Hey, M4M
Good luck ^^
Easy
- 00:48:971 (2) - Add a whistle
- 00:55:967 (1) - You might as well remove the NC since it's a bit weird having one in less than a downbeat
Normal
- 00:25:549 (3,1) - I think you could unstack for better readability and emphasis
- 00:40:149 (2) - It's weird that you're ignoring the downbeat with the snapped brass with the slider when you seem to be focusing on that (There's the other ones if you agreed but I know this could be something you were trying to do)
Dash Hard
- 00:01:113 - I think you should map the beginning like the other diffs
- 00:12:064 (1,2) - I don't like the feeling of visually similiar spacing when the timing is different, reduce the spacing like 00:13:585 (1,2) -
- 00:17:235 (2,3) - Adjust to make it paralell
- 00:37:717 (3,4) - Seems jaunting to stop and ignore something that's pretty significant when you've been building up some flow
- 00:54:142 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you could map something more creative than this
Hard
- 00:12:064 (1,2) - Same as I said in Dash Hard
- 00:31:633 (4) - You could show a bit of a visual difference between the timing of the stacks like you did in Dash Hard with the stack leniency
- 00:59:313 (1,2,3) - Unstack these to emphasize the difference between the previous stack?
Insane
- 00:01:721 (2,1,2) - How come the spacing here is smaller than 00:03:242 (2,1,2) - when they're both the same?
- 00:12:368 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Just my opinion but I don't like the lack of emphasis here with the piano increasing in intensity, especially with the big jumps that follow after
Lunatic
- 00:01:518 (1,2,1) - Same as insane
Extra
- 00:02:735 (1) - imo looks ugly to have the sliderhead slightly overlapping the last slider
- 00:59:312 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think you should have the gap at 00:59:616 (4) - for the finish, like the previous one
Not a big fan of this diff but it's fine
Sco Gla
- 00:02:735 (1) - Same as Extra
- 00:25:448 (6) - You should move this up a little to separate it from the linear patterns you use for the slower jumps like 00:24:535 (2,3,4) -
- 00:44:307 - Add a note here for better flow? (stacked on 00:44:408 (3) - )
- 00:48:869 - ^
Good luck ^^