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Iria Hosizaki - Private Sky

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[ L u k a s ] wrote:

M4M from my queue kek

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Eh, why isn't the first 5 seconds mapped, it wouldn't make sense for 00:05:124 (1) - to be there. Either map the first 5 seconds, or remove the object. the first 5 seconds is really hard to map because of how the main note is just one held note, and the guitar isn't really worth mapping, so i map when the first 'important' instrument plays
00:32:902 (1,2,3) - This is the same melody as 00:29:939 (1,2,3,4) - so it would make sense to map the parts same way. there is a definite difference the second time around because of the piano, there is a repeat slider there because there is a strong note on the repeat, if i just ended the slider their i would have to make a weird and slightly overmapped slider on the red tick to follow the piano
01:06:976 (1,2,3) - Rhythm isn't good, try this
01:12:902 (1,2,3) - Same these are mapped as 1/1 because its the lowest diff in the set and i dont want to overdo it on 1/2, the bass/drums also follow a 1/1 pattern here, so i think its fine, maybe if more people suggest
01:27:717 (1) - Shorten this slider by two ticks what for? i think the bell on the white tick is more more important here
01:28:643 (2) - Move this to 01:28:458 - same reasoning as above, i prefer the current emphasis

Spring Break

Nice Diff
thanks for the mod!
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[ L u k a s ] wrote:

00:05:124 (1,2,3,1) - This might be hard for some players since you can't really hear the melody that good. Delete that i don't think people are THAT deaf.
00:07:532 (1) - Double the slider for better rhythm following. i'd rather put heavy emphasize on the vocals as ive done so for the entirety of the intro
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Hard diffs aren't very suitable. Keep the spacing consistent. with the current bpm, players at this level should be able to handle it. its not like the rc is against jumps in hard difficulties.
00:24:013 (1) - Same, this bit is calm and it cant have big spacing emphasis. new vocal section so spacing increase,
00:26:791 (5) - Same intense beat so spacing increase
00:29:754 (6) - Don't overlap. it wont be visual during gameplay so it shouldnt be a problem
00:29:939 (1) - Big spacing beginning of new section so spacing increase
00:32:902 (1) - Same same
00:35:309 (5) - Same, this doesn't even have emphasis so it makes even less sense polished a bit
Since it's just repeating same thing over and over, I just want you to remap this with more consistent spacing, since it appears to be too hard and unpredictable. i think i've followed the song properly with emphasize and rhythm, so idk what the problem is. a hard is supposed to be hard.
Thanks!

UPDATE
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: privatesky.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6235,18087,35865,40124,41791,59569,62532,65124,66976,98272,98365,98458,100680,105495
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Private Sky
TitleUnicode:Private Sky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete 羽々音 小鳥 Habane Kotori pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
BeatmapID:1188944
BeatmapSetID:558107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Sotarks
m4m

winter break
00:13:458 (1,2) - i'll recommand you to use the same spacing as you are using 00:06:606 (2,3) - here for consistency, atm it's too close spacing.

00:27:347 (2) - that reverse is kinda out of place like theres no sound on 00:27:717 -

00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - those are really unconfortable to play, and according to the drum snare a regular jump could've been better.

01:01:421 (1,2) - muting those slider ends could be a good solution

01:06:976 (1) - spacing with 01:06:606 (1) - is a bit too far, consider stacking 01:06:976 (1) - on 01:06:606 (1) - 's head ?

01:36:235 (3) - why this is 1/3 ??
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frost
01:18:180 - can you avoid mapping that note here, there's no sound..

01:18:643 (9,1) - spacing too missreading i almost thought it was a jump stream

01:31:976 (1,2) - overlap kinda triggers me 'cause poeple will think 01:32:347 (2) - this is 1/2 slider since it's covered by previous one, consider unstack?
good diff, but please your hitsounds make me puke just copy log's one.
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my angel devidad
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - you don't wanna keep ds here dud?

00:35:309 (5) - stack this on 00:34:013 (1) - 's end it's pretty nice structure !

00:59:198 (6,7) - kinda dense rythmn here how about replacing this by a 1/2 slider ?

01:40:680 (4) - nc xd
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normal
00:05:124 (1) - imo you can delete that safely, it's not really needed

00:18:087 (6) - nc?
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gl!
Log Off Now
955 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Log Off Now

Sotarks wrote:

m4m

winter break
00:13:458 (1,2) - i'll recommand you to use the same spacing as you are using 00:06:606 (2,3) - here for consistency, atm it's too close spacing. changed so its same visual distance

00:27:347 (2) - that reverse is kinda out of place like theres no sound on 00:27:717 - ya but idk how i can change this into a 1/1 without messing up the rest of the patterning, will figure smt out later :p

00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - those are really unconfortable to play, and according to the drum snare a regular jump could've been better. these notes are placed like this because the drums play the same sound twice each time, so i represented this by grouping the sounds together and having a jump between them rather than having a jump between each note to make it more interesting (and personally i dont think it feels bad to play either)

01:01:421 (1,2) - muting those slider ends could be a good solution ya

01:06:976 (1) - spacing with 01:06:606 (1) - is a bit too far, consider stacking 01:06:976 (1) - on 01:06:606 (1) - 's head ? i moved it a bit closer, but i dont wanna stack it because that would look ugly af and i would also lose the emphasis on the chorus and big change in music here

01:36:235 (3) - why this is 1/3 ?? the piano is 1/3 here, i thought it was 1/4 originally but its not
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normal
00:05:124 (1) - imo you can delete that safely, it's not really needed wanna start each diff of at the same time, maybe if more people think its not important ill delete

00:18:087 (6) - nc? an nc here wouldn't effect anything in the gameplay so no point
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gl!
thanks for the mod!
zhuxiaoyan
533 posts
Joined October 2014
zhuxiaoyan

Sotarks wrote:

m4m

frost
01:18:180 - can you avoid mapping that note here, there's no sound.. i like the slider there and it is not so intense so i ignored it by using slider end (beats that are worth emphasizing i would use hitcircle or sliderstart)

01:18:643 (9,1) - spacing too missreading i almost thought it was a jump stream theres eomthing here 01:18:735 (10) -

01:31:976 (1,2) - overlap kinda triggers me 'cause poeple will think 01:32:347 (2) - this is 1/2 slider since it's covered by previous one, consider unstack? you can still see 01:32:347 (2) - length over the 1/1 slider
good diff, but please your hitsounds make me puke just copy log's one. puking is hot
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gl!
Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Dilectus

Sotarks wrote:

00:11:050 (2,3,4) - you don't wanna keep ds here dud? reduced spacing slightly cause i want to keep my spacing concept

00:35:309 (5) - stack this on 00:34:013 (1) - 's end it's pretty nice structure ! would make my spacing concept inconsistent where i've mostly emphasized louder beats that stand out through spacing (00:08:272 (3,4) - bell, 00:11:050 (2,3,4) - flute, 00:22:532 (1,2) - piano, 00:28:828 (2,3) - vocal)

00:59:198 (6,7) - kinda dense rythmn here how about replacing this by a 1/2 slider ?

01:40:680 (4) - nc xd
thank you papa

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Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
[General]

  1. Unused hitsounds:
    1. drum-sliderslide69.wav
    2. drum-slidertick69.wav
    3. soft-slidertick68.wav
[Normal]

  1. I disagree with the break. Just curious, why put one tho?
  2. 01:29:569 (3,1) - This part too, idk why you left these empty when the song rhythm's still there, I guess we have different interpretations on this zz
[DavidEd's Hard]

  1. 01:17:532 (2,5) - Could mislead the players considering they have different kicks. Would be better if you could differentiate these sliders for a better readability, there are ways to do this but putting NC on 01:18:272 (5) is probably the simplest way to do so.
[frost's Insane]

  1. Using soft-hitclap + Normal sampleset in kiai kinda overpowers other hitsounds you used, personally I don't think Normal sampleset is really needed cuz soft-hitclap should be enough to represent the instrument as it's already the strongest hitsound you used.
[Winter Break]

  1. 00:18:087 - mmm personally I prefer you to focus solely on vocal on this part like 00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5) cuz you focused on piano and other stuff so the rhythm density didn't reflect the calmness of the section as much, atm the rhythm density on this doesn't feel really different from 00:41:791 despite having a different intensity on these sections.
  2. 00:41:791 (1) - A 1/1 slider would work better, to me feels like 00:41:791 (1,2,3,4,5) is a 1/2 spam and if you're following vocal then you would rather to have sth clickable at 00:42:347 than 00:42:161 .
  3. 00:51:421 (4,5) - Could make a pattern here if you consider these as the same sounds, feels kinda wasted with that repeat slider.
  4. 01:01:421 (1,2,3) - Doesn't feel like they're worthy enough for extended sliders, I mean, just a pattern with 1/2 sliders would already work fine.
  5. Also keep in mind that giving a consistent visual spacing will make the map cleaner, sth like 00:31:050 (1,1,2) - 01:23:087 (1,2) - would look a lot better if you give them more visual spacing like 00:09:198 (1,2,3) .
Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~
Log Off Now
955 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Log Off Now

Electroz wrote:

[General]

  1. Unused hitsounds:
    1. drum-sliderslide69.wav
    2. drum-slidertick69.wav
    3. soft-slidertick68.wav deleted
[Normal]

  1. I disagree with the break. Just curious, why put one tho? put the break here because there is a noticable difference between the section before and the section after it, also because this is the lowest difficulty in the set and their isn't an easy, having a break here makes it easier for new players to catch their breath before going into the rest of the map which is significantly more intense than this section
  2. 01:29:569 (3,1) - This part too, idk why you left these empty when the song rhythm's still there, I guess we have different interpretations on this zz left these out for more emphasis on the first note of the outro, it also allows for a bigger movement (i know ds is a thing, but visually this looks like a much bigger gap) which makes it feel more involving, i might make a extended slider to cover for it, but i think how it is at the moment is fine
[Winter Break]

  1. 00:18:087 - mmm personally I prefer you to focus solely on vocal on this part like 00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5) cuz you focused on piano and other stuff so the rhythm density didn't reflect the calmness of the section as much, atm the rhythm density on this doesn't feel really different from 00:41:791 despite having a different intensity on these sections. honestly i think this section is ok, i understand what you mean, but if i only focus on the vocals here i miss out a lot of little piano injections which i feel are really important to the song, i'll take a look and see if i can reduce the density a little bit, but i'm not gonna ignore big parts of the song, especially considering this is the top diff
  2. 00:41:791 (1) - A 1/1 slider would work better, to me feels like 00:41:791 (1,2,3,4,5) is a 1/2 spam and if you're following vocal then you would rather to have sth clickable at 00:42:347 than 00:42:161 . agree, also helps make it consistent with the patterning i use later on
  3. 00:51:421 (4,5) - Could make a pattern here if you consider these as the same sounds, feels kinda wasted with that repeat slider. i understand the reasoning here, but doing that would mean i lose the emphasis that i put on the two bass kicks leading into the pizzicato string transition
  4. 01:01:421 (1,2,3) - Doesn't feel like they're worthy enough for extended sliders, I mean, just a pattern with 1/2 sliders would already work fine. yea
  5. Also keep in mind that giving a consistent visual spacing will make the map cleaner, sth like 00:31:050 (1,1,2) - 01:23:087 (1,2) - would look a lot better if you give them more visual spacing like 00:09:198 (1,2,3) . fixed
Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~
thanks for the mod!
Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Dilectus

Electroz wrote:

01:17:532 (2,5) - Could mislead the players considering they have different kicks. Would be better if you could differentiate these sliders for a better readability, there are ways to do this but putting NC on 01:18:272 (5) is probably the simplest way to do so i dont want to change rhythm so i'll nc instead because of it being one of the only repeat slider with more than 1 repeat. also did nc on 01:05:124 (1) - for that same reason
Thanks Electoz!

fixes
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Private Sky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
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zhuxiaoyan
533 posts
Joined October 2014
zhuxiaoyan

Electroz wrote:

[General]

  1. Unused hitsounds:
    1. drum-sliderslide69.wav
    2. drum-slidertick69.wav
    3. soft-slidertick68.wav

[frost's Insane]

  1. Using soft-hitclap + Normal sampleset in kiai kinda overpowers other hitsounds you used, personally I don't think Normal sampleset is really needed cuz soft-hitclap should be enough to represent the instrument as it's already the strongest hitsound you used.
k removed all normal samplesets


Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

diff http://puu.sh/uCOWt/b8ad63495b.osu
CircleFairy
221 posts
Joined January 2015
CircleFairy
Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Normal

00:49:754 (4) - I like a note on the slider here it fits the song better.
01:03:643 (3) - This would flow better for a beginner if it was left a bit inside the upcoming spinner.

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:087 (3) - I like this note better outside of the slider, it makes the next slider flow better.
00:29:754 (6) - This note needs a whistle.
00:38:458 (4,5) - Make these flow better towards the next slider.

frost's Insane

00:23:828 (4) - I don't like the placement of this note, I like it more on the next sliders end.
01:06:421 (1) - I feel like this note can flow better too.

Winter Break

00:15:865 (3) - I like a reverse slider here more.
01:22:902 (4) - This flows better out of the slider, personally I like it on the center line a bit under the sliders.

Overall

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3
Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Dilectus

CircleFairy wrote:

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:087 (3) - I like this note better outside of the slider, it makes the next slider flow better. i prefer keeping the stack for the 1/2 break so people dont get confused if it used the same spacing as everything else.
00:29:754 (6) - This note needs a whistle. fix
00:38:458 (4,5) - Make these flow better towards the next slider. fix
thank you!

changes
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: privatesky.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6235,18087,35865,40124,41791,59569,62532,65124,66976,98272,98365,98458,100680,105495
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Private Sky
TitleUnicode:Private Sky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete 羽々音 小鳥 Habane Kotori pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
BeatmapID:1188944
BeatmapSetID:558107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"SnowPresent.avi"
0,0,"privateskybg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
310,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
6235,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
18087,-117.647058823529,4,2,3,30,0,0
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41791,-100,4,2,3,45,0,0
59569,-125,4,2,3,45,0,0
62532,-100,4,2,3,55,0,0
65495,-125,4,2,3,30,0,0
66606,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
66976,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
90680,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
105495,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 196,146,115
Combo2 : 253,218,254
Combo3 : 242,121,167
Combo4 : 190,190,190

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Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Normal

00:49:754 (4) - I like a note on the slider here it fits the song better. doing this would break my consistency with the previous verse
01:03:643 (3) - This would flow better for a beginner if it was left a bit inside the upcoming spinner. maybe change, i see what you mean but this note placement is intentional to help add emphasis on the loud vocal/climax of the buildup

Winter Break

00:15:865 (3) - I like a reverse slider here more. doing that would mean i lose a lot of emphasis i put on the vocals, and their isnt any real significant note anyway to hit on the red/white ticks after so no change on this one
01:22:902 (4) - This flows better out of the slider, personally I like it on the center line a bit under the sliders. i prefer the current back and forth motion, but i've moved this note to make the overlap more even on both sides

Overall

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3
thanks ^^ updated (also fixed some missing hitsounds in a drum fill on davids diff)
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CircleFairy wrote:

Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313



frost's Insane

00:23:828 (4) - I don't like the placement of this note, I like it more on the next sliders end. its fine
01:06:421 (1) - I feel like this note can flow better too. flow is usually between more than 1 note lol



The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3
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hi am bak

Reduced spacing and sv in the middle part of Winter Break as per Monstratas suggestions but want to keep my rhythm for reasons above, fixed tags
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the thing said i would only get one kudosu for modding lol
I was pretty tempted to ignore your request because pcmasterrace is more just obnoxious these days :/

General
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - 01:36:235 (3) - These are 3/8 not 1/3. Resnap them with 1/8 beatsnap
00:28:272 (1) - This is 1/6

Winter Break
00:15:124 (1) - Move this slider head to 430,140 to avoid overlap with 00:13:828 (2,3) - , and reduce how much curve slider has
00:19:569 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't following vocal well, make 00:19:569 (1) - 1/1
00:19:569 (1) - nibba y u using old sliders
00:22:532 (1) - Make this 1/1 or a circle to avoid overmapped tail, as there's no sound. Makes 00:23:087 (3) - clearer there's a sound on this tail
00:25:495 (1) - etc same thing. Avoid using 1/2 sliders with no sound on the tail. It causes a bit of confusion on whether a sound is there for a player, and reduces emphasis on things that do have a sound on the tail.
00:36:235 (2) - Lower SV here, too high
01:09:939 (1) - uh hitwhistles get used too much around this area
01:27:347 (6,7,1) - 1 is not emphasised enough because spacing is the same, decrease spacing of previous jumps a bit (eg 6 can blanket 3)
Often times I think there's too many hitsounds going on tbh, but I can't point it out specifically

frost's Insane
See general
00:31:050 (1) - these are cool
00:53:643 (1) - my ears are ringing, can you increase the volume of your special samples and decrease inherited point volume
cool diff

DavidEd's Hard
See general
00:20:495 (4,5) - This doesn't really need distance emphasis
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - ^, only use it on important sounds, otherwise keep to the ds
00:28:828 (2,3) - Remove emphasis, it makes 00:29:754 (6,1) - stronger if there's fewer things with it
00:35:124 (4,5) - Can emphasise but reduce distance, not everything needs to be exact same distance when using emphasis
Apply the distance emphasis thing to other places where you see fit, there's quite a few. Try to keep them just to the most important sounds, especially for the first half
01:16:976 (4,5,1) - Too many distance changes for hard
01:18:272 (1,2) - The distance between these is wayy to big, makes player think that this is a 3x repeat. Make distance smaller so it's clear this is 5x.
01:26:976 (3,4,5,6) - This is a diff spike, make the distance spacing smaller than 01:24:013 (3) - . This is because it's easy to cut corners on the square. Compare how much red is in each pattern https://puu.sh/y7s9k/2a595c9b5e.png https://puu.sh/y7s99/40f99eb25d.png
It's a good diff, but there's too many uses of distance spacing. Cut them down

Normal diff is great, good job

Cut down on the usage of distance emphasis on hard, apply the changes for frost's hitsounds, and I'd suggest asking frost for a bit of help on hitsounds in top diff. Call me back after those are done
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the thing said i would only get one kudosu for modding lol
I was pretty tempted to ignore your request because pcmasterrace is more just obnoxious these days :/

General
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - 01:36:235 (3) - These are 3/8 not 1/3. Resnap them with 1/8 beatsnap my bad
00:28:272 (1) - This is 1/6 talked to mir, and we decided that it was a grace note and a 1/8 slider + circle snapped best compared to 1/6 (i hate anime)

Winter Break
00:15:124 (1) - Move this slider head to 430,140 to avoid overlap with 00:13:828 (2,3) - , and reduce how much curve slider has this was intentional :( and i dont think it looks/plays that bad
00:19:569 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't following vocal well, make 00:19:569 (1) - 1/1 ok
00:19:569 (1) - nibba y u using old sliders yowatchusayindaWG
00:22:532 (1) - Make this 1/1 or a circle to avoid overmapped tail, as there's no sound. Makes 00:23:087 (3) - clearer there's a sound on this tail made it a circle since 00:22:902 (2) - is a really strong sound
00:25:495 (1) - etc same thing. Avoid using 1/2 sliders with no sound on the tail. It causes a bit of confusion on whether a sound is there for a player, and reduces emphasis on things that do have a sound on the tail. ya
00:36:235 (2) - Lower SV here, too high cool sv
01:09:939 (1) - uh hitwhistles get used too much around this area did some stuff + later on in the kiai hope its good now
01:27:347 (6,7,1) - 1 is not emphasised enough because spacing is the same, decrease spacing of previous jumps a bit (eg 6 can blanket 3) ya good idea, it also fixes up the odd visual spacing lol
Often times I think there's too many hitsounds going on tbh, but I can't point it out specifically whistle hitsounds are going on for the vocal and the notes that stand out in the background eg bells/loud held string notes, still got rid of a bunch in the kiai tho hope it sounds better

Normal diff is great, good job

Cut down on the usage of distance emphasis on hard, apply the changes for frost's hitsounds, and I'd suggest asking frost for a bit of help on hitsounds in top diff. Call me back after those are done
thanks for the mod! in addition to your top diff suggestions i fixed visual spacing up in some places

as per looking at davideds userpage/recent activity ill apply this mod for him

Sinnoh wrote:

DavidEd's Hard
See general fixed the first one, i've left the 1/6 out for the reason that it's a grace note, and that would be really difficult to read/play at this level of difficulty so it's remained as a repeat slider as it still snaps correctly
00:20:495 (4,5) - This doesn't really need distance emphasis ok
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - ^, only use it on important sounds, otherwise keep to the ds did a thing
00:28:828 (2,3) - Remove emphasis, it makes 00:29:754 (6,1) - stronger if there's fewer things with it i think david was using this as a final build up thats played in the piano for this section, and i think that his use om ephasis on these two notes fits the piano nicely
00:35:124 (4,5) - Can emphasise but reduce distance, not everything needs to be exact same distance when using emphasis ok
Apply the distance emphasis thing to other places where you see fit, there's quite a few. Try to keep them just to the most important sounds, especially for the first half ya did more stuff
01:16:976 (4,5,1) - Too many distance changes for hard nerf abit
01:18:272 (1,2) - The distance between these is wayy to big, makes player think that this is a 3x repeat. Make distance smaller so it's clear this is 5x. yea
01:26:976 (3,4,5,6) - This is a diff spike, make the distance spacing smaller than 01:24:013 (3) - . This is because it's easy to cut corners on the square. Compare how much red is in each pattern https://puu.sh/y7s9k/2a595c9b5e.png https://puu.sh/y7s99/40f99eb25d.png
It's a good diff, but there's too many uses of distance spacing. Cut them down not really sure how i can do this whilst keeping his current flow/pattern style and since this building up into the climax of the song i think its probably ok
updated, fixed some missing hitsounds in normal diff too, just waiting on frosts reply
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Rhythm isn't good
modding 11/10 :joy: :gun:
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updated with frosts update finally ><
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00:05:124 (1) - why are these kicks, overdoing the violin. Would work on a different sample set.

Going to ask for video to be compressed since 24mb is large for 2 minutes, wait until shad0w1and returns~
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http://puu.sh/yeHgc/f49d51f027.flv
uhmmmmmm
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fix both, thanks for the video shad0w1and!
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ok
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thank you! :D
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christmas is merry
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christmas is merry
christmas is my favourite anime
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hello there I like this song

General

Normal

  1. 00:10:495 (3,4) - This part has the same melody of the next section at 00:16:421 (3,4) - so I would make them the same since both section are initially following the same rhythm structure. Also, if I can give you a tip I would choose second section rhythm because it's more appropriated for the easiest diff of the mapset (1/2 slider with small breaks are kinda meh imo);
  2. 00:41:791 (1) - Would add soft finish here instead than drum to emphasize the cymbals in the music (I guess this applies to the next diffs as well so I won't mention it again);
  3. 00:44:754 (5) - I would add NC here and remove it from 00:46:235 (1) - instead, looks more logical. Apply this to 00:50:680 (5) - as well if you agree;
  4. 01:21:791 (1) - This slider is too pushed upside and HP bar covers it, and it's very bad and ugly, try to replace it properly;
DavidEd's Hard

  1. 00:28:272 (1) - Would flow better if directed on the right instead than left so it connects better the previous part to the upcoming slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687711
  2. 00:35:309 (5,6,1,2) - I think this is pretty confusing and kinda bothered me tbh and I explain you why: 00:35:124 (4,5,6) - the spacing between these can be kept even if I think it's a bit exagerated compared to the previous elements so I would just stack the (5) with 00:34:013 (1) - 's tail, but the problem is the fact that after the jump between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - that are currently snapped 1/2 the following part 00:35:865 (1,2) - is snapped 1/1 but still have the same spacing of the previous 1/2. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - so that the 1/2 snapping will have a different spacing (smaller) than the next 1/1 (that can be kept in this way but it will be bigger than the previous part as it should actually be);
  3. 01:18:272 (1) - Too much repeats considering the previous one: remove two (so end it on the white tick) and add a circle on the new empty red tick (so 1/2 after the new tail snap);
  4. Not a fun of so much random exagerated changes of spacing in the hard diff but well
frost's Insane

  1. 00:32:161 (2) - NC for consistency with 00:35:124 (1) - because of change of SV;
  2. 01:18:087 (6) - NC because of flute sound? It would even avoid this only long combo of the whole map;
  3. 01:29:847 (4,5) - I would make them more linear with the previous slider since they are actually slighly directed more on the left;
  4. 01:31:976 (1,2) - (Personal taste) I would try something else here because I don't like this pattern/overlap to be honest xD Map has been so clean so far but this kinda bothered me a little :c;
  5. 01:37:347 (3) - There should be addition: soft and clap on this slider's tail like you did for 01:31:421 (3) - ;
Winter Break

  1. 00:18:828 (3) - Would add whislte on head to emphasize the vocal higher pitch (it makes the section look empty), same for 00:24:754 (3) -
  2. 00:35:680 (4) - Place to 176|368 to follow the same logic you did for 00:34:754 (1,2) - ? (Placing circle on the same direction of slider's tail);
  3. 00:40:186 (4,5,6) - Why is this 1/6? Just snap it 1/4 like the Insane diff please, looks more appropriated;
  4. 00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - I would avoid this since on the next section at 00:57:347 (2,3) - I would have expected the same pattern to be consistent, so just use normal spacing or the same rhythm of second part or 1/2 sliders :\
  5. 00:58:828 (2,3,4,5) - What about making the pattern like this? Cursor movement is much more flowing than the current placement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687880 (up and down movement);
  6. 01:22:902 (4) - I would overlap it with 01:21:791 (1) - 's tail instead, flow would be more way better;
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hello there I like this song :D

General

Normal

  1. 00:10:495 (3,4) - This part has the same melody of the next section at 00:16:421 (3,4) - so I would make them the same since both section are initially following the same rhythm structure. Also, if I can give you a tip I would choose second section rhythm because it's more appropriated for the easiest diff of the mapset (1/2 slider with small breaks are kinda meh imo);
     good idea
  2. 00:41:791 (1) - Would add soft finish here instead than drum to emphasize the cymbals in the music (I guess this applies to the next diffs as well so I won't mention it again); good idea
  3. 00:44:754 (5) - I would add NC here and remove it from 00:46:235 (1) - instead, looks more logical. Apply this to 00:50:680 (5) - as well if you agree; the nc's here follow the vocal phrasing and i think the interjection from violins/bells warrants an nc here (same for next ojne too)
  4. 01:21:791 (1) - This slider is too pushed upside and HP bar covers it, and it's very bad and ugly, try to replace it properly; i think its fixed now
Winter Break

  1. 00:18:828 (3) - Would add whislte on head to emphasize the vocal higher pitch (it makes the section look empty), same for 00:24:754 (3) - yes
  2. 00:35:680 (4) - Place to 176|368 to follow the same logic you did for 00:34:754 (1,2) - ? (Placing circle on the same direction of slider's tail); wanted the change of direction here to further emphasise the bass kick/cymbal right after
  3. 00:40:186 (4,5,6) - Why is this 1/6? Just snap it 1/4 like the Insane diff please, looks more appropriated; i think its 1/6 in the music? is it ok to simplify this here to 1/4? im not 100% sure
  4. 00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - I would avoid this since on the next section at 00:57:347 (2,3) - I would have expected the same pattern to be consistent, so just use normal spacing or the same rhythm of second part or 1/2 sliders :\
  5. 00:58:828 (2,3,4,5) - What about making the pattern like this? Cursor movement is much more flowing than the current placement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687880 (up and down movement); cool idea, i didn't really think to make a similar flowing jump pattern
  6. 01:22:902 (4) - I would overlap it with 01:21:791 (1) - 's tail instead, flow would be more way better; agre
thanks for the mod! also double checking artist name cus i think i got it wrong zzzzzzzz
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double edit: i didnt notice i double posted sorry :((((
edit: replying for davided as well as he is still supa busy :(

DavidEd's Hard

  1. 00:28:272 (1) - Would flow better if directed on the right instead than left so it connects better the previous part to the upcoming slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687711 ok
  2. 00:35:309 (5,6,1,2) - I think this is pretty confusing and kinda bothered me tbh and I explain you why: 00:35:124 (4,5,6) - the spacing between these can be kept even if I think it's a bit exagerated compared to the previous elements so I would just stack the (5) with 00:34:013 (1) - 's tail, but the problem is the fact that after the jump between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - that are currently snapped 1/2 the following part 00:35:865 (1,2) - is snapped 1/1 but still have the same spacing of the previous 1/2. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - so that the 1/2 snapping will have a different spacing (smaller) than the next 1/1 (that can be kept in this way but it will be bigger than the previous part as it should actually be); did a thing, i hope its good now
  3. 01:18:272 (1) - Too much repeats considering the previous one: remove two (so end it on the white tick) and add a circle on the new empty red tick (so 1/2 after the new tail snap); the song supports this extended repeat and i think its readable enough tbh with the nc, but if not i think i can reuse the previous rhythm if you want
  4. Not a fun of so much random exagerated changes of spacing in the hard diff but well
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@DavidEd yea I prefer you use the same rhythm at 01:18:272 (1) it's much more better imo!
btw let me know when everyone fixed it up
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@DavidEd yea I prefer you use the same rhythm at 01:18:272 (1) it's much more better imo!

could be confusing for some, so sure
thanks

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Chewin
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We have fixed some more stuff via IRC and not the mapset is ready for me! Have my first hear homie :3

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yeeey! thanks guys :D
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gratz~
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Sinnoh wrote:

gratz~
thank you :D
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