16:23 Murasaki Nova: Hello, MrSergio, you have modded my map recently and I had some problems especially in low diffs.
16:23 Murasaki Nova: Now, when I think I've fixed them, can I have your recheck or at least just opinion on the changes I've made?
16:24 MrSergio: map link?
16:24 Murasaki Nova:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58847516:24 MrSergio: oh, that one
16:28 MrSergio: on Easy: 02:20:705 (1,2,3) - delete 2 and make 1 a 3/2 repeat slider
16:29 MrSergio: 01:37:763 (3,4,5) - better using something different here, since you used that pattern for other two parts which were more intense than this in the kiai
16:29 MrSergio: a repeat slider would be nice
16:29 MrSergio: 00:21:996 (2,1) - spacing derped here due to the BPM change
16:30 MrSergio: this also arises a doubt in my mind: is the timing correct like that? It looks strange
16:32 Murasaki Nova: ok, I'll recheck that timing
16:32 MrSergio: doing that, dw
16:39 MrSergio: umh... it might take a while, but I'm half done
16:51 MrSergio: holy, what a wanky mp3
16:54 Murasaki Nova: Do u mean the song itself or that particular mp3?
16:54 MrSergio: idk, it looks like the mp3 was cropped
16:54 MrSergio: or they just played around with it
16:54 MrSergio: anyway, it should be ok now
16:54 MrSergio: I will post the timing on the thread later
16:54 MrSergio: imma finish checking the rest
16:55 Murasaki Nova: Ok, thanks :>
16:56 MrSergio: 00:17:412 (2) - on normal, this works better as a circle imo
16:56 MrSergio: 00:37:373 - ?.?
16:56 MrSergio: there is nothing there
16:56 MrSergio: intentional?
16:57 MrSergio: 01:17:356 (2,3,4) - uhhh, kinda intense for a Normal imo, but it's not a bad choice
16:57 MrSergio: it's not the kiai tho, so I'd rather keep it calmer with a repeat slider there
16:58 MrSergio: 01:28:518 (2,3,4) - perfectly fine instead
16:58 MrSergio: 01:31:832 (1) - confusing, too many repeats
16:58 MrSergio: 01:31:832 - 1/2 slider 01:32:356 - 1/2 slider
16:58 MrSergio: it will work better that way
16:58 MrSergio: 01:34:623 (1) - same
16:59 MrSergio: 01:41:600 (1,1,1,1) - noticed on the easy too, but you seem to struggle with keeping a shape for these identical sounds lol. Dw, the player won't get bored for 2 repetitive slider shapes
17:00 MrSergio: 02:06:386 (3) - consistency with the one in the intro: circle would work better
17:00 MrSergio: 02:18:612 (2,3,4) - uhhhh, confusing because the strong beats are on the slider tails
17:01 MrSergio: to fix that ^ split 02:17:217 (3) - into 2 circles (02:17:216 - 02:17:565 - ) and maybe use a 1/2 slider for 02:17:565 -
17:01 MrSergio: then you can move 02:18:612 (2,3,4) - 2 ticks to the left
17:02 MrSergio: actually... that part is still confusing
17:03 MrSergio: found an option: 02:18:437 - circle
17:03 MrSergio: and then you have 02:18:612 - , which can either be another circle, or a 1/1 repeat slider
17:04 MrSergio: 02:20:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeeeee.... nope, that is confusing too
17:04 MrSergio: use the same technique I showed you above for that part too
17:06 MrSergio: on Hard: 00:44:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda sudden this spacing and rhythm increase. Try to make an average between 00:42:955 (5,6) - this rhythm and the current 1/2 jumps
17:08 MrSergio: 01:07:897 (5) - you might even delete this to make a nice contrast with the calming song
17:08 MrSergio: 01:17:356 (2,3,4) - you really have this bad habit of increasing all of a sudden everything (rhythm, spacing, etc)
17:08 MrSergio: try to make the increase smooth
17:13 MrSergio: umh... overall the Hard feels yet a bit disorganized... I mean, it does show improvement, but some things are just strange, like the sudden spacing and rhythm changes or more in general the design, which can be polished
17:13 MrSergio: the Normal and Easy saw an improvement tho, above all the Easy
17:15 MrSergio: I'll post the timing on the forum so you can check it too