Hey baraatje, I found some stuff I wanted to discuss about;
DISTORTION
Good luck with further processing!
DISTORTION
- 00:01:737 - How about adding a circle here to emphasize the relatively strong beat here? Up to you, though.
- 00:06:576 (1,1) - These NC's are fine, but you should remove 00:07:737 (3) - this one because it's in the flow with those. I know what you tried to create (NC every downbeat), but it feels better the way I'm suggesting it.
- 00:10:834 (1,2,3,4) - I'd move this combo a bit closer to the other stream, to maintain consistency between these patterns. If you compare, the spacing on the rest is quite a bit smaller.
- 00:11:415 (2,2,2) - It's personal experience, but from what I've seen / played / heard, sharp angles play way better with these patterns, so why not going with : http://puu.sh/l4GQU/d7bbc7c890.jpg
- 00:13:544 (1,2,3) - This rhythm can be indicated better with 1) higher spacing 2) equal spacing.
Now the kiai, it generally is okay but the thing is you try to create speed and then go with really close spacing, in my honest opinion there is potential in this part, but we need to get there eventually. - 00:14:705 (3,4,1) - First example, those three objects. It's okay, but if you think about it, movement is almost 0 here. You don't have to go to any end of the sliders, and the starts of the sliders are so close together, in conclusion, you only made a weird shaped triangle here.
- 00:15:576 (2,1) - Another thing is emphasis, where does the huge jump come from here, but you got such a small jump 00:15:673 (1,1) - here, where it should emphasize ?
- 00:15:673 - I also suggest to remove all those single NCs because they just look completely out of place, being the only combo around. It fits for the combo before anyways.
- 00:16:931 (1,1) - why the sudden decrease of spacing?
- 00:18:189 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - talked to you ingame about this
- 00:23:028 (2,2) - are you aware of that you've put a decreased spacing with each slider here? there are placements which play better imo >_<
- 00:24:189 (1) - hahaha no, 1/8 (if even) or something but not 1/16
- Re-check the NCing and the flow in general please
Good luck with further processing!