Vass
00:16:335 (2) - make every hit with normal-hitwhistle
00:19:811 (2) - ^
02:31:986 (3) - Scraping the HP bar
02:35:464 (6,7) - what's this?! It's a big bug , you must fix it up
03:09:390 (1) - remove whistle, it sounds really strange

Raging Bull wrote:

Vass:
-1 AR? Big jump from normal to this. There's a Hard already.
00:09:052 - You can't silence notes. Only spinner ends. Raise the volume more. They aren't silenced,5% is allowed.
00:10:792 - ^ ^
00:39:813 (1,2,3) - Reverse selection? Hm..interesting suggestion,I fixed it in some way.
02:37:217 - Do you need that uninherited timing section? Seems unnecessary. Please remove it. Oh,okay!
02:46:782 (3) - Unsnapped note. Fixed!

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Vass]
00:36:335 (1,2) - stack They're stacked.
01:53:726 (4,5) - ^ Okay.
03:17:869 (1,2) - not a line What? o_O

spboxer3 wrote:

[Vass]
00:26:226 (2) - stack Okay.
00:27:966 (6) - ^ ^
00:44:813 (5) - oops up and left 1 grid (size 4)[nazi] Hm,fixed in other way.
01:16:335 (3) - up 1 grid [nazi too] Okay.
03:16:130 (1) - stack Okay.

spboxer3 wrote:

[Taiko Collab]
I have some idea
03:18:074 (1) -
03:19:813 (1) -
03:21:552 (1) -
^all have big red? All added finish~

Leorda wrote:

Let's see

General
* I have 3 OSB in your mapset, remove the wrong one All Deleted
* Why Marisa and Reimu BG? Find Elly BG! You can find it at safebooru, it's safe for work Sorry didn't find anything "safe" there
* Mapping it into end of song? Like [Vass]? I think this length is good. Easy/normal/hard 2 mins. Insane 3 mins


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Hard
00:30:900 (4) - Try not to touch the sliderboder (64% Nazi)
02:31:770 (2) - ^

Naziii. Fixed
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I can't find something wrong

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hard]
00:41:987 (2,4) - Add hitsound Finish, the song uses the same instrument for enphaiss on all 4 notes, it would make more sense all 4 use the Finish. (Same for similar sections)
I removed all finish hitsounds from (1,3) and I added soft whistles there because there are no cymbals there (my bad)... If I would have added finishes on (2,4) that would be too much IMO.
00:57:205 (1) - Since Finishes are often better used on those enphasis sections like the ones mentioned before, you'd be better off without the finish here, if anything do a quick normal hitnormal switch then back to soft sampleset ASAP (or add it as a custom hitsound for finish on soft sampleset C1 or something) since it would sound better that way imo. (Same for other similar sections).
I tried to use finishes when then cymbal sound appears in song
00:58:944 (1) - Later in the song you use clap on the zones like the start of this slider, but the other section you used it at is actually softer, it would make more sense for the claps to be used on this kiai section instead.
Yes. I agree with this. so I added claps in the first kiai section too

[Normal]
00:41:552 (1,2,3,4) - Add hitsound Finish.
00:55:466 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Same as in [Hard]
01:11:552 (2,3) - Align them better?Okay fixed~

Most of the stuff is alright, but [Vass] needs lots of improvements first.

1. Timing:well,the offset I got: 1546(-7) ,please renap all note if you want to change it xD also please check the mod before consider this!
2. Oh man,you need to disable the countdown!

1. 00:36:335 (1,2) - This slider overlap seems ugly imo,change it if you want.
2. 00:39:813 (1,2) - ^Same! (oh,I won't note this again)
3. 01:23:292 (4) - Too follow your new combo pattern,please add a new combo here and remove new combo at 01:24:161 (1) - .
4. 01:58:944 (4,1,2) - This pattern might make confused to newbie because (2)- will be coverd by (4)- 's skin elemet!Oh,please look at the photo!
   
   look at this

   
5. 01:52:422 (2,1,2) - Forgot this lol This may make confused also.

1. 00:25:900 (x) - Spinner doesn't fit here too much!Please use note/slider to instead of spinner D:
2. 00:41:118 (4,1) - If I were you,I would use note instead of slider I'm sure it's not that hard to play with 1/2 click in Normal diff.
3. 00:55:031 (4,1) - ^Same!
4. 01:14:161 (1) - Please add a new combo here!Because this combo length is longer than others,you should consistent the combo length!
5. 02:15:248 (4) - A little nazi here,try to make (4)- align with (3.5)- ?It'll looks better imo.

1. 00:39:813 (4) – Oh,this triplet seems really weird!It extremely not fit the music at all,I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here.
2. 00:57:639 (2,3,4) – Well,probably align with (1)- the end of the slider?That should be looks better.
3. 02:22:422 (1) –I have a tiny suggestion here: Probably try to symmetrical with 02:21:552 (4) -?
4. I highly recommend you map this diff to the end because you did a full-mapping in Insane diff and half mapping in Easy and Normal diff,so I you you should do a full mapping in Hard diff.

1. 00:09:813 (2) –Please remove soft-finish here because here doesn’t have a accent beat so it doesn’t fit for a finish.
2. 00:23:618 (4) –To follow your hitsound pattern,please add a whistle here!
3. 00:27:096 (4) -^ Same!
4. 00:43:183 (x) –Probably add a note here to follow the instrument but you need to adjust the spacing if you do that!
5. 01:58:944 (7) –New combo here to consistent your combo pattern.Totally my suggestion only,ignore it if you disagree.
6. 02:10:031 (3,4) – Man,the spacing are inconsistent here,did you make it on purpose?If not,please make it.
7. 02:12:857 (5,6,7,8) – Little nazi here:This is a unperfect square,probably replace 02:13:509 (8) - ?
8. 02:34:596 ~ 02:47:639 (x) – No please!These finish doesn’t fit the music and you put them too much…

kanpakyin wrote:

ignore it if you disagree