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Rebecca Kneubuhl & Gabriel Mann - Guide You Home
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Here is my guest difficulty.
If there is something you like to change tell me so I can tell what I think. If you don't like hitsounds feel free to change them, I just used hitsounds that sounds good for me.
Download: Rebecca Kneubuhl & Gabriel Mann - Guide You Home (I Would Die For You) (DragonSparta) [TraceTheKriken's Normal].osu
If there is something you like to change tell me so I can tell what I think. If you don't like hitsounds feel free to change them, I just used hitsounds that sounds good for me.
Download: Rebecca Kneubuhl & Gabriel Mann - Guide You Home (I Would Die For You) (DragonSparta) [TraceTheKriken's Normal].osu
Sorry this is a nazi mod >w<
The music's volume is soo loow and poor D:, or is it naturally like that? >.<
Insane
*Also the beginning of this map should be slow cause imho, its very very quiet. Its hard to catch up beat or rhythm
*03:08:445 - this part is the climax of the song >.< why is it in soft hitsounds??? but its up to you though.
Ok that's it for insane. The double speed is fuunn :3
Hard
um.
*00:43:320 (2) - try pressing ctrl + H, u'll see that 00:43:320 (2) - is not symmetrical with 00:42:195 (1) -
*then umm same with 00:44:070 (4,1) -
vice versa...
*just like what i said in Insane about the climax part. think about it
TraceTheKriken's Normal
very nice normal >w<
Those are just my opinion about ur map!
Good luck!
The music's volume is soo loow and poor D:, or is it naturally like that? >.<
Insane
*Also the beginning of this map should be slow cause imho, its very very quiet. Its hard to catch up beat or rhythm
*03:08:445 - this part is the climax of the song >.< why is it in soft hitsounds??? but its up to you though.
Ok that's it for insane. The double speed is fuunn :3
Hard
um.
*00:43:320 (2) - try pressing ctrl + H, u'll see that 00:43:320 (2) - is not symmetrical with 00:42:195 (1) -
*then umm same with 00:44:070 (4,1) -
vice versa...
*just like what i said in Insane about the climax part. think about it
TraceTheKriken's Normal
very nice normal >w<
Those are just my opinion about ur map!
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Flute, you S-ed my beatmap in one go!
nice map
GL
GL
Pretty epic-sounding song.
Easy:
Other difficulties switch to Normal hitsounds about a minute in. Why doesn't this one?
00:23:070 (1,2,3,4): Take the whistle off at least one of these, otherwise it gets repetitive.
00:30:945 (4): Add a finish?
00:46:695 (4): Make a new combo.
Normal:
02:00:945 (7): Don't stack this on top of the previous 3, it's confusing.
Hard:
00:39:945 (1): Add a finish?
01:38:070 (6,7,8): Stacking really close beats like this seems more suited for an Insane difficulty. There are also other instances of this throughout this difficulty.
01:42:945 (10): Add a finish to the top end?
01:55:320 (7): Don't stack this on top of the previous 3, it's confusing.
02:26:070 (1,2,3,4,5): These shouldn't be put so close to each other, it will make players click them sooner than they should.
Insane:
00:21:195 (7): Finish at the end of the slider?
Starred.
Easy:
Other difficulties switch to Normal hitsounds about a minute in. Why doesn't this one?
00:23:070 (1,2,3,4): Take the whistle off at least one of these, otherwise it gets repetitive.
00:30:945 (4): Add a finish?
00:46:695 (4): Make a new combo.
Normal:
02:00:945 (7): Don't stack this on top of the previous 3, it's confusing.
Hard:
00:39:945 (1): Add a finish?
01:38:070 (6,7,8): Stacking really close beats like this seems more suited for an Insane difficulty. There are also other instances of this throughout this difficulty.
01:42:945 (10): Add a finish to the top end?
01:55:320 (7): Don't stack this on top of the previous 3, it's confusing.
02:26:070 (1,2,3,4,5): These shouldn't be put so close to each other, it will make players click them sooner than they should.
Insane:
00:21:195 (7): Finish at the end of the slider?
Starred.
INSANE:
Song:
I Find it so different from normally osu song, and that's why i like this "shit" <3
Notes:
00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap, maybe try to have a different distance or position, " for me" it's not so good
03:38:820 (1,2,3) - ^
03:56:070 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Storyboard:
01:59:820 (1) - You'd better to type "Slow" as storyboard, because a player normally remember the previous modification x2 and then will do that, so explain as well as you've done in the other part of the song
02:05:820 (1) - No SB here, maybe you're tired XD
02:48:570 (1) - What about this flashing "time x0.5" a lot of time before? xD
Anyways, this is a good work, hope will me a masterpiece ;D Star'D ~
Song:
I Find it so different from normally osu song, and that's why i like this "shit" <3
Notes:
00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap, maybe try to have a different distance or position, " for me" it's not so good
03:38:820 (1,2,3) - ^
03:56:070 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Storyboard:
01:59:820 (1) - You'd better to type "Slow" as storyboard, because a player normally remember the previous modification x2 and then will do that, so explain as well as you've done in the other part of the song
02:05:820 (1) - No SB here, maybe you're tired XD
02:48:570 (1) - What about this flashing "time x0.5" a lot of time before? xD
Anyways, this is a good work, hope will me a masterpiece ;D Star'D ~
Hi~
Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- This song uses a 3/4 Time Signature, please change this D:
- Delete spyro down of the dragon from tags, since you already have this on source. You may want to delete "final song" too, I'm not sure of how accurate would this be when searching... xD
- I recommend to map all the diffs to the same length... =x
Skin:
- You should make custom score numbers or make the HP bar a bit smaller, it covers the first one =x http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40971
- As I already told you on IRC, red/yellow combination doesn't fit too much with the purple spyro bar, maybe use a brown/light yellow combination?
~Easy~
- Overall Difficulty -1?
- Use 1 Tickrate? I don't know, 2 feels a bit too much for me, just an opinion.
00:57:945 (1) - Allign with (2) to make the combo look better.
01:16:132 (1) - The endpoint of the spinner sounds weird... next point would be the next white tick, but that's too close of the next note... could you make something with this? >.<
01:31:320 (2) - Allign with (1) and (3) to make the combo look better.
01:38:632 (5) - Fix spacing here!
01:56:445 (1) - Woah this is definitely not good for an Easy =x Fix spacing here!
02:07:695 (2) - Allign with (1) and (3) to make the combo look better.
02:09:945 (4) - Allign with (3) to make the combo look better.
02:21:195 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
02:23:445 (1) - Same issue as the previous spinner I pointed out, it sounds weird >.<
~TraceTheKriken's Normal~
- Use the same colors as the other diffs?
- HP Drain -2? It's too high imo...
- Um... What's the reason to have 2.00 slider velocity if you have it halved during the whole map? ._. Use something around 1.20.
01:58:882 (2) - This note feels weird, also it isn't following anything on the song, maybe delete it?
02:01:132 (1) - Finish this spinner on the previous white tick.
02:56:820 (6) - Finish this slider on the red tick.
03:07:132 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is probably too long for being a Normal diff, maybe try replacing this by a repeating slider?
03:08:445 (1) - Copypasting the chorus once again here would be too much, try mapping something different!! (Though it's already different, but I think you should make something different from the first and second ones)
03:41:820 (1) - A 8 secs spinner is too long, make it smaller and map a bit more D:
03:56:070 (1) - Same here, but this one doesn't make sense while you have something pretty mappable on the music D:
~Hard~
- HP Drain +1-2? It's maybe too low...
- As a start, I'll say that I find the spacing too harsh here, specially when the spacing in Normal is pretty small, reduce it a bit? :/
00:32:820 (2) - Fix spacing here!
01:01:507 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make cleaner and well-alligned patterns, it will make your map look a lot better.
01:18:570 (1) - This jump is too harsh =(
01:34:695 (12) - Stack properly under (10).
01:37:695 (5) - Stack properly under (1)
02:05:820 (1) - The volume of the hitsounds in this section is too high, mind reducing it a bit? =x
02:14:538 (1) - This spinner is too short :/
02:26:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change feels a bit random imo oxo;
02:27:945 (1) - Finish this spinner at 02:31:320? The actual end is too close to the next note >:
02:39:195 (1) - I would say to fix the spacing here... the antijump is so evil ;_;
02:45:757 (5) - Stack properly under (2).
02:50:070 (2) - This volume change is too extreme, increase the volume a bit, maybe leave it like at the next section (02:50:070)?
02:58:695 (7,1,1) - Again, this is too harsh D:
03:17:538 (1) - Too short spinner, I would say this is even unrankable, but it reaches 2000 bonus on Autoplay...
03:23:163 (1) - ^
03:24:945 (x) - Missing note here?
03:42:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ... D:! What happened here ;x; it all goes hype...
04:02:445 (1) - Again, the volume here is too low and the change is too sudden =x
~Insane~
- No breaks? In a 4 minute song? D:!
- I would really leave the beginning unmapped, it's just making a rythm that doesn't exist on the song actually, so just start at the same point as the other diffs >:
- Personally, I don't think the 2x parts really fit the song, I see them more like "how to add difficulty to the map". If you really want a speed up at the choruses though, you can make a slight speed change like maybe... 1.30x-1.50x. Double is too much here.
00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Try to mantain the same spacing on the same combo. This spacing change is a bit out of place anyways >:
00:57:945 (7) - Volume is too high here >.<
01:16:038 (1) - End this spinner at 01:18:195.
01:39:570 (1) - Too harsh map imo, it's even more evil when you realize the spacing changes here too D:
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - Move this a 1/4 later (starting on red tick)
02:50:445 (1) - Volume is too slow here! >.<
03:41:257 (1) - Too short spinner =x
03:56:070 (1) - Again the sudden spacing change... =/
This needs a lot of improvement >_<, specially the hardest diffs. Easy and Normal are pretty nice, but then at Hard you start putting high spacings and jumps/streams that don't really fit the song and makes the map much harder than it should be. Insane is pretty overmapped too, most of the jumps or streams feel like you just wanted the map to be HARD and don't fit a calm and nice song like this >.<
Good luck with this!! >w</ The song is soooo beautiful, I loved it <3
Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- This song uses a 3/4 Time Signature, please change this D:
- Delete spyro down of the dragon from tags, since you already have this on source. You may want to delete "final song" too, I'm not sure of how accurate would this be when searching... xD
- I recommend to map all the diffs to the same length... =x
Skin:
- You should make custom score numbers or make the HP bar a bit smaller, it covers the first one =x http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40971
- As I already told you on IRC, red/yellow combination doesn't fit too much with the purple spyro bar, maybe use a brown/light yellow combination?
~Easy~
- Overall Difficulty -1?
- Use 1 Tickrate? I don't know, 2 feels a bit too much for me, just an opinion.
00:57:945 (1) - Allign with (2) to make the combo look better.
01:16:132 (1) - The endpoint of the spinner sounds weird... next point would be the next white tick, but that's too close of the next note... could you make something with this? >.<
01:31:320 (2) - Allign with (1) and (3) to make the combo look better.
01:38:632 (5) - Fix spacing here!
01:56:445 (1) - Woah this is definitely not good for an Easy =x Fix spacing here!
02:07:695 (2) - Allign with (1) and (3) to make the combo look better.
02:09:945 (4) - Allign with (3) to make the combo look better.
02:21:195 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
02:23:445 (1) - Same issue as the previous spinner I pointed out, it sounds weird >.<
~TraceTheKriken's Normal~
- Use the same colors as the other diffs?
- HP Drain -2? It's too high imo...
- Um... What's the reason to have 2.00 slider velocity if you have it halved during the whole map? ._. Use something around 1.20.
01:58:882 (2) - This note feels weird, also it isn't following anything on the song, maybe delete it?
02:01:132 (1) - Finish this spinner on the previous white tick.
02:56:820 (6) - Finish this slider on the red tick.
03:07:132 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is probably too long for being a Normal diff, maybe try replacing this by a repeating slider?
03:08:445 (1) - Copypasting the chorus once again here would be too much, try mapping something different!! (Though it's already different, but I think you should make something different from the first and second ones)
03:41:820 (1) - A 8 secs spinner is too long, make it smaller and map a bit more D:
03:56:070 (1) - Same here, but this one doesn't make sense while you have something pretty mappable on the music D:
~Hard~
- HP Drain +1-2? It's maybe too low...
- As a start, I'll say that I find the spacing too harsh here, specially when the spacing in Normal is pretty small, reduce it a bit? :/
00:32:820 (2) - Fix spacing here!
01:01:507 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make cleaner and well-alligned patterns, it will make your map look a lot better.
01:18:570 (1) - This jump is too harsh =(
01:34:695 (12) - Stack properly under (10).
01:37:695 (5) - Stack properly under (1)
02:05:820 (1) - The volume of the hitsounds in this section is too high, mind reducing it a bit? =x
02:14:538 (1) - This spinner is too short :/
02:26:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change feels a bit random imo oxo;
02:27:945 (1) - Finish this spinner at 02:31:320? The actual end is too close to the next note >:
02:39:195 (1) - I would say to fix the spacing here... the antijump is so evil ;_;
02:45:757 (5) - Stack properly under (2).
02:50:070 (2) - This volume change is too extreme, increase the volume a bit, maybe leave it like at the next section (02:50:070)?
02:58:695 (7,1,1) - Again, this is too harsh D:
03:17:538 (1) - Too short spinner, I would say this is even unrankable, but it reaches 2000 bonus on Autoplay...
03:23:163 (1) - ^
03:24:945 (x) - Missing note here?
03:42:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ... D:! What happened here ;x; it all goes hype...
04:02:445 (1) - Again, the volume here is too low and the change is too sudden =x
~Insane~
- No breaks? In a 4 minute song? D:!
- I would really leave the beginning unmapped, it's just making a rythm that doesn't exist on the song actually, so just start at the same point as the other diffs >:
- Personally, I don't think the 2x parts really fit the song, I see them more like "how to add difficulty to the map". If you really want a speed up at the choruses though, you can make a slight speed change like maybe... 1.30x-1.50x. Double is too much here.
00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Try to mantain the same spacing on the same combo. This spacing change is a bit out of place anyways >:
00:57:945 (7) - Volume is too high here >.<
01:16:038 (1) - End this spinner at 01:18:195.
01:39:570 (1) - Too harsh map imo, it's even more evil when you realize the spacing changes here too D:
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - Move this a 1/4 later (starting on red tick)
02:50:445 (1) - Volume is too slow here! >.<
03:41:257 (1) - Too short spinner =x
03:56:070 (1) - Again the sudden spacing change... =/
This needs a lot of improvement >_<, specially the hardest diffs. Easy and Normal are pretty nice, but then at Hard you start putting high spacings and jumps/streams that don't really fit the song and makes the map much harder than it should be. Insane is pretty overmapped too, most of the jumps or streams feel like you just wanted the map to be HARD and don't fit a calm and nice song like this >.<
Good luck with this!! >w</ The song is soooo beautiful, I loved it <3
^^ so nice!!! awww
i love juuuuumps and this map does it so take my star ~*!
i love juuuuumps and this map does it so
take my star ~*!Easy Hard Insane
3/4 beats
Insane
01:16:038 (1) - end spinner here
01:24:945 (7) - add finish and remove the green lines?
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - 1/4 rear
02:03:195 (1) - finish?
02:50:445 - volume too low :O
03:30:195 (2) - 3/4 :O?
03:50:445 (4) - ^
03:56:445 (2) - 1 tiny grid up
nice song and map
3/4 beats
Insane
01:16:038 (1) - end spinner here
01:24:945 (7) - add finish and remove the green lines?
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - 1/4 rear
02:03:195 (1) - finish?
02:50:445 - volume too low :O
03:30:195 (2) - 3/4 :O?
03:50:445 (4) - ^
nice song and map
Topic Starter
thanks for the quick modSprosive wrote:
Easy Hard Insane
3/4 beats
Insane
01:16:038 (1) - end spinner here
01:24:945 (7) - add finish and remove the green lines?
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - 1/4 rear
02:03:195 (1) - finish?
02:50:445 - volume too low :O
03:30:195 (2) - 3/4 :O?
03:50:445 (4) - ^03:56:445 (2) - 1 tiny grid up
nice song and map
Star :3
star :3
Wait...
Nevermind, just annoying osb file but deleted :3
Wait...
Nevermind, just annoying osb file but deleted :3
Error Mod
NoHItter eats pancake XD.jpg is 960x768. we advise 4:3 ratio for osu backgrounds, maybe fix this like 800x600 and 1024x768
average 128 mp3, its ok i guess but not great sounding >_>
Easy
00:32:070 (1,2,3) - spacing, these note all have the same timing so they should have the same spacing, please give them all the same spacing
only thing i would say about this diff is there is a LOT of ugly sliders
TraceTheKriken's Normal
Hard has lower HP drain than this Normal LOL lower it
ok this map has problems, tooo much focus on trying to get red timing rhythms over what suits the song
00:39:945 (1,2,3) - (2) in this combo feels very bad to play, either move (2) to 00:42:945 or put notes at 00:42:570 and 00:42:945
01:02:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2 spacings in this combo. why?
01:56:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - broken spacing,make sure all the note in this combo have the same spacing not loads of different ones
02:12:945 (5,6,7,8,9) - same here
02:56:445 (5,6) - same
03:33:570 (4) - end it at 03:34:695 then add a note at 03:34:882
03:40:320 (6) - new combo
03:56:070 (1,2) - space these out more to follow the rest of the combo
this map needs work, :/
Hard
00:26:445 (8,9) - this jump dont really suit, give it normal spacing
00:35:445 (9) - add finish hitsound?
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4) - same as the normal, mostly every note in the combo has a different spacing, please give it one since theres no need for so many spacings
01:17:632 (6) - move closer to (5)
01:54:195 (3) - new combo, breaking your pattern
01:55:695 (1) - remove new combo, above change makes this pointless
02:41:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part feels out of time to the music, i think what your following dont follow the overall tempo, thus this sounds totally weird when playing, it felt intime to me when i used a 1/8 tick, so yea :/
02:55:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad idea to give this the same spacing as the combo's before what was 1/2 when these are 1/1. i advise to widen the spacing abit here
02:59:070 (1) - put this notes spacing perfectly in the middle of the note before and after it, plays better
03:23:163 (1) - this spinner feels horrid to play since its "barely" rankable
03:24:945 - add a note here
Insane
Maybe think of lowering the HP drain 1, your choice though
01:09:945 (1,2,3) - timing wise this dont play good at all, like this is better
01:40:695 (4) - new combo
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - out of time, move these forward to start at 01:51:382
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lotta work left to do on these maps, but good luck
NoHItter eats pancake XD.jpg is 960x768. we advise 4:3 ratio for osu backgrounds, maybe fix this like 800x600 and 1024x768
average 128 mp3, its ok i guess but not great sounding >_>
Easy
00:32:070 (1,2,3) - spacing, these note all have the same timing so they should have the same spacing, please give them all the same spacing
only thing i would say about this diff is there is a LOT of ugly sliders
TraceTheKriken's Normal
Hard has lower HP drain than this Normal LOL lower it
ok this map has problems, tooo much focus on trying to get red timing rhythms over what suits the song
00:39:945 (1,2,3) - (2) in this combo feels very bad to play, either move (2) to 00:42:945 or put notes at 00:42:570 and 00:42:945
01:02:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2 spacings in this combo. why?
01:56:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - broken spacing,make sure all the note in this combo have the same spacing not loads of different ones
02:12:945 (5,6,7,8,9) - same here
02:56:445 (5,6) - same
03:33:570 (4) - end it at 03:34:695 then add a note at 03:34:882
03:40:320 (6) - new combo
03:56:070 (1,2) - space these out more to follow the rest of the combo
this map needs work, :/
Hard
00:26:445 (8,9) - this jump dont really suit, give it normal spacing
00:35:445 (9) - add finish hitsound?
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4) - same as the normal, mostly every note in the combo has a different spacing, please give it one since theres no need for so many spacings
01:17:632 (6) - move closer to (5)
01:54:195 (3) - new combo, breaking your pattern
01:55:695 (1) - remove new combo, above change makes this pointless
02:41:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part feels out of time to the music, i think what your following dont follow the overall tempo, thus this sounds totally weird when playing, it felt intime to me when i used a 1/8 tick, so yea :/
02:55:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad idea to give this the same spacing as the combo's before what was 1/2 when these are 1/1. i advise to widen the spacing abit here
02:59:070 (1) - put this notes spacing perfectly in the middle of the note before and after it, plays better
03:23:163 (1) - this spinner feels horrid to play since its "barely" rankable
03:24:945 - add a note here
Insane
Maybe think of lowering the HP drain 1, your choice though
01:09:945 (1,2,3) - timing wise this dont play good at all, like this is better
01:40:695 (4) - new combo
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - out of time, move these forward to start at 01:51:382
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lotta work left to do on these maps, but good luck
IRC mod; I tested insane. Things to remember:
Consider reducing health drain.
See if reducing the approach rate would fit, I think it's a bit too fast for the mood of the song.
Combo colors don't exactly make sense to me. But okay.
Some of the stacks sound just like bursts. I can't hear anything from the song to validate them.
Try to find an MP3 file with a higher volume.
And if not, at least reduce comboburst volume, and hitsound volume.
All in all, I like the song, map, and background Have a star.
Consider reducing health drain.
See if reducing the approach rate would fit, I think it's a bit too fast for the mood of the song.
Combo colors don't exactly make sense to me. But okay.
Some of the stacks sound just like bursts. I can't hear anything from the song to validate them.
Try to find an MP3 file with a higher volume.
And if not, at least reduce comboburst volume, and hitsound volume.
All in all, I like the song, map, and background
Have a star.Good insane=)
nice song and well mapped star ^^
Overall:
Offset seems wrong, but I can't get a good one.
Consult pro timing help.
[Easy]
00:47:820 (4) - down 1 grid
01:11:445 (5) - this is a bit noisy :/
01:16:320 (2,3) - up 1 grid, and right 1 grid
01:38:070 (4,5) - hmmm, not wrong, but I'd like to suggest this:02:07:695 (2,4) - compare the spacing here. Fix them.
02:23:445 (4) - a bit noisy :
[TraceTheKriken's Normal]
00:59:632 (6) - though indeed following the vocal, it just sounds weird to end here. I'd put two more notes here 00:59:820 and 01:00:195. (if you decide to fix these, do so to other similar ones in this diff)
01:55:695 (3) - too close from (2)
02:56:820 (6) - a bit far from next note
03:57:945 (4) - a bit far from previous note
[Hard]
Spacing fluctuations all over the place. Please use distance snap and reposition all notes.
I won't list spacing errors below.
00:59:820 (x) - I'd add a note here (if you decide to fix this, do so to other similar spots)
01:07:132 (8,9) - I think these are a little overmapped.
01:36:195 (1,2,3,4) - not a perfect diamond
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - - The rhythm don't fit the music, IMO
02:42:945 (9) - a bit repeating too much?
03:10:695 (x) - maybe a note here?
03:13:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use perfect geometry
03:17:632 (2) - I don't think this is necessary
03:26:257 (x) - add a note here (following the drumming)?
03:28:695 (x) - ^
03:30:945 (x) - ^
03:32:820 (x) - ^
03:33:195 (x) - ^
03:44:257 (x) - ^
03:46:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cramped! Maybe not stack these?
[Insane]
[Hard], in my opinion, has already maxed out the rhythm possible on this song.
Adding anymore beats will make the diff overmapped.
And that's the case of [Insane].
I find a lot of rhythm that is unnecessary or awkward.
Sorry I can't really mod this diff...
And due to that reason, I withhold my star.
But still, good luck!
Offset seems wrong, but I can't get a good one.
Consult pro timing help.
[Easy]
00:47:820 (4) - down 1 grid
01:11:445 (5) - this is a bit noisy :/
01:16:320 (2,3) - up 1 grid, and right 1 grid
01:38:070 (4,5) - hmmm, not wrong, but I'd like to suggest this:02:07:695 (2,4) - compare the spacing here. Fix them.
02:23:445 (4) - a bit noisy :
[TraceTheKriken's Normal]
00:59:632 (6) - though indeed following the vocal, it just sounds weird to end here. I'd put two more notes here 00:59:820 and 01:00:195. (if you decide to fix these, do so to other similar ones in this diff)
01:55:695 (3) - too close from (2)
02:56:820 (6) - a bit far from next note
03:57:945 (4) - a bit far from previous note
[Hard]
Spacing fluctuations all over the place. Please use distance snap and reposition all notes.
I won't list spacing errors below.
00:59:820 (x) - I'd add a note here (if you decide to fix this, do so to other similar spots)
01:07:132 (8,9) - I think these are a little overmapped.
01:36:195 (1,2,3,4) - not a perfect diamond
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - - The rhythm don't fit the music, IMO
02:42:945 (9) - a bit repeating too much?
03:10:695 (x) - maybe a note here?
03:13:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use perfect geometry
03:17:632 (2) - I don't think this is necessary
03:26:257 (x) - add a note here (following the drumming)?
03:28:695 (x) - ^
03:30:945 (x) - ^
03:32:820 (x) - ^
03:33:195 (x) - ^
03:44:257 (x) - ^
03:46:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cramped! Maybe not stack these?
[Insane]
[Hard], in my opinion, has already maxed out the rhythm possible on this song.
Adding anymore beats will make the diff overmapped.
And that's the case of [Insane].
I find a lot of rhythm that is unnecessary or awkward.
Sorry I can't really mod this diff...
And due to that reason, I withhold my star.
But still, good luck!
Easy: 00:46:695 (1,2,3,4) - You have a clap on the 3rd note when it needs to be on the 1st and 2nd to follow the rhythm.
00:48:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try removing the Clap on the tail end of (2) and placing new claps on (4) and (6).
01:19:320 (3,4,5) - I personally think that putting Claps on these three notes would sound really cool. That's just me though.
01:20:445 (1) - You might want to place a Cymbal at the end of this spinner. Might make the map sound even more epic.
01:54:945 (4) - A clap on the first rebound would sound nice.
TraceTheKriken's Normal: I'm not going to go into detail on this difficulty. I'm too tired from modding Normal and Hard.
Hard: 00:29:820 (4,5) - These repeaters sound off. You might want to change them to something more like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41251
01:07:695 (10) - A finish really doesn't sound appropriate here.
01:36:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is not symetrical!!
01:55:695 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:11:820 (3,1) - Maybe move Beat (1) to the left one space?
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't anything wrong with this pattern. I just want to say that it is really cool!
02:56:820 (2,3,4) - This isn't symetrical either!
02:59:070 (1,1) - Remove new combos?
03:51:007 (1) - Timing Section Shenanigans in this spinner?
Insane: I don't even want to know. Hard was already outragously difficult.
Don't let this lengthy mod post get you down. I modded this map in such detail, because it was already awesome.
Starred.
00:48:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try removing the Clap on the tail end of (2) and placing new claps on (4) and (6).
01:19:320 (3,4,5) - I personally think that putting Claps on these three notes would sound really cool. That's just me though.
01:20:445 (1) - You might want to place a Cymbal at the end of this spinner. Might make the map sound even more epic.
01:54:945 (4) - A clap on the first rebound would sound nice.
TraceTheKriken's Normal: I'm not going to go into detail on this difficulty. I'm too tired from modding Normal and Hard.
Hard: 00:29:820 (4,5) - These repeaters sound off. You might want to change them to something more like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41251
01:07:695 (10) - A finish really doesn't sound appropriate here.
01:36:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is not symetrical!!
01:55:695 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:11:820 (3,1) - Maybe move Beat (1) to the left one space?
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't anything wrong with this pattern. I just want to say that it is really cool!
02:56:820 (2,3,4) - This isn't symetrical either!
02:59:070 (1,1) - Remove new combos?
03:51:007 (1) - Timing Section Shenanigans in this spinner?
Insane: I don't even want to know. Hard was already outragously difficult.
Don't let this lengthy mod post get you down. I modded this map in such detail, because it was already awesome.
Starred.
Topic Starter
Thanks yongtw123 and theMikeAG ^^
:D:D
:D:DQuick recheck by request, this still needs a lot of improvement though >:
~Easy~
- Map until the end?
00:24:195 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:26:445 (5) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:570, it sounds a lot better.
00:30:570 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:18:570 (1) - Don't put jumps on easy diffs!! Fix spacing please.
01:33:945 (5) - Stack under (3)'s startpoint.
02:05:820 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the spinner for an Easy, let the newbies recover from spinners!! Maybe finish the spinner 1/1 note earlier (white tick)?
02:26:070 (1) - Fix spacing here.
~TraceTheKriken's Normal~
- The slider velocity is still 2.00 halved during the entire map using inherited sections, which is nonsense >: Use something around 1.20 or 1.30 >:
03:06:757 (1,2) - Make this a whole slider, it's a lot more readable.
~Hard~
- Tags didn't change here from the last mod.
- The general spacing is still too harsh imo (I think you didn't touch it though xD), Normal has a very little spacing and Insane has even a smaller spacing than Hard D:
01:10:320 (5) - Don't make spacing changes on the same combo!! Fix spacing here.
01:42:570 (9) - Move a bit up to fix the spacing.
02:09:945 (6) - This jump is too harsh D:
02:15:570 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, decrease spacing here? >:
02:56:820 (2) - Move away, it's too close from the slider.
03:23:070 (1) - This spinner is too short >.<
04:09:195 (1) - Finish the spinner at 04:12:476?
~Insane~
- No breaks? In a 4 minute song? D:! (Yes, saying this again, I don't think it's fair but it's totally up to you oxo)
- I would really leave the beginning unmapped, it's just making a rythm that doesn't exist on the song actually, so just start at the same point as the other diffs >: (Saying this again too, it really doesn't follow anything on the song :/)
01:59:820 (1) - Missing warning =x
03:41:257 (1) - Too short spinner.
04:01:320 (3) - Warning here too?
The main problem I see on insane is the mix of looong and fast jumps with some places when the spacing goes suddenly so small. In my honest opinion the map would be insane enough with just the speedups, but probably other people don't think it's that bad... xD
Good luck again~ (don't kudosu this, btw)
~Easy~
- Map until the end?
00:24:195 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:26:445 (5) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:570, it sounds a lot better.
00:30:570 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:18:570 (1) - Don't put jumps on easy diffs!! Fix spacing please.
01:33:945 (5) - Stack under (3)'s startpoint.
02:05:820 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the spinner for an Easy, let the newbies recover from spinners!! Maybe finish the spinner 1/1 note earlier (white tick)?
02:26:070 (1) - Fix spacing here.
~TraceTheKriken's Normal~
- The slider velocity is still 2.00 halved during the entire map using inherited sections, which is nonsense >: Use something around 1.20 or 1.30 >:
03:06:757 (1,2) - Make this a whole slider, it's a lot more readable.
~Hard~
- Tags didn't change here from the last mod.
- The general spacing is still too harsh imo (I think you didn't touch it though xD), Normal has a very little spacing and Insane has even a smaller spacing than Hard D:
01:10:320 (5) - Don't make spacing changes on the same combo!! Fix spacing here.
01:42:570 (9) - Move a bit up to fix the spacing.
02:09:945 (6) - This jump is too harsh D:
02:15:570 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
02:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, decrease spacing here? >:
02:56:820 (2) - Move away, it's too close from the slider.
03:23:070 (1) - This spinner is too short >.<
04:09:195 (1) - Finish the spinner at 04:12:476?
~Insane~
- No breaks? In a 4 minute song? D:! (Yes, saying this again, I don't think it's fair but it's totally up to you oxo)
- I would really leave the beginning unmapped, it's just making a rythm that doesn't exist on the song actually, so just start at the same point as the other diffs >: (Saying this again too, it really doesn't follow anything on the song :/)
01:59:820 (1) - Missing warning =x
03:41:257 (1) - Too short spinner.
04:01:320 (3) - Warning here too?
The main problem I see on insane is the mix of looong and fast jumps with some places when the spacing goes suddenly so small. In my honest opinion the map would be insane enough with just the speedups, but probably other people don't think it's that bad... xD
Good luck again~ (don't kudosu this, btw)
star
[Easy]
The end of the difficulty is abrupt. You should try and map to the end like the other difficulties.
[Normal]
Slider speed at the beginning is broken. BIG NO NO. Actually. That's so bad, I'm going to stop modding here.
The end of the difficulty is abrupt. You should try and map to the end like the other difficulties.
[Normal]
Slider speed at the beginning is broken. BIG NO NO. Actually. That's so bad, I'm going to stop modding here.
[Hard]
Nazi: 00:43:320 (2,3,4,1) - Erm, why not make (2) horizontally opposite of 00:42:195 (1), and stack (4,1) on it?
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of too many whistles
01:01:882 (5,6,7,8) - ^
Nazi: 01:17:632 (6) - One grid left to it looks balanced on (4,5)?
Nazi: 01:22:320 (5) - One grid right
[Insane]
Nazi: 00:27:382 (6,7) - (6) 1 grid up, and (7) 2 grids up and one grid right
Nazi: 03:56:445 (2,3,4) - 1 grid up
Yeah, lots of Nazis. Anyway, starred.
Nazi: 00:43:320 (2,3,4,1) - Erm, why not make (2) horizontally opposite of 00:42:195 (1), and stack (4,1) on it?
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of too many whistles
01:01:882 (5,6,7,8) - ^
Nazi: 01:17:632 (6) - One grid left to it looks balanced on (4,5)?
Nazi: 01:22:320 (5) - One grid right
[Insane]
Nazi: 00:27:382 (6,7) - (6) 1 grid up, and (7) 2 grids up and one grid right
Nazi: 03:56:445 (2,3,4) - 1 grid up
Yeah, lots of Nazis. Anyway, starred.
Topic Starter
DoneJInxyjem wrote:
[Hard]
Nazi: 00:43:320 (2,3,4,1) - Erm, why not make (2) horizontally opposite of 00:42:195 (1), and stack (4,1) on it?
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of too many whistles
01:01:882 (5,6,7,8) - ^
Nazi: 01:17:632 (6) - One grid left to it looks balanced on (4,5)?
Nazi: 01:22:320 (5) - One grid right
[Insane]
Nazi: 00:27:382 (6,7) - (6) 1 grid up, and (7) 2 grids up and one grid right
Nazi: 03:56:445 (2,3,4) - 1 grid up
Yeah, lots of Nazis. Anyway, starred.
Thanks Lilac and JInxyjem
:O
afasfafgasfa
Great work with the hitsounds.
Star!
Star!
Very nice work here. Solid mapping throughout and the hitsounds fit nicely. Star'd.
jamp very nice!
give you star~!
give you star~!
Kiai time is different on each difficulty.
[Easy]
00:39:945 (1) - Finish or any other hitsound.
01:17:820 ~ Why all these notes are silenced?
01:35:070 (6) - Stack it.
02:03:382 - Too short break,unrankable,probably.
02:15:570 (1) - Isn't is too far?
02:26:070 (1) - Fix distance.
[Normal]
01:16:507 (1) - 1 grid right.
01:46:882 (5,6) - ^
01:54:757 (1,2,3) - Fix distance.
[Hard]
01:24:945 - Finish.
02:12:195 (1) - Place it between (3) and (2),please.
02:59:070 (1) - Remove NC.
03:15:195 (1) - Stack with (8),looks bad otherwise.
[Insane]
This song doesn't really need Insane,Hard was hard enough to be the hardest difficulty.
Mainly the problem not in how difficult it is,the problem is in notes.They're overused.
However,song is pretty nice.
Star~
[Easy]
00:39:945 (1) - Finish or any other hitsound.
01:17:820 ~ Why all these notes are silenced?
01:35:070 (6) - Stack it.
02:03:382 - Too short break,unrankable,probably.
02:15:570 (1) - Isn't is too far?
02:26:070 (1) - Fix distance.
[Normal]
01:16:507 (1) - 1 grid right.
01:46:882 (5,6) - ^
01:54:757 (1,2,3) - Fix distance.
[Hard]
01:24:945 - Finish.
02:12:195 (1) - Place it between (3) and (2),please.
02:59:070 (1) - Remove NC.
03:15:195 (1) - Stack with (8),looks bad otherwise.
[Insane]
This song doesn't really need Insane,Hard was hard enough to be the hardest difficulty.
Mainly the problem not in how difficult it is,the problem is in notes.They're overused.
However,song is pretty nice.
Star~
Topic Starter
Thanks~IceBeam wrote:
Kiai time is different on each difficulty.
[Easy]
00:39:945 (1) - Finish or any other hitsound. Added Finish
01:17:820 ~ Why all these notes are silenced?Changed
01:35:070 (6) - Stack it.Changed
02:03:382 - Too short break,unrankable,probably.Done
02:15:570 (1) - Isn't is too far?Well, there is a lot of time for newbies to click it
02:26:070 (1) - Fix distance. Changed
[Normal]
01:16:507 (1) - 1 grid right.Changed
01:46:882 (5,6) - ^It should be fine..
01:54:757 (1,2,3) - Fix distance.Changed
[Hard]
01:24:945 - Finish.Changed
02:12:195 (1) - Place it between (3) and (2),please.Changed
02:59:070 (1) - Remove NC.Changed
03:15:195 (1) - Stack with (8),looks bad otherwise.Changed
[Insane]
This song doesn't really need Insane,Hard was hard enough to be the hardest difficulty.
Mainly the problem not in how difficult it is,the problem is in notes.They're overused.
However,song is pretty nice.
Star~
Easy;
Same kiai as Insane?
Normal;
03:31:320 (2) - 1/4 longer.
Hard;
Same kiai as Insane?
03:32:820 - Note here?
03:33:570 (1) - End at 03:35:445, map up until the next circle.
04:02:445 - No real need to map past here, end the spinner here.
Insane;
Offset the same as the other difficulties.
I don't see any real need for this difficulty, Hard is quite enough.
00:22:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - What are these following
00:31:882 (1,2) - ^
None of the 1/4 triple stacks make much sense here, I'm afraid.
Same kiai as Insane?
Normal;
03:31:320 (2) - 1/4 longer.
Hard;
Same kiai as Insane?
03:32:820 - Note here?
03:33:570 (1) - End at 03:35:445, map up until the next circle.
04:02:445 - No real need to map past here, end the spinner here.
Insane;
Offset the same as the other difficulties.
I don't see any real need for this difficulty, Hard is quite enough.
00:22:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - What are these following
00:31:882 (1,2) - ^
None of the 1/4 triple stacks make much sense here, I'm afraid.
Overall it's probably fine, but there were a few instances of things like 03:56:070 (1,2,3) in insane which really threw me off, although you've probably already gone through those in all these pages of discussion (at least I'm really hoping someone's already pointed them out).
I would say it's fine for ranking bar any minor changes.
I would say it's fine for ranking bar any minor changes.
Topic Starter
Thanks DC and Echo for the mod and comment
EASY
i think some of the diff setting are too high. lower the OD by 2 maybe
the end kiai is different on the normal and easy. any reason?
HARD,INSANE
02:32:257 - don't need this intert section. the kiai fountain will still go off without it
have extra tags the normal and easy don't have. also saw dawn of the dragon in the tags. doesn't need to be there. same with spyro
also i think the whistle might be a bit loud on the hard and insane but then again..i'm not much for a hitsound expert T-T
[/badmod]
map doesn't seem bad though. have a star
i think some of the diff setting are too high. lower the OD by 2 maybe
the end kiai is different on the normal and easy. any reason?
HARD,INSANE
02:32:257 - don't need this intert section. the kiai fountain will still go off without it
have extra tags the normal and easy don't have. also saw dawn of the dragon in the tags. doesn't need to be there. same with spyro
also i think the whistle might be a bit loud on the hard and insane but then again..i'm not much for a hitsound expert T-T
[/badmod]
map doesn't seem bad though. have a star
[Easy]
Approach Rate +1
00:48:945 (1) - Revome clap at the end
01:43:320 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:56:445 (1) - Finish sounds better here
02:07:695 (2) - Remove
03:36:945 (break) - Remove the kiai time during the break
[TraceTheKriken's Normal]
00:30:570 (5,6,7) - Too close to (4)
00:53:070 (5) - Too close to the previous note
01:06:570 (8,9) - Make them a slider
01:18:570 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
02:14:070 (8,9) - Make them a slider
02:26:070 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
02:32:163 - Use ess timing section
03:17:070 (8,9) - Make them a slider
03:44:820 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
[Hard]
Slider tick rate : 1
02:14:257 (11) - Extand by 1/1
02:18:945 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird
[Insane]
Slider tick rate : 1
00:24:195 (7) - New combo
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - Lol, move them 1/4 later
01:55:320 (8) - New combo
Approach Rate +1
00:48:945 (1) - Revome clap at the end
01:43:320 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:56:445 (1) - Finish sounds better here
02:07:695 (2) - Remove
03:36:945 (break) - Remove the kiai time during the break
[TraceTheKriken's Normal]
00:30:570 (5,6,7) - Too close to (4)
00:53:070 (5) - Too close to the previous note
01:06:570 (8,9) - Make them a slider
01:18:570 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
02:14:070 (8,9) - Make them a slider
02:26:070 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
02:32:163 - Use ess timing section
03:17:070 (8,9) - Make them a slider
03:44:820 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
[Hard]
Slider tick rate : 1
02:14:257 (11) - Extand by 1/1
02:18:945 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird
[Insane]
Slider tick rate : 1
00:24:195 (7) - New combo
01:51:288 (4,5,6) - Lol, move them 1/4 later
01:55:320 (8) - New combo
Topic Starter
Thanks KuraiPettan, you deserve a kudosu and a drink :3
As per your request:
[General]
Remove "final song" and "dawn of the dragon" from tags.
[Easy]
01:04:695 (4,5,6) - I'm not much of a fan of stacks in easy difficulties.
01:13:695 (1,4) - Kinda overlapped here, and the 4 slider may be confusing as to when it will end. Maybe try something else here?
01:18:195 (5,1) - Another stack, if you want to change these.
01:20:445 (1) - Add a finish?
02:05:820 (1) - Feels a little soon after a spinner for an easy. Maybe end the spinner at 02:04:320 - ?
02:23:445 (4,1,2) - This doesn't look good at all. :/ Also the 4 slider felt a bit long. Maybe vary out the rhythm a bit?
02:32:820 - Such a long break. :< Would probably work better if you mapped through it and kept the break at 02:59:820 -
03:08:445 - Start kiai here
This last kiai section feels underwhelming because of the lackluster hitsounds. :/
03:36:945 - Why a break? :<
[TraceTheKitten's Normal]
Line up the tags in this difficulty.
00:48:570 (5,1) - Sticking into the HP bar, if you care about that sort of thing.
02:32:820 - Same comment from easy. Map something. :< And maybe have the later short break where easy has it.
03:15:007 (4,6) - Didn't like the overlap here.
03:48:945 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for a normal, though if you really want this rhythm, maybe set this closer to the center of the spinner so it's easier to realign.
[Hard]
There are a lot of eighth note streams in here that I really think are a bit too tough for a hard difficulty due to the high spacing.
02:27:945 (1,1) - This is pretty tough for a hard.
03:06:570 (1) - Sticking into HP bar
03:07:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Take a close look at the shape these form. Is that how you really want it?
So little hit sounding during the second kiai again. :<
03:22:788 (1) - Just start this on the red tick. Feels weird starting to early.
03:46:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kinda boring to play for a ramping up of the last part of the song.
[Insane]
Different offset from other difficulties. Please line these up.
00:38:820 (6,1) - This spacing intended?
01:25:695 (1,2) - This jump doesn't fit right after that slow down warning.
01:56:445 - Such an awkward spot for a break. Why not have a break where your other difficulties did?
01:59:820 - Useless timing section
03:01:695 (1,2,3,4) - Why isn't this aligned compared to the other geometric shapes? Speaking of, double check those shapes. Most of them are aligned badly. Use Control + H for easy checks when everything is centered.
03:54:570 (5,1) - Eh, that spacing is kind of deceitful.
03:59:070 (1) - HP bar, blah blah
04:00:195 - The slowdown would make more sense here to me.
That ending section just feels really off without the proper timing. The kiai is in the wrong spot and the repeating slider just ends completely off. You might be better off just mapping to where Easy and Hard ended.
It's looking good though! The rhythm work is good - just a lot of ugly sliders and things that are more nit-picky than anything else, hehe. Try to concentrate on the hit sounding!
[General]
Remove "final song" and "dawn of the dragon" from tags.
[Easy]
01:04:695 (4,5,6) - I'm not much of a fan of stacks in easy difficulties.
01:13:695 (1,4) - Kinda overlapped here, and the 4 slider may be confusing as to when it will end. Maybe try something else here?
01:18:195 (5,1) - Another stack, if you want to change these.
01:20:445 (1) - Add a finish?
02:05:820 (1) - Feels a little soon after a spinner for an easy. Maybe end the spinner at 02:04:320 - ?
02:23:445 (4,1,2) - This doesn't look good at all. :/ Also the 4 slider felt a bit long. Maybe vary out the rhythm a bit?
02:32:820 - Such a long break. :< Would probably work better if you mapped through it and kept the break at 02:59:820 -
03:08:445 - Start kiai here
This last kiai section feels underwhelming because of the lackluster hitsounds. :/
03:36:945 - Why a break? :<
[TraceTheKitten's Normal]
Line up the tags in this difficulty.
00:48:570 (5,1) - Sticking into the HP bar, if you care about that sort of thing.
02:32:820 - Same comment from easy. Map something. :< And maybe have the later short break where easy has it.
03:15:007 (4,6) - Didn't like the overlap here.
03:48:945 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for a normal, though if you really want this rhythm, maybe set this closer to the center of the spinner so it's easier to realign.
[Hard]
There are a lot of eighth note streams in here that I really think are a bit too tough for a hard difficulty due to the high spacing.
02:27:945 (1,1) - This is pretty tough for a hard.
03:06:570 (1) - Sticking into HP bar
03:07:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Take a close look at the shape these form. Is that how you really want it?
So little hit sounding during the second kiai again. :<
03:22:788 (1) - Just start this on the red tick. Feels weird starting to early.
03:46:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kinda boring to play for a ramping up of the last part of the song.
[Insane]
Different offset from other difficulties. Please line these up.
00:38:820 (6,1) - This spacing intended?
01:25:695 (1,2) - This jump doesn't fit right after that slow down warning.
01:56:445 - Such an awkward spot for a break. Why not have a break where your other difficulties did?
01:59:820 - Useless timing section
03:01:695 (1,2,3,4) - Why isn't this aligned compared to the other geometric shapes? Speaking of, double check those shapes. Most of them are aligned badly. Use Control + H for easy checks when everything is centered.
03:54:570 (5,1) - Eh, that spacing is kind of deceitful.
03:59:070 (1) - HP bar, blah blah
04:00:195 - The slowdown would make more sense here to me.
That ending section just feels really off without the proper timing. The kiai is in the wrong spot and the repeating slider just ends completely off. You might be better off just mapping to where Easy and Hard ended.
It's looking good though! The rhythm work is good - just a lot of ugly sliders and things that are more nit-picky than anything else, hehe. Try to concentrate on the hit sounding!
Topic Starter
ChangedGarven wrote:
As per your request:
[General]
Remove "final song" and "dawn of the dragon" from tags.
[Easy]
01:04:695 (4,5,6) - I'm not much of a fan of stacks in easy difficulties.
01:13:695 (1,4) - Kinda overlapped here, and the 4 slider may be confusing as to when it will end. Maybe try something else here?
01:18:195 (5,1) - Another stack, if you want to change these.
01:20:445 (1) - Add a finish?
02:05:820 (1) - Feels a little soon after a spinner for an easy. Maybe end the spinner at 02:04:320 - ?
02:23:445 (4,1,2) - This doesn't look good at all. :/ Also the 4 slider felt a bit long. Maybe vary out the rhythm a bit?
02:32:820 - Such a long break. :< Would probably work better if you mapped through it and kept the break at 02:59:820 -
03:08:445 - Start kiai here
This last kiai section feels underwhelming because of the lackluster hitsounds. :/
03:36:945 - Why a break? :<
Done
[TraceTheKitten's Normal]LOL.....
Line up the tags in this difficulty.
00:48:570 (5,1) - Sticking into the HP bar, if you care about that sort of thing.
02:32:820 - Same comment from easy. Map something. :< And maybe have the later short break where easy has it.
03:15:007 (4,6) - Didn't like the overlap here.
03:48:945 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for a normal, though if you really want this rhythm, maybe set this closer to the center of the spinner so it's easier to realign.
Done
[Hard]
There are a lot of eighth note streams in here that I really think are a bit too tough for a hard difficulty due to the high spacing.
02:27:945 (1,1) - This is pretty tough for a hard.
03:06:570 (1) - Sticking into HP bar
03:07:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Take a close look at the shape these form. Is that how you really want it?Umm....what does it look like to you? O.O XD
So little hit sounding during the second kiai again. :<
03:22:788 (1) - Just start this on the red tick. Feels weird starting to early.
03:46:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kinda boring to play for a ramping up of the last part of the song.
[Insane]
Different offset from other difficulties. Please line these up.
00:38:820 (6,1) - This spacing intended?
01:25:695 (1,2) - This jump doesn't fit right after that slow down warning.
01:56:445 - Such an awkward spot for a break. Why not have a break where your other difficulties did?
01:59:820 - Useless timing section
03:01:695 (1,2,3,4) - Why isn't this aligned compared to the other geometric shapes? Speaking of, double check those shapes. Most of them are aligned badly. Use Control + H for easy checks when everything is centered.
03:54:570 (5,1) - Eh, that spacing is kind of deceitful.
03:59:070 (1) - HP bar, blah blah
04:00:195 - The slowdown would make more sense here to me.
That ending section just feels really off without the proper timing. The kiai is in the wrong spot and the repeating slider just ends completely off. You might be better off just mapping to where Easy and Hard ended.
It's looking good though! The rhythm work is good - just a lot of ugly sliders and things that are more nit-picky than anything else, hehe. Try to concentrate on the hit sounding!
Thanks ~
I remember in The user name origin thread Gens said that he misheared my user name just like Garven did. I'm not mad about it, It's just funnyGarven wrote:
[TraceTheKitten's Normal]
Anyway. From now on all changes that are posted on my difficulty I want to check first by myself to make sure that it still keeps my mapping style and won't be screwd up in a way that I don't want.
Topic Starter
OkTraceTheKriken wrote:
Anyway. From now on all changes that are posted on my difficulty I want to check first by myself to make sure that it still keeps my mapping style and won't be screwd up in a way that I don't want.Garven wrote:
[TraceTheKitten's Normal]
It's alright...I guess.
Normal is pretty good!
Normal is pretty good!
Nice map!
It played well, so that's already a good sign.
I also checked in editor, but I couldn't find anything big to mention
Oh well, hope you get it ranked soon, Star
It played well, so that's already a good sign.
I also checked in editor, but I couldn't find anything big to mention
Oh well, hope you get it ranked soon, Star
[Friends]
01:20:445 - I don't like where this break starts; being in the middle of the vocals.
01:54:945 (4) - I think this sounds better without the clap on the end.
[Allies]
02:48:195 (1) - Extend the spinner to 02:50:445 and remove 02:50:445 (1).
I really don't like this diff.
[Alliance]
00:30:757 (5) - I think this sounds better as a single note rather than a slider.
02:15:195 - You could add another note here.
03:22:882 (1) - Shorten to 03:23:820.
03:32:632 (2) - Move the clap from 2 to 03:32:820 (3).
03:47:445 (3) - Pattern spacing
[Guide You Home]
I already said to you in irc that I hate the speed ups/slow downs in this.
00:35:445 (11) - Spacing.
00:41:820 (10) - I know it ruins your pattern but this repeat slider would sound better on the 9 instead of the 10.
01:02:726 (2) - Remove this.
01:19:882 (8) - Shorten by 2 repeats.
01:29:538 (10) - Remove this.
01:47:445 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are these supposed to be symetrical patterns? If so, it needs fixing, if not, ignore this but it still looks ugly.
02:18:945 (7,1) - I don't like this but I can't offer any suggestions to it so..
02:26:632 (4) - Remove the clap.
02:35:820 (6) - Add a clap.
02:38:632 (2,3) - Remove the 2 and slide the 3 into it's place.
02:41:070 (1) - I don't think this sounds good but again no suggestions for changing it..
If you don't like any of my suggestions, please don't kudosu.
01:20:445 - I don't like where this break starts; being in the middle of the vocals.
01:54:945 (4) - I think this sounds better without the clap on the end.
[Allies]
02:48:195 (1) - Extend the spinner to 02:50:445 and remove 02:50:445 (1).
I really don't like this diff.
[Alliance]
00:30:757 (5) - I think this sounds better as a single note rather than a slider.
02:15:195 - You could add another note here.
03:22:882 (1) - Shorten to 03:23:820.
03:32:632 (2) - Move the clap from 2 to 03:32:820 (3).
03:47:445 (3) - Pattern spacing
[Guide You Home]
I already said to you in irc that I hate the speed ups/slow downs in this.
00:35:445 (11) - Spacing.
00:41:820 (10) - I know it ruins your pattern but this repeat slider would sound better on the 9 instead of the 10.
01:02:726 (2) - Remove this.
01:19:882 (8) - Shorten by 2 repeats.
01:29:538 (10) - Remove this.
01:47:445 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are these supposed to be symetrical patterns? If so, it needs fixing, if not, ignore this but it still looks ugly.
02:18:945 (7,1) - I don't like this but I can't offer any suggestions to it so..
02:26:632 (4) - Remove the clap.
02:35:820 (6) - Add a clap.
02:38:632 (2,3) - Remove the 2 and slide the 3 into it's place.
02:41:070 (1) - I don't think this sounds good but again no suggestions for changing it..
If you don't like any of my suggestions, please don't kudosu.
Topic Starter
Hikato, i have taken in some of your suggestion
Thanks
Thanks
Hey o/
Good map
Try to use more histounds in "Friends"
Some little IRC mod~
Starred!!
Good map
Try to use more histounds in "Friends"
Some little IRC mod~
Starred!!
If you could submit it again would be nice!
Star
Star
This isn't any mod post (Boo for ruining any suspense :c), but it's just a comment for the moment.
Anyway, as I said, your mapping style flows rather nicely. You should be rather proud of that. I'm unsure that this sort of song (The whole atmosphere and whatnot) would honestly befit something of such difficulty for [Guide You Home], but I found it pretty fun anyway, so it's not bad. xD
Love the Spyro stuff you got going. I noticed that scorebar-bg.png overlaps one of the 0's in the score number though. Are you able to fix that?
Ask me again sometime for this. In the meantime, star!
Anyway, as I said, your mapping style flows rather nicely. You should be rather proud of that. I'm unsure that this sort of song (The whole atmosphere and whatnot) would honestly befit something of such difficulty for [Guide You Home], but I found it pretty fun anyway, so it's not bad. xD
Love the Spyro stuff you got going. I noticed that scorebar-bg.png overlaps one of the 0's in the score number though. Are you able to fix that?
Ask me again sometime for this. In the meantime, star!
Topic Starter
Thanks for the commentStarrodkirby86 wrote:
This isn't any mod post (Boo for ruining any suspense :c), but it's just a comment for the moment.
Anyway, as I said, your mapping style flows rather nicely. You should be rather proud of that. I'm unsure that this sort of song (The whole atmosphere and whatnot) would honestly befit something of such difficulty for [Guide You Home], but I found it pretty fun anyway, so it's not bad. xD
Love the Spyro stuff you got going. I noticed that scorebar-bg.png overlaps one of the 0's in the score number though. Are you able to fix that?
Ask me again sometime for this. In the meantime, star!
wow +82... star~
Not exactly a mod, but some suggestions.
Easy (Friends): A bit too fast-paced in my mind for an easy. The slider velocity is the same as Normal (Allies), so how about lowering it to say... 0.9? Also, the distance spacing is a bit high, so I'd like to see notes spaced closer than they are right now. Be advised that distance spacing is partially dependent on slider velocity, so you'll actually need to raise the distance snap (you'll see once you change the SV). Also, avoid using short/kick sliders like 01:17:070 (4) in easy difficulties. The multiple repeats can be very confusing for newer players.
Normal (Allies): A bit linear in spots, but that's not a bad thing. Many of the spinners are wayyyy too long though (and remind me of airman spinners). 03:51:195 (4) is a nice rainbow slider (long slider that goes across the screen during kiai time, usually with a repeat or two), but could be nazi'd with the nodes to make it 100% symmetrical. ;p
Hard (Alliance): I think it's been mentioned many times, but the spacing is a bit strange in here. You have lots of beats that are a white tick apart with spacing that's a bit too easy for a Hard, but then you have 1/2 (eighth) notes with waaaaaay too large of spacing that would belong in an Insane. Also, the slider speed change from 1x to 0.5x at 02:50:070 (2,1) is a bit extreme. How about changing the 0.5x to say... 0.75x?
Insane (Guide You Home): This difficulty flows much better than the last, especially since the difficulty level fits better. I really don't see the need for the speed warnings (especially since you used 1.5x instead of 2x), but the choruses are a bit more extreme than they need to be, so perhaps toning them down a little would help. And again, perhaps try using 0.75x instead of 0.5x speed.
I see a lot of potential in this mapset, so this definitely gets my star as well. I wish you good luck and I hope to have the chance to take another look at this in the future!
PS: I really like the bg used in the guest diff, so I'd like to see it used it more difficulties (but that's up to you ;p).
Easy (Friends): A bit too fast-paced in my mind for an easy. The slider velocity is the same as Normal (Allies), so how about lowering it to say... 0.9? Also, the distance spacing is a bit high, so I'd like to see notes spaced closer than they are right now. Be advised that distance spacing is partially dependent on slider velocity, so you'll actually need to raise the distance snap (you'll see once you change the SV). Also, avoid using short/kick sliders like 01:17:070 (4) in easy difficulties. The multiple repeats can be very confusing for newer players.
Normal (Allies): A bit linear in spots, but that's not a bad thing. Many of the spinners are wayyyy too long though (and remind me of airman spinners). 03:51:195 (4) is a nice rainbow slider (long slider that goes across the screen during kiai time, usually with a repeat or two), but could be nazi'd with the nodes to make it 100% symmetrical. ;p
Hard (Alliance): I think it's been mentioned many times, but the spacing is a bit strange in here. You have lots of beats that are a white tick apart with spacing that's a bit too easy for a Hard, but then you have 1/2 (eighth) notes with waaaaaay too large of spacing that would belong in an Insane. Also, the slider speed change from 1x to 0.5x at 02:50:070 (2,1) is a bit extreme. How about changing the 0.5x to say... 0.75x?
Insane (Guide You Home): This difficulty flows much better than the last, especially since the difficulty level fits better. I really don't see the need for the speed warnings (especially since you used 1.5x instead of 2x), but the choruses are a bit more extreme than they need to be, so perhaps toning them down a little would help. And again, perhaps try using 0.75x instead of 0.5x speed.
I see a lot of potential in this mapset, so this definitely gets my star as well. I wish you good luck and I hope to have the chance to take another look at this in the future!
PS: I really like the bg used in the guest diff, so I'd like to see it used it more difficulties (but that's up to you ;p).
IRC modding on three of DragonSparta's difficulties.
Now here is my mod for TraceTheKriken's difficulty
Good luck getting this ranked.
Star.
Now here is my mod for TraceTheKriken's difficulty
- 02:44:820 (4)-Fix the spacing on this.
Good luck getting this ranked.
Star.
Hmm, nice mapset. Cool song as well xD
Anyways, just one little thing here. In Guide You Home diff, the speedup warning is at 02:02:538. After it, there's a spinner. Why don't you change the time that the warning appears to 02:05:632 or something like that? Would be better imo, dunno xD
Starr'd
Anyways, just one little thing here. In Guide You Home diff, the speedup warning is at 02:02:538. After it, there's a spinner. Why don't you change the time that the warning appears to 02:05:632 or something like that? Would be better imo, dunno xD
Starr'd
Offset must be the same in all difficulties
Insane
01:15:757 (6) - remove and place a single note here 01:15:945 - sounds better imo
01:19:882 (8) - remove 3 repeat and place note here 01:20:257 - kinda thought was like this while playing it
01:24:945 to 01:29:445 - use soft sample set for this section
01:38:632 (7) - move half beat earlier, and longer half beat
01:55:320 (8) - new combo?
02:09:195 (7) - same as 01:19:882 (8)
02:39:195 (1) - inspected jump @.@
02:47:445 (5) - those repeats I ALWAYS think ends earlier T.T
03:08:820 - why this part has soft sample sets and other like this have normal? try to be consistence ><
03:32:445 (4,5,6) - why the triplet? how about removing 5 ^^ ?
about changing sample sets from normal to soft or vice verse the inherited sections must be at least 1/4 before the note, no on top of a note ^^
Hard
01:44:070 (1) - move start of spinner half beat later and add note here
03:06:570 (1) - move one beat earlier and add repeat
03:08:820 - same as Insane
TraceTheKriken's Normal
01:16:507 (1,2) - confusing @.@, those notes at 1/2 can be really confusing to normal, imo (just noticed there are more, i wont mention all)
Star!
Insane
01:15:757 (6) - remove and place a single note here 01:15:945 - sounds better imo
01:19:882 (8) - remove 3 repeat and place note here 01:20:257 - kinda thought was like this while playing it
01:24:945 to 01:29:445 - use soft sample set for this section
01:38:632 (7) - move half beat earlier, and longer half beat
01:55:320 (8) - new combo?
02:09:195 (7) - same as 01:19:882 (8)
02:39:195 (1) - inspected jump @.@
02:47:445 (5) - those repeats I ALWAYS think ends earlier T.T
03:08:820 - why this part has soft sample sets and other like this have normal? try to be consistence ><
03:32:445 (4,5,6) - why the triplet? how about removing 5 ^^ ?
about changing sample sets from normal to soft or vice verse the inherited sections must be at least 1/4 before the note, no on top of a note ^^
Hard
01:44:070 (1) - move start of spinner half beat later and add note here
03:06:570 (1) - move one beat earlier and add repeat
03:08:820 - same as Insane
TraceTheKriken's Normal
01:16:507 (1,2) - confusing @.@, those notes at 1/2 can be really confusing to normal, imo (just noticed there are more, i wont mention all)
Star!
Topic Starter
Lissette wrote:
Offset must be the same in all difficulties
Insane
01:15:757 (6) - remove and place a single note here 01:15:945 - sounds better imo
01:19:882 (8) - remove 3 repeat and place note here 01:20:257 - kinda thought was like this while playing it
01:24:945 to 01:29:445 - use soft sample set for this section
01:38:632 (7) - move half beat earlier, and longer half beat
01:55:320 (8) - new combo?
02:09:195 (7) - same as 01:19:882 (8)
02:39:195 (1) - inspected jump @.@
02:47:445 (5) - those repeats I ALWAYS think ends earlier T.T
03:08:820 - why this part has soft sample sets and other like this have normal? try to be consistence ><
03:32:445 (4,5,6) - why the triplet? how about removing 5 ^^ ?
about changing sample sets from normal to soft or vice verse the inherited sections must be at least 1/4 before the note, no on top of a note ^^
Done
Hard
01:44:070 (1) - move start of spinner half beat later and add note here
03:06:570 (1) - move one beat earlier and add repeat
03:08:820 - same as Insane
Done
TraceTheKriken's Normal
01:16:507 (1,2) - confusing @.@, those notes at 1/2 can be really confusing to normal, imo (just noticed there are more, i wont mention all)
Done
Star!
Though Insane still feels a bit messy for me, this is indeed showing a nice improvement :3
*star*! Good luck <3
EDIT: Skin~
Download: Skin Fix.rar
*star*! Good luck <3
EDIT: Skin~
Download: Skin Fix.rar
I think I can't mod this, mostly are spacing mods to make the map looks better
~Guide You Home~
01:09:007 (1,2) - move closer
01:14:070 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:14:257 (4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:15:007 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:15:382 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:007 (5) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)
01:24:382 (7,8) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:757 (9) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:945 (10) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:34:882 (1,2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:47:820 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:48:007 (4) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:48:757 (2,3,4) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:007 (2) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:195 (3) - move up 3 grids & right 2 grids (Lv3)
01:51:382 (4,5,6) - move up 2 grids & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:07:320 (5) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:007 (2) - move down 2 grids & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:757 (6) - move down 2 grids & left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:945 (7) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:55:320 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:56:445 (2,4,5,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
04:03:570 (2) - end on white tick
~Guide You Home~
01:09:007 (1,2) - move closer
01:14:070 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:14:257 (4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:15:007 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:15:382 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:007 (5) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)
01:24:382 (7,8) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:757 (9) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:945 (10) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:34:882 (1,2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:47:820 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:48:007 (4) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:48:757 (2,3,4) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:007 (2) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:195 (3) - move up 3 grids & right 2 grids (Lv3)
01:51:382 (4,5,6) - move up 2 grids & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:07:320 (5) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:007 (2) - move down 2 grids & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:757 (6) - move down 2 grids & left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:945 (7) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:55:320 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:56:445 (2,4,5,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
04:03:570 (2) - end on white tick
Topic Starter
Fixed~DJPop wrote:
I think I can't mod this, mostly are spacing mods to make the map looks better
~Guide You Home~
01:09:007 (1,2) - move closer
01:14:070 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:14:257 (4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:15:007 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:15:382 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:007 (5) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)
01:24:382 (7,8) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:757 (9) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:24:945 (10) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:34:882 (1,2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:47:820 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:48:007 (4) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:48:757 (2,3,4) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:007 (2) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:195 (3) - move up 3 grids & right 2 grids (Lv3)
01:51:382 (4,5,6) - move up 2 grids & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:07:320 (5) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:007 (2) - move down 2 grids & right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:757 (6) - move down 2 grids & left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:18:945 (7) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:55:320 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:56:445 (2,4,5,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
04:03:570 (2) - end on white tick
Thanks
General
Your hitsound volume levels are pretty inconsistent between difficulties. Make them all the same (around 30% is good) and up the volume a bit during the kiai sections. You did a good job of this with Guide You Home... consider using that one as a model.
Guide You Home
01:15:757 (6) - Remove this maybe? I think it sounds slightly better without it.
03:03:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks kind of sloppy. Make it symmetric. Optionally, make the spacing between each one the same.
Overall, solid mapset. All it really needs is a bit of polish and it's good to go... look for places where you can pretty the map up.
Merry Christmas~
Your hitsound volume levels are pretty inconsistent between difficulties. Make them all the same (around 30% is good) and up the volume a bit during the kiai sections. You did a good job of this with Guide You Home... consider using that one as a model.
Guide You Home
01:15:757 (6) - Remove this maybe? I think it sounds slightly better without it.
03:03:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks kind of sloppy. Make it symmetric. Optionally, make the spacing between each one the same.
Overall, solid mapset. All it really needs is a bit of polish and it's good to go... look for places where you can pretty the map up.
Merry Christmas~
M a D o K a_old
:3
PD: someone need denied the kudosu of this post please xD
PD2: Dragon BAKA
PD: someone need denied the kudosu of this post please xD
PD2: Dragon BAKA
Christmas Mod on it's way.
[Allies]
03:01:695 (1) - I'm having Airman flashbacks here. In other words, I think the spinner is a tad long and unneeded.
[Guide You Home]
No breaks in a 4 minute song make rust45 not happy.
01:26:445 (1) - This feels like it was added in just so there couldn't be a break here.
01:39:570 (1,2,3) - This anti-jump doesn't really make sense to me.
Not that bad at all. Have a star. If you want a bubble, ask me when you're done with my mod.
[Allies]
03:01:695 (1) - I'm having Airman flashbacks here. In other words, I think the spinner is a tad long and unneeded.
[Guide You Home]
No breaks in a 4 minute song make rust45 not happy.
01:26:445 (1) - This feels like it was added in just so there couldn't be a break here.
01:39:570 (1,2,3) - This anti-jump doesn't really make sense to me.
Not that bad at all. Have a star. If you want a bubble, ask me when you're done with my mod.
Nothing I can do here
star and good luck on this, get it ranked before the year is over!!!! :U
star and good luck on this, get it ranked before the year is over!!!! :U
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General
IMO 02:32:445 -> 02:50:445 should be Normal sampleset
02:50:445 -> 02:59:445 should be soft.
TraceTheKriken's Allies
Make the first two kiai sections louder.
02:05:445 (x) - Add note here for consistency
02:59:820 -> 03:06:195 - Add a break here
Alliance
03:26:445 (1) - Remove new combo.
Guide You Home
Copy the breaks on [Alliance]
02:00:945 (3) - This is covering the warning.
02:50:445 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:54:945 (1) - Don't place this that close. It's confusingly close to (5).
04:12:007 (x) - Why is there a kiai here >.>
Edit: Some more IRC stuff and bubbled.
General
IMO 02:32:445 -> 02:50:445 should be Normal sampleset
02:50:445 -> 02:59:445 should be soft.
TraceTheKriken's Allies
Make the first two kiai sections louder.
02:05:445 (x) - Add note here for consistency
02:59:820 -> 03:06:195 - Add a break here
Alliance
03:26:445 (1) - Remove new combo.
Guide You Home
Copy the breaks on [Alliance]
02:00:945 (3) - This is covering the warning.
02:50:445 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:54:945 (1) - Don't place this that close. It's confusingly close to (5).
04:12:007 (x) - Why is there a kiai here >.>
Edit: Some more IRC stuff and bubbled.