1. Hard (4,66 stars, 313 notes)
2. Normal (2,94 stars, 187 notes)

• • Set the same combo colors in both diffs.
  • Try to add some tags.

• • 00:12:140 (1/end) - Remove whistle and add a green timing section (normal sampleset, 5% volume)
  • 00:38:719 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 later.
  • 01:24:380 (1,2) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:51:368 (2) - End this slider at 01:51:641 and add a repeat.
  • 02:56:248 (x) - Add a circle.

• • 00:12:140 (1/end) - Remove whistle and add a green timing section (normal sampleset, 5% volume)
  • 00:51:123 (2) - Move this circle at x:106 y:282...
  • 00:51:668 (4) - ... and this circle at x:8 y:176. (anyway, here 01:44:000 and here 02:20:000 you didn't make any kind of jump so you shouldn't make them here too, but feel free to do as you please)
  • 02:56:248 (x) - Add a circle.

1. The BG's resolution is 1200x750 while the allowed resolution range is 800x600 to 1024x768, which means the width is too large. You should reduce it.

1. 00:27:951 (4) - Won't it be confusing if the repeat is placed near 00:27:134 (2,3)?
2. 00:30:132 (1) - Shorten this by 1/2 beats? It follows the vocal better than while it's still a 3/2 slider, and it feels far less awkward like that.
3. 00:35:584 (2) - Split this into a circle and a 1/2 slider, 1/2 beats after the circle? Reason's same as above.
4. 00:38:583 - Add clap?
5. 00:42:672 (1) - ^
6. 00:43:762 - ^
7. 00:45:398 - I don't think we need a finish on the tick here. The music doesn't support it, IMO.
8. 00:47:306 - Add clap?
9. 00:51:395 - ^
10. 00:56:847 - ^
11. 01:01:209 - ^
12. 01:09:387 - Remove the finish and clap here? I don't know why, but with them there, there's a weird clap sound 1/4 beats after this spot...
13. 01:24:380 (1) - This seriously feels awkward because a new stanza comes on the middle of this slider. What about changing this to a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
14. 01:23:563 (2) - Finish?
15. 01:54:094 (2) - Drag the middle and last anchor point 1 grid (at Small size) to the right so the blanket-ish pattern of 01:53:549 (1,2) will look better?
16. 01:55:730 (1) - Add clap?
17. 02:17:538 - ^
18. 02:55:702 (2) - Add clap? (If you follow the hitsound suggestions here, do them on the Hard diff too.)

1. 00:34:494 (1) - This slider is partially out-of-gameplay field. Yes, not just off-grid.
2. 00:44:035 (4) - ^
3. 00:59:028 (2) - ^
4. 01:02:845 (1) - ...Do we even need the red anchor at the end?
5. 01:20:019 (7) - Same as Normal's 01:24:380 (1).
6. 01:24:380 (1) - ^
7. 02:56:248 - Add circle?

1. some notes had completely overlapping. this is unrankable.
   like 00:22:772 (3,4) - 00:24:953 (7,8) -
   you must change stack leniency to 0.4 or more.

• General
  
  You should REALLY do an easy diff with less than 3.0 star rating.
  Add "meteora" to source, remove it from tags and add something there, like "english rock"

• Normal
  
  00:15:412 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders, they are easier to read for newbies.
  00:19:228 (4) - Overlap, avoid this on normals and easys.
  00:31:223 (2) - ^
  00:35:584 (2) - ^
  00:38:856 (4) - ^, though this one is less problematic
  00:42:672 (1,2,1) - overlap, make something different, i dunno maybe make 1 and 2 a slider?
  00:54:121 (1,2,3) - Make it curve like this, ;D http://puu.sh/21Syw
  01:08:842 (4) - No, just, no. This must be changed. No more than 2 repeats on normal, also you're using a blue tick, which is higly not recommended for easy diffs. I would suggest you to make this a long slider that ends at 01:09:387. http://puu.sh/21SBq
  01:26:561 (4) - Avoid blue ticks.
  01:34:467 (2) - ^
  02:48:615 (2) - Overlap
  02:56:248 - Add a circle

• Hard
  
  00:47:579 (7) - This isn't bad, but can be pretty confusing to read.
  00:55:212 (3) - Avoid slider overlaps
  01:00:255 (5) - Move this to the red tick (or you can make a stream here adding a note at the red tick)
  01:18:383 (2,4) - It's fine, but can be confusing to read. I would suggest you to change it, you have lots of screen to place notes. This happens more times throughout the song, and I won't repeat myself further, you get the idea.
  01:46:461 (6) - Change to something else, it feels out of place.
  01:48:369 (4) - Move to red tick (or you can make a stream here adding a note at the red tick)
  01:52:595 (5) - ^
  02:47:115 (8) - Sounds bad, move this to the red tick.
  02:56:248 - Add a circle

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi there, mod time as requested, sorry for the late >_<

[Normal]
00:13:503 (2) - What about making this kind of sliders straight, curved looks a bit squeezed, if you make it straight, make the flow lead to the next object, maybe like this.

00:22:499 (2) - ^ Both done
00:55:212 (3) - Flip this vertically? Flow would be better doing this imo.
01:08:842 (4) - You can make this a 1/2 slider with one repeat, short sliders with many repeats can be a bit confusing, specially being this the lowest diff in the set, newbies would be playing this.
01:25:198 - A circle is missing here, that beat feels so lonely~ Added

Disagreed with others

Hitsounds suggestions.

Click :3

00:23:590 (4) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end
00:24:408 (5) - Remove clap
00:27:951 (4) - Remove clap in the beginning
00:33:403 (3) - ^
00:37:493 (3) - ^
00:36:675 (1) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:37:220 (2)
00:42:672 (1) - Clap here.
00:43:217 (1) - Clap in the end
00:44:035 (2) - Remove clap here.
00:46:216 (3) - Remove clap in the beginning.
01:30:650 (1) - Clap in the begining
01:32:286 (3) - Remove clap in the beginning.
01:39:374 (2) - Clap in the begining
02:00:637 (3) - You forgot a finish in the end of this, I think.
02:02:272 (4) - Remove the clap in the end and put it in the beginning
02:03:635 (3) - Remove clap here and put it in 02:04:453 (4)
02:12:631 (1) - Clap in the end
02:13:449 (2) - Remove clap
02:14:812 (1) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end (Keep the finish)
02:15:630 (2) - Remove clap
02:16:993 (1) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end (Keep the finish)
02:17:811 (2) - Remove clap
02:22:445 (2) - You forgot a clap here.
02:23:535 (1) - Remove clap.

Won't change these hitsounds ><

"Nazi" stuff

Click :3

00:59:573 (4) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:296 y:160 and the last to x:352 y:184
01:06:661 (3) - The red node would look better being in the middle of this.
01:54:094 (2) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:80 y:216 and the last to x:144 y:216
02:14:812 (1) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:432 y:104 and the last to x:384 y:168 (Remember fix spacing if you do this.)
02:17:811 (2) - For blanket: Move the last to x:272 y:280
02:39:891 (2) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:200 y:112 and the last to x:200 y:48

No changes

[Hard]
00:12:686 (1) - You can shorten this slider by 1/4 and put a circle in 00:13:231 Sounds not what i was after
00:14:049 (3) - I don't think this stack is good, make it like 00:15:412 (2) No because i would need to destroy my whole pattern for this, and the 2nd one is on purpose
01:08:842 (3,4,5,6,7) - You can make this stream shorter, like you did in the other ones after this The stream follows the rythm

Hitsounds suggestions.

Click :3

00:21:954 (1) - Clap here
00:22:227 (2) - Remove clap
00:24:135 (6) - ^
00:24:953 (7) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:25:225 (8)
00:29:314 (3) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:29:587 (4)
00:31:223 (3) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:31:768 (4)
00:35:312 (2) - Remove clap
00:36:675 (1) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:37:220 (2)
00:42:672 (1) - Clap here.
00:43:217 (3) - Clap in the end
00:44:035 (4) - Remove clap
00:45:398 (1) - Clap in the end
00:46:216 (2) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end
00:47:306 (6) - Remove clap
00:56:302 (1) - I think this clap shouldn't be here. (Finish would fit more)
01:02:845 (1) - ^
01:05:025 (1) - ^
01:06:934 (4) - ^
01:09:251 (6) - Remove the clap here.
01:20:019 (7) - Remove the clap here and put it in 01:19:746 (6) -
01:21:654 (10) - Remove the clap in the reverse and put in the end
01:22:745 (2) - Remove the clap here and put it in 01:23:017 (3) -
01:23:290 (4) - Remove the clap in the beginning.
01:23:835 (5) - Put clap in the end
01:24:380 (1) - Remove clap
01:25:471 (3) - ^
01:44:280 - 02:06:089 - This part is different, no claps in 4th beat like in the others?
02:06:089 (1) - Finish in the beginning
02:07:179 (3) - ^
02:08:269 (5) - I think finish is enough, remove clap
02:09:087 (7) - Finish in the reverse
02:21:218 (7) - Remove clap
In the last kiai there are some missing claps in 4th beat too, they're put in the downbeat.

Like Normal

That's all from my part, good luck /o/

Gero wrote:

M4M sorry for the late :C
all are suggestions >//< the map is really very good

[General]

More linkin Park :B!

[Normal]

(*) 00:27:951 (4) - i think this is a bit confusing for new players, the reaction of new players would go to reverse so I think it is confusing
(*) 00:34:494 (1) - your intention to make the perfect blanket is good, but break the snap distance which is bad so I would recommend move elsewhere The tiny distance change doesnt matter because overall you can see any difference when playing
(*) 01:55:730 (1) - ^ Same
(*) 00:36:675 (1) - check the setting distance here
(*) 01:42:100 (1,2) - why not try this:

SPOILER

looks much better

(*) 02:56:248 - you could add a note here, I think I need, if you do that adds a finish

[Hard]

(*) 01:20:019 (1) - NC Done
(*) 02:08:269 (1) - ^ Done
(*) 02:56:248 - Same The normal!

that's all, Good map and song More Linkin Park
Good lucky >< Give star :3

1. I think you should move Meteora to tags. This is an album name, not a source. o3o
2. Enable letterbox during breaks? It will not hurt your bg + it's more common for long maps without SB.

• 
  note: Normal is the EASIEST diff here. It's important part in my mod.

1. 00:21:954 (1) - as long as this diff is the easiest, you should make it beginner-friendly. Overlap with spinner hitburst makes 00:21:954 (1) - invisible for beginners. Please move (1) somewhere else!
2. 00:42:672 (1,2,1) - ULTRA-NAZI - first of all, it's too far from spinner-centre it's some kind of stress for beginners. secondly, there's stack which will confuse players a lot.
3. 01:06:661 (3) - I'd use here slider and circle instead (or 1/2 slider with reverse) to follow vocals closer. example see, it's following vocals better \o3o/
4. 01:08:842 (4) - this slider is too short + 1/4 objects in easiest diff is too hard! reverse-arrow will appear/disappear too quickly. It will stress players a lot. :< (same for 01:26:561 (5) - (01:34:467 (2) - this one feels TOO fast and off rhythm, btw) - )
5. 02:07:179 (2) - try to end this slider at 02:07:724 - to follow vocals. I feel like they end exactly at this point. (02:08:013 - and add circle here to recover missed beat)
6. 02:56:248 - if you have a fountain here, it's quite reasonable to have circle here as well, right?

1. Sometimes you use low spacing for streams, sometimes you don't. 02:01:182 (4,5,6,7,1) - /02:20:809 (4,5,6,7) /01:43:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - - and sometimes you stack them. try to keep them consistent? (same sound = similar pattern \o3o/)
2. OD and HP Drain +1 it will fit with your hythm and patterns, also it makes map more interesting to play.
3. 01:48:369 - I feel like circle here will fit really good, think about it, please! It will follow rhythm of the map and song
4. 01:51:913 (3) - nazi - ctrl+g (reverse) this slider, so you will have consistent jumpy pattern that fits here! ;3/

1. 00:12:686 (1) - Try to place this slider more to the center, it's too hard for beginners to move to the angle already after spinner, it might be too hard to reach, try to make it this way instead to fix this problem.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:683 (3,4) - It's better to avoid stacking notes like this on the easiest difficulty of the mapset since they could confuse beginners, make them this way to avoid the problem instead.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:951 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and lyrics change.
4. 00:30:132 (1,2) - Do not stack sliders this way on the easiest difficulty, they are absolutely confusing for beginners and too hard for the easiest difficulty, here's what I got to fix this problem.
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:494 (1,2) - Again, same reason as above, try to make it this way.
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:56:847 (4) - New combo should go here due to the lyrics change and due to the new stanza.
7. 00:57:393 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards since you won't need it.
8. 01:08:842 (4) - This slider might be confusing for the easiest difficulty due to the many repeats, try making something else please.
9. 01:33:376 (1,2,3) - This pattern has three different kind of sliders, I'm not sure if this is okay for the easiest difficulty, make them this way perhaps? Much better imo.
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:49:187 (4) - New combo should go here due to the lyrics change and due to the new stanza.
11. 01:49:732 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards since you won't need it.
12. 01:51:368 (2) - New combo should go here due to the lyrics change and due to the new stanza.
13. 02:03:363 (2) - You're missing a clap here, make sure to add it.
14. 02:03:635 (3) - Remove the clap from this slider end, doesn't follow anything and sounds too random.
15. 02:04:453 (4) - Clap should go here then.
16. 02:05:271 (6) - Missing clap on slider end, again.
17. 02:12:086 (4) ~ 02:18:628 (3) - Hitsounds on this part are inconsistent from the rest of the difficulty, please make them consistent like the rest of the map.
18. 02:17:811 (2) - This slider is off-screen, move it up a bit to fix this problem. Look at the screen, you can see it's off-screen from test mode.
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:26:261 (4) - Missing clap on slider begin, add it here as well.
20. 02:43:708 (1) - Too hard to hit after spinner for the easiest difficulty, make sure to move it near to the center to fix this problem.
21. 02:43:708 (1,2,3) - This pattern is missing hitsounds, add some claps like you did on the rest of your map.
22. 02:46:707 (1,2,3,1,2) - This pattern is way too hard for the easiest difficulty and even for a Normal, the stacks are way too confusing for beginners, here's the fix I got for you to fix it.
    SPOILER

    
23. 02:52:431 (1) - Too hard to hit after spinner for the easiest difficulty, make sure to move it near to the center to fix this problem.
24. 02:52:431 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is missing hitsounds once again, make sure to add them.
25. 02:56:248 - Kiai should end here and also you should add a note here with the finish for a better ending, where it ends right now it's totally not good enough.

1. 00:12:686 (1,2,3) - This pattern has the same spacing but yet the timeline is different, that might be really confusing, change the spacing between (1) and (2) to make it easier to read.
2. 00:17:047 (1) - Missing finish on slider begin, make sure to add it to follow the strong beat of the song.
3. 00:42:672 (1) - It seems like you're missing a clap here as well, fix that.
4. 00:46:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels too random and not so creative, make it this way to make it more interesting to play.
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:50:850 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, make sure to fix it through using the distance snap correctly.
6. 00:54:121 (1,2) - These could be stacked much better than this together.
7. 00:56:302 (1) - Remove the clap from this slider begin and add a finish instead, to follow the strong beat of the song.
8. 00:59:028 (2) - Missing clap on slider begin, make sure to fix this as well.
9. 01:05:025 (1) - Remove the clap from this slider begin and add a finish instead, to follow the strong beat of the song.
10. 01:24:380 (1,2,3) - Really bad and random jump you've got there, this part of the song is calm and doesn't call for a jump, make it this way instead, it plays much better and follows the song in a better way.
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:48:642 (1) - Again, there should be a finish here and not a clap due to the strong beat of the song.
12. 01:49:732 (3) - Missing clap on slider repeat, make sure to add it to follow your costant hitsound pattern.
13. 01:54:639 (4) - Same here, fix it please.
14. 01:56:820 (4) - Add a clap here like you did on the rest of your doubles on this difficulty.
15. 01:59:001 (5) - Same for this one.
16. 01:59:546 (7) - Remove the clap from here, it makes the finish sounds too loud.
17. 02:02:272 (2) - Missing clap on slider begin, once again.
18. 02:03:363 (5) - You know what I'm going to say, yeah.
19. 02:17:811 (2) - Why finish here? It doesn't follow anything to me, just remove it.
20. 02:43:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Missing hitsounds on this whole pattern, make sure to add them.
21. 02:52:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above, add hitsounds please.
22. 02:56:248 - Kiai should end here and also you should add a note here with the finish for a better ending, where it ends right now it's totally not good enough.

Andrea wrote:

~General~
This background looks pretty bad, I'll suggest you using a better one, like this. you not liking a bg is not a red problem xD
You're missing the files hit50.png, hit100.png, hit100k.png, hit300.png, hit300k.png and hit300g.png in your folder, please make sure to add them. no hitbursts have been skinned in the map, thus its ok for hitbursts to stay default, again hitbursts and hitcircles are a different set, the hit circle set is the circle, the approach.
The files default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png and default-x.png are unused, make sure to remove them. nono wrong thats a aibat messup, the % is used for the score ingame as is the comma ect, do not do this

~Normal~
Increase Overall Difficulty by 1 tick to balance with your settings, it's too low right now for a Normal difficulty.

1. 00:12:686 (1) - Try to place this slider more to the center, it's too hard for beginners to move to the angle already after spinner, it might be too hard to reach, try to make it this way instead to fix this problem. actually this is incorrect for 2 reasons, first one is that putting in on the center can confuse new players with the approach circle and also most new players spin wide, making it hard for them to return to the center on time, on top of all this that is the point of having the 2 stanza break after the spinner,
2. 00:18:683 (3,4) - It's better to avoid stacking notes like this on the easiest difficulty of the mapset since they could confuse beginners, make them this way to avoid the problem instead.i understand your view here but its also not really a red condition, a 1/1 stack within a normal diff is totally acceptable and always has been, for a easy its not good but for normal its fine.
3. 00:27:951 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and lyrics change. yup thats a ok combo suggestion
   
4. 00:30:132 (1,2) - Do not stack sliders this way on the easiest difficulty, they are absolutely confusing for beginners and too hard for the easiest difficulty, here's what I got to fix this problem. again i have to disagree here since before this the mapper has already accostomed the player that silder stacks are of 1/2 this becomes totally easy to play in a normal difficulty, got to take into account the whole map
5. 00:34:494 (1,2) - Again, same reason as above, try to make it this way.again same reason tbh, the player is already accostomed and in a normal diff this is perfectly acceptable, and infact breaking the stack here would account for a difficultly shape pattern
6. 00:56:847 (4) - New combo should go here due to the lyrics change and due to the new stanza. yea logical but the new combo should start on a red tick due to the mapper is following vocals, this is impossible thus makes it ok to put the combo before or after
7. 01:08:842 (4) - This slider might be confusing for the easiest difficulty due to the many repeats, try making something else please. [/color]
8. 01:33:376 (1,2,3) - This pattern has three different kind of sliders, I'm not sure if this is okay for the easiest difficulty, make them this way perhaps? Much better imo. hmm yea i see the factor, all three are different sizes and timings though which makes it readable, mapper will need to have final opinion over that
9. 01:49:187 (4) - New combo should go here due to the lyrics change and due to the new stanza.
10. 01:49:732 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards since you won't need it.
11. 01:51:368 (2) - New combo should go here due to the lyrics change and due to the new stanza.
12. 02:03:363 (2) - You're missing a clap here, make sure to add it.
13. 02:03:635 (3) - Remove the clap from this slider end, doesn't follow anything and sounds too random.
14. 02:04:453 (4) - Clap should go here then.
15. 02:05:271 (6) - Missing clap on slider end, again.
16. 02:12:086 (4) ~ 02:18:628 (3) -Hitsounds on this part are inconsistent from the rest of the difficulty, please make them consistent like the rest of the map.
    no need for me to comment on these since its personal opinion over sounds and combos, so leave it to mapper
    
17. 02:17:811 (2) - This slider is off-screen, move it up a bit to fix this problem. Look at the screen, you can see it's off-screen from test mode. no its not offscreen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/658367
18. 02:43:708 (1) - Too hard to hit after spinner for the easiest difficulty, make sure to move it near to the center to fix this problem.no....we dont have to place a note in the middle of the screen after a spinner always....thats just odd o.o
19. 02:46:707 (1,2,3,1,2) - This pattern is way too hard for the easiest difficulty and even for a Normal, the stacks are way too confusing for beginners, here's the fix I got for you to fix it. dont agree here that its too hard due to all being sliders and following a very simple red pattern after a repeat, still up to mapper ofc
20. 02:52:431 (1) - Too hard to hit after spinner for the easiest difficulty, make sure to move it near to the center to fix this problem.again with the spinner thing, thats just not needed and destroying a pattern in the map for no reason
    
    
    [b]~Hard~
    
    1. 00:12:686 (1,2,3) - This pattern has the same spacing but yet the timeline is different, that might be really confusing, change the spacing between (1) and (2) to make it easier to read. 1,2 is a stack.....in a hard diff a stack is allowed xD
    2. 00:46:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels too random and not so creative, make it this way to make it more interesting to play. random means the notes are placed without a pattern and in no order, a straight line is not random its a line...which is a pattern. this is not really a "red" problem and more a suggestion
    3. 01:24:380 (1,2,3) - Really bad and random jump you've got there, this part of the song is calm and doesn't call for a jump, make it this way instead, it plays much better and follows the song in a better way. over this i found it ok, personal opinion though so ofc will leave it to the mapper to respond

BounceBabe wrote:

@Andrea: Changed a few things but not many, hitsounds are places randomly on purpose due to it supporting the song better and giving its own rythm. Some jumps are also on purpose to give more action to the map. And again said that like 5 times already, no to the last circle because there is no drum anymore. Thank you

1. 00:19:228 (4) - Missing add finish i feel the drums + melody are too much higher that would sense add finish also i saw diff hard have this finish and this diff don't, why? i see inconsistency pattern hitsound
2. 01:09:251 (T) - I don't see this timing, just remove this timing as this is nothing
3. 02:01:591 (T) - ^ same

1. 00:24:953 (7,8) - I don't agree that part pattern hitsound the (8) that drum still better than (7), (8) have drums strong and (7) is weakness, remove clap from (7) and add from on (8) that really better IMO IMO
2. 00:29:314 (3,4) - ^ same
3. 01:09:251 (T) - I don't see this timing, just remove this timing as this is nothing