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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 01 April 2013 at 18:14:12

Artist: blue drops
Title: Heart no Kakuritsu (TV Size)
Source: Sora no Otoshimono: Forte
Tags: opening
BPM: 157
Filesize: 13275kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Destiny (5 stars, 292 notes)
  2. Easy (1,8 stars, 77 notes)
  3. Hard (4,77 stars, 183 notes)
  4. Normal (3,77 stars, 117 notes)


Download: blue drops - Heart no Kakuritsu (TV Size)
Download: blue drops - Heart no Kakuritsu (TV Size) (no video)
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My first ranked map and first try made SB lyrics (๑ 'ω' ๑)
i want try something new. A TV Size map with video and SB lyrics ~ Hope seems good and everyone like it \'ω'/
Special map for He because He made this map for me ~ ♥
大スキ ~ ♥
Mapset:
Easy : Done
Normal : Done
Hard : Done
Destiny (Insane) : Done
SB lyrics : by me , Done it
Hinsvar 2 times ~ <3
-Kirito
Natsu
- t e n n y a - especially for clapsound >3<
Katty Pie
Sakuya Aizawa for checking in irc and THS (:
Bass
SuperMoutarde
tutuhaha
Nichiyouki
Irreversible
Moway
Strawberry
popner (Bubble)
Lally
Gloria Guard
luxoDeh
Kiiwa
Kawayi Rika (moe Ranked)

Especially thanks 4 popner and Rika <3

Redownload if you download before 08/02/2013 . Hitsound changed
Enjoy~ (๑ >w< ๑)
posted
\o/

>Destiny
  1. 00:00:288 (1) - Bikin ini dikit lebih melengkung ke bawah?
  2. 00:00:861 (3) - Tarik ke bawah satu grid (y:88).
  3. 00:01:434 (5) - Dikit lengkungin ke atas.
  4. 00:10:415 (4,5,6) - Hapus (6), pindahin (5) ke 00:10:988, terus bikin (4) repeat satu kali lagi? Lebih enak aja sih...
  5. 00:11:561 (7) - Finish.
  6. 00:12:708 (5,6,7) - Hapus (5,6), pindahin (7) ke tempat (5), lalu bikin repeat sekali lagi?
  7. 00:16:338 - Finish.
  8. 00:17:867 (2,3) - ...Stack-nya salah deh, kayaknya...
  9. 00:20:924 (5,6) - ^
  10. 00:26:466 (3,4) - Lebih enak kalau digabung jadi slider 1/1.
  11. 00:29:523 (3,4) - ^. Pattern-nya bakal hancur sih, tapi lebih mending kalau digabung gitu...
  12. 00:31:243 (8,9,1) - Stack-nya...
  13. 00:36:402 (6) - Finish di kepala sama ekor.
  14. 00:37:262 (2,4) - ...Ini overmapped btw...
  15. 00:40:415 (8,9) - Stack-nya nggak beres...
  16. 00:40:224 (7,8) - Lebih bagus kalau dibikin dua slider 1/2, IMO.
  17. 00:43:854 (10,1) - Kasih finish ke kepala (10), lalu swap NC?
  18. 00:47:676 (2,3) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/1?
  19. 00:48:918 - Overmapped spot orz
  20. 00:49:109 - ^
  21. 00:49:300 (7) - ^
  22. 00:54:173 (6,7) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/1?
  23. 00:55:319 (9,10,11,12,13) - Ini nggak lurus.
  24. 00:56:848 (4,5,6,7,8) - ...Bikin simetris atas-bawah?
  25. 00:58:377 (4,5,6,7,8) - Nggak kebayang sih bisa buat stream yang gimana di sini, tapi ini tampak aneh banget ._.
  26. 00:59:141 - Finish.
  27. 01:00:479 - ^
  28. 01:00:765 (6,8) - Overmapped...
  29. 01:00:861 (7) - Finish?
  30. 01:01:052 (9) - ^
  31. 01:02:103 - Overmapped.
  32. 01:02:198 (4,5,6) - Jadiin slider 1/1 + kasih NC ke (4)?
  33. 01:03:154 (7,8) - Jadiin slider 1/1 + circle?
  34. 01:06:784 - Whistle.
  35. 01:07:166 (8) - Clap.
  36. 01:07:358 - Tambah circle?
  37. 01:07:835 - Overmapped ._.
  38. 01:08:026 - ^
  39. 01:12:708 (6) - Finish.
  40. 01:12:899 (7,8,9,10,11) - Err, kok lengkungan stream ini aneh yah...
  41. 01:13:472 - Tambah circle + finish?
  42. 01:13:950 (2) - Overmapped lawl
  43. 01:14:428 (4) - NC plz.
  44. 01:16:530 - Tambah circle?
  45. 01:17:867 (6,7,8,9) - Bikin jadi circle, lalu slider 1/1 yang repeat sekali, kemudian tambah dua circle lagi (jaraknya 1/2 ketukan ofc)?
  46. 01:22:835 (1) - Bikin jadi slider 1/2 yang repeat sekali?
  47. 01:24:173 (4,5) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/2 yang repeat sekali?
  48. 01:26:084 (1) - Whistle.
  49. 01:26:275 (2,3) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/1, terus finish di 01:26:466?
  50. 01:27:135 (5) - Overmapped.


Lawl.

Good luck, moe~
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Hinsvar wrote:

\o/

>Destiny
  1. 00:00:288 (1) - Bikin ini dikit lebih melengkung ke bawah?
  2. 00:00:861 (3) - Tarik ke bawah satu grid (y:88).
  3. 00:01:434 (5) - Dikit lengkungin ke atas.
  4. 00:10:415 (4,5,6) - Hapus (6), pindahin (5) ke 00:10:988, terus bikin (4) repeat satu kali lagi? Lebih enak aja sih...
  5. 00:11:561 (7) - Finish.
  6. 00:12:708 (5,6,7) - Hapus (5,6), pindahin (7) ke tempat (5), lalu bikin repeat sekali lagi?
  7. 00:16:338 - Finish.
  8. 00:17:867 (2,3) - ...Stack-nya salah deh, kayaknya...
  9. 00:20:924 (5,6) - ^
  10. 00:26:466 (3,4) - Lebih enak kalau digabung jadi slider 1/1.
  11. 00:29:523 (3,4) - ^. Pattern-nya bakal hancur sih, tapi lebih mending kalau digabung gitu...
  12. 00:31:243 (8,9,1) - Stack-nya...
  13. 00:36:402 (6) - Finish di kepala sama ekor.
  14. 00:37:262 (2,4) - ...Ini overmapped btw...
  15. 00:40:415 (8,9) - Stack-nya nggak beres...
  16. 00:40:224 (7,8) - Lebih bagus kalau dibikin dua slider 1/2, IMO. >____________________<
  17. 00:43:854 (10,1) - Kasih finish ke kepala (10), lalu swap NC? okegan
  18. 00:47:676 (2,3) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/1?
  19. 00:48:918 - Overmapped spot orz
  20. 00:49:109 - ^
  21. 00:49:300 (7) - ^
  22. 00:54:173 (6,7) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/1? no
  23. 00:55:319 (9,10,11,12,13) - Ini nggak lurus. ukur pke penggaris, done (smoga)
  24. 00:56:848 (4,5,6,7,8) - ...Bikin simetris atas-bawah? cukup imo buat skrg, lht2 dlu deh
  25. 00:58:377 (4,5,6,7,8) - Nggak kebayang sih bisa buat stream yang gimana di sini, tapi ini tampak aneh banget ._.
  26. 00:59:141 - Finish.
  27. 01:00:479 - ^
  28. 01:00:765 (6,8) - Overmapped...
  29. 01:00:861 (7) - Finish?
  30. 01:01:052 (9) - ^
  31. 01:02:103 - Overmapped.
  32. 01:02:198 (4,5,6) - Jadiin slider 1/1 + kasih NC ke (4)? NC doang
  33. 01:03:154 (7,8) - Jadiin slider 1/1 + circle? no
  34. 01:06:784 - Whistle.
  35. 01:07:166 (8) - Clap.
  36. 01:07:358 - Tambah circle?
  37. 01:07:835 - Overmapped ._.
  38. 01:08:026 - ^
  39. 01:12:708 (6) - Finish.
  40. 01:12:899 (7,8,9,10,11) - Err, kok lengkungan stream ini aneh yah... jadiin satu deh
  41. 01:13:472 - Tambah circle + finish?
  42. 01:13:950 (2) - Overmapped lawl
  43. 01:14:428 (4) - NC plz.
  44. 01:16:530 - Tambah circle?
  45. 01:17:867 (6,7,8,9) - Bikin jadi circle, lalu slider 1/1 yang repeat sekali, kemudian tambah dua circle lagi (jaraknya 1/2 ketukan ofc)? no
  46. 01:22:835 (1) - Bikin jadi slider 1/2 yang repeat sekali?
  47. 01:24:173 (4,5) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/2 yang repeat sekali? no
  48. 01:26:084 (1) - Whistle.
  49. 01:26:275 (2,3) - Bikin jadi circle + slider 1/1, terus finish di 01:26:466? finish doang
  50. 01:27:135 (5) - Overmapped.

yg d ksh respon nolak desu~
udah ah kepanjangan sampe aku lupa .____.


Good luck, moe~
Thanks BAKA
posted
hi~ Xinely >w</ my from chat 1:1 request

[Easy]
01:05:256 (2,3) - change as shown in the image below?

01:14:428 (2,3) - ^

01:26:084 (1) - Finishi add

[Normal]
00:25:128 (3) - object's end is not snapped! change please
01:19:778 (1,2) - change as shown in the image below?


[Hard]
00:11:561 (6) - only 1/2 to one space to reduce.
00:48:058 - here, you can add circles.
00:54:364 (4,5) - 00:54:937 (5) - 00:54:937 - here circle add

00:55:702 - here circle add?
00:55:797 - ^
00:55:893 - ^
00:55:893 (1,2,3) - 00:56:084 - back
01:02:007 (2) - 01:02:198 - move and 01:02:007 - here circle add

[Destiny]
00:12:612 (4,6) - remove
00:12:517 (3,4,5) - here Image (3 circle x:0 y:224, 4 circle x:116 y:152, 5 slider x:116 y:152 next x:140 y:64)
00:32:007 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm..?
180,348,32007,6,0,P|140:336|96:352,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,348,32389,2,0,P|372:336|416:352,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,252,32772,2,0,P|164:212|108:196,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,252,33154,2,0,P|348:212|404:196,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,176,33536,2,0,P|256:84,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,28,33918,1,2,0:0:0
388,36,34014,1,0,0:0:0
388,44,34109,2,0,P|388:136,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,216,34491,2,0,P|424:236|404:272|404:272|356:280|328:328,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:33:918 (6,7,8) - ^ same

Xinely, good luck o/
posted
thanks kirito~
updated~
posted
Easy:

00:01:816 really this clap is so bad there or have much volume but sound ugly
00:01:816 move it to x:256 y:284 since look better
00:10:988 move it to x:244 y:216 to be perfect with previows slider
00:13:090 (1,1) - i think this is unrankable on easy check how you can see the slider when you are spinnig should fix

00:36:020 (3,4,5,1) - this part look a little bad
00:51:498 inconsitency with spacing (previous slider)
01:26:084 try to reduce volume here to 15 %


Normal:

00:20:160 (1,4) - make they symetrical since 4 look bad
00:40:606 im not a fan of this slider

nice diff


Hard:

00:07:549 (3,5) - make 3 symetrical like 5
00:10:033 to x:48 y:192 00:10:224 to x:100 y:132 to make a nice pattern:

00:17:103 remove NC then add NC here 00:18:631
01:00:670 (5) add finish since u add it in (6,7)
01:09:842 move it to x:320 y:148


Destiny:

00:00:288 add finish + whistle since sound better (if you do add it in all diffs)
00:37:931 weir pause add circle imo
01:00:670 add finishh same reason as hard
posted

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

00:01:816 really this clap is so bad there or have much volume but sound ugly i guess so, changed
00:01:816 move it to x:256 y:284 since look betterdone
00:10:988 move it to x:244 y:216 to be perfect with previows slider^
00:13:090 (1,1) - i think this is unrankable on easy check how you can see the slider when you are spinnig should fix
no, have a little break time after spin
00:36:020 (3,4,5,1) - this part look a little bad waiting other response
00:51:498 inconsitency with spacing (previous slider) fixed
01:26:084 try to reduce volume here to 15 % music still loud so waiting other response


Normal:

00:20:160 (1,4) - make they symetrical since 4 look bad err, copy paste from before .3.
00:40:606 im not a fan of this slider changed

nice diff


Hard:

00:07:549 (3,5) - make 3 symetrical like 5 okay
00:10:033 to x:48 y:192 00:10:224 to x:100 y:132 to make a nice pattern:
okay
00:17:103 remove NC then add NC here 00:18:631stanza
01:00:670 (5) add finish since u add it in (6,7) same as destiny
01:09:842 move it to x:320 y:148 okay


Destiny:

00:00:288 add finish + whistle since sound better (if you do add it in all diffs) no, since still relaxing music ><
00:37:931 weir pause add circle imo errr idk why but i can't accept this
01:00:670 add finishh same reason as hard not heavy music so i think not nice with finish
Thanks 4 mod~

Edited 8 Februari : thanks 4 mod 10nya and katty pie (lazy to new post again www)
posted

~ Requested via PM in Game ~


eh, irc modded I suppose

http://puu.sh/1ZfzB
posted
Hi~
238,275,32007,6,0,P|216:236|174:223,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,276,32389,2,0,P|326:237|367:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,180,32772,2,0,P|214:141|172:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,180,33154,2,0,P|322:141|363:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
^ For Destiny~

17:49 Katty Pie: First Easy
17:50 Xinely: ready ~ www
17:51 Katty Pie: 00:05:065 - this note on red tick very confused for beginners~ better replace on slider 2/1
17:52 Xinely: okay
17:53 Katty Pie: 00:09:459 - http://puu.sh/1ZfOa try this rhythm
17:54 Katty Pie: will be more playable
17:55 Xinely: okay~
17:55 Katty Pie: 00:26:848 (3) - for better flow put this slider on x260 y108
17:56 Katty Pie: and next note 1 on x84 y196
17:56 Xinely: u are right >< , fixed
17:57 Katty Pie: 00:29:714 - http://puu.sh/1ZfQo
17:58 Katty Pie: 00:32:389 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - put this all on white tick >.<
17:59 Katty Pie: 00:32:389 - note 2 here e.t.c
17:59 Xinely: wait
18:00 Xinely: it's broken vocal >_<
18:00 Katty Pie: On easy better follow for music bcz
18:00 Katty Pie: beginners can confused
18:01 Xinely: okay i will fix after mod, because slowly mapping T3T
18:01 Katty Pie: ok
18:01 Katty Pie: 00:36:975 (4) - I don't recomend put sliders 1/2 on easy it hard to read
18:01 Katty Pie: replace on slider 1/1
18:02 Xinely: ok
18:03 Katty Pie: and e.t.c I recoment you check all rhyth will be better if you will be use this http://puu.sh/1ZfVo or this http://puu.sh/1ZfVE
18:03 Katty Pie: and e.t.c I recoment you check all rhyth will be better if you will be use this http://puu.sh/1ZfVo or this http://puu.sh/1ZfVE
18:04 Katty Pie: bcz if you put first note on white tick and second on red it can confused
18:04 Xinely: hmmm i see
18:04 Katty Pie: 00:50:733 (1,1) - remove second slider tick
18:05 Xinely: hmm i think it's okay for now.. will be other mod soon
18:06 Katty Pie: on second part same mistakes with rhythm ._.
18:06 Katty Pie: check it after ok?
18:07 Xinely: okay
18:07 Katty Pie: now normal
18:08 Katty Pie: 00:16:721 (2) - hm it's a little not playable~ http://puu.sh/1ZfZr try this
18:09 Katty Pie: 00:18:631 - add NC here
18:09 Xinely: done
18:09 Katty Pie: 00:20:160 - here remove
18:09 Xinely: done
18:10 Katty Pie: 00:45:001 - here better put slider 1/2 and remove note 2
18:10 Katty Pie: will be more readable
18:11 Xinely: okay
18:12 Katty Pie: 01:00:861 - http://puu.sh/1Zg24 I think this rhythm will be better what long slider)
18:12 Katty Pie: 01:01:816 - remove NC
18:12 Katty Pie: 01:02:580 - add NC
18:12 Xinely: ok
18:13 Katty Pie: 01:04:491 - remove
18:13 Katty Pie: nc
18:13 Xinely: done
18:15 Xinely: just leave mod in there, i must take a bath now >_<
18:15 Katty Pie: 01:20:924 (3,4) - hm maybe make this sliders more beautiful?
18:15 Katty Pie: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/603348
18:15 *Xinely is away: take a bath and dinner
18:15 Katty Pie: ok
18:16 Katty Pie: It's all for normal
18:17 Katty Pie: Hard
18:17 Katty Pie: 00:02:580 (5) - I think this will be better http://puu.sh/1Zg6l
18:18 Katty Pie: 00:15:574 - On Normal add nc here
18:20 Katty Pie: 00:19:008 - unsnapped green linee should be on 00:19:014
18:21 Katty Pie: 00:51:307 - 2 grids in down for better flow
18:22 Xinely: back huft
18:22 Katty Pie: oki) Nice hard
18:23 Xinely: thx
18:23 Katty Pie: Destiny
18:23 Xinely: okay i'm in destiny now
18:24 Katty Pie: 00:05:829 - this slider not sounds here replace on 2 notes, here and on next white tick
18:25 Katty Pie: it'better follow for vokal
18:25 Katty Pie: *vocal
18:25 Xinely: okay
18:25 Katty Pie: 00:23:217 (4,5,6) - bad stack, fix it
18:26 Xinely: k
18:27 Katty Pie: 00:24:746 - stream here sounds betterhttp://puu.sh/1Zgev
18:28 Xinely: done
18:29 Katty Pie: 00:32:007(1,2,3,4) - make this pattern more beautiful http://puu.sh/1ZggE
18:30 Xinely: about that can give code?
18:30 Katty Pie: sure
18:31 Katty Pie: I posted it with mod
18:32 Xinely: okay
18:32 Katty Pie: 00:49:969 - add finish
18:32 Katty Pie: 00:53:026 - ^
18:32 Xinely: done
18:33 Katty Pie: 01:00:670 -finish too
18:33 Xinely: done
18:33 Katty Pie: and it's all
18:33 Xinely: okay~
18:33 Xinely: thanks pie (:
18:34 Katty Pie: 01:26:084 - I forget
18:34 Katty Pie: add nc here
18:34 Katty Pie: NC bug
18:34 Xinely: www done it


Yeah need more work on your map ^^' I hope You can make maps better in future ^^ good luck :3 :oops:
posted
[General]
ok

[Easy]
AR-1?
  1. 00:04:873 (3) - adding whistle at end of slider will sound better, since I can hear piano sound and you put whistle on pianos before
  2. 00:07:931 (3) - How about copying previous slider and copypasting it there?
  3. 00:09:459 (1) - add clap for consistency at slider head? and on end too
  4. 00:11:370 (2) - add clap on slider's end
  5. 00:12:708 (3) - That might be very confusing to click, spacing on 1/1s before is like 0,91-0,92, and there is basically the same.
  6. 00:32:007 (1,2) - Doesn't plays well, rhythm is fine but just placement not, how about swapping them with slider?
  7. 00:40:224 (1) - Again, yeah rhythm is really really fine but that just might be bit hard for beginners.
  8. 00:46:338 (1) - mmmhm
  9. 01:05:256 (2,3) - Hmm (2) is ending on red tick, next one starting with red tick too, spacing is okay but... that hitsounded slidertick and rhythm there made me confuse. But still it's fine there.

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:485 (4) - Would rather move that slider a bit to make nice triangle pattern with previous circles
  2. 00:22:453 (1) - try improving shape of slider :3, It's not hard to do it
  3. 00:26:275 (1) - 00:26:275 (1) - move it in left direction? Same y axis. That little overlap (4) with (1) doesn't look nice
  4. 00:36:402 (2) - making it a bit curve will look better
  5. 00:39:459 (4) - just move last slider point by 1 grid up. Will make nicer blanket
  6. 00:40:224 (5,1) - Try playing around with (1)'s shape to make blanket with (5), like this
  7. 00:49:969 (1) - hitsounded slidertick really made me confuse again
  8. 01:02:580 (1,2) - I don't like the way how they are placed, it doesn't look nice.. Making blanket (1) with (2) will look much nicer, for example
  9. 01:19:778 (1) - try rotating it by like -50 degrees?(by using "Rotate by"). Makes better flow


[Hard]
  1. 00:05:065 (4) - new combo for spacing change
  2. 00:12:517 (1) - sounds kinda odd, I'd add one more repeat and move spinner to 1/4 after slider ends
  3. 00:31:434 (6) - ctrl-j + adjusting will look much better there
  4. 00:39:077 (3,4,5,6) - ahh this square pattern isn't perfect, try moving (6) a bit
  5. 00:45:956 (5,6) - I am really not sure about this
  6. 00:48:249 (3,4,5,6,7) - that one pattern is bit messy ><
  7. 01:03:918 (6) - would not advice that placement in hard

[Destiny]
  1. 00:07:358 (4) - Center it, looks much better, like that

    And don't forget to fix spacing of (5) then
  2. 00:22:835 (3) - move it like that

mm..would point similar things like these above. There are many issues with that diff, some with spacing, some with placement/flow. Needs more improving.

I will come back for sure once you get more mods for it, don't worry!
posted
Sorry I've screwed bbcode tags and I can't even edit post, something is bugged...
posted
*rolls in*

Bass wrote:

Sorry I've screwed bbcode tags and I can't even edit post, something is bugged...
Use this to edit that post of yours; this can happen sometimes.

*rolls out*
posted
Okay done :)
posted
thanks 4 mod bass ~
i forget which i fix or not orz
but i'm not follow ur mod in destiny
updated~

@bass after see down in my post. Okay :D
posted
Like I said. I will come back later.
posted
hey, from my modding queue!

[Easy]

  1. 00:03:345 (1,2,3) - this curve would look more smooth like this:
  2. 00:17:867 (3,4) - make it like this:
  3. 00:20:160 (1) - doesnt make a lot of sense to map those notes imo. The notes on 00:20:542 and 00:20:924 are much stronger in the music so they should be mapped instead
  4. 00:34:491 (1) - change the curve to make it more homogeneous with the curve of 00:32:963 (2,3)
  5. 00:49:969 (1,2) - make 00:49:969 (1) half a beat shorter to end it on red tick, and make 00:51:498 (2) start 1/2 beat earlier on red tick too, but make sure to make it longer so that it still ends on the same white tick on 00:52:262
  6. 00:53:026 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:09:077 (2,3) - move both these circles half a beat earlier



[Normal]

  1. 00:23:600 (2) - move this half a beat earlier on 00:23:409 and add a circle at 00:23:791 (or a slider from 00:23:409 to 00:23:791)
  2. 00:41:561 (2,3) - maybe change shape of 00:43:472 (3) to make it look more like 00:41:561 (2)
  3. 00:53:026 (1,2,3) - this doesnt fit the music well imo
  4. 01:07:549 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:20:924 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:12:135 (3) - make it half a beat shorter to end on red tick


tldr I think thid diff would be more fun with a little more notes on red tick to fit the music better, but it looks good overall


[Hard]

  1. I would recommend Approach Rate 7 more than 6 for Hard diff but it's up to you
  2. 00:03:345 (1) - not very pretty
  3. 00:05:065 (1,2,3) - wtf 0.5 DS make it 1.1
  4. 00:29:905 (2,3,4) - this pattern could be reworked, try blankets or something



[Destiny]

  1. Overall Diff +1. And if you think it makes it too hard, then go for HP drain -1 but overall difficulty should be 8 or more for such a diff because you don't want to let the player get a high accuracy too easily
  2. 00:12:899 (7) - curve this slider for homogeneity with the rest of the combo and the previous combo too
  3. 01:04:491 (1,2,3,4,6) - i like it but it could be refined, make it cleaner. Start by preventing the overlapping of 01:04:873 (2,3) and try to make the spacing look more consistent on this combo



That's all for me, good luck with this!
posted

SuperMoutarde wrote:

hey, from my modding queue!

[Easy]

  1. 00:03:345 (1,2,3) - this curve would look more smooth like this:
    change but not in screenshot
  2. 00:17:867 (3,4) - make it like this:
    ^
  3. 00:20:160 (1) - doesnt make a lot of sense to map those notes imo. The notes on 00:20:542 and 00:20:924 are much stronger in the music so they should be mapped instead no
  4. 00:34:491 (1) - change the curve to make it more homogeneous with the curve of 00:32:963 (2,3) little
  5. 00:49:969 (1,2) - make 00:49:969 (1) half a beat shorter to end it on red tick, and make 00:51:498 (2) start 1/2 beat earlier on red tick too, but make sure to make it longer so that it still ends on the same white tick on 00:52:262 no
  6. 00:53:026 (1,2) - ^ ^
  7. 01:09:077 (2,3) - move both these circles half a beat earlier ^



[Normal]

  1. 00:23:600 (2) - move this half a beat earlier on 00:23:409 and add a circle at 00:23:791 (or a slider from 00:23:409 to 00:23:791) no
  2. 00:41:561 (2,3) - maybe change shape of 00:43:472 (3) to make it look more like 00:41:561 (2) little
  3. 00:53:026 (1,2,3) - this doesnt fit the music well imo if you feel that plz give suggestion, i think it's okay
  4. 01:07:549 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  5. 01:20:924 (3,4) - ^ ^
  6. 01:12:135 (3) - make it half a beat shorter to end on red tick no


tldr I think thid diff would be more fun with a little more notes on red tick to fit the music better, but it looks good overall


[Hard]

  1. I would recommend Approach Rate 7 more than 6 for Hard diff but it's up to you it's weird if AR 4 in normal suddenly AR7
  2. 00:03:345 (1) - not very pretty wa, little fix
  3. 00:05:065 (1,2,3) - wtf 0.5 DS make it 1.1 it's okay
  4. 00:29:905 (2,3,4) - this pattern could be reworked, try blankets or something make diagonal desu



[Destiny]

  1. Overall Diff +1. And if you think it makes it too hard, then go for HP drain -1 but overall difficulty should be 8 or more for such a diff because you don't want to let the player get a high accuracy too easily no, it's okay
  2. 00:12:899 (7) - curve this slider for homogeneity with the rest of the combo and the previous combo too no
  3. 01:04:491 (1,2,3,4,6) - i like it but it could be refined, make it cleaner. Start by preventing the overlapping of 01:04:873 (2,3) and try to make the spacing look more consistent on this combo it's okay imo



That's all for me, good luck with this!
thanks 4 mod
posted
hi Xinely~

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Easy
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00:45:765 (3) - add clap
00:46:721 (1) - remove whistle and ^
01:20:924 (2) - remove this note *the map is still good if this one is removed

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Normal
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00:13:472 (1) - extend this spin to 00:15:192
01:27:230 (2) - remove this slider and add new 2 notes on 01:27:230 and 01:27:421

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okay goodluck Xinely~
posted

THS wrote:

hi Xinely~
*ngikut belajar dunia mapping juga"
okay lets begin~

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Easy
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00:45:765 (3) - add clap
00:46:721 (1) - remove whistle and ^
01:20:924 (2) - remove this note *the map is still good if this one is removed

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Normal
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00:13:472 (1) - extend this spin to 00:15:192
01:27:230 (2) - remove this slider and add new 2 notes on 01:27:230 and 01:27:421

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okay goodluck Xinely~
posted

THS wrote:

hi Xinely~

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Easy
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00:45:765 (3) - add clap udah ada D:
00:46:721 (1) - remove whistle and ^ oke deh
01:20:924 (2) - remove this note *the map is still good if this one is removed enggak D:

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Normal
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00:13:472 (1) - extend this spin to 00:15:192 err ada alasan tersendiri
01:27:230 (2) - remove this slider and add new 2 notes on 01:27:230 and 01:27:421 sukaan pke slider

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okay goodluck Xinely~
well, thanks 4 mod~
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