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Liz Triangle x Like a Rabbit - Moonlight Step

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Leorda
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Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 Agustus 2011 at 17:54:06

Artist: Liz Triangle x Like a Rabbit
Title: Moonlight Step
Source: Touhou
Tags: the embodiment of scarlet devil koumakyou rumia stage 1 boss lily-an kaztora
BPM: 133
Filesize: 6674kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Darkness (4,86 stars, 465 notes)
  2. Grayness (3,13 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Lightness (1,77 stars, 226 notes)
Download: Liz Triangle x Like a Rabbit - Moonlight Step
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I think this map is a really not bad/good because it's too much copy-paste at kiai due to repetive of the music. If you think that copy & paste is unrankable/not good, please tell me. And i'll remap....... Also please don't call me a lazy mapper >.<

P.S. I lol'd hard because all diff is over 500 combo

~Difficulty~
Lightness (Easy) -> Complete
Grayness (Normal) -> Complete
Darkness (Insane) -> Complete

~Special Thanks~
1) S i R i R u (for SB elements)
2) VanMoNky (for SB elements in YUI - Sea)
3) Kurosanyan (MOD)
4) KuraiPettan (MOD)
5) Nivalis (MOD)
6) Jigoku-nyan (MOD) (Previous known as Tenshi-nyan)
7) Lovhin456 (MOD) (Loooooong)
8) Banvi (MOD)
9) wcx19911123 (MOD)
10) swish (MOD)
11) Faust (MOD)
12) Moody (MOD)
13) Lilac (MOD)
14) Sakurano Hanahubuki (Previous known as Sakura Hana)
15) James2250
Last edited by Leorda , edited 14 times in total.
Hakeru
2,360 posts
Joined May 2010
Hakeru
This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!

aaaaa ;_;
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Hakeru Prismriver wrote:

This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!

aaaaa ;_;
the progress of upload is not 100% due the internet connection
Kurosanyan
2,642 posts
Joined November 2009
Kurosanyan
[General]
  1. Lower the spellcard sound? It's really loud and we can't hear the music D:
  2. Tags: It's devil, not devils. Uh what is Koumakyou?
  3. Make notes brighter please? :( Try this:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 191,128,128
    Combo2 : 155,79,79
    Combo3 : 191,0,0
  4. Kiai time should start and end at the same time on all diff. Why is it different at the end on [Darkness] :(
[Light]
  1. 01:07:567 (2,3) - Fix the spacing?
  2. 01:31:026 (8,2) - Could you make symmetry for those sliders? A little nazi mod :>
  3. 01:42:304 (1) - y:200 ?
  4. 02:08:469 (4,1) - Fix the spacing! :(
  5. 02:18:394 (9,1) - You really shouldn't put the spinner so close on an easy. Make it start at 02:22:229 - or 02:22:454 -
  6. 02:34:635 (7,8) - Same thing than 01:31:026 (8,2) -
  7. 02:35:988 (8,1) - Same problem about the spinner.
  8. 03:30:575 (1,2) - Fix the spacing please.
  9. 03:38:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - long combo is long. Add 1 or 2 new combo there.
  10. 03:48:620 (5,1) - Same problem about the spinner.
[Gray]
  1. 00:44:560 - Add a circle here? I know that you follow the vocal but this gap feels weird :(
  2. 01:17:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stack is big D: How about making it into 2 groups of 4 stacked notes or 4 groups of 2 stacked notes?
  3. 01:44:108 (3,4) - Fix the spacing? Or make 01:45:913 (5) - closer.
  4. 02:17:266 - Add a note?
  5. 02:54:936 (2) - x:160 y:192
  6. 02:55:387 (3) - x:160 y:96
  7. 02:55:838 (4) - x:256 y:96
  8. 02:56:289 (5) - Stack under (1)
  9. 02:56:740 (6) - x:258 y:288
  10. 02:57:191 (7) - x:352 y:288
  11. 02:57:642 (8) - x:352 y:192
  12. 02:58:093 (1) - Stack under 02:56:289 (5) -
  13. 02:58:996 (2) - Stack under 02:57:642 (8) - Now the square pattern is perfect.
  14. 03:39:372 (4,5) - Little spacing error.
  15. 03:42:305 (3,4) - Bigger spacing error :(
  16. 03:45:237 (2) - Fix the spacing?
  17. 03:47:042 (5) - ^
[Dark]
  1. 00:43:658 (5) - Add a repeat?
  2. 00:47:041 - 00:47:492 - Add notes here?
  3. 01:17:605 (6,12) - Remove those notes? Sounds a little overmapped.
  4. 01:20:988 (4,8) - Same for those, sounds overmapped :(
  5. 01:22:792 (4,8) - Same here.
  6. 01:28:657 (5) - ^
  7. 01:30:011 (4,8) - ^
  8. 01:57:304 (2,4) - Sounds a little like overmapping too but imo it should be ok for those.
  9. 02:08:244 (4,5) - A little too close, not really nice, like this? http://puu.sh/1M88
  10. 02:22:567 (6,12) - Sounds overmapped again.
  11. 02:25:951 (4,8) - ^
  12. 02:27:756 (4,8) - ^
  13. 02:33:620 (4) - ^
  14. 02:35:425 (10) - ^
  15. 03:23:695 (4,8) - ^
  16. 03:25:499 (4,8) - ^
  17. 03:31:364 (5) - ^
  18. 03:32:718 (4,8) - ^
That's all o/ Star~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Kurosanyan wrote:

[General]
  1. Lower the spellcard sound? It's really loud and we can't hear the music D:
  2. Tags: It's devil, not devils. Uh what is Koumakyou?
  3. Make notes brighter please? :( Try this:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 191,128,128
    Combo2 : 155,79,79
    Combo3 : 191,0,0
  4. Kiai time should start and end at the same time on all diff. Why is it different at the end on [Darkness] :(
[Light]
  1. 01:07:567 (2,3) - Fix the spacing?
  2. 01:31:026 (8,2) - Could you make symmetry for those sliders? A little nazi mod :>
  3. 01:42:304 (1) - y:200 ?
  4. 02:08:469 (4,1) - Fix the spacing! :(
  5. 02:18:394 (9,1) - You really shouldn't put the spinner so close on an easy. Make it start at 02:22:229 - or 02:22:454 - NO
  6. 02:34:635 (7,8) - Same thing than 01:31:026 (8,2) -
  7. 02:35:988 (8,1) - Same problem about the spinner. NO
  8. 03:30:575 (1,2) - Fix the spacing please.
  9. 03:38:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - long combo is long. Add 1 or 2 new combo there.
  10. 03:48:620 (5,1) - Same problem about the spinner.NO
[Gray]
  1. 00:44:560 - Add a circle here? I know that you follow the vocal but this gap feels weird :(
  2. 01:17:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stack is big D: How about making it into 2 groups of 4 stacked notes or 4 groups of 2 stacked notes?
  3. 01:44:108 (3,4) - Fix the spacing? Or make 01:45:913 (5) - closer.
  4. 02:17:266 - Add a note?
  5. 02:54:936 (2) - x:160 y:192
  6. 02:55:387 (3) - x:160 y:96
  7. 02:55:838 (4) - x:256 y:96
  8. 02:56:289 (5) - Stack under (1)
  9. 02:56:740 (6) - x:258 y:288
  10. 02:57:191 (7) - x:352 y:288
  11. 02:57:642 (8) - x:352 y:192
  12. 02:58:093 (1) - Stack under 02:56:289 (5) -
  13. 02:58:996 (2) - Stack under 02:57:642 (8) - Now the square pattern is perfect.
  14. 03:39:372 (4,5) - Little spacing error.
  15. 03:42:305 (3,4) - Bigger spacing error :(
  16. 03:45:237 (2) - Fix the spacing?
  17. 03:47:042 (5) - ^
[Dark]
  1. 00:43:658 (5) - Add a repeat?
  2. 00:47:041 - 00:47:492 - Add notes here?
  3. 01:17:605 (6,12) - Remove those notes? Sounds a little overmapped. NO
  4. 01:20:988 (4,8) - Same for those, sounds overmapped :( NO
  5. 01:22:792 (4,8) - Same here. NO
  6. 01:28:657 (5) - ^ NO
  7. 01:30:011 (4,8) - ^ NO
  8. 01:57:304 (2,4) - Sounds a little like overmapping too but imo it should be ok for those. NO
  9. 02:08:244 (4,5) - A little too close, not really nice, like this? http://puu.sh/1M88
  10. 02:22:567 (6,12) - Sounds overmapped again. NO
  11. 02:25:951 (4,8) - ^ NO
  12. 02:27:756 (4,8) - ^ NO
  13. 02:33:620 (4) - ^ NO
  14. 02:35:425 (10) - ^ NO
  15. 03:23:695 (4,8) - ^ NO
  16. 03:25:499 (4,8) - ^ NO
  17. 03:31:364 (5) - ^ NO
  18. 03:32:718 (4,8) - ^ NO
That's all o/ Star~
Kurai
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7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Lightness
- OD -1 would be better imo
01:09:146 (5,6) - Stack these notes with 01:08:920 (4) !
01:28:996 (5) - Consider removing this circle, it is not appropriate here.
02:33:958 (5) - ^

Grayness
00:26:514 (6) - It's a bad idea to have a repeat onto this slider, imo you should remove the reverse and add a note at 00:27:642

Darkness
00:45:462 (2,3,4) - This triplet sounds totally worse and retarded. It's totally not appropriate here
00:46:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream too
01:26:063 (1,2) - Why these sliders end onto a blue tick °°
01:57:417 (2) - This circle is too close from the previous one
03:28:770 (1,2) - Why these sliders end onto a blue tick °°
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

KuraiPettan wrote:

Lightness
- OD -1 would be better imo
01:09:146 (5,6) - Stack these notes with 01:08:920 (4) !
01:28:996 (5) - Consider removing this circle, it is not appropriate here.
02:33:958 (5) - ^

Grayness
00:26:514 (6) - It's a bad idea to have a repeat onto this slider, imo you should remove the reverse and add a note at 00:27:642 it's fine

Darkness
00:45:462 (2,3,4) - This triplet sounds totally worse and retarded. It's totally not appropriate here
00:46:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream too no way
01:26:063 (1,2) - Why these sliders end onto a blue tick °° because it's up to me
01:57:417 (2) - This circle is too close from the previous one
03:28:770 (1,2) - Why these sliders end onto a blue tick °° because it's up to me
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Mod request via queue

Sorry ini modnya agak buru-buru xD

[Lightness]
00:24:259 (2) - Geser 3 grid ke atas? (buat mempercantik doang sih)
00:33:733 (1,2) - Jujur cross slider tapi slider pertamanya itu slider wave agak aneh. Mungkin slider pertamanya bisa dibuat bentuk ? (tanda tanya)
00:40:951 (5) - 1 grid ke atas+kiri
03:03:507 (2,3) - Mungkin bisa dibuat agar nggak berdempetan?

[Grayness]
00:38:018 (3) - Mungkin bisa digeser beberapa grid ke bawah? (buat mempercantik juga)
00:40:951 (4,5,6,7,8) - Ini juga, bisa disusun sedemikian rupa (misal: slider fan) supaya kelihatan lebih bagus, sebenarnya ini potensial tapi kalau lurus doang kurang bagus menurut gw
01:17:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mungkin bisa dibuat 4x 1/2 slider yang disusun formasi windmill?
02:07:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sama seperti sebelumnya
02:36:439 (2) - Coba dibuat lebih simetris? (Ini kok terlalu ke kiri xD)
03:48:620 (2) - ^

[Darkness]
00:29:898 (4,5,6) - Uh... menurut gw repeating slider lebih pas
00:46:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - Streamnya... nggak cocok sih menurut gw
01:42:304 (1) - Coba dikurangin 1 repeat terus di 01:46:364 dikasih circle
03:14:334 (1,2,3,4,4,5,6,7,8) - Agak dimiringin sedikit?

Kebanyakan untuk mempercantik map sih, jadi terserah mau diikutin atau nggak
Bintang!
Patchouli
824 posts
Joined July 2009
Patchouli
star :)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
Thx Nivalis and Patche :)
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
Nice map! I can't really find any major issue here, just some nazi ones. >_>

So here you go.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Chacha17 wrote:

Nice map! I can't really find any major issue here, just some nazi ones. >_>

So here you go.
thx ^^
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Jigoku-nyan here to bring hell to your map :3

bleh suggestions bleh

General
Difficulty spread could be better, instead of making a 2 star diff you should've made a 4,5 star diff or something like that.
No point complaing about that, though.

The rain SB looks awesum :3

Darkness
00:35:086 - add note + clap
00:44:560 - add note + finish
00:45:913 (4) - 1 grid left
00:48:169 (3,4,5) - arrange like this AKA delete 4, turn 3 into a 1/1 slider and put 5 where 4 was
SPOILER
01:19:071 (1,2) - decrease volume by 15%
01:42:304 (1) - not perfectly round :3
also, remove the last repeat and add a 1/1 repeat slider at 01:45:462 -
02:12:530 (1) - add clap
02:24:033 (1,2) - decrease volume by 15%
02:54:484 (1) - ^

Nice stuff, though I wonder why this only gets you 12kk points...


Grayness
Lower the volume in the Kiai parts by at least 15%
02:54:484 (1) - here too :3

Lightness
00:48:169 (4) - add NC
00:52:229 (1) - move this a lil' bit away from dat slider.
01:27:417 (5) - don't stack this?
01:29:672 (6,7) - they barely touch each other :O
01:53:131 (2) - 1 grid right + add clap to end
01:54:936 (3) - 1 grid down + add clap to end
02:02:154 (7) - add clap to end
02:03:958 (1,2) - they touch each other... how lewd :3 (btw there are more, don't wanna list them all up.)
02:32:379 (5) - don't stack this
03:46:364 (4) - move the last control point ~ 1-2 grids up


Lower the volume in the Kiai parts by at least 15%
02:54:484 (1) - here too :3

lolstar
Kyonko Hizara
2,855 posts
Joined August 2010
Kyonko Hizara
:)
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod ~

General;
- Everything good here ~

SB;
- 03:12:530 >> SB Load goes up to 5.62x here and it continues for a decent amount of time ;~;
- Some of your SB elements are more than 640x480 ;~;
- Maybe change the color of the "Speed up" to one that is like how the color of the lyrics is ?

Lightness;
- 01:27:868 >> Align with (5)
- 01:31:026 >> All these repeats don't sound good to me at all. Take all of them out and make something else on the space left
- 02:35:988 >> ^
- 02:40:161 >> Better to end at 02:42:304
- 02:54:372 >> Not necessary, you can change the volume/sample set with the previous one
- 03:10:725 >> Remove clap, add finish
- 03:14:334 >> ^
- 03:17:943 >> ^
- 03:48:620 >> I think you can wrap (4) better with this, also remove a repeat and add a note at 03:51:327
- 03:52:229 >> I think the spinner should start here

Grayness;
- 00:56:603 >> Add a note here ?
- 01:06:214 >> New combo should start here
- 02:36:439 >> Try to make it more symmetrical ?
- 02:54:372 >> Not necessary, you can change the volume/sample set with the previous one
- 03:08:244 >> Add a note ?
- 03:43:657 >> Move this to the previous red tick and remove clap ?
- 03:48:620 >> More symmetrical. Remove the repeat then make a slider at 03:51:327 to 03:52:003
- 03:52:229 >> The spinner should start here

Darkness;
- 00:39:823 >> 2 grids left
- 01:20:763 (2,4,8) >> These don't seem necessary to me
- 01:22:567 (2,4,8) >> ^
- 01:26:063 (1,2) >> Sound better if they end on a the previous red tick
- 01:42:304 >> Remove a repeat and map the space left
- 02:25:725 (2,4,8) >> Don't seem necessary to me
- 02:27:530 (2,4,6) >> ^
- 02:54:372 >> Not necessary, you can change the volume/sample set with the previous one
- 03:01:702 >> New combo starts here
- 03:05:311 >> ^
- 03:23:469 (2,4,8) >> Not necessary to me
- 03:25:274 (2,4,8) >> ^
- 03:28:770 (1,2) >> Sound better if they end at the previous red tick
- 03:48:620 >> Too many repeats I think ...

* Star ~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

lovhin456 wrote:

blah blah blah
wow, too much. Few some mods are fixed, but others seems pointless for me
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
[Lightness]
0:37:342 (3,1) - swap new combos
0:40:951 (5,1)- ^
1:02:605 (5) - add new combo
1:08:920 (4,5,6) - maybe add a reversed 1/2 slider instead of those notes, so it's a bit easier? *click*
1:17:041 (7,1) - swap new combos
1:22:454 (1) - delete new combo
2:18:394 (9) - new combo
2:27:417 (1) - delete new combo
3:25:161 (1) - ^

[Grayness]
0:23:357 (1) - one grid higher
0:26:514 (6) - add new combo, and delete it on 0:29:221 (1)
1:31:477 (6) - new combo
2:20:199 (1) - delete new combo
3:34:184 (6) - new combo

[Darkness]
0:29:898 (4,5,6) - add some another claps?
0:46:590 (2) - spacing
0:48:169 (3,4,5,6,7) - do not stick up to the hitsound pattern, because parts like that sound too awkward u.u
0:56:740 (4) - new combo, since it's slowing down.
1:01:026 (4) - new combo?
1:04:635 (4) - ^
1:24:259 (3) - ctrl + r?
1:29:221 (1) or 1:29:672 (1) - delete new combo
1:30:124 (5) - one grid to the left maybe?
1:38:920 (1) - inconsistent spacing, albo a bit covered by the previous slider. one grid higher, that also applies to the rest of the notes until the spinner.
2:12:530 (1) - delete new combo?
2:17:492 (1) - ^
2:27:191 (1) - ^
2:34:635 (7) - new combo
2:54:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are that huge jumps really necessary? for such a quiet part? ._.
3:26:966 (3) - ctrl + r, just like before?
3:31:928 (1) or 03:32:379 (1) - yep, delete new combo, once again
3:40:161 (3) - a bit inconsistent spacing, click it and check the spacing counter, you'll know what to do
3:41:064 (7) - ^
3:47:266 (3,4,5) - exceed it a bit, like (4)'s y=130 and (5)'s y=67


if you'd storyboard that rain section only, but only for the hardest diff's speed up, that would be unique and interesting :3 but oh well, don't mind me saying that. :P
good luck!
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
[Lightness]
01:28:319 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid up?
02:33:281 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid down?
02:34:184 (5) nazi : move 1 grid down & 2 grid right?
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here?

[Grayness]
01:45:011 (4,5) hmm , can you make more beautiful??
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here?
02:59:898 (3) can you make more symmentry?

[Darkness]
fine to me

nice ;)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

banvi wrote:

[Lightness]
01:28:319 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid up?
02:33:281 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid down?
02:34:184 (5) nazi : move 1 grid down & 2 grid right?
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here? NO

[Grayness]
01:45:011 (4,5) hmm , can you make more beautiful??
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here? NO
02:59:898 (3) can you make more symmentry?

[Darkness]
fine to me

nice ;)
thx
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
HI

[Lightness]
01:17:041 (1) - kinda confusing , hard to know when it end
01:29:672 (6,7,2) - symmetrical plz
01:39:597 (4) - confusing
01:41:402 (6) - ^
01:46:590 (1) - start at 01:46:026 ?
02:00:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to sliders
02:34:635 (6,7) - symmetrical
03:46:364 (4,5) - around better

[Grayness]
01:44:108 (3,4) - spacing
02:16:590 (5) - move to 02:16:364 , pay attention to spacing if you do this
02:17:041 (6) - move to 02:16:815 , ^

[Darkness]
01:24:259 (3) - symmetrical
01:25:612 (4,5) - ctrl+r
01:38:920 (1,2,3,4) - ocnfusing , (1) is not same as others
03:01:928 (1) - when play , this is too near to (11)
03:28:319 (4,5) - ctrl+r , then overlap better

that's all
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
・w ・～
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
thanks mod request~ :)

All Suggestion

[General]
  1. hmm.. mistake is found in lyrics :o

    please check this lyrics~~
[Lightness]
SPOILER
  1. 01:09:823 (1,2,3) - x:376,x:332,x:288 - y:48
  2. 01:28:093 (2) - x:342 y:273?
  3. 01:39:597 (4) - change like this?



  4. 02:00:800 (3) - x:412 y:48
  5. 02:01:702 (6) - x:280 y:124
  6. 02:22:116 (1) - hmm.. 02:24:710 - end to here?
  7. 03:13:883 (4) - x:312 y:96
  8. 03:14:334 (5) - x:224 y:96
  9. 03:14:785 (6) - x:136 y:96
  10. 03:15:236 (7) - x:136 y:184
  11. 03:15:687 (8) - x:224 y:184
  12. 03:25:838 (3) - spacing


[Grayness]

SPOILER
  1. 02:02:379 (4) - spacing
  2. 02:31:702 (5) - spacing
  3. 02:33:056 (2) - spacing
  4. 02:34:861 (5) - spacing
  5. 03:13:883 (6) - 1grid left?


[Darkness]

looks fine~

good map~ star :)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

swish wrote:

thanks mod request~ :)

All Suggestion

[General]
  1. hmm.. mistake is found in lyrics :o

    please check this lyrics~~
[Lightness]
SPOILER
  1. 01:09:823 (1,2,3) - x:376,x:332,x:288 - y:48
  2. 01:28:093 (2) - x:342 y:273?
  3. 01:39:597 (4) - change like this?



  4. 02:00:800 (3) - x:412 y:48
  5. 02:01:702 (6) - x:280 y:124
  6. 02:22:116 (1) - hmm.. 02:24:710 - end to here?
  7. 03:13:883 (4) - x:312 y:96
  8. 03:14:334 (5) - x:224 y:96
  9. 03:14:785 (6) - x:136 y:96
  10. 03:15:236 (7) - x:136 y:184
  11. 03:15:687 (8) - x:224 y:184
  12. 03:25:838 (3) - spacing


[Grayness]

SPOILER
  1. 02:02:379 (4) - spacing
  2. 02:31:702 (5) - spacing
  3. 02:33:056 (2) - spacing
  4. 02:34:861 (5) - spacing
  5. 03:13:883 (6) - 1grid left?


[Darkness]

looks fine~

good map~ star :)
fix some, but I can't see the lyric because of this http://puu.sh/2jfH
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish

Leorda wrote:

fix some, but I can't see the lyric because of this http://puu.sh/2jfH
hmm... Can you see this?
00:23:357~01:49:522
http://puu.sh/2jor

01:49:973~02:42:755
http://puu.sh/2jov

02:54:484~03:55:838
http://puu.sh/2jox

sorry for putting the inconvenience ;__;
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,783 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
Lightness doesn't need anything.

Grayness: Little IRC suggestion to increase the AR by 1 tick.

Darkness: Wow. This is a pretty smooth difficulty, it's got a very a nice constant going for it.

- 00:48:169 - For this section, I have a suggestion for rhythm:
SPOILER

- 00:58:545 - I personally like this section the most. Very nicely done.

- 01:45:011 - Uneven?

- 03:16:139 - Pretty good, it's subtle but it's fitting.
Good usage of slow running slider, followed by a note to finish off.
I'll say the same for the ending as well, the closure came and went pretty nicely, nothing abrupt and
nothing out of place.

Very solid in the sense that there aren't any issues technical-wise. The fluidity of the mapping is something I will commend.

Pretty good map, all the best for ranking.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Faust wrote:

Lightness doesn't need anything.

Grayness: Little IRC suggestion to increase the AR by 1 tick.

Darkness: Wow. This is a pretty smooth difficulty, it's got a very a nice constant going for it.

- 00:48:169 - For this section, I have a suggestion for rhythm:
SPOILER

- 00:58:545 - I personally like this section the most. Very nicely done.

- 01:45:011 - Uneven?

- 03:16:139 - Pretty good, it's subtle but it's fitting.
Good usage of slow running slider, followed by a note to finish off.
I'll say the same for the ending as well, the closure came and went pretty nicely, nothing abrupt and
nothing out of place.

Very solid in the sense that there aren't any issues technical-wise. The fluidity of the mapping is something I will commend.

Pretty good map, all the best for ranking.
thx for mod ^^
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
[Lightness]

02:08:018 (3) - Maybe new combo?

[Grayness]

00:47:717 (6) - Maybe new combo?
01:31:477 (6) - ^
03:34:184 (6) - ^

[Darkness]

Fine

Star~
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
Finally, I get to mod this.

[Lightness]
Relatively fine.

[Grayness]
Grey or Gray? We'll never know.

[Darkness]
00:23:357 (1,2) - Starting off with a jump like that seems a bit unfair too me but I dunno.
01:39:597 (1,2) - The silder's return arrows are hidden underneath the hit.png of 1 which makes this map unrankable.

I always thought it was "踊りましょう"... Might just be me.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Lilac wrote:

[Darkness]
00:23:357 (1,2) - Starting off with a jump like that seems a bit unfair too me but I dunno. It's depending on vocal
01:39:597 (1,2) - The silder's return arrows are hidden underneath the hit.png of 1 which makes this map unrankable Because I have no choice, I replace this into spinner
thx for mod ^^, bubble?
selimsrm
42 posts
Joined November 2010
selimsrm
Fun map, Lightness and Grayness are awesome.
The jumps on Darkness kill me though.

I'd love to see something between Grayness and Darkness. I'll just have to practice jumping more.

+star
LaceWingfield
392 posts
Joined October 2010
LaceWingfield
star :) nice song and map.
i love the SB :D
it said that my message is too short.
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
nice map and SB
star~☆
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biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako
nice map.
star~ :)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
thx for star my map :)

I wish MAT bubble/mod my map before my birthday is start (8 August) :(
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[Storyboard]
The file Black Ball.png isnt used anywhere on the storyboard.
The image mini light.png goes over the Storyboard size restrictions: 640x480 in both directions.


[General]
Make your kiai consistent?
The final spinner is covering some SB action, take this in mind.

[Darkness]
01:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you make the curve align better with the slider curve like you do with 01:22:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
01:34:184 (5) - Hard to predict because the slider tick cant be seen at all, during gameplay.
01:42:304 (1) - This slider isnt perfectly circular.
02:18:394 (1) - Can you make this slider not have sharp edges?
02:56:289 (5) - New combo.

[Grayness]
00:49:522 (2,3) - Move these down a bit so they dont touch the hp bar?

[Lightness]
01:39:597 (4) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty.

Pretty nice map, call me back for a recheck when you've fixed
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Storyboard] ALL FIXED
The file Black Ball.png isnt used anywhere on the storyboard.
The image mini light.png goes over the Storyboard size restrictions: 640x480 in both directions.


[General]
Make your kiai consistent? Done
The final spinner is covering some SB action, take this in mind. I know the final spinner is covering some SB action, but it wouldn't hurt if you play CTB..... doooooonnnn't hate me!

[Darkness] ALL FIXED
01:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you make the curve align better with the slider curve like you do with 01:22:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
01:34:184 (5) - Hard to predict because the slider tick cant be seen at all, during gameplay.
01:42:304 (1) - This slider isnt perfectly circular.
02:18:394 (1) - Can you make this slider not have sharp edges?
02:56:289 (5) - New combo.

[Grayness] ALL FIXED
00:49:522 (2,3) - Move these down a bit so they dont touch the hp bar?

[Lightness] ALL FIXED
01:39:597 (4) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty.

Pretty nice map, call me back for a recheck when you've fixed
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