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Dreamy crown - eternal promise [Osu|Taiko]

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NoHitter
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NoHitter
General
Isn't source Endless Summer, Eternal Rhythm (with proper capitalization)?
The artist and song title not too sure, googled it and some results showed up as Dreamy Crown - Eternal Promise.

Easy
01:08:630 (2,3,4) - Could you change this so that it'll follow the vocals?
01:28:165 (4) - New combo.
01:29:560 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:07:351 (1) - Start this 1/4 later. It matches with the song better.

Normal
01:10:955 (1) - Shorten this to 01:12:351, then add notes at 01:12:816 and 01:13:048?

Insane
Not too sure about the number of jumps in this map. It feels kind of uncomfortable for me >.>
01:09:560 (2,6) - Delete these notes IMO.
01:21:420 (1) - If possible don't jump this as you already did with the previous combo.
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eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[Insane]
00:10:490 (6) - i dont think STRAIGHT is better than CURVED 直的没弯的好,变GAY吧少年!(揍 ._.其实是这里不适合用红点slider啦 弯曲的比较能体现歌曲的柔滑 并且中间折返那里音量下降点吧 其实这里长slider比较好
00:12:583 (x) - 加音 不然前后两边不连贯 有违和感
00:26:304 (1) - finish at the begin
00:31:885 (1,5,9) - finish 最后一个加slider头上
00:34:211 (10) - 尾巴上加finish
00:37:932 (6) - 换成1/1长slider 去掉后面那个note
01:06:537 (x) - 漏了音 加吧
01:31:188 (9) - add finish at the end
01:38:746 (x) - 加个note 过渡
01:42:583 (1) - finish at the begin
01:43:513 (2) - ^
01:46:537 (6) - new combo 因为前面的跳这里又突然变小
01:57:467 (1) - finish at the begin
02:02:583 (7) - finish at the end
02:04:676 (4) - ^
02:06:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 最后突然鬼畜:O

[Hard]
00:24:444 (1) - finish at the begin OTL
00:26:305 (1) - finish at the end...
以下省略有关finish...
00:49:328 (2,3,4) - 234之间的间距缩小点 因为3的跳有点大
01:05:141 (x) - 加个note
01:07:235 (3,4,5) - 跟歌声比较好 现在有点生硬 改成1/1slider+slider+note 像这样v
SPOILER

[Normal]
前奏有点不知道你在下什么...和音乐之间不协调 建议开始跟小提琴
01:20:490 (3) - 不合音乐

其他没什么了大概(懒
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eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless

NoHItter wrote:

General
Isn't source Endless Summer, Eternal Rhythm (with proper capitalization)?
The artist and song title not too sure, googled it and some results showed up as Dreamy Crown - Eternal Promise.maybe he need to see BK



Insane
Not too sure about the number of jumps in this map. It feels kind of uncomfortable for me >.>
About the jumps. i think it's fine, it's easy to play except the last.
also the last is playable
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>eveless,NoHItter

Fix some.Thanks
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Fixed on irc
About title, I think it's 'eternal promise' even it's on video >_> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67714 Also, official name too :3 http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%B5%82% ... 3%E5%BE%8B
Also, artist is 'Dreamy crown' not 'Dreamy Crown' :3 http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%97%A4% ... B%E6%A8%B9

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
:3

[Hard]
01:36:072 (3,4,5) - Worried about distance :3

[Insane]
:3

[Taiko Oni]
00:18:630 (41) - kat?
02:07:467 (61) - [Suggestion] Big kat?



Meow :3
[Wanna pizza orz]
NatsumeRin
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4,032 posts
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NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
下载时没有no-video项，查了下，taiko难度里没加video，或许还是加上，然后重传下？总之没有no-video下载这事很难

[Easy]
00:33:746 (3) - 折返clap
02:03:514 (4) - 结尾clap漏了？

[Normal]
00:56:072 (1) - 不合适。一直在跟鼓，这里一定要变一下vocal少一个clap违和不少
01:10:025 (2) - 尾whistle，和之前不同，这里是升音
01:21:188 (4) - 感觉有点浪费梗，背景是连续几个1拍（间隔为1/2）的长音，只是这样带过。。。Hard那样不好吗？
01:22:118 (1) - 或许soft-hitwhistle
02:07:002 (6) - 多余，要不3/4也好些？
距离有些近的感觉，偏Easy，和Hard差距则远一些

[Hard]
01:52:118 (1,2) - 拖后1/2放？

[Insane]
00:31:653 (4,1) - 口味有点重这
02:06:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不合适。只是为了难吗？如果有其他理由无所谓，只为了难的话强烈建议改。

[Taiko Oni]
01:21:653 (150,151) - 我的感觉是接着OX然后后面XX。。。
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

arien666 wrote:

[Hard]
01:36:072 (3,4,5) - Worried about distance :3 Reduce the distance

[Taiko Oni]
00:18:630 (41) - kat? Done
02:07:467 (61) - [Suggestion] Big kat? Done

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
下载时没有no-video项，查了下，taiko难度里没加video，或许还是加上，然后重传下？总之没有no-video下载这事很难 Done

[Easy]
00:33:746 (3) - 折返clap
02:03:514 (4) - 结尾clap漏了？[/color] Done

[Normal]
00:56:072 (1) - 不合适。一直在跟鼓，这里一定要变一下vocal少一个clap违和不少 Done
01:10:025 (2) - 尾whistle，和之前不同，这里是升音 Done
01:21:188 (4) - 感觉有点浪费梗，背景是连续几个1拍（间隔为1/2）的长音，只是这样带过。。。Hard那样不好吗？ Done
01:22:118 (1) - 或许soft-hitwhistle
02:07:002 (6) - 多余，要不3/4也好些？ Done
距离有些近的感觉，偏Easy，和Hard差距则远一些

[Hard]
01:52:118 (1,2) - 拖后1/2放？ X.覺得現在還好

[Insane]
00:31:653 (4,1) - 口味有点重这 Done
02:06:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不合适。只是为了难吗？如果有其他理由无所谓，只为了难的话强烈建议改。Done

[Taiko Oni]
01:21:653 (150,151) - 我的感觉是接着OX然后后面XX。。。Done
Thanks 8-)
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Star 是神马:D?
---------------------
[Hard]
01:50:956 (3) - 削掉个arrow,然后接下来这样改 (明显这样好听>.>)
SPOILER


[Insane]
00:11:885 (7) - newcombo
----------------------
Star~☆
那个。。乃的图已经越做越神了>.>
神mapper 膜拜。
赶紧rank吧:D
Ayeen_old
316 posts
Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
From my modding queu, maybe just a minimal modding ;)

Easy:
The last spinner move back later to red tick or remove (2)

Normal:
00:14:676 Make some hitsound soft hitclap (custom that is) for (2) and (3)

Hard:
00:34:676 move the spinner to white tick from blue tick and extend to red tick.
01:08:630 (5) the hitsound didnt clearly heard
01:22:699 again the spinner, move from blue tick to red tick (shorten it in this time)
02:07:583 same as above, move to white tick

Tako:
Uhh, I dont mod taiko

Insane:
AR move down 1 tick
00:34:560 same as hard, move to white tick from blue, then extent to red tick at end of spinner
01:03:630 Uhm, same thing again
01:22:699 heh, spinner again

That all from me, hope it help you
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Insane

00:20:723 - 这里开始完全进入normal有些重了，我个人感觉还是24normal好一点，红线上可以加whistle，更有层次感。00:20:025 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这几个其实可以用normal

以00:20:723这个小节为例我感觉可以这样加(1/2一个note)：soft|whistle|normal|soft|soft|whistle|normal|soft 然后后面跟着的那个小节连打开始可以全normal，再往后继续用soft和normal结合……试试吧。

00:35:606到00:49:560这段，我感觉排列可以“收缩”和“紧密”一点，和后边有点对比。

00:50:723这里开始感觉也是可以用soft+normal的……这么短的图还不好好搞音效o.o?

01:09:560 (2,3) - 这个跳略显大了


其它难度除了音效感觉还有提升空间其它应该没问题了
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

Easy
CS = 1

Other is good, starr
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
那就看I的音效了

00:55:141 - 这么这里突然跑出来一个o.o……第一个slider加长1/4，第二个缩短1/4，然后你就知道加到哪里了……
01:42:351 (10) - new combo 后面去掉O.o

其实如果我的话会加一点24以外的重音……比如用到3连上或者每2个小节加一点红线音。比如试试在00:23:281和00:23:746上加。00:27:467 (5,6) 加上，00:27:932 (8) 也加上。然后整体听一下这小段o.o 就是这种思路

☆
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Hard]
01:50:956 (3) - 削掉个arrow,然后接下来这样改 (明显这样好听>.>)Done
SPOILER


[Insane]
00:11:885 (7) - newcomboDone

Ayeen wrote:

From my modding queu, maybe just a minimal modding ;)

Easy:
The last spinner move back later to red tick or remove (2)

Normal:
00:14:676 Make some hitsound soft hitclap (custom that is) for (2) and (3)

Hard:
00:34:676 move the spinner to white tick from blue tick and extend to red tick.
01:08:630 (5) the hitsound didnt clearly heard
01:22:699 again the spinner, move from blue tick to red tick (shorten it in this time)
02:07:583 same as above, move to white tick

Tako:
Uhh, I dont mod taiko

Insane:
AR move down 1 tick
00:34:560 same as hard, move to white tick from blue, then extent to red tick at end of spinner
01:03:630 Uhm, same thing again
01:22:699 heh, spinner again

That all from me, hope it help you
Sorry..I won't to change anything :<

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi

Easy
CS = 1 lol

Sandpig wrote:

那就看I的音效了

00:55:141 - 这么这里突然跑出来一个o.o……第一个slider加长1/4，第二个缩短1/4，然后你就知道加到哪里了……
01:42:351 (10) - new combo 后面去掉O.o Done

其实如果我的话会加一点24以外的重音……比如用到3连上或者每2个小节加一点红线音。比如试试在00:23:281和00:23:746上加。00:27:467 (5,6) 加上，00:27:932 (8) 也加上。然后整体听一下这小段o.o 就是这种思路 額...簡單美= =

☆
Thanks >W<
Nymph
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Nymph
对我来说已经很PERFECT的MAP了 赶紧去要泡泡吧..
扔星闪人 >.<
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
I am so late @_@

[Easy]
01:14:677 (1) - the sliderticks should have clap hitsound!?
01:18:863 (4) - ^ this too
01:58:398 (3) - maybe you forgot a clap?
01:59:327 (1) - the first slidertick, clap?
02:04:909 (1) - slidertick claps?
02:07:467 (x) - I'd like to put a note here, maybe as a slider if you'd like.

[Normal]
00:28:165 (3) - ehh? no slidertick hitsound again?
01:19:095 (3,4,5) - feels like these could use some normal sample set hitsounds...

[Hard]
00:19:792 (3,4,5,1) - I've got a feeling that this part is too quiet... There should be a crescendo, so make hitsound volume louder gradually?
01:21:188 (4,5,6) - ^ crescendo

[Taiko Oni]
Skip~

[Insane]
00:13:513 (1) - starting from here you should increase hitsound volume. When there are jumps, audible hitsounds help a lot.
00:20:025 (6,7,8,9,10) - crescendo!
00:36:537 (2,3) - my music-sense itches so badly that these are not mapped with the vocal D:
00:51:420 (2,3) - ^ ok I know that mapping with vocal may disturb the flow... but I'd really like a beat here 00:51:769 (x).
00:57:932 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the spacing is a tiny bit large?
00:59:211 (x) - probably add a beat here?
01:42:351 (4) - IMO, a bit too far

===================

Good song (I really like it, I wanna long version XD)
I'd fine-tune the hitsounds, especially volume adjustments.
Also, I hear that some places can use a bit normal sample set hitsounds, for instance 01:05:723 to 01:12:351 (hear the thud?)

Star!
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Sorry for late :)
Here is my mod.
The words with Red color means You must fix it.
The words with Blue color means You'd better do it.
The words with Purple color means Just suggetstion.

[Easy]
00:06:188 useless greedline?delete it.
and so many same.(我因为各种greenline被找过麻烦lol
02:08:630 use clap to instead?or muti it（各难度下略

[Normal]
00:56:420 use s-2 clap ?
AR+1 OD-1?

[Hard]
02:06:072 lol for these two sliders
AR+1 OD+1?(It's more suitable for me)

[Insane]
seems fine.

Here is a hitsound may make this map more greatful.
And good job.Star for it.
Download: hitsound.rar
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>yongtw123 , Mystica
Fix some >w< Thanks
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
都是建议啊:

[General]


  • Combo还是有点乱
[Easy]
Easy 用最大圈？（所有难度都用一样大圈……

  • 01:38:863 (3): 开头+Soft Finish
    02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下
[Normal]


  • 00:09:095 (4): 感觉节奏有点奇怪 建议在这里加个Circle 然后Slider往后移半拍 后面的Slider也换成Circle
    00:14:676 (2,3,1): 个人觉得这样的Combo不太好看 如果要改的话 建议在②上加New combo ①上移掉（后面的和其他难度的也是
    01:37:002 (1): 这个地方加转盘好像有点不太合适
    01:53:048 (5): 重复-1 然后转盘提前半拍
    02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下
[Hard]


  • 00:49:793 (5,6,7,8): 像前面的②③④一样加一点间距
    00:50:491 (1): 开头+Finish
    01:20:258 (1): ^
    01:37:467 (1,2,3): 首先间距有点奇怪 还有前面那么大的跳 这里是不是也应该跳一下呢
    01:53:048 (6): 重复+1
    02:06:305 (4,5): 这两个Slider有点奇怪 建议摆放成这样：http://puu.sh/1lin
[Insane]


  • 00:30:955 (1,2,3,4): 奇怪间距
    01:38:862 (3): 开头+Soft Finish
    02:07:583 (8): 从02:07:699开始 然后在这里加个Circle

☆ STAR ☆
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

impossiblexu wrote:

都是建议啊:

[General]


  • Combo还是有点乱 D:
[Easy]
Easy 用最大圈？（所有难度都用一样大圈…… X.

  • 01:38:863 (3): 开头+Soft Finish Done
    02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下Done
[Normal]


  • 00:09:095 (4): 感觉节奏有点奇怪 建议在这里加个Circle 然后Slider往后移半拍 后面的Slider也换成CircleDone
    00:14:676 (2,3,1): 个人觉得这样的Combo不太好看 如果要改的话 建议在②上加New combo ①上移掉（后面的和其他难度的也是 Done
    01:37:002 (1): 这个地方加转盘好像有点不太合适 X
    01:53:048 (5): 重复-1 然后转盘提前半拍 Done
    02:07:234 (1): 转盘提前一下 Done
[Hard]


  • 00:49:793 (5,6,7,8): 像前面的②③④一样加一点间距 Done
    00:50:491 (1): 开头+Finish Done
    01:20:258 (1): ^ vDone
    01:37:467 (1,2,3): 首先间距有点奇怪 还有前面那么大的跳 这里是不是也应该跳一下呢 Done
    01:53:048 (6): 重复+1 Done
    02:06:305 (4,5): 这两个Slider有点奇怪 建议摆放成这样：http://puu.sh/1lin
Done

[Insane]


  • 00:30:955 (1,2,3,4): 奇怪间距 X
    01:38:862 (3): 开头+Soft Finish Done
    02:07:583 (8): 从02:07:699开始 然后在这里加个Circle Done

☆ STAR ☆
謝.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Insane]

00:53:281 (1) - Delete new combo.


[Hard]

00:34:212 (1) - ^
01:03:514 (5) - New combo.


[Normal]

00:50:955 (3,1) - Swap new combos.
00:54:676 (7,1) - ^
00:58:862 (5,1) - ^
01:01:653 (6) - New combo.
01:05:606 - Something is missing here I think. Maybe add a slider like next ones here 01:05:723 (without a repeat) or 1/4 slider at the next white tick.


[Easy]

Circle size +1 tick?

01:08:630 (2,3) - Sliders are off the beat. You should do something else in this part. There are plenty of possibilities.
01:14:676 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
01:18:863 (4) - This slider should be 1/2 though. Sounds weird as it is now. If you do this, add a circle on the next white tick.
01:36:537 (1) - ^ (or do something else)
01:38:863 (3) - New combo.
01:39:792 (4) - Same slider thing...


Mostly nazi stuff, but that's all I can point out.
Very good map, star.
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

fartownik wrote:

[Insane]

00:53:281 (1) - Delete new combo. Done


[Hard]

00:34:212 (1) - ^ Done
01:03:514 (5) - New combo. Done


[Normal]

00:50:955 (3,1) - Swap new combos. Done
00:54:676 (7,1) - ^ Done
00:58:862 (5,1) - ^ Done
01:01:653 (6) - New combo. Done
01:05:606 - Something is missing here I think. Maybe add a slider like next ones here 01:05:723 (without a repeat) or 1/4 slider at the next white tick. Done


[Easy]

Circle size +1 tick? X,IT will be weird if I change it to largest size

01:08:630 (2,3) - Sliders are off the beat. You should do something else in this part. There are plenty of possibilities. Done
01:14:676 (1,2) - Swap new combo. Done
01:18:863 (4) - This slider should be 1/2 though. Sounds weird as it is now. If you do this, add a circle on the next white tick. Done
01:36:537 (1) - ^ (or do something else) Done
01:38:863 (3) - New combo. Done
01:39:792 (4) - Same slider thing... Done


Mostly nazi stuff, but that's all I can point out.
Very good map, star.
Thanks ::>
KanaRin
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Joined April 2010
KanaRin
Irc modded
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
>A<
fartownik
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Joined December 2008
fartownik
Bubble
Nixnez
295 posts
Joined April 2010
Nixnez
来迟了 D: 去找蝙蝠 BAT rank了吧！

送星闪人~

Edit: System prompt me to save after resnapping notes. Check?
Last edited by Nixnez , edited 1 time in total.
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

Soul-less wrote:

来迟了 D: 去找蝙蝠 BAT rank了吧！

送星闪人~

Edit: System prompt me to save after resnapping notes. Check?
But seems Ok here D:
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
meow orz
Good luck for this one ;_;

And sorry for not modding this orz
[Busy these days orz]
KanaRin
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KanaRin
自爆吧!
說笑的.
Rank前公喜 www
kanpakyin
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KanaRin wrote:

自爆吧!
說笑的.
Rank前公喜 www
有排 D:
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
D: 忘记了...忘记了... 罪过Orz

加油！
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-
Former osu!taiko Champion: #3
220 posts
Joined January 2010
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-
star
Disoy
209 posts
Joined February 2010
Disoy
XD~加油!!
Sumisola
475 posts
Joined June 2010
Sumisola
nice song!
Herschel
166 posts
Joined November 2009
Herschel
fight~~ :)
spboxer3
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spboxer3
lol star!!!
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Pleasant and relaxing! Great work, kanpakyin.

What I really like the most about this map is how well the sliders mesh together. Their synergy flows nicely ~ Some of the jumps in [Insane] are a little weird (The circle jumps in particular), but it's nothing really of a hindrance. Jumps like this one in [Insane], for example, were a little awkward for me: 00:30:955 (1,2,3,4) - annnd maybe this one: 01:45:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but no worries. It might just be Old Man Kirby talking. :V

[Hard] was pretty cool too, though there were some tricky 1/4 streams in the Kiai, so I would consider it some good practice for those transitioning from [Hard] to [Insane], ya? ;)

Anyway, enough of my little review. Congratulations. <3
KanaRin
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Joined April 2010
KanaRin
Haha Gratz!

/me add as favourite
loveFantasy
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Joined August 2008
loveFantasy
grats



/me runs
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