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FixedDerekku wrote:
A bubble already? owo Time for a full mod!
[General]
*Wowww that's a long title: http://puu.sh/Ceh Perhaps get rid of "(I Would Die For You)" and put that in tags instead? (minus the parenthesis, of course)
*I don't think that "Spyro" is needed in tags since it's already in the source.
*Source should be capitalized "Spyro: Dawn of the Dragon". Also, since it's actually "The Legend of Spyro", perhaps add "legend" to tags?
*Scorebar-colour isn't centered on scorebar-background correctly: http://puu.sh/Ceu
*You only need one scorebar-colour if it's not an animated one. So, remove three of them and keep one as just "scorebar-colour" without a number on the end.
*Some of the numbers have white edges around the top/bottom, but it's not that big a deal.
*Expected all of the difficulties to end at the same place that "Guide You Home" does.
[Friends]
*How about lowering Drain/OD/AR one tick each?
*Slider velocity is much better than last time.
*Distance spacing is still a bit higher than I'd expect for an Easy. It looks like you used ~1.07, but I'd like to see something like 0.9 here. Plus, it looks like the next diff has nearly the same distance spacing, thus this one should have closer spacing than it.
01:00:570 (1,2,3,4,1) - Accelerated spacing on an Easy? oxo
01:11:445 (5) - I really recommend avoiding short/repeating sliders like these on Easy diffs. They can be pretty confusing.
01:38:070 (4) - Even worse since it repeats on the red tick instead of the white.
01:54:945 (4) - This one isn't as bad with only two repeats, though, I suppose.
02:05:445 - I always think it's awkward to have kiai without a note to accompany it. How about adding a note here?
02:32:632 - Raise the volume of this section. It's much too quiet. =x
02:40:320 (2,3) - Even though it's the same rhythm as the previous slider, it's still a bit confusing. I'd make this a slider as well.
02:54:195 (2) - End isn't snapped right.
03:08:445 - Kiai would look better starting here (and with a note, of course).
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]
*How about lowering Drain/OD/AR one tick each?
01:06:570 (8) - The clap on the end of this sounds really awkward. How about a finish instead?
02:01:320 (1) - Expected this to be moved back to the red tick and lengthened.
02:14:070 (8) - same finish suggestion
02:25:882 (1) - A bit too long for a spinner, imo. Also, why does kiai end before the spinner does? (And where is the hitsound?)
02:39:195 (1) - expected a finish
02:50:820 (1) - Too far from the end of the spinner. If the note was in the center (or close to it) then it would be much better.
03:06:757 (1,2,1) - A bit too confusing for a normal. If you want to keep the repeating slider, though, you could try removing the two single notes and extend the slider.
03:17:070 (8) - finish the end?
03:23:820 (1,2) - spacing? 2 is too close to 1
03:35:820 (2) - not snapped right
03:36:945 (3) - looks like this one isn't either
03:38:445 (3) - ^
03:51:195 (4) - Decided to make this symmetrical for you. In the editor, go to File->Open .osu in notepad. Hit ctrl-f and find "230445" (that's the ms time for note 2). Delete the following three lines:
408,120,230445,1,0
408,120,230820,1,0
480,160,231195,2,0,B|496:336|344:376|200:384|8:368|40:168|40:168,2,660
and replace them with the following three:
408,128,230445,1,0
408,128,230820,1,0
480,176,231195,2,0,B|460:376|256:440|52:376|32:176,2,660
Then save, close the notepad file, and reopen your difficulty to see the changes. (2) and (3) were up too high and I completely remade (4).
03:56:820 (2,3,4) - (nazi) spacing is a bit inconsistent between these
04:00:288 (1) - move to the red tick and shorten
[Alliance]
*Lower difficulty settings than the last map? Raise drain 2 ticks, AR 1 tick, and OD 1 tick (that should be a bit better, so easy is 2/2/2, normal is 4/4/4, hard is 5/6/5, and insane is 7/7/7).
00:46:695 (5) - Both of the repeats are partially covered by the hitbursts (100/300s) from the previous notes. Not unrankable, but slightly hidden/confusing.
02:12:945 (4,5,6,7,8) - A bit unexpected/confusing
02:27:945 (1) - Kinda long, and also 02:32:632 (1) being only half a beat after the end of the spinner is too difficult.
02:32:632 - Raise the volume of this section. It's much too quiet. =x
02:55:320 (1,2) - spacing? (2) looks like it's only half a beat away instead of a whole white tick.
03:14:445 (7,8,9,10,1) - Clustered and hard to read.
03:24:195 (1) - Again, try to avoid notes only half a beat after a spinner. It's fine on Insane, but not really expected in here.
03:33:570 (1) - move back to the red tick and extend.
03:51:007 (1) - move to the white tick and shorten.
03:53:445 - Why are these notes soft instead of normal?
*Overall, the spacing is a bit too large for a "Hard", but it would be a bit harsh to ask you to re-distance the entire map at this stage...
[Guide You Home]
*Better than the last difficulty, at least.
00:38:820 (6,1,2) - Spacing? 1 is much too close to 6.
01:30:570 - This section is a bit too quiet.
04:01:320 - Much too quiet in here
04:09:195 (1) - Sounds kinda awkward since the bpm is slowing down and the sliderticks are really off. Maybe replace this with a spinner?
04:12:195 (1) - Expected this to be much longer, maybe to 04:15:945?
Not bad for your first map, but this could still use quite a bit of improvement. However, I'm not sure how much you'll be able to improve this since you'll be gone once January comes. Hopefuly this mod helps, though!
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG RANK THIS!
[General]
*Even with the title shortened, it looks like the title/artist/source is still a bit long: http://puu.sh/Czo I hate to ask, but would you mind moving the source to tags?
*Also, you forgot to add "i would die for you" to tags, so if you decide to move the source as well, your tags should be "legend spyro dawn of the dragon i would die for you cynder malefor tracethekriken"
*I'll ask Beuchi about the skin.
*For all difficulties, perhaps end kiai at 03:26:351 and start a new section at 03:26:445? I feel like that last chorus is a bit more powerful and warrants an extra fountain.
[Friends]
*Much better spacing now, although I have a few nazi adjustments to some notes that look noticeably off
00:42:195 (3) - move this up a grid to match 00:44:445 (2,3).
00:50:070 (2,3) - to the right one grid
01:40:320 (3) - up
02:05:445 - I'd still like to see a note here. :s
02:09:945 (3) - up to get rid of the big gap between 3 and 1
02:16:695 (2) - left and up
02:26:070 (1) - right
02:51:945 (2,1) - a bit too close to each other
02:54:195 (2,1) - and then these are a bit too far apart o3o
02:54:195 (2) - Also, the end of this still isn't snapped right. Make sure to fix this one.
02:55:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I feel like these should be spaced a bit closer since it's a quiet section
03:08:445 - Again, I suggest adding a note and start kiai here (since kiai should be the same on all of your difficulties).
03:44:445 (1) - down and right a few grids to get rid of the gap between 1 and 2
03:48:570 (5) - left a few grids
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]
00:53:070 (5) - (nazi) a bit close to 4, but far from the next combo (1). Maybe try something like this?: http://puu.sh/CAh
01:45:570 (2,3,4,5) - spacing is a bit confusing. Try spacing 2/3/4 closer together so that it's more apparent that 5 is more than a beat away.
01:55:132 (2) - (nazi) left a grid to make the spacing consistent
02:38:445 (6,7,8) - and move this stack down to prevent this: http://puu.sh/CAo
02:50:820 (1) - Again, much too far from the center. Try changing the whole pattern around so that 1 can be in the center.
03:16:695 (7) - down a grid
03:36:945 (3) - oops, must've missed this one. Clap -> Finish please ;p
[Alliance]
*I'd like to see more finishes in the choruses like the last two diffs have on "for you".
01:43:882 (1) - expected this on the white tick (and shortened)
01:50:820 (2) - a bit high up (goes under the score numbers)
02:59:070 (1) - I'd move this to the right a bit since it's kinda close to the last note
[Guide You Home]
*Same finish suggestion for the choruses.
03:08:445 - add a note here (and start kiai here) to be consistent with the other diffs
04:09:195 (1) - still sounds weird, so I'll add a new uninherited section here in my timing mod below.
[Timing]
On "Guide You Home", change the last inherited section on the slider to an uninherited one by unchecking this: http://puu.sh/CAO Then, click on the box for BPM and change it to 140. Make the slider a little bit longer so that it snapes to the white ticks properly, and then move/shorten/lengthen the spinner. Finally, add that same uninherited section to the other there difficulties (at 249,195ms) to keep things consistent.
*Even with the title shortened, it looks like the title/artist/source is still a bit long: http://puu.sh/Czo I hate to ask, but would you mind moving the source to tags?
*Also, you forgot to add "i would die for you" to tags, so if you decide to move the source as well, your tags should be "legend spyro dawn of the dragon i would die for you cynder malefor tracethekriken"
*I'll ask Beuchi about the skin.
*For all difficulties, perhaps end kiai at 03:26:351 and start a new section at 03:26:445? I feel like that last chorus is a bit more powerful and warrants an extra fountain.
[Friends]
*Much better spacing now, although I have a few nazi adjustments to some notes that look noticeably off
00:42:195 (3) - move this up a grid to match 00:44:445 (2,3).
00:50:070 (2,3) - to the right one grid
01:40:320 (3) - up
02:05:445 - I'd still like to see a note here. :s
02:09:945 (3) - up to get rid of the big gap between 3 and 1
02:16:695 (2) - left and up
02:26:070 (1) - right
02:51:945 (2,1) - a bit too close to each other
02:54:195 (2,1) - and then these are a bit too far apart o3o
02:54:195 (2) - Also, the end of this still isn't snapped right. Make sure to fix this one.
02:55:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I feel like these should be spaced a bit closer since it's a quiet section
03:08:445 - Again, I suggest adding a note and start kiai here (since kiai should be the same on all of your difficulties).
03:44:445 (1) - down and right a few grids to get rid of the gap between 1 and 2
03:48:570 (5) - left a few grids
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]
00:53:070 (5) - (nazi) a bit close to 4, but far from the next combo (1). Maybe try something like this?: http://puu.sh/CAh
01:45:570 (2,3,4,5) - spacing is a bit confusing. Try spacing 2/3/4 closer together so that it's more apparent that 5 is more than a beat away.
01:55:132 (2) - (nazi) left a grid to make the spacing consistent
02:38:445 (6,7,8) - and move this stack down to prevent this: http://puu.sh/CAo
02:50:820 (1) - Again, much too far from the center. Try changing the whole pattern around so that 1 can be in the center.
03:16:695 (7) - down a grid
03:36:945 (3) - oops, must've missed this one. Clap -> Finish please ;p
[Alliance]
*I'd like to see more finishes in the choruses like the last two diffs have on "for you".
01:43:882 (1) - expected this on the white tick (and shortened)
01:50:820 (2) - a bit high up (goes under the score numbers)
02:59:070 (1) - I'd move this to the right a bit since it's kinda close to the last note
[Guide You Home]
*Same finish suggestion for the choruses.
03:08:445 - add a note here (and start kiai here) to be consistent with the other diffs
04:09:195 (1) - still sounds weird, so I'll add a new uninherited section here in my timing mod below.
[Timing]
On "Guide You Home", change the last inherited section on the slider to an uninherited one by unchecking this: http://puu.sh/CAO Then, click on the box for BPM and change it to 140. Make the slider a little bit longer so that it snapes to the white ticks properly, and then move/shorten/lengthen the spinner. Finally, add that same uninherited section to the other there difficulties (at 249,195ms) to keep things consistent.
Boom~Derekku wrote:
*I'll ask Beuchi about the skin.
A few irc fixes, aaaaaaaand here you go! Nice job~
Guess I can avoid nazi mod~Derekku wrote:
A few irc fixes, aaaaaaaand here you go! Nice job~
Actually I might have to point some stuff out if I have time later
I could've nazi'd it more, but only went with blatantly obvious spacing inconsistencies instead. It's a first-time map, so we can't expect perfection. :VJames2250 wrote:
Guess I can avoid nazi mod~Derekku wrote:
A few irc fixes, aaaaaaaand here you go! Nice job~
Actually I might have to point some stuff out if I have time later
Topic Starter
Derekkyu!!Derekku wrote:
A few irc fixes, aaaaaaaand here you go! Nice job~
[Friends]
04:09:195 (x) - This offset isn't needed at all on this difficulty since it's unused. Remove it.
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]
00:16:320 (x) - This green line isn't needed at all since you have the offset already for the volume. Oh and increase the volume a bit on this section, it's too low right now.
04:09:195 (x) - Same as Friends.
[Alliance]
00:23:070 (1) ~ 00:55:320 (3) - Volume on this section is way too low! Increase it.
02:50:070 (2) ~ 03:08:257 (4) - ^
04:09:195 (x) - Same as Friends.
[Guide You Home]
00:23:070 (1) ~ 00:54:570 (8) - Volume on this section is way too low! Increase it.
02:50:445 (4) ~ 02:59:445 (6) - ^
04:01:320 (3) ~ 04:08:070 (2) - ^
04:09:195 (1) - ^
Have to pop, sorry.
04:09:195 (x) - This offset isn't needed at all on this difficulty since it's unused. Remove it.
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]
00:16:320 (x) - This green line isn't needed at all since you have the offset already for the volume. Oh and increase the volume a bit on this section, it's too low right now.
04:09:195 (x) - Same as Friends.
[Alliance]
00:23:070 (1) ~ 00:55:320 (3) - Volume on this section is way too low! Increase it.
02:50:070 (2) ~ 03:08:257 (4) - ^
04:09:195 (x) - Same as Friends.
[Guide You Home]
00:23:070 (1) ~ 00:54:570 (8) - Volume on this section is way too low! Increase it.
02:50:445 (4) ~ 02:59:445 (6) - ^
04:01:320 (3) ~ 04:08:070 (2) - ^
04:09:195 (1) - ^
Have to pop, sorry.
The uninherited section is for an actual timing change which will affect the main menu. Thus, it should be the same on all difficulties.
Don't remove the 2nd offset from any difficulty then, but fix the other things I've pointed out 
Topic Starter
Fixedosuplayer111 wrote:
[Friends]
04:09:195 (x) - This offset isn't needed at all on this difficulty since it's unused. Remove it.
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]
00:16:320 (x) - This green line isn't needed at all since you have the offset already for the volume. Oh and increase the volume a bit on this section, it's too low right now.
04:09:195 (x) - Same as Friends.
[Alliance]
00:23:070 (1) ~ 00:55:320 (3) - Volume on this section is way too low! Increase it.
02:50:070 (2) ~ 03:08:257 (4) - ^
04:09:195 (x) - Same as Friends.
[Guide You Home]
00:23:070 (1) ~ 00:54:570 (8) - Volume on this section is way too low! Increase it.
02:50:445 (4) ~ 02:59:445 (6) - ^
04:01:320 (3) ~ 04:08:070 (2) - ^
04:09:195 (1) - ^
Have to pop, sorry.
After some more IRC Modding...
Re-Bubbled~
Re-Bubbled~
Ranked
I'm so happy 
my aunt, dead 1 year ago, loved this song and today, 31 december 2010, it's ranked THANK YOU ALL, THANK YOU !!!
my aunt, dead 1 year ago, loved this song and today, 31 december 2010, it's ranked THANK YOU ALL, THANK YOU !!!OH MY GOD
OH MY GOD
Why didn't I see this before?
FFFFFFFFFFF
...yeah the squealing should be evidence that I'm a fan of the LoS series
But I forgot all about this song,
then looking at the ranked maps and saw the source: Legend of Spyro...
...I suddenly remembered everything. God.
OH MY GOD
Why didn't I see this before?
FFFFFFFFFFF
...yeah the squealing should be evidence that I'm a fan of the LoS series
But I forgot all about this song,
then looking at the ranked maps and saw the source: Legend of Spyro...
...I suddenly remembered everything. God.