Alright then,
Bread Paradise00:09:382 (2) - You can still NC that one since after it you NC every 1/2 rhythms.
00:11:003 (3) - This could be really better if you place it somewhere like x151 y310 so you get more emphasis, and a better transition on 00:11:165 (1) - the next stream.
00:16:030 (2,3) - The rhythm here is kinda questionnable since I have no clue what you want to focus here, according to your previous pattern you are following vocals so better do the same. Something like
this should be better.
00:18:625 (4) - Space this a bit more to emphasis vocals tbh
Marianna00:10:679 (3) - Why that sudden break tho, there's a vocal sound here how about mapping it ?
00:29:976 (2,3) - and 00:30:463 (2,3) - would be actually better to Ctrl+G just for so that jump feel more confortable with the transition.
Light Insane00:06:301 (4) - Would be better to place it x308 y25
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