[Normal]
00:12:686 (1,2,3) - You may try this ->
http://puu.sh/25Exf00:21:954 (1) - I think this note can't be here.
00:31:223 (2) - I know staks are not problems for newbies, but I think slider staks are.
00:35:584 (2) - same here
00:38:992 (1) - I think you may finish the spinner here 00:41:582 -
00:42:672 (1) - move this note, with only one stack in this part is ok
00:45:262 - down the volumen of this not a bit, it sounds wreid
00:51:395 (2) - remove this slider and add only a single circle, I think it sounds amazings that
01:05:025 (1) - this slider sounds wreid, but I have no Idea what to do here :c
01:08:842 (4) - I think yoy may remove this and add a circle in that pont and here 01:09:387 -
01:09:932 - start the breake here, is nice ->
http://puu.sh/25GEs01:26:561 (5) - I think this may confuse the newbies, maybe start the spinner here?
01:34:467 (2) - This may confuse too :s
01:44:280 - why short Kiai here? use it on the whole chorus D:
01:52:186 (3) - You were following the lyrics the whole time, this note may confuse the newbies, be careful
02:06:089 (1,2) - I think you can make a better slider here, like this
http://puu.sh/25GQbHere is the code if you are interested ->
124,180,126089,6,0,B|144:244|144:244|140:308|196:360,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,357,127179,2,0,B|372:308|368:244|368:244|388:180,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:08:269 (3) - if you do that, remember to fix this note.
02:11:541 (3) - I think is not a good idea to put this note here, put it upside
02:13:449 (2) - This clap sounds wreid, maybe remove it?
02:15:630 (2) - same here
02:17:811 (2) - same here
02:22:445 (2) - I was expecting a clap here
02:25:171 - remove this clap an add in the tail
02:27:352 - same here
02:29:533 - same here
02:48:615 (2) - same as 00:31:223 (2)
02:56:248 - add a note?
[Hard]
00:14:594 (5) - Remove this note
00:15:412 (2) - Stack it wit the tail, or do this
http://puu.sh/25H6i00:27:951 (1) - I don't really like this kind of sliders, sorry.
00:37:220 (2) - Same as 00:15:412 (2)
00:46:625 (3,4) - same here
00:47:579 (7) - maybe put it here? x364 y248
00:51:395 (3,4) - this jump can confuse people, maybe move (3) to x24 y188
00:52:486 (2) - same as 00:15:412 (2)
00:56:847 (2) - same here
01:06:116 (3) - maybe put this slider like this? ->
http://puu.sh/25HdW01:06:934 (4) - if you do that, remember to fix this note
01:09:932 - this break, same as Normal
01:46:461 (6) - Maybe you should do this slider like this?
http://puu.sh/25HhTHere is the code if you are interested
48,192,106461,2,0,B|48:240|64:264|64:264|48:256|48:256|72:296|72:352,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:51:232 - Maybe add a note here, or move the next slider here. Like this part, without repetitions 02:13:176 (2) -
02:20:400 - remove this clap
02:20:809 (4) - and this
02:20:946 (5) - and this
02:38:256 (3,4) - and those
02:38:665 (6) - this one too
02:39:891 (3) - I don't like this clap at the tail
02:49:433 (4) - Move this note here and remove the clap 02:49:296 -
02:56:248 - add a note here
Sorry if my mod is useful, I'm noot at this, if it's please ignore my request.
One extra thing, I suggest you something in the normal abaut the kiai, In the hard too.