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Leorda
Thx Nivalis and Patche :)
Chacha17
Nice map! I can't really find any major issue here, just some nazi ones. >_>

So here you go.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Chacha17 wrote:

Nice map! I can't really find any major issue here, just some nazi ones. >_>

So here you go.
thx ^^
Tenshi-nyan
Jigoku-nyan here to bring hell to your map :3

bleh suggestions bleh

General
Difficulty spread could be better, instead of making a 2 star diff you should've made a 4,5 star diff or something like that.
No point complaing about that, though.

The rain SB looks awesum :3

Darkness
00:35:086 - add note + clap
00:44:560 - add note + finish
00:45:913 (4) - 1 grid left
00:48:169 (3,4,5) - arrange like this AKA delete 4, turn 3 into a 1/1 slider and put 5 where 4 was 01:19:071 (1,2) - decrease volume by 15%
01:42:304 (1) - not perfectly round :3
also, remove the last repeat and add a 1/1 repeat slider at 01:45:462 -
02:12:530 (1) - add clap
02:24:033 (1,2) - decrease volume by 15%
02:54:484 (1) - ^

Nice stuff, though I wonder why this only gets you 12kk points...


Grayness
Lower the volume in the Kiai parts by at least 15%
02:54:484 (1) - here too :3

Lightness
00:48:169 (4) - add NC
00:52:229 (1) - move this a lil' bit away from dat slider.
01:27:417 (5) - don't stack this?
01:29:672 (6,7) - they barely touch each other :O
01:53:131 (2) - 1 grid right + add clap to end
01:54:936 (3) - 1 grid down + add clap to end
02:02:154 (7) - add clap to end
02:03:958 (1,2) - they touch each other... how lewd :3 (btw there are more, don't wanna list them all up.)
02:32:379 (5) - don't stack this
03:46:364 (4) - move the last control point ~ 1-2 grids up


Lower the volume in the Kiai parts by at least 15%
02:54:484 (1) - here too :3

lolstar
Kyonko Hizara
:)
lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod ~

General;
- Everything good here ~

SB;
- 03:12:530 >> SB Load goes up to 5.62x here and it continues for a decent amount of time ;~;
- Some of your SB elements are more than 640x480 ;~;
- Maybe change the color of the "Speed up" to one that is like how the color of the lyrics is ?

Lightness;
- 01:27:868 >> Align with (5)
- 01:31:026 >> All these repeats don't sound good to me at all. Take all of them out and make something else on the space left
- 02:35:988 >> ^
- 02:40:161 >> Better to end at 02:42:304
- 02:54:372 >> Not necessary, you can change the volume/sample set with the previous one
- 03:10:725 >> Remove clap, add finish
- 03:14:334 >> ^
- 03:17:943 >> ^
- 03:48:620 >> I think you can wrap (4) better with this, also remove a repeat and add a note at 03:51:327
- 03:52:229 >> I think the spinner should start here

Grayness;
- 00:56:603 >> Add a note here ?
- 01:06:214 >> New combo should start here
- 02:36:439 >> Try to make it more symmetrical ?
- 02:54:372 >> Not necessary, you can change the volume/sample set with the previous one
- 03:08:244 >> Add a note ?
- 03:43:657 >> Move this to the previous red tick and remove clap ?
- 03:48:620 >> More symmetrical. Remove the repeat then make a slider at 03:51:327 to 03:52:003
- 03:52:229 >> The spinner should start here

Darkness;
- 00:39:823 >> 2 grids left
- 01:20:763 (2,4,8) >> These don't seem necessary to me
- 01:22:567 (2,4,8) >> ^
- 01:26:063 (1,2) >> Sound better if they end on a the previous red tick
- 01:42:304 >> Remove a repeat and map the space left
- 02:25:725 (2,4,8) >> Don't seem necessary to me
- 02:27:530 (2,4,6) >> ^
- 02:54:372 >> Not necessary, you can change the volume/sample set with the previous one
- 03:01:702 >> New combo starts here
- 03:05:311 >> ^
- 03:23:469 (2,4,8) >> Not necessary to me
- 03:25:274 (2,4,8) >> ^
- 03:28:770 (1,2) >> Sound better if they end at the previous red tick
- 03:48:620 >> Too many repeats I think ...

* Star ~
Topic Starter
Leorda

lovhin456 wrote:

blah blah blah
wow, too much. Few some mods are fixed, but others seems pointless for me
rEdo
[Lightness]
0:37:342 (3,1) - swap new combos
0:40:951 (5,1)- ^
1:02:605 (5) - add new combo
1:08:920 (4,5,6) - maybe add a reversed 1/2 slider instead of those notes, so it's a bit easier? *click*
1:17:041 (7,1) - swap new combos
1:22:454 (1) - delete new combo
2:18:394 (9) - new combo
2:27:417 (1) - delete new combo
3:25:161 (1) - ^

[Grayness]
0:23:357 (1) - one grid higher
0:26:514 (6) - add new combo, and delete it on 0:29:221 (1)
1:31:477 (6) - new combo
2:20:199 (1) - delete new combo
3:34:184 (6) - new combo

[Darkness]
0:29:898 (4,5,6) - add some another claps?
0:46:590 (2) - spacing
0:48:169 (3,4,5,6,7) - do not stick up to the hitsound pattern, because parts like that sound too awkward u.u
0:56:740 (4) - new combo, since it's slowing down.
1:01:026 (4) - new combo?
1:04:635 (4) - ^
1:24:259 (3) - ctrl + r?
1:29:221 (1) or 1:29:672 (1) - delete new combo
1:30:124 (5) - one grid to the left maybe?
1:38:920 (1) - inconsistent spacing, albo a bit covered by the previous slider. one grid higher, that also applies to the rest of the notes until the spinner.
2:12:530 (1) - delete new combo?
2:17:492 (1) - ^
2:27:191 (1) - ^
2:34:635 (7) - new combo
2:54:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are that huge jumps really necessary? for such a quiet part? ._.
3:26:966 (3) - ctrl + r, just like before?
3:31:928 (1) or 03:32:379 (1) - yep, delete new combo, once again
3:40:161 (3) - a bit inconsistent spacing, click it and check the spacing counter, you'll know what to do
3:41:064 (7) - ^
3:47:266 (3,4,5) - exceed it a bit, like (4)'s y=130 and (5)'s y=67


if you'd storyboard that rain section only, but only for the hardest diff's speed up, that would be unique and interesting :3 but oh well, don't mind me saying that. :P
good luck!
banvi
[Lightness]
01:28:319 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid up?
02:33:281 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid down?
02:34:184 (5) nazi : move 1 grid down & 2 grid right?
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here?

[Grayness]
01:45:011 (4,5) hmm , can you make more beautiful??
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here?
02:59:898 (3) can you make more symmentry?

[Darkness]
fine to me

nice ;)
Topic Starter
Leorda

banvi wrote:

[Lightness]
01:28:319 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid up?
02:33:281 (3,4) nazi : move 1 grid down?
02:34:184 (5) nazi : move 1 grid down & 2 grid right?
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here? NO

[Grayness]
01:45:011 (4,5) hmm , can you make more beautiful??
02:40:048 (T) kiai off here? NO
02:59:898 (3) can you make more symmentry?

[Darkness]
fine to me

nice ;)
thx
wcx19911123
HI

[Lightness]
01:17:041 (1) - kinda confusing , hard to know when it end
01:29:672 (6,7,2) - symmetrical plz
01:39:597 (4) - confusing
01:41:402 (6) - ^
01:46:590 (1) - start at 01:46:026 ?
02:00:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to sliders
02:34:635 (6,7) - symmetrical
03:46:364 (4,5) - around better

[Grayness]
01:44:108 (3,4) - spacing
02:16:590 (5) - move to 02:16:364 , pay attention to spacing if you do this
02:17:041 (6) - move to 02:16:815 , ^

[Darkness]
01:24:259 (3) - symmetrical
01:25:612 (4,5) - ctrl+r
01:38:920 (1,2,3,4) - ocnfusing , (1) is not same as others
03:01:928 (1) - when play , this is too near to (11)
03:28:319 (4,5) - ctrl+r , then overlap better

that's all
Lanttu
・w ・~
swish
thanks mod request~ :)

All Suggestion

[General]
  1. hmm.. mistake is found in lyrics :o

    please check this lyrics~~
[Lightness]
SPOILER
  1. 01:09:823 (1,2,3) - x:376,x:332,x:288 - y:48
  2. 01:28:093 (2) - x:342 y:273?
  3. 01:39:597 (4) - change like this?



  4. 02:00:800 (3) - x:412 y:48
  5. 02:01:702 (6) - x:280 y:124
  6. 02:22:116 (1) - hmm.. 02:24:710 - end to here?
  7. 03:13:883 (4) - x:312 y:96
  8. 03:14:334 (5) - x:224 y:96
  9. 03:14:785 (6) - x:136 y:96
  10. 03:15:236 (7) - x:136 y:184
  11. 03:15:687 (8) - x:224 y:184
  12. 03:25:838 (3) - spacing


[Grayness]

SPOILER
  1. 02:02:379 (4) - spacing
  2. 02:31:702 (5) - spacing
  3. 02:33:056 (2) - spacing
  4. 02:34:861 (5) - spacing
  5. 03:13:883 (6) - 1grid left?


[Darkness]

looks fine~

good map~ star :)
Topic Starter
Leorda

swish wrote:

thanks mod request~ :)

All Suggestion

[General]
  1. hmm.. mistake is found in lyrics :o

    please check this lyrics~~
[Lightness]
SPOILER
  1. 01:09:823 (1,2,3) - x:376,x:332,x:288 - y:48
  2. 01:28:093 (2) - x:342 y:273?
  3. 01:39:597 (4) - change like this?



  4. 02:00:800 (3) - x:412 y:48
  5. 02:01:702 (6) - x:280 y:124
  6. 02:22:116 (1) - hmm.. 02:24:710 - end to here?
  7. 03:13:883 (4) - x:312 y:96
  8. 03:14:334 (5) - x:224 y:96
  9. 03:14:785 (6) - x:136 y:96
  10. 03:15:236 (7) - x:136 y:184
  11. 03:15:687 (8) - x:224 y:184
  12. 03:25:838 (3) - spacing


[Grayness]

SPOILER
  1. 02:02:379 (4) - spacing
  2. 02:31:702 (5) - spacing
  3. 02:33:056 (2) - spacing
  4. 02:34:861 (5) - spacing
  5. 03:13:883 (6) - 1grid left?


[Darkness]

looks fine~

good map~ star :)
fix some, but I can't see the lyric because of this http://puu.sh/2jfH
swish

Leorda wrote:

fix some, but I can't see the lyric because of this http://puu.sh/2jfH
hmm... Can you see this?
00:23:357~01:49:522
http://puu.sh/2jor

01:49:973~02:42:755
http://puu.sh/2jov

02:54:484~03:55:838
http://puu.sh/2jox

sorry for putting the inconvenience ;__;
Faust
Lightness doesn't need anything.

Grayness: Little IRC suggestion to increase the AR by 1 tick.

Darkness: Wow. This is a pretty smooth difficulty, it's got a very a nice constant going for it.

- 00:48:169 - For this section, I have a suggestion for rhythm:
- 00:58:545 - I personally like this section the most. Very nicely done.

- 01:45:011 - Uneven?

- 03:16:139 - Pretty good, it's subtle but it's fitting.
Good usage of slow running slider, followed by a note to finish off.
I'll say the same for the ending as well, the closure came and went pretty nicely, nothing abrupt and
nothing out of place.

Very solid in the sense that there aren't any issues technical-wise. The fluidity of the mapping is something I will commend.

Pretty good map, all the best for ranking.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Faust wrote:

Lightness doesn't need anything.

Grayness: Little IRC suggestion to increase the AR by 1 tick.

Darkness: Wow. This is a pretty smooth difficulty, it's got a very a nice constant going for it.

- 00:48:169 - For this section, I have a suggestion for rhythm:
- 00:58:545 - I personally like this section the most. Very nicely done.

- 01:45:011 - Uneven?

- 03:16:139 - Pretty good, it's subtle but it's fitting.
Good usage of slow running slider, followed by a note to finish off.
I'll say the same for the ending as well, the closure came and went pretty nicely, nothing abrupt and
nothing out of place.

Very solid in the sense that there aren't any issues technical-wise. The fluidity of the mapping is something I will commend.

Pretty good map, all the best for ranking.
thx for mod ^^
MoodyRPG
[Lightness]

02:08:018 (3) - Maybe new combo?

[Grayness]

00:47:717 (6) - Maybe new combo?
01:31:477 (6) - ^
03:34:184 (6) - ^

[Darkness]

Fine

Star~
Lilac
Finally, I get to mod this.

[Lightness]
Relatively fine.

[Grayness]
Grey or Gray? We'll never know.

[Darkness]
00:23:357 (1,2) - Starting off with a jump like that seems a bit unfair too me but I dunno.
01:39:597 (1,2) - The silder's return arrows are hidden underneath the hit.png of 1 which makes this map unrankable.

I always thought it was "踊りましょう"... Might just be me.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Lilac wrote:

[Darkness]
00:23:357 (1,2) - Starting off with a jump like that seems a bit unfair too me but I dunno. It's depending on vocal
01:39:597 (1,2) - The silder's return arrows are hidden underneath the hit.png of 1 which makes this map unrankable Because I have no choice, I replace this into spinner
thx for mod ^^, bubble?
selimsrm
Fun map, Lightness and Grayness are awesome.
The jumps on Darkness kill me though.

I'd love to see something between Grayness and Darkness. I'll just have to practice jumping more.

+star
LaceWingfield
star :) nice song and map.
i love the SB :D
it said that my message is too short.
rui
nice map and SB
star~☆
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biwako
nice map.
star~ :)
Topic Starter
Leorda
thx for star my map :)

I wish MAT bubble/mod my map before my birthday is start (8 August) :(
Sakura
[Storyboard]
The file Black Ball.png isnt used anywhere on the storyboard.
The image mini light.png goes over the Storyboard size restrictions: 640x480 in both directions.


[General]
Make your kiai consistent?
The final spinner is covering some SB action, take this in mind.

[Darkness]
01:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you make the curve align better with the slider curve like you do with 01:22:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
01:34:184 (5) - Hard to predict because the slider tick cant be seen at all, during gameplay.
01:42:304 (1) - This slider isnt perfectly circular.
02:18:394 (1) - Can you make this slider not have sharp edges?
02:56:289 (5) - New combo.

[Grayness]
00:49:522 (2,3) - Move these down a bit so they dont touch the hp bar?

[Lightness]
01:39:597 (4) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty.

Pretty nice map, call me back for a recheck when you've fixed
Topic Starter
Leorda

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Storyboard] ALL FIXED
The file Black Ball.png isnt used anywhere on the storyboard.
The image mini light.png goes over the Storyboard size restrictions: 640x480 in both directions.


[General]
Make your kiai consistent? Done
The final spinner is covering some SB action, take this in mind. I know the final spinner is covering some SB action, but it wouldn't hurt if you play CTB..... doooooonnnn't hate me!

[Darkness] ALL FIXED
01:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you make the curve align better with the slider curve like you do with 01:22:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
01:34:184 (5) - Hard to predict because the slider tick cant be seen at all, during gameplay.
01:42:304 (1) - This slider isnt perfectly circular.
02:18:394 (1) - Can you make this slider not have sharp edges?
02:56:289 (5) - New combo.

[Grayness] ALL FIXED
00:49:522 (2,3) - Move these down a bit so they dont touch the hp bar?

[Lightness] ALL FIXED
01:39:597 (4) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty.

Pretty nice map, call me back for a recheck when you've fixed
Sakura
i lol at how AIBat finds a thousand unsnapped notes but the map doesnt have any unsnapped notes according to AIMod (even after asking Leorda to do resnapping it still says they're unsnapped, figures it's a bug on Aklosimir's program).
Anyways, here's my birthday present for you Leorda: Cherry Bubble~
Have a happy birthday!
James2250
*climbs out of gift box* How did I get here? Oh well, happy birthday! :D

-"Mini Light" in the folder shouldn't really need to go over the sb dimension limits in either direction. Either resize it to 800x600/1200x480 and scale it instead? Sakura corrected me, it should be ok in this case as a scrolling image

Lightness:
-Pretty high stats for the easiest difficulty, I recommend at least -1 HP/AR

All of the maps look good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank~
Topic Starter
Leorda

James2250 wrote:

*climbs out of gift box* How did I get here? Oh well, happy birthday! :D

-"Mini Light" in the folder shouldn't really need to go over the sb dimension limits in either direction. Either resize it to 800x600/1200x480 and scale it instead? Sakura corrected me, it should be ok in this case as a scrolling image

Lightness:
-Pretty high stats for the easiest difficulty, I recommend at least -1 HP/AR

All of the maps look good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank~
fixed! But wait! You should mod this map too D:
James2250
(I will try and get to that map soon too)

Anyway everything looks good now

Ranked~

Happy Birthday Leorda :P
lovhin456
Congrats and Happy B-day Leorda! (:
Topic Starter
Leorda
THAAAANK YOUUUUUUUU >.< lovhin456 and James2250 <3
Faust
Congratulations.

Nice to see this ranked after a few weeks/months.

I still recall modding this.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Faust wrote:

Congratulations.

Nice to see this ranked after a few weeks/months.

I still recall modding this.
Thank you >.<
Andrea
Uh, I was going to check this later, but seems that I'm late.

Happy Birthday Leorda and congrats!
Sakura
Happy Birthday Leorda and congratulations!
Topic Starter
Leorda

osuplayer111 wrote:

Uh, I was going to check this later, but seems that I'm late.

Happy Birthday Leorda and congrats!
lol, thx~

EDIT :
@Sakurano Hanahubuki : thx :D
Komeiji Yuki
gratz Leorda ~

and...


Hika
Happy birthday, just teach me how to stream 133BPM & we're cool. >u<

Jkjk, nice map though. c:
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