00:04:763 (4763|1,4763|3,5168|2,5574|0,5979|1) - I rather use the chord 00:04:763 (4763|1,4763|3) - on |2|3| . So rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397321 dont really get your idea but fixed
00:20:662 (20662|0,20955|1,21248|0,21540|1) - I prefer this arrange instead for better rest:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397362 00:21:979 (21979|2,22272|1) - I rather replace these Longnotes for Notes and/or arrange like this (If you apply above):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397384 00:27:101 (27101|3,27101|0,27394|1,27687|2) - I think you can follow the whistles in this part of the music using roll patterns or alternation. In this case, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839742900:28:565 (28565|1,28857|3,29150|2) - Same reason as above, here like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839743800:29:735 (29735|3,30028|2,30321|1,30614|0,30614|2,30906|1,31199|3,31492|2,31784|0,31784|3) - Here following the vocal, i think is better rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839745500:31:784 (31784|0,31784|3,32077|2,32370|1,32662|0,32955|3,32955|1) - Again here for the whistles, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839747300:33:248 (33248|2,33540|0,33833|1,34126|3,34126|2) - Same reason as above:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839749700:35:589 (35589|2,35882|0,36175|1,36467|3,36467|0) - I prefer rearrange like this here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839751300:38:223 (38223|2) - It will fit more on |3| for whistle. Move to |3|.
00:38:809 (38809|2,38809|0,39101|1,39394|3,39687|2) - For vocal again, i rather try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839754700:39:979 (39979|0,39979|1,40272|3,40565|1,40857|2,41150|3,41150|0) - Again as above, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839756200:41:443 (41443|1) - If you apply above, move this to |0|. More spaced for whistle.
have already rearranged the part.
00:42:906 (42906|1) - Move to |0|. More spaced for whistle too.
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00:43:492 (43492|1,43492|3,43784|2,44077|0,44370|1) - I hear cymbals for those single notes as well, but maybe can be harder. So try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397598 rearrange in another way00:46:418 (46418|3,46711|0,46711|2,47003|1,47296|2,47589|3,47589|0,47881|2,48174|0,48467|3,48467|1,48759|2,49052|1,49345|3,49345|0) - Is more clear to follow the whistles like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397620 00:49:930 (49930|2,50223|0,50223|3,50515|1,50808|3,51101|2,51101|0,51393|1,51686|2,51979|3,51979|0,52272|1,52564|1,52857|2,52857|0) - I think those drums and whistles are better represented like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839766600:53:149 (53149|3) - Move to |2| if you apply above.
kind of rearrange this part
00:57:539 - I rather add those notes for vocals until the Longnote, roll pattern and alternation, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397709 Actually i dont wanna catch vocal, and what's more, here maybe a rest for players. and current is ok00:59:881 (59881|2) - This Longnote should end on 01:01:502 for synth. If you apply above, it will look like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397730 this LN is for flute sound, and the flute ends earlier if u listen carefully
01:06:334 (66334|3,66535|0,66938|1,67340|2,67743|1,67944|3,67944|0) - It will fit better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397745 change in a different way01:13:985 (73985|0,74790|0,75193|2,75595|1,75998|0,75998|3,76401|1,76804|2,77206|3,77609|2,77609|0,78012|1,78414|3,78817|2) - That note after the Longnote end can be placed on |1| instead, after that can be rearranged to fit better with the vocal. Like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397766 fixed in a little bit different way
01:25:663 (85663|3,85663|2,86065|1,86065|0,86468|2,86468|3) - The last chord can be like this in my opinion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397782 get your idea, fixed
01:27:273 (87273|2,87273|3,87676|2,87676|1,88079|1,88079|0,88481|3) - That Longnote have the tail snapped in 1/4, i rather change that. Use 1/2 or 1/1 instead (or more simple, use a note). In my opinion, rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397814 <- Fun/Surprise factor? (After the crash sound on 01:26:468 , you think that the song ends... but not. lol)
change the LN snap but keep the pattern cuz current follows pitch maybe nice lol------------------
By the way, take care of Storyboard Hitsounds, in my opinion they are good when there are notes to be pressed, not in this case:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397881 <- Easy difficulty (both.) The highlighted SB Hitsounds are played, but there isn't a note. This could be confusing.
This issue is in the Normal diff. too:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398319 <- Normal diff. both. (I think that you are doing the Hitsound-Copy-Process so i notify you instead of the GD.)
In Hard as well:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399114Insane:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399212 But much less because of the amount of notes.
Though I think HS will make people feel incomplete whenever some are ignored with the way of catching notes. It seems to some degree disappointed. Though in RC there are rules about this but currently the HS are all easily identifiable. So i guess it's ok now.
00:01:520 - Those doublejacks... for a hard? I don't know honestly, if you still want to use some jacks maybe reduce the amount the notes like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398805 - Or this if you want density (but not jacks):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398816 give up jack ;w;00:10:641 (10641|2,10742|1,10844|0,10911|1,10979|3,11047|2,11148|1,11249|3,11249|0,11249|2,11351|1,11452|2,11553|3,11655|2,11655|0) - I rather rearrange that staircase, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398859 rearrange in a different way00:17:330 (17330|2,17533|1) - I think is better represented like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398874 nice idea!00:18:175 - I think you can arrange better this part, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398913 and
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398916 <- Note the stack order: |1|->|3|->|0|->|2|,|1|...
i think currently this part is fine xd. anyway i wanna keep00:21:979 (21979|0,22053|1,22126|2,22272|3,22345|2,22418|3,22418|0,22418|1) - Only stairs? Why not trills/alternation?:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398924 nice!00:26:370 (26370|2) - I rather move this to |1|, for cymbal sounds different.
From 00:45:833 to 00:52:857 - This part seems somewhat inconsistent, i think you need do hand (triple) for snares and chord for kicks. Try this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398976 and
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398977 rearranged00:57:100 (57100|1) - I think this too is a whistle, that needs 1/4 Longnote.
00:57:539 (57539|0,58125|1,58417|2,58710|3,59296|0,59588|1) - You are following the vocal and some whistles here? Seems odd, try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398998 <- Last three chords for the vocals, also the Longnote ends early.
current is fine cuz they are all flute sounds lol
01:13:985 (73985|1,73985|0,74085|2,74085|3,74186|0,74186|1,74287|2,74387|1,74387|0,74387|3) - By the way, i think this stream is 1/6. If you hear closely 01:14:186 - is very clear that is faster than 1/4. Try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399010 rea... really? 0.0 i dont think so 01:15:797 (75797|1,75897|1) - Ok. But why not on 00:06:182 , 00:07:803 or 01:17:408 too? Also, i think is for variety (Is that? *Thinking*) but this part is different to 00:04:763 when you decide to put chords for vocals and skip the drums...
i fix on 01:17:408 but keep previous parts since I think major melody line in the previous part is for those chords, and they best represent the music there
01:20:226 (80226|1,80327|2,80428|3,80495|2,80562|1,80629|0,80730|1,80830|2,80830|0,80830|3,80931|1,81032|2,81132|3,81233|0,81233|1,81334|2,81434|1,81535|0,81636|1,81636|3) - Like before for that staircase, rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399041 different way rearrange01:27:273 (87273|0,87273|1,87273|2,87676|0,87676|3,87676|2,88079|0,88079|1,88079|3,88481|2) - I rather change like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399058 More consistent with the drums.
i dont think so many notes are needed, what's more it is at last and sudden burst of this will make players feel uncomfortable