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спс!Gordon123 wrote:
привет
[general]ok
пожалуйста включи во всех диффах,а то я забыл :
[Easy][Normal]
00:04:385 (3) - сделай этот слайдер похожим на 00:02:990 (1) - сделай такую же форму,для идентичности хороший глаз, fixed[Kani's Insane]
00:40:315 (3) - может быть ты удалишь этот слайдер и сделаешь просто круг,так как это заучил лучше
00:51:478 (3) - ^ так же its ok, and leave 1/1 beat here feels more comfortalble[Extra]
pls use combo colors how in all mapset !done
00:32:815 (3,4) - может быть ты поставишь (4) ближе к (3) ,так как я считаю что это не удобно прожать > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9052588 its ok, a little jump after a slider is my purpose
00:39:268 (1) - сделай это немного красивее > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9052593 done~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good Luck
Regraz wrote:
recheck 最后可以来一个大闪光啊 done!
[Hard]
01:38:222 (2,3) - I think rhythm should actually be https://puu.sh/xeEo1/866db4000f.png to follow the main music layer better. [It seems that you didn't change it as my previous instructed yet your reply indicates you've fixed that, do you have other reasons for that?] i remind i have changed it, but donno why, it missed! now fiexed again
[Extra]
00:47:640 (1,2) - Your argument concerning "strong fluctuations" is questionable. You might say 00:48:164 (3) - has a strong sense of melody on its head, yet it is hardly possible to find any distinct elements on 2, that is not blended with 1.
I could hear clear drum sound on 00:47:989 (2) - its from another track not as 1 and 3, i'd like to show the diffrenece of these two tracks) why i dont use the same rhythm as 00:36:478 (1,2) - is because i want to make some difference in the second part,for better gameplay and also increase some difficulty.
Seems Kani hasn't replied to my mod yet, I think I need to wait before they reply. Or there will be someone else replying for them? I will continue rechecking this map when after the expected reply is posted. kani has fixed them all, but i missed the reply, you could check them direct.
thx again for check
谢谢 lfj ~jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
01:43:455 - 01:46:245 - 这部分每个diff的snapping都有点不同,最好都查看一下确保一致性(包括guest)
看了下,原来低难度的节奏有毛病, 统一了除hyper, ex以外的所有diff的下法. kani 用的1/6,ex混着下,都是跟的主音轨,打起来没问题.
[Easy]
00:56:013 (1,2,3) - 这里可以包的好看一些 试着修了下
01:35:780 (2) - 间距 好
[Normal]
00:29:501 (3) - 这个的方向容易误导新手,尾巴最好摆到左边 ok
[Hard]
00:44:850 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏有点不对,建议换成这样 果然好很多!
01:40:838 (2) - 这里我建议你跳过1/6,因为你之后的那个跳过了显的这里很违和 改成单点了
[Kani's Hyper]
00:54:966 (4,5) - stacking feels a bit weird here, all previous sections used jumps, so it makes more sense to do so here as well
01:21:478 (2) - too much curve in this one slider compared to the rest
01:42:408 (1) - remove NC 全改了
[Insane]
00:13:803 (1) - 这里可以用快滑条1.3x done!
00:45:199 (2,3) - 往上挪一点 移了0.1
00:46:769 - 这里不放个三连?要放感觉还是填满比较好,那就变成4连了,又有点密了,仔细想了下整段都没跟,还是算了
00:48:687 (4) - 尾巴音效不对 都删了
01:28:455 (2,3,4) - 这里没包好 修好了
[Heatherfield]
00:25:141 (4,1) - 这两个离得远一点会更舒服
00:50:431 (1,2,3) - 这里叠着有点难读,建议00:50:955 (3) 挪出去
01:37:088 - 这里可以加个圈 全改了
[Extra]
00:15:024 (6,7,8) - 这个角度再小一点好打一些 虽然我感觉还挺好打的,但有两个人这么说了,改小了
00:25:257 (11) - 这个snap的不对吧 wt..是我错了!
01:07:175 (1,2) - 这两个应该再远一些 这里我是两个一组缩短间距
01:24:617 (2) - 音量再低一些 -20%
01:40:838 (1,2,3) - 这张图唯一的1/6连打,有点防不胜防,建议用滑条带过或者把之后的滑条也换成连打 都改成连打了,暴涨0.2星
thxjonathanlfj wrote:
之前因为有unsnap所以我只能重泡,你找Regraz rank吧
im serching forRegraz wrote:
Forgot to ask, do you have any metadata references about this track?
Congratulations <3Gordon123 wrote:
Good job my friend <3