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Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single

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Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 20, 2015 at 5:22:24 PM

Artist: Super Junior
Title: Sexy, Free & Single
Tags: sj suju sment kpop
BPM: 115
Filesize: 24024kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.43 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Hard (2.8 stars, 395 notes)
  3. Insane (3.53 stars, 532 notes)
  4. Normal (1.71 stars, 240 notes)
Download: Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single
Download: Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st submitted map, 3rd ranked map.

  • Easy: READY!
    Normal: READY!
    Hard: READY!
    Insane: READY!

Redownload when you've downloaded this beatmap before April 8. It is, also, strongly recommended to download this beatmap with the video.




Modders
AlpacaCokelat
HabiHolic
- Miomio Chii -
neonat
Alarido
Katty Pie
LuxoDeh
scanter
-APXH
Saten
TaMul
Cobra
smallboat
Wolf
HelloSCV
Hinsvar
(CSGA)Ar3sgice
rezoons
Simple_Star
Helios_Zul
sheela901
CDFA
zorefire
VeeLaHee104
- G I D Z -
Irreversible
BounceBabe
10crystalmask01
Mood Breaker
Gamu
Flask
Sieg
Kenezz ()
VeeLaHee104 (Recheck, IRC mod)
sheela901 (Recheck)
neonat (Recheck)
Sakura
Rakuen
ByBy_ChAn (IRC mod, )
Lally (, Recheck, )
HabiHolic (, )
Krfawy ()
Irreversible ()
ByBy_ChAn ()
Krfawy ()
Elmostache
Really Pleasant :lol: I love it :D
Aeonian Sonder
Accepting guest?
jyu
eeeeeeeeee this need to be ranked >3< can i mod this?
jyu
ee please don't give kudosu over my comment. they're not mods. it's better for you to give kudosu to mod post, not comments
and i will mod your map ^^ just please wait for a few days
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

ee please don't give kudosu over my comment. they're not mods. it's better for you to give kudosu to mod post, not comments
My apologize -.-

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

and i will mod your map ^^ just please wait for a few days
Agreed, thanks :)
jyu
A friendly information that i'm still an inexperienced modder, so most of my mods are suggestions (and useless =w=)
Don't give this post kudosu, because you've already given me two ^^


Easy


00:35:069 (1) - remove nc (optional)
00:43:416 (1) - slider overlap. you can change the position
00:50:199 (5) - separate this circle a bit from this circle 00:49:156 (4) - because they are one beat away
01:01:677 - ee? why do you give kiai time to break time? idk if this is allowed or not, but i suggest you not to
01:22:547 (1) - i suggest you to relocate this slider a bit so it won't get too close with this circle 01:22:025 (4) - because beginner will have trouble seeing them
01:26:721 (1) - ^. don't put it too close with this circle 01:26:199 (4) -
01:31:416 (2,3) - these two circles are covered by previous slider 01:29:851 (4) - beginner will have trouble seeing them. Consider relocating them
01:50:199 (1) - remove nc (optional)
01:54:373 (1) - remove nc
01:56:982 (2) - add nc
02:54:895 (2) - this circle is a bit covered by previous slider. Consider relocating it
03:07:938 (1) - overlap. Please change the slider's position
03:39:503 (1,2) - don't hide these circles, unless it's hard/normal diff

optional :
HP Drain Rate +1 (a little bit difficulties won't hurt)
Approach Rate +1 ^
Overall Difficulty +1 ^
Enable countdown


Heart Jolter

00:31:416 (4) - separate this a bit, because it's one beat away with previous circle
00:47:590 (1,2) - make it more neat
00:51:503 (3) - i suggest you to change this beat's position in timeline into this 00:51:634 - (i use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor)
01:45:503 (3,4) - make it more neat, just like the above image
01:58:286 (3) - a bit too early, move it to 01:58:416 -
02:06:634 (3) - also a bit too early, move it to 02:06:764 (3) -
02:07:156 (4,5) - make these a bit closer because they're only half a beat away
02:14:721 (3) - move this slider a little bit far from the previous circle because they're a beat away


Party Time!!

00:32:199 (1) - i suggest you to relocate this slider closer to previous slider 00:31:156 (8) - because they're not one beat away
01:01:677 - kiai at break time. i suggest you not to
01:25:156 (8,9,10) - (optional) separate them a bit
01:38:982 (1,2,3) - relocate them a bit. Don't make them too close with this slider 01:38:199 (9) -
01:41:069 (7) - overlap. Relocate it (optional)
01:51:764 (4,1) - separate them a bit. don't make them too close
01:55:938 (9) - add nc
02:07:156 (5,6) - put them closer a bit


Ready too, Bingo?

00:21:503 (7,8) - separate them a bit because they are one beat away (optional)
00:29:416 (6) - a bit too early. move it to 00:29:460 (6) -
00:51:569 (2) - a bit too early, move it to 00:51:634 (2) -
00:59:938 (2) - a bit too early, move it to 00:59:982 (2) -
02:02:547 (1) - a bit too early, move it to 02:02:590 (1) -
02:06:721 (2) - a bit too early, move it to 02:06:764 (2) -
02:21:329 (4) - a bit too early, move it to 02:21:373 (4) -


I guess that's all i can do to mod this amazing map ^^ This map has the potential to get ranked, so i suggest you to be active in the mod request forums and ask for mod to other people. Because i'm not that good when it comes to modding hard diff, i think it's better for another experienced modder to mod them :)

And lastly, good luck~!
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

A friendly information that i'm still an inexperienced modder, so most of my mods are suggestions (and useless =w=)
Don't give this post kudosu, because you've already given me two ^^


Easy


00:35:069 (1) - remove nc (optional)
00:43:416 (1) - slider overlap. you can change the position
00:50:199 (5) - separate this circle a bit from this circle 00:49:156 (4) - because they are one beat away
01:01:677 - ee? why do you give kiai time to break time? idk if this is allowed or not, but i suggest you not to
01:22:547 (1) - i suggest you to relocate this slider a bit so it won't get too close with this circle 01:22:025 (4) - because beginner will have trouble seeing them
01:26:721 (1) - ^. don't put it too close with this circle 01:26:199 (4) -
01:31:416 (2,3) - these two circles are covered by previous slider 01:29:851 (4) - beginner will have trouble seeing them. Consider relocating them
01:50:199 (1) - remove nc (optional)
01:54:373 (1) - remove nc
01:56:982 (2) - add nc
02:54:895 (2) - this circle is a bit covered by previous slider. Consider relocating it
03:07:938 (1) - overlap. Please change the slider's position
03:39:503 (1,2) - don't hide these circles, unless it's hard/normal diff

optional :
HP Drain Rate +1 (a little bit difficulties won't hurt)
Approach Rate +1 ^
Overall Difficulty +1 ^
Enable countdown


Heart Jolter

00:31:416 (4) - separate this a bit, because it's one beat away with previous circle
00:47:590 (1,2) - make it more neat
00:51:503 (3) - i suggest you to change this beat's position in timeline into this 00:51:634 - (i use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor)
01:45:503 (3,4) - make it more neat, just like the above image
01:58:286 (3) - a bit too early, move it to 01:58:416 -
02:06:634 (3) - also a bit too early, move it to 02:06:764 (3) -
02:07:156 (4,5) - make these a bit closer because they're only half a beat away
02:14:721 (3) - move this slider a little bit far from the previous circle because they're a beat away


Party Time!!

00:32:199 (1) - i suggest you to relocate this slider closer to previous slider 00:31:156 (8) - because they're not one beat away
01:01:677 - kiai at break time. i suggest you not to
01:25:156 (8,9,10) - (optional) separate them a bit
01:38:982 (1,2,3) - relocate them a bit. Don't make them too close with this slider 01:38:199 (9) -
01:41:069 (7) - overlap. Relocate it (optional)
01:51:764 (4,1) - separate them a bit. don't make them too close
01:55:938 (9) - add nc
02:07:156 (5,6) - put them closer a bit


Ready too, Bingo?

00:21:503 (7,8) - separate them a bit because they are one beat away (optional)
00:29:416 (6) - a bit too early. move it to 00:29:460 (6) -
00:51:569 (2) - a bit too early, move it to 00:51:634 (2) -
00:59:938 (2) - a bit too early, move it to 00:59:982 (2) -
02:02:547 (1) - a bit too early, move it to 02:02:590 (1) -
02:06:721 (2) - a bit too early, move it to 02:06:764 (2) -
02:21:329 (4) - a bit too early, move it to 02:21:373 (4) -


I guess that's all i can do to mod this amazing map ^^ This map has the potential to get ranked, so i suggest you to be active in the mod request forums and ask for mod to other people. Because i'm not that good when it comes to modding hard diff, i think it's better for another experienced modder to mod them :)

And lastly, good luck~!
Thanks for the mod :)
Vitax506
I want it can make online score
xiceyx
Awesome map! hope it gets ranked soon!
Paulette_old
¡Approve this song! I love and is cool^^
HabiHolic
Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;



[General]

Your background is UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Get a new picture with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 !

Your music bitrate is too high! -> UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Convert your mp3 so that it's at least 128 kbit/s.


[Easy Single]
00:43:416 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:590 (1) - ^
00:51:243 (1) - ^
01:17:850 (1) - ^
01:32:982 (1) - Spinner 01:34:547 - Here
01:37:156 (4) - Distance Cheak
01:41:851 (1) - Remove Nc
01:50:199 (1) - ^
02:38:721 (1) - Distance Cheak
03:19:416 (1) - ^
03:21:503 (1) - No Spinner!!! Notes or slider filled with!
03:37:156 (1) - Remove Nc
03:39:503 (1) - ^

[Heart Jolter]
00:27:243 - Add a note
00:27:764 - ^
00:33:503 (1) - Remove Nc?
00:34:547 (1) - ^
00:35:069 (1) - ^
00:41:851 (1) - ^
00:42:895 (1) - ^
00:43:416 (1) - ^
00:50:721 (1) - ^
00:54:112 (2) - Distance Cheak
00:58:547 (1) - Remove Nc?
01:12:112 (1) - Look bad by overlapping notes with
01:36:112 (2) - Distance Cheak
01:37:156 (4) - ^
02:35:590 (3) - ^
02:36:373 (6) - ^
02:41:329 (1) - Remove Nc and add Finish hitsound
03:04:808 (1) - Repeated once removed
03:18:373 (1) - Remove Nc
03:21:503 (1) - Notes or slider filled with!

[Party Time!!]

NICE!
NONE!

[Ready too, Bingo?]
None

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello~ From My Queues~
I'm sorry I'm late;



[General]

Your background is UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Get a new picture with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 !

Your music bitrate is too high! -> UNRANKABLE ! !
That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it.
Convert your mp3 so that it's at least 128 kbit/s.


[Easy Single]
00:43:416 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:590 (1) - ^
00:51:243 (1) - ^
01:17:850 (1) - ^
01:32:982 (1) - Spinner 01:34:547 - Here
01:37:156 (4) - Distance Cheak
01:41:851 (1) - Remove Nc
01:50:199 (1) - ^
02:38:721 (1) - Distance Cheak
03:19:416 (1) - ^
03:21:503 (1) - No Spinner!!! Notes or slider filled with!
03:37:156 (1) - Remove Nc
03:39:503 (1) - ^

[Heart Jolter]
00:27:243 - Add a note
00:27:764 - ^
00:33:503 (1) - Remove Nc?
00:34:547 (1) - ^
00:35:069 (1) - ^
00:41:851 (1) - ^
00:42:895 (1) - ^
00:43:416 (1) - ^
00:50:721 (1) - ^
00:54:112 (2) - Distance Cheak
00:58:547 (1) - Remove Nc?
01:12:112 (1) - Look bad by overlapping notes with
01:36:112 (2) - Distance Cheak
01:37:156 (4) - ^
02:35:590 (3) - ^
02:36:373 (6) - ^
02:41:329 (1) - Remove Nc and add Finish hitsound
03:04:808 (1) - Repeated once removed
03:18:373 (1) - Remove Nc
03:21:503 (1) - Notes or slider filled with!

[Party Time!!]

NICE!
NONE!

[Ready too, Bingo?]
None

Good Luck~
Thank you for modding :D
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, here is my mod ! :D From Queues.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- proposal -
Where is the Source?

-Easy Single-
03:37:156 (7) - eh.. i think pull's dot is transit the slider's edge.



-finish-
-Party Time!!-
Slider :
01:13:677 (4) - um..pull's dot is transit the slider's edge.


01:38:199 (9) - ^


01:46:547 (7) - ^


01:55:416 (8) - ^
01:56:199 (10) - ^
02:01:156 (4) - ^
02:26:199 (5,6,7) - ^
02:31:416 (5,6) - ^
02:35:590 (9) - ^
02:37:156 (4) - ^
02:39:764 (5) - ^
02:47:590 (7) - ^
02:52:286 (5,6) - ^
03:18:373 (1) - ^
03:26:721 (1) - ^
03:29:590 (4,5) - ^
03:35:851 (4) - ^

Audio :
02:57:503 (7) - add finish

-finish-
-Ready too, Bingo?-
um, is it " Ready to Bingo? " :P

Slider :
Some pull's dot is transit the slider's edge.
now i'm lazy to find this, please find yourself. :P

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
:D Good luck to you! ♥
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod ! :D From Queues.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- proposal -
Where is the Source?

-Easy Single-
03:37:156 (7) - eh.. i think pull's dot is transit the slider's edge.



-finish-
-Party Time!!-
Slider :
01:13:677 (4) - um..pull's dot is transit the slider's edge.


01:38:199 (9) - ^


01:46:547 (7) - ^


01:55:416 (8) - ^
01:56:199 (10) - ^
02:01:156 (4) - ^
02:26:199 (5,6,7) - ^
02:31:416 (5,6) - ^
02:35:590 (9) - ^
02:37:156 (4) - ^
02:39:764 (5) - ^
02:47:590 (7) - ^
02:52:286 (5,6) - ^
03:18:373 (1) - ^
03:26:721 (1) - ^
03:29:590 (4,5) - ^
03:35:851 (4) - ^

Audio :
02:57:503 (7) - add finish

-finish-
-Ready too, Bingo?-
um, is it " Ready to Bingo? " :P

Slider :
Some pull's dot is transit the slider's edge.
now i'm lazy to find this, please find yourself. :P

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
:D Good luck to you! ♥
Thanks for the mod ^^
neonat
From my queue
I only went into detail in 1 difficulty

General
6JIB shouldn't be the source, it doesn't come from a movie, game or any of that source. If you want to put which album it is in, put it in the tags. Source should be left empty
Inconsistent Preview Times:
Easy Single: 61677
Heart Jolter: 61408
Party Time!!: 61497
Ready Too, Bingo: 61325
Choose 1 preview time for all


Ready Too, Bingo

HP Drain + 1
AR +2
OD +2
00:30:243 - add a note
01:37:808 - ^
01:40:677 - ^
01:44:329 - ^
01:44:590 - ^
01:58:547 (4) - shift to 01:58:416 and slider ends at 01:58:677 - then add a note at 01:58:808


1/4 streams like 03:21:503 - 03:23:460 aren't really necessary, it's like you're overmapping
Too many circles, you should replace quite a few of them with sliders
Rework the positions of the circles and sliders, some are too close/far

Party Time!!

OD +2
AR +2

Heart Jolter

OD +1

Easy Single

OD +1
Alarido
From my Queue (: Let's go!

[Easy Single]

01:54:373 (1) - Move 2nd dot (foot) to x:40 y:152 --- it'll look better
01:56:721 (2) - Move 2nd dot to x:200 y:148 --- same reason
01:58:025 (3) - Move it 2 grid right and 1 grid down to keep spacing
02:05:329 (6) - Move to x:244 y:360 -- spacing
02:06:373 (1) - Move to x:404 y:360 -- looks better

Comments: some patterns as 03:13:156 (1,1) can be tricky, since not all beginners can do it, but it's fine (I could say don't change unless a MAT/BAT suggest it).

[Heart Jolter]

02:06:373 (2,3,4,5) - a bit jump from (4) to (5)? it seems unrankable -- at least for a non-Insane diff
03:11:069 (4,5) - move them 1 grid right

[Ready too, Bingo]

00:23:851 (8,1) - Move together to x:216 y:76, keeping the stack.

------------------------------------------------------------

That's it ^^

That's a Perfect map (:

Good luck for Ranling ^^

Att.
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

neonat wrote:

From my queue
I only went into detail in 1 difficulty

General
6JIB shouldn't be the source, it doesn't come from a movie, game or any of that source. If you want to put which album it is in, put it in the tags. Source should be left empty
Inconsistent Preview Times:
Easy Single: 61677
Heart Jolter: 61408
Party Time!!: 61497
Ready Too, Bingo: 61325
Choose 1 preview time for all


Ready Too, Bingo

HP Drain + 1
AR +2
OD +2
00:30:243 - add a note
01:37:808 - ^
01:40:677 - ^
01:44:329 - ^
01:44:590 - ^
01:58:547 (4) - shift to 01:58:416 and slider ends at 01:58:677 - then add a note at 01:58:808


1/4 streams like 03:21:503 - 03:23:460 aren't really necessary, it's like you're overmapping
Too many circles, you should replace quite a few of them with sliders
Rework the positions of the circles and sliders, some are too close/far

Party Time!!

OD +2
AR +2

Heart Jolter

OD +1

Easy Single

OD +1
Thank you for modding~~ ^^
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

cFiszpan wrote:

From my Queue (: Let's go!

[Easy Single]

01:54:373 (1) - Move 2nd dot (foot) to x:40 y:152 --- it'll look better
01:56:721 (2) - Move 2nd dot to x:200 y:148 --- same reason
01:58:025 (3) - Move it 2 grid right and 1 grid down to keep spacing
02:05:329 (6) - Move to x:244 y:360 -- spacing
02:06:373 (1) - Move to x:404 y:360 -- looks better

Comments: some patterns as 03:13:156 (1,1) can be tricky, since not all beginners can do it, but it's fine (I could say don't change unless a MAT/BAT suggest it).

[Heart Jolter]

02:06:373 (2,3,4,5) - a bit jump from (4) to (5)? it seems unrankable -- at least for a non-Insane diff
03:11:069 (4,5) - move them 1 grid right

[Ready too, Bingo]

00:23:851 (8,1) - Move together to x:216 y:76, keeping the stack.

------------------------------------------------------------

That's it ^^

That's a Perfect map (:

Good luck for Ranling ^^

Att.
Thanks for the mod :)
Poggo
Hi from Moe Moe Russian Modding Room

[General]

Video should have format AVI, now it's not work~

Plz make combo colors identical on all diffs~

Kiai times and countdowns should be identical on all diffs >.<

Plz make resnap notes on all diffs, it's unsnaped now.

• I very recoment make identical break times on all diffs~

• Honestly need remap all diffs, I give you some suggestion for improvement map~

[Ready too, Bingo?]

• Plz check all spacing. If you use stream make identical distance between notes 00:27:373 - http://puu.sh/2lkP8 e.t.c on all diff~ use distance snap for this~
• NC. Better put nc on every downbeat, It will be looks consistency and better follow for music.
• Slidervelocity 2.5 will be muck better for this bpm and rhythm of the song.
• I very recomment don't use sliders with more 2 repeats~ It's very very comfused and player can miss in this place. It's not good, plz change it on all diff/
• 00:31:547 - this momment unrankable bcz this note not visible and it's impossible for play~

[Party Time!!]

• Slidervelocity 2.0
• The same with spasing. Very different on all map and it's very hard to read.
• The same with NC, put on every downbeat
• All sliders with 2 and more repeats better replace on 2 sliders or notes, It will be more readable and pleasant to play.
• OD, HP, AR +1
• Plz try not make overlaps, it looks very ugly and can confused players.

[Heart Jolter]

• Slidervelocity 1.5
• The same with NC
• The same with spacing.
• The same with sliders with 2 and more repeats.
• And again ugly overlaps >.<

[Easy Single]

• Here better put NC on every second downbeat.
• Plz remake all overlaps as this 00:36:634 and etc. It cal will be confused beginners.
• And in some place you have different spacing check it on all diff plz. On easy all spasing should be identical.

In general hitsounds looks normaly~ It's only general things what you should fix, here need moreee work. Good luck~
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from Moe Moe Russian Modding Room

[General]

Video should have format AVI, now it's not work~

Plz make combo colors identical on all diffs~

Kiai times and countdowns should be identical on all diffs >.<

Plz make resnap notes on all diffs, it's unsnaped now.

• I very recoment make identical break times on all diffs~

• Honestly need remap all diffs, I give you some suggestion for improvement map~

[Ready too, Bingo?]

• Plz check all spacing. If you use stream make identical distance between notes 00:27:373 - http://puu.sh/2lkP8 e.t.c on all diff~ use distance snap for this~
• NC. Better put nc on every downbeat, It will be looks consistency and better follow for music.
• Slidervelocity 2.5 will be muck better for this bpm and rhythm of the song.
• I very recomment don't use sliders with more 2 repeats~ It's very very comfused and player can miss in this place. It's not good, plz change it on all diff/
• 00:31:547 - this momment unrankable bcz this note not visible and it's impossible for play~

[Party Time!!]

• Slidervelocity 2.0
• The same with spasing. Very different on all map and it's very hard to read.
• The same with NC, put on every downbeat
• All sliders with 2 and more repeats better replace on 2 sliders or notes, It will be more readable and pleasant to play.
• OD, HP, AR +1
• Plz try not make overlaps, it looks very ugly and can confused players.

[Heart Jolter]

• Slidervelocity 1.5
• The same with NC
• The same with spacing.
• The same with sliders with 2 and more repeats.
• And again ugly overlaps >.<

[Easy Single]

• Here better put NC on every second downbeat.
• Plz remake all overlaps as this 00:36:634 and etc. It cal will be confused beginners.
• And in some place you have different spacing check it on all diff plz. On easy all spasing should be identical.

In general hitsounds looks normaly~ It's only general things what you should fix, here need moreee work. Good luck~
Thanks for the... advice... I'll remap them all o.o
luxoDeh
Hi! from my modding queue! :)

EASY SINGLE

00:32:460 (1) - fix spacing, in easy diff is very important
01:01:677 (1) - try not to make this touch the previous slider
01:13:677 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:982 (1) - make this spinner finish at 01:35:069 -
01:46:025 (5) - make this whit the same curve as the next slider
03:30:895 (3,4,5) - try to avoid this, because in the rest of the map you never did this, so delete the second note
I suggest also to recheck all the spacing in this map, I found hard to undertand what spacing did you used. recheck it also in other diffs, just to be sure :)

HEART JOLTER

00:28:808 (1) - ry to avoid this, in normal diff a slider with lots of reverse can be confusing.
00:35:069 (4) - ^ try to delete the last reverse and add a note at 00:36:634 -
01:47:590 (1,2,3,4) - these notes are confusing, because some of them end in a blue thick, so, try to replace it with a slider, so, it would be more easy to read.
02:23:069 - why don't make a spinner here?

PARTY TIME!!

01:40:286 (5,6) - move them one grid down
01:57:503 - why don't add a note here? I feel empty

that's all. the map is not bad, with some good correction it could also be veery good. anyway, good luck! ;)
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! from my modding queue! :)

EASY SINGLE

00:32:460 (1) - fix spacing, in easy diff is very important
01:01:677 (1) - try not to make this touch the previous slider
01:13:677 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:982 (1) - make this spinner finish at 01:35:069 -
01:46:025 (5) - make this whit the same curve as the next slider
03:30:895 (3,4,5) - try to avoid this, because in the rest of the map you never did this, so delete the second note
I suggest also to recheck all the spacing in this map, I found hard to undertand what spacing did you used. recheck it also in other diffs, just to be sure :)

HEART JOLTER

00:28:808 (1) - ry to avoid this, in normal diff a slider with lots of reverse can be confusing.
00:35:069 (4) - ^ try to delete the last reverse and add a note at 00:36:634 -
01:47:590 (1,2,3,4) - these notes are confusing, because some of them end in a blue thick, so, try to replace it with a slider, so, it would be more easy to read.
02:23:069 - why don't make a spinner here?

PARTY TIME!!

01:40:286 (5,6) - move them one grid down
01:57:503 - why don't add a note here? I feel empty

that's all. the map is not bad, with some good correction it could also be veery good. anyway, good luck! ;)
Looks useful to me... :D Thanks~ ^^
scanter
Hi ~ request my modding queue sorry my poor mod quality & English :(

[General]
change new mp3. I recommend 192kbps.
same as all about colors.
Should change new video. this has advertise.
Timing unsnap has many. should same all about timing point.

[Easy Single]
Should same about all notes distance. like x1.0
CS -1
00:43:416 (4) - This is unrankable factor. slider arrow hiding from number 2. should move to different place.
01:18:373 (1,2) - Change orders. it doesn't good fit. because, 01:18:373 (1) this is overlapped by 01:15:242 (1)
01:41:851 (4) - Clear at slider's passing whistle.
02:50:199 (1,2,3,4) - plz perfect stack on every slider's end.
03:31:938 (1,2,3) - This shape is not good. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670536
This is code.
SPOILER
316,88,211938,6,8,L|424:112,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,212982,2,8,L|420:272,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,352,214025,2,0,P|420:308|288:320,1,200

[Heart Jolter]
00:32:460 (1,2,3) - How about this rhythm? If you're follow vocals, looks good to me. http://puu.sh/2nd4M
00:50:199 (3) - Following vocals. makes slider one. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670561 sorry this angry BG lol
00:51:634 (6) - In normal diff, circle on the blue tick is not good. how about change slider? like this. check it out number 5 http://puu.sh/2nd9D
01:18:112 - this drain break time a little strange. I recommend delete it.
01:39:242 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:32:460 (1,2,3)
01:58:025 (1,2,3) - same as 00:51:634 (6)
02:12:634 (1) - Clear at slider's passing whistle.
02:41:851 - Same as 01:18:112
03:04:808 (6) - How about this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670567
This is code.
SPOILER
216,60,184808,2,0,L|300:72,1,75
284,132,185329,2,0,L|209:121,1,75
156,148,185851,2,0,P|184:240|236:256,1,150

[Party Time!!]
00:25:677 (6) - I recommend perfect stack on number 4. move to x:188, y:128
00:42:634 (3) - Ctrl + G
01:11:329 (6,7,8) - Suddenly jump. you should fix distance at x0.8
01:43:416 - Add 1 circle.
02:08:460 - It doesn't fit drain break time. arrange more notes. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670580
02:59:329 - same reason.

[Ready too, Bingo?]
Argh. you should remapping this diff.
00:30:503 (1) - This circle is overmapping. should delete it. I don't hear any sound.
00:32:199 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/2ne71
00:35:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just overmapping. I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/2nefD I think, slider jump looks well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670612
00:37:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/2neyZ
00:40:156 (4) - Should delete. I don't hear any sound.
00:40:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - similarly case in 00:32:199 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
00:42:634 (1,2,3) - change slider one.
00:43:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overmapping. same as 00:35:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:45:243 (1,2,3,4) - change 1/2 slider. 1/4 wasn't fit well.
00:49:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapping. similar as 00:35:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:52:286 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
00:53:851 (2,3,4,5,6) - Change 1/2 arrow slider. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670617
00:55:808 (2) - Clear this circle. I don't hear any sound.
00:56:851 (6) - ^
00:57:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:45:243 (1,2,3,4)
01:02:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Every on blue tick slider or circle must delete or change.

Since this, maybe you know what I'm saying. btw good luck ! and sorry my poor English and mod quality :(
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

scanter wrote:

Hi ~ request my modding queue sorry my poor mod quality & English :(

[General]
change new mp3. I recommend 192kbps. o_o
same as all about colors. o_o
Should change new video. this has advertise. o_o
Timing unsnap has many. should same all about timing point.

[Easy Single]
Should same about all notes distance. like x1.0 o_o
CS -1
00:43:416 (4) - This is unrankable factor. slider arrow hiding from number 2. should move to different place.
01:18:373 (1,2) - Change orders. it doesn't good fit. because, 01:18:373 (1) this is overlapped by 01:15:242 (1)
01:41:851 (4) - Clear at slider's passing whistle.
02:50:199 (1,2,3,4) - plz perfect stack on every slider's end.
03:31:938 (1,2,3) - This shape is not good. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670536
This is code.
SPOILER
316,88,211938,6,8,L|424:112,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,212982,2,8,L|420:272,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,352,214025,2,0,P|420:308|288:320,1,200


[Heart Jolter]
00:32:460 (1,2,3) - How about this rhythm? If you're follow vocals, looks good to me. http://puu.sh/2nd4M
00:50:199 (3) - Following vocals. makes slider one. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670561 sorry this angry BG lol ✔ XD
00:51:634 (6) - In normal diff, circle on the blue tick is not good. how about change slider? like this. check it out number 5 http://puu.sh/2nd9D
01:18:112 - this drain break time a little strange. I recommend delete it.
01:39:242 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:32:460 (1,2,3)
01:58:025 (1,2,3) - same as 00:51:634 (6)
02:12:634 (1) - Clear at slider's passing whistle. o_o
02:41:851 - Same as 01:18:112
03:04:808 (6) - How about this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670567
This is code.
SPOILER
216,60,184808,2,0,L|300:72,1,75
284,132,185329,2,0,L|209:121,1,75
156,148,185851,2,0,P|184:240|236:256,1,150


[Party Time!!]
00:25:677 (6) - I recommend perfect stack on number 4. move to x:188, y:128
00:42:634 (3) - Ctrl + G
01:11:329 (6,7,8) - Suddenly jump. you should fix distance at x0.8
01:43:416 - Add 1 circle.
02:08:460 - It doesn't fit drain break time. arrange more notes. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670580
02:59:329 - same reason.

[Ready too, Bingo?]
Argh. you should remapping this diff. T^T
00:30:503 (1) - This circle is overmapping. should delete it. I don't hear any sound.
00:32:199 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/2ne71
00:35:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just overmapping. I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/2nefD I think, slider jump looks well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670612
00:37:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/2neyZ
00:40:156 (4) - Should delete. I don't hear any sound.
00:40:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - similarly case in 00:32:199 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
00:42:634 (1,2,3) - change slider one.
00:43:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overmapping. same as 00:35:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:45:243 (1,2,3,4) - change 1/2 slider. 1/4 wasn't fit well. o_o
00:49:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapping. similar as 00:35:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:52:286 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
00:53:851 (2,3,4,5,6) - Change 1/2 arrow slider. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670617
00:55:808 (2) - Clear this circle. I don't hear any sound.
00:56:851 (6) - ^
00:57:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:45:243 (1,2,3,4) o_o
01:02:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Every on blue tick slider or circle must delete or change.

Since this, maybe you know what I'm saying. btw good luck ! and sorry my poor English and mod quality :(
Thanks for the mod ^^ It's okay, i can understand it well :)
Aeonian Sonder
[Gerenal]
THIS IS THE FIRST PRIORITY: CHANGE THE MP3, this version is the wrong
Not everyone has the same hitsounds as the default skin. Remember to put in sounds into the song file, change sounds to custom 1&2 (I don't know about you) Oh yeah, this sounds good for the soft hitsounds. Replace the soft clap, whistle, finish with the normal clap, whistle, and finish.

[Ready to, Bingo?]
01:02:721 to 01:04:547 - Fix the triangle formations, tilt your head sideways
01:24:895 - same as above
01:18:373 to 01:19:677 - same as above
01:20:721 to 01:21:243 - same as above
01:24:895 to 01:25:416 - same as above
01:32:982 - replace all 15 combos with 1/6 sliders, half to beat per slider
02:06:373 to 02:07:677 - Fix Trangle formations, tilt head
02:14:721 to 02:16:286 - Fix Hexagon Formation
02:23:069 to 02:24:112 - Fix Triangle Formation
02:56:460 - I don't really recommend doing this, and it's the same issue as the one 4 above this comment. I don't know how val0108 got pas this one
03:18:764 - It's flying men. HALLEUJAH!!
03:21:503 - Same issue as one above this comment
03:43:677 - This is just extra sounds of the music, don't recommend considering this part "Music"

[Easy Single]
&
[Heart Jolter]
&
[Party Time!!]
Nothing much to say about this. Just remember to use distance snap for non-insane difficulties.

May I guest in this?
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

-APXH wrote:

[Gerenal]
THIS IS THE FIRST PRIORITY: CHANGE THE MP3, this version is the wrong Okay.. T^T
Not everyone has the same hitsounds as the default skin. Remember to put in sounds into the song file, change sounds to custom 1&2 (I don't know about you) Oh yeah, this sounds good for the soft hitsounds. Replace the soft clap, whistle, finish with the normal clap, whistle, and finish. o_o

[Ready to, Bingo?]
01:02:721 to 01:04:547 - Fix the triangle formations, tilt your head sideways
01:24:895 - same as above o_o
01:18:373 to 01:19:677 - same as above o_o
01:20:721 to 01:21:243 - same as above o_o
01:24:895 to 01:25:416 - same as above o_o
01:32:982 - replace all 15 combos with 1/6 sliders, half to beat per slider o_o
02:06:373 to 02:07:677 - Fix Triangle formations, tilt head o_o
02:14:721 to 02:16:286 - Fix Hexagon Formation o_o
02:23:069 to 02:24:112 - Fix Triangle Formation
02:56:460 - I don't really recommend doing this, and it's the same issue as the one 4 above this comment. I don't know how val0108 got pas this one o_o
03:18:764 - It's flying men. HALLEUJAH!! O_O
03:21:503 - Same issue as one above this comment o_o
03:43:677 - This is just extra sounds of the music, don't recommend considering this part "Music" ;~;

[Easy Single]
&
[Heart Jolter]
&
[Party Time!!]
Nothing much to say about this. Just remember to use distance snap for non-insane difficulties.
Thanks.. o.o

-APXH wrote:

May I guest in this?
I really want to say sorry for ignoring your post ... T.T but you can make a guest diff on this map :3
Aeonian Sonder

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

I really want to say sorry for ignoring your post ... T.T but you can make a guest diff on this map :3
Yeah first, do you need help find the correct version?
Topic Starter
Cerulean Veyron

-APXH wrote:

Yeah first, do you need help find the correct version?
Yes(please?) >_<
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