Thanks!!!HappyRocket88 wrote:
Hellow, fellow BN! I'm here because you requested a mod. _:3_>_
[ General][ Easy]
- There's a hitsound which has a possible delay > 5ms "normal-hitwhistle.wav". I really don't know if this is a really big issue but try to go in hand of what ranking criteria states. Uhmm. Already changed it, a few days ago ;w;
According to AutoMod it's fine, I'll check it again later O.o[ Normal]
- There's an unsnapped inherited timing point at 00:29:439 which should've been snapped to 00:29:415. Snapped to :512, so the first spinner in unsilenced (which is why it's snapped to 1/16
- 00:06:576 (1) The way you gave NC to this object breaks the NC combing you manage during the whole song. The NC goes over each two big white ticks and this is not following the NC combing pattern. So It would be better if you removed the NC here to keep consistency.
- 00:18:576 (2,3) Just a nazi suggestion, but the DS of these two objects is off by 0.01x. It would be nicer if you kept the 0.99x here as well as you did with the previous objects.
- 00:20:512 (1,2,3) This is just a visual suggestion, but I think it would look better if you make smoother sliders rather than linear. You could've followed the sliders ends to improve the flow and made something like this.
- 00:25:157 (1) Same NC suggestion here. I think you wanted to emphasize the instruments here, but this looks confusing for beginner players because you break the NC combing. It would make more sense if you kept the NC combing and had removed the NC over that slider. I really want to keep this actually, because of the emphasis
[ Advanced]
- HP -0.5 to have consistency with the way you increase the HP Drain time among the Diffs. Look that the Easy has in 2, Advanced on 4, Hard on 5... so it would make more sense if the Normal would have it on 3.
- There's an unsnapped inherited timing point at 00:29:439 which should've been snapped to 00:29:415.
- 00:06:576 (3) Just a mini-visual suggestion, but this slider looks a bit odd because most sliders are curve and smooth. Not even lineal. So what do you think about making it a little bit more curvy to keep consistency with the other sliders? For example.
- 00:09:479 (3) This finish here sounds weird and doesn't fit properly here. I think you're doing well emphasizing the sliders' head with a finish hitsound at every white tick. The fact of placing finishes at the red ticks is a bit odd and sounds overset. I highly suggest to replace the finish with another hitsound that let players realize that the important beats are the sliders. What about a whistle? Consider doing the same with this circle 00:11:028 (3) | As well as you did it here 00:14:318 (1,2,3) and here 00:15:866 (1,2,3)
- 00:12:770 (1) Shouldn't this circle have a finish instead of a clap as long as you place finish at each white bid ticks?
- 00:20:512 (1) This slider is pretty weird. Despite knowing there's no sound at the tail it seems it is missing something to be complete. I think it would flow better if you made a 1/1 slider and emphasizing the white end tick with a clap or a whistle with the auto sample set.
[ Hard]
- AR -1 to have consistency with the increasing of Approach Rate among the difficulties and reducing the velocity of the incoming objects in this diff. AR 7 is a bit high for this 2.61 stars that had fit better over 6. Notice that the Easy has it on 2, Normal on 4, Hard on 8... so it would make more sense if this diff kept on 6.
- OD - 5. Does it change something by setting the OD over 5.5? I think it would make stuffs easier in the spinner at the end if the OD was 5.
- 00:04:253 (3,4) Just a minor suggestion here, but the distance snap between these objects is off by 0.01x. /u\ You know you can make this square polygon perfect in the functions of the editor. :3 LOOOOL. But I used that ;___;
- 00:07:544 (3,4) Same distance snap problem. But this one is very notable and you can separate them a bit more.
- 00:09:673 (1,2,3) The distance between the 00:10:253 (2,3) and the 00:09:673 (1,2) isn't the same. It would look better if you keep the same DS among these objects to improve visually the patterns.
- 00:09:673 (1,2) Remove the clap here. It sounds very over-hitsounded and would make more sense if it were only the finish to keep the finish combing you managed before. I'm just following the music
- 00:16:641 (3,1) A very nazi suggestion here, but you can improve the blanket among these objects to improve the visually flow here. Like this.
- 00:18:190 (2,1) Same here. It doesn't hurt to make a neat look of these sliders to reduce the almost-overlap of these sliders. For example.
- 00:23:608 (1) This slider is very curvy and doesn't fit properly here. I guess the grade of curve of that slider is very high compared to the rest of the other sliders. It would look visually better if you try out something smoother like this.
- 00:26:705 (1) I highly suggest to remove this circle as long as the rest of the difficulties make start the spinner here 00:26:705
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- 00:06:964 (2,3,4) Consider to make the distance space between these objects bigger as well as you did here 00:06:576 (1,2)
- 00:11:995 (2,3) These two current sliders don't fir properly with the instruments here. Because there's no important beats to be emphasized on the blue tick 00:12:286 where the main beats goes over the red tick. It would make more sense if you emphasized this beat by reducing the length of the slider (2? until here 00:12:189 and making a 1/4 that makes emphasis on the blue ticks as the song suggests. Like this.
- 00:21:770 (6) Rhythmically talking, this two sliders fit perfectly here but the flow is not good. You made players go into a hard and non-perceptive flow that mislead the purpose with those 1/4 sliders, which I think they would flow better if you did Ctrl + G'ed this slider 00:21:770 (6) to improve the flow of this pattern.
- 00:24:770 (6,7) You might need to make this circles audible as long as the flow is awkward to follow. The song doesn't emphasize the red and white ticks well and it would be better if you placed a whistle or a clap. A 1/2 slider would fit better here imo.
I couldn't pass the harder difficulties. /u\ Nice map! Despite osu! has an already ranked version, I liked more the creativity of this map. Good job!
Fixed all unmentioned
Will check the hitsound file later!