old m4m
General
- nothing really important to mention
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tutuhara's Hard
- 00:08:387 (4) - well, this one feels a bit out of place compared to the rest. Maybe try something like this?
- 00:08:908 (1,2) - awful spacing inconsistency here. Why not just stack it under the previous slider? (the next objects need a bit of a re-arrangement tho)
- 00:16:474 (2,4) - it would be cool to use a ctrl + g here, but you'd need to fix some other objects too in the last square. Such change in flow creates a better effect
- 00:18:300 (5,1) - kinda short spacing here again. It just doesn't look clean to have it...
- 00:21:952 (3,4) - I'd rather keep the zig zag flow on these guys too, so a ctrl + g works well
- 00:22:735 (2,4) - ctrl + g and 00:22:996 (3,4) - ctrl + g again to make a similar flow
- 00:27:691 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn't really work, you know... the emphasis just gets wasted instead. 00:27:952 (2) - this should have been to the right of 1 and 00:28:474 (4) - should have been at the left of 3, but in this case you'd also need to re-arrange 00:28:734 (5,6,7,8) -
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Normal
- 00:03:169 (2,3,4) - the rhythm here is a little mess. You waste completely all the strong beats here: 00:03:169 - and 00:03:691 - .
Try something like this - 00:08:908 (1,2) - I guess a blanket needs to be improved here :p
- 00:12:300 (3) - why not x128 y136 instead? It creates a smoother curve after all
- 00:14:126 (2,3) - imo you should make them into a 1/1 slider instead, to follow better vocals.
- 00:14:908 - consider also deleting this, to give a break to the player. This chain is huge, 00:13:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
- 00:17:517 (2,3) - as a general guideline, sliders should be placed on white ticks, since that's where most of the strong beats fall
- 00:34:213 (2) - ^
- general structure is kinda weak, but I guess it is normal at first. Try working more on it tho.
- slider tick rate should be set to 1, not 2
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Easy
- 00:18:300 (5) - if you use a circle instead you create a nice stop effect and give a little breather to the player
- 00:34:995 (5) - same ^
- slider tick rate should be set to 1 once again, since the song doesn't have that many beats in the background
- the general structure is kinda lacking here too. Take 00:02:648 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - for example and you'll see how this whole part in simply a giant circle. That's not so good :/
Try giving your patterns some meaning, some logic, not just general flow