Here comes that BN.
[General]
00:28:147 - I'm pretty sure you don't need this red point here, the notes are just in 1/3 lol
[Inner Oni]
Some of the snappings are pretty hard to read, I will mention them all there. And I'm going to mod this diff only probably, so you can give kudos or not, doesn't matter.
[General]
00:28:147 - I'm pretty sure you don't need this red point here, the notes are just in 1/3 lol
[Inner Oni]
Some of the snappings are pretty hard to read, I will mention them all there. And I'm going to mod this diff only probably, so you can give kudos or not, doesn't matter.
- 00:13:945 - Unlike 00:13:626 - this one, there isn't any sound that supports 1/6 on that pattern. I recommend you to change the 2nd one to simple 1/4.
Something like this would be better. (timestamp at 00:13:785 - ): - 00:24:237 - Because of the flow purposes, I recommend a don here.
- 00:47:933 - Technically there is one note there. This doesn't feel good when playing, because it represents only one note which feels highly overmapped.
But I don't even know what I should suggest, because this is an igorrr song... so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ - 01:03:252 - I don't approve this, it's just a reverb sound which requires nothing. A 1/6 kkkd kd like this is not even good, just drop this to single note. It is basically same as 00:45:380 - this, just a single note. Or, if you really want to create a difference just use one 1/8 doublet.
- 01:03:731 - This is worse than the above, it represents nothing at all. Especially not a pattern usage like this is required or good there. Just change it to 1/2 snappings and it will help you to increase density on 01:04:210 - this spot (which I think after you change it to 1/2 you should add a note at 01:04:130 - this spot due to it's existance.).
- 01:07:561 (15,16) - Can't hear a specific sound that requires finishers to be honest. While they are hard to hit, they actually don't represent something,
the 2nd one is just a snare hit without a cymbal while the first one is kick. Same applies to 01:08:837 (29,30) - these two, the sounds are only a bit stronger,
and you can adjust it with volume on them, not finishers. - 01:13:465 - Mentioned before, you'll get my point.
- 01:14:103 - The usage of this pattern is a bit different compared to the other ones. Try to make them similiar with adding a note at 01:14:210 - this spot (1/6 snap).
- 01:14:582 - 01:14:741 - Those are not in 1/6, and it plays really weird. Try removing 01:14:635 (86,88) - these two and make them simple.
- 01:18:571 - Due to the pitch, I think you can use dddk here instead of kkkk.
- 01:20:433 - Remove this note, it has no difference between 01:20:007 - this.
- 01:22:960 - These are not coming in time, you know how to fix this as we discussed before.
- 01:46:018 - Hmm, I think you can differentiate the strong kicks vs weak kicks there. Remove 01:46:736 - this 1/8 and 01:48:013 - this one, it'll increase density at the 2nd part.
- 02:18:571 (141) - Kat on this? Feels better with the drum pitch change.
- 02:19:635 (148) - You should make this don, it will create a more harmonious pattern there.
- 02:21:124 - 1/6 seems excessive, since there is not a prominent sound on it. The wave sound doesn't feel enough to put one there. 1/4 kdd will work better.
- 02:24:316 - You don't have finishers on those while you have at 02:26:869 - these ones. The sounds are the same, so should the patterns. My recommendation will be removing the 2nd, since I don't think the sounds are enough to be emphasized with finishers.
- 02:24:954 - Why change snapping there? Just continue the 1/6 with dons, the sound is the same, just lowering down.
- 02:29:741 - This doesn't emphasize anything good, 1/6 1/4 1/3 is not a good choice to create a good follow. Either choose 1/6 1/3 or 1/4 flat.
- 02:31:976 ~ 02:32:614 - Between those two spots, I think only the last note (02:32:614 (240) - ) should keep the finisher since there is a long vocal and a trilling sound at the background. You should remove finishers from others.
- 02:37:561 (270) - If you are following drums, this breaks the structure. Remove it and 02:37:720 (272) - change this to kat in order to emphasize the high sounds on them.
- 02:39:529 - You should remove this as well for the same reason as above.
- 02:46:018 - How about 1.5x SV there? Will be a bit gimmicky, and a sudden stop will make it even better. If you apply this, don't forget to change it back at 02:47:295 - this point or before.
- 02:51:124 - Kat here? To differentiate with the first one. Applies to similiar parts if you accept.
- 03:10:593 (148,152) - Even though the snare is different, it doesn't contain a strong sound that requires a finisher on these.
- 03:13:624 - Starting from here. kdkkkkd feels better.
- 03:13:199 (168) - If you remove this, the flow will be better on that trilling snare sound at 03:13:305 - this spot.
- 03:16:178 - To emphasize the little pitch change and add a bit more playability, I think you should change this to don.
- 03:18:811 (232) - Don on this for pitch and playability (same as above).
- 03:19:210 - I think this can have a finisher because of the background sound that starts rising there.
- 03:26:869 (309) - Same, to differentiate with other one.
- 03:29:741 (327,328) - I think one having a finisher and one don't for pitch change is not that good. It's not even catchable while playing, so I recommend adding a finisher on the 2nd note too.
- 03:30:859 - I think you should add two 1/4 notes there, since the sound is actually starting on that spot.
- 03:31:976 - Ye, differentiation.
- 03:33:731 - No reason to split the stream, just add don here to emphasize the drums.
- 03:34:848 - 03:35:167 - For playability purposes and understanding of 1/4 1/6 snapping change more clearer, change those notes to kat.
- 03:36:523 - Same as above.