Roses Epicurean - Yoru no Kodomo-tachi · forum

Gordon123

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2016-12-25T11:49:51+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
old m4m

General

nothing really important to mention okaaay!

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Normal

00:03:169 (2,3,4) - the rhythm here is a little mess. You waste completely all the strong beats here: 00:03:169 - and 00:03:691 - .
Try something like this haha! LOL this good for rhythm,but really i like this plase because there are perfectly displayed the words!
00:08:908 (1,2) - I guess a blanket needs to be improved here :p I still can not understand why this place is not like anyone? couse i like it!
00:12:300 (3) - why not x128 y136 instead? It creates a smoother curve after all why not! added)
00:14:126 (2,3) - imo you should make them into a 1/1 slider instead, to follow better vocals. sure,but i just make ctrl+g because dont forget 00:14:648 - what here we have a hit.
00:14:908 - consider also deleting this, to give a break to the player. This chain is huge, 00:13:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - If I take away something that will prove that the displaying is not enough music rhythm
00:17:517 (2,3) - as a general guideline, sliders should be placed on white ticks, since that's where most of the strong beats fall sure just ctrl+g
00:34:213 (2) - ^ naah, I like it! owo
general structure is kinda weak, but I guess it is normal at first. Try working more on it tho. I can't work on this - beacause that is already perfect!
slider tick rate should be set to 1, not 2 ok

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Easy

00:18:300 (5) - if you use a circle instead you create a nice stop effect and give a little breather to the player I dont think it is a very difficult moment, because there comes a series of sounds (that's what she sings in the song), and there doesnt look circle!
00:34:995 (5) - same ^ follows the rhythm, I'm sorry!
slider tick rate should be set to 1 once again, since the song doesn't have that many beats in the background ok
the general structure is kinda lacking here too. Take 00:02:648 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - for example and you'll see how this whole part in simply a giant circle. That's not so good :/ sure i fix this. ty!
Try giving your patterns some meaning, some logic, not just general flow

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Thx for mod bro MrSergio

Last edited by Gordon123 2017-01-20T14:16:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2017-01-14T00:26:54+00:00

2zz wrote:
С изем проблем не вижу. Отлично получился.

hrd

Думаю, не повредит поднять ар до 6,6 или 7. - 6.8 уже стоит
00:09:691 (2) - неудобно лежит. Передвинь со снапингом. Не вписывается в мапу, потому что больше таких мест не встречается. Из-за этого бросается в глаза. - немного изменил форму, и убрал лишний круг
00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - попробуй повернуть всё это на небольшой угол, как например 00:10:474 (5) или 00:12:039 (3,4).
Собственно, с 00:19:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) и 00:31:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) можно провернуть то же самое. - трогать не стал
Будет чуть-чуть интереснее.

Спасибо за мод))

MrSergio wrote:
old m4m

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tutuhara's Hard

00:08:387 (4) - well, this one feels a bit out of place compared to the rest. Maybe try something like this? - FIX thanks)
00:08:908 (1,2) - awful spacing inconsistency here. Why not just stack it under the previous slider? (the next objects need a bit of a re-arrangement tho) - Fix)
00:16:474 (2,4) - it would be cool to use a ctrl + g here, but you'd need to fix some other objects too in the last square. Such change in flow creates a better effect - Fix ALL )) Thanks
00:18:300 (5,1) - kinda short spacing here again. It just doesn't look clean to have it...
00:21:952 (3,4) - I'd rather keep the zig zag flow on these guys too, so a ctrl + g works well
00:22:735 (2,4) - ctrl + g and 00:22:996 (3,4) - ctrl + g again to make a similar flow
00:27:691 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn't really work, you know... the emphasis just gets wasted instead. 00:27:952 (2) - this should have been to the right of 1 and 00:28:474 (4) - should have been at the left of 3, but in this case you'd also need to re-arrange 00:28:734 (5,6,7,8) - CHange ALL Pattern

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OWO Thanks my Friend

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2017-01-20T14:37:00+00:00

Hey~ & sorry for late

General

could you explain your hitsound pattern to me? I don't get it at all, it seems rather random, especially towards the end of the diffs. s:
Also, are you sure about the finish hitsound? It matches that bell sound just too well, imo, it's not noticeable that there even is a hitsound. :c
In E and N - Is there any reason for Slider Tick Rate 2? Because that makes the song feel rather full of sounds that don't need to be there.. I mean, the song itself is rather quiet and calm and just because there are some background noises doesn't mean there has to be emphasis on that for each 1/2 beat. s:
Imo, the spinner at the end is super weird.. Idk, it doesn't follow any strong sound and the hitsound on the end actually makes it sound like there should be something clickable.. so, I don't think each map needs a spinner, it just doesn't fit sometimes, but if you want to keep it could you do something about the hitsound? D:

Easy

I'm a bit confused by your NC pattern, please stick to either NC on each downbeat or each second one to have everything consistent.
--- Otherwise the diff looks okay, but pretty monotonous and repetitive.. Idk, the diff could be much more interesting if you vary the rhythm some more (and you definitely could do that, there are a lot of opportunities to do so!), atm it's just constant 1/1 rhythm with no changes for 50 seconds, the spinner excluded.. :/
Since I don't know if you want to change the rhythm up and what you would want to emphasise I can't really give any good examples, but feel free to ask about that!

Normal

There are pretty long patterns like 00:04:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - an 00:13:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - for example that have constant 1/2 rhythm, which is too much. - or rather, too many objects in a row without at least a 1/2 beat break. Since the Easy is 1/1 only that doesn't really fit in the spread,.. but I don't know which rhythm you want to prioritize so you should figure out which objects you could replace/remove by yourself. (Especially in Kiai)
(As an example - for the first pattern I'd go for something like http://puu.sh/tsVJP.jpg to emphasise the vocals more than the other sounds, since they are the most dominant (in my ears) and following this creates more variety.)
00:13:082 (5,1) - shouldn't NC be on (5)? That's the downbeat and since you stick to that mostly it would be better to keep it consistent, no?
Same for 00:46:474 (5,1) -
00:13:604 (1,2,3,4) - would work also like this http://puu.sh/tsVPO.jpg
00:25:865 (2) - this slider doesn't really match well, because it starts on a weaker beat. s: Could you re-arrange that a little?
00:34:995 (4,1,2) - DS between (1,2) is misleading, please fix that!
And avoid the overlap of (4) and (2) please, it's visible for a few ms while playing and might confuse people >:

tutuhara's Hard

00:04:734 (4) - just a missing NC
00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like the pattern, but these four in the middle (00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) - ) feel incredibly exaggerated because of the increased spacing and imo that doesn't really fit in the non-Kiai part as it's so calm and quiet.. maybe you could come up with something that only has increased spacing for the (1)s and keeps the others consistent? (example: http://puu.sh/tsWU0.jpg + http://puu.sh/tsWVg.jpg + http://puu.sh/tsWWF.jpg )
00:24:561 (5) - 00:26:648 (5) - 00:28:734 (5) - 00:30:821 (5) - etc you might want to NC them as well; it makes the patterns much easier to understand and then you'd also keep hp gain consistent in the difficulty.
(Same for 00:49:604 (5) - )
00:39:169 (4,5,1) - just nitpicking, but these blankets could be improved >-<
00:43:082 (2,3,4,5) - Are you sure about this? The sliderend feels a little off, because it's the same sound as (3,4,5), but not clickable.
00:44:387 (1) - The stack feels pretty random and imo the bell sound could be emphasized really nicely if you don't stack these but increase the spacing a bit. (You could just ctrl+j the whole pattern and adjust the ones afterwards, that would work nicely, imo.)

Well, I didn't go into detail too much, bucause I feel like the lower diffs still lack structure. >:
So good luck for now!

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2017-01-21T13:23:00+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Hey~ & sorry for late no problem owo

General
could you explain your hitsound pattern to me? I don't get it at all, it seems rather random, especially towards the end of the diffs. s: idk how to understand u ! maybe...i just feel that rhythm in map and give thats HS owo
Also, are you sure about the finish hitsound? It matches that bell sound just too well, imo, it's not noticeable that there even is a hitsound. :c but maaan,though he never heard, but he still coming to map the most!it must express the part of the song!so i like it~
In E and N - Is there any reason for Slider Tick Rate 2? Because that makes the song feel rather full of sounds that don't need to be there.. I mean, the song itself is rather quiet and calm and just because there are some background noises doesn't mean there has to be emphasis on that for each 1/2 beat. s: yes,i fix it lol
Imo, the spinner at the end is super weird.. Idk, it doesn't follow any strong sound and the hitsound on the end actually makes it sound like there should be something clickable.. so, I don't think each map needs a spinner, it just doesn't fit sometimes, but if you want to keep it could you do something about the hitsound? D: idk i like it,this is not a great problem) + just like it xD
Easy
I'm a bit confused by your NC pattern, please stick to either NC on each downbeat or each second one to have everything consistent.
--- Otherwise the diff looks okay, but pretty monotonous and repetitive.. Idk, the diff could be much more interesting if you vary the rhythm some more (and you definitely could do that, there are a lot of opportunities to do so!), atm it's just constant 1/1 rhythm with no changes for 50 seconds, the spinner excluded.. :/
Since I don't know if you want to change the rhythm up and what you would want to emphasise I can't really give any good examples, but feel free to ask about that! I understand that it may look dull and boring, but you think about it: this is E, it should look like, but I still revised E, but found nothing that would be correct! im sry ;w;
What about NC i put in on lyrics (use only max 5 combo)! its fine
Normal
There are pretty long patterns like 00:04:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - an 00:13:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - for example that have constant 1/2 rhythm, which is too much. - or rather, too many objects in a row without at least a 1/2 beat break. Since the Easy is 1/1 only that doesn't really fit in the spread,.. but I don't know which rhythm you want to prioritize so you should figure out which objects you could replace/remove by yourself. (Especially in Kiai)
(As an example - for the first pattern I'd go for something like http://puu.sh/tsVJP.jpg to emphasise the vocals more than the other sounds, since they are the most dominant (in my ears) and following this creates more variety.) About this part : I will try to fix something(i think about it)
00:13:082 (5,1) - shouldn't NC be on (5)? That's the downbeat and since you stick to that mostly it would be better to keep it consistent, no? sure
Same for 00:46:474 (5,1) - same too ^
00:13:604 (1,2,3,4) - would work also like this http://puu.sh/tsVPO.jpg naah,song doesnt have to have a triple here(i think)
00:25:865 (2) - this slider doesn't really match well, because it starts on a weaker beat. s: Could you re-arrange that a little? yes
00:34:995 (4,1,2) - DS between (1,2) is misleading, please fix that! i know about it,couse i lil remap diff
And avoid the overlap of (4) and (2) please, it's visible for a few ms while playing and might confuse people >: sure )
Well, I didn't go into detail too much, bucause I feel like the lower diffs still lack structure. >:
So good luck for now! ty

normal soon xD
Thx for mod Squichu

tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2017-02-05T23:57:29+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Hey~ & sorry for late

tutuhara's Hard
00:04:734 (4) - just a missing NC -add bro
00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like the pattern, but these four in the middle (00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) - ) feel incredibly exaggerated because of the increased spacing and imo that doesn't really fit in the non-Kiai part as it's so calm and quiet.. maybe you could come up with something that only has increased spacing for the (1)s and keeps the others consistent? (example: http://puu.sh/tsWU0.jpg + http://puu.sh/tsWVg.jpg + http://puu.sh/tsWWF.jpg ) - low spacing (00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) ( i dont have crash structure ( Thanks)
00:24:561 (5) - 00:26:648 (5) - 00:28:734 (5) - 00:30:821 (5) - etc you might want to NC them as well; it makes the patterns much easier to understand and then you'd also keep hp gain consistent in the difficulty. -add NC ) Thanks
(Same for 00:49:604 (5) - )
00:39:169 (4,5,1) - just nitpicking, but these blankets could be improved >-< - impruve blanket)
00:43:082 (2,3,4,5) - Are you sure about this? The sliderend feels a little off, because it's the same sound as (3,4,5), but not clickable. - remap this pattern
00:44:387 (1) - The stack feels pretty random and imo the bell sound could be emphasized really nicely if you don't stack these but increase the spacing a bit. (You could just ctrl+j the whole pattern and adjust the ones afterwards, that would work nicely, imo.)
Well, I didn't go into detail too much, bucause I feel like the lower diffs still lack structure. >:
So good luck for now!

Thanks for mod BROO )_

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2017-10-03T21:30:23+00:00

We need to try rank it o.o

>was remaped Easy diff
>added Space's Normal
>need help with HS in Easy diff

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2017-10-05T18:35:05+00:00

hi c:

[General]

Nothing c:

[Easy]

00:08:908 (3) - Why not make me this slider like on Gero's map? It looks nicer i think in this song, cause it's a bit calmer than yours. Img:
00:15:169 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks kinda messy for me and it's not good to making overlaps on Easy diffs. So the best thing which you can make here is try to stack 00:14:126 (4,3) objects.
00:29:778 (4) - Why this one slider is only one rotated for 10-15 degrees in this part, so maybe make it like 00:31:865 (1)?
00:44:387 (1,3) - This two objects are too close, cause slidertails are touching themselves. Just move them c:.

Normal and Hard are good.

Gordon123

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Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2017-10-05T18:54:29+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
hi c: nya ^^

[General]
Nothing c:

[Easy]
00:08:908 (3) - Why not make me this slider like on Gero's map? It looks nicer i think in this song, cause it's a bit calmer than yours. Img:
^why not :3
00:15:169 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks kinda messy for me and it's not good to making overlaps on Easy diffs. So the best thing which you can make here is try to stack 00:14:126 (4,3) objects. no need to stak but fixed overlap
00:29:778 (4) - Why this one slider is only one rotated for 10-15 degrees in this part, so maybe make it like 00:31:865 (1)? nono i make it special,so not fix
00:44:387 (1,3) - This two objects are too close, cause slidertails are touching themselves. Just move them c: oke.

Normal and Hard are good.

ty for mod Chalwa

Gordon123

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Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-01-02T19:27:55+00:00

>added Advanced
>KittyAdventure ty for help me with HS in easy and Adv >w<

Last edited by Gordon123 2018-01-03T14:37:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Izzeee

179 posts

Joined June 2016

Izzeee 2018-01-02T22:06:27+00:00

looked like it needed a taiko diff

Chari's Muzukashii

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36039
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Yoru no Kodomo tachi
TitleUnicode:夜の子供たち
Artist:Roses Epicurean
ArtistUnicode:Roses Epicurean
Creator:Gordon123
Version:Chari's Muzukashii
Source:
Tags:Hatsuki Yura 葉月ゆら 闇童話工房 バラエピキュリアン -Space- tutuhara
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Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-01-03T03:32:16+00:00

I'm sorry but i really dont want any more GDs in this mapset,sry

You can try make GD here in my new taiko map https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/714445/#taiko/1509897

A1caida

199 posts

Joined May 2016

A1caida 2018-01-03T19:07:22+00:00

:thinking:
квик чек
[tutuhara's Hard]
00:07:865 (3,4) - Попробуй сделать так, чтобы они образовывали круг (00:05:778 (4,1) - ) Так лучше выглядит
[Advanced]
00:10:474 (4,1) - Может бланкет?
00:29:778 (1,2) - Ты замапал их в одном месте, но у них разные звуки. Don't like this. Это касается и других нот, которые ты так замапал
[Easy]
00:08:908 (3) - Ну не. Не надо делать трость. Нормальный слайдер

Удачи!

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-01-03T19:32:14+00:00

-Alcaida wrote:
:thinking:
квик чек
[Advanced]
00:10:474 (4,1) - Может бланкет? почему нет)
00:29:778 (1,2) - Ты замапал их в одном месте, но у них разные звуки. Don't like this. Это касается и других нот, которые ты так замапал тоже переделал)
[Easy]
00:08:908 (3) - Ну не. Не надо делать трость. Нормальный слайдер да,я исправил

диффа тутухары тоже правлена
Удачи!

Thank you for mod -Alcaida

Terton

134 posts

Joined August 2015

Terton 2018-01-05T20:11:08+00:00

[General]

Почему бы не увеличить качество бг?

[Easy]

00:10:995 (1) - Я бы предпочел поставить сюда именно ноту, обрати внимание на звук
00:21:430 (3,4) - Не стоит ставить слайдеры так высоко, на небольших мониторах у 4 слайдера обрезается апроч серкл сверху

[tutuhara's Hard]

00:19:343-00:35:517 - А можно сделать эту часть проще? Как минимум 00:23:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1). Эта часть выглядит очень сыро, рекомендую ремапнуть

tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2018-01-05T20:12:30+00:00

Terton wrote:
[General]
Почему бы не увеличить качество бг?

[tutuhara's Hard]
00:19:343-00:35:517 - А можно сделать эту часть проще? Как минимум 00:23:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1). Эта часть выглядит очень сыро, рекомендую ремапнуть

Соре без изменений

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-01-05T20:24:15+00:00

tutuhara wrote:
Соре без изменений

Почему бы всё таки не пересмотреть эту часть,ибо реально надо что-то поменять,так как я тоже считаю что надо бы доработать твою диффу до perfect!
Я не говорю что она плоха,нет,она отличная,но всё же если тебе говорят пересмотреть,хоть даже это какой то нонейм или топ маппер,к каждому мнению надо прислушиваться. Объясни почему,а не просто "Соре без изменений". >.>

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Gordon123

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Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-01-05T20:33:35+00:00

Terton wrote:
[General]
Почему бы не увеличить качество бг? аригато
[Easy]
00:10:995 (1) - Я бы предпочел поставить сюда именно ноту, обрати внимание на звук ты прав
00:21:430 (3,4) - Не стоит ставить слайдеры так высоко, на небольших мониторах у 4 слайдера обрезается апроч серкл сверху не знал,исправлено)

Thanks for mod bro Terton

Daycore

918 posts

Joined January 2015

Daycore 2018-01-06T10:42:01+00:00

M4M ~ map here

Easy

00:03:691 (2,3) - я рекомендую убрать ревёрс со второго слайдера, иначе третий вообще будет убого звучать. ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9943180
00:06:821 (1,2) - сделай так, чтобы эти слайдеры были ровные, а то смотрится не очень.
00:12:561 (3) - поставь сюда лучше нк, чтобы выглядело лучше
00:13:082 (4,5) - как я уже сказал чуть выше, лучше сделай их, чтобы они были ровными. просто ктрл+с и ктрл+v и ставишь слайдер ровно (я надеюсь, ты поймёшь, что я имею в виду. если не поймёшь, пм)
00:33:952 (3) - 1. Нк сюда. 2. Не знаю, лично для меня слайдер выглядит отвратительно. Я бы на твоём месте исправил (не заставляю, просто мне не нравится)

Space's Normal

00:05:256 (5) - Нк сюда.
00:09:430 (5) - ^
00:13:604 (6) - ^^
00:38:648 (5) - ^^^
00:42:821 (5) - ^^^^
00:46:474 (5) - ^^^^^
00:51:821 (1) - спиннер появляется слишком рано, так что, я думаю, новичок может запутаться и не понять, что нужно делать первым; нажимать или крутить
/// диффа хорошая, в постройке проблем не нашёл, но вот с нк чуваку нужно поучиться.

Advanced

00:18:300 (3,2) - не очень приятный оверлап. думаю, стоит найти другую позицию для слайдера
00:30:821 (3) - мне кажется, лучше сюда нк поставить
00:50:387 (4,3) - снова оверлап. лучше стакни и поставь нк на ласт ноту.

tutuhara's Hard

Самое сладкое. Самый оверлапповый маппер в России.
~~~
00:02:648 (1,1) - оверлап
00:06:821 (1,1) - оверлап: в чём была проблема просто скопировать первый слайдер и поставить его ещё раз, только под CTRL+G
00:07:865 (3,4) - хоть и трудно заметный оверлап, но в чём была проблема стакнуть?
00:11:778 (2,2) - этот оверлап меня триггерит

00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sir, а вы не думаете, что такое - это пиздец для хардика? Чуваку, который играет харды даже прочитать это будет трудно. ремаппай этот парт.
00:23:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - как говорится, УХ БЛЯ. кхм, ты серьёзно делаешь такие паттерны на, почти, одинаковом звуке? К тому же,в чём трабл добавить пару слайдеров, как было в предыдущих диффах? Тут онли одни ноты и очень трудные паттерны для хардика, а учитывая то, кто их играет, он вообще даже эту диффу наверняка не пасснет.
00:27:169 (3,1) - и вот как ты хочешь, чтобы хард-плеер это прочитал? да он просрётся здесь знатно, хотя тутахара уже просрался и высрал это.
00:27:691 (1,2,3,4) - очень неудобный треугольник и ещё: 00:27:169 (1,2,4) - че по спейсингу, братан?))
00:29:778 (1,2,3,4) - я не понимаю. ты копипастишь одни и те же паттерны и просто их переворачиваешь? выше читай.
00:34:995 (3) - зачем такой странный слайдер тут?
00:39:169 (4) - нк сюда
00:42:300 (1) - такие слайдеры всегда выглядят стрёмно. именно такие, вертикальные, типа этого.
00:43:343 (3,1) - оверлап.
00:48:561 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - тутухара рофлирует над паттернами, я понял. либо он реально маппать не умеет и ничего не знает про стаки, оверлапы и спейсинг (основываясь на звуке, естественно), либо просто угарает маппингом.
00:51:691 (3) - доведи этот слайдер до 00:52:213 (1) - а спиннер поставь чуть дальше.

Gordon123

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Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-01-06T12:26:01+00:00

Daycore wrote:
M4M ~ map here

Easy
00:03:691 (2,3) - я рекомендую убрать ревёрс со второго слайдера, иначе третий вообще будет убого звучать. ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9943180 ладно,я убрал реверс,но всё же я не поменял место (3) ибо не считаю что так надо ~~
00:06:821 (1,2) - сделай так, чтобы эти слайдеры были ровные, а то смотрится не очень. хорошо
00:12:561 (3) - поставь сюда лучше нк, чтобы выглядело лучше какой смысл? тут не такой уж и сильный удар что бы ставить нк
00:13:082 (4,5) - как я уже сказал чуть выше, лучше сделай их, чтобы они были ровными. просто ктрл+с и ктрл+v и ставишь слайдер ровно (я надеюсь, ты поймёшь, что я имею в виду. если не поймёшь, пм) хоть они и были ровными,но ладно!
00:33:952 (3) - 1. Нк сюда. 2. Не знаю, лично для меня слайдер выглядит отвратительно. Я бы на твоём месте исправил (не заставляю, просто мне не нравится) не,я не хочу оставлять "обрубок" из 2 комбо

Advanced
00:18:300 (3,2) - не очень приятный оверлап. думаю, стоит найти другую позицию для слайдера не особо понимаю почему оверлап,да! но я поменял кое что
00:30:821 (3) - мне кажется, лучше сюда нк поставить не
00:50:387 (4,3) - снова оверлап. лучше стакни и поставь нк на ласт ноту. нк-нет,но вот со стаком идея хорошая!

Thanks for mod Daycore

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2018-02-01T06:35:17+00:00

Daycore wrote:
00:05:256 (5) - Нк сюда. да
00:09:430 (5) - ^ ^
00:13:604 (6) - ^^ ^
00:38:648 (5) - ^^^ ^
00:42:821 (5) - ^^^^ ^
00:46:474 (5) - ^^^^^ ^
00:51:821 (1) - спиннер появляется слишком рано, так что, я думаю, новичок может запутаться и не понять, что нужно делать первым; нажимать или крутить спиннер исправлен
/// диффа хорошая, в постройке проблем не нашёл, но вот с нк чуваку нужно поучиться.

Спасибо за мод

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Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-02-03T18:54:10+00:00

lol -Space- is russian xD

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

Joined October 2010

mancuso_JM_ 2018-02-05T02:45:50+00:00

Hi Gordon! It looks like you did quite a lot of changes in this set, so I'll remod it c:. As per your request in my queue!

[Easy]

00:17:256 (4,5) - Would be better if you change a bit the rhythm here to don't have a long section of 1/1 objects, I do agree that the kiai section is really repetitive in terms of rhythm but you can add some variety here. I tried a 2/1 slider + note instead, I think you should give it a try.
00:21:430 (3,4) - 1/1 patterns become really repetitive, in general my recommendations in this difficulty are following that. I think you have enough rhythm to use a 3/2 slider here to give new players other experience.
00:24:039 (2,5) - It won't be really noticeable during the gameplay but maybe you'd like to snap them properly.
00:27:691 (1,2,3) - I think you can try a 3/2 slider here as well, as I recommended you in 00:21:430 (3,4) - instead of a full 1/1 pattern.
00:31:865 (1,2) - Listening to the music, I think you can use a 2/1 slider + a single note as I mentioned before, all these changes are to make the difficulty more enjoyable and not that much monotonus. When I testplayed the map, I feel bored in this point, and this is not the idea.
00:50:648 (3) - This slider can flow better with the previous note by rotating it a bit more and maybe using a ctrl+g on it. I'll give you a screenshot and a code in case you want to use my idea.
Image + Code
```
380,155,50648,2,0,P|304:95|209:112,1,200,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

- Aesthetically looks perfect to me, but rhythmically it lacks on creativity as you can see in my mod, we generally try to give good experiences to new players in that kind of difficulties and almost a full 1/1 difficulty doesn't provide anything interesting because if you copy/paste this difficulty in other song with the same BPM will probably works too. If you try to change these aspects, this difficulty will become "unique" because you'll take advantage of all rhythms in the song.

[Space's Normal]

00:17:256 (5,6,7) - You can perfectly improve this blanketing by rearranging a bit more these sliders. Just in case, I'll give you an image and a code showing you my idea.
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```
00:19:343 ~ 00:35:517 - I highly recommend you to reduce a bit the density in this section, yeah, this is not really hard for a Normal due the low BPM but the rhythm you used here is basically the same used in Advanced. If you keep this as it is, the spread won't be the best and the addition of an "Advanced" is not really justified. I suppose you can use a bit more 1/1 sliders instead of some constant 1/2 and leave some rest times here and there, I'm not going to suggest you what you have to do in each part because I think you can take care of it by yourself. In case you need some additional suggestion in term of rhythm, feel free to ask me.
00:42:821 (5) - This is not the worst thing in the world xD, but I want to mention it hehe. I'd like to see this slider curved for better looking, what do you think? Is not impossible to do it hehe.
00:51:691 (8,1) - This note is not providing you the effect that you wanted to see here in my opinion, because the sound that you want to cover with the spinner starts in (8) and having a spinner 1/2 later is not the best thing. To don't make this "difficult", I'd just remove the note and move the spinner 1/2 back (if you do so, make sure to make it longer by 1/2 too).

- I like the structure of this difficulty. Neverthless, I'd like to see this kiai density reduced.

[Advanced]

00:04:734 (1,3) - Try moving (3) some grids down (around x:304 y:144) to avoid a weird overlap with (3). It's not that big but if we can fix that kind of things is better.
00:05:778 (3,4) - 00:39:169 (3,4) - In both patterns, try to use a 1/1 slider instead of single notes. If you listen properly to the music, a long vocal section appear here that it's completely different to 00:03:691 (3,4) - & 00:37:082 (3,4) - that's why I recommend you to map them in a different way.
00:18:300 (3,4) - Basically the same I suggested you in my previous point. I'm putting in other line because this part of the music is not the same if you compare it with the previous ones.
00:36:039 (1,2) - This pattern can be improved in terms of flow and aesthetic, this doesn't look as neat as 00:09:952 (3,4) - for example. I'd like to see a similar pattern, as you can see in this screenshot instead.

- Nice c:. I don't have anything major to point out here.

[tutuhara's Hard]

00:08:387 (4,1) - vs. 00:10:213 (4,1) - I have to say you should reconsider these patterns, in my opinion the jump in the second pattern should be higher than the one you used in the first one because in the first only vocals are acting and in the second are acting vocals + bells sound in the instrumental. Even so, I think both patterns deserved a little spacing increase, but makes more sense if you do that as I told you.
00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Linear and square patterns, this reminds me ooooold maps . If you rotate a bit this pattern (maybe 20 clockwise degrees or something like that) you can make this pattern more enjoyable visually. Btw, you can keep a little jump between 00:18:039 (4,5) - because the music represent that.
00:24:039 (2,1) - The jump between these objects feel excessive, you decided to do that for symetry and it's not the best way. Try other pattern instead, to reduce that, maybe replacing the objects position between 00:24:300 (1,2) -
00:27:170 (4,1) - Looking to your patterns, you can increase the spacing between these objects to emphasize vocals/bells.
00:28:734 (3,1) - And the spacing between these is excessive too, symetry stuff once again. Try reducing it, I'm sure you can represent the song much better.
00:34:995 (1,1) - After the constant spacing increases that you had in the chorus, these objects feel so close, try increasing them a bit more please. In addition, I don't think the New combo in 00:34:995 (1) - is really necessary, you didn't do so in 00:18:300 (5) - for example. Would you mind removing it?
00:38:126 (1,2) - Use the distance snap between these objects, the music goes in a same pitch as 00:02:648 (1,2) - and I think this way is more correct.

- The main problem in this difficulty is the spacing, especially in the kiai section. I tried to mention all of them to make it better in this aspect. In addition I see you have a mod you've not answered yet, make sure to complete it so I can check this once again (because I don't understand a single word of russian ). Even so, I think this difficulty have improved quite a lot after a year.

That's all!
I think that some stuff can be improved here but I would like to give you a chance because those things can be corrected with mods. My main problem in this set are those spacing in Hard, the density thing in Normal and the monotonus 1/1 in Easy.
You can contact me again after receiving some more mods (2~3).
Till then, Good luck!

PD: If you have a metadata source I'd like to see it somewhere.

tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2018-02-06T01:31:11+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi Gordon! It looks like you did quite a lot of changes in this set, so I'll remod it c:. As per your request in my queue!

[tutuhara's Hard]

00:08:387 (4,1) - vs. 00:10:213 (4,1) - I have to say you should reconsider these patterns, in my opinion the jump in the second pattern should be higher than the one you used in the first one because in the first only vocals are acting and in the second are acting vocals + bells sound in the instrumental. Even so, I think both patterns deserved a little spacing increase, but makes more sense if you do that as I told you. - remap
00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Linear and square patterns, this reminds me ooooold maps . If you rotate a bit this pattern (maybe 20 clockwise degrees or something like that) you can make this pattern more enjoyable visually. Btw, you can keep a little jump between 00:18:039 (4,5) - because the music represent that. - remap ) oWo Thansk
00:24:039 (2,1) - The jump between these objects feel excessive, you decided to do that for symetry and it's not the best way. Try other pattern instead, to reduce that, maybe replacing the objects position between 00:24:300 (1,2) - - fixed
00:27:170 (4,1) - Looking to your patterns, you can increase the spacing between these objects to emphasize vocals/bells. - yess ! ) Thanks
00:28:734 (3,1) - And the spacing between these is excessive too, symetry stuff once again. Try reducing it, I'm sure you can represent the song much better. - ok
00:34:995 (1,1) - After the constant spacing increases that you had in the chorus, these objects feel so close, try increasing them a bit more please. In addition, I don't think the New combo in 00:34:995 (1) - is really necessary, you didn't do so in 00:18:300 (5) - for example. Would you mind removing it? - fixed
00:38:126 (1,2) - Use the distance snap between these objects, the music goes in a same pitch as 00:02:648 (1,2) - and I think this way is more correct.
-really )) Thaksu
- The main problem in this difficulty is the spacing, especially in the kiai section. I tried to mention all of them to make it better in this aspect. In addition I see you have a mod you've not answered yet, make sure to complete it so I can check this once again (because I don't understand a single word of russian ). Even so, I think this difficulty have improved quite a lot after a year.

That's all!
I think that some stuff can be improved here but I would like to give you a chance because those things can be corrected with mods. My main problem in this set are those spacing in Hard, the density thing in Normal and the monotonus 1/1 in Easy.
You can contact me again after receiving some more mods (2~3).
Till then, Good luck!

PD: If you have a metadata source I'd like to see it somewhere.

Thanks Broo )

In addition I see you have a mod you've not answered yet, make sure to complete it so I can check this once again

im answer he mod - remap all kiai time )
and Good luck u )

Gordon - code

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Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-02-06T17:17:01+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi Gordon! It looks like you did quite a lot of changes in this set, so I'll remod it c:. As per your request in my queue! hey bro ,nice to see u here again ;3

[Easy]
00:17:256 (4,5) - Would be better if you change a bit the rhythm here to don't have a long section of 1/1 objects, I do agree that the kiai section is really repetitive in terms of rhythm but you can add some variety here. I tried a 2/1 slider + note instead, I think you should give it a try. not really,i dont feel that sry,but i remap this place add same slider how 00:08:908 (3) - + add circle after this
00:21:430 (3,4) - 1/1 patterns become really repetitive, in general my recommendations in this difficulty are following that. I think you have enough rhythm to use a 3/2 slider here to give new players other experience. okee~
00:24:039 (2,5) - It won't be really noticeable during the gameplay but maybe you'd like to snap them properly. fixed i think
00:27:691 (1,2,3) - I think you can try a 3/2 slider here as well, as I recommended you in 00:21:430 (3,4) - instead of a full 1/1 pattern. ok
00:31:865 (1,2) - Listening to the music, I think you can use a 2/1 slider + a single note as I mentioned before, all these changes are to make the difficulty more enjoyable and not that much monotonus. When I testplayed the map, I feel bored in this point, and this is not the idea. yup
00:50:648 (3) - This slider can flow better with the previous note by rotating it a bit more and maybe using a ctrl+g on it. I'll give you a screenshot and a code in case you want to use my idea. u're right, added
Image + Code
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- Aesthetically looks perfect to me, but rhythmically it lacks on creativity as you can see in my mod, we generally try to give good experiences to new players in that kind of difficulties and almost a full 1/1 difficulty doesn't provide anything interesting because if you copy/paste this difficulty in other song with the same BPM will probably works too. If you try to change these aspects, this difficulty will become "unique" because you'll take advantage of all rhythms in the song. O:

[Advanced]

00:04:734 (1,3) - Try moving (3) some grids down (around x:304 y:144) to avoid a weird overlap with (3). It's not that big but if we can fix that kind of things is better. sure
00:05:778 (3,4) - 00:39:169 (3,4) - In both patterns, try to use a 1/1 slider instead of single notes. If you listen properly to the music, a long vocal section appear here that it's completely different to 00:03:691 (3,4) - & 00:37:082 (3,4) - that's why I recommend you to map them in a different way. this is contrary to your first point,but ok,added two sliders
00:18:300 (3,4) - Basically the same I suggested you in my previous point. I'm putting in other line because this part of the music is not the same if you compare it with the previous ones. here i add slider
00:36:039 (1,2) - This pattern can be improved in terms of flow and aesthetic, this doesn't look as neat as 00:09:952 (3,4) - for example. I'd like to see a similar pattern, as you can see in this screenshot instead. fixed
- Nice c:. I don't have anything major to point out here. www

That's all!
I think that some stuff can be improved here but I would like to give you a chance because those things can be corrected with mods. My main problem in this set are those spacing in Hard, the density thing in Normal and the monotonus 1/1 in Easy. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ><
You can contact me again after receiving some more mods (2~3). O:
Till then, Good luck! tytyty

PD: If you have a metadata source I'd like to see it somewhere.

Thank you bro mancuso_JM_ again

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-02-06T17:19:56+00:00

Metadata :

ByBy wrote:
Artist: Roses Epicurean
Romanised Artist: Roses Epicurean
Title: 夜の子供たち
Romanised Title: Yoru no Kodomo tachi
Proof: http://hatukiyura.sakura.ne.jp/seidouwa/index.html
Roses Epicurean is the circle and Hatsuki Yura is the vocalist so, the circle must be clasified as the main artist. Don't forget to add 葉月ゆら and Hatsuki Yura to tags.

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2018-02-07T18:59:28+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
[Space's Normal]
00:17:256 (5,6,7) - You can perfectly improve this blanketing by rearranging a bit more these sliders. Just in case, I'll give you an image and a code showing you my idea.
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I manually rotated and reshaped the slider, I want to keep the angle because of the way I position notes in clusters.
00:19:343 ~ 00:35:517 - I highly recommend you to reduce a bit the density in this section, yeah, this is not really hard for a Normal due the low BPM but the rhythm you used here is basically the same used in Advanced. If you keep this as it is, the spread won't be the best and the addition of an "Advanced" is not really justified. I suppose you can use a bit more 1/1 sliders instead of some constant 1/2 and leave some rest times here and there, I'm not going to suggest you what you have to do in each part because I think you can take care of it by yourself. In case you need some additional suggestion in term of rhythm, feel free to ask me. I see the similarity but I don't want to change the rhythm because if I do so I won't be following the same rhythm as I am for the rest of the map. I respected the fact it was a normal by using more 1/1 sliders and using reverse sliders instead of constant 1/2
00:42:821 (5) - This is not the worst thing in the world xD, but I want to mention it hehe. I'd like to see this slidercurved for better looking, what do you think? Is not impossible to do it hehe. Roger that
00:51:691 (8,1) - This note is not providing you the effect that you wanted to see here in my opinion, because the sound that you want to cover with the spinner starts in (8) and having a spinner 1/2 later is not the best thing. To don't make this "difficult", I'd just remove the note and move the spinner 1/2 back (if you do so, make sure to make it longer by 1/2 too). Done
- I like the structure of this difficulty. Neverthless, I'd like to see this kiai density reduced.

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Axhina

43 posts

Joined March 2015

Axhina 2018-02-10T13:22:36+00:00

ellu

Space's Normal
00:08:908 (4) - maybe nc to keep consistency

tutu's Hard>

00:10:995 (1) - this is kinda big spacing for just 1/4
00:34:995 (1) - don't understand why this spaced so high out there's no sb or anythin and shouldn't be nced cause it follows the same vocal line as the 2 sliders before

gl with the map! o/

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2018-02-11T09:24:36+00:00

Seulgij wrote:
ellu

Space's Normal
00:08:908 (4) - maybe nc to keep consistency It would do the opposite here, since I put a NC on every other downbeat this would be odd.

Thanks for checking!

I also changed a hitsound because I used the wrong sampleset:

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tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2018-02-11T22:08:52+00:00

Seulgij wrote:
ellu

tutu's Hard>

00:10:995 (1) - this is kinda big spacing for just 1/4 - fix Thanks
00:34:995 (1) - don't understand why this spaced so high out there's no sb or anythin and shouldn't be nced cause it follows the same vocal line as the 2 sliders before - not fix

gl with the map! o/

Thanks for mod)

diff

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hypercyte

Elite Mapper

741 posts

Joined October 2016

hypercyte 2018-02-22T22:01:11+00:00

hi from #modreqs o/
I made unrankable issues in bold.

General

drum-hitwhistle.wav is 92ms which is too short, minimum length of every .wav file must be 100ms according to ranking criteria.

Also drum-whistle.wav has a too long starting delay of 18ms, where ranking criteria says it must be below 5ms so it doesn't sound mistimed while playing.

Also a not very important point but maybe get a higher resolution bg since you can go upto 1920x1200 and it'd just ma3ke it look nicer.

Advanced and below

Solid diffs, couldn't make any suggestions and no major issues found.

tutuhara's Hard

00:17:778 (3,5) - I don't like how the slider is touching the slider like that because it looks messy imo. The pattern looks a lot nicer like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/yYBrK5cS
(00:19:343 (1,2) - You can then adjust these two sliders to stack back)

00:28:734 (3) - Having a different number of reverses may break expectation for someone playing at this difficulty level tbh. I'd change to just 1 reverse with a hitcircle like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/zGkaUCaU. I'd also stack the new hitcircle to the end of the reverse slider like this screenshot

00:29:778 (1) - Same for this ^

---

That's all from me, good luck!
Pls fix the unrankable issues I mentioned in the beginning!

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2018-03-02T18:06:33+00:00

http://puu.sh/zz6rs/dd48291a26.mp3

Fixed hitsound above.

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-03-02T18:13:50+00:00

-Space- wrote:
http://puu.sh/zz6rs/dd48291a26.mp3

Fixed hitsound above.

thank you

ShinodaYuu

631 posts

Joined May 2016

ShinodaYuu 2018-03-18T18:52:18+00:00

Hi, returning m4m
[Easy]
00:20:387 (3,4) - I'm sure you can imrove this "blanket" https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10504119
00:21:430 (4) - Having sliderend on red tick here feels weird as it supports only vocals. I suggest making 2 sliders or your own idea
00:24:039 (2) - Little too clsoe to each other
00:27:691 (1) - Same as before

[Normal]
00:02:648 (1,3) - Fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10504146
00:09:952 (6) - Such a curved slider doesn't look good
00:11:517 (2,3,4) - Make spacing between them same
00:18:300 (7) - CTRL G for better flow and to be more like 00:15:169 (1,2,3) -
00:19:604 - Why did you left it not filled, they aren't different from 00:20:126 (2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:22:734 - ^
00:24:821 - ^ and so on
00:26:648 (3) - NC
00:37:082 (3) - Doesn't look good

[Advanced]
00:16:995 (4,2) - Little too close to each other
00:23:778 - Why didn't you fill it?
00:27:952 - ^
00:34:213 - ^
00:45:430 (3,4) - Fix blankets

Good luck

tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2018-03-19T14:12:48+00:00

hypercyte wrote:
hi from #modreqs o/

tutuhara's Hard

00:17:778 (3,5) - I don't like how the slider is touching the slider like that because it looks messy imo. The pattern looks a lot nicer like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/yYBrK5cS -Fixed oWo
(00:19:343 (1,2) - You can then adjust these two sliders to stack back) - dont fixed

00:28:734 (3) - Having a different number of reverses may break expectation for someone playing at this difficulty level tbh. I'd change to just 1 reverse with a hitcircle like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/zGkaUCaU. I'd also stack the new hitcircle to the end of the reverse slider like this -
last diff dont fixed sorryscreenshot

00:29:778 (1) - Same for this ^

---

That's all from me, good luck!
Pls fix the unrankable issues I mentioned in the beginning!

\

Thanksu

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TitleUnicode:夜の子供たち
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Version:tutuhara's Hard
Source:
Tags:Hatsuki Yura 葉月ゆら 闇童話工房 バラエピキュリアン -Space- tutuhara
BeatmapID:1005949
BeatmapSetID:439731

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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:6.2
ApproachRate:7.4
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Gordon123 2018-03-19T16:50:54+00:00

Milar001 wrote:
Hi, returning m4m
[Easy]
00:20:387 (3,4) - I'm sure you can imrove this "blanket" https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10504119 yep,fixed
00:21:430 (4) - Having sliderend on red tick here feels weird as it supports only vocals. I suggest making 2 sliders or your own idea this was done for a variety of diff
00:24:039 (2) - Little too clsoe to each other umhh idk,fixed
00:27:691 (1) - Same as before same too here

[Advanced]
00:16:995 (4,2) - Little too close to each other nah
00:23:778 - Why didn't you fill it? because it's not the most important sounds in the song, but also because I feel so lol
00:27:952 - ^ ^
00:34:213 - ^ ^
00:45:430 (3,4) - Fix blankets ok

Good luck

Thank you for mod Milar001

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2018-03-19T19:09:03+00:00

Milar001 wrote:
Hi, returning m4m

[Normal]
00:02:648 (1,3) - Fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10504146 fixed
00:09:952 (6) - Such a curved slider doesn't look good i like this as it makes a triangle
00:11:517 (2,3,4) - Make spacing between them same fixed
00:18:300 (7) - CTRL G for better flow and to be more like 00:15:169 (1,2,3) - i feel it works better like it is now
00:19:604 - Why did you left it not filled, they aren't different from 00:20:126 (2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:22:734 - ^
00:24:821 - ^ and so on adjusted slider shapes and orientation, i want more unconventional ways of expressing variation.
00:26:648 (3) - NC would be inconsistent with my combo methods
00:37:082 (3) - Doesn't look good i think it looks good

Good luck

Thanks for mod!

Diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36039
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Yoru no Kodomo tachi
TitleUnicode:夜の子供たち
Artist:Roses Epicurean
ArtistUnicode:Roses Epicurean
Creator:Gordon123
Version:Space's Normal
Source:
Tags:Hatsuki Yura 葉月ゆら 闇童話工房 バラエピキュリアン -Space- tutuhara
BeatmapID:1070112
BeatmapSetID:439731

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2018-03-21T18:06:04+00:00

[H]
most blankets need adjustments, if you dont want to blanket, then your patterns need adjustments to make people feel your patterns does not need blanket. most of your ideas are still symmetry based and blenket based no matter how you see it.
00:02:648 (1,2) - 00:04:734 (1,2) - what is the difference in music? better make them the same rhythm
00:06:561 (5,1) - blanket is off
00:07:604 (2,3) - should be 1.5x DS not 1.4x right?
00:07:604 (2,4) - blanket again
00:25:604 (1,2,3,4) - pattern is ... kinda off? better make a symmetrical pattern
[Adv]
00:27:169 (5,1,2) - try make them same spacing? like your did 00:23:517 (1,2,3) - and other places
[N]
ok, trun off your grid snap, they are useless in general unless you are making some patterns, and they will destroy your blankets and other patterns
00:12:561 (4,5) - DS is off
00:16:213 (3,4,5) - DS is off
00:17:256 (5,6,7) - equal spacing will look better
00:33:952 (1,2) - DS is off and etc
[E]
ok

tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2018-03-22T05:00:22+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
[H]
most blankets need adjustments, if you dont want to blanket, then your patterns need adjustments to make people feel your patterns does not need blanket. most of your ideas are still symmetry based and blenket based no matter how you see it. I do not have much blanket. What would you say with assurance that the whole structure consists of a blanket. If you look at them a little, and those that are corrected. And if the slider is bent there, so the lines of the circle only come in contact with the lines of the ends of the slider and not of the whole body. So I wanted to do so and this is my style. Thanks for the mod.
00:02:648 (1,2) - 00:04:734 (1,2) - what is the difference in music? better make them the same rhythm - there are absolutely different motives. In the first case, the lyrics are lingering. Therefore, a better long slider is better. In the second case, there is a short lyric moment, and two clearly defined voices for the circle.

00:06:561 (5,1) - blanket is off - fixed
00:07:604 (2,3) - should be 1.5x DS not 1.4x right? fixed the distance. There was a blanket there

00:07:604 (2,4) - blanket again fixed the distance. There was a blanket there

00:25:604 (1,2,3,4) - pattern is ... kinda off? better make a symmetrical pattern so the game works ctrl + H - fixed

Thanks

difaaaa

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Title:Yoru no Kodomo tachi
TitleUnicode:夜の子供たち
Artist:Roses Epicurean
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Creator:Gordon123
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Tags:Hatsuki Yura 葉月ゆら 闇童話工房 バラエピキュリアン -Space- tutuhara
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Gordon123

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Gordon123 2018-03-22T17:27:08+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
[Adv]
00:27:169 (5,1,2) - try make them same spacing? like your did 00:23:517 (1,2,3) - and other places fixed a bit

[E]
ok ok

Thanks for mod Shad0w1and

Solitaire

364 posts

Joined November 2014

Solitaire 2018-03-25T16:31:25+00:00

ewww v1

tutuhara's Hard

00:06:821 (1) - no emphasis
00:08:908 (1) - ^

00:10:995 (1) - jump is literally more than 2x the spacing of regular jumps - DONT DO THIS!!!

00:13:082 (1) - same sound as 00:08:908 (1) - but mapped differently

00:19:082 - unmapped sound

00:19:343 (1,2,3,4) - why are you breaking circular flow so much here?

00:24:300 (1) - why is the middle of the slider an important sound? Important sounds should be made clickable at this difficulty level.

00:27:691 (1) - fix blanket

00:28:734 (3) - a slider that looks exactly like the last one yet reverses 2 times rather than 1 is a no-no
00:30:821 (3) - ^

00:48:561 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why are you increasing spacing in this section? The music is not gaining intensity at all. Looks like an attempt at ez pp

00:51:691 (3) - replace with a circle and move the spinner back by 1/2 a beat

Conclusion: Pretty mediocre diff tbh, don't expect to rank without a remap

Advanced

00:04:734 (1) - fix aesthetics if it was unintentional or emphasize it more if it was intentional

00:11:778 (2,3) - sliders end on an important beat

00:13:865 (2) - middle of the slider in on an important beat
00:47:256 (2) - ^

00:23:778 - dont ignore vocals plz

00:52:213 (1) - start spinner at 00:51:821

Conclusion: Again, pretty mediocre diff.

Space's Normal

00:10:995 (1) - feels weird to map this sound with a circle. Maybe change this to a slider that ends on 00:11:517 (2) - and put a circle at 00:11:778 - ?

00:20:387 (3,4) - change this rhythm to two 1/2 beat sliders

00:46:474 (5,7) - slightly curved sliders dont fit with the aesthetics you use in the rest of the map

00:51:691 (1) - maybe map this sound with a circle and move the spinner accordingly?

Conclusion: Really solid diff (best of the set) but may need a few improvements

Easy

00:17:256 (4) - end slider at 00:18:300 and place a circle at 00:18:821
00:42:300 (3) - ^

00:21:430 (4) - yes there is a sound at the middle of this slider but since you've been following the vocals you should map it to that. If you do want to keep this, you would have to also map all other occurrences of this sound, such as 00:19:604 and 00:24:169. good luck with that.

00:42:300 (3) - fix aesthetics

00:52:213 (1) - start spinner at 00:51:821

Conclusion: Not too much to say since it's an easy, but it's ok

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