Regraz wrote:

What's wrong with the hitsounds in Beginner and Normal?

I suggest to rename Beginner to Easy and Hyper to Insane

Regraz wrote:

M4M, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645502

I suggest to rename Beginner to Easy .
You need to rename Hyper to something else since in osu! Hyper is mostly referred to difficulties that are relatively easier than Insane. So how about change to kani's Hyper and Insane

[General]
Keep your letterbox setting consistent.
You didn't set custom combo colors for diffs by Kani and Heatherfield, is that intended? mean to do that, i will ask them

[Easy]
中间break好多绿线 删了吧看着挺闹心的 Normal也是
01:53:920 (1) - 最后还是用一个note比较好，那么重 ok，all fixed

[Normal]
00:28:629 (2,3) - 擦边了，不好
01:51:129 (4,2) - This overlap needs to be fixed done

[Hard]
00:43:106 (4,3) - Slight overlap needs to be fixed. ok, separated
01:12:757 (1,2,3) - Same spacing should be applied to 01:13:106 (2,3) - as 01:12:757 (1,2) - i think its ok, coz the music between 1&2 and 2&3 are kinda different, 3 is more like the continuance of 2, so i use the normal DS
01:38:222 (2,3) - I think rhythm should actually be https://puu.sh/xeEo1/866db4000f.png to follow the main music layer better. seems good!
01:40:838 (2) - This is of course not 1/4. change to 1/6

[Hyper]
00:02:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think spacings here need to be nerf'ed. This is the intro and relatively calm part of the entire song but it is almost as hard as the last part of Kiai due to those single-taps. ok, decresed the DS for 0.2x, i think the beginning is quite intensely ，not as normally song， so cant nerf more

[Extra]
00:25:838 (3,4,5) - I think 1/4 spacing is quite overdosed. Same at 00:32:815 (3,4,5) - . The music does not provide enough support for them. i decreased them to half now
00:45:373 (4,5,6,7) - I would like cast doubt on this rhythm. The sound at 00:45:548 - is obvisously more intense than 00:45:461 (5) - . I think the rhythm here should remain , here is a special place to transit 2 totally same part in the music and it do have a rhythm like this , but u also said about the sound, so i increase the sound volume 30%， now it sounds more naturally and fun to play
00:47:640 (1,2) - I don't think this is a eligible pattern, applying such a big spacing for 1/4 gap is frightening. Same for 00:50:431 (1,2) - and similar patterns. I think its ok here, the note after a long slider we could have enough time to prepare this jump; and its a extra, as a normal player i played and feels ok; the music here has strong fluctuations, put the note at the beginning of slider will perferctlly show this melody.
00:58:105 (1,2) - Each of them needs to be reversed for one more time, as the music apparently suggests. done
01:43:629 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't think this is a nice idea because you are switching tracks you follow too frequently. You need to focus on one track for at least a certain period of time.I need a little time here to solve thesekeep

Regraz wrote:

Heatherfield's Insane
I think you need to go through this kind of rhythms: 00:14:676 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:18:862 (3,4,5) - 00:21:652 (4,5,6,7) - 00:23:048 (2,3,4,5) - . Make sure they are consistent. The core problem lies in whether to omit the beat on the whiteline or not.
The pattern without object on whiteline starts from 00:19:734 (1) - and repeated itself after another long whiteline. I found it inappropriate to do more, that's why I only used it twice — to add some changes in the map, but not too much.
01:19:036 (4,4) - 01:21:827 (4) - These 3 multiple reverses are quite abrupt and could entangle players.
I agree, but the sliders are not fast and, experienced players would hold their cursors and wait to read the coming pattern without breaking the combo, so I think it's fine. And I did it on purpose!
01:23:942 (1) - I think 1/4 is already enough.
Alright, I'll change it. But I wonder if it is compulsory?
01:30:461 (7) - I think this needs to be removed for it sounds pretty overmapped. More important, you didn't apply five note streams for other places in this section.
I did used it in here 01:27:408 (4,5,6,7,8) - , but I think you are right about consistency since I didn't used the pattern after these two. I also think it's overmapped, but without it this part would be quite boring. I tried to go without the streams and it didn't work quite well for me. So I made some alterations to the later part to adapt the five note stream pattern and the repetitive triangle pattern.

[Mahua] wrote:

Swan专业户

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  пожалуйста включи во всех диффах,а то я забыл :
  

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  00:04:385 (3) - сделай этот слайдер похожим на 00:02:990 (1) - сделай такую же форму,для идентичности

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  00:40:315 (3) - может быть ты удалишь этот слайдер и сделаешь просто круг,так как это заучил лучше
  00:51:478 (3) - ^ так же

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  pls use combo colors how in all mapset !

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  00:32:815 (3,4) - может быть ты поставишь (4) ближе к (3) ,так как я считаю что это не удобно прожать > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9052588
  00:39:268 (1) - сделай это немного красивее > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9052593

Gordon123 wrote:

привет
[general]

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  пожалуйста включи во всех диффах,а то я забыл :
  

ok
[Easy]

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  00:04:385 (3) - сделай этот слайдер похожим на 00:02:990 (1) - сделай такую же форму,для идентичности хороший глаз, fixed

[Normal]

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  00:40:315 (3) - может быть ты удалишь этот слайдер и сделаешь просто круг,так как это заучил лучше
  00:51:478 (3) - ^ так же its ok, and leave 1/1 beat here feels more comfortalble

[Kani's Insane]

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  pls use combo colors how in all mapset !done

[Extra]

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  00:32:815 (3,4) - может быть ты поставишь (4) ближе к (3) ,так как я считаю что это не удобно прожать > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9052588 its ok, a little jump after a slider is my purpose
  00:39:268 (1) - сделай это немного красивее > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9052593 done

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Good Luck

Regraz wrote:

recheck 最后可以来一个大闪光啊 done！

[Hard]
01:38:222 (2,3) - I think rhythm should actually be https://puu.sh/xeEo1/866db4000f.png to follow the main music layer better. [It seems that you didn't change it as my previous instructed yet your reply indicates you've fixed that, do you have other reasons for that?] i remind i have changed it, but donno why, it missed! now fiexed again

[Extra]
00:47:640 (1,2) - Your argument concerning "strong fluctuations" is questionable. You might say 00:48:164 (3) - has a strong sense of melody on its head, yet it is hardly possible to find any distinct elements on 2, that is not blended with 1.
I could hear clear drum sound on 00:47:989 (2) - its from another track not as 1 and 3, i'd like to show the diffrenece of these two tracks) why i dont use the same rhythm as 00:36:478 (1,2) - is because i want to make some difference in the second part，for better gameplay and also increase some difficulty.

Seems Kani hasn't replied to my mod yet, I think I need to wait before they reply. Or there will be someone else replying for them? I will continue rechecking this map when after the expected reply is posted. kani has fixed them all, but i missed the reply, you could check them direct.
thx again for check

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
01:43:455 - 01:46:245 - 这部分每个diff的snapping都有点不同，最好都查看一下确保一致性（包括guest）
看了下，原来低难度的节奏有毛病, 统一了除hyper, ex以外的所有diff的下法. kani 用的1/6，ex混着下，都是跟的主音轨，打起来没问题.


[Easy]
00:56:013 (1,2,3) - 这里可以包的好看一些 试着修了下
01:35:780 (2) - 间距 好

[Normal]
00:29:501 (3) - 这个的方向容易误导新手，尾巴最好摆到左边 ok

[Hard]
00:44:850 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏有点不对，建议换成这样 果然好很多！
01:40:838 (2) - 这里我建议你跳过1/6，因为你之后的那个跳过了显的这里很违和 改成单点了

[Kani's Hyper]
00:54:966 (4,5) - stacking feels a bit weird here, all previous sections used jumps, so it makes more sense to do so here as well
01:21:478 (2) - too much curve in this one slider compared to the rest
01:42:408 (1) - remove NC 全改了

[Insane]
00:13:803 (1) - 这里可以用快滑条1.3x done！
00:45:199 (2,3) - 往上挪一点 移了0.1
00:46:769 - 这里不放个三连？要放感觉还是填满比较好，那就变成4连了，又有点密了，仔细想了下整段都没跟，还是算了
00:48:687 (4) - 尾巴音效不对 都删了
01:28:455 (2,3,4) - 这里没包好 修好了

[Heatherfield]
00:25:141 (4,1) - 这两个离得远一点会更舒服
00:50:431 (1,2,3) - 这里叠着有点难读，建议00:50:955 (3) 挪出去
01:37:088 - 这里可以加个圈 全改了

[Extra]
00:15:024 (6,7,8) - 这个角度再小一点好打一些 虽然我感觉还挺好打的，但有两个人这么说了，改小了
00:25:257 (11) - 这个snap的不对吧 wt..是我错了！
01:07:175 (1,2) - 这两个应该再远一些 这里我是两个一组缩短间距
01:24:617 (2) - 音量再低一些 -20%
01:40:838 (1,2,3) - 这张图唯一的1/6连打，有点防不胜防，建议用滑条带过或者把之后的滑条也换成连打 都改成连打了，暴涨0.2星

jonathanlfj wrote:

之前因为有unsnap所以我只能重泡，你找Regraz rank吧

Regraz wrote:

Forgot to ask, do you have any metadata references about this track?

Gordon123 wrote:

Good job my friend <3