[Easy]
[tutuhara's Hard]
So yeah this isn't an actual modding but more like a quick general points from me, good luck~
- So first of all you need to be more consistent in terms of rhythms, like 00:13:604 (2) - 00:38:648 (4) for instance which I assume you mapped those according to vocal right? But then why don't you do the same thing to the other places with a similar vocal like 00:05:256 - 00:46:995 - etc then? If you're expressing something (in this case I assume it's vocal) then you should be more consistent on how you expressed things based on how you mapped the song.
- This diff needs more rhythm variations, currently it looks like an Easy with 1/1 rhythm spam which is pretty monotonous, you need more variations between 1/1 and 2/1 rhythms.
- 00:19:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:27:691 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similar thing to what I said in Easy, these rhythms aren't really similar despite the song is giving out the same thing, in this case 00:27:691 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) is clearly denser than 00:19:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) for no reason, I'm not saying these sections need to use the same rhythm but you need to have a concept while mapping each section, something like "How much rhythm density I'll map on this part, if the song is intense on this part then should I use a denser rhythm than other parts in the song?", or something like "If vocal is more prominent on this part then should my rhythms follow vocal instead of the instrument?", something along that line.
[tutuhara's Hard]
- 00:09:952 (3,4,5) - A consistent spacing would play better imo, I don't really the reason for having a higher spacing on 00:10:213 (4,5) while the background instrument is still playing consistently, you didn't do the same thing on 00:43:604 (3,4) either which is pretty much the same rhythm.
- 00:19:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:27:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Aren't these basically the same thing? Looks kinda inconsistent because you used all different ideas once but you used this pattern twice.
- 00:34:995 (3) - Would look a lot better if you make the nodes symmetric lol, currently it's not.
- Apart from kiai, I don't really know what are you following, are you following vocal? Or is it instrument? Well I can assume you're following vocal with 00:36:039 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) but why not do the same thing with then 00:04:734 (1,2,3,4,5) ? This is just one of the things where I feel like your rhythm choices are really inconsistent because you didn't follow the same thing when the song gives out a similar/same rhythm.
So yeah this isn't an actual modding but more like a quick general points from me, good luck~