Shunao wrote:

free pp coming \o/

_MasterTSP wrote:

is shunao shogun on osu!?

1. Spread between Easy → Normal → Advanced feels weird as Easy barely uses all 1/1s, Normal uses all 1/1s and a lot of 1/2s and the only difference between Normal and Advanced is Spacing. It's highly suggested that you nerf Normal's 1/2s.
2. Advanced is really inconsistent with spacing. Sometimes the spacing you used on 1/2s is the same you used on 1/1s and vice versa. Don't forget this difficulty isn't supposed to use complex spacing as it's designed to new players. Make the spacing consistent.
3. Your offset seems really wrong at some spots. Make it 1.274 and adjust the green lines.

1. 00:08:098 (2) - I know the intention behind this was to be symmetrical and it looks really good but it doesn't fit with the song as you're making this part really undermapped by skipping some beats and even making the slider offbeat. You could atleast try something like this.

1. 00:30:639 (3) - Would be better if you could make this a circle on the white beat insteaf of a 1/2 slider. It might play really bad if the slider isn't along with any other circle as this is what you were doing the whole diff.

1. Don't really like the SV changes in the beginning because they're way too big for an Advanced. It's okay to lower it but try 0,85x instead of 0,75x. It's way too sudden now.
2. 00:20:423 (3,1) - Doesn't make much sense to stop there and break the flow as you were following both vocal and instruments and there's clearly something on the red beat. Put a circle on the red beat.

1. 00:11:179 (4,1) - Jump is really big there, specially with an 1/4 slider before it, makes it even harder to jump properly without breaking. Get (4) somwehere closer to (1).
2. 00:24:558 (4) - Can't really hear anything on the blue tick, it's kinda overmapped there and this isn't really recommended for a Hard. Would be better if you could delete it.

1. 00:08:747 (4,1) - Get (4) stacked to (1). It's way easier to read when they're stacked, instead of having the same spacing. If you do this, make sore to stack both to 00:08:098 (2) - end as the overlap may look messy.

Kuron-kun wrote:

I don't feel like this is ready to be qualified in this state, there are some errors that must be addressed in lower difficulties before you can proceed with the mapset:

[Shogun's Normal]

1. 00:30:639 (3) - Would be better if you could make this a circle on the white beat insteaf of a 1/2 slider. It might play really bad if the slider isn't along with any other circle as this is what you were doing the whole diff.

You're free to call either mancuso or Nevo to bubble/qualify this as they seem to have more interest in this than I do. Everything should be fine to me after you fix these. Good luck!

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Kuron-kun wrote:

1. Your offset seems really wrong at some spots. Make it 1.274 and adjust the green lines. there is a mapset rank of this song, which is offset 1,288,so i got the offset from him xd

Some suggestions:

[Shaxter's Advanced]

1. 00:20:423 (3,1) - Doesn't make much sense to stop there and break the flow as you were following both vocal and instruments and there's clearly something on the red beat. Put a circle on the red beat.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:179 (4,1) - Jump is really big there, specially with an 1/4 slider before it, makes it even harder to jump properly without breaking. Get (4) somwehere closer to (1).
2. 00:24:558 (4) - Can't really hear anything on the blue tick, it's kinda overmapped there and this isn't really recommended for a Hard. Would be better if you could delete it.

[Light Insane]

1. 00:08:747 (4,1) - Get (4) stacked to (1). It's way easier to read when they're stacked i prefer the flow which is xd, instead of having the same spacing.
   If you do this, make sore to stack both to 00:08:098 (2) - end as the overlap may look messy. i left the flow as it was before to be able to stack 00:08:098 (2) - with 00:09:071 (1) - not to have the ugly overlap that was xd

You're free to call either mancuso or Nevo to bubble/qualify this as they seem to have more interest in this than I do. Everything should be fine to me after you fix these. Good luck! No replay = fix, thanks mod

Nevo wrote:

haihai

Shunao's Normal
Raise volume of hitsounds in the kiai to like 80% to reflect the song and to be consistent with the other diffs xd

Hard
maybe 00:32:098 (4,5) - ctrl g these to so 00:31:774 (3) - has a more direct angle into 4 and to stay consistent with the fairly simple flow you had throughout the diff

Advanced
00:05:179 (2) - You might want to adjust this so it's not overlapping the hp bar so much

Light Insane
00:12:801 (1) - giving this more spacing could make it so the vocal is better emphasized maybe use spacing similar to what you used at 00:13:450 (3) -
00:14:585 (2) - do a circle then a 1/2 slider on 00:14:747 (3) - that way the snaredrum thing is clickable as well as the new vocal like this
00:28:369 (5) - lower the spacing from 00:28:206 (4) - so that 00:28:531 (1) - gets more emphasis maybe like tis

Marianna's Insane
pretty random point but maybe make the od 8.4 so it's not more than the top diff xd

All Fix xd

call me back~~ ok :p

Nevo wrote:

ready to go!

bubled

_MasterTSP wrote:

I am a Minecraft proplayer

Kuron-kun wrote:

hi nevo

Your offset is still wrong and should be changed to 1.274 as I suggested. Just confirmed with a QAT.

also, already ranked mapsets shouldn't be used as an excuse to do something.

Nevo wrote:

hi kuron

also remember this cant get qualified until the current qualified one is ranked :3c

Sotarks wrote:

Alright then,

Bread Paradise
00:09:382 (2) - You can still NC that one since after it you NC every 1/2 rhythms.
00:11:003 (3) - This could be really better if you place it somewhere like x151 y310 so you get more emphasis, and a better transition on 00:11:165 (1) - the next stream.
00:16:030 (2,3) - The rhythm here is kinda questionnable since I have no clue what you want to focus here, according to your previous pattern you are following vocals so better do the same. Something like this should be better.
00:18:625 (4) - Space this a bit more to emphasis vocals tbh

Light Insane
00:06:301 (4) - Would be better to place it x308 y25

All Fix :3
[]
Rest is fine.

Call me back ok :p

Sotarks wrote:

Ok, let's go!

Kuron-kun wrote:

sooo the custom diff isn't the top diff 🤔🤔🤔

KyotoYushiro wrote:

Ae seu delícia

Kuron-kun wrote:

sooo the custom diff isn't the top diff 🤔🤔🤔

Kuron-kun wrote:

sooo the custom diff isn't the top diff 🤔🤔🤔

Disqualified


kappa