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Rebecca Kneubuhl & Gabriel Mann - Guide You Home

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 30 December, 2010 at 7:23:45 AM

Artist: Rebecca Kneubuhl & Gabriel Mann
Title: Guide You Home
Source: Legend of Spyro
Tags: i will die for you dawn of the dragon cynder malefor tracethekriken
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4683kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alliance (4.41 stars, 428 notes)
  2. Friends (1.51 stars, 197 notes)
  3. Guide You Home (4.86 stars, 514 notes)
  4. TraceTheKriken's Allies (2.2 stars, 258 notes)
Download: Rebecca Kneubuhl & Gabriel Mann - Guide You Home
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is the credits for the game Spyro: Dawn Of The Dragon.
Thanks To Players For Modding My Beatmap.
Going In Pending!
Allies By TraceTheKriken.
Enjoy :D :D :D :D
Thanks Astom for the SB, and Beuchi-chan for the scores :D :D :D
Derekkyu!!!
I hope this can be ranked before New Year
1st Actual Beatmap.
lzy
nice map&song

star :)
H1ko
nice song :D good luck!!!
Jesss
Wow what a beautiful song!

Let's see my quick modding:

Overall
SPOILER
-BG Missing
-Source: "Spyro: Dawn of the Dragon" you made a mistake not typing "spacebar" after ":"
-Please add tags
-The song does not have Preview Point
-The initial timing was wrong...i reccommend using this offset: 570ms and reorganize Timing points (kiai and no kiai moments) according to new offset

[Alone]
SPOILER
-00:27:570 (3) - too close from the slider
-00:34:320 (4) - Align to the endpoint of slider 3
-00:39:945 (1,2,3,4) - it's my imagination, or the notes goes slightly narrower, try to keep 'em with the same spacing.
-00:39:945 (1,2,3,4) - Oh my gosh...this spinner is ridiculously long! long spinners make players get tired. instead of making that LOOOOOOOOONG spinner you should compose more steps.
-01:03:570 (3) - boring slider...can you cut its length to half and then make other identical slider with the other rest of length?
-01:11:445 (4) - Align equal to circle 01:09:195 (2) -
-01:15:945 (3) - the end of the slider does not finish in the right moment of the music, needs to extend 1/4 note (needs to fix the slider shape)
-01:55:320 (6) - Too close to the previous slider
-01:56:445 (1) - other LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG Spinner...and after that long spinner, Other spinner? oh no!
-02:11:070 (3) - boring slider...can you cut its length to half and then make other identical slider with the other rest of length? or breaking the monotony (the map gets boring if it's make just of copy and paste), compose different patterns.
-02:17:820 (3) - Move 1 grid up (grid Level 3)
-02:18:945 (4) - ^
-02:21:195 (1) - Too Close from the slider.
-02:32:445 (1) - another LONG! spinner e.e
-02:57:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move that combos til they're located at the center of the screen, and 1,2,3,4,5 needs to be better composed and 5 aligned to beginning of slider 6.
-03:14:445 (4) - Sorry to mess this slider...does not follow the music pattern, delete this and make circle
-03:14:820 (5) - put a circle
-03:15:195 (6) - slider (3/4 length) with return (must finish in this time: 03:15:945)
-03:16:320 (7,8,9,10) - Make them close to previous circles above mentioned
-03:16:320 (7,8,9,10) - Hum...i definitely hate that loooong spinner u.u
-03:53:445 (1) - oh no...i have to say...fix that slider...does not follow the music pattern...i reccomend follow this example (you must apply this!)

Conclussion: i hate LOOOOOOOOOOOONG spinners and long sliders...

[Allies]
SPOILER
Yay! my new offset almost don't affect the items position in the Beat Snap Divisor...BUT! almost doesn't means that you don't have to work on timing...move every circle to the right til you see that fits in the beats... Let's see...
-00:26:820 (5,6,7) - Too close from the slider...respect the spacing, if you're using 0,6x spacing, use it the most as possible, AND align to the end of the Slider 4.
-00:33:570 (2) - ^ but respect from slider 1
-00:33:570 (2,3,4,5,6) - reorganize that combo...i reccomend something like this:


-00:47:060 (8) - Align with circle 6 for better symetry.
-00:48:935 (1) - fix that slider, almost circular but not perfect. Looks really cool:


-00:52:695 (2,3,4,5,6) - needs to be respaced, looks awful that linear combos under a circle-shaped slider.
-01:08:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmmmm doesn't convince me that note patterns, looks awful...i reccommend this composition (spacing cannot be correct...composing is my speciality):

^ :B

-01:15:945 (1) - cut the end of slider to 01:18:195
-----Between 01:22:695 (6) - it feels empty (very empty)-----Compose it!
-01:35:435 (5) - Move (respecting the spacing), that circle is too close fron the end of slider
-01:50:810 (8) - Seems randomly assigned, but if that's your objective, please select "New Combo"
-01:51:945 (9,10,11) - That circles must be with "new combo" and i suggest to be in each corner of the screen.
-02:00:945 (5) - Cut This slider to point 02:02:820
-02:03:195 (1) - This Spinner, extend it 1/4 note (til time says 02:05:445)
-02:05:820 (1) - go to "Edit>Rotate by" a window will pop up, rotate that heart-shaped slider -6 degrees and will look pro.
-02:10:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks asymetrical, especially 2,4,6, please check 'em and make 2,4 6 looks alligned themselves.
-02:23:070 (1) - move the spinner to 02:23:445, then, cut until time says: 02:25:695. Then in this empty space, place a circle [02:23:070 (1)]
-02:27:945 (6) - i don't like that oval...rotate it, modelate it or make a circle, i reccommend:


02:32:820 (1) - use "edit>Flip Vertically" and put that Inside that circle, like this:


-02:35:070 (2) - errrmm cut this slider to 02:36:570
-Make a slider in 02:36:945.
-02:39:185 (4) - New Combo and it seems randomly located.
-02:40:310 (8) - New Combo
-02:48:195 (3) - New Combo
-03:08:810 (1) - meh! please locate near to the Heart-shaped slider and reorganize the combo.
-03:10:685 (1) - Delete this circle
-03:26:445 (10) - New Combo.
-Break before 03:36:560 (1) -
-03:39:560 (9) - Assymetric with 7, align it.
-04:11:820 (1) - Move it to 04:12:196 and volume down to level zero.
Conclussion: Respect Spacing...Open AImod Application for further settings and corrections
Ignacio_old
nice song :D
La Valse
lol... nice jomp=
Cyril Scarlet
(´・ω・`) /
Sonnyc
Orz X2 Points!!
KIA
:)
aRiskOfRain
Resnap all notes.

Other than that, good.
8Ball
<3
Mosya_old
star
A8mew
Good choice, beatmapping is solid (although, the difficulties feel underrated by a star).
eMJaReL
well done star it
^^
Astom
<-<








RomainD
GREAT SONG FOR A GREAT MAP

YES I AM SPYRO FAN
RomainD
please ranked this map,

she deserves him
RomainD
RANKED THIS MAP !!!
Dominto
A bit of a triple poster? Anyways, Nice map and song.
Mitten_old
Nice song
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