M4M from your queue, you didn't specify who mods first so I took my time
00:35:921 (4,5,6,1) - could make this stream same angle as 00:35:605 (3) -
01:07:184 (1,2,1,2) - ctrl G for each 1-2 seems better, or make the pattern decrease in spacing like you did on 01:09:710 (1,2,1,2,1) -
01:26:289 (1,2) - would look better if 2 was just a ctrl+G of 1 instead of ctrl+J
01:31:397 (2) - is overmapped, you could split the stream into a triple and a 7 note stream
01:47:532 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - big fan of this
02:44:613 (1,2,3,4) - these look a bit boring, I would prefer if they wiggled slightly to make them more interesting. Not enough to effect gameplay ofc
http://puu.sh/zNa9l/0bf7d69b21.PNG 02:52:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - also a fan
03:39:748 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - could replace 7,8,9 with a slider with that would overlap or something with 03:39:099 (5) -
03:44:937 (1,2,3) - these feel much better to me with smaller spacing and more compact patterns honestly, same problem with 03:50:127 (1,2,3) - , 03:55:316 (1,2,3) - and few others
04:19:964 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - some SV changes to make it more dynamic?
04:21:910 (1,2,1,2) - pls 1/3 jumpstreams with not too big spacing or this
http://puu.sh/zNazl/432851deb2.PNG07:03:519 (9) - shouldn't the big spacing start here?
07:04:206 (2,3) - these are actually 1/6 triples + 1/6 single. could be made into a playable pattern with some effort, sound a bit weird as it is
07:54:991 (2,3) - make 2 into 1/2 slider and put a circle before 3
09:30:829 (3,4,1) - could put a spacing change here
good song and map, gl with it
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1414773&m=0 my map