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General
-the clap hitsound is oddly fitting XD but you still could replace it with a drum custom
Sakura
00:12:904 (4) - add clap
00:09:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like how this stream plays, 00:10:051 (1) - is somewhat strong (i can hear it on 25% speed, but 100% not really) but not strong enough for such a sharp angle change imo. the spacing change from the first part of the stream (line) into the second part of the stream (pentagon) is also very large. i missed on this stream pattern both times it appeared :/
04:10:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i think this version of the stream ^ works better if you wanted a sharp angle change. the vocals here 04:11:355 (1) - are quite clear
00:18:774 - i hear something here, add circle?
00:21:138 - add finish?
00:21:953 (5) - 00:22:605 (2) - 00:23:258 (6) - 00:24:562 (5) - 00:25:214 (2) - 00:25:866 (6) - rhythm choice is ehhhh because the slider tails are all stronger in the music than the heads. these are only a few, but this repeats throughout the diff
00:31:410 (7,1) - could add a jump here for cymbal crash+vocals on 1
00:34:018 - why did you skip this vocal? its fairly strong imo
00:37:768 (4,1) - why did you decide to use this pattern? the only similarities i can hear are vocals+clap on the tails. 00:37:768 (4) - does not have additional hitsounds on the head, and the instruments drop out in the middle. 00:38:258 (1) - has whistle on the head, and the instruments dont drop out in the middle.
00:40:866 (1) - 00:41:518 (5) - ^ except theres even fewer similarities
00:43:312 - add circle? or 1/2 slider
00:45:268 (2,1,2) - these dont overlap but 00:46:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these do, make it consistent
00:45:595 - the piano thing also starts here, so i would shorten 00:45:268 (2) - to here. or to here 00:45:432 (to make all piano notes clickable)
00:56:682 (2) - 00:57:334 (4,5) - make these a line (tail2,4,5) for aesthetics? also visual spacing is inconsistent
00:58:801 (6,1) - could make a jump here for cymbal crash
01:00:105 (7) - remove finish, there isnt anything that strong here. you could put one here though 00:59:942
01:11:355 (4,6) - stack?
01:15:432 (6,1) - ^
01:16:573 (4,5) - this has higher spacing than 01:17:062 (6,1) - even though 5 barely has anything in the music while 1 has both cymbal crash and vocals, spacing of these pairs should be reversed
01:20:486 (3,4) - this is the smallest spacing in the kiai, space them out
01:23:258 (5,6,1) - spacing of 5-6 should be smaller than 6-1 not the other way around. 6 is barely audible.
01:41:355 (4) - could make this slider symmetrical, it looks a bit messy as is imo
01:50:160 - add clap
02:12:986 (5) - remove clap, add drum-finish
02:13:149 (6) - remove finish, sampleset auto
02:20:649 (6,7) - same as before, 7 doesnt really have anything on it but 6 does. remove finish on 7 and you can add one here 02:20:812.
02:21:464 - add clap
02:23:747 - add finish
02:38:747 (3,4) - smallest spacing in the kiai, space them out
03:05:649 (1) - 03:06:138 (3) - dont really agree with this pattern because 1 has the hihat on the tail, while 3 has the hihat on the head
03:13:149 (7,1) - add jump for cymbal crash+guitar?
03:18:040 (6,1) - fix stack
03:20:160 (2,3,4,5) - overlapping doesnt look good, you dont do it anywhere else in this section
03:46:247 (2) - dont like the rhythm choice, the piano on the slider tail is stronger than the head
04:50:486 - add finish?
05:06:627 (2) - would look cool if you put it in the center of the grid
04:55:703 - welp i had the feeling you copypasted at least one full section while playing and here they are 00:12:660 - 01:32:062. consistency is good, but the implementation isnt that great imo, like its so consistent to the point that it gets kinda boring. i also noticed quite a lot of similarities in the kiai sections. for example, 01:10:703 (1) - 02:28:964 (1) - 04:28:964 (1) - all have the same slider shape at the same angle. you can do more experimentation with angles
02:00:268 - 00:42:008 - back at it again with the copypaste
Good luck~
General
-the clap hitsound is oddly fitting XD but you still could replace it with a drum custom
Sakura
00:12:904 (4) - add clap
00:09:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like how this stream plays, 00:10:051 (1) - is somewhat strong (i can hear it on 25% speed, but 100% not really) but not strong enough for such a sharp angle change imo. the spacing change from the first part of the stream (line) into the second part of the stream (pentagon) is also very large. i missed on this stream pattern both times it appeared :/
04:10:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i think this version of the stream ^ works better if you wanted a sharp angle change. the vocals here 04:11:355 (1) - are quite clear
00:18:774 - i hear something here, add circle?
00:21:138 - add finish?
00:21:953 (5) - 00:22:605 (2) - 00:23:258 (6) - 00:24:562 (5) - 00:25:214 (2) - 00:25:866 (6) - rhythm choice is ehhhh because the slider tails are all stronger in the music than the heads. these are only a few, but this repeats throughout the diff
00:31:410 (7,1) - could add a jump here for cymbal crash+vocals on 1
00:34:018 - why did you skip this vocal? its fairly strong imo
00:37:768 (4,1) - why did you decide to use this pattern? the only similarities i can hear are vocals+clap on the tails. 00:37:768 (4) - does not have additional hitsounds on the head, and the instruments drop out in the middle. 00:38:258 (1) - has whistle on the head, and the instruments dont drop out in the middle.
00:40:866 (1) - 00:41:518 (5) - ^ except theres even fewer similarities
00:43:312 - add circle? or 1/2 slider
00:45:268 (2,1,2) - these dont overlap but 00:46:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these do, make it consistent
00:45:595 - the piano thing also starts here, so i would shorten 00:45:268 (2) - to here. or to here 00:45:432 (to make all piano notes clickable)
00:56:682 (2) - 00:57:334 (4,5) - make these a line (tail2,4,5) for aesthetics? also visual spacing is inconsistent
00:58:801 (6,1) - could make a jump here for cymbal crash
01:00:105 (7) - remove finish, there isnt anything that strong here. you could put one here though 00:59:942
01:11:355 (4,6) - stack?
01:15:432 (6,1) - ^
01:16:573 (4,5) - this has higher spacing than 01:17:062 (6,1) - even though 5 barely has anything in the music while 1 has both cymbal crash and vocals, spacing of these pairs should be reversed
01:20:486 (3,4) - this is the smallest spacing in the kiai, space them out
01:23:258 (5,6,1) - spacing of 5-6 should be smaller than 6-1 not the other way around. 6 is barely audible.
01:41:355 (4) - could make this slider symmetrical, it looks a bit messy as is imo
01:50:160 - add clap
02:12:986 (5) - remove clap, add drum-finish
02:13:149 (6) - remove finish, sampleset auto
02:20:649 (6,7) - same as before, 7 doesnt really have anything on it but 6 does. remove finish on 7 and you can add one here 02:20:812.
02:21:464 - add clap
02:23:747 - add finish
02:38:747 (3,4) - smallest spacing in the kiai, space them out
03:05:649 (1) - 03:06:138 (3) - dont really agree with this pattern because 1 has the hihat on the tail, while 3 has the hihat on the head
03:13:149 (7,1) - add jump for cymbal crash+guitar?
03:18:040 (6,1) - fix stack
03:20:160 (2,3,4,5) - overlapping doesnt look good, you dont do it anywhere else in this section
03:46:247 (2) - dont like the rhythm choice, the piano on the slider tail is stronger than the head
04:50:486 - add finish?
05:06:627 (2) - would look cool if you put it in the center of the grid
04:55:703 - welp i had the feeling you copypasted at least one full section while playing and here they are 00:12:660 - 01:32:062. consistency is good, but the implementation isnt that great imo, like its so consistent to the point that it gets kinda boring. i also noticed quite a lot of similarities in the kiai sections. for example, 01:10:703 (1) - 02:28:964 (1) - 04:28:964 (1) - all have the same slider shape at the same angle. you can do more experimentation with angles
02:00:268 - 00:42:008 - back at it again with the copypaste
Good luck~