heya anhedonia
lower diffs look ok for me tbh.
good luck on this one o/
general
- I think the timing point for 141bpm at 00:28:147 - is unnecessary. The notes are in 2/3 of 188bpm (which is 141bpm if I'm not mistaken).
inner
- 00:38:359 - the snapping change with the sv here is a bit misleading to players as the previous sv changes (00:35:806 - and 00:37:083 - ) are also on a d d k but without the snapping change. Try playing with the sv or keeping it unchanged (wich the suggestion to keep 188bpm in general) to give a warning to the player.
- 00:41:710 (229) - this to kat to reflect the pattern you used on a similar sound at 00:41:071 (223) - ?
- 00:44:741 - the notes here are actually in 1/8 but you can keep it as 1/6 if you want to make it easier.
- 00:47:295 (15) - this can be changed to kat if you want to emphasize it's stronger sound compared to the rest of the stream.
- 00:47:933 - to 00:48:093 - uses 1/8 snapping. You could change this stream into 2 different streams, one following the 1/8 snapping and the last one using 1/6 or 1/4 or mixing both as the sound after 00:48:093 - is more like a wave than a beat.
- 01:02:241 (154) - this sort of note is more readable and playable with 1/8 snapping rather than 1/6. Also this note is optinal as it covers a wave sound but if you want to have it I'd suggest 1/8 or even 1/4. If you compare to a similar part (01:03:997 - ), that one is more playable since it's previous pattern was in 1/6 too so it flows more naturally.
- 01:03:252 - the sound you mapped here ends at 01:03:571 - . would be interesting if you place a note there, increase the lenght of the burst to there or something similar to 01:13:465 - .
- 01:05:167 (183,184,185,186) - not 1/6 but I don't mind you covering it as it differs from the following pattern.
- 01:51:124 - the 2/3 snapping is much more intuitive than the 1/2 you're using right now due to the emphasized synth over the muted cymbal. If you want to follow the drums there's some sort of tribal drum sounds on them too so don't worry.
oni
- just like inner, at 01:53:518 - , and similar parts, use 2/3 snapping if you had agreed with that.
lower diffs look ok for me tbh.
good luck on this one o/