from my q
some stylistic suggestions and stuff:
I would highly suggets you use more combocolours since this is such a long song and colourhaxing with those would make playing this map through its various moods a much more enjoyable experience. (Atm your colours dont really fit together either so...)
02:30:343 (1,2) - You can represent the different moods of the song of this section by having pointy and straight sliders on the metal/rock parts like 02:29:045 - and curvy slider in the calmer parts like 02:31:640 - . So just make these to sliders something but curvy sliders. Same for 02:35:532 (1,2) - 02:40:721 (1) -
02:54:991 (1,2,1,2) - You can align the the slider ends better.. atm 02:55:640 (1) - is off by ~4 units cause you pushed it to the limits of the grid
02:56:288 (1,2) - ctrl+g these and overlap the new heads and then reverse them with ctrl+g. Makes their overlap look a bit better
03:26:126 (1,2) - clean them up
03:30:018 (2) - same
05:19:640 (4,5) - samewhy dont you just put the 2 circles somwhere up top so it doesnt look so confusing
05:21:586 (1,2,3) -
08:32:612 (2) - ctrl+g this
08:41:045 (5,1) - oi
08:56:937 (1,2) - looks cool
04:11:316 (2,3) - your rhythm is off here. THe guitar play a note on both are kinds off so i would suggest mapping a slider on 04:11:207 (1) -. (either way indicating a wierd rhythm with combocolours can be a pretty cool thing to do)
06:32:288 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - very wierd to map such low-key sounds in such a intense manner. This is the calmest part in the song which serves as a contrast to what is about to come so you should try to create contrast aswell so you map doesnt feel off when playing
07:36:504 (4) - have the end of the of the slider go into the shape a bit just like 07:26:126 (4) - since they are both on relatively calmer notes https://puu.sh/ysGbI/1c82bbf0cd.png
07:40:721 (1) - to emphasise this one better you should lower the strain on 07:40:558 (2) - , Example https://puu.sh/ysGhu/a84de77c63.png
some stylistic suggestions and stuff:
I would highly suggets you use more combocolours since this is such a long song and colourhaxing with those would make playing this map through its various moods a much more enjoyable experience. (Atm your colours dont really fit together either so...)
02:30:343 (1,2) - You can represent the different moods of the song of this section by having pointy and straight sliders on the metal/rock parts like 02:29:045 - and curvy slider in the calmer parts like 02:31:640 - . So just make these to sliders something but curvy sliders. Same for 02:35:532 (1,2) - 02:40:721 (1) -
02:54:991 (1,2,1,2) - You can align the the slider ends better.. atm 02:55:640 (1) - is off by ~4 units cause you pushed it to the limits of the grid
02:56:288 (1,2) - ctrl+g these and overlap the new heads and then reverse them with ctrl+g. Makes their overlap look a bit better
03:26:126 (1,2) - clean them up
03:30:018 (2) - same
05:19:640 (4,5) - samewhy dont you just put the 2 circles somwhere up top so it doesnt look so confusing
05:21:586 (1,2,3) -
08:32:612 (2) - ctrl+g this
08:41:045 (5,1) - oi
08:56:937 (1,2) - looks cool
04:11:316 (2,3) - your rhythm is off here. THe guitar play a note on both are kinds off so i would suggest mapping a slider on 04:11:207 (1) -. (either way indicating a wierd rhythm with combocolours can be a pretty cool thing to do)
06:32:288 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - very wierd to map such low-key sounds in such a intense manner. This is the calmest part in the song which serves as a contrast to what is about to come so you should try to create contrast aswell so you map doesnt feel off when playing
07:36:504 (4) - have the end of the of the slider go into the shape a bit just like 07:26:126 (4) - since they are both on relatively calmer notes https://puu.sh/ysGbI/1c82bbf0cd.png
07:40:721 (1) - to emphasise this one better you should lower the strain on 07:40:558 (2) - , Example https://puu.sh/ysGhu/a84de77c63.png