So as requested, i will push this forward
[Amii's Insane]
00:05:776 - the right hand trill is too demanding here, try https://puu.sh/zcGh7/a2d12c8420.png instead.
00:08:614 (8614|1,8817|2) - make these 3-2, so that the minijack isn't in the left, which is too surprising
00:11:047 - this pattern simply lefted too awkward, try https://puu.sh/zcGmh/aae4424bff.png
00:14:391 - too heavy on left, try https://puu.sh/zcGpO/425c135705.png
00:20:223 (20223|1) - move this to col 3, so that there isn't too many jack at col 2 like 00:19:784 (19784|1,19931|1,20223|1,20370|1,20589|1,20809|1,20955|1) -
00:22:565 (22565|1,22711|2) - move this to col 3 and col 1 , the vocal is repeating, so make a minitrill also suit it.
00:26:370 (26370|0) - will be good to turn this into LN until 00:26:662 - so it doesn't get too empty
00:45:394 - until 00:45:833 - you can make the stream into 1/4 LN stream for variation
00:52:564 (52564|1,52711|2) - make this 3-2, so there will be jack at col 2 that mirroring jack at 00:53:003 (53003|2,53149|2) -
01:11:166 - can be more structured here, try http://puu.sh/zcGQB/8d3d98be7b.png
[Hard]
00:11:249 - think you can change it to be more variated a bit, like https://puu.sh/zcGWL/d8e178d71e.png
00:12:668 (12668|1,12871|1,13074|1,13276|1) - don't think the stack is good here, try https://puu.sh/zcGYH/c25a45f9e2.png
00:14:492 - change it the same as 00:11:249 -
00:29:443 (29443|0) - move to col 4 to balancing a bit
00:45:979 - well, at least i need you to map the 1/4 into 1/2 here, i ever got experienced map get DQ because of this gap, so you might as well not make this too empty, its the same as 00:47:589 -
00:54:759 (54759|2,55052|1) - make these into col 2 and 3 , felt like right hand too heavy here.
[Amii's Normal]
00:03:952 (3952|0) - make this LN until 00:04:357 - , felt empty when theres roll synth there.
00:10:641 - well you better map the 1/2 here, otherwise it will be pointed as spread problem
00:12:871 - same here, better map the 1/2 too.
00:24:028 - have different vocal with 00:23:589 (23589|2,23735|1,23882|2) - , so shouldn't be part of the trill, try https://puu.sh/zcHjI/6aefb4188e.png
01:20:428 - same with 00:10:641 -
01:21:434 - 01:22:240 - 01:23:045 - , etc i know you wanna make the break for emphasis, but its kinda too big gap if you remain it, so better map it.
[Easy]
00:36:467 - quite sure at this point its too heavy at right side for beginner, try https://puu.sh/zcHuc/13aec33966.png [started at 00:36:175 - ]
00:52:857 (52857|0,53149|3) - make these at col 4 and col 1, after the jack, it can use a bit balancing
Seem solid, call me back
[Amii's Insane]
00:05:776 - the right hand trill is too demanding here, try https://puu.sh/zcGh7/a2d12c8420.png instead.
00:08:614 (8614|1,8817|2) - make these 3-2, so that the minijack isn't in the left, which is too surprising
00:11:047 - this pattern simply lefted too awkward, try https://puu.sh/zcGmh/aae4424bff.png
00:14:391 - too heavy on left, try https://puu.sh/zcGpO/425c135705.png
00:20:223 (20223|1) - move this to col 3, so that there isn't too many jack at col 2 like 00:19:784 (19784|1,19931|1,20223|1,20370|1,20589|1,20809|1,20955|1) -
00:22:565 (22565|1,22711|2) - move this to col 3 and col 1 , the vocal is repeating, so make a minitrill also suit it.
00:26:370 (26370|0) - will be good to turn this into LN until 00:26:662 - so it doesn't get too empty
00:45:394 - until 00:45:833 - you can make the stream into 1/4 LN stream for variation
00:52:564 (52564|1,52711|2) - make this 3-2, so there will be jack at col 2 that mirroring jack at 00:53:003 (53003|2,53149|2) -
01:11:166 - can be more structured here, try http://puu.sh/zcGQB/8d3d98be7b.png
[Hard]
00:11:249 - think you can change it to be more variated a bit, like https://puu.sh/zcGWL/d8e178d71e.png
00:12:668 (12668|1,12871|1,13074|1,13276|1) - don't think the stack is good here, try https://puu.sh/zcGYH/c25a45f9e2.png
00:14:492 - change it the same as 00:11:249 -
00:29:443 (29443|0) - move to col 4 to balancing a bit
00:45:979 - well, at least i need you to map the 1/4 into 1/2 here, i ever got experienced map get DQ because of this gap, so you might as well not make this too empty, its the same as 00:47:589 -
00:54:759 (54759|2,55052|1) - make these into col 2 and 3 , felt like right hand too heavy here.
[Amii's Normal]
00:03:952 (3952|0) - make this LN until 00:04:357 - , felt empty when theres roll synth there.
00:10:641 - well you better map the 1/2 here, otherwise it will be pointed as spread problem
00:12:871 - same here, better map the 1/2 too.
00:24:028 - have different vocal with 00:23:589 (23589|2,23735|1,23882|2) - , so shouldn't be part of the trill, try https://puu.sh/zcHjI/6aefb4188e.png
01:20:428 - same with 00:10:641 -
01:21:434 - 01:22:240 - 01:23:045 - , etc i know you wanna make the break for emphasis, but its kinda too big gap if you remain it, so better map it.
[Easy]
00:36:467 - quite sure at this point its too heavy at right side for beginner, try https://puu.sh/zcHuc/13aec33966.png [started at 00:36:175 - ]
00:52:857 (52857|0,53149|3) - make these at col 4 and col 1, after the jack, it can use a bit balancing
Seem solid, call me back