
00:44:120 (5) - ^
01:11:262 (3) - Remove hit Finish
01:25:548 - Consider reducing this spinner.

Normal

Is it just me, or is this pretty difficult?
00:02:445 (3) - Move slider to 00:03:398
00:10:064 (4) - Move to 00:10:303 and remove the circle after it.
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874
00:26:501 - Finish
00:30:311 - ^
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:50:310 - In my opinion having a slider speed change is very difficult for beginners. Consider changing it back to normal.
00:56:024 - Remove finish
00:57:929 - Move the slider, having it behind the previous slider is confusing on normal. Also remove the finish.
01:16:977 - Remove Finish
01:17:929 - Finish
01:19:834 - Finish
01:23:643 - Finish

I haven't found anything wrong on Hard except some missing hitsounds, and I can't really do insane. If you want I can do hitsounds on it, but right overall the beatmap seems pretty inconsistent. I wish you good luck though

Oriance wrote:

Yo, from my Queue.

Easy

Overall I feel that you should tweak the sliders into different patterns. Just seeing it in a straight line doesn't look good in my eyes. Also I feel like you should add a little more space between each note, its too close in my opinion.

Also I am assuming that you are following the vocals.

00:00:541 (1) - Don't really know, but I find the ending of it very awkward. Extend to 00:01:969.
00:04:350 (1) - Sound strange for me, reduce to 00:05:541 if you want.
00:10:064 (2) - Move to 00:10:515
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874. Then try adding a slider at 00:16:017 to 00:16:493
00:25:072 (4) - Between these long sliders you should add a clap for consistency. PM me In-game if you need help on this
00:26:501 (5) - Hit finish?
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:43:168 (4) - Clap on tail
00:44:120 (5) - ^
01:11:262 (3) - Remove hit Finish
01:25:548 - Consider reducing this spinner.

Normal

Is it just me, or is this pretty difficult?
00:02:445 (3) - Move slider to 00:03:398
00:10:064 (4) - Move to 00:10:303 and remove the circle after it.
00:15:541 - Very awkward placement, move to 00:16:969 and reduce it to 00:18:874
00:26:501 - Finish
00:30:311 - ^
00:34:120 - Should do something else other than a slider, it feels out of place.
00:50:310 - In my opinion having a slider speed change is very difficult for beginners. Consider changing it back to normal.
00:56:024 - Remove finish
00:57:929 - Move the slider, having it behind the previous slider is confusing on normal. Also remove the finish.
01:16:977 - Remove Finish
01:17:929 - Finish
01:19:834 - Finish
01:23:643 - Finish

I haven't found anything wrong on Hard except some missing hitsounds, and I can't really do insane. If you want I can do hitsounds on it, but right overall the beatmap seems pretty inconsistent. I wish you good luck though

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
Hi

[Habi's Hard]
00:01:255 - add note here? Why?
00:54:834 (4) - end in 00:55:310 - and add note in 00:55:548 - ? no. i don't like patten
01:10:310 (5) - same ^ / ^
01:17:691 (3) - ^ / ^

Goodluck

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m

[Hard]

00:01:731 (1) - This slider should start at 00:01:493 - / Hmm... no thanks
00:02:207 - If you do the above, then add a note here / no. bad...

-Gamu- wrote:

Hello~

nice song and map <3


But, There is a bit of a problem...



An error has occurred in the title. You should fix it.

-Kirito wrote:

hi for my queues

[General]
- this will give you a good quality video.Download Oh thank you , it's very good quality video , but the brightness look dark a litter bit~
- bpm offset -165 change. delete all else bpm
- Title a "ใใฃใ๏ผ‘ใคใฎๆณใ (TV Size)" there was an error. change fix now

box

[Easy]
00:20:779 - 00:22:207 - add a combo here this
00:43:168 - clap add
00:48:406 (1) - whistle add
00:48:882 (2) - clap add
00:59:358 (1) - NC remove

[Normal]
00:04:350 (1) - NC remove
00:06:255 (1,1) - ^
00:52:691 (2) - object's end is not snapped fix now
00:57:929 - finish remove
01:03:643 (1,2) - can be confusing for beginners. okey~ fix

[Habi's Hard]
넌 내가 모딩만하면 니 겟난이 있냐
01:00:786 (1) - 앞에 피니시 추가
01:04:596 (1) - ^
01:08:405 (1) - 앞에 휘슬 추가
01:10:310 (5) - 앞에 피니시 추가
01:19:238 - 휘슬 추가
01:23:167 (4) - 클랩 추가
01:19:834 (1,3,5) - 크랩도 대충 해놨네 왜 크랩선에 안맞추고 드럼선에 맞추냐?

[Drama]
00:13:517 (4) - unrank Hm... i'm not sure about it , but i have been ask bat for about it , the bat say it's okey
00:18:874 (1) - add slide after finish earlier, finish later deleted 00:20:779 (13) -
00:20:779 (13,1) - NC change
00:22:692 - whistle add? maybe i rather should finish because i hear sound cymbals
00:26:501 - ^
00:36:501 - clap add
00:39:834 (6) - NC add
00:43:644 (6) - ^?
00:47:930 (2,6) - clap add
00:48:644 (5,7) - whistle add (this vocal)
00:52:691 - clap add
00:55:786 (1,2,3,4) - wow, jump..
01:06:024 (1) - NC remove

good lucky~/

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
Look at Drama diff and fix title problem please ←_←....
[Drama]
00:02:684 (5) - add whistle at middle
00:05:064 (3,4) - already touch HP so move down litter bit
00:09:112 (4) - ^
00:08:398 (1,2,3) - try to use more close space
00:13:160 (3) - whistle at the end
tyr to use 30% volume after 00:15:541 (1) -
00:18:874 (1) - delete finish or use low volume and add finish at begin
00:21:255 (3,4) - hard to read try to use smooth slider and close space
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127017
something like this ._.^
00:25:549 (8) - some rhythm like this will work better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127022
00:29:120 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127024 【just look at rhythm】
00:32:930 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127025 【just look at rhythm】
00:48:168 (3,4) - too far
00:56:262 (3,4) - too far
01:00:786 (5) - finish
01:06:024 (2) - already touch HP so move down litter bit
01:08:405 (3) - finish delete clap
beautiful song, shouldn’t have too much big jump

[Hard]
01:21:262 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127043 some rhythm like this well be funny DD

[Normal]
00:10:064 (x) - add note
00:12:445 (2) - some rhythm like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127047
now just too hard
00:51:738 (3,1,2) - space
00:56:024 (2) - delete finish
01:03:643 (1,2,3) - use same space like before
01:06:977 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:20:786 (3,4,5) - ^
01:22:691 (2,3,4) - ^
01:24:596 (6,7,8) - ^

[Easy]
00:04:350 (1) - end at 00:05:541
00:10:303 (2) - move 2 to here
00:13:160 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127056 rhythm

-Kirito wrote:

hi for my queues

[Habi's Hard]
넌 내가 모딩만하면 니 겟난이 있냐 /ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:00:786 (1) - 앞에 피니시 추가 / 수정
01:04:596 (1) - ^ / ^
01:08:405 (1) - 앞에 휘슬 추가 / 어색해서 안고침
01:10:310 (5) - 앞에 피니시 추가 / ㅇㅇ
01:19:238 - 휘슬 추가 / ㅇㅇ
01:23:167 (4) - 클랩 추가 / ㅇㅇ
01:19:834 (1,3,5) - 크랩도 대충 해놨네 왜 크랩선에 안맞추고 드럼선에 맞추냐? / 슬라 힛사 제거했음

good lucky~/

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ

[Hard]
01:21:262 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1127043 some rhythm like this well be funny DD / Don't like patten No Fixed

-Umi- wrote:

Hi hi sorry for delay >3</

Habi's Hard

- 00:57:691 (2,3,4) - nazi but make them parallel / no
- 01:00:310 (7) - make a curve ? and then blanket with 01:00:786 (1) - ? / Ok!
- 01:16:024 (9,1) - swap NC / Ok!
- good hard :3 / Thanks!!

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:たった１つの想い (TV Size)
Artist:KOKIA
ArtistUnicode:KOKIA
Creator:aonkub555
Version:Habi's Hard
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Tags:opening HabiHolic Nardoxyribonucleic
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