I think slider shapes like 04:10:555 (4,5) and 01:00:805 (1) and 01:12:805 (1) (mostly the former two) don't really fit the song and that you would be much better off sticking with straight or curved sliders. I also don't think it's too good to use such an extensive arsenal of sliders when the song is of this nature, fairly calm and repetitive throughout.
03:55:930 (4) - I was really expecting this held vocal to be a slider, like you have it at 03:54:805 (1) . Perhaps a 1/2 or 1/1?
04:02:680 (3,4) - turning these into 1 slider would hl and emphasis the vocals more. atm circle strays away from your vocal rhythm mapping a bit
[]subjective but a mod
03:55:930 (4) - I was really expecting this held vocal to be a slider, like you have it at 03:54:805 (1) . Perhaps a 1/2 or 1/1?
04:02:680 (3,4) - turning these into 1 slider would hl and emphasis the vocals more. atm circle strays away from your vocal rhythm mapping a bit
[]subjective but a mod